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Ghatrashtra ka sainik marte dam tak apne rashtra k hit me kam karte hue ghatrashtra vasio ko shahzeb k aakaraman karne ki baat keh deta hai or pure ghatrashtra me halchal mach jati hai log baldev ko bhul jate hai senapati logo ko bhagte daudte dekh sab ko Ghatrashtra k sainiko ka saath dene k lye kehta hai

Senapati:budhe or bache ko kripya kar k surakshit sthano par rakhe ,
Maharaj ab is baldev ka kya kare

Rajpal:Pehle hume Shahzeb se nipatna hai or rahi baat baldev ki to me ise shahzeb k sath he apne talwar se khatam kar dunga tum sab jao or mahal k charo ore sainik ko tayyar karo

Senapati:jaisi aapki ichha Maharaj

Senapati:is sainik k balidan vyarth nahi jani chahiye hum sab ko shahzeb ko kisi haal me rokna hai

Sainik apne bhala talwar or teerandaz apne ban or teer k sath mahal k charo ore gherao kar lete hai
Maharani jeevika or shurushti mahal k andar jati jai

Jeevika:bahu mahal ka har darwaza or khidki laga do

Shurushti:ji maa ji

Jeevika:ye sab Devrani k paap ka fal hai jo humare ghatrashtra me aaj aisi museebat aati hai

Kamla:radha tum ja kar peeche ka dwar band kr dyo me khidkiya lagati hu

Jeevika:ye Badshah shahzeb jab dilli per aakaraman kya tha kai varsh pehle to waha k har stree ko inke sainiko ne utha liya tha

Shurushti:Maa ji mujhe bhut darr lag raha hai

Jeevika,darne ki zarurat nahi hum unse yudha karenge or agar kuch aisa hua bahu to hum tehkhane k raste se mahal k bahar nikal jayenge

Shurushti:wo kaha hai

Jeevika:mere kaksha me hai

Shurushti:theek hai par mujhe to uska pata nahi tha

Jeevika:bahu rajpal k pita ne gupt rakha sab hum is raaste se seedha ghatrashtra k seema tak pahuch sakte hai zameen k andar he andar

Shurushti:Bhagwan na kare aisa kuch ho

Kamla or shurushti mahal k har khidki or darwaza band kar deti hai

Bahar ka nazara aisa tha k rajpal or somnath sainiko k sath Shahzeb k aane ki pratiksha kar rahe the or sainik sab tayyar the

somnath:sainiko sab tayyar ?

Sainik:Han hum tayyar hai

Somnath,darne ki zarurat nahi mere bahadur sainiko aaj tak ghatrashtra par koi nahi kabza kar saka ye shahzeb ko bhi khali hath laut kar dill jana hoga

Rajpal:Sainiko hamari maa ghatrashtra per ye videshi na kal kabza kar paye the na aaj kar payenge or shahzeb is baar dilli zinda nahi jayega

Sainik:han shahzeb zinda nahi jayega

Ab shant mahaul tha Baldev ye sab dekh raha rha uske hath pair ab bhi bandhe the

Mahal me kamla devrani k paas jati hai jo rajpal k kaksha me bandhi thi kamla devrani k muh pr bandha kapde ko kholti hai

Kamla:chup karo maharani

Devrani:kya chup karu jab mera premi mere prem me apna jaan de dya faansi per latak gaya mera zinda reh k kya fayda mujhe bhi maar do kamla ..gala ghot do mera

Devrani fafak fafak kar ro padti hai

Kamla k aakho me aasu aajata hai

Kamla:aisa nahi kehte maharani bhagwan bhut bada hai usne tumhari sun li baldev ka faasi tal gaya hai

Devrani ye sunte he aisa mehshus karti hai jaise uske shareer se ruh nikal gayi thi par fir se aagayi ho

Devrani:kya tum sach keh rahi ho kamla

Kamla:han par buri khabar ye hai k Dilli k raja hum par aakaraman kar sakte hai kisi bhi kshan

Devrani:kya ..

kamla:han Maharani or uske sena jitni krurta karti hai wo to janti ho shahzeb khud jo rajya loot ta hai us rajya k ranio ko apne harem me rakh leta hai

Devrani:hume kya karna chahiye kamla

Kamla:me wahi batane aai hu aapko yaha ek rasta hai maharani jeevika k kaksha me jo hume zameen k bhetar se he ghatrashtra k seema tak pahucha degi

Devrani:samajh nahi ata shahzeb k hamle ka me dhanyawad kahu ya ..

Kamla:bass jo hota hai ache k lye hota hai

Devrani:tumne dekha mere baldev ko kaisa hai
Kamla:wo theek hai us par bhut zulm kya maharaj ne.aap dono ko itne bade sansar me kahi ja kar bass jana tha

Devrani:me bhagne walo me se nahi ab mujhe mera haq chahiye or yahi ghatrashtra me chahiye ..mere or baldev ka rishta yahi shuru hua tha kamla hamari yade yaha se judi hai hume kahi or nahi jana


Kamla:kya bachpana hai..khair baad ki baat baad me pehle hume baldev ko chhurana hoga

Devrani:par kaise

Kamla:wo me dekh lungi bass ab aap rona band kar do or sahi samay par yaha se nikal jana baldev k sath

Bahar Sena shahzeb ki sena ki pratiksha me khadi thi or tabhi hawa jo tez chal rahi thi usme dhul udne lage or ghodo ki chalne ki aawaz k sath ghodo ki hihyane ki aawaz aane lagi sab ki nazar saamne jati hai door dilli k sainik ghatrashtra ki ore badh rahe the
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Somnath:wo aagaye hai maharaj

Rajpal:aane do wapas nahi ja paye
Rajpal apna talwar rakh kar teer kaman utha leta hai

Somnath:teerandaaz aage ho jao..Ghudsawar peeche tayyar rehna hai

Jaise jaise Shahzeb ki fauz aage aarahi thi unke tadad dekh kar sainik apas me baat karne lagte hai

Somnath:Chup karo sainiko himmat mat haaro ..yudha sena se nahi himmat se jeeti jati hai or hum unse ginti me kam hai to kya hua hum ek unke 10 k barabar hai..jai bhawani

Sainik:jai bhawani

Somnath aakar rajpal se puchta hai dheere se

Somnath:maharaj kya hume Kuberi se koi madad mil sakti hai abhi?

Rajpal:chinta nahi karo bhale he ratan singh gusse me gaya hai yaha se mujhe vishwas hai wo hamari madad karne k lye zarur sena bhejega

Somnath:to fir hume apna dut bhej dena chahiye

rajpal:humne pehle he apna dut bhej dya hai kuberi

Somnath:wah ye aapne acha kya jab tak hume kuberi se madad nahi mil jati tab tak to hum in shahzeb ki sena ko hum sambhal lenge

Shahzeb ab theek mahal k samne aakar rukta hai

Shahzeb:fauzio ab hum inhe masal k rakh denge sab hamla karne k lye tayyar?

Sainik:hum tayyar hai
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Shahzeb:yalgaar ho

Shahzeb k sainik aawaz karte hue mahal ki ore ghodo ko bahgate hai

Idhar
somnath:Teerandaz aakaraman

teero ki bauchar kar di jati hai jo kai shahzeb k sainiko ko ghode se niche gira rahi thi


somnath:Ghudsawar aage badho teerandaz hath me bhala uthao

Dill k sena samne or mahal k taraf se Ghatrashtra ki sena dono apne ghodo ko tezi se bhaga rahe the or kuch he palo me dono aapas me mil jate hai or shuru ho jata hai maar kaat dono taraf se sainik ek dusre par hamla kar rahe the or maar rahe the
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Shahzeb piche khada dekh raha tha usne bade chaturai se apne aadhi sena ko he pehle bheja tha ladai k lye uski aadhi sena ab bhi peeche thi

Shahzeb:bhaio ab ye aag k golo se mahal k deewal ko chhalli kar do

Shahzeb ki sena aag k golo ko topo me laga kar marna shuru kar dete hai jo sidha rajpal k mahal k bahari deewaro per ja kar gir rahe the

Somnath:ye kya ye shahzeb ne apni fauz puri nahi bheji thi

Baldev ab bhi bandha hua khada tha baldev k sabr ka bandh toot jata hai

Baldev:somnath wo shahzeb hai usko harana aaasan nahi mujhe khol do nahi to tum sab ki neeti k wajah se pure ghatrashtra ko bhugatna padega

Rajpal:somnath ise keh do aj iska antim din hai or apna paapi muh na khole

Somnath:Hume hamara kaam karne do baldev nahi to majburan tumhare muh ko bhi bandhna hoga

Somnath:sainiko shahzeb k sainik peeche bhi hai unko muh tod jawab do gole maro un par

teerandaz apne teer kaman chhor topo me golo me aag laga kar shahzeb ki kheme me marne lagte hai ab aasman me din me raat ka drishya tha .mahal k deewaro per jaise he aag k gole lagte or bahar sainiko k cheekh kar marne ki aawaz sunte ghatrashtra k ghar ghar me sab k shareer kanp uth te

Udhar Shamshera Bhi shahzeb k sena k piche piche Mahal tak aajata hai or mahal k paas aakar apna rasta badal leta hai q k shamshera pehle bhi Ghatrashtra aachuka tha wo gali gali janta tha or kisi bhi trah se wo Ghatrashtra k sainik k rup me ghatrashtra me ghus jata hai shamshera ko itni suni ghatrashtra ki gao or galiya kabhi nahi lagi jitni aaj thi wo mahal k kareeb aakar apne ghode ko mahal k piche bandh deta hai or apne hath me talwar liye jaha par yudha chal rahi thi waha jata hai door se use baldev bandha hua dikhta hai or niche rajpal or somnath apne mantrio k sath yudha ki ranneeti par kaam kar rahe the

Shamshera dekhta hai mahal k samne maidan me so guto ki bhidant ho rahi hai shamshera muskurate hue

Shamshera:Shahzeb to bhari pad raha hai ghatrashtra par dekhte hai mazedar hone wala hai
shahzeb ye keh kar apna talwar utha kar bhagte hue Rajpal or somnath ki ore jata hai
"jai ghatrashtra jai bhawani"

somnath dekhta hai k ye kaun sainik peeche chhut gaya tha
Somnath.. kaun ho or ab ja kar tumhe sujh raha hai hum par aakaraman ho gaya hai

Shamshera samajh jata hai huliye se k yahi senapati hai or wo rajpal hai

Shamshera:senapati ji hum kisan hai par hamare pita ek yodha the jo raja rajpal k pita ka sath jeevan bhar diye hum se raha nahi gaya to hum apne pita ka talwar or poshak pehin aagye ..kucho galat kye kya

Shamshera badi hoshiyari se apne bhasa badal kar somnath or rajpal ko chakma de deta hai

Rajpal:bas ab puri ramkahani na sunao sainiko k sath jud jao

Somnath:suno tum un teerandazo k sath ruko jab hum kahe to ran me jana

Shamshera hath jod kar
"jo aagaya maharaj"
shamshera ki is baat ko baldev bhi dekh raha tha or shamshera sena ki ore jate hue baldev ko dekhta hai or baldev ko dekh aakh maar deta hai

Baldev:man me)bahurupiya Shamshera
or uske chehre per ek muskan aajati hai

Yudhha shuru tha or shahzeb ki sena ghatrashtra ki sena par bhari pad rahi thi ab dopahar ho gaya tha

Somnath:maharaj ab hamare sainik ran me bhut kam hai ab hume jana hoga

Somnath:Jitne sainik hai kaan khol kar sun lo hum mar jayenge lekin shahzeb ko kabhi ghatrashtra pr kabza nahi karne denge

Rajpal or somnath baaki sainiko ko tayyar kar ghodo pe sawar ho kar ran bhumi me jane lagte hai

Somnath:hum shahzeb ki sainiko k maut k ghat utar denge

sab sainik rajpal or somnath k peeche jane lagte hai or shamshera apne ghode ko rajpal ki sena k sath judta hai or jab dekhta hai rajpal or somnath yudha shuru kar diye apne ghode ko chhor daud kar baldev ki ore aaata hai
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rajpal or somnath apne talwar kala ka acha pradarshan karte hai or shahzeb k sena me hadkamp mach jati hai

Shahzeb:peeche mat hato bhaio

shahzeb ki sena apne badshah ki baat sun kar dat kar samna karne lagte hai

shahzeb ab aage aakar apne aakhiri daste k sath rajpal or somnath k sainiko k sath ladne lagte hai

Kuch der me he ghatrashtra ki sena bhut kam ho jati or wo bhagne lagti hai or shahzeb ki sena unko khadedte hue mahal ki ore badhne lagte hai

saiinik:bhago hum sab maare jayenge

Rajpal:bhago mat sainiko apni aakhiri saans tak lado

somnath:maharaj ab hamara jeetna mushkil hai aap tehkhane k raste se raj pariwar ko bacha lijiye me insabko rokta hu

Somnath or rajpal mahal k aage khade ho kar shahzeb k sena par bhari pad rahe rhe

somnath:maharaj aap andar jaaye

rajpal ki nazar tabhi samne padti hai or use baldev nahi dikhta hai

Rajpal:ye baldev kaha gayab ho gaya
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Shamshera fauz ko chhor aakar baldev k paas ata hai or uske hath ki rassi ko kaat kar use aazad karta hai
Baldev,dhanyawad bhai shamshera
Shamshera:tum mere chhote bhai ho chalo ab hume nikalna hoga yahi sahi samay hai Shahzeb k fauz is taraf aarahi hai
Baldev:tum ja kar ghoda tayyar karo me maa ko le kar aaata hu )

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somnath:aap apni jaan bachaye maharaj

rajpal ghode se utar kar bhaag kar mahal
me ghusta hai par tab tak shahzeb bhi mahal tak pahuch jata hai or somnath ko charo ore se gher leta hai

Shahzeb apne sainiko k sath mahal me ghus jata hai
Somnath apne aap ko ghira pa kar ghode se kood jata hai or mahal ki ore bhagta hai kuch sainik uske peeche bhagte hai somnath peeche mud kar baith kar unke pair par talwar marta hai or mahal me ghusta hai uske peeche shahzen ki sainik bhi ghus jate hai

Baldev mahal me aakar apne maa ko idhar se udhar har kaksha me dekh raha tha tabhi uske kaan me hungama hota hai or wo samajh jata hai k mahal me shahzeb ne dhaba bol dya hai or wo or shiddat se apne maa ko har kaksha me dhundta hai

Idhar kamla or radha jeevika sath uske kaksha me thi or unke sath vaidh ji bhi the

Kamla:Maharani jeevika aap chale jaye sab mahal me aaagaye hai

Jeevika:tum sab bhi chalo mere beta rajpal kaha hai use bhi le chalo me akela jeevit reh k kya karungi

Kamla:aap baat maniye aap jaye ek kam kijye Vaidh ji aap le jaye inko agar wo sab is kaksha me aagaye to koi bach k nikal nahi paayega

Jeevika:shurushti kaha hai use laao

Jeevika ye keh kar tehkhane k seedhio se utarne lagti hai apni vaishaki le kar or uska sath dete hue vaidh ji bhi utarne lagte hai doono niche pahuch kar gufa k raste par chalne lagte hai

Kamla:maharani shurushti kaha ho aap
shurushti apne kaksha me he thi jaise he shahzeb k sainik mahal me ghuse wo apne kaksha se nikalne he wali thi k shahzeb k sainik us taraf aane lage or na chahte hue bhi wo ruk kar apna kaksha ka darwaza band kar leti hai

Kamla jeevika k kaksha me shurushti ka intezar kar rahi thi q k use devrani ko bhi bachana tha

kamla jeevika jis raste se gai thi usko chhupa deti hai carpet se or khud devrani k ko bachane k lye nikal padti hai

Mahal k beecho beech Shahzeb or rajpal lad rahe the or wahi uske sainik somnath se lad rahe the

Kamla bahar nikalti hai to dekhti hai baldev use dikhta hai

Baldev:kamla maa kaha hai

kamla baldev ko dekh khush ho jati hai

Kamla:wo rajpal k kaksha me hai

Dono bhag kar rajpal k kaksha me aate hai jise shahzeb k sainik bhi dekh lete hai unke peeche wo bhi daudne lagte hai

"pakdo unhe koi bach nahi paaye"

"kamla jaldi bhago"

Dono aate hai or devrani ko bandha dekh baldev ka khun khaul jata hai

Devrani aahat sun kar aakhe upar karti hai uske aaakho k samne baldev tha

Devrani man me:Bhagwan dhanywad me iske badle me charo dham yatra karungi mere baldev ki jaan bachanne k lye dhanyawad

Baldev:maaa

Baldev or kamla jhat se devrani k rassi ko kholte hai

Devrani:baldev tum theek to ho na

Baldev devrani ko gale se laga leta hai

Kamla ja kar kaksha ka darwaza laga deti hai
Kamla:abhi sahi samay nahi hai tum dono niklo yaha se

Baldev:chalo devrani

Devrani:chalo raja

Darwaze per ab shahzeb k sainik aajate hai or darwaza peetne lagte hai

kamla:tum dono khidki se chale jao

Devrani:par tum

Kamla:meri chinta mat karo tum log jao

Baldev:dhanywad kamla fir milenge
kamla k aakho me aasu aajate hai

Kamla:kamla itne jaldi nahi marne wali tum dono k bache ko dekh k he maregi or kamla k aakho se aasu chhalak jate hai baldev devrani ko utha kar khidki per chadha deta hai or bari bari se dono mahal k dusri ore kood jate hai

tabhi kamla ko zor ka dhakka lagta hai or darwaza toot jata hai or sainik andar aajate hai

ek sainik aakr kamla ko pakad kar ek thappar marta hai
"haramzadi kaha gaye wo log"
Kamla ko thappar itna zor se lagta hai k wo sidha door ja kar girti hai

Baldev devrani ka hath pakde bhag raha tha
tabhi in ke dono taraf se sainik aajate hai baldev thoda rukta hai or apne kaman k teero se bari bari se dono sainik ko maar girata hai
or fir devrani ka hath pakad kar bhagne lagta hai

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devrani muskura kar baldev ko dekhti hai
Idhar rajpal k hath se talwar chhut jati hai or somnath bhi apne hath khade kar deta hai

Shahzeb:pakad lo inhe..

Shahzeb bhag kar har kaksha ki talashi lene lagta hai
Shahzeb apne hath me talwar liye jaise he maharani shurushti k kaksha par dhakka deta hai darwaza band pata hai

shahzeb ek zordar dhakka maarta hai or 6 fitt k upar or janwar jaisi taqat rakhne wala shahzeb darwaza ko tod gira deta hai or ab sirf parda he laga tha darwaze per

Shahzeb apni talwar aage badhata hai use samne maharani shurushti dikhti hai jiske hath me talwar tha

shahzeb:dekh kar to lagta hai k yaha ki mallika ho par talwar aapne sahi se pakda nahi hai

Shurushti ek kadam peeche hote hue

Shurushti:tumne sahi samjha Shahzeb hume talwar pakadna bhi aata hai or sar katna bhi

Shahzeb:to aap janti hai hume

Shurushti:tujhe jaise neech ko sab janti hai kutte

Shahzeb gaali sun kar gusse me ata hai fir shurushti ko upar se niche tak dekhta hai

Shahzeb:kad k sath aapna zehan bhi chhota hai Maharani aapko ek badshah se baat karne nahi aati

shurushti aage badh kar talwar chalati hai

Shahzeb:haha umar dhal gayi lekin ab bhi ladaku ho maharani
or shahzeb aage badh kar ek zor ka prahar karta hai jis se Shurushti k hath ki talwar gir jati hai


Shahzeb apna talwar aage badha kar shurushti k gardan par rakh
"cheez to badi mast ho purani sharab ho tum "

Shahzeb ek hath se shurushti k kamar par hath rakh kar sahlata hai or apne talwar fek kar shurushti ko daboch kar baho me le leta hai

"aah meri raani teri jaisi maal ko chod kar maza aajayega aaj"

"chhor de mujhe shahzeb anjam acha nahi hoga"

Shahzeb aage badh kar shurushti k hoth ko apne hoth me bhar leta hai or chusne lagta hai

Idhar baldev or devrani mahal se bhagne me kamyab ho jate hai or shamshera apne sath ek or ghoda liye dono ka intezar kar rha tha

"jaldi is ghode per baith mere piche aajao"
ye keh kar shamshera apne ghodo ko bhagata hai
Baldev devrani ko ghode per bithata hai fir khud kood kar baith jata hai or shamshera k piche jane lagta hai

Dono taraf se shamshera k piche sainik the shahzeb k
shamshera apne dono hatho me talwar liye sab ko kat raha rha or baldev bhi apne hath me talwar liye uske paas jo sainik hamla karne aaraha tha use marte jata hai

Kuch door yu he chalte hue ab Shamshera or baldev k piche ab koi nahi tha
baldev peeche mud kar dekhta hai

Baldev:shamshera ab hamara peecha koi nahi kar raha

Shamshera:chalte raho baldev ye shahzeb harami hai kahi se bhi tapak sakta hai

shamshera baldev devrani hawa me baat karte hue ghatrashtra ki seema par kar rahe the

To be continued..
 
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