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mela jane ki tayari karne Devrani kaksha me jati hai or use waha kamla dikhai deti hai jo patra le kar khadi thi devrani uske hath se patra le leti hai or kamla k samne he man me padhne lagti hai

Priya devrani
Mera ye antim patra hai tmko iske bad me or patra nahi bhejunga me chahta hu k tm hamare pyar ko samajh nahi pa rhi ho islye me tmhe aakhiri 7 din deta hu ,me ravivar k din nadi kinare tmhara intezar karunga agar tum nahi aati ho to me smjh jaunga ki tumhari ruchi nahi hai or aagayi to tm mere sath mere rajya chalogi
Bass 7 din me or zyada smaay vyarth nahi kar skta
Shersingh

Ye padh kar kamla se
devrani:suno 7 din ka smaay diya hai nirnay lene ka
kamla:kaun sa nirnay
devrani:yahi k mujhe shersingh k sath jana hai ya nahi
kamla:hay dayya tm hum sab ko chhor chali jaogi
devrani:ab pyar pane k lye to..
kamla:chup raho mera rasta sujhaya hai mjhe he keh rhi ho
devrani:to kya kr skte hai
kamla:mujhe to theek hai chhor dena ,kya apne baldev ko chhhor k tum khush reh paogi waha
devrani:nahi kabhi nahi,baad me use bhi bula sakte hai hum
kamla:to kya baldev is se khush hoga? K uske maa jo pativarta hai,ek devi jaisi hai wo itne salo se dukh uthai or aaj ek purush k lye apne putra ko chhor rhi hai

Devrani:Mere paas koi chara nahi hai
Kamla:tm apne ap me jhako or apne paas jo hai usme khusia talasho ,tumhe har khushi apne pas milegi

or ye keh kar kamla chali jati hai
devrani:man me)han tm kya kehna chahti ho me smjh rhi hu,pr kya ye paap nahi hoga,ye baaat to sahi hai dusra to dusra he hota aaj kaise sher singh ne kah dya samay vyarth nahi karna use mere upar ,kal ho kar wo mera sath chhor de to me na ghar ki rahungi na ghat ki


kamla devrani k kaksha se jate hue
Kamla:man me)beta baldev tune 7 din ki baat rakh kar apne pair pe kulhari maar li hai
"Agar 7 din k andar Devrani ko tu nahi pata paya to wo sher singh se milne jayegi "

"agar use sher singh chahiye to hume kisi or ko waha khada karna padega or to or baldev ne khud pratigya li hai is bat ki"


surya tezi se dhal raha tha usi k sath ghatrashtra k log bhi aaj bhut jaldi se apna kaam nipta kar bazar jane ki tayyari kar rahe the q k aaj bazar me har saal ki trah mela laga tha jisme trah trah jhuley,biscope tha,khane k ek se ek mithaiya thi ,nirtya smaroh tha aur is bhi badhkar rochak cheeze,Ghatrashtra k nagrik apne kheto se nikal kar Ghatrashtra k mukhya bazar me chamchamate mele ki or badh rahe the

Idhar devrani ache se apne ko ragad ragad k nahari hai or ek safed sadi or laal blouse pehan leti hai,mathe pe sindur pairo me payal,hotho pe laal surkh laali laga leti hai or niche khade reh kar awaz lagatai hai

Devrani:Baldev chalo bhi


baldev bhi saj sawar ka tayyar tha or niche ata hai devrani use dekh soch me pad jati ha
devrani:tumne ye paridhan mazduro wala q pehna hai
Baldev:Q k ek yuvraj mele me maza nahi leta jitna ek aam nagrik leta hai
devrani:par
baldev:Maa ..me nahi chahta k hamare waha jane se waha k aam logo ka maza kirkira ho or hume prathimikta di jaye

agar hum apne bhes me gaye to wo to hamare lye mela khali kar denge or hume 10 mint bhi nahi lagega or hum mela ghum lenge
or bechare janta ki khushio k beech rukawat ban jayegi

Devrani:tum kitna sochte ho logo k bare me
Baldev:han bhale mere bare me koi nahi soche or muskurata hai

Baldev ki baat devrani ko kaante ki trah chubhti hai
baldev:ary kis soch me ho tum is chadar ko odh ghunghat kar lo tmhe bhi koi nahi pehchan payega

Devrani ek bada sa safed chadar le kr odh leti ha
devrani bahar jane lagti hai to baldev use rok deta hai
baldev:maa aaj hum aage se nahi piche k raste se jayenge or bina rath k

ye sun kar devrani hasti hai fir baldev bhi hasne lagta hai dono bahar aa kar paidal nadi ki ore chalne lagte hai q k nadi k us paar tha mela or aaj mela k wajah se is paar se us paar karne k liye aaj naav bhi thi.
dono baate karte hue chalte rehte hai

"baldev agar me tumhe chhor k kahi or chali jau to"

Baldev: to me bhi tumhare piche piche waha aa jaunga
Devrani:itna chahta hai apni maa ko
baldev:han hadd se zyada

Devrani:agar tu mjhe chhor kar kal kisi rani k chakkar me aa kar mujhse door chala jaye to
Baldev:me apna jaan dena gawara karunga pr jana nahi
Devrani:agar wo tujh se prem krti hogi or tu bhi to?
Baldev:to bhi nahi

Devrani man me:sach me kitna pavitra dill hai iska or iska prem bhi
Baldev:or maa tm mujhe chhor k jao aisi naubat he nahi aayegi
Devrani:wo kaise bhala
Baldev:me tumhe itna pyar dunga jise chhor kar jana tmhare liye kathin hoga
Devrani:acha ji...
Baldev:han ji

wo nadi k paas pahuch jate hai or devrani waha khadi h kar nadi ka manzar dekh kar angadai leti hai


Baldev devrani k khoobsurat gol aakar me bandhe doodh or gehri nabhi dekh kr hil jata hai or

fir chal kar dono ek nav wala jo awaz laga kar kah raha tha mela chalo ja kar dono us nav me baith Jate hai devrani baithi hui thi uke samne baldev baitha tha or baldev devrani ko dekhta hai


Jiska aadha chehra dikh raha tha baldev k aise dekhe jane devrani ko darr sa lagta hai
devrani:man me) aise dekhta hai jaise mjhe kabhi dekha he nahi hai,koi is balak ko bataye me maa hu iski patni nahi)or khud apne soch se lajja jati hai

In dono ko koi or bhi tha jo dekh raha wo tha naav wala jo apne naav k chappu marte hue tez gati se nav bhaga raha tha

Naavik:ary ustad tm dono bade sharmeele lagte ho

baldev jaise sapne se jagte hue
Baldev:matlab
navik:yahi k aap dono ko nayi nayi shadi hui hai lagta hai islye itne door door baithe ho

baldev or devrani k aakh fate k fate reh jate hai unka ye haal tha k pura rom rom kaanp raha tha lajja se

baldev aisi stithi me tha k wo keh bhi nahi skta tha k me yuvraj hu or ye meri maa devrani hai

Baldev:hmm chhoro bhi yaro
Naavik:ama yar kaise chhorey shadi konu baar baar hothi hai ek baar ki mily zindagani hai ,khub aish kar leyo

Baldev:sirf hmmm karta hai majburi me
or is baat ka matlab smjh k balev apne maa se aish karne k lye hmm keh k hami bhar dya ho,devrani ka gala sukh jata hai or dusri ore uttezit bhi ho jati hai

navik:ama yaar socha tho bhaiya
jay k baitha apna gharwali k bagal me

ab stithi ye thi k baldev ko na jate ban raha tha or na baith te ban raha tha wo socha navik ki baat maan lene se kahi wo chup baith jaye

baldev ab uth k devrani k bagal me baith jata hai
naavik:ee hui na baat babua
or naavik gata hai "Oo maaaaaaajhi re "maaaajhi re " tore bina ee dill na lagi re "

naavik:ary bhaisahab tm dono to aisie baithe ho jaise saanp sungh lya ho
ee vatavaran ka aanand leo ,tanik kareeb ho kr chipak k baitho thandi zyada hai"
or hasta hai
baldev ab tk smajh gaya tha k manjhi baldev k lye manjhi bhagwan ka avtaar tha jo uske madad ka raha tha

baldev mauqa na gawate hue apne maa k kandhe p haath rakh kar chipak jata hai

devrani:man me) uhhh man me halchal si thi
Naavik:bhaia kabhi bhabi ji k lye gana gate ho k nahi
Baldev:ab sahaj meshus krte hu"nahi abhi tak to nahi "

Navik:to abhi gaayi deo ,mauqa bhi hai dastoor bhi

baldev:pr mujhe. geet yaad nahi koi
Naavik:chalo to fir humare sath gay lo
Baldev:theek hai bhaiya
naavik:O maajhi re
maajhi re
tore bin ee dill na lagi re

Baldev ab duhrata hai or apne maa k aakho me dekh
Baldev:O maajhi re maajhi re
tore bina dill na lagi re

navik:badhiya gaye
Baldev devrani k traf dekhta hai to pata hai wo ghoor rahi hai


or aise ghurte dekh uske doodh me fir kho jata hai baldev or tabhi nadi ka kinara aa jata hai devrani khamoshi se utar kar dusre traf khadi ho jati hai

navik baldev ko awaz deta hai or uske kaan me kuch kehta hai fir baldev use kuch sone k sikke deta hai or devranik paas aa jata hai

tabhi navik apa chappu maarte hu"bhaia agle saal mela lagne tk aapke judwe bache hoge or unke sath tm aaoge"

Baldev or devrani chup chap dheere dheere chal rhe the ...

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Devrani or Baldev nav se utar kar mele k rang birangi roshni ki traf chal ja rahe the or abhi hui ghatna se dono ka dill zoro se dhadak raha tha
Tabhi Baldev ka pair ek chhote se pathhar se takra jata hai or uske muh "aah " nikal jati hai q k chot anguthe pr lagi thi

Devrani:"uhh" karti hai jaise chot baldev ko or dard use hua ho
Devrani:"Baldev dekh kar nahi chal sakte"
Baldev:Dekh kar he to chal raha hu
Devrani:rasta dekh kar chalo mujhe nahi
(or halka sa sharma jati hai)
Baldev:Jab tum jaisi khoobsurat stree mere sath ho to me kahi or kaise dekh sakta hu

Devrani:chup kar badmash
Baldev:wo dekho maa upar chand
Devrani:han to
Baldev:usme bhi daag hai
par tum me nahi
Devrani:hatt ...pagal
Baldev thoda gambhir hote hue
"maa tum mano ya na mano pr sachai chhupti nahi"
devrani apni prasansha sun kar andar he andar khush ho rahi thi pr upar se gussa dikhate hue aage chalne lagti hai baldev k


Baldev uske thirakte gaand dekh wahi ruk jata hai to devrani palat kr use dekh
devrani:chal pagal,ab ruk kr dekhta rahega
(sharmeeli andaz me)
Baldev: Maa me tumhare sundarta me kho gaya tha
Devrani:tum mujhe piche se ghur rahe the na
Baldev:wo to bass..
Devrani:Q me aage se sundar nahi


devrani nakhra kar k sar jhukai or apne doodh uthai hui thi,baldev ne devrani ko dekh
Baldev:tmhara har ang sundar hai
Devrani ab chup kar hum mela me aagaye
dono mele k chahal kadmi dekh khush ho jate hai


Mela me khade har ek ki nazar devrani k bade doodh or chutar pr pad rahi thi wahi kuch door khade launde ne to siti baja di jise sun kar devrani ko andar he andar gussa ata hai
Baldev:chalo hum jhula jhulte hai
Devrani:hum is chakri pr baithenge

waha log bheed lagaye the or alag alag janwar k rup me bane us chakri pr sawar ho kar sb ghum rhe the,baldev or devrani bhi katar me lag gaye or tabhi wahi ladka jo thode der pehle siti maara tha aa kar baldev k piche khada ho gaya ab qatar dheere dheere badhta ja raha tha

Us lakde ne ek dhakka dya jis se baldev k aage khadi devrani baldev se piche se chipak gayi


Baldev ne ek hath se devrani k nabhi par hath rakha dusra hath uske gand pad rakh dya ab baldev ka land devrani k gand pr daba pada tha

achanak is hamle se devrani stabdh thi or apne pet or gand pr baldev ka hath dekh wo kuch soch pati is se pehle he us ladke ne ek or dhakka dya. or is baar baldev ka land khada sidha devrani k chutar k darad me ghusa
Devrani:uhh aaah" aakh band kr li
Baldev:ary o bache zara dhyan se aage mahila hai
Ladka:Chacha wo mahila hai to kya hua qatar me to sbko dhakka lagta hai,sb piche se de rhe hai
Baldev:man me) abhi doodh k dant nahi toote. or aagaye
Ladka:kya kaha aapne
Baldev:yahi k sidha khade raho
Ladka:ary wo bhaisa q itna pagal horha hai
Teri biwi ko me chhua nahi or dhakka koi le maze to tu he le raha hai
is baat ko sun to devrani zameen me gade ja rahi thi or baldev bhi chup ho gaya
Baldev:O kam umar k ladke tmhe maata pita ne sheeshtachar nahi sikhaya
Ladka:Nahi sikahaya (or hasne laga) ye sun kar aaspas k log bhi hasne lage

devrani:chup karo tum mt bolo
Baldev:hmmm

fir baldev devrani se puchta hai "Tum kis janwar pe baithogi ?Gadhe k

"Tm baitho gadhi pe mai to ghode pe baithungi"
Baldev:dekho kahi gir na jao muh k bal
Devrani:me smbhal lungi fir dono jhulne lagte hai jhule par...

Jhula jhul kar bade mushkil se dusri traf badhte hai dono bheed ko cheerte hue jaha pr bioscope wala tha
Baldev:ye bioscope ka kitna sikke loge
Dukanwala:10
Baldev ko paas khade budhe vyakti dikhai dete or wo kehta hai
Admi:Beta tm is bioscope me kya dekhoge
isme sirf chitra hai dekhna hai to andar Nirtya kala dekho ja kar....
 
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Devrani or Baldev nav se utar kar mele k rang birangi roshni ki traf chal ja rahe the or abhi hui ghatna se dono ka dill zoro se dhadak raha tha
Tabhi Baldev ka pair ek chhote se pathhar se takra jata hai or uske muh "aah " nikal jati hai q k chot anguthe pr lagi thi

Devrani:"uhh" karti hai jaise chot baldev ko or dard use hua ho
Devrani:"Baldev dekh kar nahi chal sakte"
Baldev:Dekh kar he to chal raha hu
Devrani:rasta dekh kar chalo mujhe nahi
(or halka sa sharma jati hai)
Baldev:Jab tum jaisi khoobsurat stree mere sath ho to me kahi or kaise dekh sakta hu

Devrani:chup kar badmash
Baldev:wo dekho maa upar chand
Devrani:han to
Baldev:usme bhi daag hai
par tum me nahi
Devrani:hatt ...pagal
Baldev thoda gambhir hote hue
"maa tum mano ya na mano pr sachai chhupti nahi"
devrani apni prasansha sun kar andar he andar khush ho rahi thi pr upar se gussa dikhate hue aage chalne lagti hai baldev k


Baldev uske thirakte gaand dekh wahi ruk jata hai to devrani palat kr use dekh
devrani:chal pagal,ab ruk kr dekhta rahega
(sharmeeli andaz me)
Baldev: Maa me tumhare sundarta me kho gaya tha
Devrani:tum mujhe piche se ghur rahe the na
Baldev:wo to bass..
Devrani:Q me aage se sundar nahi


devrani nakhra kar k sar jhukai or apne doodh uthai hui thi,baldev ne devrani ko dekh
Baldev:tmhara har ang sundar hai
Devrani ab chup kar hum mela me aagaye
dono mele k chahal kadmi dekh khush ho jate hai


Mela me khade har ek ki nazar devrani k bade doodh or chutar pr pad rahi thi wahi kuch door khade launde ne to siti baja di jise sun kar devrani ko andar he andar gussa ata hai
Baldev:chalo hum jhula jhulte hai
Devrani:hum is chakri pr baithenge

waha log bheed lagaye the or alag alag janwar k rup me bane us chakri pr sawar ho kar sb ghum rhe the,baldev or devrani bhi katar me lag gaye or tabhi wahi ladka jo thode der pehle siti maara tha aa kar baldev k piche khada ho gaya ab qatar dheere dheere badhta ja raha tha

Us lakde ne ek dhakka dya jis se baldev k aage khadi devrani baldev se piche se chipak gayi


Baldev ne ek hath se devrani k nabhi par hath rakha dusra hath uske gand pad rakh dya ab baldev ka land devrani k gand pr daba pada tha

achanak is hamle se devrani stabdh thi or apne pet or gand pr baldev ka hath dekh wo kuch soch pati is se pehle he us ladke ne ek or dhakka dya. or is baar baldev ka land khada sidha devrani k chutar k darad me ghusa
Devrani:uhh aaah" aakh band kr li
Baldev:ary o bache zara dhyan se aage mahila hai
Ladka:Chacha wo mahila hai to kya hua qatar me to sbko dhakka lagta hai,sb piche se de rhe hai
Baldev:man me) abhi doodh k dant nahi toote. or aagaye
Ladka:kya kaha aapne
Baldev:yahi k sidha khade raho
Ladka:ary wo bhaisa q itna pagal horha hai
Teri biwi ko me chhua nahi or dhakka koi le maze to tu he le raha hai
is baat ko sun to devrani zameen me gade ja rahi thi or baldev bhi chup ho gaya
Baldev:O kam umar k ladke tmhe maata pita ne sheeshtachar nahi sikhaya
Ladka:Nahi sikahaya (or hasne laga) ye sun kar aaspas k log bhi hasne lage

devrani:chup karo tum mt bolo
Baldev:hmmm

fir baldev devrani se puchta hai "Tum kis janwar pe baithogi ?Gadhe k

"Tm baitho gadhi pe mai to ghode pe baithungi"
Baldev:dekho kahi gir na jao muh k bal
Devrani:me smbhal lungi fir dono jhulne lagte hai jhule par...

Jhula jhul kar bade mushkil se dusri traf badhte hai dono bheed ko cheerte hue jaha pr bioscope wala tha
Baldev:ye bioscope ka kitna sikke loge
Dukanwala:10
Baldev ko paas khade budhe vyakti dikhai dete or wo kehta hai
Admi:Beta tm is bioscope me kya dekhoge
isme sirf chitra hai dekhna hai to andar Nirtya kala dekho ja kar....
Mast.....
 
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Devrani or Baldev nav se utar kar mele k rang birangi roshni ki traf chal ja rahe the or abhi hui ghatna se dono ka dill zoro se dhadak raha tha
Tabhi Baldev ka pair ek chhote se pathhar se takra jata hai or uske muh "aah " nikal jati hai q k chot anguthe pr lagi thi

Devrani:"uhh" karti hai jaise chot baldev ko or dard use hua ho
Devrani:"Baldev dekh kar nahi chal sakte"
Baldev:Dekh kar he to chal raha hu
Devrani:rasta dekh kar chalo mujhe nahi
(or halka sa sharma jati hai)
Baldev:Jab tum jaisi khoobsurat stree mere sath ho to me kahi or kaise dekh sakta hu

Devrani:chup kar badmash
Baldev:wo dekho maa upar chand
Devrani:han to
Baldev:usme bhi daag hai
par tum me nahi
Devrani:hatt ...pagal
Baldev thoda gambhir hote hue
"maa tum mano ya na mano pr sachai chhupti nahi"
devrani apni prasansha sun kar andar he andar khush ho rahi thi pr upar se gussa dikhate hue aage chalne lagti hai baldev k


Baldev uske thirakte gaand dekh wahi ruk jata hai to devrani palat kr use dekh
devrani:chal pagal,ab ruk kr dekhta rahega
(sharmeeli andaz me)
Baldev: Maa me tumhare sundarta me kho gaya tha
Devrani:tum mujhe piche se ghur rahe the na
Baldev:wo to bass..
Devrani:Q me aage se sundar nahi


devrani nakhra kar k sar jhukai or apne doodh uthai hui thi,baldev ne devrani ko dekh
Baldev:tmhara har ang sundar hai
Devrani ab chup kar hum mela me aagaye
dono mele k chahal kadmi dekh khush ho jate hai


Mela me khade har ek ki nazar devrani k bade doodh or chutar pr pad rahi thi wahi kuch door khade launde ne to siti baja di jise sun kar devrani ko andar he andar gussa ata hai
Baldev:chalo hum jhula jhulte hai
Devrani:hum is chakri pr baithenge

waha log bheed lagaye the or alag alag janwar k rup me bane us chakri pr sawar ho kar sb ghum rhe the,baldev or devrani bhi katar me lag gaye or tabhi wahi ladka jo thode der pehle siti maara tha aa kar baldev k piche khada ho gaya ab qatar dheere dheere badhta ja raha tha

Us lakde ne ek dhakka dya jis se baldev k aage khadi devrani baldev se piche se chipak gayi


Baldev ne ek hath se devrani k nabhi par hath rakha dusra hath uske gand pad rakh dya ab baldev ka land devrani k gand pr daba pada tha

achanak is hamle se devrani stabdh thi or apne pet or gand pr baldev ka hath dekh wo kuch soch pati is se pehle he us ladke ne ek or dhakka dya. or is baar baldev ka land khada sidha devrani k chutar k darad me ghusa
Devrani:uhh aaah" aakh band kr li
Baldev:ary o bache zara dhyan se aage mahila hai
Ladka:Chacha wo mahila hai to kya hua qatar me to sbko dhakka lagta hai,sb piche se de rhe hai
Baldev:man me) abhi doodh k dant nahi toote. or aagaye
Ladka:kya kaha aapne
Baldev:yahi k sidha khade raho
Ladka:ary wo bhaisa q itna pagal horha hai
Teri biwi ko me chhua nahi or dhakka koi le maze to tu he le raha hai
is baat ko sun to devrani zameen me gade ja rahi thi or baldev bhi chup ho gaya
Baldev:O kam umar k ladke tmhe maata pita ne sheeshtachar nahi sikhaya
Ladka:Nahi sikahaya (or hasne laga) ye sun kar aaspas k log bhi hasne lage

devrani:chup karo tum mt bolo
Baldev:hmmm

fir baldev devrani se puchta hai "Tum kis janwar pe baithogi ?Gadhe k

"Tm baitho gadhi pe mai to ghode pe baithungi"
Baldev:dekho kahi gir na jao muh k bal
Devrani:me smbhal lungi fir dono jhulne lagte hai jhule par...

Jhula jhul kar bade mushkil se dusri traf badhte hai dono bheed ko cheerte hue jaha pr bioscope wala tha
Baldev:ye bioscope ka kitna sikke loge
Dukanwala:10
Baldev ko paas khade budhe vyakti dikhai dete or wo kehta hai
Admi:Beta tm is bioscope me kya dekhoge
isme sirf chitra hai dekhna hai to andar Nirtya kala dekho ja kar....
Bahut shai bhai...Badi khoobsoorti ke saad kahani aage badh rahi hain...Dekhein nitrya ka kaisa ranga rang karkrayam hota hai aur kya asar karta hain Devrani aur Baldev par...
 
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