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Aidenhunt

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Raja ratan k rajya kuberi me raja rajpal apne sainiko k sath pahuchte hai jahan unka zordad swagat kiya jata hai,kuberi bhut bada rajya tha utna he bada waha ka mahal tha.Ghatrashtra me to sirf ek ghar numa mahal tha or rajdarbar alag se tha pr iske ulat yaha mahal k andar he raj darbar tha or sainik se le kar atithi rahivas bhi andar he tha.raja ratan ki teen patniya thi pehli dono patni apas me behane thi jinke nam rukhmani or sukhmani tha or teesre ka naam eliza tha.rukhmani or sukhmani bhartiya desi nari thi pr eliza ek britisher thi jo raja ratan ko ek raja ne bhet k roop me raja ratan ko dya tha

raat k bhojan k baad dono raja ek hall jaisi jagah pr jaha pr kaleen bichaya gaya tha or baithne k lye gadde rkhe the unpar baith raja rajpal chuski le raha tha sharab ka.
raja rajpal:yaar maza aagya sharab bhut achi hai
Raja ratan:han maze kro bhai
rajpal:yaar mjhe aisa lag raha hu jaise me aasman me ud rha hu
raja ratan:han ye videshi cheez hai mitra
tbhi unka sharab khatam ho jata hai or raja rajpal or mangwane k lye kehta hai,raja ratan taali marta hai samne ek sundar gori aa kr khadi hoti hai


Raja rajpal:ary ye to videshi hai
raja ratan:han ye angrez hai ye meri teesri patni hai
raja ratan eliza ko kehta hai k or sharab le aaye thode der me sharab la kr rkh deti hai fir chali jati hai
Rajpal:yaar ye kitni sundar hai mene aisi ladki kabhi nahi dekhi
Ratan:han wo to hai
rajpal:tmhe yaad hai pichle kai salo se humne kai hazaro stree ko bhoga hai
Ratan:han islye me kehta tha itna zyada ayyashi mat kro ab dekho tmhara uth ta he nahi (or hasta hai)
rajpal:yar aisi bat nahi ab pehle jaisi bat nahi rhi bas
ratan:han to kehna kya chahte ho
rajpal:yaar bura na mano to ek baat kahu
ratan:kaho mitra
rajpal:aaj kai salo baad mera land bhut zor se khada hua hai
or wo bhi tmhari patni eliza ko dekh k
ratan:asmanjash se dekhta hai
rajpal:me sabkuch tmhe dene k lye tayyar hu jo mango wo dunga par mujhe eliza chahiye abhi
ratan:hosh me nahi ho tm rajpal
rajpal:me hosh me hu
ratan:to kya tm apna raajya mjhe de skte ho me kahu to?
rajpal:me tumhara zindagi bhar gulam ban k rah jaunga
raja ratan ek lalachi manushya tha usne apne fayda dekh kr muskurata hua hua
rajpal:kaho ratan
ratan:jao jee lo aaj rat k lye eliza tmhari hui
or fat se tali bajata hai eliza wapas aati hai
or ratan uske kaan me ja kr kuch kehta hai pehle to eliza nahi manti pr kade nirdesh k baad wo tayyar ho jati hai
rajpal:bolo raja ratan tmhe kya chahiye
ratan:abhi apna kam karo tmhare pr ye ahsan udhar raha
rajpal:me bhi wada karta hu k sar kata dunga pr apna wada nahi bhulunga
ye sun ratan singh muskurate hue kaksha k bahar chala jata hai or eliza rajpal singh k paas aa kar apne upar ka kapda khol deti hai


raja ratan uske paas ja kr sidha usse gale lag kr uske gand ko dabane lagta hai or uske gardan ko chumne lagta hai eliza ek hath se rajpal k dhoti k upar se land pakar leti hai raja ab usko dhakelte hue gadde k traf le jata hai tbhi eliza use rokti hai or wo niche baith jati hai or rajpal ka dhoti khol kar uska land sehlane lagti hai or fir"galppppp"kar k pura land nigal jati hai
rajpal:uhmmm eliza ahmmmm
eliza fata fat land chus rhi thi or hath se muth mar rhi thi raja rajpal aakh band kye siski le rha tha ab rajpal eliza ko pakar leta hai or apne goad me le kr baith jata hai or uske laal surkh hoth ko chabane lagta hai or apne hatho se uske antar vastra nikal kar dono hatho se uske doodh ka mardan karne lagta hai


eliza:aaaah nooo
rajpal:eliza
rajpal se ab raha nahi. jata hai or eliza ko apne upar le kr ek zordad dhakka marta hai or eliza ki chut phachh ki awaz se khulti hai
or rajpal dhapadhap pelte ja rha tha
eliza "aaaah naaaa "


kuch dus mint k pelai k baad eliza ko sidha leta kr do teen dhakke laga rajpal apna pani chhor deta hai or hanfne lag jata hai.
us raat eliza raat bhar rajpal k sath beetati hai or rajpal do bar or eliza ki chut ki kutai krta hai

idhar kamla k jate he baldev apna kaksha ka darwaza band kr k patra padhna shuru karta hai

shreeman shersingh
Aap ka patra mila,padh kar atyant prasannata hui.aap or apka dill theek hoga aisa aasha karti hu.me ek streee hu or mjhe apne seema langhna itna aasan nahi lekin jitna prem aap humse prakat kiye use dekh kr mera mann bhi dol gaya hai or aapke dasi ban na chahti hu pr ye sb k lye hume sahi samay ka pratiksha karna hoga,aasha karti hu ap meri baat smjhenge
aapki
devrani
Ye padh kar jaha halka muskuraya wahi bhaybhit bhi hua tha baldev,or ho bhi q na uske premika kisi or k prem ki ore agrasar ho rhi thi wo prem patra ko rakh kr sone ki koshish krta hai pr aakh band krte he use devrani ka chehra nazar ata kabhi devrani hasti to kabhi muskurati to kabhi gusse me baldev ko dekhti baldev k dill o dimag pe sirf devrani chha gayi thi pr

devrani idhar apne kaksha me leti thi ek ek jhini si poshak pehan kr jo wo sone k samay pehanti thi
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wo leti thi or aaj k ghatna ka soch rhi thi kaise baldev uski tareef k pull bandh raha tha or keh rha tha wo shadi nahi karega or hamesha mere lye mere sewa me jeevan bitayega aaj varsho baad aisa lag rha hai k koi meri chinta karta hai kasam se bhut bada dill wala hai baldev.
or shersingh bhi to mere lye mar mitne ko tayar hai agar me shersingh ki baat mani to kya baldev mera samman meri izzat kam to nahi kr dega ya mjhse nafrat to nahi krne lagega pr mere lye dono utne he pyare hai ek aashiq hai or ek ladla beta.ye baat kamla se puchungi fir wo khushi khushi so jati hai.
 

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बढ़िया अपडेट हैं दोस्त
कमला, राजपाल और वैैध सब रासलीला कर रहे है तो कहानी के नायक बलदेव ने क्या पाप कर दिया दिया है जो इस सुख से वंचित हैं
 

jonny khan

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superb updates dear ..!!!!
 
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Bhai abhi aap Devrani, Baldev air Sher Singh ke beech mein bahut pyaar air tadap dikhaoo - maximum 2 or 3 big updates - you can take inspiration from movie Rab me Bana Di Jodi Uske baad Devrani ko jab pata chalein ki Baldev air Sher Singh ek hi sakhs hain to phir duaadaar chudaayi - har Tarah wali - OMG I tnot demanding too much - aap ko Kaisa Sahi laage..., story is going superb ryt now - updates received regularly - hope same flow will continue...
 
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