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•°UPDATE 53•°
Recap -
Iss mudde par Avantika ko itna polite dekhkar, dadi ko theek nahi laga aur isliye unhone dohraaya,
"nahi, nahi, nahi ... aisa thode hota hai! "
Avantika : “Auntie! please mere saath stranger jaisa vyavahaar na karen.. hum ek family hai...,"
"Ek family?"
Dadi ne Avantika ko asamanjas me dekha.
Manav ko to aisa laga jaise uska dil baahar uchak kar floor par gir gaya ho!
AB AAGE :-
Manav ki dadi ke chehre par chhayi uljhan ko dekhkar, Avantika samjhaya,
Avantika : "Ji wo mera matlab hai, Manu humari Sani ko padha raha hai, aur.. hum aapas me ek family ki tarah ghul-mil gaye hain.."
"Hehe,"
Dadi is explanation par khushi se hansi aur kaha,
"Haan.., mai dekh sakti hoon.. Manu aur Sani ki achchhi bonding ban gayi hai"
Dadi ke itna bolti hi turant Saanvi ke chehre par sharm ki halki laali chha gayi. Usne bahut hi dheemi awaaj me khud ko defend kiya,
Saanvi (bahut dheere se) ; "Huh.. kisne kaha ki meri uske saath achchi bonding hain ..."
Avantika : "Maine abhi Doctor se puchha, aur.. unhone bataya ki, ek aur din ki observation ke baad agar sab kuch theek rehta hai, to aap ghar ja sakti hai,"
"Apka bahut-bahut dhanywaad!
lekin.. mujhe aapko pay back to karna hi hoga. . ek baar mai yahan se discharge ho jaun to, mai bills dekh kar aapko pay back kar dungi!" Dadi ne jor diya.
Unhe naa maanta dekhkar, Avantika ne aur behas karna theek nahi samjha. Isliye, usne anichchha se haami me apna sar hilaaya,
Avantika : "Okay ..."
Saanvi : "Mumma, aaj to aapke studio me Philippe Starck aane wale the na? mujhe laga.. ki aap unke saath dinner karne ke baad hi wapas aa paogi "
Avantika : "Maine unhe studio ka creative center dikha diya hai. Lekin.. chunki Manav dadi bimaar hain, to maine yahan aane ke liye humare dinner arrangements cancel kar diye,"
Manav ko yeh jaankar bahut achcha laga ki auntie ne apne kaam ki bajaay uski dadi ko prathmikta di. Halaanki, use iss baat ka andaaja nahi tha ki Philippe Starck ek world famous designer tha, jisne world ke sabse bade soccer stadium ke saath-saath duniya ki kaayi famous hotels ke architecture par bhi kaam kiya tha. France ke former President Francois Mitterrand ke ghar ko bhi bhi Philippe Starck ne design kiya tha.
Hospital me admit Manav ki dadi ko dekhne ke liye Avantika ne kisi aam insaan ke saath dinner karna cancel nahi kiya tha.
Ab kyuki wo yahan thi, to jaahir tha ki woh Manav ki dadi ke saath kuch der baat- cheet kiye bina to jaane se rahi..
Halaanki, wo abhi bhi apne business attire me thi, lekin phir bhi woh, ek samajhdaar patni aur apni bachchi ko beinteha pyaar karne wali maa thi... jiska vyaktitva behad down to earth tha.
Uski sanjeeda & lagaav se bhari baatcheet aur smart prati-uttaron ne, Manav ki dadi ke saath taal mel baithaneme bahut madad ki.
Avantika ki baaton se impress hote hue dadi man hi man apni khud ki bahu se thoda naakhush thi. Har samay apne kaam me busy hone ki wajah se Manav ki maa, naa to Manav par aur naa hi apne parivaar par utna dhyaan de pati thi.
Isliye, jab dadi ko pata chala ki Avantika - ek professional hone ke baavjood, na kewal ghar ke sabhi kaamon nipun thi balki apne pariwaar ki dekhbhaal bhi bahut achche se rakh rahi thi.., ab to dadi Avantika ko aur bhi jyada pasand karne lagi thi.
Unki baatcheet ke dauraan, Avantika ne puchha,
Avantika : "Auntie, aapke liye beach house me rehna bada inconvenient rehta hoga.. aap.. main city me shift kyon nahi ho jaate?
Dadi : "Manu ke dad ka kehna ki beach par taazi hawa hoti hai, isliye usne wahin par ek cottage le liya tha. Pehle, hum city me hi rehte the lekin humne wo ghar kayi saal pehle bech diya. . "
Avantika : "Aap itni senior hai.. aunty. .. to aapke liye wahan akele rehna safe nahi hai. Kal jab aapka blood pressure badha.. to Manu bahut jyada ghabra gaya tha. Mujhe lagta hai ki.. agar aap main city me reh rahi hoti to kal Manu ke liye mushkilen itni nahi badhti.. "
Dadi, Avantika ke tark se kuch had tak sehmat thi. Unhone Manav ke chehre ki or dekha aur kalpna ki kal raat wo kitna pareshaan ho gaya hoga...
Avantika ne bolna jaari rakha,
" Kaisa rahega agar aap recover hone tak humare saath rahe..?"
Side me khada Manav , jo aunty aur dadi ke beech ho rahi baatcheet ko sun raha tha, Avantika ke suggestion ko sunte hi wo tention me aa gaya,
Manav (man me ) : "Dadi.. Sani ke ghar me rahe..? iska kya matlab hai..?"
".. iski.. jaroorat nahi hai beta ji! "
Dadi ne jhat se naa me haath hilaaya aur aage kaha,
"Mujhe beach par akele rehne ki aadat ho gayi hai. Mai wahin theek hoon.. hehe. Saath hi, Manu ke parents bhi next week wapas aa rahe hai, to. . mai unki dekhbhaal se jaldi recover ho jaungi.., "
"Next week ?"
Avantika ki aankhein chamak uthi.
Dadi : "Haan, agle Wednesday ko unhe aa jana chaahiye. Mai Manu ke dad se kahungi ki, meri jaan bachane ke liye aapka acha se shukriya ada kare aur.. aapki family ko lunch ya dinner ke liye bhi invite kare,"
Avantika : "Hehe ~ please aap itna pareshaan mat hohiye... waise bhi hum to ek hi family hai,"
Avantika ne dubara ullekh kiya ki ve sab ek hi parivaar the.
Halaanki, usne jald hi aage kaha,
Avantika : "Lekin.. lunch ya dinner ke bahane hi sahi, hum sabka milna bhi ho jayega.. ye bahut achcha rahega hehe"
Aur..
Ab Manav ka dil baith gaya. Use laga jaise wo abhi-abhi kisi jaal me phans gaya ho.
Bhale hi uski dadi shaheer se healthy dikhti thi lekin, unhe severe high blood pressure ki samasya thi. Halaanki, yah ek nirvivaad fact tha ki Avantika ne is baar.. Manav ki family par bahut bada ehsaan kiya tha.
"Badhiya! Manu ke dad ke wapas aane par mai use koi accha sa venue reserve karne ko kahungi.. taaki hum apna aabhaar vyakt kar saken!"
Dadi ne bade utsaah se kaha.
Avantika ne hanste hue, haath se apna muh dhak liya
aur Manav ko ek jhalak dekha. Avantika se najre milte hi Manav bas bebasi se aahe bhar kar reh gaya.. 
Waise woh jaanta tha ki, bhale hi dadi ke saath ye ghatna na hui hoti lekin fir bhi, future me donon families ka milna to nishchit hi tha...
For example :
Rajyavardhan : 'Shaurya Group' **(update 7 )** ke CEO ke roop me, Manav ke maata - pita ke projects me invest karke ya fir unke projects ko sponsor karke, bade araam se Manav ke maata - pita se mil sakta tha.
"Chunki ab hum ek family hain.. to,"
Mauke par chauka maarte hue Avantika ne aage kaha,
"Aap.. kuch dinon ke liye humare saath reh sakte hain.. aur Manu ke parents ke wapas aane se pehle hi, poori tarah recover ho sakte hain..
Recover hone ke baad, hum aapko wapas aapke cottage le jayenge. Plus, humara ghar Manu ki university ke bahut paas hain. . aur Manu.. daily Sani ko padhane bhi aata hai. To.. aap log ek doosre se, cottage ke comparison me jyada baar mil bhi paoge.
Hehe~ eh kitna acha rahega na auntie~ !
Kal Shyam ji ke call ke baad, Manu bahut pareshan ho gaya tha... aur.. aap bhi use dubara itna pareshaan aur chintit nahi dekhna chaahengi.., right?" ☺Avantika ke in shabdon se dadi poori tarah sehmat thi, lekin.. woh abhi bhi jhijhak rahi thi,
Dadi : "yeh ... isme aapko bahut jyada pareshaani hogi....." ;
"Not at all~ aunty! humare paas ek extra room hai, aur.. mai ghar wapas jaate hi unn room ko aapke liye ready kar doongi. Isme kuch bhi pareshaani wali baat nahin hai..; bas aapko hume bhi apna thoda aashirvaad dena hoga haha~"
Avantika ne utsaah se kaha.
Dadi Manav ki or mudi. Wo abhi bhi jhijhak rahi thi.
Idhar Avantika ke suggestion ko sunkar Manav khud duvidha me tha. Ek taraf, wo Sani ki family ko uski dadi ki kaaran pareshaan nahi karna chaahta tha.
To doosri or, wo ye bhi chaahta tha ki Hospital se discharge hone ke baad uski dadi ko achchi dekhbhaal mile . Woh chaahta tha ki dadi jald se jald theek ho jaye taaki itne budhape me unhe jyaada takleef na uthani pade.
Shyamu kaka khud 45+ saal ke prodh the, aur iss umr ke chalte ve dadi ki sehat se judi bahut si cheejon ko ignore kar sakte the. Agar dadi hospital se wapas seedha cottage jaati hai to ye Manav ke liye badi chinta wali baat hogi.
Isliye, current situation ka achchi tarah se analysis karne ke baad Manav ne kaha,
Manav : "Mom.. dad.. next week tak aa payenge.. to, dadi ke liye better hoga ki ve mom-dad ke aane tak aunty ke saath rahen..
Dadi.. ! dad ke aane ke baad apan wapas cottage me chalenge, "
Manav (man me) "Humen Sani ki family ka ye favour return karna hoga.. unhone jaroorat ke samay me dadi par apna money, time aur energy kharch ki hai..
Ye achchi baat hai ki Sani abhi chhoti hai! mai dad se keh dunga ki jab wo Sani ki family se mile to Sani ko gift ke roop me ₹ 70,000 - ₹ 80,000 ka ek envelope de dein. Itna amount gratitude express karne aur aunty ko repay karne ke liye kaafi hona chahiye. "
Apne pote ki baatein sunkar dadi ne aakhirkaar apna man bana liya. Unhone embarrass hote hue Avantika se kaha,
Dadi : "..ehh... apko pareshaan karne ke liye very sorry ..."
Dadi ke khyalaat bhi Manav ke jaise the. Manav ke pita ke wapas aane ke baad dadi, Saanvi ke parivaar ko laakho baar dhanyavaad dena chaahti thi.
Avantika : “Koi pareshani nahi hai aunty~ ab aap thoda rest kariye! sabse pehle to mai.. kal subah aapko lene ke liye ek car bhej deti hoon, "
Avantika khushi se hansi. Fir weh uth khadi hui aur dadi ko pranaam kiya. Phir usne apne haath se Saanvi ko chalne ka ishara kiya.
Apni mom ka ishara paate hi Saanvi ne school bag ko apni peeth par tang liya aur dadi se girly tone me kaha,
Saanvi : "Bye, dadi~ !"
Jaise hi donon room se baahar nikli to, dadi ne aah bhari,
Dadi : "Tum vaastav me ek ache parivaar ke sampark me aaye ho, Manu! "
Agli subah, Manav ki dadi ki condition check karne ke baad, doctor ne pushti kar di ke ab sab kuch theek hai.
Fir doctor ne Manav ko patient discharging process poora karne ke liye kaha.
Baharhaal sab kuch niptane ke baad, Manav ne apni dadi ko support dete hue pakad liya aur unhen Hospital se baahar nikalne me help karne laga---
dadi abhi bhi kamjor thi.
Ek Black Stretch Lincoln Limousine **(Update 11)** pehle se hi baahar intjaar kar rahi thi;
Limousine, entrance gate se kareeb 5 meter ki doori par khadi thi.
Update yahi tak
🅁🄴🄰🄳, 🄻🄸🄺🄴
🄰🄽🄳🄲🄾🄼🄼🄴🄽🅃
Kuch dinon ke baad fir milenge
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Mast•°UPDATE 53•°
Recap -
Iss mudde par Avantika ko itna polite dekhkar, dadi ko theek nahi laga aur isliye unhone dohraaya,
"nahi, nahi, nahi ... aisa thode hota hai! "
Avantika : “Auntie! please mere saath stranger jaisa vyavahaar na karen.. hum ek family hai...,"
"Ek family?"
Dadi ne Avantika ko asamanjas me dekha.
Manav ko to aisa laga jaise uska dil baahar uchak kar floor par gir gaya ho!
AB AAGE :-
Manav ki dadi ke chehre par chhayi uljhan ko dekhkar, Avantika samjhaya,
Avantika : "Ji wo mera matlab hai, Manu humari Sani ko padha raha hai, aur.. hum aapas me ek family ki tarah ghul-mil gaye hain.."
"Hehe,"
Dadi is explanation par khushi se hansi aur kaha,
"Haan.., mai dekh sakti hoon.. Manu aur Sani ki achchhi bonding ban gayi hai"
Dadi ke itna bolti hi turant Saanvi ke chehre par sharm ki halki laali chha gayi. Usne bahut hi dheemi awaaj me khud ko defend kiya,
Saanvi (bahut dheere se) ; "Huh.. kisne kaha ki meri uske saath achchi bonding hain ..."
Avantika : "Maine abhi Doctor se puchha, aur.. unhone bataya ki, ek aur din ki observation ke baad agar sab kuch theek rehta hai, to aap ghar ja sakti hai,"
"Apka bahut-bahut dhanywaad!
Dadi ne jor diya.
Unhe naa maanta dekhkar, Avantika ne aur behas karna theek nahi samjha. Isliye, usne anichchha se haami me apna sar hilaaya,
Avantika : "Okay ..."
Saanvi : "Mumma, aaj to aapke studio me Philippe Starck aane wale the na? mujhe laga.. ki aap unke saath dinner karne ke baad hi wapas aa paogi "
Avantika : "Maine unhe studio ka creative center dikha diya hai. Lekin.. chunki Manav dadi bimaar hain, to maine yahan aane ke liye humare dinner arrangements cancel kar diye,"
Manav ko yeh jaankar bahut achcha laga ki auntie ne apne kaam ki bajaay uski dadi ko prathmikta di. Halaanki, use iss baat ka andaaja nahi tha ki Philippe Starck ek world famous designer tha, jisne world ke sabse bade soccer stadium ke saath-saath duniya ki kaayi famous hotels ke architecture par bhi kaam kiya tha. France ke former President Francois Mitterrand ke ghar ko bhi bhi Philippe Starck ne design kiya tha.
Hospital me admit Manav ki dadi ko dekhne ke liye Avantika ne kisi aam insaan ke saath dinner karna cancel nahi kiya tha.
Ab kyuki wo yahan thi, to jaahir tha ki woh Manav ki dadi ke saath kuch der baat- cheet kiye bina to jaane se rahi..
Halaanki, wo abhi bhi apne business attire me thi, lekin phir bhi woh, ek samajhdaar patni aur apni bachchi ko beinteha pyaar karne wali maa thi... jiska vyaktitva behad down to earth tha.
Uski sanjeeda & lagaav se bhari baatcheet aur smart prati-uttaron ne, Manav ki dadi ke saath taal mel baithaneme bahut madad ki.
Avantika ki baaton se impress hote hue dadi man hi man apni khud ki bahu se thoda naakhush thi. Har samay apne kaam me busy hone ki wajah se Manav ki maa, naa to Manav par aur naa hi apne parivaar par utna dhyaan de pati thi.
Isliye, jab dadi ko pata chala ki Avantika - ek professional hone ke baavjood, na kewal ghar ke sabhi kaamon nipun thi balki apne pariwaar ki dekhbhaal bhi bahut achche se rakh rahi thi.., ab to dadi Avantika ko aur bhi jyada pasand karne lagi thi.
Unki baatcheet ke dauraan, Avantika ne puchha,
Avantika : "Auntie, aapke liye beach house me rehna bada inconvenient rehta hoga.. aap.. main city me shift kyon nahi ho jaate?
Dadi : "Manu ke dad ka kehna ki beach par taazi hawa hoti hai, isliye usne wahin par ek cottage le liya tha. Pehle, hum city me hi rehte the lekin humne wo ghar kayi saal pehle bech diya. . "
Avantika : "Aap itni senior hai.. aunty. .. to aapke liye wahan akele rehna safe nahi hai. Kal jab aapka blood pressure badha.. to Manu bahut jyada ghabra gaya tha. Mujhe lagta hai ki.. agar aap main city me reh rahi hoti to kal Manu ke liye mushkilen itni nahi badhti.. "
Dadi, Avantika ke tark se kuch had tak sehmat thi. Unhone Manav ke chehre ki or dekha aur kalpna ki kal raat wo kitna pareshaan ho gaya hoga...
Avantika ne bolna jaari rakha,
" Kaisa rahega agar aap recover hone tak humare saath rahe..?"
Side me khada Manav , jo aunty aur dadi ke beech ho rahi baatcheet ko sun raha tha, Avantika ke suggestion ko sunte hi wo tention me aa gaya,
Manav (man me ) : "Dadi.. Sani ke ghar me rahe..? iska kya matlab hai..?"
".. iski.. jaroorat nahi hai beta ji! "
Dadi ne jhat se naa me haath hilaaya aur aage kaha,
"Mujhe beach par akele rehne ki aadat ho gayi hai. Mai wahin theek hoon.. hehe. Saath hi, Manu ke parents bhi next week wapas aa rahe hai, to. . mai unki dekhbhaal se jaldi recover ho jaungi.., "
"Next week ?"
Avantika ki aankhein chamak uthi.
Dadi : "Haan, agle Wednesday ko unhe aa jana chaahiye. Mai Manu ke dad se kahungi ki, meri jaan bachane ke liye aapka acha se shukriya ada kare aur.. aapki family ko lunch ya dinner ke liye bhi invite kare,"
Avantika : "Hehe ~ please aap itna pareshaan mat hohiye... waise bhi hum to ek hi family hai,"
Avantika ne dubara ullekh kiya ki ve sab ek hi parivaar the.
Halaanki, usne jald hi aage kaha,
Avantika : "Lekin.. lunch ya dinner ke bahane hi sahi, hum sabka milna bhi ho jayega.. ye bahut achcha rahega hehe"
Aur..
Ab Manav ka dil baith gaya. Use laga jaise wo abhi-abhi kisi jaal me phans gaya ho.
Bhale hi uski dadi shaheer se healthy dikhti thi lekin, unhe severe high blood pressure ki samasya thi. Halaanki, yah ek nirvivaad fact tha ki Avantika ne is baar.. Manav ki family par bahut bada ehsaan kiya tha.
"Badhiya! Manu ke dad ke wapas aane par mai use koi accha sa venue reserve karne ko kahungi.. taaki hum apna aabhaar vyakt kar saken!"
Dadi ne bade utsaah se kaha.
Avantika ne hanste hue, haath se apna muh dhak liya
Waise woh jaanta tha ki, bhale hi dadi ke saath ye ghatna na hui hoti lekin fir bhi, future me donon families ka milna to nishchit hi tha...
For example :
Rajyavardhan : 'Shaurya Group' **(update 7 )** ke CEO ke roop me, Manav ke maata - pita ke projects me invest karke ya fir unke projects ko sponsor karke, bade araam se Manav ke maata - pita se mil sakta tha.
"Chunki ab hum ek family hain.. to,"
Mauke par chauka maarte hue Avantika ne aage kaha,
"Aap.. kuch dinon ke liye humare saath reh sakte hain.. aur Manu ke parents ke wapas aane se pehle hi, poori tarah recover ho sakte hain..
Recover hone ke baad, hum aapko wapas aapke cottage le jayenge. Plus, humara ghar Manu ki university ke bahut paas hain. . aur Manu.. daily Sani ko padhane bhi aata hai. To.. aap log ek doosre se, cottage ke comparison me jyada baar mil bhi paoge.
Hehe~ eh kitna acha rahega na auntie~ !
Avantika ke in shabdon se dadi poori tarah sehmat thi, lekin.. woh abhi bhi jhijhak rahi thi,
Dadi : "yeh ... isme aapko bahut jyada pareshaani hogi....." ;
"Not at all~ aunty! humare paas ek extra room hai, aur.. mai ghar wapas jaate hi unn room ko aapke liye ready kar doongi. Isme kuch bhi pareshaani wali baat nahin hai..; bas aapko hume bhi apna thoda aashirvaad dena hoga haha~"
Avantika ne utsaah se kaha.
Dadi Manav ki or mudi. Wo abhi bhi jhijhak rahi thi.
Idhar Avantika ke suggestion ko sunkar Manav khud duvidha me tha. Ek taraf, wo Sani ki family ko uski dadi ki kaaran pareshaan nahi karna chaahta tha.
To doosri or, wo ye bhi chaahta tha ki Hospital se discharge hone ke baad uski dadi ko achchi dekhbhaal mile . Woh chaahta tha ki dadi jald se jald theek ho jaye taaki itne budhape me unhe jyaada takleef na uthani pade.
Shyamu kaka khud 45+ saal ke prodh the, aur iss umr ke chalte ve dadi ki sehat se judi bahut si cheejon ko ignore kar sakte the. Agar dadi hospital se wapas seedha cottage jaati hai to ye Manav ke liye badi chinta wali baat hogi.
Isliye, current situation ka achchi tarah se analysis karne ke baad Manav ne kaha,
Manav : "Mom.. dad.. next week tak aa payenge.. to, dadi ke liye better hoga ki ve mom-dad ke aane tak aunty ke saath rahen..
Dadi.. ! dad ke aane ke baad apan wapas cottage me chalenge, "
Manav (man me) "Humen Sani ki family ka ye favour return karna hoga.. unhone jaroorat ke samay me dadi par apna money, time aur energy kharch ki hai..
Ye achchi baat hai ki Sani abhi chhoti hai! mai dad se keh dunga ki jab wo Sani ki family se mile to Sani ko gift ke roop me ₹ 70,000 - ₹ 80,000 ka ek envelope de dein. Itna amount gratitude express karne aur aunty ko repay karne ke liye kaafi hona chahiye. "
Apne pote ki baatein sunkar dadi ne aakhirkaar apna man bana liya. Unhone embarrass hote hue Avantika se kaha,
Dadi : "..ehh... apko pareshaan karne ke liye very sorry ..."
Dadi ke khyalaat bhi Manav ke jaise the. Manav ke pita ke wapas aane ke baad dadi, Saanvi ke parivaar ko laakho baar dhanyavaad dena chaahti thi.
Avantika : “Koi pareshani nahi hai aunty~ ab aap thoda rest kariye! sabse pehle to mai.. kal subah aapko lene ke liye ek car bhej deti hoon, "
Avantika khushi se hansi. Fir weh uth khadi hui aur dadi ko pranaam kiya. Phir usne apne haath se Saanvi ko chalne ka ishara kiya.
Apni mom ka ishara paate hi Saanvi ne school bag ko apni peeth par tang liya aur dadi se girly tone me kaha,
Saanvi : "Bye, dadi~ !"
Jaise hi donon room se baahar nikli to, dadi ne aah bhari,
Dadi : "Tum vaastav me ek ache parivaar ke sampark me aaye ho, Manu! "
Agli subah, Manav ki dadi ki condition check karne ke baad, doctor ne pushti kar di ke ab sab kuch theek hai.
Fir doctor ne Manav ko patient discharging process poora karne ke liye kaha.
Baharhaal sab kuch niptane ke baad, Manav ne apni dadi ko support dete hue pakad liya aur unhen Hospital se baahar nikalne me help karne laga---
dadi abhi bhi kamjor thi.
Ek Black Stretch Lincoln Limousine **(Update 11)** pehle se hi baahar intjaar kar rahi thi;
Limousine, entrance gate se kareeb 5 meter ki doori par khadi thi.
Update yahi tak
🄻🄸🄺🄴
🄲🄾🄼🄼🄴🄽🅃
Kuch dinon ke baad fir milenge
To be continued.....
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Bahot khoob•°UPDATE 53•°
Recap -
Iss mudde par Avantika ko itna polite dekhkar, dadi ko theek nahi laga aur isliye unhone dohraaya,
"nahi, nahi, nahi ... aisa thode hota hai! "
Avantika : “Auntie! please mere saath stranger jaisa vyavahaar na karen.. hum ek family hai...,"
"Ek family?"
Dadi ne Avantika ko asamanjas me dekha.
Manav ko to aisa laga jaise uska dil baahar uchak kar floor par gir gaya ho!
AB AAGE :-
Manav ki dadi ke chehre par chhayi uljhan ko dekhkar, Avantika samjhaya,
Avantika : "Ji wo mera matlab hai, Manu humari Sani ko padha raha hai, aur.. hum aapas me ek family ki tarah ghul-mil gaye hain.."
"Hehe,"
Dadi is explanation par khushi se hansi aur kaha,
"Haan.., mai dekh sakti hoon.. Manu aur Sani ki achchhi bonding ban gayi hai"
Dadi ke itna bolti hi turant Saanvi ke chehre par sharm ki halki laali chha gayi. Usne bahut hi dheemi awaaj me khud ko defend kiya,
Saanvi (bahut dheere se) ; "Huh.. kisne kaha ki meri uske saath achchi bonding hain ..."
Avantika : "Maine abhi Doctor se puchha, aur.. unhone bataya ki, ek aur din ki observation ke baad agar sab kuch theek rehta hai, to aap ghar ja sakti hai,"
"Apka bahut-bahut dhanywaad!
Dadi ne jor diya.
Unhe naa maanta dekhkar, Avantika ne aur behas karna theek nahi samjha. Isliye, usne anichchha se haami me apna sar hilaaya,
Avantika : "Okay ..."
Saanvi : "Mumma, aaj to aapke studio me Philippe Starck aane wale the na? mujhe laga.. ki aap unke saath dinner karne ke baad hi wapas aa paogi "
Avantika : "Maine unhe studio ka creative center dikha diya hai. Lekin.. chunki Manav dadi bimaar hain, to maine yahan aane ke liye humare dinner arrangements cancel kar diye,"
Manav ko yeh jaankar bahut achcha laga ki auntie ne apne kaam ki bajaay uski dadi ko prathmikta di. Halaanki, use iss baat ka andaaja nahi tha ki Philippe Starck ek world famous designer tha, jisne world ke sabse bade soccer stadium ke saath-saath duniya ki kaayi famous hotels ke architecture par bhi kaam kiya tha. France ke former President Francois Mitterrand ke ghar ko bhi bhi Philippe Starck ne design kiya tha.
Hospital me admit Manav ki dadi ko dekhne ke liye Avantika ne kisi aam insaan ke saath dinner karna cancel nahi kiya tha.
Ab kyuki wo yahan thi, to jaahir tha ki woh Manav ki dadi ke saath kuch der baat- cheet kiye bina to jaane se rahi..
Halaanki, wo abhi bhi apne business attire me thi, lekin phir bhi woh, ek samajhdaar patni aur apni bachchi ko beinteha pyaar karne wali maa thi... jiska vyaktitva behad down to earth tha.
Uski sanjeeda & lagaav se bhari baatcheet aur smart prati-uttaron ne, Manav ki dadi ke saath taal mel baithaneme bahut madad ki.
Avantika ki baaton se impress hote hue dadi man hi man apni khud ki bahu se thoda naakhush thi. Har samay apne kaam me busy hone ki wajah se Manav ki maa, naa to Manav par aur naa hi apne parivaar par utna dhyaan de pati thi.
Isliye, jab dadi ko pata chala ki Avantika - ek professional hone ke baavjood, na kewal ghar ke sabhi kaamon nipun thi balki apne pariwaar ki dekhbhaal bhi bahut achche se rakh rahi thi.., ab to dadi Avantika ko aur bhi jyada pasand karne lagi thi.
Unki baatcheet ke dauraan, Avantika ne puchha,
Avantika : "Auntie, aapke liye beach house me rehna bada inconvenient rehta hoga.. aap.. main city me shift kyon nahi ho jaate?
Dadi : "Manu ke dad ka kehna ki beach par taazi hawa hoti hai, isliye usne wahin par ek cottage le liya tha. Pehle, hum city me hi rehte the lekin humne wo ghar kayi saal pehle bech diya. . "
Avantika : "Aap itni senior hai.. aunty. .. to aapke liye wahan akele rehna safe nahi hai. Kal jab aapka blood pressure badha.. to Manu bahut jyada ghabra gaya tha. Mujhe lagta hai ki.. agar aap main city me reh rahi hoti to kal Manu ke liye mushkilen itni nahi badhti.. "
Dadi, Avantika ke tark se kuch had tak sehmat thi. Unhone Manav ke chehre ki or dekha aur kalpna ki kal raat wo kitna pareshaan ho gaya hoga...
Avantika ne bolna jaari rakha,
" Kaisa rahega agar aap recover hone tak humare saath rahe..?"
Side me khada Manav , jo aunty aur dadi ke beech ho rahi baatcheet ko sun raha tha, Avantika ke suggestion ko sunte hi wo tention me aa gaya,
Manav (man me ) : "Dadi.. Sani ke ghar me rahe..? iska kya matlab hai..?"
".. iski.. jaroorat nahi hai beta ji! "
Dadi ne jhat se naa me haath hilaaya aur aage kaha,
"Mujhe beach par akele rehne ki aadat ho gayi hai. Mai wahin theek hoon.. hehe. Saath hi, Manu ke parents bhi next week wapas aa rahe hai, to. . mai unki dekhbhaal se jaldi recover ho jaungi.., "
"Next week ?"
Avantika ki aankhein chamak uthi.
Dadi : "Haan, agle Wednesday ko unhe aa jana chaahiye. Mai Manu ke dad se kahungi ki, meri jaan bachane ke liye aapka acha se shukriya ada kare aur.. aapki family ko lunch ya dinner ke liye bhi invite kare,"
Avantika : "Hehe ~ please aap itna pareshaan mat hohiye... waise bhi hum to ek hi family hai,"
Avantika ne dubara ullekh kiya ki ve sab ek hi parivaar the.
Halaanki, usne jald hi aage kaha,
Avantika : "Lekin.. lunch ya dinner ke bahane hi sahi, hum sabka milna bhi ho jayega.. ye bahut achcha rahega hehe"
Aur..
Ab Manav ka dil baith gaya. Use laga jaise wo abhi-abhi kisi jaal me phans gaya ho.
Bhale hi uski dadi shaheer se healthy dikhti thi lekin, unhe severe high blood pressure ki samasya thi. Halaanki, yah ek nirvivaad fact tha ki Avantika ne is baar.. Manav ki family par bahut bada ehsaan kiya tha.
"Badhiya! Manu ke dad ke wapas aane par mai use koi accha sa venue reserve karne ko kahungi.. taaki hum apna aabhaar vyakt kar saken!"
Dadi ne bade utsaah se kaha.
Avantika ne hanste hue, haath se apna muh dhak liya
Waise woh jaanta tha ki, bhale hi dadi ke saath ye ghatna na hui hoti lekin fir bhi, future me donon families ka milna to nishchit hi tha...
For example :
Rajyavardhan : 'Shaurya Group' **(update 7 )** ke CEO ke roop me, Manav ke maata - pita ke projects me invest karke ya fir unke projects ko sponsor karke, bade araam se Manav ke maata - pita se mil sakta tha.
"Chunki ab hum ek family hain.. to,"
Mauke par chauka maarte hue Avantika ne aage kaha,
"Aap.. kuch dinon ke liye humare saath reh sakte hain.. aur Manu ke parents ke wapas aane se pehle hi, poori tarah recover ho sakte hain..
Recover hone ke baad, hum aapko wapas aapke cottage le jayenge. Plus, humara ghar Manu ki university ke bahut paas hain. . aur Manu.. daily Sani ko padhane bhi aata hai. To.. aap log ek doosre se, cottage ke comparison me jyada baar mil bhi paoge.
Hehe~ eh kitna acha rahega na auntie~ !
Avantika ke in shabdon se dadi poori tarah sehmat thi, lekin.. woh abhi bhi jhijhak rahi thi,
Dadi : "yeh ... isme aapko bahut jyada pareshaani hogi....." ;
"Not at all~ aunty! humare paas ek extra room hai, aur.. mai ghar wapas jaate hi unn room ko aapke liye ready kar doongi. Isme kuch bhi pareshaani wali baat nahin hai..; bas aapko hume bhi apna thoda aashirvaad dena hoga haha~"
Avantika ne utsaah se kaha.
Dadi Manav ki or mudi. Wo abhi bhi jhijhak rahi thi.
Idhar Avantika ke suggestion ko sunkar Manav khud duvidha me tha. Ek taraf, wo Sani ki family ko uski dadi ki kaaran pareshaan nahi karna chaahta tha.
To doosri or, wo ye bhi chaahta tha ki Hospital se discharge hone ke baad uski dadi ko achchi dekhbhaal mile . Woh chaahta tha ki dadi jald se jald theek ho jaye taaki itne budhape me unhe jyaada takleef na uthani pade.
Shyamu kaka khud 45+ saal ke prodh the, aur iss umr ke chalte ve dadi ki sehat se judi bahut si cheejon ko ignore kar sakte the. Agar dadi hospital se wapas seedha cottage jaati hai to ye Manav ke liye badi chinta wali baat hogi.
Isliye, current situation ka achchi tarah se analysis karne ke baad Manav ne kaha,
Manav : "Mom.. dad.. next week tak aa payenge.. to, dadi ke liye better hoga ki ve mom-dad ke aane tak aunty ke saath rahen..
Dadi.. ! dad ke aane ke baad apan wapas cottage me chalenge, "
Manav (man me) "Humen Sani ki family ka ye favour return karna hoga.. unhone jaroorat ke samay me dadi par apna money, time aur energy kharch ki hai..
Ye achchi baat hai ki Sani abhi chhoti hai! mai dad se keh dunga ki jab wo Sani ki family se mile to Sani ko gift ke roop me ₹ 70,000 - ₹ 80,000 ka ek envelope de dein. Itna amount gratitude express karne aur aunty ko repay karne ke liye kaafi hona chahiye. "
Apne pote ki baatein sunkar dadi ne aakhirkaar apna man bana liya. Unhone embarrass hote hue Avantika se kaha,
Dadi : "..ehh... apko pareshaan karne ke liye very sorry ..."
Dadi ke khyalaat bhi Manav ke jaise the. Manav ke pita ke wapas aane ke baad dadi, Saanvi ke parivaar ko laakho baar dhanyavaad dena chaahti thi.
Avantika : “Koi pareshani nahi hai aunty~ ab aap thoda rest kariye! sabse pehle to mai.. kal subah aapko lene ke liye ek car bhej deti hoon, "
Avantika khushi se hansi. Fir weh uth khadi hui aur dadi ko pranaam kiya. Phir usne apne haath se Saanvi ko chalne ka ishara kiya.
Apni mom ka ishara paate hi Saanvi ne school bag ko apni peeth par tang liya aur dadi se girly tone me kaha,
Saanvi : "Bye, dadi~ !"
Jaise hi donon room se baahar nikli to, dadi ne aah bhari,
Dadi : "Tum vaastav me ek ache parivaar ke sampark me aaye ho, Manu! "
Agli subah, Manav ki dadi ki condition check karne ke baad, doctor ne pushti kar di ke ab sab kuch theek hai.
Fir doctor ne Manav ko patient discharging process poora karne ke liye kaha.
Baharhaal sab kuch niptane ke baad, Manav ne apni dadi ko support dete hue pakad liya aur unhen Hospital se baahar nikalne me help karne laga---
dadi abhi bhi kamjor thi.
Ek Black Stretch Lincoln Limousine **(Update 11)** pehle se hi baahar intjaar kar rahi thi;
Limousine, entrance gate se kareeb 5 meter ki doori par khadi thi.
Update yahi tak
🄻🄸🄺🄴
🄲🄾🄼🄼🄴🄽🅃
Kuch dinon ke baad fir milenge
To be continued.....
Shaandar update
Awesome update bhai•°UPDATE 53•°
Recap -
Iss mudde par Avantika ko itna polite dekhkar, dadi ko theek nahi laga aur isliye unhone dohraaya,
"nahi, nahi, nahi ... aisa thode hota hai! "
Avantika : “Auntie! please mere saath stranger jaisa vyavahaar na karen.. hum ek family hai...,"
"Ek family?"
Dadi ne Avantika ko asamanjas me dekha.
Manav ko to aisa laga jaise uska dil baahar uchak kar floor par gir gaya ho!
AB AAGE :-
Manav ki dadi ke chehre par chhayi uljhan ko dekhkar, Avantika samjhaya,
Avantika : "Ji wo mera matlab hai, Manu humari Sani ko padha raha hai, aur.. hum aapas me ek family ki tarah ghul-mil gaye hain.."
"Hehe,"
Dadi is explanation par khushi se hansi aur kaha,
"Haan.., mai dekh sakti hoon.. Manu aur Sani ki achchhi bonding ban gayi hai"
Dadi ke itna bolti hi turant Saanvi ke chehre par sharm ki halki laali chha gayi. Usne bahut hi dheemi awaaj me khud ko defend kiya,
Saanvi (bahut dheere se) ; "Huh.. kisne kaha ki meri uske saath achchi bonding hain ..."
Avantika : "Maine abhi Doctor se puchha, aur.. unhone bataya ki, ek aur din ki observation ke baad agar sab kuch theek rehta hai, to aap ghar ja sakti hai,"
"Apka bahut-bahut dhanywaad!
Dadi ne jor diya.
Unhe naa maanta dekhkar, Avantika ne aur behas karna theek nahi samjha. Isliye, usne anichchha se haami me apna sar hilaaya,
Avantika : "Okay ..."
Saanvi : "Mumma, aaj to aapke studio me Philippe Starck aane wale the na? mujhe laga.. ki aap unke saath dinner karne ke baad hi wapas aa paogi "
Avantika : "Maine unhe studio ka creative center dikha diya hai. Lekin.. chunki Manav dadi bimaar hain, to maine yahan aane ke liye humare dinner arrangements cancel kar diye,"
Manav ko yeh jaankar bahut achcha laga ki auntie ne apne kaam ki bajaay uski dadi ko prathmikta di. Halaanki, use iss baat ka andaaja nahi tha ki Philippe Starck ek world famous designer tha, jisne world ke sabse bade soccer stadium ke saath-saath duniya ki kaayi famous hotels ke architecture par bhi kaam kiya tha. France ke former President Francois Mitterrand ke ghar ko bhi bhi Philippe Starck ne design kiya tha.
Hospital me admit Manav ki dadi ko dekhne ke liye Avantika ne kisi aam insaan ke saath dinner karna cancel nahi kiya tha.
Ab kyuki wo yahan thi, to jaahir tha ki woh Manav ki dadi ke saath kuch der baat- cheet kiye bina to jaane se rahi..
Halaanki, wo abhi bhi apne business attire me thi, lekin phir bhi woh, ek samajhdaar patni aur apni bachchi ko beinteha pyaar karne wali maa thi... jiska vyaktitva behad down to earth tha.
Uski sanjeeda & lagaav se bhari baatcheet aur smart prati-uttaron ne, Manav ki dadi ke saath taal mel baithaneme bahut madad ki.
Avantika ki baaton se impress hote hue dadi man hi man apni khud ki bahu se thoda naakhush thi. Har samay apne kaam me busy hone ki wajah se Manav ki maa, naa to Manav par aur naa hi apne parivaar par utna dhyaan de pati thi.
Isliye, jab dadi ko pata chala ki Avantika - ek professional hone ke baavjood, na kewal ghar ke sabhi kaamon nipun thi balki apne pariwaar ki dekhbhaal bhi bahut achche se rakh rahi thi.., ab to dadi Avantika ko aur bhi jyada pasand karne lagi thi.
Unki baatcheet ke dauraan, Avantika ne puchha,
Avantika : "Auntie, aapke liye beach house me rehna bada inconvenient rehta hoga.. aap.. main city me shift kyon nahi ho jaate?
Dadi : "Manu ke dad ka kehna ki beach par taazi hawa hoti hai, isliye usne wahin par ek cottage le liya tha. Pehle, hum city me hi rehte the lekin humne wo ghar kayi saal pehle bech diya. . "
Avantika : "Aap itni senior hai.. aunty. .. to aapke liye wahan akele rehna safe nahi hai. Kal jab aapka blood pressure badha.. to Manu bahut jyada ghabra gaya tha. Mujhe lagta hai ki.. agar aap main city me reh rahi hoti to kal Manu ke liye mushkilen itni nahi badhti.. "
Dadi, Avantika ke tark se kuch had tak sehmat thi. Unhone Manav ke chehre ki or dekha aur kalpna ki kal raat wo kitna pareshaan ho gaya hoga...
Avantika ne bolna jaari rakha,
" Kaisa rahega agar aap recover hone tak humare saath rahe..?"
Side me khada Manav , jo aunty aur dadi ke beech ho rahi baatcheet ko sun raha tha, Avantika ke suggestion ko sunte hi wo tention me aa gaya,
Manav (man me ) : "Dadi.. Sani ke ghar me rahe..? iska kya matlab hai..?"
".. iski.. jaroorat nahi hai beta ji! "
Dadi ne jhat se naa me haath hilaaya aur aage kaha,
"Mujhe beach par akele rehne ki aadat ho gayi hai. Mai wahin theek hoon.. hehe. Saath hi, Manu ke parents bhi next week wapas aa rahe hai, to. . mai unki dekhbhaal se jaldi recover ho jaungi.., "
"Next week ?"
Avantika ki aankhein chamak uthi.
Dadi : "Haan, agle Wednesday ko unhe aa jana chaahiye. Mai Manu ke dad se kahungi ki, meri jaan bachane ke liye aapka acha se shukriya ada kare aur.. aapki family ko lunch ya dinner ke liye bhi invite kare,"
Avantika : "Hehe ~ please aap itna pareshaan mat hohiye... waise bhi hum to ek hi family hai,"
Avantika ne dubara ullekh kiya ki ve sab ek hi parivaar the.
Halaanki, usne jald hi aage kaha,
Avantika : "Lekin.. lunch ya dinner ke bahane hi sahi, hum sabka milna bhi ho jayega.. ye bahut achcha rahega hehe"
Aur..
Ab Manav ka dil baith gaya. Use laga jaise wo abhi-abhi kisi jaal me phans gaya ho.
Bhale hi uski dadi shaheer se healthy dikhti thi lekin, unhe severe high blood pressure ki samasya thi. Halaanki, yah ek nirvivaad fact tha ki Avantika ne is baar.. Manav ki family par bahut bada ehsaan kiya tha.
"Badhiya! Manu ke dad ke wapas aane par mai use koi accha sa venue reserve karne ko kahungi.. taaki hum apna aabhaar vyakt kar saken!"
Dadi ne bade utsaah se kaha.
Avantika ne hanste hue, haath se apna muh dhak liya
Waise woh jaanta tha ki, bhale hi dadi ke saath ye ghatna na hui hoti lekin fir bhi, future me donon families ka milna to nishchit hi tha...
For example :
Rajyavardhan : 'Shaurya Group' **(update 7 )** ke CEO ke roop me, Manav ke maata - pita ke projects me invest karke ya fir unke projects ko sponsor karke, bade araam se Manav ke maata - pita se mil sakta tha.
"Chunki ab hum ek family hain.. to,"
Mauke par chauka maarte hue Avantika ne aage kaha,
"Aap.. kuch dinon ke liye humare saath reh sakte hain.. aur Manu ke parents ke wapas aane se pehle hi, poori tarah recover ho sakte hain..
Recover hone ke baad, hum aapko wapas aapke cottage le jayenge. Plus, humara ghar Manu ki university ke bahut paas hain. . aur Manu.. daily Sani ko padhane bhi aata hai. To.. aap log ek doosre se, cottage ke comparison me jyada baar mil bhi paoge.
Hehe~ eh kitna acha rahega na auntie~ !
Avantika ke in shabdon se dadi poori tarah sehmat thi, lekin.. woh abhi bhi jhijhak rahi thi,
Dadi : "yeh ... isme aapko bahut jyada pareshaani hogi....." ;
"Not at all~ aunty! humare paas ek extra room hai, aur.. mai ghar wapas jaate hi unn room ko aapke liye ready kar doongi. Isme kuch bhi pareshaani wali baat nahin hai..; bas aapko hume bhi apna thoda aashirvaad dena hoga haha~"
Avantika ne utsaah se kaha.
Dadi Manav ki or mudi. Wo abhi bhi jhijhak rahi thi.
Idhar Avantika ke suggestion ko sunkar Manav khud duvidha me tha. Ek taraf, wo Sani ki family ko uski dadi ki kaaran pareshaan nahi karna chaahta tha.
To doosri or, wo ye bhi chaahta tha ki Hospital se discharge hone ke baad uski dadi ko achchi dekhbhaal mile . Woh chaahta tha ki dadi jald se jald theek ho jaye taaki itne budhape me unhe jyaada takleef na uthani pade.
Shyamu kaka khud 45+ saal ke prodh the, aur iss umr ke chalte ve dadi ki sehat se judi bahut si cheejon ko ignore kar sakte the. Agar dadi hospital se wapas seedha cottage jaati hai to ye Manav ke liye badi chinta wali baat hogi.
Isliye, current situation ka achchi tarah se analysis karne ke baad Manav ne kaha,
Manav : "Mom.. dad.. next week tak aa payenge.. to, dadi ke liye better hoga ki ve mom-dad ke aane tak aunty ke saath rahen..
Dadi.. ! dad ke aane ke baad apan wapas cottage me chalenge, "
Manav (man me) "Humen Sani ki family ka ye favour return karna hoga.. unhone jaroorat ke samay me dadi par apna money, time aur energy kharch ki hai..
Ye achchi baat hai ki Sani abhi chhoti hai! mai dad se keh dunga ki jab wo Sani ki family se mile to Sani ko gift ke roop me ₹ 70,000 - ₹ 80,000 ka ek envelope de dein. Itna amount gratitude express karne aur aunty ko repay karne ke liye kaafi hona chahiye. "
Apne pote ki baatein sunkar dadi ne aakhirkaar apna man bana liya. Unhone embarrass hote hue Avantika se kaha,
Dadi : "..ehh... apko pareshaan karne ke liye very sorry ..."
Dadi ke khyalaat bhi Manav ke jaise the. Manav ke pita ke wapas aane ke baad dadi, Saanvi ke parivaar ko laakho baar dhanyavaad dena chaahti thi.
Avantika : “Koi pareshani nahi hai aunty~ ab aap thoda rest kariye! sabse pehle to mai.. kal subah aapko lene ke liye ek car bhej deti hoon, "
Avantika khushi se hansi. Fir weh uth khadi hui aur dadi ko pranaam kiya. Phir usne apne haath se Saanvi ko chalne ka ishara kiya.
Apni mom ka ishara paate hi Saanvi ne school bag ko apni peeth par tang liya aur dadi se girly tone me kaha,
Saanvi : "Bye, dadi~ !"
Jaise hi donon room se baahar nikli to, dadi ne aah bhari,
Dadi : "Tum vaastav me ek ache parivaar ke sampark me aaye ho, Manu! "
Agli subah, Manav ki dadi ki condition check karne ke baad, doctor ne pushti kar di ke ab sab kuch theek hai.
Fir doctor ne Manav ko patient discharging process poora karne ke liye kaha.
Baharhaal sab kuch niptane ke baad, Manav ne apni dadi ko support dete hue pakad liya aur unhen Hospital se baahar nikalne me help karne laga---
dadi abhi bhi kamjor thi.
Ek Black Stretch Lincoln Limousine **(Update 11)** pehle se hi baahar intjaar kar rahi thi;
Limousine, entrance gate se kareeb 5 meter ki doori par khadi thi.
Update yahi tak
🄻🄸🄺🄴
🄲🄾🄼🄼🄴🄽🅃
Kuch dinon ke baad fir milenge
To be continued.....
Kamal ka update•°UPDATE 53•°
Recap -
Iss mudde par Avantika ko itna polite dekhkar, dadi ko theek nahi laga aur isliye unhone dohraaya,
"nahi, nahi, nahi ... aisa thode hota hai! "
Avantika : “Auntie! please mere saath stranger jaisa vyavahaar na karen.. hum ek family hai...,"
"Ek family?"
Dadi ne Avantika ko asamanjas me dekha.
Manav ko to aisa laga jaise uska dil baahar uchak kar floor par gir gaya ho!
AB AAGE :-
Manav ki dadi ke chehre par chhayi uljhan ko dekhkar, Avantika samjhaya,
Avantika : "Ji wo mera matlab hai, Manu humari Sani ko padha raha hai, aur.. hum aapas me ek family ki tarah ghul-mil gaye hain.."
"Hehe,"
Dadi is explanation par khushi se hansi aur kaha,
"Haan.., mai dekh sakti hoon.. Manu aur Sani ki achchhi bonding ban gayi hai"
Dadi ke itna bolti hi turant Saanvi ke chehre par sharm ki halki laali chha gayi. Usne bahut hi dheemi awaaj me khud ko defend kiya,
Saanvi (bahut dheere se) ; "Huh.. kisne kaha ki meri uske saath achchi bonding hain ..."
Avantika : "Maine abhi Doctor se puchha, aur.. unhone bataya ki, ek aur din ki observation ke baad agar sab kuch theek rehta hai, to aap ghar ja sakti hai,"
"Apka bahut-bahut dhanywaad!
Dadi ne jor diya.
Unhe naa maanta dekhkar, Avantika ne aur behas karna theek nahi samjha. Isliye, usne anichchha se haami me apna sar hilaaya,
Avantika : "Okay ..."
Saanvi : "Mumma, aaj to aapke studio me Philippe Starck aane wale the na? mujhe laga.. ki aap unke saath dinner karne ke baad hi wapas aa paogi "
Avantika : "Maine unhe studio ka creative center dikha diya hai. Lekin.. chunki Manav dadi bimaar hain, to maine yahan aane ke liye humare dinner arrangements cancel kar diye,"
Manav ko yeh jaankar bahut achcha laga ki auntie ne apne kaam ki bajaay uski dadi ko prathmikta di. Halaanki, use iss baat ka andaaja nahi tha ki Philippe Starck ek world famous designer tha, jisne world ke sabse bade soccer stadium ke saath-saath duniya ki kaayi famous hotels ke architecture par bhi kaam kiya tha. France ke former President Francois Mitterrand ke ghar ko bhi bhi Philippe Starck ne design kiya tha.
Hospital me admit Manav ki dadi ko dekhne ke liye Avantika ne kisi aam insaan ke saath dinner karna cancel nahi kiya tha.
Ab kyuki wo yahan thi, to jaahir tha ki woh Manav ki dadi ke saath kuch der baat- cheet kiye bina to jaane se rahi..
Halaanki, wo abhi bhi apne business attire me thi, lekin phir bhi woh, ek samajhdaar patni aur apni bachchi ko beinteha pyaar karne wali maa thi... jiska vyaktitva behad down to earth tha.
Uski sanjeeda & lagaav se bhari baatcheet aur smart prati-uttaron ne, Manav ki dadi ke saath taal mel baithaneme bahut madad ki.
Avantika ki baaton se impress hote hue dadi man hi man apni khud ki bahu se thoda naakhush thi. Har samay apne kaam me busy hone ki wajah se Manav ki maa, naa to Manav par aur naa hi apne parivaar par utna dhyaan de pati thi.
Isliye, jab dadi ko pata chala ki Avantika - ek professional hone ke baavjood, na kewal ghar ke sabhi kaamon nipun thi balki apne pariwaar ki dekhbhaal bhi bahut achche se rakh rahi thi.., ab to dadi Avantika ko aur bhi jyada pasand karne lagi thi.
Unki baatcheet ke dauraan, Avantika ne puchha,
Avantika : "Auntie, aapke liye beach house me rehna bada inconvenient rehta hoga.. aap.. main city me shift kyon nahi ho jaate?
Dadi : "Manu ke dad ka kehna ki beach par taazi hawa hoti hai, isliye usne wahin par ek cottage le liya tha. Pehle, hum city me hi rehte the lekin humne wo ghar kayi saal pehle bech diya. . "
Avantika : "Aap itni senior hai.. aunty. .. to aapke liye wahan akele rehna safe nahi hai. Kal jab aapka blood pressure badha.. to Manu bahut jyada ghabra gaya tha. Mujhe lagta hai ki.. agar aap main city me reh rahi hoti to kal Manu ke liye mushkilen itni nahi badhti.. "
Dadi, Avantika ke tark se kuch had tak sehmat thi. Unhone Manav ke chehre ki or dekha aur kalpna ki kal raat wo kitna pareshaan ho gaya hoga...
Avantika ne bolna jaari rakha,
" Kaisa rahega agar aap recover hone tak humare saath rahe..?"
Side me khada Manav , jo aunty aur dadi ke beech ho rahi baatcheet ko sun raha tha, Avantika ke suggestion ko sunte hi wo tention me aa gaya,
Manav (man me ) : "Dadi.. Sani ke ghar me rahe..? iska kya matlab hai..?"
".. iski.. jaroorat nahi hai beta ji! "
Dadi ne jhat se naa me haath hilaaya aur aage kaha,
"Mujhe beach par akele rehne ki aadat ho gayi hai. Mai wahin theek hoon.. hehe. Saath hi, Manu ke parents bhi next week wapas aa rahe hai, to. . mai unki dekhbhaal se jaldi recover ho jaungi.., "
"Next week ?"
Avantika ki aankhein chamak uthi.
Dadi : "Haan, agle Wednesday ko unhe aa jana chaahiye. Mai Manu ke dad se kahungi ki, meri jaan bachane ke liye aapka acha se shukriya ada kare aur.. aapki family ko lunch ya dinner ke liye bhi invite kare,"
Avantika : "Hehe ~ please aap itna pareshaan mat hohiye... waise bhi hum to ek hi family hai,"
Avantika ne dubara ullekh kiya ki ve sab ek hi parivaar the.
Halaanki, usne jald hi aage kaha,
Avantika : "Lekin.. lunch ya dinner ke bahane hi sahi, hum sabka milna bhi ho jayega.. ye bahut achcha rahega hehe"
Aur..
Ab Manav ka dil baith gaya. Use laga jaise wo abhi-abhi kisi jaal me phans gaya ho.
Bhale hi uski dadi shaheer se healthy dikhti thi lekin, unhe severe high blood pressure ki samasya thi. Halaanki, yah ek nirvivaad fact tha ki Avantika ne is baar.. Manav ki family par bahut bada ehsaan kiya tha.
"Badhiya! Manu ke dad ke wapas aane par mai use koi accha sa venue reserve karne ko kahungi.. taaki hum apna aabhaar vyakt kar saken!"
Dadi ne bade utsaah se kaha.
Avantika ne hanste hue, haath se apna muh dhak liya
Waise woh jaanta tha ki, bhale hi dadi ke saath ye ghatna na hui hoti lekin fir bhi, future me donon families ka milna to nishchit hi tha...
For example :
Rajyavardhan : 'Shaurya Group' **(update 7 )** ke CEO ke roop me, Manav ke maata - pita ke projects me invest karke ya fir unke projects ko sponsor karke, bade araam se Manav ke maata - pita se mil sakta tha.
"Chunki ab hum ek family hain.. to,"
Mauke par chauka maarte hue Avantika ne aage kaha,
"Aap.. kuch dinon ke liye humare saath reh sakte hain.. aur Manu ke parents ke wapas aane se pehle hi, poori tarah recover ho sakte hain..
Recover hone ke baad, hum aapko wapas aapke cottage le jayenge. Plus, humara ghar Manu ki university ke bahut paas hain. . aur Manu.. daily Sani ko padhane bhi aata hai. To.. aap log ek doosre se, cottage ke comparison me jyada baar mil bhi paoge.
Hehe~ eh kitna acha rahega na auntie~ !
Avantika ke in shabdon se dadi poori tarah sehmat thi, lekin.. woh abhi bhi jhijhak rahi thi,
Dadi : "yeh ... isme aapko bahut jyada pareshaani hogi....." ;
"Not at all~ aunty! humare paas ek extra room hai, aur.. mai ghar wapas jaate hi unn room ko aapke liye ready kar doongi. Isme kuch bhi pareshaani wali baat nahin hai..; bas aapko hume bhi apna thoda aashirvaad dena hoga haha~"
Avantika ne utsaah se kaha.
Dadi Manav ki or mudi. Wo abhi bhi jhijhak rahi thi.
Idhar Avantika ke suggestion ko sunkar Manav khud duvidha me tha. Ek taraf, wo Sani ki family ko uski dadi ki kaaran pareshaan nahi karna chaahta tha.
To doosri or, wo ye bhi chaahta tha ki Hospital se discharge hone ke baad uski dadi ko achchi dekhbhaal mile . Woh chaahta tha ki dadi jald se jald theek ho jaye taaki itne budhape me unhe jyaada takleef na uthani pade.
Shyamu kaka khud 45+ saal ke prodh the, aur iss umr ke chalte ve dadi ki sehat se judi bahut si cheejon ko ignore kar sakte the. Agar dadi hospital se wapas seedha cottage jaati hai to ye Manav ke liye badi chinta wali baat hogi.
Isliye, current situation ka achchi tarah se analysis karne ke baad Manav ne kaha,
Manav : "Mom.. dad.. next week tak aa payenge.. to, dadi ke liye better hoga ki ve mom-dad ke aane tak aunty ke saath rahen..
Dadi.. ! dad ke aane ke baad apan wapas cottage me chalenge, "
Manav (man me) "Humen Sani ki family ka ye favour return karna hoga.. unhone jaroorat ke samay me dadi par apna money, time aur energy kharch ki hai..
Ye achchi baat hai ki Sani abhi chhoti hai! mai dad se keh dunga ki jab wo Sani ki family se mile to Sani ko gift ke roop me ₹ 70,000 - ₹ 80,000 ka ek envelope de dein. Itna amount gratitude express karne aur aunty ko repay karne ke liye kaafi hona chahiye. "
Apne pote ki baatein sunkar dadi ne aakhirkaar apna man bana liya. Unhone embarrass hote hue Avantika se kaha,
Dadi : "..ehh... apko pareshaan karne ke liye very sorry ..."
Dadi ke khyalaat bhi Manav ke jaise the. Manav ke pita ke wapas aane ke baad dadi, Saanvi ke parivaar ko laakho baar dhanyavaad dena chaahti thi.
Avantika : “Koi pareshani nahi hai aunty~ ab aap thoda rest kariye! sabse pehle to mai.. kal subah aapko lene ke liye ek car bhej deti hoon, "
Avantika khushi se hansi. Fir weh uth khadi hui aur dadi ko pranaam kiya. Phir usne apne haath se Saanvi ko chalne ka ishara kiya.
Apni mom ka ishara paate hi Saanvi ne school bag ko apni peeth par tang liya aur dadi se girly tone me kaha,
Saanvi : "Bye, dadi~ !"
Jaise hi donon room se baahar nikli to, dadi ne aah bhari,
Dadi : "Tum vaastav me ek ache parivaar ke sampark me aaye ho, Manu! "
Agli subah, Manav ki dadi ki condition check karne ke baad, doctor ne pushti kar di ke ab sab kuch theek hai.
Fir doctor ne Manav ko patient discharging process poora karne ke liye kaha.
Baharhaal sab kuch niptane ke baad, Manav ne apni dadi ko support dete hue pakad liya aur unhen Hospital se baahar nikalne me help karne laga---
dadi abhi bhi kamjor thi.
Ek Black Stretch Lincoln Limousine **(Update 11)** pehle se hi baahar intjaar kar rahi thi;
Limousine, entrance gate se kareeb 5 meter ki doori par khadi thi.
Update yahi tak
🄻🄸🄺🄴
🄲🄾🄼🄼🄴🄽🅃
Kuch dinon ke baad fir milenge
To be continued.....
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Amazing update•°UPDATE 53•°
Recap -
Iss mudde par Avantika ko itna polite dekhkar, dadi ko theek nahi laga aur isliye unhone dohraaya,
"nahi, nahi, nahi ... aisa thode hota hai! "
Avantika : “Auntie! please mere saath stranger jaisa vyavahaar na karen.. hum ek family hai...,"
"Ek family?"
Dadi ne Avantika ko asamanjas me dekha.
Manav ko to aisa laga jaise uska dil baahar uchak kar floor par gir gaya ho!
AB AAGE :-
Manav ki dadi ke chehre par chhayi uljhan ko dekhkar, Avantika samjhaya,
Avantika : "Ji wo mera matlab hai, Manu humari Sani ko padha raha hai, aur.. hum aapas me ek family ki tarah ghul-mil gaye hain.."
"Hehe,"
Dadi is explanation par khushi se hansi aur kaha,
"Haan.., mai dekh sakti hoon.. Manu aur Sani ki achchhi bonding ban gayi hai"
Dadi ke itna bolti hi turant Saanvi ke chehre par sharm ki halki laali chha gayi. Usne bahut hi dheemi awaaj me khud ko defend kiya,
Saanvi (bahut dheere se) ; "Huh.. kisne kaha ki meri uske saath achchi bonding hain ..."
Avantika : "Maine abhi Doctor se puchha, aur.. unhone bataya ki, ek aur din ki observation ke baad agar sab kuch theek rehta hai, to aap ghar ja sakti hai,"
"Apka bahut-bahut dhanywaad!
Dadi ne jor diya.
Unhe naa maanta dekhkar, Avantika ne aur behas karna theek nahi samjha. Isliye, usne anichchha se haami me apna sar hilaaya,
Avantika : "Okay ..."
Saanvi : "Mumma, aaj to aapke studio me Philippe Starck aane wale the na? mujhe laga.. ki aap unke saath dinner karne ke baad hi wapas aa paogi "
Avantika : "Maine unhe studio ka creative center dikha diya hai. Lekin.. chunki Manav dadi bimaar hain, to maine yahan aane ke liye humare dinner arrangements cancel kar diye,"
Manav ko yeh jaankar bahut achcha laga ki auntie ne apne kaam ki bajaay uski dadi ko prathmikta di. Halaanki, use iss baat ka andaaja nahi tha ki Philippe Starck ek world famous designer tha, jisne world ke sabse bade soccer stadium ke saath-saath duniya ki kaayi famous hotels ke architecture par bhi kaam kiya tha. France ke former President Francois Mitterrand ke ghar ko bhi bhi Philippe Starck ne design kiya tha.
Hospital me admit Manav ki dadi ko dekhne ke liye Avantika ne kisi aam insaan ke saath dinner karna cancel nahi kiya tha.
Ab kyuki wo yahan thi, to jaahir tha ki woh Manav ki dadi ke saath kuch der baat- cheet kiye bina to jaane se rahi..
Halaanki, wo abhi bhi apne business attire me thi, lekin phir bhi woh, ek samajhdaar patni aur apni bachchi ko beinteha pyaar karne wali maa thi... jiska vyaktitva behad down to earth tha.
Uski sanjeeda & lagaav se bhari baatcheet aur smart prati-uttaron ne, Manav ki dadi ke saath taal mel baithaneme bahut madad ki.
Avantika ki baaton se impress hote hue dadi man hi man apni khud ki bahu se thoda naakhush thi. Har samay apne kaam me busy hone ki wajah se Manav ki maa, naa to Manav par aur naa hi apne parivaar par utna dhyaan de pati thi.
Isliye, jab dadi ko pata chala ki Avantika - ek professional hone ke baavjood, na kewal ghar ke sabhi kaamon nipun thi balki apne pariwaar ki dekhbhaal bhi bahut achche se rakh rahi thi.., ab to dadi Avantika ko aur bhi jyada pasand karne lagi thi.
Unki baatcheet ke dauraan, Avantika ne puchha,
Avantika : "Auntie, aapke liye beach house me rehna bada inconvenient rehta hoga.. aap.. main city me shift kyon nahi ho jaate?
Dadi : "Manu ke dad ka kehna ki beach par taazi hawa hoti hai, isliye usne wahin par ek cottage le liya tha. Pehle, hum city me hi rehte the lekin humne wo ghar kayi saal pehle bech diya. . "
Avantika : "Aap itni senior hai.. aunty. .. to aapke liye wahan akele rehna safe nahi hai. Kal jab aapka blood pressure badha.. to Manu bahut jyada ghabra gaya tha. Mujhe lagta hai ki.. agar aap main city me reh rahi hoti to kal Manu ke liye mushkilen itni nahi badhti.. "
Dadi, Avantika ke tark se kuch had tak sehmat thi. Unhone Manav ke chehre ki or dekha aur kalpna ki kal raat wo kitna pareshaan ho gaya hoga...
Avantika ne bolna jaari rakha,
" Kaisa rahega agar aap recover hone tak humare saath rahe..?"
Side me khada Manav , jo aunty aur dadi ke beech ho rahi baatcheet ko sun raha tha, Avantika ke suggestion ko sunte hi wo tention me aa gaya,
Manav (man me ) : "Dadi.. Sani ke ghar me rahe..? iska kya matlab hai..?"
".. iski.. jaroorat nahi hai beta ji! "
Dadi ne jhat se naa me haath hilaaya aur aage kaha,
"Mujhe beach par akele rehne ki aadat ho gayi hai. Mai wahin theek hoon.. hehe. Saath hi, Manu ke parents bhi next week wapas aa rahe hai, to. . mai unki dekhbhaal se jaldi recover ho jaungi.., "
"Next week ?"
Avantika ki aankhein chamak uthi.
Dadi : "Haan, agle Wednesday ko unhe aa jana chaahiye. Mai Manu ke dad se kahungi ki, meri jaan bachane ke liye aapka acha se shukriya ada kare aur.. aapki family ko lunch ya dinner ke liye bhi invite kare,"
Avantika : "Hehe ~ please aap itna pareshaan mat hohiye... waise bhi hum to ek hi family hai,"
Avantika ne dubara ullekh kiya ki ve sab ek hi parivaar the.
Halaanki, usne jald hi aage kaha,
Avantika : "Lekin.. lunch ya dinner ke bahane hi sahi, hum sabka milna bhi ho jayega.. ye bahut achcha rahega hehe"
Aur..
Ab Manav ka dil baith gaya. Use laga jaise wo abhi-abhi kisi jaal me phans gaya ho.
Bhale hi uski dadi shaheer se healthy dikhti thi lekin, unhe severe high blood pressure ki samasya thi. Halaanki, yah ek nirvivaad fact tha ki Avantika ne is baar.. Manav ki family par bahut bada ehsaan kiya tha.
"Badhiya! Manu ke dad ke wapas aane par mai use koi accha sa venue reserve karne ko kahungi.. taaki hum apna aabhaar vyakt kar saken!"
Dadi ne bade utsaah se kaha.
Avantika ne hanste hue, haath se apna muh dhak liya
Waise woh jaanta tha ki, bhale hi dadi ke saath ye ghatna na hui hoti lekin fir bhi, future me donon families ka milna to nishchit hi tha...
For example :
Rajyavardhan : 'Shaurya Group' **(update 7 )** ke CEO ke roop me, Manav ke maata - pita ke projects me invest karke ya fir unke projects ko sponsor karke, bade araam se Manav ke maata - pita se mil sakta tha.
"Chunki ab hum ek family hain.. to,"
Mauke par chauka maarte hue Avantika ne aage kaha,
"Aap.. kuch dinon ke liye humare saath reh sakte hain.. aur Manu ke parents ke wapas aane se pehle hi, poori tarah recover ho sakte hain..
Recover hone ke baad, hum aapko wapas aapke cottage le jayenge. Plus, humara ghar Manu ki university ke bahut paas hain. . aur Manu.. daily Sani ko padhane bhi aata hai. To.. aap log ek doosre se, cottage ke comparison me jyada baar mil bhi paoge.
Hehe~ eh kitna acha rahega na auntie~ !
Avantika ke in shabdon se dadi poori tarah sehmat thi, lekin.. woh abhi bhi jhijhak rahi thi,
Dadi : "yeh ... isme aapko bahut jyada pareshaani hogi....." ;
"Not at all~ aunty! humare paas ek extra room hai, aur.. mai ghar wapas jaate hi unn room ko aapke liye ready kar doongi. Isme kuch bhi pareshaani wali baat nahin hai..; bas aapko hume bhi apna thoda aashirvaad dena hoga haha~"
Avantika ne utsaah se kaha.
Dadi Manav ki or mudi. Wo abhi bhi jhijhak rahi thi.
Idhar Avantika ke suggestion ko sunkar Manav khud duvidha me tha. Ek taraf, wo Sani ki family ko uski dadi ki kaaran pareshaan nahi karna chaahta tha.
To doosri or, wo ye bhi chaahta tha ki Hospital se discharge hone ke baad uski dadi ko achchi dekhbhaal mile . Woh chaahta tha ki dadi jald se jald theek ho jaye taaki itne budhape me unhe jyaada takleef na uthani pade.
Shyamu kaka khud 45+ saal ke prodh the, aur iss umr ke chalte ve dadi ki sehat se judi bahut si cheejon ko ignore kar sakte the. Agar dadi hospital se wapas seedha cottage jaati hai to ye Manav ke liye badi chinta wali baat hogi.
Isliye, current situation ka achchi tarah se analysis karne ke baad Manav ne kaha,
Manav : "Mom.. dad.. next week tak aa payenge.. to, dadi ke liye better hoga ki ve mom-dad ke aane tak aunty ke saath rahen..
Dadi.. ! dad ke aane ke baad apan wapas cottage me chalenge, "
Manav (man me) "Humen Sani ki family ka ye favour return karna hoga.. unhone jaroorat ke samay me dadi par apna money, time aur energy kharch ki hai..
Ye achchi baat hai ki Sani abhi chhoti hai! mai dad se keh dunga ki jab wo Sani ki family se mile to Sani ko gift ke roop me ₹ 70,000 - ₹ 80,000 ka ek envelope de dein. Itna amount gratitude express karne aur aunty ko repay karne ke liye kaafi hona chahiye. "
Apne pote ki baatein sunkar dadi ne aakhirkaar apna man bana liya. Unhone embarrass hote hue Avantika se kaha,
Dadi : "..ehh... apko pareshaan karne ke liye very sorry ..."
Dadi ke khyalaat bhi Manav ke jaise the. Manav ke pita ke wapas aane ke baad dadi, Saanvi ke parivaar ko laakho baar dhanyavaad dena chaahti thi.
Avantika : “Koi pareshani nahi hai aunty~ ab aap thoda rest kariye! sabse pehle to mai.. kal subah aapko lene ke liye ek car bhej deti hoon, "
Avantika khushi se hansi. Fir weh uth khadi hui aur dadi ko pranaam kiya. Phir usne apne haath se Saanvi ko chalne ka ishara kiya.
Apni mom ka ishara paate hi Saanvi ne school bag ko apni peeth par tang liya aur dadi se girly tone me kaha,
Saanvi : "Bye, dadi~ !"
Jaise hi donon room se baahar nikli to, dadi ne aah bhari,
Dadi : "Tum vaastav me ek ache parivaar ke sampark me aaye ho, Manu! "
Agli subah, Manav ki dadi ki condition check karne ke baad, doctor ne pushti kar di ke ab sab kuch theek hai.
Fir doctor ne Manav ko patient discharging process poora karne ke liye kaha.
Baharhaal sab kuch niptane ke baad, Manav ne apni dadi ko support dete hue pakad liya aur unhen Hospital se baahar nikalne me help karne laga---
dadi abhi bhi kamjor thi.
Ek Black Stretch Lincoln Limousine **(Update 11)** pehle se hi baahar intjaar kar rahi thi;
Limousine, entrance gate se kareeb 5 meter ki doori par khadi thi.
Update yahi tak
🄻🄸🄺🄴
🄲🄾🄼🄼🄴🄽🅃
Kuch dinon ke baad fir milenge
To be continued.....
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