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another outstanding update! It is really a great story.keep moving brother.
 
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Update 59

Baldev devrani shyam or badri apne upar itne subah achank hamle hone par apne jaan le kar bhagna uchit samajhte hai

Badri bhi achanak hue hamle per har baat bhul kar baldev k sath bhagne lagta hai


Baldev:Or tez ,pata nahi inhe hamari khabar kaise mil gayi

Badri:wo abhi bhi hamare peeche hai baldev

Baldev:sab apni apni talwar nikal lo

"khachh" se kheech baldev apni talwar nikal leta hai

Kuch der bhagne k baad

Shyam:badri wo log peeche nahi hai

Devrani:jaan bachi bhagwan

Tabhi baldev dekhta hai k uske samne wo ghudsawar aarahe the

Baldev:bala abhi tali nahi samne dekho

Devrani:ye yahi k basinde lagte hai inhe jungle ka chappa chappa pata hai par ye sab apne chehre ko dhake q hai

Badri:Chalo ab ho jaye do do hath dosto

Baldev:Han chalo or maa aap yahi rahe

Devrani:Apni maryada rakho tum sab me Maharani devrani hu ek rajputni mera in sabko sabaq sikhane ka pehla haq hai

Baldev:par mausi

Shyam:rani maa aap ko agar kharoch bhi aajaye to hum maharaj ko kya muh dikhayenge

Badri:shyam sahi kah raha hai

Baldev:Bass ye samay baat karne ka nahi kaam karne ka hai Badri tum neeche utro or wo ped ko kaat samne se bandh bana do

Shyam or me aage jayenge Maa tum yaha par rahna or teero se unko dhul chata dena

Devrani:mere paas aaye to mera talwar unka khun chakhega

Badri jhat se ghode se utar ek ped kaat gira deta hai use raste me bicha deta hai baldev or shyam abhi bhi samne se aarahe ghudswaro ki ore badh rahe the

Baldev:Jaise me ishara karta hu unpar teer ki barsat kar dena

Baldev or shyam dheere dheere aage badh rahe the devrani apna dhanush taane khadi thi or badri niche dhanush taane baldev k ishare ka intezar kar raha tha

Baldev:Sab tayyar
Jaise jaise wo kareeb aa rahe the baldev unke har kadam ko gine raha tha or fir

Baldev:Chalao

Ghode pe baithi devrani apne kaman se teer chhorne lagti hai or badri bhi tezi se teer chhor raha tha

Teer kuch ghode ko ghayal kar raha tha kuch ghudsawaro ko bhi lage
or tabhi ek badri ki teer ek ghudsawar k seene me lagi
"aaaaaah"
or wo dher ho gir gaya
dusra teer devrani ne nishana laga kar mara
or abki devrani ne ek ghudsawar ko maar giraya
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Baldev:bhut khub ,ab hamare bilkul paas hai talwar se hamla karna badri

Shyam:Jai bhawani

Baldev:jai bhawani

Badri bhi apne ghode pe chadh talwar nikal kar tez daudane lagta hai baldev or shyam bhi utne me dono guto ki takkar hoti hai
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Baldev apne dusre hath me ek or talwar le leta hai

Baldev apne daye baye se hamla hone par unke talwar per apni talwar marta hai dono taraf se baldev k sar par talwar chalata hai baldev jhuk kar apne dono talwaro se dono par ek bura prahar karta hai or dono gir jate hai

Devrani k paas char ghudsawar bhagte hai jisme se do niche lage ped se takra gir jate hai or do ko apne teer se devrani maar gira deti hai

Devrani:apna ghoda bhaga kar ghode se gire dono vyakti ko apna ghoda se kuchalti hai fir apne talwar se undono k sar ko dhar se alag kar deti hai
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Devrani:jai bhawani

Baldev shyam or badri k sath talwar se lad rahe the

Baldev fir se do logo ko apne talwar se maar girata hai

or badri or shyam ek ek se ladte hue ja rahe the badri apne talwar se uska sar dhar se alag kar deta hai

ab bas ek bach gaya tha
devrani badri shyam baldev k paas ajate hai

Akela vyakti apne aap ko akela zinda dekh dar jata hai or uske hath se talwar chhut jati hai

Shyam:Q bahadur fatt gayi ?Talwarbazi me hum se tum kabhi jeet nahi sakte,chaho to apne raja shahzeb se pucho

Baldev:Shyam use marna mat

Shyam ek talwar ki war uske hath par deta hai wo ghudsawar niche gir jata hai

"mujhe jane do meherbani kar k"

baldev badri devrani apne ghodo se utar kar us vyakti k paas jate hai

Baldev:a hamlawar apni pehchan bata kaun ho
Devrani:Kahi tum shahzeb duwara bheje to nahi gaye

Shyam ghode se utarta hua
"iska pata ye khud kahega q k marna to shayad ise bhi pasand nahi ho"
shyam utar kar wo vyakti jo apna hath jode peeche khasak rahe the uske paas jata hai

Baldev:batao kaun bheja hai tumhe
Hamlawar:nahi nahi

Badri apni talwar liye uske paas jata hai or chilla kar
"aaaaaaaah"apni talwar k dhaar se uske gardan ko alag kar deta hai

Baldev:ye kya kiya badri hume wo he bata sakta tha k kaun bheja

Badri chup chap apna talwar me lage khun ko apne anguthe se pochte hue
"shyam chalo hum apne talware paas wali nadi me saaf kar aaye "

Badri or shyam paas wale nadi par jane lagta hai

Baldev:shyam suno ye hamare bhi talwar dho lao

Shyam kuch nahi bolta or unke talwar le kar jane lagta hai

shyam or badri nadi par apne talwar dho rahe the
baldev devrani k paas jata hua

Baldev:kahi tumhe chot to nahi aai na maa

Devrani dekhti hai kitna chinta kar raha hai baldev uska

Devrani:Jab mere paas itna budhiman itna veer beta hai to mujhe kaise kharoch aa sakti hai
devrani aa kar baldev se gale lag jati hai
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Baldev:devrani
dheeme swar me

Devrani:han mere raja
fusfusate hue baldev ko bheech kar pakadti hai

Devrani:beta tumhe to nahi lagi na mujhe to dar lag raha tha k kahi mere raja bete ko kuch nahi ho jaye

Baldev:jab tak apka pyar hai mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta Mata waise aapne bhi achi yudha kala dikhai

devrani apni prashansha sun muskurati hai

Nadi tat par baithe shyam se

Badri:dekho in besharmo ko fir chalu ho gaye

Shyam:han par hume kya karna chahiye mujhe samajh nahi aaraha

Dono apna kaam kar k nadi se wapas aate hai

Baldev:acha hua aagaye tum log hume ab jana chahiye

Badri:Suno baldev

Baldev:han bolo mitra aaj tum dono ne bhut acha yudha kya aaj acharya ji hote to bhut khush hote

badri:man me) ab kaise bolu isko

Badri:bhai mujhe wapas jana hai

Baldev ko jaise jhatka lagta hai

Baldev:Par tum itni door ho or dushmani se ghire ho

Devrani:beta badri kaha jaoge tum tumhara jana khatre se khali nahi

Baldev:humne insabko maut k ghat utar dya jo inhe bheja hai unhe hamare bare me sab pata hai or wo fir hamla kar sakta hai

Shyam:man me)baat to baldev ki thek hai

Badri:Mujhe kuch nahi sun na

Baldev:suno tumhe kya pareshani hai bolo
tumhe agar sahi me ghar jana hai to Paras chalo hum aate samay tumhe tumhare rajya chhor denge

Devrani:han badri beta

Badri:par mausi (jhinjhalate hue)

Shyam:Baldev theek keh raha hai tumhari jaan ko khatra hai akela jana or waise bhi hum dono je maharaj ko vachan dye the Mata rani devrani ko surakshit Ghatrashtra pahuchane ka

Badri:par

Shyam:par war kuch nahi hamare sath chalo Nahi to kal maharaj ko kya muh dikhaoge or tumhari jo duvidha hai uspar hum baat karenge

shyam aashwasan dete hue kehta hai

Badri bhi sab kuch samajhte hue baldev k sath jane ko tayyar ho jata hai charo apne apne ghodo per baithne jane lagte hai

shyam:mausi ye dhanush baan aap apne jhole me rakh dijiye

Devrani:theek hai beta laao

shyam or badri apne ghode per baith jate hai
baldev devrani k paas khada tha
devrani dhanush k baan apne ghode pe lade jhole me rakhne jati hai

Devrani:ary ye to saman se bhara hai

Shyam:to mausi kuch jagah bana lo

Devrani upar k saaman ko nikalne ki koshish karti hai or apna daya hath andar daalti hai or wo saman jo odhne ka tha use bahar nikal he rahi thi k devrani ki nazar uske hath k paas apna fan uthaye Saanp par jati hai or wo saanp ud k ek dank marta hai devrani ka hath thoda sa uth jata hai or saanp ka dunk ghode k peeth par lag jata hai

"aaaaah baldev"
Baldev bhagta hua devrani k paas aata hai
devrani saanp ko dekh apne ap ko smbhal nahi pati or girne lagti hai baldev aakar peeche se use pakad leta hai

devrani ishare se dikhati hai saanp kale rang ka jhola se nikal kar ja raha tha

Devrani ko sidha khada kar baldev apni talwar nikal kar saanp ki taraf jata hai

ye sab badri or shyam bhi aa jate hai

Devrani:chhor do use

Baldev:meri maa par hamla kya hai is sanp ne iski to

par saanp tezi se paas k jungle me bhaag jata hai

Baldev waps aata hai or devrani uske gale lag jati hai

Devrani:baldev ye kya tha kaun hamare peeche pada hai

Baldev:jo bhi hai usko iska uttar me dunga

Shyam:ye jungli saanp nahi paltu tha

tabhi dhapp ki aawaz aati hai sabki nazar us par padti hai
Ghoda gir gaya tha
or thode der me he uski jibh bahar aajati hai or ghoda mar jata hai

Baldev k baho me devrani thi

"baldev agar aaj ye mujhe kaat leta to"

"Aisa nahi hoga humne kisi ka kuch nahi bigada hai jo bhagwan hamare sath kabhi aisa karega"

"bhagwan ne meri jaan bacha li baldev agar me ghode per baithi hoti to aaj to me""

Baldev:bass shubh shubh bolne khud kehti ho or khud

badri ye sab ghur ghur k dekh raha tha
Badri:wo sab to theek hai aage jane k lye Mausi k lye ghoda kaha se laye

Baldev:aapki mausi mere ghode pe baithegi

Baldev:q rani maa

Devrani:Han baithungi

devrani lajja rhi thi

Shyam or badri jo dono ka khel jan gye the pr anjan bante hue dono k vartalap ko bhali bhanti samajh rahe the

Badri:to chalo hume jaldi nikalna chahiye

Baldev mahaul ko thoda theek karte hue
"maa ab ye mat kahna k bhagwan ne jaan bacha li to ek baar yaha bhi pooja karni hai"

Shyam:waise he subah k pooja k wajah se hum deri se nikale the

Devrani:tum logo ko kya pata ho sakta hai bhagwan meri bhakti dekh meri jaan bacha li aaj or mere puja se he hum sab aaj surakshit hai

Baldev:Han maa tum thek keh rahi ho

Devrani:islye bhagwan ko kabhi bhulna nahi chahiye wahi jeevan deta hai wahi mrityu

Badri man me:Abhi zyada pujaran ban rahi ho mausi sansar ko is baat ka kya pata tum kitne sanskari ho

Shyam:ab devi maa chalo bhi pura path yaha par he shuru mat kar dena

Shyam or badri wapas apne ghodo par baith jate hai

Baldev mare hue ghode se saman nikal kar apne ghode par or kuch shyam k ghode per laad deta hai

baldev:maa aap baitho ghode par

Devrani:ab kya karu baithna he padega

Baldev:ab hamare paas dusra koi chara bhi nahi

devrani jhat se apne dono lambe tango ko utha k ghode k peeth per baith jati or uske baad baldev bhi baith jata hai

Baldev:Maa thoda peeche aao na
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devrani muskurate hue peeche aati hai

Baldev:devrani ab thoda utho or fir baitho
baldev apne baye hath se ghode ki lagam pakde tha or baye hath se apne dhoti me laude ko sahi karte hue kehta hai

Devrani sab kuch samajh rahi thi or ek madak muskan k sath baith jati hai
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devrani ko apne pichwade me hathoda jaisa mehush hota hai or wo uchak jati hai
hey bhagwan"

"maa baitho na kya hua"

"beta mere dhyan me saanp aagaya tha"
or apne bete ko peeche mud kar dekhti hai
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Devrani:man me) agar badri or shyam nahi hote to ye saanp mere andar chala jata me koi bachi nahi hu

Baldev: man me) kitni garam or gaddedad gaand hai maa ki

Baldev apna dono hath aage le ja kar devrani k pet per rakh kar
apne ore kheechta hai
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Devrani halka siski chhor di
"ah "
Baldev:mmhhh
"ache se baitho nahi to gir jaogi maa"
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or fir himmat kar k apne bhari bharkam gaand tika kar baith jati hai

Baldev:aah ..chalo sathio paras ki ore
Baldev devrani k naram or andar se kathor chutaro k beech land fasate he aah nikal jati hai
Shyam:han chale dosto hume suryauday se pehle paras k seema tak pahuchna hai

Badri:han chalo par mushkil hai humne pehle he samay barbad kar dya

sab ghodo ko bhagane lagte hai paras ki ore..

To be continued..
 
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