Fantasy Mahagatha - Sadhna, Sadhak, Shaktiya aur dragons

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Maza agaya

manav ki maa ne toh aag he laga di apni bato se sani ke tan badan mai bechari bhag he gayi but manav kaise bhi wapas le aya usai ye acha raha

haa bhai ji pata nhi kyu par Saanvi Aahna ko bilkul bhi pasand nhi krti
Manav care krta h Saanvi ki
Waise wo to dayawaan h sabki care krta h

aur ab toh avantika bhi muddai par arahi h ek pal toh laga dragon bankar sab tabah hone wala h ...aur saanvi bahar jaakar indrasen ko sab batane wali h

Sab tabah karne ki kuch bandishe h, aaj pata chl jayenge kuch kuch cheeje
Hmm, but Indrasen ka koi bharosa nhi

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Very lovely revo Sandeep singh nirwan bhaiji
Thank you so much ☺

 

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Woow last wali line bhot saandar

Dhanyavaad Yasasvi1 ji ☺

or ab sunday wala update thoda bada dena boss waiting for your next update

Update shayad bada na ho paye. . lekin padhne ko bahut kuch milega

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

Shandar update bhai....

bahut bahut dhanyavaad Gloden dragon bhaya
☺❤

waiting for next update bhai....

Today
Achi pic lagaye ho bhai pichli wali to maine save karli thi ek character ke liye

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Is story me mujhe manav ka santhi sawbhaw ,budhimaani ka gun...

Ekdum sahi kaha bhaya.. Manav santh aur budhimaan h
Iske alawa bhi usme bahut se gun h Jo hum aage dekhte jayenge (jaise aage ayega dayawaan aur jigyasu wala gun) . Sarv gun sampann h apna Manav

aur saanvi ka natkhatpan ,chulbulpan aur bholipan mujhe bahut pasand aaya.....

Sani ka to koi saani nhi
Bahut acha laga bhai jaankar ☺

This story is my favourite story.....

Thank you so so much bhai.. means A lot

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

nice1

Thank you Arvind Sharma bro ☺

Mast aur jabardast update

Bahut bahut shukriya Vickyabhi bhai ☺

Super update hai Bhai

Thank you so much RAJIV SHAW bhaya

Mast update

Dhanyavaad Avir bro ☺

Nice update

Thank you Bhupinder Singh bhai ☺

Nice update dear

Thanks A lot Lallu brother

 

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Excellent update

Thank you so much _SMOOKER_X_ bhai
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lekin yrr... 4 din wait mujhe update chota laga... I donno kyu... But aisa feel hua ki garam karke thanda hi chod diya...

Are bhai bhai
Sorry bro

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

Jabardast update yaar

Bahut bahut dhanyavaad Yamraj@ brother
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akhir manu aur sani ki baat ho hi gayi jo abhi manu nahi chahta tha dekhte hai aage kya hota hai waise update bada mazedaar tha bhai

Hmm Manu ko pata to tha ki ye sab hoga lekin aise aur itna jaldi ho jayega usne expect nhi kiya tha
Thanks a lot bhai

 

[Suniya]

 

[Ak47203]

Waiting

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

Avantika ne jo bomb foda woh best tha is update mein aur manav aur sani ki nok jhok mast thi

Bahut bahut shukriya Arun Rathod11 bhai

But vahi hamesha ki tarha manas aur avni ka character ghatiya aur gawaro wala hi raha

Wo dono to dadi ko khush karne ki koshish kar rahe the aur apne manu par jor de rahe the ki woh apna ghar basa le

Aur yeh aahna iski to sali yeh update bhi kha gayi khud nahi thi update mein par pure update mein issi ki zikar raha

Sali sahmne hoti to takla fod deta iska.....

Aahna important aur interesting character h
Takla bachaane Helmet pehnana padega use lagta

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Ek cheez mein apne rebo mein add karna bhul gya tha ki manav ko thoda sakht banao jo dhang se apni baat rakh sake ese becharo ki tarha bacha na bane

Jaisa apne kaha Manav waisa hi banega, however, Manav ko apni limits pata h

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

Awesome update bro

Thank you bhai Amrit_#0
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