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Subah sawere apne sath aisi harkat kiye jane se devrani udas ho jati hai or bhag kar apna darwaza band kar bistar par let kar rone lagti hai

Devrani:man me)us tuchha ratan singh ki himmat kaise hui mujhe chhune ki me baldev ko kahungi ..nahi nahi use pata chal gaya to wo mahabharat khada kar dega

Kuch soch kar devrani uth ti hai or apne pushtako me apne bete dwara likhe gaye prem patra dhundti hai par use kuch nahi milta hai

Devrani k mathe pe paseene k bund aajate hai

"hey bhagwan ye patra kaha chale gaye yahi to the uff "

Devrani apne mez par rakhe har saman ko fekne lagti hai pure kaksha ka kona kona dekhti hai par use prem patra nahi milta hai

Devrani mane me:kahi ye ratan singh to nahi jo patra dekh lya ho islye mujhe bhogne ki prayas kar raha hai ..hay me kya karu ab kisiko bhi mila ho par wo to mere or baldev k faansi ka karan ho sakta hai meri he galati ka parinam hai me itni laparwahi se kaise rakh sakti hu

Pasine pasine hue devrani thak har k apne nam aakhe liye bistar par let jati hai use pata he nahi chalta or tezi se samay nikal jata hai or ab tak sab so kar uth gaye the or badri or shyam jane ki tayyari kar k nikalne he wale the par unko yaad aaya k wo devrani mausi se nahi mile

Rajpal:ary kya hua ruk q gaye bacho

Badri:maharaj wo mausi se nahi mila

Kamla:wo to so rahi hai abhi tak

Baldev:aisa karo chalo andar he ja kar mil lo

Badri or shyam devrani k kaksha me aate hai

Badri or shyam khade hote hai baldev devrani jise aakh lag gai thi uske bagal me palang par baith

Baldev:devrani aji uth bhi jaao kab tak soti rahogi

Devrani jhat se uth ti hai or samne baldev ko dekhti hai or door badri or shyam ko khade dekh sharma jati hai

Badri:kya hua bhabi maa aap ki tabyat theek nahi lag rahi

Devrani:nahi devar ji bass u he aakh lag gayi thi vyayam karne k bad

Badri:hum log ja rahe hai aashirwad dijiye

badri or shyam dono pair chhute hai

devrani dono k sar par hath rakh kar aashirwad deti hai

Baldev:ab to bhabi kahe jane se chidh nahi rahi ho devrani aisa kya seekha dya apne bhabi ko badri

Badri:wo hum apko nahi batayenge baldev bhaiya wo hamare devar or bhabi ki baat hai

Baldev:to baat yaha tak pahuch chuki hai

Badri or shyam muskurate hue vida le kar bahar nikalte hai or apne ghodo par baith

Baldev:apna khyal rakhna mitro

shyam:tum bhi or unka bhi

baldev baat samajh kar muskura deta hai dono ghodo ko dauda kar thodi der me he aakho se ojhal ho jate hai


Dupahar k bhojan k baad raja rata or raja rajpal madeera peene baith te hai


Ratan:rajpal aaj mujhe koi cheez pasand aagai ghatrashtra ki

rajpal:kaho kya pasand hai abhi wo aapke kadmo me hoga raja ratan singh

Ratan:bhai dekho mujhe ek mahila pasand aagayi hai jise mujhe bhogna hai or tumhe tumhara vachan yaad hai na jab tumne meri patni k sath apni raat rangeen ki thi

rajpal:ratan ji aise kaise hum bhul sakte hai jo maza mujhe tumhare patni eliza ne dya tha

Ratan:to samjho tumhe apna vachan pura karne ka samay aagaya hai

Rajpal:ary aap kaho pure ghatrashtra ki kanyaye tumhare baho me hogi

Ratan:mujhe pure ghatrashtra ki nahi chahiye par ye mahal ki..

rajpal ab thoda bhaybhit ho jata hai

Rajpal:ma mahal ki matlab samjha nahi

Ratan:matlab dekho seedha hai raja rajpal mujhe tumhari chhoti patni ka ubhra hua shareer pasand agaya hai

rajpal ka muh khula ka khula rah jata hai

Rajpal:matlab devrani

ratan:tum sahi samjhe Rani devrani ko bhogna hai mujhe or mere khyal se tumhe koi aapatti nahi honi chahiye

Rajpal:par raja ratan ji

ratan singh ab gusse se laal ho jata hai

Ratan:dikha di na apni awqat tum singh ho or apna vachan bhul gaye jab meri patni ko raat bhar chudai kiya tab to sharam nahi aai or ab apni patni dene me jibha halak me atak gayi

Raja rajpal is baat ko sahi samjhte hu

Rajpal:maharaj mai to koshish kar sakta hu par devrani nahi mani to..

Ratan:mujhe kuch nahi pata tumhe apna vachan pura karna hai tum kaise karoge tum samjho

Rajpal:theek hai me koshish karunga

ratan:dekho agar mujhe devrani nahi milti to me kal k kal Ghatrashtra per hamla kar apna rajya bana lunga or tumhara kacha chitha tumhare rajya k samne rakh dunga jis se tumhara pratishtha or tumhara rajya dono jayega hath se or to or devrani ko utha k le jane me mujhe samay nahi lagega

Rajpal:nahi aisa kuch mat karna maharaj

Ratan:tum mere shakti se parichit ho islye mujhe kuch bhi aisa karne par majbur na karo jiska pachtawa mujhe bhi ho or tumhe bhi

Rajpal:nahi aapko mil jayegi devrani par mera rajya mera he rahe

Ratan:chatur ho apni patni de kar satta me bane reh sakte ho tum

Rajpal or ratan singh fir madeera pee rahe the

Idhar devrani apne kaksha me baith

devrani:man me) ab ye patra jisne bhi churaya hai wo hamare jaan k dushman honge

devrani:kamla o kamla

kamla bhaag kar aati hai

Devrani use pura baat batati hai

kamla:maharani me to kisi ko nahi dekhi in dino yaha aate hue or me kya karungi prem patra apne paas rakh kar

Devrani:kamla mujhe samajh nahi aaraha kya karu baldev ko bulao

kamla turant ja kar baldev ko sath le kar aati hai

Baldev:maa kya hua itni ghabarahat q

Devrani:man me) mere raja kaise batau k mere ijjat par hath dalne ki koshish kya ratan singh ne ,abhi prem patra ki guthi to suljhe museebat ek sath he aani thi

Baldev:kaho maa kya soch rahi ho

Devrani:wo tumhare likhe hue prem patra sab gayab hai

Baldev:kyaa
baldev achmbhit ho kar kehta hai

Devrani:mujhe bhut dar lag raha hai baldev ab kya hoga

Kamla:Mahrani mera shaq to Maharani shurushti per hai

Devrani rote hue aakar baldev k gale lag jati hai

Baldev:sanyam rakho maa hum darenge to kuch nahi hoga

kamla:himmat se kam lo tum dono ki ye agni pariksha ho sakti hai ise paar kar lo jeevan sanwar jayega

devrani:par kaise wo shurushti k hath agar patra lag gaya to wo kabhi bhi hume faansi k fande tak pahucha degi or hum kuch nahi kar payenge

Baldev:kamla tum maa ko sambhalo me sochta hu kuch

Baldev bahar aakar udyan me idhar se udhar tahalne lagta hai

Baldev man me:kya karu ab aise me to hum dono mare jayenge hamare paas koi raasta he nahi hai apne aap ko sahi sabit karne ka

tabhi rajpal baldev ko dekh

Rajpal:ary putra kya hua q itne chintit ho

Baldev muskura kar

baldev:nahi pita ji kuch nahi bass badri or shyam chale gaye to unki yaad aarahi hai

Rajpal:oh or tumhari maa kaha hai

baldev apni aakhe badi kar k

Baldev:wo kaksha me he thi

rajpal:man me)agar ye baat baldev ko pata chale k me uski maa ko kisi or k sath sone k lye manane ja raha hu to wo kya sochega mere baare me

aise he sham ho jati hai or ghatrashtra k mahal me har ore diya k roshni jagmaga rahi thi

Rajpal devrani k kaksha ki ore ja kar

"devrani kya aap andar ho"

Devrani:aayiye maharaj

Rajpal andar ata hai

Rajpal:kya hua devrani jab se aayi ap andar he ho

Devrani:man me)kahi maharaj tak patra pahuch to nahi gaya jo yha aaye

or devrani kanpne lagti hai

Rajpal kuch der idhar udhar ki bate karne k baad

Rajpal:Devrani ek mahtavpurna baat karni thi aapse

Devrani:kahiye maharaj

devrani kaanp rahi thi kahi maharaj patra ko lekar na unse sawal puche

Rajpal bhi kanp raha tha k ratan singh k sath raat beetane wali baat par devrani pata nahi kya pratikirya degi

Rajpal:baat ye hai raja ratan singh bhut neech vyakti hai

Devrani:han kya hua maharaj

Rajpal apne aakho me jhuti aasu la kar masumiyat se

rajpal:wo kehta hai k hamare rajya par aakaraman kar dega or hum sabko bandi bana lega agar uski baat nahi maani

Devrani:kaun si baat maharaj

Rajpal:mujhe to bhut lajja aarahi hai ye keh kar par me tumse anurodh karna chahunga devrani tum he hum sab k jaan ko bacha sakti ho

Devrani:par kaise maharaj

Rajpal apna sar jhuka kar

rajpal:Devrani tumhe ratan singh pasand karta hai use ek raat guzarna hai tumhare sath

Ye sunte he devrani k aakho se aasu ki ganga behane lagti hai

Devrani:maharaj kya aapne use kuch nahi kaha jab usne aisi maang ki?

Rajpal:wo

Devrani:dhitkar hai apke jaise raja par jis se koi uski patni ki ek raat mangta hai or wo chup chap sun kar apni patni ko manane aajata hai..chiii maharaj ghinn aati hai aap par koi or raja hota to apne patni k lye aisa sun kar usi samay uska sar kaat deta

Rajpal:wo bhut shaktishali hai

Devrani:aapko apni satta apni rajshahi pyari hai na? uske badle me apni patni ko kisi or ko saunp doge maharaj

devrani ab fut fut kar rone lagti hai

Devrani:aaj tak to aapne mujhe patni ka haq bhi nahi dya or aaj aapne aisi maang kar k bata dya k aapne saat fere bhi nam k lye liya tha ..mai uff tak nahi ki aaj tak par aapki patni ban kar sharminda hu aise

Rajpal:chup karo zyada he bol rahi ho ab tum

Devrani:wah ulta chor kotwal ko dante apne kale charitra ko chhupane k lye apne patni ka sahara le rahe ho uske shareer ka sauda kar k

Rajpal:suno tum aise nahi maan ne wali to suno ha mujhe merra rajya chahiye me nahi chahta k ghatrashtra pe koi or raj kare or apne rajshahi apni sampatti apne mahal k lye me tum kya tumhari jaisi 10 devrani ko ratan k niche litwa du

Devrani:chupppp ho jao rajpal aab nahi to ek rajputni kii haaye tujhe kahi nahi chhoregi or tum mere pati nahi hote bhale se naam k ho to tumhara sar me dharr se alag kar deti

Rajpal:veerta ka praman kisi or ko dena apne aap ko tayyar karo do din k andar nahi to mujhe jabardasti karna padega

ye keh kar garazte hue rajpal bahar chala jata hai

devrani gusse me aakar apne ghar ka saman utha kar fekne lagti hai pure kaksha k saman ko bikher deti hai

"kutte rajpal q mere jeevan me aaye tum or samne rakhe fal k bartan ko utha kar aayine pe de marti hai jis se aayina toot jata hai or pure kaksha me bikhar jata hai

itna shor sun kar kamla aati hai

Kamla:maharani kya hua aapne kya haal bana dya kaksha ka

Devrani rote hue zameen par baith jati hai

"kamla mere jeevan ka haal aisa ho gaya hai is kaksha k haal se kya karu"

Kamla devrani ko pakad kar

"maharani kanch k tukde hai niche aap upar aayiye palang pe or bataiye aakhir hua kya"

"kamla bhala kaun apne patni ka sauda karta hai"

"maharani kaun kya aap roye nahi puri baat batao"

"subah me meri ijjat pe hath dalne ki koshish ki raja ratan singh ne"

"kya keh rahi ho maharani"

"han kamla or abhi mere naam k pati mujhe kehne aaye the k tumhe ratan singh k sona hai tayyari kar lo"

"hey bhagwan kya kaliyuga aagaya hai use sharam nahi aayi"

"aapne baldev ko q nahi batai maharani"

"kamla tum to jante ho baldev kachi umar ka hai kuch josh me aaker ulta sidha kar dya to or wais bhi humara prem patra bhi gayab hai agar baldev me kuch kya ratan singh ko to kahi shurushti ya jiske paas hai ye wo nikal ka de hamare virudha"

or devrani rone lagti hai

"Maharani chup karo meri behan aise pati dhitkar hai samaj pe khud vaishyao me pade rehte the raja ratan singh k sath uska he badla chukana chah rahe hai me sab samajhti hu"

"kamla puri jeevan bhar in sab ne mujhe dukh he dya ab me baldev k sath kuch sukh k pal jeena seekh rahi hu to ye sab m"

"himmat karo devrani or baldev ko batao ab tum dono ko mil kar he ye yudha ladna hai "

Kamla kaksha ko saaf safai karne lag jati hai or devrani apne jeevan ko shuru se soch kar aasu bahane lagti hai

idhar shurushti rajpal se milne k lye aati hai apne hath ke patra chhupa k

shurushti:man me) aaje he patra de deti hu kal tak dono maa bete ko fansi mil jayegi
or muskurate hue rajpal k kaksha k pas aakar

shurushti:maharaj

Rajpal or ratan singh andar baithe baat kar rahe the

Rajpal:han maharani shurushti kahiye hum abhi maharaja ratan ji k sath hai

shurushti:man me)ye ratan jab se aya hai rajpal ko chhorta he nahi

Shurushti darwaze par parde k peeche khadi ho kar

shurushti:Koi baat nahi maharaj mujhe aap se kuch bat karni thi aap ajaye mere kaksha me jab aap dono ki baat puri ho jaye
or shurushti wapas chali jati hai

andar baitha ratan singh

ratan:kya hua bhai devrani mani k nahi

Rajpal:abhi tak to nahi par manegi

ratan:manni he chahiye nahi to..

Rajpal:ary aap madeera pijiye maharaj aap chinta na kare me kuch bhi kar k aap ko devrani ko bhogne ka awsar dunga..


Raat ka bhojan kar k sab sone ki tayyari kar rahe the

Baldev chupke se apni maa k kaksha me aata hai

Baldev:maa aapne khana khaya

Devrani:nahi bass icha nahi thi

Baldev:meri rani aise to kamzor ho jaogi

Devrani daud k aaakar baldev k gale lag jati hai

Baldev:devrani kya hua q itni dari ho

Devrani rone lagti hai

Baldev:ro mat devrani

Devrani:baldev aaj subah sawere jab me udyan se tahal kar aarahi thi dusht ratan ne mera hath pakda or mujhse gandi baat kahi

baldev devrani ko chhor apna talwar utha ta hai

Baldev:us harami ki itni himmat abhi uska sar kaat kar tumhare kadmo me lata hu

devrani rote hue

"tumhe meri kasam abhi tum kuch bhi nahi karoge mere laal"

"maa tum kasam wapas lo mujhe majboor na karo raja ratan singh ka hal aisa karunga k uski maa bhi use nahi pehchan payegi"

"beta samjho abhi hamare halat aise hai hamare patra ko hamare shatru hathyar bana kar ham par palatwar kar sakte hai sanyam se kam lo beta or is apman ka badla tum le lena par abhi nahi"

baldev talwar ko door fekta hai or devrani ko apne baho me bhar

"jo meri rani ko aaakh bhi utha kar dekha "

"puri baat to suno mere raja"

"han kaho meri jaan"

"wo rajpal aya tha or us dusht ne kaha hai k ratan ghatrashtra kabza kar lega agar uski icha puri na hui or mujhe ratan k sath ek raat guzarne .."

baldev apna hath devrani k muh par rakh

"baas ek or shabd nahi devrani in haramio ko stree ko bhogne ata hai samman nahi karna ata "

"han me kaisi abhagan hu jo aise manushya se mujhe vivah dya gaya"

"wo tumhara pati nahi hai devrani me hu tumhara pati wo kutte rajpal ko rajshahi ki lalach or streeio or vaishyao se rangrailya in sab ka uttar milega ab me inhe sirf marunga nahi tadpan tadpa k marunga"


Aadhi raat devrani or baldev ek dusre k baho me apne dukh dard baant rahe rhe the

wahi shurushti maharaj ko patra dikhane k prayas me leti thi

raja ratan singh apne pyas kaise bujhai jaye devrani se ye soch raha tha

or apne kaksha me leta rajpal apne patni devrani ko kaise manaye ratan singh k sath raat guzarne k lye soch raha tha

To be continued
 

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Waqt aachuka hay lugta hay ab udh huu gaa Davrani pay say Baldev or Ratan singh kay bech or Rajpal huu gaa ratan singh kay sath aak wesal udh let see
Hmm bhai dekhte hai

Kya ratan singh devrani ko pa sakega?

Kya shurushti apne chaal me kamyab ho payegi ?

Kya baldev apne maa ka badla le sakega ?

Kya devrani ka maharani ban ne ka khwab pura ho payega?

Kya baldev or devrani ko pati patni k rup me ghatrashtra k log swikar karenge ?
 
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Rattan Singh b.c. Ka sir Baldev Ko Kalam kar dena cahiye,aur apne rajya ke Suraksha Meer Wahid se karani chahiye,aur Rattan Singh ka rajya apne Rajya mein Milana cahiye tahi majja aaye ga.
 
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