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Update 4
Baldev singh man me kai bhav lye hue apne maa k kaksha ki traf badh raha tha ,use uske badi maa ka apne maa k khilaf baat sun kr jaise pareshan ho gaya tha or use samajh nahi aarha tha k kya kare.jaise he wo pahuchta hai dekhta hai devrani 56 bhog saja rhi hai apne bete k lye or apne bete ka aabhash pa kr kehti hai
Devrani:aa gaye bete ..bada der kr dya aane me
Baldev:Mata shree aap thakti nahi ho ?
Devrani:aisa q puch rha hai?
Baldev:Q k mjhe pata hai aap ek subah se kaam kr rhi ho,aap vishram q nahi krti..
Devrani:Baldev..Jiska beta itne varsho baad aya hai ,wo kaise thak skti hai?
Baldev.Dasiya hai na yaha..
Or to or log bhi hai ghar me..badi maa bhi hai...
Devrani:wo Maharani hai(man me:ye kya nikal gaya muh se .
Baldev jo pehle se he sb kuch sun k aa rha tha uska dimag kharab ho gaya or kaha
Baldev:Maa,agar badi maa maharani hai to kya aap dasi ho ?
Devrani;baat ko smbhalte hue)ary nahi nahi..beta ,mera matlab tha k niyam anusar badi patni ko he maharani ki upadhi milti hai or aisa har rajya me hai.
(man me:Mjhe maharani kya kabhi rani bhi nahi smjha gaya)
Baldev bhi chehra padhne me der nahi lagaya or man me (Koi baat nahi maa ab tk kaun kya tha mjhe nahi pata par Ab Maharani sirf tm rahogi,tmahre paas wo har kuch hai jo ek maharani k paas hona chahiye)ye soch he raha tha k devrani ne kaha
Devrani:Beta ab khana kha le ..

Dono baith k 56 bhog pakwan ka aanand lene lage
Baldev:Maa aaj aisa lag rha hai varsho baad bhojan kiya hu,kya swadisht bhojan hai
Devrani:sb mere kunwar kanhaiya k lye hai..pet bhar k khana hai tjhe ab..ab kahi nahi jane dungi tjhe
Baldev:Par maa mere kuch mitra gan to videsh jayenge waha maha vidyalay hai
Devrani:Har vidya to aa he gai hai tmko ab or kya seekhna hai
Baldev:Maa log france jate hai or england jate hai ,suna hai waha naye naye avishkar krne ki siksha di jati hai,or wo hum se kai 100 saal aage hai
Devrani:Wo kaise ..
Baldev:jaise waha pr bina chitrakar k kuch yantra se chitra nikalte hai ,bina ghode k sawari ki jati hai or paani me bade bade nav jo koso door tk hazaro logo k le ja skte hai
Devrani;achambhit ho kr) Me to paras tk he dekhi hu dunya bete ..aise aisi dunya bhi hai
Baldev:han unke vesh bhusha bhi alag hai boli chali bhi alag
Jis din me Maharaja ban jaunga us din aapki yatra krwaunga zarur
Devrani:Bholu...bina Maharani k maharaja ban jaoge
Baldev:Ary ha ye to me socha he nahi
Devrani:haste hue ..budhu kahi k
Isi beech dono khana kha lete hai or baldev bhi thaka tha to shubh ratri keh k apne kaksha me chala jata hai or so jata hai idhar devrani bhi thaki thi or so jati hai.

(MAHAL)
Agli subah sb uth jate hai .Baldev sbse pehle uth ta hai or mahal muayna krta hai.use mahal pehle se or sundar or saja hua dikhta hai.Mahal k aage darbar hai jaha par do badi badi singhasan rkhe hui or dono singhasan k agal bagal ek ek chhota aasan tha.dono traf se 5 ,5 aasan the jo mantrio k lye the.Darbar k ek taraf sainik k abhyas k lye jagah or ashtra or shashtra k kaksha the or ek traf atithi gruh or rasoi tha jaha pr bhandara banta tha rajya ka,singhasan k piche se darwaza tha raj mahal ka jaha pr anek sainik din rat pahredari dete the.Baldev mahal k lye raja raj pal ne upar ek manzil banaya niche wo khud ka kaksha or sath he maharani or raja raj pal apne maa ko bhi niche he rkha tha,upar sirf baldev rehta tha.seedhi chadhte he samne darwaza khulta jo ek aalishan kaksha ki ore jata tha beech me palang jo ki kisi bhi smanay palang se 3 guna zyada bada tha,bistar bhi aisi k bacha bhi baithe to dhas jaye itna naram tha.palang k charo traf keemti motiyo se saja hua tha, paas me rakhe aaram kursi or mej ,mej pr rkhe kuch alag kism k jug wahi kone me snaan ghar or shauch jo raja raj pal ne parsio raja k madad se banwaya tha.or kaleen bhi paras se he mangwaya tha jo pure mahal ko alag he roop dete./Mahal)


Baldev apna mahal dekh andar he andar khush ho rha tha fir use kahi koi na dikhne pr wo mahal k mukhya duwar se bahar aaya or senapati ko pucha sb kaha hai
Senapati:yuvraj wo aaj sabha chal rhi h
Baldev:acha thek hai
Senapati:aap bhi tayar ho kr aa jaye
Baldev:han hum aate hai
Baldev jata hai or apne vastra pehanta hai or fir uspr motio k har pehanta hai or darbar ki ore chal deta hai.

Darbar pahuchte he dekhta hai k bari bari se sb log apne baat keh rhe hai or mantri sb ki fariyad ko likh rha tha.jaise he kisi ki yuvraj pr nazar padti hai sb jay jay kar lagane lagte hai.Baldev dekhta hai k ek bade singhasan pr uske pita or dusre bade sighasan pr uske badi maa baithi hai or chhote singhasan pr uski maa baithi hai.jise dekh kr baldev ko ajeeb lagta hai or wo bhi chhote aasan pr apne maa k bagal me ja kr baith jata hai.ghanto tak sabha chalti hai rajya k har vishay pr tark rkha jata hai or sbki duvidha pareshani suni jati.tabhi Maharani shurushti uth kr darbar se jane lagti hai to sb darbari uth khade hote hai or jay jay kar krne lagte hai."maharani shrushti padhar rhi h"),,Devrani jan bujh kr nahi uth ti jis se ye baat chhupai ja ske baldev se pr achanak Maharaja rajpal kehta hai
Rajpal;devrani .aap mahal me jaye vishram kare
Devrani:(na chahte hue bhi)ji
or devrani uth kr jane lagti hai pr is bar koi devrani ki jay jay kar nahi krta bass ek mahal ka pahredar kehta hai "rani devrani padhar rahi hai"
baldev:(man me)yehi pahredar badi maa ko maharani keh k sambodhit krta hai)aakhir ye bhed bhav q?Na unko pita ji k sath sinhasan na jay kar na he koi maharani kehta h.

Raj pal:putra
Baldev:aagya pita shree
Rajpal:kis soch me doobe ho
Baldev:kuch nahi
Rajpal:sutro se khabar mili hai k angrez uttar se bharat k seema ko or laanghne k prayas me hai
(har mantri aascharya chakit hota hai or sath he baldev bhi)
Mantri:To maharaj iska kya upay hai
Rajpal:abhi tak to nahi hai
Mantri:hum to aaj tak is uche parvat or iske charo or ghane van ne hamari raksha kya hai pr angrez k pas to aadhunik yantra hai or shashtra bhi
Rajpal:hum padosi rajyo se baat kar rhe hai dekhte hai kya nishkarsh nikalta hai
mantri :jo hukm
fir uske baad sabha khatm kr di jati hai or har mantri alag alag bane hu mantri mahal me chale jate haj or raja raj pal or baldev kuch sainiko k sath piche rajmahal me aa jate or saink wahi dwar pr pehra dene lagte hai.
 
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