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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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Dosti ko koi kya hi paribhasit kar skta hai...
Dosti me dil ..dimag..gurda...fefda sab mil ke karname aur chutiyape karte hai..
 

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Eda- kya soch rahi ho?
Pichle kuch dino se dekh rahi hu tum pareshan najar aa rahi ho?

Mazikeen- mujhe lagta hai mera ant najdeek aa raha hai

Eda- kya bewakufi bhari baatein kar rahi ho? Tum nahi mar sakti

Mazikeen- main kya lucifer hu jo nahi mar sakti?

Eda- mar to lucifer bhi sakta hai lekin kya vo marega?

Mazikeen- main lucifer bhi nahi hu na

Eda- kya dikh raha hai tumhe?

Mazikeen- tabhai
Eda- kaisi tabhai?

Mazikeen- mujhe aisa feel ho raha hai jaise sab khatam hone wala hai, tinke ke dheer ki tarah sab ujhad jayega

Eda- aur kyu feel ho raha hai tumhe aisa?
Mazikeen- hum apni maut ko pehle hi mahsus kar lete hai. Mere sath bhi aisa hi ho raha hai

Eda- ye sab faltu baatein hai. Main hu na yaha kuch nahi hone dungi tumhe

Mazikeen- main lucifer ke samne marna chahti thi. Yaad bhi nahi kitne sadiya humne ek sath es hell me bitaye hai aur ab jab mera aakhiri waqt aaya hai tab vo yaha nahi hai

Eda- tumhe kuch nahi hoga. Lucifer chahe aaj yaha nahi ho lekin humare dil me to hai na. Kahi door thodi gaya hai vo

Mazikeen- bahut door nikal gaya vo
Mere akhiri waqt me mujhe akele hi marna padega. Main ek demon hu mujhme soul nahi hai. Ek baar khatam hue to sab khatam ho jayega aur main akele nahi marna chahti

Mazikeen- kya jab main maru tab aap mere pass rah sakti ho?
Jab tak mera sareer nast na ho jaye mujhe akele mat chhodna

Eda- tum kyu aisi bhahki bhahki baat kar rahi ho?
Lucifer ke baad dunia ki sabse powerful main hi hu aur mere hote tumhe kuch nahi hoga. Main kuch hone nahi dungi

Mazikeen- vo aa raha hai. Main feel kar pa rahi hu usse uski darkness ko. Vo aa raha hai

Eda- kon aa raha hai?
Mazikeen- dark lord aa raha hai. Hum sab ant ke bahut najdeek pahuch chuke hai agar ab lucifer vapas nahi lota to kuch nahi bachega sab khatam ho jayega

Eda- Supreme ne sab kuch soch rakha hoga. Koe chhij unki najro se bachi thodi hai

Mazikeen- aapko to pata hi hoga humare yaha ek life cycle chalti hai. Bhagwan paida hote hai fir unme se rakshah bante hai fir rakshah aur bhagwan mil kar insaan banate hai jo apni hade langte chale jate hai aur jab burai apni charam par pahuchti hai to pure sansaar ka khatma kiya jata hai aur dobara se bhawan janam lete hai?
Pata hai na aapko?

Eda- pata hai aur ye bhi pata hai ki abhi aisa kuch hone me arbo kharbo saal Baki hai. Kalyug ka pehla padaav hi chal raha hai abhi to

Mazikeen- mujhe lag raha hai ye padaav khatam ho gaya aur naye ki neev bahut jaldi rakhi jane wali hai

Eda- tum bevaj etna soch rahi ho. Hume humare kaam par dhayan dena chahiye

Mazikeen- hume hell ke darwaje band kar dene chahiye. Kuch dino ke liye na koe andar aa sake aur na bahar ja sake

Eda- aisa kyu?

Mazikeen- agar koe vaha se aane ki kosis karega to band darwaja hume kuch waqt aur de dega

Eda- hell me koe nahi aayega. Agar koe kahi jayega to vo heaven me jayega na?

Mazikeen- usse meri jarurat hai ek powerful demon ki aur aap ye mat bhulo ki yaha kitni dark souls hai aur usse ense hi shaktiya milti hai

Eda- yaha par ek angel bhi hai jo yaha ka sara andhera khud door kar sakti hai. Etni roshini to hai us me

Mazikeen- main bas aapko sahlaa de sakti hu baki ye hell aapka hai jaisa aap bologi vaisa hi hoga

Eda- theek hai theek hai gate band kar do aur kuch?

Mazikeen- hume aur support ki jarurat padegi. Yaha par aap ho aur main hu baki jitne guards hai vo uske samne kisi kaam ke nahi hai

Eda- hume aur support to nahi milegi kahi se bhi nahi milegi

Mazikeen- kosis karni padegi. Aap kisi se baat kar sakte ho kya?
Eda- baat?? Hmm??
Raaj se kar sakti hu lekin mujhe nahi lagta us se baat karna sahi hoga

Mazikeen- raaj acha hai lekin kafi nahi hai
Eda- to tum hi batao kis se baat karni hai?

Mazikeen- guruji se
Eda- hahaha
Guruji se?
Kaise?
Aur vo kyu baat manege meri jabki humari aakhiri mulakaat kuch jada achi nahi gaye

Mazikeen- guruji ne kabhi bhi achai ka sath nahi chhoda
Eda- nahi chhoda hoga lekin vo mera sath kabhi nahi denge esliye ye idea bilkul kharab hai

Mazikeen- Supreme?
Eda- unhe sab pata hoga agar vo madad karna chahte hai to hume unse baat karne ki jaurat hi nahi padeg

Mazikeen- Mata?
Eda- huh?****

Anisha- kya soch rahe ho?
Lucifer- tumhre aankhon me jo nasha hai main us nashe me doob jana chahta hu

Jaise hi anisha ne ye suna vo sarma gaye. Vaise to anisha bahut kam hi sarmati thi lekin achanak lucifer ke aise bolne se uska chehra laal tamatar jaisa pad gaya

Anisha- kuch bhi blash karte hue boli

Lucifer- haye mar jaunga main tumhri es ada par
Anisha- shut up
Ek second me hi uska chehra gusse me badal gaya

Lucifer- kar do mujhe shut up apne en hontho ka jaam pila kar

Anisha- kuch jada romantic nahi ho rahe ho tum aaj?

Lucifer- acha nahi lag raha tumhe?
Anisha- aadaat nahi hai etne jada pyaar ki mujhe

Lucifer- to adaat daal do
Anisha- acha daal lu adaat?
Fir tumhre uska kya hoga ki mere jane ka waqt aa gaya hai, mera ant najdeek dikh raha hai bla bla

Lucifer- kaha jaunga main tumse door?
Kisi na kisi roop me tumse Juda hi rahunga humesha

Anisha- physically to nahi honge na
Lucifer- sab samjh raha hu main. Raat ko meri yaadein tumhe sone nahi degi esliye pareshan ho tum

Anisha- mere se aisi baat mat kiya karo. Jitne din ka sath hai mujhe usme jindagi jee lene do

Lucifer- main kaha rok raha hu?
Anisha- kal ashmita ma'am ne kuch kaha mere se

Lucifer- ashmita didi bole to jada acha nahi rahe?
Anisha- unhone mujhse kisi ko dundne ka bola

Lucifer- arjun ka bola hoga aur kiska bolegi vo
Anisha- hmm

Lucifer- tumne kya kaha?
Anisha- I will try

Lucifer- to kiya try tumne?
Anisha- nahi

Lucifer- kyu?
Anisha- tumse puchna chahti thi pehle

Lucifer- kya?
Anisha- ki dundna hai ya nahi?

Lucifer- doond lo. Kar lene do usse bhi try
Anisha- theek hai
Es baar muskil nahi hogi

Lucifer- ye kaise pata tumhe?
Anisha- pehle chehra nahi pata tha es baar pata hai

Lucifer- ek baat batau?
Anisha- hmm

Lucifer- marega vo
Anisha- kya??

Lucifer- arjun.. marega vo aur koe nahi rok sakta aisa hone ko
Anisha- kyu?

Lucifer- vo ek trap me fasa hua hai aur vaha se nikalne ka ek hi matlab hai uska marna
Anisha- tum rok sakte ho

Lucifer- main hi aazad karunga usse
Anisha- ashmita aur ma'am dono ko pasand nahi aayega ye

Lucifer- nahi aaye to nahi aaye lekin yehi aakhiri rasta hai
Anisha- raste tumne aur dekhe hi nahi bas ek jo humesha available rahta hai usse par dhayan de rahe ho

Lucifer- bahut kuch dekh liya maine.
Kisi ne uski jaan bachai aur badle me dusro ki jaan lena sikhaya fir mera koe dusman mila aur mera aur madhuri ma'am ka rishta dekhte hue usse mere piche laga diya jisme ek raat ke liye vo kamyaab bhi raha lekin main baar baar usse nahi chhod sakta

Anisha- kyuki aapko dar hai kahi vo mujhe nuksaan na pahucha de
Lucifer- lucifer kabhi kisi se nahi darta

Anisha- lekin kisi ke liye to dar sakta hai na
Lucifer- baatein ghumana to koe tumse sikhe

Anisha- maine bhi to tumse hi sikha hai
Lucifer- kuch jada nahi sikh gaye tum?

Anisha- kya karu dimag hi etna hai
Lucifer- achi baat hai

Anisha- ek baat puchu?
Lucifer- pehle main puchi to tum kaha piche rahne wali ho?
Pucho pucho

Anisha- do you love ashmita?
Lucifer- ek baar pehle bhi puch chuki ho tum ye?

Anisha- ek baar aur puch rahi hu
Lucifer- didi kah kar bolo usse to bataunga

Anisha- do you love ashmita didi
Lucifer- I love her like devil loved hell
Like lucifer loved eda
Jab meri kahaniya sunai jayegi tab ashmita ka naam sabse pehle liya jayega inaaya se bhi pehle
Ek aisa pyaar jisko na sabdo me likha ja sakta hai na bataya ja sakta hai
Jo aaj tak kisi ne kisi ke sath nahi kiya hoga
Vaise prem Katha hoga lucifer aur ashmita ki...
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Eda- kya soch rahi ho?
Pichle kuch dino se dekh rahi hu tum pareshan najar aa rahi ho?

Mazikeen- mujhe lagta hai mera ant najdeek aa raha hai

Eda- kya bewakufi bhari baatein kar rahi ho? Tum nahi mar sakti

Mazikeen- main kya lucifer hu jo nahi mar sakti?

Eda- mar to lucifer bhi sakta hai lekin kya vo marega?

Mazikeen- main lucifer bhi nahi hu na

Eda- kya dikh raha hai tumhe?

Mazikeen- tabhai
Eda- kaisi tabhai?

Mazikeen- mujhe aisa feel ho raha hai jaise sab khatam hone wala hai, tinke ke dheer ki tarah sab ujhad jayega

Eda- aur kyu feel ho raha hai tumhe aisa?
Mazikeen- hum apni maut ko pehle hi mahsus kar lete hai. Mere sath bhi aisa hi ho raha hai

Eda- ye sab faltu baatein hai. Main hu na yaha kuch nahi hone dungi tumhe

Mazikeen- main lucifer ke samne marna chahti thi. Yaad bhi nahi kitne sadiya humne ek sath es hell me bitaye hai aur ab jab mera aakhiri waqt aaya hai tab vo yaha nahi hai

Eda- tumhe kuch nahi hoga. Lucifer chahe aaj yaha nahi ho lekin humare dil me to hai na. Kahi door thodi gaya hai vo

Mazikeen- bahut door nikal gaya vo
Mere akhiri waqt me mujhe akele hi marna padega. Main ek demon hu mujhme soul nahi hai. Ek baar khatam hue to sab khatam ho jayega aur main akele nahi marna chahti

Mazikeen- kya jab main maru tab aap mere pass rah sakti ho?
Jab tak mera sareer nast na ho jaye mujhe akele mat chhodna

Eda- tum kyu aisi bhahki bhahki baat kar rahi ho?
Lucifer ke baad dunia ki sabse powerful main hi hu aur mere hote tumhe kuch nahi hoga. Main kuch hone nahi dungi

Mazikeen- vo aa raha hai. Main feel kar pa rahi hu usse uski darkness ko. Vo aa raha hai

Eda- kon aa raha hai?
Mazikeen- dark lord aa raha hai. Hum sab ant ke bahut najdeek pahuch chuke hai agar ab lucifer vapas nahi lota to kuch nahi bachega sab khatam ho jayega

Eda- Supreme ne sab kuch soch rakha hoga. Koe chhij unki najro se bachi thodi hai

Mazikeen- aapko to pata hi hoga humare yaha ek life cycle chalti hai. Bhagwan paida hote hai fir unme se rakshah bante hai fir rakshah aur bhagwan mil kar insaan banate hai jo apni hade langte chale jate hai aur jab burai apni charam par pahuchti hai to pure sansaar ka khatma kiya jata hai aur dobara se bhawan janam lete hai?
Pata hai na aapko?

Eda- pata hai aur ye bhi pata hai ki abhi aisa kuch hone me arbo kharbo saal Baki hai. Kalyug ka pehla padaav hi chal raha hai abhi to

Mazikeen- mujhe lag raha hai ye padaav khatam ho gaya aur naye ki neev bahut jaldi rakhi jane wali hai

Eda- tum bevaj etna soch rahi ho. Hume humare kaam par dhayan dena chahiye

Mazikeen- hume hell ke darwaje band kar dene chahiye. Kuch dino ke liye na koe andar aa sake aur na bahar ja sake

Eda- aisa kyu?

Mazikeen- agar koe vaha se aane ki kosis karega to band darwaja hume kuch waqt aur de dega

Eda- hell me koe nahi aayega. Agar koe kahi jayega to vo heaven me jayega na?

Mazikeen- usse meri jarurat hai ek powerful demon ki aur aap ye mat bhulo ki yaha kitni dark souls hai aur usse ense hi shaktiya milti hai

Eda- yaha par ek angel bhi hai jo yaha ka sara andhera khud door kar sakti hai. Etni roshini to hai us me

Mazikeen- main bas aapko sahlaa de sakti hu baki ye hell aapka hai jaisa aap bologi vaisa hi hoga

Eda- theek hai theek hai gate band kar do aur kuch?

Mazikeen- hume aur support ki jarurat padegi. Yaha par aap ho aur main hu baki jitne guards hai vo uske samne kisi kaam ke nahi hai

Eda- hume aur support to nahi milegi kahi se bhi nahi milegi

Mazikeen- kosis karni padegi. Aap kisi se baat kar sakte ho kya?
Eda- baat?? Hmm??
Raaj se kar sakti hu lekin mujhe nahi lagta us se baat karna sahi hoga

Mazikeen- raaj acha hai lekin kafi nahi hai
Eda- to tum hi batao kis se baat karni hai?

Mazikeen- guruji se
Eda- hahaha
Guruji se?
Kaise?
Aur vo kyu baat manege meri jabki humari aakhiri mulakaat kuch jada achi nahi gaye

Mazikeen- guruji ne kabhi bhi achai ka sath nahi chhoda
Eda- nahi chhoda hoga lekin vo mera sath kabhi nahi denge esliye ye idea bilkul kharab hai

Mazikeen- Supreme?
Eda- unhe sab pata hoga agar vo madad karna chahte hai to hume unse baat karne ki jaurat hi nahi padeg

Mazikeen- Mata?
Eda- huh?****

Anisha- kya soch rahe ho?
Lucifer- tumhre aankhon me jo nasha hai main us nashe me doob jana chahta hu

Jaise hi anisha ne ye suna vo sarma gaye. Vaise to anisha bahut kam hi sarmati thi lekin achanak lucifer ke aise bolne se uska chehra laal tamatar jaisa pad gaya

Anisha- kuch bhi blash karte hue boli

Lucifer- haye mar jaunga main tumhri es ada par
Anisha- shut up
Ek second me hi uska chehra gusse me badal gaya

Lucifer- kar do mujhe shut up apne en hontho ka jaam pila kar

Anisha- kuch jada romantic nahi ho rahe ho tum aaj?

Lucifer- acha nahi lag raha tumhe?
Anisha- aadaat nahi hai etne jada pyaar ki mujhe

Lucifer- to adaat daal do
Anisha- acha daal lu adaat?
Fir tumhre uska kya hoga ki mere jane ka waqt aa gaya hai, mera ant najdeek dikh raha hai bla bla

Lucifer- kaha jaunga main tumse door?
Kisi na kisi roop me tumse Juda hi rahunga humesha

Anisha- physically to nahi honge na
Lucifer- sab samjh raha hu main. Raat ko meri yaadein tumhe sone nahi degi esliye pareshan ho tum

Anisha- mere se aisi baat mat kiya karo. Jitne din ka sath hai mujhe usme jindagi jee lene do

Lucifer- main kaha rok raha hu?
Anisha- kal ashmita ma'am ne kuch kaha mere se

Lucifer- ashmita didi bole to jada acha nahi rahe?
Anisha- unhone mujhse kisi ko dundne ka bola

Lucifer- arjun ka bola hoga aur kiska bolegi vo
Anisha- hmm

Lucifer- tumne kya kaha?
Anisha- I will try

Lucifer- to kiya try tumne?
Anisha- nahi

Lucifer- kyu?
Anisha- tumse puchna chahti thi pehle

Lucifer- kya?
Anisha- ki dundna hai ya nahi?

Lucifer- doond lo. Kar lene do usse bhi try
Anisha- theek hai
Es baar muskil nahi hogi

Lucifer- ye kaise pata tumhe?
Anisha- pehle chehra nahi pata tha es baar pata hai

Lucifer- ek baat batau?
Anisha- hmm

Lucifer- marega vo
Anisha- kya??

Lucifer- arjun.. marega vo aur koe nahi rok sakta aisa hone ko
Anisha- kyu?

Lucifer- vo ek trap me fasa hua hai aur vaha se nikalne ka ek hi matlab hai uska marna
Anisha- tum rok sakte ho

Lucifer- main hi aazad karunga usse
Anisha- ashmita aur ma'am dono ko pasand nahi aayega ye

Lucifer- nahi aaye to nahi aaye lekin yehi aakhiri rasta hai
Anisha- raste tumne aur dekhe hi nahi bas ek jo humesha available rahta hai usse par dhayan de rahe ho

Lucifer- bahut kuch dekh liya maine.
Kisi ne uski jaan bachai aur badle me dusro ki jaan lena sikhaya fir mera koe dusman mila aur mera aur madhuri ma'am ka rishta dekhte hue usse mere piche laga diya jisme ek raat ke liye vo kamyaab bhi raha lekin main baar baar usse nahi chhod sakta

Anisha- kyuki aapko dar hai kahi vo mujhe nuksaan na pahucha de
Lucifer- lucifer kabhi kisi se nahi darta

Anisha- lekin kisi ke liye to dar sakta hai na
Lucifer- baatein ghumana to koe tumse sikhe

Anisha- maine bhi to tumse hi sikha hai
Lucifer- kuch jada nahi sikh gaye tum?

Anisha- kya karu dimag hi etna hai
Lucifer- achi baat hai

Anisha- ek baat puchu?
Lucifer- pehle main puchi to tum kaha piche rahne wali ho?
Pucho pucho

Anisha- do you love ashmita?
Lucifer- ek baar pehle bhi puch chuki ho tum ye?

Anisha- ek baar aur puch rahi hu
Lucifer- didi kah kar bolo usse to bataunga

Anisha- do you love ashmita didi
Lucifer- I love her like devil loved hell
Like lucifer loved eda
Jab meri kahaniya sunai jayegi tab ashmita ka naam sabse pehle liya jayega inaaya se bhi pehle
Ek aisa pyaar jisko na sabdo me likha ja sakta hai na bataya ja sakta hai
Jo aaj tak kisi ne kisi ke sath nahi kiya hoga
Vaise prem Katha hoga lucifer aur ashmita ki...
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....
 

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Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha
 
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