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Aidenhunt

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Superb update. Bhai kya khahte Ho jo esse ideas tumhare dimag me aate hai?
Bhai bas readers ka support rehta hai to unke khushi k lye dimag thoda bhut ideas de deta hai
Thanks for supporting :)
 
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firefox420

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Aidenhunt ji aapne to apne naam ki tarah hi story mein situation khadi kar di hai .. Aid en Hunt :hmm:

pehle to Hunt karwaya dono pyaar karne walo ko .. phir dono ko Aid (madad) dilwa rahe ho .. par kya un tak madad pahuch paayegi .. aur ek baat samajh nahi aayi .. ki Baldev aur Devraani ko bandi banane wali khabar paras mein Devraj aur Hooriya tak kaise pahuchi .. wo bhi itni jaldi ...

ek baar to maine socha ki Jeevika kuch madad karegi in dono ki .. magar wo to chup laga gayi .. ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai ...
 

Aidenhunt

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Aidenhunt ji aapne to apne naam ki tarah hi story mein situation khadi kar di hai .. Aid en Hunt :hmm:

pehle to Hunt karwaya dono pyaar karne walo ko .. phir dono ko Aid (madad) dilwa rahe ho .. par kya un tak madad pahuch paayegi .. aur ek baat samajh nahi aayi .. ki Baldev aur Devraani ko bandi banane wali khabar paras mein Devraj aur Hooriya tak kaise pahuchi .. wo bhi itni jaldi ...

ek baar to maine socha ki Jeevika kuch madad karegi in dono ki .. magar wo to chup laga gayi .. ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai ...
Bhai qaid ki khabar nahi hui..
Shamshera ne dekha kuch log kisi ka peecha kar rahe the or wo aa kar apne maa hooriya ko bataya or hooriya jo devrani or baldev ki haqeeqat janti thi or devrani or uske bhai k vartalap k samay bhi maujud thi jab wo madad ki guhar karne aayi thi

Hooriya ko samajhte der nahi lagi ho na ho wo log Devrani or baldev the jiska peecha kya ja raha tha or waise bhi baldev or devrani madad k lye aaye the islye paras se madad ja raha hai par iske peeche Sultan apna fayda juda hai uske apne chahat kuberi ko lootne ka..
or devraj ki apni dushmani hai Badahah shahzeb se islye wo sultan ka sath de raha hai wo apne behan se naraz hai par fir bhi..

Thanks for your review bro
 

Aidenhunt

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Update 82


Ghatrashtra


Andhera dheere dheere chhat raha tha or ghatrashtra k dharti par pehli baar kisi ka aakaraman hone wala tha jis dharti per aaj tak koi nahi pahuch paya or Ghatrashtra jo shanti ka prateek tha wo aaj sankat me tha

Badshah shahzeb apne sainiko k sath pahad per chadhai ki or aadhi raat he wo pahad k choti par pahuch gaya tha or shahzeb ne badi chaturai se apne 25000 sainiko me se 15000 sainik ko apne mantri k sath Kuberi rawana kar deta hai
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Abhi puri trah se andhera chhata nahi tha or sab ghatrashtra k seeme me pravesh kar chuke the

Shahzeb:Thahar jao sab yaha.hum ab ghatrashtra k seema me hai yaha se hume sujh bujh se aage badhna hai,aaj sham tak hum is rajpal ko sabak sikha kar Kuberi hamare laskar jo kuberi par fateh kar li hogi waha ja kar kuberi ko lootenge..sab tayyar?

Sainik:hum tayyar hai jahapanah

Tabhi sabka dhyan ek ped ki ore jata hai jiski dali hil rahi thi jaise shahzeb dekhta hai uspe se ek sainik kood kar bhag kar ghode par biath jata hai

Shahzeb:teer se chhalli kar do wo Ghatrashtra ka jasoos hai

Teerandaz apne teer ki bauchhar kardete hai or wo ghudsawar ko kai teer uske peeth par lagte hai par wo rukta nahi or mahal ki ore jate rehta hai


Shahzeb:Chalo ye ja kar khabar pahuchayega raja rajpal ko k hum aagaye hai hahahahaha


Ye sab pahad k choti par pahuch chuke Shamshera or sultan k sath devraj bhi sun rahe the Badshah shahzeb is baat se anjan tha k theek uske peeche Sultan meer wahid Paras se sena liye khade hai

Shamshera aahista se

Shamshera:Ishhhh Koi aawaz nahi karega sab apne ghodo ko peeche le chalo bina aawaz kya hamare dushman hamare niche hai

shahzeb niche khada apne sainiko ko batata hai k ghatrashtra or kuberi ko jeetna uske lye kitna aham hai or thodi der me sab tayyar ho jate hai Ghatrashtra per hamla karne k lye

Shahzeb:Fateh hamari hai
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Sainik:fateh hamari hai

Shahzeb apne 10,000 sainiko ko le kar ghatrashtra k mahal ki ore apne sainiko k sath jane lagta hai


Idhar apne sena ko roke sultan meer wahid khade the

Sultan:humse bhul ho gayi Devraj

Devraj:kya bhul sultan hum to samay par pahuch gaye hai or hum jab chahe aakaraman kar sakte hai

Sultan,devraj ji shayad aapne Shahzeb ki fauz ko nahi dekha hai hume khabar thi k wo 25000 fauz le kar aaraha hai par ye uska aadha bhi nahi tha

Devraj:aapne sahi kaha sultan ye baat pr mera dhyan nahi gaya
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Sultan,devraj ji ye baat saaf hai k Badshah shahzeb ne apni aadhi se zyada fauz Kuberi bhej dya hai lootne k lye

Devraj:kya

Sultan:han

shamshera:par abba huzur aise me to hum kuberi ka khazana kho denge or wo loot k dilli le gaye honge jab tak hum yaha ka kam kar k kuberi pahuchenge

Sultan:Han beta

Devraj:ghabraye nahi sultan ab hume do fauz se nahi char fauz se ek sath samay ladna hoga

Sultan:par kaise devraj ji

Devraj:sainikko ab dheere dheere niche utaro ..Sultan ji Hum bhi apne aadhe sainik kuberi bhej denge jis se k kuberi rajya ko wo loot k bhag na sake
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Sultan:par wo to nikal gaye hai ab pata nahi kaha tak pahuche hai shahzeb k fauz

Devraj:sultan hum unke fauz k muqable do gune zyada hai agar wo hum se pehle loot le fir bhi hum unhe kuberi se bahar jane nahi denge

Sultan:par baldev or devrani ka kuch ata pata nahi hai k wo kaha hai..Hooriya ne kaha tha k shamshera ne dekha tha peecha karte hue unka

Shamshera:main dekha to tha kuch logo ko ek ghode ka peecha karte hue par me dekh nahi paya kaun the ,kya wo baldev tha?


Sultan:han Baldev or behan devrani aai thi

Shamshera:kya? par wo chale q gaye jab aaye the to

Devraj:chhoro yuvraj abhi hume kya karna hai ye sochte hai
devraj apne behan or bhanje ka sun kar jhinjhila jata hai

Devraj:hum me se kisi na kisi ko sena k sath kuberi jana hoga

Shamshera:me to ye kahunga abba huzur k aap raja devraj k sath kuberi chale jaye q k kuberi lootna hamare liye zyada zaruri hai

Sultan:par shahzade aap akele kaise samna karenge shahzeb ka wo jung jeetne k lye kisi bhi hadd tak ja sakta hai

Shamshera:aap bharosha rakhe fateh hamari hogi

Devraj:theek kah rahe ho yuvraj sultan ko hum akela na to ghatrashtra rakh sakte hai na waha bhej sakte hai

Sultan:han devraj aaj kal tabyat nasaz rahti hai or kabhi kabhi bhulne bhi laga hu uske alawa aaj bhi talwar me dhar wahi hai hamare

Devraj:ji aap ab bhi 100 k barabar hai sultan par hum koi jokhim nahi le sakte ,aap hamare sath kuberi chaliye

Shamshera:aap log jaye or ye jung mujh per chhor dijiye hum sambhal lenge is dilli k shahzeb ko

Devraj:sainiko q k badshah shahzeb apne sainik ko Kuberi bhej dya hai islye hum aadhe sainik ko yahi rakhenge or aadhe mere or sultan k sath kuberi jayenge


Kuch der me he aadhe sainik bant jate hai or sab ab tak pahad se niche aachuke the

Devraj:yaha ka kaman shahzade shamshera sambhalenge ,ghabrana nahi Shahzeb is baar bach k nahi jana chahiye

Shamshera:devraj ji aapka dushman hamara dushman hai aap fikr na kare Badshah shahzeb is baar mere hatho bachega nahi

Devraj:theek hai yuvraj aap k bharose me apna shatru chhor raha hu

Sultan or devraj 25000 fauz le kar kuberi ki ore chal dete hai or shamshera apne 25000 fauz k sath

Shamshera:sathio abhi hum hamla nahi karenge

sainik 1:Q shahzade hume inke peeche he ja kar inhe sabak sikhana tha

Shamshera:ab ye ja rahe hai ghatrashta k sainiko se ladenge or jaise he ye Shahzeb ghatrashtra apna jhanda lahrayega hum aakaraman kar denge .is se fayda ye hoga k hum Sirf Dilli se aaye fauz se ladenge or ghatrashtra se hume nahi ladna hoga..islye thoda aaram kar lo

Sainik2:par shahzade sultan ne to kuch or kaha tha

Shamshera:uff ab aaram karne kah raha hai badshah to bhi manzoor nahi..sab apne ghodo se utar kar baith jao or khao peeo aaram karo

sab sainik hasne lagte hai or apne ghode se utar kar baith jate hai koi let jata hai

Shamshera bhi paas k ek pathhar par ja kar baith jata hai or sochne lagta hai

Shamshera:man me)Agar ammi theek thi to ye log kaun the jo inko pakadna chahte the or devraj kyu apne behan k sasural par hamla karne k lye humare sath nahi aya or na he kaha k unke pariwar ko nuksan na ho..or mere baldev kehne par wo baat palat rahe the ..iska matlab ya to wo log rajya me nahi hai ya to unke khilaf ho gaye hai devraj ji

Ye sab sochte hue shamshera jhat se uth ta hai

Shamshera:chalo ek baar fir se jasusi ki jaye ghatrashtra ki


Shamshera:ae idhar aao

shamshera apna mukut utarta hai

"suno mujhe pagdi bandhne me madad karo"

Sainik:par kyu shahzade aap jung me hai pagdi se hifazat nahi ho payegi

shamshera:bade bhole ho ya mujhe samajhte ho..me islye uatara hu taqe mujhe koi pehchan nahi paye me Ghatrashtra ho kar aata hu,jayza le kar

Sainik:par apka akela jana khatre se khali nahi shahzade ye jasusi ka waqt nahi hai aap jung e maidan me hai

Shamshera:shamshera ko talwar chhu le aisa ho nahi sakta hai
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shamshera apna ghode per baith

shamshera:mere aane tak koi hilna nahi bhale se peeche ho jana par aage nahi

sainik muh dekhte rehte hai or Shamshera ghoda k sath hawa se baate karne lag jata hai


Surya ki pehli kiran khil rahi thi or raat bhar gamheen mahaul k baad subah bhi shant tha ,pura raat koi so nahi saka

Subah raja rajpal mahal se bahar ata hai dekhta hai sainik fansi ki tayyari kar rahe the
kuch der me pura ghatrashtra dheere dheere fansi dene wale sthan par ikatha ho jata hai

Senapati:Sainiko jao baldev ko le aao

Sainik ja kar baldev ko le aate hai or faasi k takht par khada kar k bandh dete hai

mahal se jeevika or shurushti aajati hai sath he sath raat bhar kamla jo vaidh ji k yaha jaag rahi thi wo bhi rote hue aati

pure samaj k samne se baldev ko fansi dene ki tayyari chalu thi or sab k aakho me aasu the ghatrashtra ka bhavishya jo tha aaj wo hamesha k lye khatam hone wala tha
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andar devrani jo rassi se bandhi thi apna haal ro ro kar kharab kar li thi raat bhar me or apne aakhe band kye raat bhar bhagwan se prathna kar rahi thi

Devrani:man me)bhagwan agar aaj mere baldev ko kuch ho gaya to mera tujh se vishwas uth jayega or tera naam apne jeevan me kabhi nahi lungi ,bhagwan mere baldev ko bacha le bhale tu meri bali le le

Rajpal k dono aakho ki laali bata rahi rhi thi k wo aaj apne putra ko fansi par chadhane k lye aatur tha

Senapati:maharaj ab surya uday hone wala hai ..aapki aagya ho to faansi di jaye

Rajpal:ha..
jaise he kehta hai log hahakar macha dete hai or logo ki shor gul me ek ghode k aane ki aahat aati hai or wo ghode per se ek sainik girta hai jiske pure badan per teer lage the

sainik:maharaj ..

Senapati or rajpal daud kar jate hai sainik k paas

Senapati:bolo kaun kya tumhare sath aisa

Sainik:maharaj..wo Dill ka shahzeb Ghatrashtra me ghus aya hai or kabhi bhi hamla kar sakta hai
Ye keh kar sainik apna dam tod deta hai

Rajpal:senapati sainiko ko ektatrit karo ghatrashtra khatre me hai

Senapati:sainiko .. Ghatraashtra me hamare shatru dilli k badshah shazeb kabhi bhi hamla kar sakte hai ..ghatrashtra k logo aap sab se anurodh hai k aap sab hamara sahyog de..

To be continued
 
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