Fantasy Mahagatha - Sadhna, Sadhak, Shaktiya aur dragons

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Part l - Onset of the Storm ​

NOTE :-

" Iss kahani ki timeframe approx. 2005-2013 rahegi. .. to maximum details isi timeline ke according hongi "

Pesh hai pehla Update ----

•°UPDATE 1•°​

Kaale baadalon ne pure Aasmaan ko dhakh rakha tha... Aur Bijli ke chamakte hi Aasmaan me uski tez Gadgadahat goonj uthi.

Aisa laga mano kadkadati bijli aasmaan ke tukde tukde karna chah rahi ho..

" Kya..musibat hai ! " Kharab mausam ko dekh Manav Shisht ne aah bharte hue kaha; usko andaja tha ki Toofan [ Storm ] aane wala hai. Nami/moist wali hawa ko apne ander bharte hue woh tezi se nukkad wali dukan ki or badh chala, joki bas Ab lagbhag 300 meter door thi.

Yadi hostel area ki superstore ka renovation nahi ho raha hota, yadi wo rock, paper, scissors match me lagatar teen bar scissors nahi khelta, to woh nikkar ( half pant) aur plain T -shirt me yahan bahar nahi nikla hota. Woh to maje se apne bed par laita tha aur kitab padh raha tha, kintu uske roommates ko patte (taash /cards) khelna tha.

"AHAHH..... " Jaise hi Manav apni speed badhane ko hua, usse apne upar ek ladki ki cheekh sunai di.

Usne confusion me upar dekha. Upar ka najara dekhte hi woh chonk (shocked) utha.
Ek ladki Aasmaan se niche gir rahi thi!!!

Aur Itna hi nahi.. Wo ladki uske sar par girne wali thi!!

" OOOHhh... " Manav ne furti se ek kadam piche lete hue apni center of gravity ( normally naval se thoda niche center me) ko niche kiya. Fir usne apne haathon ko aage badhate hue ek perfect - Horse stance - le liya.

**(Horse Stance - ek common martial arts posture hai. Name ke according ye horse riding ke dauran banne wala pose hai. Ye pairo ko train karne ke liye hota hai. ) **

DhaAdaAAM!!!!!!!!!

Ladki sidha Manav ke chest par giri, aur uske girne ke force ka asar kuch aisa hua ki Manav ki center of gravity aur 10 centimeter niche ho gayi. Force itna tagda tha ki wo lagbhag gir hi gaya tha.

Iss ladki ka sar bhi Manav ke muh se jaa takraya tha.... Takraav itna tez tha ki Manav ke saare daant/teeth hil gaye the.

Gatak.....! Kuch uss ladki ke muh se bahar nikla, aur, kyuki Manav ka muh iss instant shock se pura khula hua tha, wo " Kuch " smoothly uske gale utar gaya.

Kuch. . meetha sa... , chikna aur chhota.... Manav kuch react kar pata, usse pehle hi wo candy jesi chij uske pet me ja pahuchi thi.

Haalanki, Manav ka dhyaan ispar nahi tha.. Wo to uss ladki ke bhaar /weight se lada hua tha, aur ladki ko catch karne ke karan uske hath bhi sunn pad gaye the. Isi beech usne apne haathon me padi ladki ko dekha...

Lambi kaali palke... , pyari si pony tail... ,
" Vaels International Middle School " Badge wali light blue uniform me ek nav yovana.. Sach kahe to, ladki badi hi sundar thi...

" Ahh... " Kuch 2 seconds ke baad, jaise uss ladki ko samjh aya ki kya hua tha. Apni sunder badi kaali ankhein kholte hi woh cheekh padi...aur Manav ko dekhte hi woh uspar se hi khade hone ki kosish karne lagi.

Ladki ka bhaar ko jhelne ke baad Manav ke pairon me jaise jaan hi nahi bachi thi. Usse kuch bhi nahi pata tha ki ye ladki kahan se giri , wahan to unchi buildings bhi nahi thi.

Baharhaal, ladki ne khade hone ke baad khudko set kiya. Aur jaise hi usne Manav ke honthon par laal nishan dekha... Wo sharma gyi aur Manav ke shoulder par ek punch jadd diya.

"Areeyyy..... Maine tumhe bachaa.... " Manav apni baat khatam kar pata, ladki pehle hi bhaag gayi.

" Huh.... Aajkal ki ye papa ki pariya kitni nakchadi hoti hai..... Waise wo itni unchai se girne ke baad bhi thik lag rahi hai.. " Bhaagti ladki ko dekhte hue Manav ne apne kandhe ko sehlaya.
"Khair ye itna bhi bura nahi tha. Usne mujhe jor se nahi maara... Mere gaalo ko bhi to baksh diya. . "

Fir Manav ne apne hothon ko chua. Wo kissing ki warm feeling ko yaad nahi rakh saka jiske bare me usne bahut kuch suna rakha tha.

Ab Banda second-year university student tha fir bhi ab tak ek girlfriend nahi bana paya.
" Me bhi kitna bada chomu hu.... " Sochte hue usne apni sunn hui thighs ko thapthapaya aur khada hua. Usne upar akash ko dekha aur paya ki kaale ghane baadal chhat chuke the yaha tak ki surya dev bhi pragat ho gaye the.

" Hadd hai.. Ye mausam bhi... Mujhe laga tha toofaan aane wala hai. " Manav badbadaya. Khair wo jo hua usme naa atakte hue, tezi se dukaan par pahuncha aur cards/taash ke 2 deck kharid liye. Jiske baad wo furti se apne hostel lauta jo Campus ke South end par padta tha.

" Tujhe itni der kaha lag gayi ? Jaldi aa be !! ham sab kab se wait kar rahe hain! "
Manav ko dekhte hi uske teeno roommates chillaye.

Manav ne table par taash ke dono deck patke aur kaha, " Tum log hi khel lo.. mera man nahin hai."

" Kya hua be tereko ? Itna chida hua kyu hai ? " White t-shirt daale Adarsh Shukla ne pochha,
" Sale kya humne decide nahi kiya tha ki jo haarega wahi jaega patte khareedne ? "
Adarsh ' self-declared ' hostel ka captain tha..

" Mujhe bas thoda chakkar aa raha hai... " Manav ne bunk bed ki apni upper berth par dhire dhire chadhte hue kaha.

" Abe natak band kar.... utar niche, aaj apan sab ne taash khelne ka plan banaya tha " Adarsh Manav ke iss ravaiye se khush nahi tha.

" Manav! tu thik to hai ? " Sameer Kumar, dusra roommate, ne chinta karte hue pucha.

" ... Pata nahi... , mujhe bas kuch acha mehsoos nahi ho raha..." Manav ne apni chhati sehlatate hue javab diya.
" kahin us ladki ko bachaane ke chakkar me mujhe koi andaruni chot to nahi lag gayi ? " usne socha.

" Chal fir.. Tereko clinic le chalte hai ?" Manav ke chehre ke haav bhaav ko dekhkar Adarsh bhi serious ho gaya tha.

" Areee nahi ... Mai thik hu.... me bas nukkad wali dukan par jate samay fisal kar muh ke bal gir gaya tha." Manav ne apni chin ki or ishara kiya jo thodi soojh gayi thi. Haalanki ye soojan uss ladki ke sar takraane se aayi thi.

" Acha to phir tu aaram kar, mausam khula hua hai to ham internet cafe chale jayenge." Rupam Dev, teesra roommate, bola.

" Haan theek hai , tum log maje karo." Manav ne unko wave di. Wo kamjori aur thakaan mehsoos kar raha tha.

Adarsh abhi bhi thoda chintit tha.. , " Sun, Agar kisi cheej ki jarurat ho to mereko phone kar diyo.." Wah bola.

"Hmm... Ok. ." Aur Manav apne naram, aaramdayak bistar par phail gaya.

To doston apne ye chaaro chaman single hi the. Taash ya video game Khelne aur ghumne ke alava inka koi dusra passion nahin tha..

Manav lait te hi neend ke aagosh me jaa chuka tha; woh ' kisi ' kaaran se behad thak gaya tha.

Jab woh utha to sham ke 6 baj chuke the. Table par khane ka ek parcel pada tha; ye dinner ka khaana tha jo uske teeno jigri uske liye laye the.

Room me dusre rooms se aa raha card playing ka dheema shor goonj raha tha. Uske roommates, aawaaz na ho isliye bagal ke room me taash khelne chale gaye the.

"Sacche yaar..." Manav apna sar khujate hue, khana lene ke liye apni upper berth se niche utra.

Jab usne parcel uthane ke liye apna haath aage badhaya, to wah chaunk gaya!! Uska shareer mano wahi jam gaya!
Andhere kamre me bhi wo apni right kalai/wrist par hare/green rang ka ek circle jaisa kuch dekh paa raha tha..

Manav ko laga jaise uske heart ne 5 second ke liye dhadakna hi band kar diya ho. Usne kalai ko theek se dekhne ke liye parda khola.

Ek hare rang ke machli ki scales jaise tattoo ne uske right arm ko kalai se kandhe tak dhak diya tha! !

Manav ko laga ki wah koi sapna dekh raha hai. Usne apni aankhen masali, par wo tattoo jesi chij abhi bhi vahin thi. Phir usne is hari chij ko apne sharir se hatane ki nakaam koshish ki, par wo tatto jyon ka tyon bana raha..

Shivering/kampkapi... Manav ko apne ek ek rom me kampkapi mehsoos hui.
Usne jaldi se apne saare kapde utare aur full length mirror ke samane jakar khada ho gaya. Woh dekhna chahata tha ki kya aisa kuchh uske dusre body parts par bhi hua hai...


CreaKkk...... Charmarahat ke sath darwaja khula, aur teeno mahashay andar chale aaye.

" Abee bhencho.... Porn star banega ye londa ?" Nange/naked Manav ko lagataar mirror ke samne ghoomte hue dekh, Adarsh chillaya.

" N - nahin... ... Chup kar be !! " Manav ne jaldi se apne kapde uthaye aur apne shareer ko dhak liya.
" Mujhe apni puri body me pain feel ho raha tha, isiliye me bas check kar raha tha ki kahin meri body ke kisi part me chot to nahin lagi, " usne safai di.

" Yadi tereko theek nahi lag raha hai to chal na clinic... Chal checkup karwa lena... " Adarsh ne chintit hote hue kaha.

" Areyy sab thik hai... Aisa kuch serious nahin hai." Manav unhe apni skin me ho rahi ajeebo gareeb cheej ke baare mein nahin batana chah raha tha. Aur waise bhi, use khud nahin pata tha ki kya ho raha hai aur isse deal kaise karna hai.

" Mujhe lagta hai ki tujhko nanga daudne ki tadap uthi hai. Kya bolte ho aaj raat apan public bathroom chale ? " Sameer ne upar Manav ki berth par chadhte hue kaha.

" Haan..... aur mujhe lagta hai ki yeh tera man hi he jo nange daudne ke liye tadap raha hai ! " Manav ne Sameer ko javab diya. Usne ab tak apne kapde pahen liye the sath hi apne hath ko aasteen se dhak liya tha.

" Acha Me thodi der bahar tehel kar aata hu. Tum log chill karo yahan."

" Tu khana to khale! ? " Adarsh ne parcel ki or ishara karte hue kaha,
"Maine ise tere liye hi laya tha ! "

" Mujhe abhi bhuk nahi hai..." Manav ne bahar nikalte hue kaha.

" Bhains ki tang, kya manu relationship mein hai?" Rupam ne Manav ke ajib vyavhaar ko dekhkar puchha.

" Woh ? Ek to Wo mere jaisa dashing nahin hai, dusra wo iss Sameer jitna fit bhi nahin hai, upar se wo tere jaisa handsome bhi nahin hai... kya tereko lagta hai ki uska apne aage koi chance hai ? Khair chal... fir bhi... agar uski in 3 saalon me ek bhi gf ban gayi , to me tereko Rs. 1,000 dunga ! " Adarsh ne bade confidence se kaha.

P.S. :-
* Manav Shisht - literally... A good person. Aur wo asal me hai bhi. Aap isi baat se andaza laga lo ki wo maasoom gali tak nahi bakta.
Ye to ho gayi majak ki baat. Majak se hatke, Aage aap dekhenge ki uska character kitna magnificent hai.
"Manu" ye Manav ji ka pet / nickname hai.

* Rupam Dev - ye bhai apne naam ke anusaar.. roop wan hai.

* Hostel ke ek room ka setup- 2 bunk bed aur 4 roommates
Waise to har hostel ka apne alag bathrooms, toilets hai lekin campus me public bathrooms, toilets ki ek dedicated building bhi hai.



To kaisa laga aap sabko ye update?
Kayi sawal khade kiye iss update ne... Jaise.. wo ladki?
green skin ka maajra? etc..
Aise hi aur questions ke answers ke liye milte hai agle updates me...
To be continued.....

 

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green skin ka maajra? etc..
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Part l - Onset of the Storm ​

NOTE :-

" Iss kahani ki timeframe approx. 2005-2013 rahegi. .. to maximum details isi timeline ke according hongi "

Pesh hai pehla Update ----

•°UPDATE 1•°​

Kaale baadalon ne pure Aasmaan ko dhakh rakha tha... Aur Bijli ke chamakte hi Aasmaan me uski tez Gadgadahat goonj uthi.

Aisa laga mano kadkadati bijli aasmaan ke tukde tukde karna chah rahi ho..

" Kya..musibat hai ! " Kharab mausam ko dekh Manav Shisht ne aah bharte hue kaha; usko andaja tha ki Toofan [ Storm ] aane wala hai. Nami/moist wali hawa ko apne ander bharte hue woh tezi se nukkad wali dukan ki or badh chala, joki bas Ab lagbhag 300 meter door thi.

Yadi hostel area ki superstore ka renovation nahi ho raha hota, yadi wo rock, paper, scissors match me lagatar teen bar scissors nahi khelta, to woh nikkar ( half pant) aur plain T -shirt me yahan bahar nahi nikla hota. Woh to maje se apne bed par laita tha aur kitab padh raha tha, kintu uske roommates ko patte (taash /cards) khelna tha.

"AHAHH..... " Jaise hi Manav apni speed badhane ko hua, usse apne upar ek ladki ki cheekh sunai di.

Usne confusion me upar dekha. Upar ka najara dekhte hi woh chonk (shocked) utha.
Ek ladki Aasmaan se niche gir rahi thi!!!

Aur Itna hi nahi.. Wo ladki uske sar par girne wali thi!!

" OOOHhh... " Manav ne furti se ek kadam piche lete hue apni center of gravity ( normally naval se thoda niche center me) ko niche kiya. Fir usne apne haathon ko aage badhate hue ek perfect - Horse stance - le liya.

**(Horse Stance - ek common martial arts posture hai. Name ke according ye horse riding ke dauran banne wala pose hai. Ye pairo ko train karne ke liye hota hai. ) **

DhaAdaAAM!!!!!!!!!

Ladki sidha Manav ke chest par giri, aur uske girne ke force ka asar kuch aisa hua ki Manav ki center of gravity aur 10 centimeter niche ho gayi. Force itna tagda tha ki wo lagbhag gir hi gaya tha.

Iss ladki ka sar bhi Manav ke muh se jaa takraya tha.... Takraav itna tez tha ki Manav ke saare daant/teeth hil gaye the.

Gatak.....! Kuch uss ladki ke muh se bahar nikla, aur, kyuki Manav ka muh iss instant shock se pura khula hua tha, wo " Kuch " smoothly uske gale utar gaya.

Kuch. . meetha sa... , chikna aur chhota.... Manav kuch react kar pata, usse pehle hi wo candy jesi chij uske pet me ja pahuchi thi.

Haalanki, Manav ka dhyaan ispar nahi tha.. Wo to uss ladki ke bhaar /weight se lada hua tha, aur ladki ko catch karne ke karan uske hath bhi sunn pad gaye the. Isi beech usne apne haathon me padi ladki ko dekha...

Lambi kaali palke... , pyari si pony tail... ,
" Vaels International Middle School " Badge wali light blue uniform me ek nav yovana.. Sach kahe to, ladki badi hi sundar thi...

" Ahh... " Kuch 2 seconds ke baad, jaise uss ladki ko samjh aya ki kya hua tha. Apni sunder badi kaali ankhein kholte hi woh cheekh padi...aur Manav ko dekhte hi woh uspar se hi khade hone ki kosish karne lagi.

Ladki ka bhaar ko jhelne ke baad Manav ke pairon me jaise jaan hi nahi bachi thi. Usse kuch bhi nahi pata tha ki ye ladki kahan se giri , wahan to unchi buildings bhi nahi thi.

Baharhaal, ladki ne khade hone ke baad khudko set kiya. Aur jaise hi usne Manav ke honthon par laal nishan dekha... Wo sharma gyi aur Manav ke shoulder par ek punch jadd diya.

"Areeyyy..... Maine tumhe bachaa.... " Manav apni baat khatam kar pata, ladki pehle hi bhaag gayi.

" Huh.... Aajkal ki ye papa ki pariya kitni nakchadi hoti hai..... Waise wo itni unchai se girne ke baad bhi thik lag rahi hai.. " Bhaagti ladki ko dekhte hue Manav ne apne kandhe ko sehlaya.
"Khair ye itna bhi bura nahi tha. Usne mujhe jor se nahi maara... Mere gaalo ko bhi to baksh diya. . "

Fir Manav ne apne hothon ko chua. Wo kissing ki warm feeling ko yaad nahi rakh saka jiske bare me usne bahut kuch suna rakha tha.

Ab Banda second-year university student tha fir bhi ab tak ek girlfriend nahi bana paya.
" Me bhi kitna bada chomu hu.... " Sochte hue usne apni sunn hui thighs ko thapthapaya aur khada hua. Usne upar akash ko dekha aur paya ki kaale ghane baadal chhat chuke the yaha tak ki surya dev bhi pragat ho gaye the.

" Hadd hai.. Ye mausam bhi... Mujhe laga tha toofaan aane wala hai. " Manav badbadaya. Khair wo jo hua usme naa atakte hue, tezi se dukaan par pahuncha aur cards/taash ke 2 deck kharid liye. Jiske baad wo furti se apne hostel lauta jo Campus ke South end par padta tha.

" Tujhe itni der kaha lag gayi ? Jaldi aa be !! ham sab kab se wait kar rahe hain! "
Manav ko dekhte hi uske teeno roommates chillaye.

Manav ne table par taash ke dono deck patke aur kaha, " Tum log hi khel lo.. mera man nahin hai."

" Kya hua be tereko ? Itna chida hua kyu hai ? " White t-shirt daale Adarsh Shukla ne pochha,
" Sale kya humne decide nahi kiya tha ki jo haarega wahi jaega patte khareedne ? "
Adarsh ' self-declared ' hostel ka captain tha..

" Mujhe bas thoda chakkar aa raha hai... " Manav ne bunk bed ki apni upper berth par dhire dhire chadhte hue kaha.

" Abe natak band kar.... utar niche, aaj apan sab ne taash khelne ka plan banaya tha " Adarsh Manav ke iss ravaiye se khush nahi tha.

" Manav! tu thik to hai ? " Sameer Kumar, dusra roommate, ne chinta karte hue pucha.

" ... Pata nahi... , mujhe bas kuch acha mehsoos nahi ho raha..." Manav ne apni chhati sehlatate hue javab diya.
" kahin us ladki ko bachaane ke chakkar me mujhe koi andaruni chot to nahi lag gayi ? " usne socha.

" Chal fir.. Tereko clinic le chalte hai ?" Manav ke chehre ke haav bhaav ko dekhkar Adarsh bhi serious ho gaya tha.

" Areee nahi ... Mai thik hu.... me bas nukkad wali dukan par jate samay fisal kar muh ke bal gir gaya tha." Manav ne apni chin ki or ishara kiya jo thodi soojh gayi thi. Haalanki ye soojan uss ladki ke sar takraane se aayi thi.

" Acha to phir tu aaram kar, mausam khula hua hai to ham internet cafe chale jayenge." Rupam Dev, teesra roommate, bola.

" Haan theek hai , tum log maje karo." Manav ne unko wave di. Wo kamjori aur thakaan mehsoos kar raha tha.

Adarsh abhi bhi thoda chintit tha.. , " Sun, Agar kisi cheej ki jarurat ho to mereko phone kar diyo.." Wah bola.

"Hmm... Ok. ." Aur Manav apne naram, aaramdayak bistar par phail gaya.

To doston apne ye chaaro chaman single hi the. Taash ya video game Khelne aur ghumne ke alava inka koi dusra passion nahin tha..

Manav lait te hi neend ke aagosh me jaa chuka tha; woh ' kisi ' kaaran se behad thak gaya tha.

Jab woh utha to sham ke 6 baj chuke the. Table par khane ka ek parcel pada tha; ye dinner ka khaana tha jo uske teeno jigri uske liye laye the.

Room me dusre rooms se aa raha card playing ka dheema shor goonj raha tha. Uske roommates, aawaaz na ho isliye bagal ke room me taash khelne chale gaye the.

"Sacche yaar..." Manav apna sar khujate hue, khana lene ke liye apni upper berth se niche utra.

Jab usne parcel uthane ke liye apna haath aage badhaya, to wah chaunk gaya!! Uska shareer mano wahi jam gaya!
Andhere kamre me bhi wo apni right kalai/wrist par hare/green rang ka ek circle jaisa kuch dekh paa raha tha..

Manav ko laga jaise uske heart ne 5 second ke liye dhadakna hi band kar diya ho. Usne kalai ko theek se dekhne ke liye parda khola.

Ek hare rang ke machli ki scales jaise tattoo ne uske right arm ko kalai se kandhe tak dhak diya tha! !

Manav ko laga ki wah koi sapna dekh raha hai. Usne apni aankhen masali, par wo tattoo jesi chij abhi bhi vahin thi. Phir usne is hari chij ko apne sharir se hatane ki nakaam koshish ki, par wo tatto jyon ka tyon bana raha..

Shivering/kampkapi... Manav ko apne ek ek rom me kampkapi mehsoos hui.
Usne jaldi se apne saare kapde utare aur full length mirror ke samane jakar khada ho gaya. Woh dekhna chahata tha ki kya aisa kuchh uske dusre body parts par bhi hua hai...


CreaKkk...... Charmarahat ke sath darwaja khula, aur teeno mahashay andar chale aaye.

" Abee bhencho.... Porn star banega ye londa ?" Nange/naked Manav ko lagataar mirror ke samne ghoomte hue dekh, Adarsh chillaya.

" N - nahin... ... Chup kar be !! " Manav ne jaldi se apne kapde uthaye aur apne shareer ko dhak liya.
" Mujhe apni puri body me pain feel ho raha tha, isiliye me bas check kar raha tha ki kahin meri body ke kisi part me chot to nahin lagi, " usne safai di.

" Yadi tereko theek nahi lag raha hai to chal na clinic... Chal checkup karwa lena... " Adarsh ne chintit hote hue kaha.

" Areyy sab thik hai... Aisa kuch serious nahin hai." Manav unhe apni skin me ho rahi ajeebo gareeb cheej ke baare mein nahin batana chah raha tha. Aur waise bhi, use khud nahin pata tha ki kya ho raha hai aur isse deal kaise karna hai.

" Mujhe lagta hai ki tujhko nanga daudne ki tadap uthi hai. Kya bolte ho aaj raat apan public bathroom chale ? " Sameer ne upar Manav ki berth par chadhte hue kaha.

" Haan..... aur mujhe lagta hai ki yeh tera man hi he jo nange daudne ke liye tadap raha hai ! " Manav ne Sameer ko javab diya. Usne ab tak apne kapde pahen liye the sath hi apne hath ko aasteen se dhak liya tha.

" Acha Me thodi der bahar tehel kar aata hu. Tum log chill karo yahan."

" Tu khana to khale! ? " Adarsh ne parcel ki or ishara karte hue kaha,
"Maine ise tere liye hi laya tha ! "

" Mujhe abhi bhuk nahi hai..." Manav ne bahar nikalte hue kaha.

" Bhains ki tang, kya manu relationship mein hai?" Rupam ne Manav ke ajib vyavhaar ko dekhkar puchha.

" Woh ? Ek to Wo mere jaisa dashing nahin hai, dusra wo iss Sameer jitna fit bhi nahin hai, upar se wo tere jaisa handsome bhi nahin hai... kya tereko lagta hai ki uska apne aage koi chance hai ? Khair chal... fir bhi... agar uski in 3 saalon me ek bhi gf ban gayi , to me tereko Rs. 1,000 dunga ! " Adarsh ne bade confidence se kaha.

P.S. :-
* Manav Shisht - literally... A good person. Aur wo asal me hai bhi. Aap isi baat se andaza laga lo ki wo maasoom gali tak nahi bakta.
Ye to ho gayi majak ki baat. Majak se hatke, Aage aap dekhenge ki uska character kitna magnificent hai.
"Manu" ye Manav ji ka pet / nickname hai.

* Rupam Dev - ye bhai apne naam ke anusaar.. roop wan hai.

* Hostel ke ek room ka setup- 2 bunk bed aur 4 roommates
Waise to har hostel ka apne alag bathrooms, toilets hai lekin campus me public bathrooms, toilets ki ek dedicated building bhi hai.



To kaisa laga aap sabko ye update?
Kayi sawal khade kiye iss update ne... Jaise.. wo ladki?
green skin ka maajra? etc..
Aise hi aur questions ke answers ke liye milte hai agle updates me...
To be continued.....

Owsm update tha Bhai...sare doubt to tumne hi likh hi diye ...khair hamara sawal ye hai ki jab ladaki ka sar(head) manav ke chin se takaraya tha , to phir kab kiss ho gaya aur Candy munh ke anadar chali gayi....aur achank mausam ka sahi ho Jana....aur ladaki ka upar aasaman se aana , Sala kahi pari wari to na pata raha hai na ... khair dekhate hai agale update me kitne bato ka khulasa hoga.... Nice update ...
Waiting for the next update

 

[Sweetkaran]

Congratulations for new thread bro

 

[11 ster fan]

Mere dost Meri ek baat maan lo iss thread ko fantasy section me dal do....iske liye aap kisi bhi moderator ko kah sakte ho.. fantasy section me kuchh reader aapko mil jayenge...

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

Are Bhai Bhai ...agar khud hi question likh dogo to Baki ki janta Kya munh dekhegi bas....sawal puchhana reader ka kaam ka isiliye ye baat reader par hi chhod de .....

direction dene ka socha tha..
Okay.. next update se nahi hoga
Dhanyavaad bandhu