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Amit aur gori mami ka relation jis tarah se aapne shuru se maintain kr k rakh he waha ek ideal relationship readrs k man me set ho gya...pahli baar laga ki amit ne wakai apne heroism ko khoya he..
Bhai dekh Jo hua situation k hisab se hua usne heroism khoya but jaan bachai uski.. Uske liye jo sahi tha usne kia.. Sometimes apko acha krne k liye bura banna hota hai
 

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Amit aur gori mami ka relation jis tarah se aapne shuru se maintain kr k rakh he waha ek ideal relationship readrs k man me set ho gya...pahli baar laga ki amit ne wakai apne heroism ko khoya he..
Bhai mana ke Amit ne jo kiya tha wo galat tha per us time situation ki demand wahi thi use apni Maa Saman Maami jise usne apne Bachpan se Maa hi mana hai uski Jaan bachana jaruri tha jo hua uske liye Aaj bhi Amit khud ko doshi manta hai lekin wahi par Kamini Maami aur Deepika Maami ke sath apne sex relationships ko lekar wo apne aapko guilty nahi maanta isse Pata chalta hai ke Gauri Maami ke liye uski Nazar me kya jaga hai aur waise bhi Har Kisi ke dekhne ka view ek samaan nahi hota hai. Writer ka alag, aapka alag, mera alag. So please reading and enjoying the story.
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“Aa gya mera sher” jaise hi main aur neeraj stadium me pahunche coach sahab ne itna kehte hue neeraj ko gale laga liya.



Coach : ab tabiyat kaisi hai teri ?

Neeraj : aapke aashirwad se acha hun coach sahab

Coach : to aaj se shuru kar raha hai practice?

Neeraj : socha to yahi hai. Isi liye aaj aa gya. Bahut din ho gye ab to shareer kuch dheela sa lagne laga hai.



Coach : ye to hafte me set ho jayega. Kuch pata chala wo kaun log the ?

Neeraj : mujhe lagta hai wo boys college wale hi honge is bar final me unke hi khiladi ko haraya tha na .

Coach : to police complaint kyun nahi ki tumne ? Main dekhta hun unko



Neeraj : uski koi zarurat nahi hai coach Saab unko bhi dekh lenge



Coach : apna bhi dhyan rakhna. Aao tumhe tumhare naye sathiyon se milawata hun



Coach Saab ne siti baja kar sab ko ikattha kiya aur neeraj se sabko introduce karwaya



Coach : ye hai neeraj hamare college ki shan aur tum logon ka senior . Inter college me gold aur inter university me bronze jeet chuka hai aur is bar gold jeetega .



Main bhi sabke sath khada taali baja raha tha. Sab bari bari se neeraj se milne lage. Jo purane aur senior khiladi the wo bhi sab neeraj k laut aane se khush the aur usko gale mil rahe the.



Coach : idhar aao amit tum bhi mil lo neeraj se. Neeraj ye hai....

Neeraj : main ise achi tarah janta hun coach Saab . Ye na hota to shayad main apne pairon par aapke samne na khada hota. Isi ne us din mujhe bachaya tha aur hospital pahunchaya tha.



Coach : shabash mere bache . Tumne bahut acha kam kiya hai. Neeraj k bad agar iski koi jagah le sakta hai to wo tum hi ho. Aaj se tum neeraj k sath hi practice karna taki jaldi se uske jaise ban sako,usse sikh sako



Neeraj : ise main kha sikhaunga coach Saab ye to pehle hi mujhse 21 hi hai. Maine aapko bataya tha na apne cousin dara k bare me . Ye unke hi sath wrestling karta raha hai. Aur unke sare dao pench ye janta hai. Han itna zarur hai k aaj se hum sath me practice karenge kyunki ye mera chhota bhai bhi hai.



Neeraj ne sabke samne mujhe gale laga kar sabko bata diya k ye mera chhota bhai hai. Neeraj ne senior khiladiyon ko khas taur par ye hidayat di k college me ya bahar bhi kahin agar mujhe kisi musibat me dekhen to meri madad ki jaye. Uske bad sabhi senior khiladiyon ne mujhe gale laga kar apna samarthan diya.



Aaj ka din to baton me hi nikal gya koi practice hui nahi is liye hum jaldi hi free ho gye aur neeraj mujhe mohit k ghar k bahar chhod kar chala gya halanki wo mujhe apne ghar par rukne k liye bhi zor lagata rha. Ghar se apni kitaben sath lekar maine bike uthayi aur manju Mam k ghar pahunch gya. Aaj Mam ne mujhe padana shuru kar diya. Tuition se free ho kar main jab wapis aya to uncle bhi ghar par maujood the. Maine uncle k paon chuye unhone aashirwad diya



Uncle : itna sab tumhare sath college me ho gya aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahi. Maine tumse kaha tha na k tum bhi mujhe mohit k saman azeez ho fir tumne mujhse bat kyun nahi ki? Main bat karta principal se



Amit : principal sir ne sab theek kar diya uncle aap ko chinta karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai . Waise bhi mohit ne mujhe bataya k factory me nuksan hua hai aise me aapko main aur pareshan nahi karna chahta tha.



Uncle : waise hai kaun wo ladki jisne itna ganda kam kiya hai. Use apni aur apni family ki izzat ki parwah nahi hai kya.



Mohit : us ladki ka to abhi pata nahi par is sab k piche monty ka hath hai jo amit se badla lena chahta hai. Monty D.P. International k md ka beta hai.



Uncle : kyaaaa ! To beta baap par gya hai. Tum dono usse zara savdhan hi rehna. Main bhi principal se ek bar is bare me bat zarur karunga.



Mohit : acha dad mujhe zara kam hai amit k sath k sath , kya hum ja sakte hain?



Aunty kitchen se juice ka gilas lati hui hamare pas aayi aur mujhe gilas pakdaya



Aunty : abhi to amit aya hai use saans to lene de



Mohit : mom hum late ho jayenge to market band ho jayegi mujhe kuch zaruri saman lena hai.



Maine juice ka gilas jaldi se finish kiya aur mohit k sath market k liye nikal gya .



Amit : hum ja kahan rahe hain?

Mohit : are yar kal Minal ka birthday hai aur maine abhi tak uske liye gift nahi liya. Kab se tu hari wait kar raha tha . Abhi uske liye gift lene ja rhe hain



Amit : tujhe ab yad aya? Pehle hi ja kar le ata . Chal ye bhi acha hua ab main bhi uske liye kuch le lunga.



Thodi der me hi hum badia c gift shop k andar khade the jahan bahut se antique piece pade the aur kuch Archiev cards aur teddy’s bhi. Mohit ne Minal k liye ek bada sa teddy liya jiske hathon me dil pakda hua tha . Mohit ne use pack karwaya aur ek acha sa card bhi liya. Maine Minal k liye couple piece liya jo box open hone par music k sath dance karta tha. Gifts dekhte hue mujhe ladkiyon wale bracelet nazar aaye jo bahut hi antique lag rahe the. Maine neha didi aur radha k liye 2 piece le liye.



Gifts le kar hum ghar aa gye aur dinner sath me karne k bad apne apne kamron me chale gye. Main bed par leta soch raha tha k mohit fir se mere Pas aa gya.



Mohit : ab kya soch raha hai?

Amit : kuch nahi bas ye soch raha hun k us din kisne wo video bana kar meri madad ki hai . Zarur wo monty aur sheena k karibiyon me se hi koi hoga warna kisi ko kaise pata hota k wahan kya hone wala hai. Agar wo monty ka karibi hai to usne meri madad kyun ki ? Aur agar monty ko pata chal gya to wo zarur uska koi na koi nuksan kar dega aise me mera bhi farz hai main uski madad karun. Manju Mam ne kaha k staff room me unke table par kisi ne wo memory card rakha tha . Shayad wo kuch chhupa rahi hain ya for ho sakta hai ye sach bhi ho.



Mohit : fir to problem solve

Amit : kaise

Mohit : dekh admin block me sab taraf CCTV lage hue hain aur class rooms ki galleries me bhi . Aur hi sakta hai k auditorium me bhi lage hon to hamen college k server se sare footage check karne chahiye. Par isme bhi ek panga hai. Iski permission nahi milegi



Amit : dekhte hai shayad koi rasta nikal aaye. Aur ek bat hai jo humen pata lagani hai.

Mohit : wo kya



Amit : us din maine Shalu ko monty group k sath khade dekha . Pichle kuch dino se wo humse mil bhi nahi rahi. Mujhe lagta hai Shalu ko pata tha k kya hone wala hai magar usne mujhe nahi bataya. Lagta hai wo bhi monty k sath mili hui hai



Mohit : iska pata bhi laga lenge . Filhal tu tension ko side me rakh aur kal ki birthday party k bare me soch. Kal humne socha hai k bahar kisi restaurant me party karenge college frnds k sath aur fir raat ko club me .



Hum baten kar rahe the k darwaze par aahat hui aur aunty kamre me aa gyi.



Aunty : tum log soye nahi abhi tak. Kya subah uthna nahi hai.



Aunty bat karti hui meri taraf gehri nazron se dekh rahi thi main samajh gya k aunty kya chahti hain. Magar aaj to uncle ghar par hain fir bhi aunty mere sath sex karna chahti hain. Lagta hai uncle jaldi so gye honge.



Mohit : ma wo kal hamare Frnd ka birthday hai to usi k bare me bat kar rahe the. Aap so jaiye hum bhi so jayenge.



Aunty : theek hai Magar jaldi so jana.



Aunty fir ek bar meri taraf dekhti hui mayus ho kar wapis laut gyi. Mohit aur main thodi der baten karte rahe aur fir mohit apne room me chala gya. Uske jate main bhi so gya.



“Aaj badi der kardi tumne , maine to socha tha tumhare sath thoda yoga kar lungi.” Aunty mere kamre me juice ka gilas lekar aayi.



Amit : wo aaj thoda jyada hi time lag gya.

Maine unke hath se juice ka gilas liya aur pi gya.



Aunty: kya tumhe meri tadap nazar nahi ati ? Kal rat bhi main tumhare pas aayi thi magar mauka nahi mila.



Amit : aap to sab dekh hi rahi hain waqt hi nahi kil pa raha . Waise uncle to ghar par hi the raat ko



Aunty : unki to bat hi mat karo agar unko mera khyal hota to main bhala yun pyaasi rehti? Jaldi se mera kuch socho aaj teen din ho gye tumne mera khyal bhi nahi kiya aur kehte ho main tumhari gf hun.



Amit : chinta mat kijiye jaise hi mauka milega aapki sari pyas bujha dunga.



Maine aage bad kar ek hath aunty ki choot par rakh kar use Muthy me masal diya . Aunty iske liye taiyar nahi thi aur ek dam se uchal padi



Aunty : aauuuch ‘ ye kya kar rahe ho ?

Amit : dekh raha hun kitni garmi hai yahan

Aunty : to kya pata chala

Amit : lagta hai jaldi ye aag bujhani padegi

Aunty : tu bujha do na

Amit : thoda sabar rakhiye . Main tasalli se ye kaam karunga abhi mujhe taiyar hona hai aap abhi jao



Aunty k hontho par kiss karne k bad main bathroom me ghus gya nahane k liye. Dining table par nashta karte waqt aaj rani bar bar mujhe dekh kar muskura rahi thi. Us din k baad aaj rani se meri nazar mil rahi thi. Rani ki chal me kuch badlav nazar aa rha tha . Ab uski gaand thodi aur bahar ko ubhar aayi thi. Nazron se rani ka muayna karte hue maine nashta kiya aur mohit k sath college nikal gya.



Aaj Minal ka birthday tha aur mohit ne aaj party ka plan banaya tha jiske liye Minal ne apni class ki kuch frnds ko bhi bulaya tha. Sab canteen me ikathe hue aur bahar restaurant me ja kar party karne ka decide kiya. Minal ki class me se radha k ilawa 2 aur ladkiyan aayi thi. Radha bahar jane k liye taiyar nahi thi use divya mausi ka dar tha magar mere kehne se wo maan gyi. Maine Minal aur mohit se bat kar k neha didi ko bhi invite kar liya. Wo bhi pehle to man nahi rahi thi k unko lecture chhodne padenge magar mere aur radha k kehne par wo maan gyi.



Mohit ki car me main mohit aur neha didi baith gye dusari car me radha Minal aur unki 2 class mates baith gye. Hum 15 minutes me ek badia se restaurant me pahunch gye jahan par ek table pehle se hi mohit ne book karwa k rakha hua tha. Hum sab us table k sath lagi chairs par baith gye.



Minal : mohit amit inse milo ye hai meri friend Rima aur ye hai Ankita .



Maine aur mohit ne un dono ko hello kaha. Dono hi khubsurat thi magar Rima ko dekh kar to ek bar main uski khubsurati me kho gya. Aisa lag raha tha jaise filmo ki heroin ho . Gora chamakdar mukhda nasheeli aankhen brownish curly baal teekhe nain naksh gulabi gaal aur honth to jaise cherry ho. Main uski khubsurati me khoya bar bar use hi dekhne laga. Rima ne bhi kai bar nazar utha kar mujhe dekha. Usne black Color ka top aur same matching jeans pehni hui thi jisme uska perfect figure kayamat dhaha raha tha.



Minal : rima tum milna chahti thi na amit se to ab bat kar lo . Ab to hum sab friends hain jaise ye mera frnd hai waise hi tumhara bhi hai. Amit Rima kai bar tumhare bare me mujhse puch chuki hai Magar time hi nahi mil pa raha tha . Aaj to moka bhi hai dastoor bhi ek dusare se jan pehchan badao



Rima : aisi koi bat nahi hai wo to bas aise hi maine suna tha radha se k kaise aapne uski madad ki thi aur fir abhi jo hua uski vajah se bhi mujhe pata chala k aap ek ache insan hain to isi liye aap se milna chahti thi



Amit : isme kaun c badi bat hai . Maine to bas apna farz ada kiya tha .



Rima : yahi to ache logon ki pehchan hoti hai k wo kabhi apni kisi bat par credit nahi lete. Yahan college me ladke to bahut hain Magar abhi tak aap jaisa koi nazar nahi aaya jo ladkiyon ki izzat k liye khud ko dao par laga de. Mujhe khushi hogi agar aap mujhe apna dost bana le



Amit : aap mujhe sharminda kar rahi hain. Main koi VIP nahi hun jo aap aise bat kar rahi hain . Aaj se hum dost hain aur dosto ki tarah hi bat kijiye mujhe wo hi acha lagega.



Main jab Rima se bat kar rha tha to neha didi aur radha mujhe hi dekh rahi thi. Neha didi ki aankhon me khushi ki jhalak thi magar radha ki nazron me kya tha ye main samajh nahi pa raha tha. Hum baten kar rahe the k waiter ne table par ek sundar sa cake saja diya jis par happy birthday Minal likha hua tha aur ek candle jal rahi thi.



Minal aur mohit ne mil kar cake kata aur hum sab Minal ko wish karne lage. Minal ne bari bari se sabko apne hatho se cake khilaaya aur sab ne use . Uske bad gifts ki bari aayi. Radha Rima aur uski frnd Minal k liye gift layi thi magar neha didi ko is sab ka pata nahi tha is liye unko bura lag rha tha k unhone gift nahi diya. Magar main gadi se wo gift le aya jo maine Minal k liye liya tha aur neha didi k sath mil kar Minal ko present kar diya.



Maine apni pocket se bracelet nikal kar neha didi aur radha ko diya. Bracelet dekhte hi radha ka chehara ek dam se khil gya aur wo mujhe thanks kehne lagi. Bracelet antique tha jise Minal aur Rima bhi gaur se dekhne lagi



Minal : wah ye to bahut sundar hai . Mere liye kyun nahi laye ye wala?

Rima : wakai me kitna khubsurat hai ye stones to rare hi milte hain . Kahan se liya aapne ise ?



Amit : bas ek gift shop se liya tha agar aapko chahiye to main le aaunga. Filhal to main ye do hi laya tha.



Radha : ye wakai me bahut acha hai ise main hamesha sambhal kar rakhungi.

Neha didi : wakai me amit ye bahut sundar hai simple aur beautiful bilkul tumhari tarah . Magar tumne ek gadbad kardi jab karuna ise dekhegi to tumhari shamat aa jayegi.



Amit : bap re ! Ye to maine socha hi nahi . Chalo koi bat nahi main aur le aaunga aap unhe batana mat.



Yunhi hum baten karte rahe mohit ne sabki pasand k hisab se khana order kar diya . Sabne party enjoy ki college time khatam hone se pehle hum college wapis aa gye . Radha ne bracelet pehen liya tha aur use bar bar chhu kar dekh rahi thi. Radha ne jate jate bhi mujhe fir se bracelet k liye thanks kaha. Uski aankhon me ek alag hi khushi nazar aa rahi thi jo mujhe bahut achi lag rahi thi. Radha bahut reserve nature ki innocent ladki thi . Shayad aaj tak use aisa gift kisi ne diya bhi na ho yahi vajah ho sakti hai k wo itni khush hai.



Radha aur neha didi Scooty par nikal gyi . Rima k pas apni car thi. Rima ne bhi jate jate mujhse hath milaya aur milte rehne ko kaha . Apni pyari muskurahat bikherti hui wo bhi apni gadi se ghar ko chali gyi.



Mohit : bas kar bhai wo chali gyi hai ab kya uske piche tak dekhne jayega.



Amit : kya bat kar rha hai main to bas aise hi

Minal : waise jodi mast rahegi dono ki aur mujhe lagta hai wo bhi tum me interested hai . Kai bar usne tumhare bare me bat ki hai mujhse . Agar tum kaho to main try karun



Amit : nahi mujhe koi interest nahi hai gf banane me



Mohit : dekh to aise raha tha jaise abhi use purpose kar dega

Minal : anyway jab tum kahoge main help kar dungi waise mujhe lagta hai shayad tumhe mehanat karni hi na pade



Amit : tum log meri taang khinchna band karoge ?

Mohit : chalo chalen . Minal sham ko kitne baje pick karun tumhe?

Minal : 8 baje chalenge magar 10 baje wapis Ana hoga

Mohit : kya yar tumhe pata to hai wahan time lag hi jata hai. Usse acha night club aur koi hai hi nahi.

Minal : 11 se late kisi kimat par nahi warna papa bura man jayenge . Aur baki sab se bat ho gyi na tumhari?



Mohit : wo sab ready hain .



Humne Minal ko uske ghar drop kiya aur 8 baje fir se aane ka bol kar ghar nikal gye.

Uske bad khana rest stadium me practice aur manju Mam k pas tuition k bad hum sham ki party k liye ready hone lage.



Aunty : kahan hai party?

Mohit : hooterz night club me

Aunty : hmm dekhna koi drink wagera mat karna. Aur amit tum bhi khyal rakhna tum to kabhi gye nahi hoge night club me. Is liye zara dhyan se rehna.

Mohit : mom aap to use dara rahi hain

Aunty : main dara nahi rahi samjha rahi hun.

Mohit : theek hai mom hum thoda der se aayenge aap khana kha kar so jana



Hum dono nikal gye Minal ko lene. Minal ko dekh kar main dang reh gya. Minal ne bahut hi sexy dress pehna hua tha. Ek bikni type short dress pehni hui thi . Kandhon par bareek se lase lagi hui thi. Black dress me Minal bhi kayamat lag rahi thi. Usne long heel sandle pehne hue the jiski vajah se uski chal kisi model ki tarah ho gyi thi. Uski lambi gori chikni jhangen aakarshit kar rahi thi. Maine kisi tarah apni nazron oar kabu kiya aur car se bahar dekhne laga.



Mohit ne car ko ek bahut hi aalishan si dikhne wali imarat k bahar roka jis par bade aksharon me hooterz likha hua tha. Gate par bouncers khade the jo check kar k andar jane de rahe the. Parking me khadi badi badi aur mehengi cars ko dekh kar main samajh gya k yahan par ameer bigdel ladke ladkiyan aate honge. Maine kabhi night club nahi dekh tha is liye mere andar ek excitement thi. Club k andar ja rahi har ladki bhadkeele kapdon me hi nazar aa rahi thi. Hum gadi se nikal kar jaise hi gate ji taraf bade to wahan par khade 6/7 ladke ladkiyon ko group hamari taraf aa gya jo hamari taraf aa gya.



Mohit aur Minal unse mile aur mujhe bhi unse milawaya. Ye sab mohit aur Minal k school friends the jo shayad ab dusare shehron me study karte the magar Minal ki bithday party k liye sab ikathe hue the. Hum sab mil kar night club me enter hue jahan pehle hamari janch ki gyi . Club k andar ka vatavaran bahut zabardast tha. Bahut hi dim light thi aur tej music chal raha tha. Smog k sath couples floor par nach rahe the. Ek taraf bar bani hui thi jahan lagi chairs par ladke ladkiyan aur kuch mature auraten mard bhi baithe drinks le rahe the .



Floor par dance kar rahe couple bahut hi romantic way me ek dusare se chedchad karte hue dance kar rahe the . Yahan pat kisi ko kisi ki parwah nahi thi. Ye bilkul western style tha jo kabhi maine dekha kya socha bhi nahi tha.



Mohit : dosto dance karne se pehle kyu na kuch drinks ho jaye ?



Mohit ki bat ka sab ne samarthan kiya. Hum sab bar tender k pas chale gye . Mohit ne drink order kiya. Maine mohit ko mana kar diya.



Amit : dekh yar main ye sab mahi karta tum log enjoy karo

Mohit : are yar ye sirf bear hai aur ye to ladkiyan bhi piti hain isse kuch nahi hota.



Minal : aaj mera birthday hai meri khatir ek pilo warna mujhe acha nahi lagega. Dekho hum sab dost hain aur sab hi pi rahe hain aise me agar tum na piyo to kya ye sahi hoga? Waise bhi bear se kuch nahi hota . Aaj tum try kar k dekh lo



Main inkar karta raha Magar wo mujhe pila kar hi mane . Iska taste bahut hi bak Baka aur kadwa tha. Bear pi kar sab dance floor par chale gye. Mujhe to kuch ata jata nahi tha. Is liye main baitha raha . Dheere dheere mera sar thoda bhari hone laga aur nazron ka focus bhi kam hone laga. Mere sath wali chair par ek lady aa kar baith gyi wo bhi koi drink pi rahi thi. Us lady ne short dress pehna hua tha jo uski jaanghon tak hi tha. Jisme se uska gadraya hua badan bahut hi atractive lag raha tha. Wo lady bhi drink karti hui bar bar mujhe aise ghoor rahi thi jaise meri scanning kar rahi ho.



Tabhi mohit mujhe pakad kar dance floor par le gya. Aur mujhe bhi un sab k sath uchal kood karni padi. Andhere me kuch pata nahi chal raha tha k kaun kahan nach raha hai. Mujh par bear aur us vatavaran ka asar hota ja raha tha. Main bhi masti me jhumne laga. Dance karte hue ladkiyan ladkon k sath aise chipak rahi thi jaise k kamsutra k sare chapter yahin par dikha dengi. Mohit bhi Minal ko apne sath chipka raha tha aur yahi hal baki mandali ka bhi tha. Dance karte hue meri nazar bar ki taraf gayi to wo lady drink karti hui abhi bhi mujhe hi dekh rahi thi. Uski aankhon me ek kashish ek nasha nazar aa raha tha.



Andhere me dance karte hue main apni dhun me hi kood raha tha k kisi ne mujhe apne sath chipka liya aur mujhe apni bahon me bhar liya. Andhere me chehara to nazar nahi aa raha tha magar body se pata chal raha tha k ye koi ladki ya aurat hi hai. Meri chest me uske boobs lag rahe the. Usne apne dono hatho ko mere hips par kas liya Aur apna jism mere sath ragadne lagi . Maine use piche hatane ki koshish ki to usne mere hath apne boobs par rakh kar kas diye . Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha akhir ye hai kaun.
 

Raja chouhan

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Nice update
Nice n fantastic update
Very nice update
Waiting for next
Awesome updates
Awesome updates
Ek number update bro..??
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
Nice update waiting for next update
Ye kya bc Yaha toh randibazi ho rha hai. Monty ke dost shalu ko bhogte hai aur Sheena and gang lesbian hai.
Abhi kahani me kuch khas hota nai dikh rha. Lagta hai 2 3 update kahani aage badhegi.
Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage.
Nice update
Lajawab update bhai
Zabardasy update bhai
To bechari shalu itni buri tarah phasi hui hain unke saath aur ab wo radha ko bhi apne neeche lana chahte hain.
Yaha par lagta hain neeraj ki maa ko amit ke pita aur maa ki history ka kuch pata nahi ya phir wo bhi sabse mili hui hain asli baat ko chupane ne kyunki wo reeta mousi ki saheli hain matlab unsabse baat hoti rehti hogi.
Radha ke saath Manjari ki yaad dilakar apne senti kar diya amit ko, bechare amit ka pehla pyaar use hamesha ke liye chod kar chala gaya aur uski mout bhi ek mystery hain jise kisine ne suljhane ki koshish nahi ki kyunki sorf manjari aur uske pita ka marna aur kisi ka nahi wo bhi jab manjari ko waha jana pasand nahi tha ya use dar tha matlab kuch to locha tha jise ye log niptane gaye the par wapas hi nahi aye.

As usual the story build is awesome and has lots of things to uncover in future.
Nice update t
बहुत ही लाजवाब अपडेट मित्र शुक्रिया आपका
ऐसे ही लिखते रहें अगले अपडेट का इंतिजार रहेगा
धन्यवाद
Superb sir jeee.....
Aisa lagta hai Shalu kisi majburi mai monty k sath hai......
Waiting for next one....
Best one
Can't wait for more action
Fantastic fabulous update.............?

Keep posting.............?

Waiting 4 next????................?
Bahut badhiya bhai supbbbbb
nice update
but sheela bua ne koi khas nai information nahi di
tum monty and sheena wala chapter close kardo jaldi
and i think its sheena who make the video and gadhar of the group
mark my words she must be that person
bhai jab se college start hua hai
i think pace kam hogaya story ka
Waiting next update bro
hoti update bhai
Mast update waiting for new
Awesome update
Amit ke sath ek Randi aur lesbo thi itne time se college main
Keep posting
sahi baat hai bro
ye randi or lesbo wali field me mat jao
randi to fir bhi theek, but lesbo wala jayda details main mat jana
सुन्दर आलेख राजा भाई ,कुछ उथल-पुथल सी होने वाली है क्या नायक के जीवन में | अगले भाग की प्रतीक्षा है !:)
Lajawab. Conspiracy aur sex ki bharmar hai, Monty Sheena ki gang me. Waiting for next
Nice update
Yeh kya twist de diye bro shalu monty and company ke saath...... Dekhte hain ab amit kya karega inlogon ke saath
Waiting for next
Just completed reading your story till the last update, the only thing i can say that you have an amazing writing skills and the story is a perfect mix of thriller, suspense ,sex and family drama. so keep it up your good work and best of luck upcoming updates
waiting for next update
Waiting bro
Last updatewas awesome bro
But thoda kuch hero ki taraf se dhamka kar do taki dusmano ke khe.o me uthal puthal ho jaye
Sir soft heart hona acha haa lakin dushmano ke dil me hero ka dar bhi hona jaruri haa

Jo yaha nahi dikh raha haa

Sir sorry ye bura lage too
Waiting bhai
nice update janab.
Raja chouhan bhai kya ho gaya aaj late ho gaye kahin meri bat ka bura to nahin man gaye
Yesa mat kariyo bhai mere wajah se rukna nahin warna aapne reader mujhe nahin chhodne wale upar se yese bandi ke samay :D
Waiting next update
Nice update
Waiting bro
Waiting for next
Bhailog apni koi bhi rai wichar writer ko mat do use apne hisab se likhne do agar tumhare hisab se likhega to maja nahi aiga
Sayad writer bas thora rest lene k mood m hai....time nikal k apne aap aa jayga...eo new update k sath...just wait...
Bhai is story ka bhi yahi anjaam mat karna.
Waiting for the next Update
Waiting for next
Waiting for next
waiting next update
Waiting bhai...
Kitni dur chale gaye ho chauhan sahab. Hum savi apke intezar mai baithe hai....
Waiting eagerly for next update
Yrr aik suggestion hai

koi bhi agar kahani mai change krne ka suggestion dena chahta hai to wo writer saab ko Direct msg kre ..

esy mai 2 kam aik dam se ho jaye ge ki aik to aap ki bat par writer Saab alag se Soch sakte hai

aur agar koi bat aap ki aachi lage to aap ka naam v highlight kr sakte hai kisi bhi update mai

Aik aur bat kahani pr only positive comments ki kre jis se write saab aur motivate ho kr story ko aacha likh sake

kyuki sab ka man aik jesa nahi hota same writer ke sath bhi hota hai kabhi kabhi demotivate hone k karan wo likh nahi pate..

last mai kisi reader ko ja writer ko bat buri lagi ho maff kri yarooo
Bhai update dedo kya problem ho gai samaj nahi aaya
Waiting bhai
Waiting bhai
Bhai 2 din ho gaye ek nhi update nahi aya
Bhai k baat hui update koni aaya hai abhi tak
किधर हो भाई
Ghatiya kaise hai... Ye bhi to batao
अपडेट का इंतिजार है दोस्त
Dil Se ....... intezaaar mein :love2:
Bhai dekh Jo hua situation k hisab se hua usne heroism khoya but jaan bachai uski.. Uske liye jo sahi tha usne kia.. Sometimes apko acha krne k liye bura banna hota hai
Bhai mana ke Amit ne jo kiya tha wo galat tha per us time situation ki demand wahi thi use apni Maa Saman Maami jise usne apne Bachpan se Maa hi mana hai uski Jaan bachana jaruri tha jo hua uske liye Aaj bhi Amit khud ko doshi manta hai lekin wahi par Kamini Maami aur Deepika Maami ke sath apne sex relationships ko lekar wo apne aapko guilty nahi maanta isse Pata chalta hai ke Gauri Maami ke liye uski Nazar me kya jaga hai aur waise bhi Har Kisi ke dekhne ka view ek samaan nahi hota hai. Writer ka alag, aapka alag, mera alag. So please reading and enjoying the story.
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Bhai log hath jod kar request karta hun k jisko story achi na lage wo leave karde magar koi aisa comment na kare k dil toot jaye . Agar meri story achi nahi lag rahi to bol do main band kar deta hun. Maine to start me hi kaha tha k main writer nahi hun first time likh raha hun fir bhi aap agar mujhe is writing ka inam ghatiya keh kar doge to dil to tootega hi na
Bhai in fuddu logon p dhyan mat do..Inko sirf apni padi hai maine bhi start Mai bola tha ki ni hona chahiye inka scene but then maine thoda scene smjha usne jaan bchane k liye kia.. Wo to kabhi galat niyat se karta hi nahi hai uska bs har baar use hota hai but ek request hai apse uska scene krao but usko hero wale kaam bhi krne do time time p.. Bahut achha likha rahe ho tabhi to hum log padh rahe hai aur jo log negative likhte hai uske bich Mai bhi kuch positive socha kro dhunda kro mil jayega.. Be positive and never ever think to close the story of you don't beleive me logon se vote krvalo... Kyoki jab koi achi story bnd hoti hai hume bhi dukh hota hai bhai isiliye ek machli k piche aap kya talab ki baki machliyo p dhyan ni doge.. Agar party Mai ek bnde ko bhool na ho to sabhi ko bukha ni rakha jata bhai.. Situation k hisab se himmat rkho and keep enjoying you Life..
Keep Going and keep entertaining we're with you until end of story...
 

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Bhai log hath jod kar request karta hun k jisko story achi na lage wo leave karde magar koi aisa comment na kare k dil toot jaye . Agar meri story achi nahi lag rahi to bol do main band kar deta hun. Maine to start me hi kaha tha k main writer nahi hun first time likh raha hun fir bhi aap agar mujhe is writing ka inam ghatiya keh kar doge to dil to tootega hi na
Bhai Jisko jo bolna hai bolne do aur yaad rakho agar kuch readers positive comments denge to kuch negative bhi is Liye Be Positive. Aapko jo Sahi lage wahi Karo Dusare ka mat Socho yaha par Motivate karne Waale kam aur Demotivate karne Waale jyada Milenge. To Tention mat lo aur Be Positive raho.
Aur aapke is Update ka reply padhne ke Baad dunga abhi padha nahi aapka Massage padhkar update padhne se pahele Iska reply Dene ka dil hua is Liye pahele Iska reply de diya.
 
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