Adultery Manhoos se mahan tak

[Sabhi91]

Accha hua deepka ko ramu k mansuba pe shak ho gaya.
Kya manjari Amit ko sari baat batayegi. Mere khayal se bata dena chahiye. Taki Amit v sambhal kar rahe. Or ramu k makshad ko nakam kare.....
Apke update ka bari besabri se intezar rehta hai. Thoda jaldi update dijye......

 

[Hami123]

Ramu poora harami hai kamini to bachegi ya nhi ye dekhna hai

Bhai ramu ko sub se dor hi rkho

 

[Pradeep singh]

Bhai mere hisab se ramu ke wajah Se Amit ko apne aur ristedaar ke bare me pata chalna chahiye. Aur amit ko ramu ke wajah se hi sahar me padhne Jana chahiye. But ramu ka band achhe se bajani chahiye jisse wo kisi ko buri nazar n dale and Kamini ke dimag tikane lagana. dekhate h apne kya kya socha h. Apki story jaberjast ja rha h.

Waiting for next bro

 

[Riitesh02]

Shuk

thanks brother for liking my story and for your valuable comment
I am not a writer this is first time I m writing so ho sakta hai bahut kuch galat bhi nikal aye but I will try my best
Rahi bat Amit ki to abhi wo thoda dil se masoom hai dheere dheere hoshiar ho jayega
Aap apne vichar dete rahiyega kai bar apni galti nazar nhi ati isi liye dusro ki nazar se bhi khud ko dekhna chahiye
Aaine me aks nazar na aaye to har shakhs khuda ho jaye

That i can understand akhir character Development bhi koi cheej hoti hai.

 

[K S Lover]

Are ruko bhai
Thokre hi insan ko majboot bnati hain

Waiting for next update

 

[Raja chouhan]

Update 22

Wahin ramu kamre me bed par leta soch rha
Ramu: sala choot k chakkar me kya kya nhi karna padta aaj to apni bhi gaand fatt gyi , pata nhi sala ye amit kaise sambhalta hai itni bhari bike ko meri to taang hi toot jati, chalo ye acha hua sari bat us chutiye k sir par aa gyi warna bike ka jo nuksan hua hai uske badle mujhe yahan se jana padta aur is ghar ki mast gadrayi hui teeno ghodian mere hath se nikal jati
Aaj se bahar ghumna band ab jaldi se ye chot theek ho fir apna formula lagata hun aur teeno ghodion ki sawari karta hun
Kya mast gadrayi hui hai ye gauri bhi sala land bar bar khada ho jata hai jab uske nange jism ko yad karta hun
Mujhe jo chahiye tha ab to wo mil hi gya hai ab mauka dekh kar bas pelna hi hai teeno ko
Ab teeno meri rakhail banengi aur kisi ko pata bhi nhi chalega hihihihi

Ab aage-

Agli subah Amit routine se akhade aur fir school jata hai, ramu chot ki vajah se bistar se nhi uthta magar subah subah kamini k jism ki khushbu zarur le leta hai

School me manjari Amit ko ramu ki harkat k bare me bta deti hai jise sunkar Amit ko ramu par aur gussa aa jata hai
School se ate waqt Amit raju se milkar sari bat use batata hai aur ramu par nazar rakhne ko bol deta hai taki usko sabak sikhaya ja sake, raju ramu se dosti ka idea deta hai magar Amit saf mana kar deta hai Dono dost apne apne dimag se idea sochte hain magar kisi natije par nhi pahunchte
Wahin deepika bhi ramu ko sabak sikhana chahti thi magar sidha sidha kuch karna sahi nhi tha isse kamini ki nazar me wo galat sabit ho jati magar fir bhi wo kamlesh se itna zarur keh deti hai k mujhe ramu ka chaal chalan theek nhi lagta

Dopehar k khane k waqt Amit ghar aa jata hai aur khana kha kar thodi der aram kar k kheton me chala jata hai jahan ajay mama fir se use kal k bare me poochte hain par Amit bat ko golmol ghumata hai jisse ajay ko yakeen nhi hota

Ramu chot ki vajah se abhi chalne firne me dikkat mehsus kar rha tha is liye wo bed se jyada uthta nhi aur kamini bhi use din ko sahara dekar apne kamre me le ati hai jahan par wo kamini k sote samay uske badan ko touch kar k apna tharak poora karta hai

Aise hi teen din nikal jate hain par kuch khas nhi hota , Amit ki motorcycle bhi theek hokar aa jati hai aur ramu bhi ab chalne firne k liye fit ho jata hai
Chothe din dopehar ko gauri deepika ko sath lekar gaon me kisi k ghar function par chali jati hai, kamini ramu k liye ghar par ruk jati hai Amit to abhi school me hi tha abhi use aane me 3 ghante ka waqt tha
Ramu ko ye mauka sahi lagta hai apni chal chalne k liye jab gauri aur deepika nikal jate hain to ramu neeche ata hai kamini ghar k chhote mote kamo me busy thi
Ramu rasoi ghar me jakar chai banane lagta hai, chai ko do cup me daalne k bad ramu ek cup me neend ki do goliyan daal deta hai

( Ramu us din bullet se town chemist ki dukan se neend ki goliyan condom aur viagra ki goliyan hi lekar aya tha)

Aur khud ek viagra tablet kha leta hai
Fir wo chai lekar kamini k pass jata hai

Ramu: bua ji kya aap sara din akeli hi ghar ka sara kaam karti rehti hain, kya aap hi ne theka le rakha hai sara?
Mera bas chale to apko sara din bistar se uthne na dun ( sara din bistar par nangi kar k chodta rahun) ye lijiye chai pijiye maine special apke liye banai hai

Kamini: are tu mujhe bol deta agar tujhe zarurat thi to abhi abhi teri chot theek hui hai aur tu ye sab karne laga

Ramu: bua ji main to bete ka farz nibha rha hun, lijiye chai pijiye aur bataiye kaisi bani hai

Kamini bahut khush hoti hai k ramu sachmuch uski kitni care karta hai aur wo man hi man khush hoti chai pine lagti hai

Chai peene k baad ramu toilet ka bolkar chala jata hai aur 15 minutes bad wapis ata hai

Ramu k wapis aane tak kamini tablet k high dose se neend ki agosh me chali jati hai
Ramu kamini ko soyi dekhkar apni chal ki kamyabi par khush ho jata hai magar wo jaldbazi nhi karna chahta tha isliye wo aur 15 minutes wait karta hai
Uske baad ramu bahar k gate ko achi tarah band karne k bad kamre me akar darwaz lock kar deta hai aur kamini ko check karne k liye pehle use awaz deta hai fir hilata hai magar kamini koi response nhi deti
Ramu khushi se uchhal padta hai aur fatafat apne kapde utar deta hai
Fir wo kamini k kapde utarne ki sochta hai magar fir irada badal leta hai ye sochkar k agar koi aa gya to wapis kapde pehnana mushkil hoga

Ramu kamini k pairon k pas baithkar uske dono pairon ko chumta hai

Ramu: aah kitne gore gore paon hai kitne mulayam hain mmm

Paon ko chumne k baad ramu kamini k dono paon uthakar sadi kamar tak upar sarka deta hai
Kamini ki nangi gori chikni jaanghen ramu ko pagal karne lagti hain aur ramu deewano ki tarah paon se lekar jaanghon k jodon tak jeebh se chatne lagta hai
Ramu ki jeebh ki thook se kamini ki poori taangen gili ho gyi thi

Fir ramu dono hatho se kamini ki penty pakad kar dheere dheere khinchne lagta hai, penty kamar k neeche fasi hone ki vajah se ramu badi ehtiyat se nikalta hai kahin jhatke se kamini ko mehsus na ho kuch, ramu janta tha k itni jaldi kamini uthne wali nhi magar fir bhi wo ehtiyat barat rha tha

Penti nikalne k baad ramu k saamne kamini ki jhanto wali bur aa jati hai
Kamini ki gulabi choot dekhkar ramu ramu ka dil gale me aa jata hai

Gori gulabi choot k upar kaali ghani jhante kya dilkash nazara tha aisi gori chikni choot to bas blue filmo me hi dekhne ko milti hai

Ramu jaldi se jeebh nikal kar choot ko chatne lagta hai

Ramu: hmmm ummmm kya mazedar swad hai sarrrrup sarrrrup sarrrrrup hmmm ummmm aaahhhh cccc aise lagta hai jaise kuwari ladki ki choot ho

Kamini ajay ki napunskta ki vajah se kitne salon se chudi nhi thi isliye uski choot tight ho chuki thi kabhi kabhi wo ungali kar leti thi magar choot tight ho chuki thi

Ramu choot ka swaad leta hua 15 minutes tak choot hi chat ta rehta hai
Kamini chahe neend me behoshi ki halat me thi magar uska jism choot chatai se garam ho gya tha aur choot risne lagi thi

Choot chatne k bad ramu kamini k naram gulabi honth chusne lagta hai aur uske hontho ki sari lipstick kha jata hai
Honth chusne k sath ramu kamini k poore chehre ko chumta hai aur fir uski gardan par bhi kiss karne lagta hai

Uske baad ramu kamini k blouse k button khol kar uske doodh se safed doodh masalne lagta hai
Kamini k doodh gure chitte the aur nipple halke brown the
Ramu se raha nhi jata aur wo ek doodh ko muh me lekar chusne lagta hai, jitna ho sake wo doodh ko muh me bhar leta hai aur dusre doodh ko maslta hai
Thodi der ek doodh chusne k baad wo dusre doodh ko chusta hai
Ab rustam blue film k sare ideas ko follow karta hua apne land ko kamini k hontho par laga deta hai
Ramu ka land koi jyada khas nhi tha bas 5 inch ka hi tha magar tablet khane ki vajah se lohe ki tarah sakht hua pada tha

Kamini to behosh thi magar ramu uske muh me land dalne chahta tha fir koshish kar k wo kamini ka muh khulwata hai aur apna land uske muh me ghusane lagta hai

Kamini k muh me land jate hi ek jhurjhuri c ramu k jism me daud jati hai apni bua k haseen tareen komal labon me apna land dalkar wo khud ko jannat me udta hua mehsus kar rha tha
Maze se uske muh se siski nikal jati hai

Ramu: aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh cccccccccccc buaaaaaaaaaaa kyyyyyaaaa mmmmaaasstttttt maaaaaaaallll hai tuuuuuuuu
Cccccccc aaaaaaahhhhh

5 minutes lund muh me ghumane k bad ramu hat jata hai kyunki kamini k daant bar bar land par lag rhe the jisse ramu k land me ragad lag rhi thi

Ramu ab finally apna mission “ Bua Ki Chudai “ poora karne wala tha

Ramu kamini ki taango ko uthakar apne kandho par rakh leta hai aur apne land ko bina condom k hi kamini ki choot par rakhta hai

Ramu ne abhi tak 2/3 baar randion ki kaali kaluti fati hui bhosda type choot hi chodi thi, kamini choot uske liye kisi sapne k sach hone k saman thi is liye wo land dalne se pehle fir ek bar choot chatne lagta hai 2 minutes choot chatne k bad wo apne land par thook lagata hai aur fir se kamini ki choot par apna land rakhta hai

Usi waqt bahar ka darwaza zor zor se koi peetne lagta hai
Darwaze ki itni zordar awaz se ramu ki gaand fat jati hai
Wo samajh jata hai koi ghar ka hi member hoga isliye wo fatafat apne kapde pehnta hai
Tabtak bahar se darwaza lagatar bajne laga tha
Kapde pehnne k bad ramu kamini ki sadi petticoat niche kar deta hai aur uske blouse k button jaldi se band karta hai magar poore ho nhi pate
Darwaza lagatar baj rha tha ramu ek bar nazar markar kamre se niklta hai aur daudta hua gate k pas jakar saans theek karte hue gate kholta hai

Samne deepika thi jo ramu ko gaur se dekh kar andaza lagane lagti hai

Deepika: itni der darwaza kholne me? Didi kahan hai?

Ramu: wo wo main main upar kamre me tha aap to janti hain aunty mere paon me chot abhi poori tarah theek nhi hui isliye mujhe aane me der lag gyi

Deepika ramu ki baton se samajh gyi k wo jhooth bol rha hai, deepika ki nazar jab ramu ki pent me khade hue land par jati hai to use shak hota hai

Deepika: didi kahan hai?

Ramu: mujhe kya pta main to abhi upar se aya hun shayad kamre me ho

Deepika jaldi se andar ati hai aur sidha kamini k kamre me jati hai jahan kamini bed par so rhi thi

Deepika kamini ko awaz deti hai magar kamini koi response nhi deti

Deepika: didi to is waqt nhi soti fir aaj kaise so gyi aur meri awaz se bhi nhi uth rhi
Deepika kamini ko hilati hai magar kamini fir bhi nhi jagti
Deepika ko lagta hai k shayad kamini behosh ho gyi hai isliye wo ramu ko kehti hai wo jaldi se kheton se ajay bhaiya ko bulakar laye
Ramu bina waqt gawaye ghar se bhag jata hai

Ramu: bhen ki lodi thoda late aa jati to tera kya jata, main ab tak bua ko chod chuka hota magar lagta hai teri choot me khujli kuch jyada hi hai, koi bat nhi teri bhi khujli main hi door karunga aur teri to gaand bhi fadunga saali ne KLPD kar diya

Ramu deepika ki man me galiyan deta hua kheton me pahunchkar ajay fufa ko deepika ka sandesh deta hai
Ajay ramu ko sath lekar gaon me jo desi kamchalau dr tha uske pas pahunchta hai aur use sath lekar ghar pahunch jata hai

Ramu k jane k bad kamini ko gaur se dekhti hai to use nazar ata hai k uske blouse k do button khule hue the aur uske hontho se lipstick gayab thi
Deepika sari baton par gaur karti hai to use yakeen hone lagta hai k isme ramu ka hath hai magar saboot nhi tha koi uske pas ye bat sabit karne k liye
Kamini ki penty bed k neeche hi giri padi thi magar uspar deepika ki nazar nhi padi thi kyunki jaldbazi me ramu ka paon lagne se penty bed k neeche chali gyi thi

Itni der me ajay ramu ko aur dr ko sath lite ghar pahunch jata hai
Dr kamini ko check kar k ek injection laga deta hai aur kehta hai k darne ki bat nhi
Dr to chala gya tha magar deepika ka dimag ramu par hi laga hua tha
Ramu viagra ki vajah se uttejit tha use bas choot chahiye thi uska pani uske dimag par chad gya tha ghar par to mamla bigad gya tha isliye wo ghar se nikal jata hai
School ki chhutti ka waqt ho chala tha ramu k dimag me manjari aa jati hai aur wo jaldi se manjari k raste me sahi thikana dekh kar chhup jata hai

Chhutti hone k bad manjari jab ghar ja rhi thi to dopehar ka waqt hone ki vajah se roz ki tarah gali me koi nhi tha
Achanak ek band gali k kone se ek shakhs uska muh dabakar use us band gali me kheench leta hai is gali me koi ghar nhi tha bas ek ghar ka pichwada hi tha jahan gayen bhains baandhi hui thi aur chare ka kamra tha
Manjari ko kheenchne wala ramu hi tha jo use kheenchkar use chaare wale kamre me le jata hai
Manjari k muh se awaz nhi nikal rhi thi wo khud chhudane k liye jaddo jehad kar rhi thi magar ramu k aage uska jor kam tha
Manjari ko abhi tak pata nhi tha k kisne use pakad rakha hai , chare k kamre me andhera tha
Ramu jaldi se manjari ko patak deta hai aur uspar toot padta hai manjari chillane ki koshish karti hai magar ramu fir se uska muh band kar deta hai aur manjari ko apne neeche dabate hue ek hath se uski salwar ka nada kholne lagta hai

Manjari lagatar chhutne ki koshish kar rhi thi wo roye ja rhi thi aur cheekhna chati thi taki uski madad ko koi aa sake wo man hi man bhagwan se madad mang rhi thi magar filhal madad milti dikh nhi rhi thi
Ramu se manjari ki salwar ka nada khul nhi rha tha is liye wo kheenchkar nada tod deta hai
Nada toot te hi manjari ko lagta hai k ab uska balatkar ho k rahega wo aur bhi zyada koshish karti hai chhutne ki

Hath chalate chalate manjari k hath me ek pathar aa jata hai aur wo pathar uthakar sidha apne upar pade shakhs k sir par mar deti hai

Manjari ne poori jor se pathar mara tha jiski vajah se ramu ko gehri chot lag jati hai aur uski pakad dheeli pad jati hai
Usi pal manjari ramu ko dhakka dekar uske niche se nikal kar apni salwar ko ek hath se pakad kar daud jati hai aur sidha ghar jakar hi rukti hai

Ramu k sir se khoon behne laga tha wo dard se tadapta hua uthta hai aur dr k pas chala jata hai
Ramu k sath dusri bar KLPD ho gya tha aur ab sir ki chot se alag se gand fat rhi thi
Ek bat to uske hak me hui thi k dono hi case me usko kisi ne dekha nhi tha

Patti karwakar ramu ghar ata hai to sab ghar par maujood the Amit school se aa chuka tha vijay kamlesh aur gauri bhi kamini ki behoshi ka sunkar laut aye the

Ramu k sir par bandhi patti dekhkar sab usse puchne lagte hain magar wo kehta hai k paon fislne se gir gaya tha aur pathar par sir ja laga

Kamini bhi hosh me aa chuki thi magar poori tarah normal nhi hui thi
Fir khane k bad sab apne apne kamron me chale jate hain

 

[Raja chouhan]

fantastic update

Nice bro lekin kab tak amit kamini ki najarme girta rahega bro waiting for next update

Very nice bro

Nice n fantastic update

Nice update bhai .Ramu to bahut bada kamina nikla Amit ko phasakar .Ab Ramu aur kya bakheda karta hai dekhna padega.

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Nice update
Lakin apna hero sahi main chutiya h koi bhi kuch bol deta h jab ye Ramu ki harkat ke baare main janta h to isne ye sab Kyu Kiya h
Keep posting

Galat dost, hamara matlab hai us story ki yaad ayi becoz thoda plot milta hai lekin ye story uski copy and paste hai ye bat 100% jhut hai.. aur bhai tum bhi hamara ya ahe jakar kisi aur ka galat matlab na lena jisse story ko affect ho...

Aur raha sawal jyada characters ka to bhai uska bhi ek alag hi maza hai bas dheere2 sabhi ko introduce karna...

Mai Dawe se keh sakta hu ye story yaha ki super hit stories mai se ek banegi

Nicee update

Raja bhai maja to agya pr sach to lao gharwalon ke Samne hero ko jhuta Matt sabit hone dena bas etni request hai apse

O bhai hero ko itna niche na girao thora mard banao koi kuch bol deta hy to rone lagta hy drama thora kam kro

Aise toh mai comment karta nai but last update padhke comment karne pe majbur ho gya.

Lekin pehle mai aap(writer) ke bare me bolna chahunga ke mujhe apki ye story kafi pasand aai. Well Concept is not new but characters are really well defined and which is why i like this story. Aur updates ki length bhi sahi rehti hai. Sath me apke likhne ka style bahut neat aur clean hai jisse padhne me asani hoti hai jisse maza aur badh jata hai. Updates bhi time pe aa aate hai (Well abhi tak :P).

Ab aate hai story pe toh kehna chahunga story abhi tak sahi jaa rahi hai. Story ki speed bhi thik hai. I like slow progression and build ups. T kohey make the story more erotic. (but not too slow ofc :P) And i am not really concened about kamini's anger for Amit cause we all know jaha nafrat jyada hota hai baat me pyar bhi waha jyada hota hai
I am more intrested in Gauri's arc. She is too pure i am looking fwd to how you are going to write her story. Aur ab dekhna hai Amit ke father side ki family kab aati hai story me. Usse pehle dekhte hai Ramu ka story kaise karwat leta hai. Abhi kuch updates se sex nai huva hai bs sirf Ramu ka pervert harkat chal rha hai. Dekhte hai amit ka sukha kab tak chalta hai.

Ab aate hai last update pe. Well to be frank i am a bit disappointed. Still it wasn't a bad update. I like the story apart from that scene with the kamini let me tell you why..
1. Jab ramu jhuth bola toh Amit ko shock hoke apna bachaw krna chahiye tha. Bhale Kamini uspe bharosa nahi krti aur usko jhuth bol rha h krke ek jhapad aur mar deti.
2. I don't think a character like Amit would cry in front of people specially in front of Ramu. Apne kamre me jane ke baad rota toh jyada sahi rehta.
Isko chhod Baki sab thik laga.

Now this is my personal opinion. I wrote what i felt. And I have respect for the writer and he has every right to how he write his story. So pleaee don't jump on me.
Aur itna bada comment krne ke liye mafi chahta hu.

Nice update
Bhai lagta hai ramu ke zariye kamini ki nafrat khatm hogi
Sala ramu tu boht bada harami nikla
Ab ramu Amit ki nazar mai aa gya hai ab iss ka qissa bhi jald khatm hoga
Aur bhai ek aur update kr dena jis mood par kahani ayi hai aur wait nahi hota

Bro bimar aadmi ki farmais puri kardo
kardo 1 or update dekar duvaye milegi tumko

Accha hua deepka ko ramu k mansuba pe shak ho gaya.
Kya manjari Amit ko sari baat batayegi. Mere khayal se bata dena chahiye. Taki Amit v sambhal kar rahe. Or ramu k makshad ko nakam kare.....
Apke update ka bari besabri se intezar rehta hai. Thoda jaldi update dijye......

Bhai ramu ko sub se dor hi rkho

Bhai mere hisab se ramu ke wajah Se Amit ko apne aur ristedaar ke bare me pata chalna chahiye. Aur amit ko ramu ke wajah se hi sahar me padhne Jana chahiye. But ramu ka band achhe se bajani chahiye jisse wo kisi ko buri nazar n dale and Kamini ke dimag tikane lagana. dekhate h apne kya kya socha h. Apki story jaberjast ja rha h.

Waiting for next bro

That i can understand akhir character Development bhi koi cheej hoti hai.

Waiting for next update

Update posted

 

[Abbasi]

Very nice, awesome, fantastic updates ..............
Keep it up bro ...............
Waiting for next update ..............

 

[Rocky2602]

Nice n fantastic update

 

[Silent lover]

Good updates