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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Lone survivor

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Ek or pyar bhara update
Bhai sach bolta hu romantic story me koi aap ka hat nehi pakad sakta
Thank you so much bhai
Pichhle 3 update ek se badkar ek the
Bhai sach sach batana payal jesi ladki sach me hoti he
Hoti hai meri wali thi
Wo kia he na ajtak mene sirf TV me dekha he or kahanio me suna he ajtak real me dekha nehi
Hoti hai bas sath raste me chhut jata hai
Thanks for the beautiful update bhai
Much love to you bhai
 
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Bhai life of an engineer complete next Gulam.
Bhai end padke mood off hogaya kuchh bolne ka maan nehi kar rahahe.
Us story me gap bahut jada ho gaya tha fir vapas se rhythm aa hi nahi paye
Dekho happy ending to main likhne nahi wala tha usme but fir bhi ek bahut achi ending ho sakti thi jo nahi ho paye
Bahut kuch tha dimag me jo story khatam hone ke baad yaad aaya ki maine kya socha tha aur kya ho gaya but ab jo hai vo yahi hai bhai
Par kuchh he jo bolna chahta hu. xossip or xforum me me bohot kahani padihe kuchh achhe the kuchh bohot achhe the or kuchh ase the jinko sabdo me piraya nehi ja sakta jo mere favorite he unme ek naam jur gaya.
Sach kahu to sirf 2 hi write mere favorite the AP jisne W.L.H.T.A. likha he
Ye nahi padhi maine
or VJ jisne ATTITUDE 1,2 or GaLaTH....(THE WRONG THAT MAD EVERYTHING RIGHT) likha he ab ek or naam LONE SURVIVOR jur gaya.
Nah bhai. I don't think ki koe vj bhai ke competition me hai xforum par. Yaha bahut ache ache writers hai no doubt but jo vj bhai ne galat me likha hai uska koe competition hi nahi hai
Jab koi achhi kahani dhund ta tha tab life of an engineer ka naam bohot bar dekha tha par aap ka naam LONE SURVIVOR or profile picture dekh ke laga koi dukhiyari atma ghum rahahe
Samjhe to sahi hi the aap
upar se adultery ghusa hi nehi or jab lucifer the fallen angel pada jo fantasy category me tha tab pata chala lone survivor kia chij he isi liye kehte he never judge a book by the cover.
Lol. Thank you so much bhai
Fan bana dala bhai.
Much love to you
Agar aap ne AP or VJ bhai ki kahani nehi padi he to ek bar padlo aap ko pata chal jayga aap mere liye unke jese kiu ho.
Ap bhai ki to nahi padhi lekin main kabhi khud ko vj bhai ke comparison me to nahi rakhunga. Kabhi nahi
Main bakchodi likhta hu aur most of the time to aisa hota hai ki mujhe pata hi nahi chalta main nashe me kya likh gaya fir usko compensate karna padta hai
Bas man karta hai to likh deta hu
Me kabhi samajh nehi paya kon jiyada achha he abto ek naam or jur gaya
Meri story se jada complex to aapki list hone wali hai aane wale time me.
Bas or kuchh nehi kehna
Bahut kuch likh diya bhai aapne etne me hi. Thank you so much for the love and support bhai
 
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UPDATE-221


Payal aur lucifer ghar se nikal chuke the. Halanki se arohi ne payal ko chhedne ka mokka bilkul nahi gavaya lekin payal humesha ki tarah uski baaton par bas muskurati rahi

Payal- hmm kaha ja rahe hai?
Lucifer- jaha koe tumhri aawaz nahi sun paye

Payal- meri aawaz nahi sun paye?
Kyu?

Lucifer- vo tum chhilaogi to agar kisi ne sun liya to tumhe bachane aajayega aur aaj tum mujh se nahi bach paoge

Payal- blush blush

Lucifer- ghar bata diya ki aaj nahi aa paoge tum?

Payal- nahi

Lucifer- to tumhe aaj vapas aana hai?
Payal- aisa bhi nahi bola maine

Lucifer- to tumhe nahi aana?
Payal- kyu chhed rahe ho?

Lucifer- aur jo tumne bina permission ke mujhe aaj kiss kiya uska kya?
Tum kiss kar sakti ho aur main puch bhi nahi sakta?

Payal(blush) maine nahi aapne kiya mujhe kiss

Lucifer- ahh etni juth kaise bol leti ho tum?

Payal- aapne sikha diya mujhe
Lucifer- fir theek hai

Payal- ab to bata do kaha ja rahe hai hum?
Lucifer- konsi jagah tumhe sabse jada sukoon deti hai?

Payal- mera ghar, uncle aunties ke chehre ki smile
Lucifer- bas to unke jaise hi uncle aunties ke chehre par smile lane ja rahe hai

Payal- matlab???

Lucifer- kya dumb ladki hai re ye?
Agar tum cute nahi hoti to abhi utaar deta car se
Payal- huh??

Lucifer- matlab ki meri vajah se kal tum sad hue to meri vajah se hi aaj tumhre chehre par smile aani chahiye na. Ab tum apne liye to kabhi khush hogi nahi esliye vo sab karna padega jo tumhe khushi deta hai

Lucifer- kitna mahanti ladka mila hai tumhe aur caring bhi

Payal- and rude too (smiles)

Lucifer- what the hell....
Yaha banda apna etna important kaam chhod ke tumhre piche ghum raha hai, jabardasti kiss karva raha hai, nind se jaga raha hai, intezaar kar raha hai aur vo hi rude bhi lag raha hai?
Kya hoga re tera lucifer

Payal- bhul gaye humari pehli mulakaat?
Lucifer- tum hi ghuse me ghum rahi thi
Maine kuch galat bola tha kya?

Payal- bolne ki halaat me bhi to nahi the. Sach sach batana kitni pee rakhi thi us din?

Lucifer- count karke nahi peeta main
Payal- vohi laga tha mujhe
Fir tara ma'am ke yaha bhi aapne rudely baat ki aur uske baad bhi jitni baar conversation hue humari ladae hi hue hai

Lucifer- lekin ladae suru kisne ki?
Main to kabhi sundar ladki ke sath ladta hi nahi hu

Payal- aap sirf ashmita ma'am se nahi ladte kyuki aap unse lad sakte hi nahi ho baki sabse to pure din ladte rahte ho

Lucifer- ye kon hai jo mera secret yu faila raha hai?

Payal- sabko pata hai aap ashmita ma'am se kitna darte ho

Lucifer- acha?
Mujhe hi nahi pata tha bas

Payal- even you know that
Lucifer- mera mood change ho gaya to tumhe vapas chhod aaunga aur humari date cancel ho jayegi

Payal- sorry(smiles again)
Lucifer- good girl

Kuch hi der baad dono ek orphanage pahuch gaye jaha samne hi naag khada tha aur ek truck

Dono car se utare aur payal lucifer ke sath chalne lagi

Lucifer- kar diya kaam sahi se ya esme bhi basad macha di tune?
Naag- sab theek hai bhai

Lucifer- chal fir
Aur lucifer ne payal ka hath thaam liya jiski vajah se uske chehre par ek bahut pyaari muskaan fail gaye aur teen ander ki taraf chal diye

Kafi log the yaha bhi kuch chhote bache to kuch bade bujurg jinhe apno ne hi ghar se nikal diya tha

Ayushi- hello sir, how may I help you?
Ek bahut sundari ladki chehre par badi smile liye lucifer aur payal ke pass aaye

Lucifer- madam kuch donate karna chahti hai yaha par
Ayushi- bahut acha heart hai ma'am ka
Please follow me main aapko pehle sab se mila deti hu

Lucifer- actually we want it low-key
Can we do that?
Ayushi- sure sir

Lucifer- payal please...lucifer payal ki taraf ek key karta hai jispar swaliya najro se payal lucifer ko dekhti hai

Lucifer- truck ki hai yaar
I want you to open it

Ayushi- sir main kuch logo ko bejh deti hu aapki help ke liye
Lucifer- hum laye hai don't worry
Just make sure ki koe disturb na ho

Fir payal ne truck ka gate khola to usme bahut sara samaan tha jise dekh kar jitni khushi payal ko ho rahi thi utni hi Ayushi ko bhi ho rahi thi

Ayushi- I really appreciate it ma'am sir
Lucifer- just spreading smile that it
Naag sab kuch shift kara de ander
Naag- jee bhai

Lucifer- ye mera card hai. Aapko agar kabhi in future kisi bhi chhij ki koe requirement ho to bejhijak call her
We will be happy to help

Ayushi- thank you thank you so much sir

Uske baad lucifer payal ko aise hi kae sare orphanage leke gaya aur sabke yaha jarurat ka sara samaan uplabad karaya

Payal to khushi ke mare satve aasman par thi. Es waqt uski khushi ko koe maap hi nahi sakta tha aur essi vajah se ek alag hi tarah se glow kar rahi thi vo

Payal- thank you Lucifer. Thank you so so much
Khushi se jhumte hue lucifer se boli

Lucifer- abhi se?
Abhi to suruvaat hue hai
Payal- what do you mean suruvaat hue hai?
Ab aur kya bach gaya?

Lucifer- the real surprise
Payal- what is it?

Lucifer- surprise hai to surprise ki tarah hi rahne do na

Payal- I'm so happy today
Mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye but agar aap bol rahe ho to let's see

Lucifer- tumhri mom kaha hai?
Payal- ye achanak se meri maa kaha se aa gaye?

Lucifer- just asking
Payal- maine bataya tha pehle bhi

Lucifer- bhul gaya sayad
Payal- vo anath asaram me jo hai vohi meri family hai
I don't know anything about my real family. Main ek orphanage me hi pali badi hue hu aur vohi mera sab kuch hai

Lucifer- kabhi kosis nahi ki pata karne ki?
Payal- kaise karti?
Kisi ko kuch pata hi nahi tha
I even don't know ki mujhe vaha chhod ke kaun gaya, mere maa paa jinda bhi ya nahi. I don't know anything. Pehle bura lagta tha lekin ab aadat ho gaye hai

Lucifer- may be I can help if you want
Payal- etni badi aabadi hai humare desh ki kaise dundoge?
Aur kyu dundoge?
Agar unhe mujh se koe vasta rakhna hi tha to mujhe chhod ke hi kyu jate?

Lucifer- koe majburi rahi hogi
Payal- ho sakta hai but it's okay now
Ab etne saal akele gujaar liye ab mil bhi gaye to kya hi fayda?
Na to vo emotionally mere se jud payenge aur na bachpan vapas aa payega

Lucifer- at least khud ki pahchan to pata chal jayegi
Payal- khud ki pahchan hum khud banate hai lucifer
Main jaise bhi hu jo bhi hu khush hu.

Lucifer- okaaaayyyy

Payal- what about you?

Lucifer- what about me?
Payal- aapke kon hai? Aur aap kon ho?

Lucifer- meri sachae aayegi ek din sabke samne. Tab tum bhi jaan lena
Payal- aur agar mujhe tumse hi sunana ho to?

Lucifer- kisi din suna dunga to
Payal- I'm not forcing you
Agar man nahi ho to koe issue nahi hai

Lucifer- aaj to tumhra din hai. Mere bare me kabhi aur baat karenge
To payal are you ready??

Payal- I'm (smile)
Lucifer- let's go then

Payal- yaha kya hai?
Lucifer- yaha koe nahi hai. Jaisa ki maine bataya tha koe tumhri chhikhe nahi sun payega yaha

Payal- seriously??
Batao na yaha kya hai kyuki mujhe to kuch nahi dikh raha
Lucifer- yaha kuch nahi hai
Hum bas lunch karne aaye hai

Payal- lekin karenge kya?
Main vegetarian hu btw
Lucifer- mujhe pata nahi jisko main thodi der me khane wala hu vo vegetarian me aata hai ya non vegetarian me

Payal- chalo vaise bhi aapse to kisi bare me baat karna hi bekar hai
Lucifer- baat to karni bhi nahi hai
Kuch aur hi karna hai

Payal- chalo bhi ab
Aur payal lucifer ka hath pakad kar ander ki taraf chalne lagti hai. Vo sayad bahut excited thi samne ka najara dekhne ke liye aur lucifer ne kya kya plan kar rakha hai uske liye

Vaise to lucifer ne ek hi chhij ka plan kar rakha tha aur vo aaj honi bhi thi lekin us se pehle to payal ko special mahsus karana chahta tha

Ek garden type ka kuch bana hua tha jiske aakhiri chhor par ek table, do chair lagi hue thi aur un par khana rakha tha

Sath me table ke hi side me bahut khusburat jharna gir raha tha. Jharne ki aawaz aur hava ki sheetalta vaha dekhne layak thi

Ek dam shant jagah thi aur aisa lag raha tha jaise lucifer ne hi usse shant karvaya hai aaj

Etni shant jagah dekh kar payal to khushi se jhumne lagi aur vo khud jharne ki taraf badh gaye

Piche lucifer dheere dheere uski taraf aa raha tha. Londo ko piche rahna pasand bhi hai ladkiyo ke. Eska bahut bada fayda jo hai

Esliye hi lucifer usse piche se dekh raha tha aur soch raha tha kya hi ladki hai ye aur kya kismat paye hai usne(lucifer ne)

Payal- wow. I don't know maine life me kya kiya tha jo mujhe etna special feel kara rahe ho tum. Thank you so much lucifer.

Lucifer bas muskura diya

Payal- mujh par karj chada rahe ho tum.
Lucifer- hisaab rakh raha hu. Tension mat lo
Now can we?
Ek chair kheech kar payal ko bathne ke liye bolte hai

Payal bhi muskurate hue bath gaye aur lucifer ne gentlemen ki tarah chair aage badha di aur khud samne jake bath gaye

Lucifer- start karo
Payal- aap karo

Lucifer- tumhre liye hai sab to tum start karo. Mujhe jo khana hai usme abhi waqt hai

Payal muskurate hue samne rakhe khane ko khol kar dekhne lagi

Usme daal thi, bhindi, bangan, kuch aur sabjiya thi jo hum regular khate hai

Lucifer- I know tumhe yehi sab pasand aayega to maine yehi banva diya
Payal- you know me well lucifer
Aur dono ki plate ke khana parosne lagi

Halke fulki baatein karte hue dono ne khana finish kiya. Payal to ladki thi to vo vaise hi kam khati thi lekin lucifer ne bhi bahut halka hi khaya tha
Reason?
Samjh jao

Payal- mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ki aaj ka din abhi khatam nahi hua hai?
Lucifer- abhi to starters the main course to ab start hoga

Payal- kaha?
Lucifer- khana kha liya?
What about shower now?

Payal- shower?
Lucifer- kitna acha shower chal raha hai. Chalo aajao nahate hai

Payal- koe dekh lega
Lucifer- koe nahi aayega yaha aaj

Payal- pakka?
Lucifer- you don't trust me?

Payal- let's go then
Lucifer- kapde to laye nahi tum

Payal- kapde pahan kar shower lete ho aap?
Lucifer- haye haye ladki
Chalo fir

Shaam dhal chuki thi aur halka halka andera hone lag gaya tha. Pani aur jungle ki vajah se halki thand bhi hone lag gaye thi

Payal lucifer ka hath thame jharne ki taraf chal di. Uska chehra halka laal padne lag gaye tha kyuki vo imagine karne lag gaye thi ki abhi kya hone wala hai vaha esliye hi lucifer ka hath thoda jor se tham liya tha usne

Halanki thoda dar bhi rahi thi vo kyuki open area tha lekin lucifer par vo trust bhi bahut karti thi esliye lucifer ke ek baar bolne par hi tayaar ho gaye thi

Lucifer- ab ky.....
Bas etna hi bol paya lucifer jharne ke pass khade hokar kyuki payal ne sari sarm chhod kar lucifer ke hontho se apne honth jod diye aur usse chhumne lagi

Subah to bas honth mile the lekin asli milan to ab ho raha tha

Kuch hi seconds me passionate kiss ki jagah wild kiss ne le li aur payal lucifer ki shirt nikalne lag gaye jisme usse bahut jaldi safalta bhi mil gaye

Lucifer ke nange badan ko mahsus karte hi payal ke sareer me jhanjhat fail gaye aur vo aur teji se usse kiss karne lagi

Lucifer ke hatho ne bhi payal ke sareer par harkatein karni suru kar di. Kabhi vo uski gand ko dabochta to kabhi uske ubhaar kar lekin payal ne suit pahna hua tha jisse utarne me dono ko ek dusre se alag hona padta esliye abhi upar upar se hi kaam chal raha tha

Jo ab khatam hone wala tha kyuki payal ne jis furti se lucifer se alag hokar apna suit nikala lucifer to notice bhi nahi kar paya aur vapas dono ek dusre se jud gaye

Ek light blue color ki simple bra pahan rakhi thi payal ne jisme se uske ubhaar nikalne ko betaab the aur lucifer ne uski betabhi bakhubhi samjhi bhi aur bra ko sareer se alag kar diya

Sath me salwar ka naada khol kar usse bhi sareer se alag kar diya

Jab payal ko ye sab mahush hua to vo aur jada chhipak gaye lucifer aur aur kisi tarah lucifer ki pant ko bhi uske sareer se aazad kar diya

Ab dono nange ho chuke the aur pani me aag lagane ko tayaar the

Lucifer ne gand se pakad kar payal ko hava me uthaya aur jharne ke niche chalne laga

Jaise hi paani ki bunde unke sareer ko chhune lagi vaise vaise unki aag badhakne lagi aur ab hontho se alag hokar ek dusre ke dusre aango se khelne lag gaye

Lucifer ka muh to sidhe hi payal ke ubhaaro par gaya aur sidhe unhe muh me bhar liya

Ek shirhan dood gaye payal ke sareer se aur bahut madaak aahh nikali

Payal ke ubhaaro ka hi jaado tha ki lucifer unhe kho gaya
Halka sa bhi dhilapan nahi tha un me aur bilkul perfect size me the vo

Vahi payal apne hatho se lucifer ki pith par es milan ke nisaan chhodne lagi

Lucifer ka ek hath jaise hi payal ki panty par pahucha vaise hi payal ke nakhoon lucifer ke peeth me dhas gaye

Pani ki vajah se geele to vo dono pehle hi vo chuke the lekin lucifer ko chhikna pan bahut ache se feel ho gaya tha jo bata raha tha ki payal bhi khub enjoy kar rahi thi

Payal- I want to taste you
Bahut dheere se lucifer ke kaan me boli payal to lucifer ne usko dheela chhod diya aur vo dheere dheere niche bathne lagi

Dhadkane etni tej ho chuki thi ki kab fat jaye koe bharosa nahi sath me hatho me bhi kampan paida hone lag gaya tha

Jaise hi lucifer ke underwear se uske ajgar ke size ka aabash hua payal ko vo aur pagal hone lagi lekin abhi himmat mahi ho rahi thi uski ki underwear niche karke usse dekh sake

Jisme lucifer ne turant uski sahayata ki aur khud hi apna kacha niche kar diya

Jaise hi niche hua kisi spring ki tarah lucifer ka lund payal ke muh par jakar laga. Ek millisecond ke liye jaise payal ke dil ne dhadakna hi band kar diya

Lekin fir khud ko kabhi me karte hue lund ko apne hatho me bhar liya aur ek do baar aage piche karke dekha

Fir apni jib se sirf tope ko touch kiya
Ahhhhhh kya feeling thi

Jaise jaise payal aage badh rahi thi vaise vaise lucifer ki aankhen band hoti ja rahi thi aur vo es moment ko pura feel karne ki kosis karne lag gaya tha

Payal jeeb se hi bahar wali side ko chhumne chhatne lagi

Uska bhi ye first time hi tha aur vo koe jaldbaji nahi karna chahti thi esliye jitna ho sake utna slow seductive tarika use kar rahi thi vo

Aur eski hi vajah se lucifer ko thoda alag feel ho raha tha. Kyuki etna slow seductive to kisi ke sath nahi hua tha. Vahi tara ke sath jitna wild ho gaya tha scene vo to bilkul hi alag baat hai

Dheere dheere payal ne jitna us se ho paya utna muh me bhar kar chusna start kar diya. Lucifer bhi uske sar ko piche se pakad kar uski help karne laga

Kuch hi der me payal thak gaye kyuki pani me bathne me bhi dikkat ho rahi thi aur upar se lagatar speed me pani geer bhi raha tha

Esliye hi lucifer ne usse vapas khada kar liya ek pyaara sa kiss usse dekhte hue kiya aur fir

Lucifer- you ready??
Ek muskaan ke sath kiss return karte hue payal ne haami bhari

Lucifer ne payal ko jaha se jharna start hota hai us chataan par hath rakhva kar piche ki taraf jhuka diya

Lucifer- pain hoga, jitni jor se chhikh sako chhik lena
Koe nahi sunega aaj tumhri mere alava
Aur khud niche bath kar payal ki chut ko ek baar muh me bhar ke taste kiya jiski vajah se payal ke hath chataan par kas gaye

Fir position me akar piche se apna lund payal ki chut par set karne laga

Sahi angel milne par payal ke face ko piche ghuma kar uski aankhon me dekhte hue aage badhne ka pucha aur payal ne bhi aankhon se hi sahmati de di

To payal ko pehle to ache se thama aur fir bahut jor laga kar dheere dheere aage badhne laga

Jor bahut laga diya tha lucifer ne esliye lund ek baar bhi target se nahi bhatka aur bahut aaram se payal ki chut me sama gaya

Dard ki ek lahar dhod gaye payal ke sareer me aur khoon ki kuch bunde bah gaye us jharne ke pani ke sath

Aur lucifer bilkul pyaar se aaram aaram se aage piche hone laga. Vo es baat ka pura dhayaan rakh raha tha ki payal ko jitna ho sake utna kam dard ho lekin kisi first timer ke liye lucifer jaise insaan ka lund lene me dikkat to hoti hi hai na

Vohi payal ke sath ho raha tha. Chahe lucifer bahut aaram se kar raha tha lekin fir bhi payal jor jor se chhikh chhikh kar rona chahti thi khushi me lekin vo pata nahi kyu apne aapko control kiye hue the

Halanki uske aashu dikh nahi rahe the pani ki vajah se lekin uske chehre par umda dard saaf baya kar raha tha ki es waqt vo bahut dard me hai

Lucifer ne esliye hi usko kiss karna start kar diya aur uska mind divert karne ke liye uske aango se khelna bhi sath me bilkul aaram aaram se usse chhodne bhi laga

Panch minute ke baad payal ko thodi shanti feel hone lagi aur sath me acha bhi lagne laga esliye ab uski gand khud aage piche hone lag gaye thi aur muh se halki halki siskiya bhi suru ho gaye

To lucifer ne bhi speed thodi badhae aur ab pani ke sath thap thap ki aawaze bhi gunjane lagi

Fir payal hi aage badh gaye aur lucifer ka lund uski chut se nikal gaya jab lucifer ne payal ki taraf dekha to vo samjh gaya ki payal usse dekhte hue karna chahti hai

Lucifer ne bhi kisi taraf patharo par khud ko aur payal ko adjust kiya aur aamne samne face karke usse chhodne laga

Vahut kamuk mahool ho gaya tha upar se payal ke facial expression to aur kayamat dhaa rahe the

Vo lucifer ko aise dekh rahi thi jaise aaj usme puri tarah sama jana chahti ho

Aise hi aadhe gante tak en dono ka milan chalta raha fir lucifer payal ke muh me hi pura jhad gaya.....
 

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payal ko khus kar diya aur kimat bhi wasool liya waise sex ek normal cheej hai par sukoon deti hai
 
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Payal aur lucifer ghar se nikal chuke the. Halanki se arohi ne payal ko chhedne ka mokka bilkul nahi gavaya lekin payal humesha ki tarah uski baaton par bas muskurati rahi

Payal- hmm kaha ja rahe hai?
Lucifer- jaha koe tumhri aawaz nahi sun paye

Payal- meri aawaz nahi sun paye?
Kyu?

Lucifer- vo tum chhilaogi to agar kisi ne sun liya to tumhe bachane aajayega aur aaj tum mujh se nahi bach paoge

Payal- blush blush

Lucifer- ghar bata diya ki aaj nahi aa paoge tum?

Payal- nahi

Lucifer- to tumhe aaj vapas aana hai?
Payal- aisa bhi nahi bola maine

Lucifer- to tumhe nahi aana?
Payal- kyu chhed rahe ho?

Lucifer- aur jo tumne bina permission ke mujhe aaj kiss kiya uska kya?
Tum kiss kar sakti ho aur main puch bhi nahi sakta?

Payal(blush) maine nahi aapne kiya mujhe kiss

Lucifer- ahh etni juth kaise bol leti ho tum?

Payal- aapne sikha diya mujhe
Lucifer- fir theek hai

Payal- ab to bata do kaha ja rahe hai hum?
Lucifer- konsi jagah tumhe sabse jada sukoon deti hai?

Payal- mera ghar, uncle aunties ke chehre ki smile
Lucifer- bas to unke jaise hi uncle aunties ke chehre par smile lane ja rahe hai

Payal- matlab???

Lucifer- kya dumb ladki hai re ye?
Agar tum cute nahi hoti to abhi utaar deta car se
Payal- huh??

Lucifer- matlab ki meri vajah se kal tum sad hue to meri vajah se hi aaj tumhre chehre par smile aani chahiye na. Ab tum apne liye to kabhi khush hogi nahi esliye vo sab karna padega jo tumhe khushi deta hai

Lucifer- kitna mahanti ladka mila hai tumhe aur caring bhi

Payal- and rude too (smiles)

Lucifer- what the hell....
Yaha banda apna etna important kaam chhod ke tumhre piche ghum raha hai, jabardasti kiss karva raha hai, nind se jaga raha hai, intezaar kar raha hai aur vo hi rude bhi lag raha hai?
Kya hoga re tera lucifer

Payal- bhul gaye humari pehli mulakaat?
Lucifer- tum hi ghuse me ghum rahi thi
Maine kuch galat bola tha kya?

Payal- bolne ki halaat me bhi to nahi the. Sach sach batana kitni pee rakhi thi us din?

Lucifer- count karke nahi peeta main
Payal- vohi laga tha mujhe
Fir tara ma'am ke yaha bhi aapne rudely baat ki aur uske baad bhi jitni baar conversation hue humari ladae hi hue hai

Lucifer- lekin ladae suru kisne ki?
Main to kabhi sundar ladki ke sath ladta hi nahi hu

Payal- aap sirf ashmita ma'am se nahi ladte kyuki aap unse lad sakte hi nahi ho baki sabse to pure din ladte rahte ho

Lucifer- ye kon hai jo mera secret yu faila raha hai?

Payal- sabko pata hai aap ashmita ma'am se kitna darte ho

Lucifer- acha?
Mujhe hi nahi pata tha bas

Payal- even you know that
Lucifer- mera mood change ho gaya to tumhe vapas chhod aaunga aur humari date cancel ho jayegi

Payal- sorry(smiles again)
Lucifer- good girl

Kuch hi der baad dono ek orphanage pahuch gaye jaha samne hi naag khada tha aur ek truck

Dono car se utare aur payal lucifer ke sath chalne lagi

Lucifer- kar diya kaam sahi se ya esme bhi basad macha di tune?
Naag- sab theek hai bhai

Lucifer- chal fir
Aur lucifer ne payal ka hath thaam liya jiski vajah se uske chehre par ek bahut pyaari muskaan fail gaye aur teen ander ki taraf chal diye

Kafi log the yaha bhi kuch chhote bache to kuch bade bujurg jinhe apno ne hi ghar se nikal diya tha

Ayushi- hello sir, how may I help you?
Ek bahut sundari ladki chehre par badi smile liye lucifer aur payal ke pass aaye

Lucifer- madam kuch donate karna chahti hai yaha par
Ayushi- bahut acha heart hai ma'am ka
Please follow me main aapko pehle sab se mila deti hu

Lucifer- actually we want it low-key
Can we do that?
Ayushi- sure sir

Lucifer- payal please...lucifer payal ki taraf ek key karta hai jispar swaliya najro se payal lucifer ko dekhti hai

Lucifer- truck ki hai yaar
I want you to open it

Ayushi- sir main kuch logo ko bejh deti hu aapki help ke liye
Lucifer- hum laye hai don't worry
Just make sure ki koe disturb na ho

Fir payal ne truck ka gate khola to usme bahut sara samaan tha jise dekh kar jitni khushi payal ko ho rahi thi utni hi Ayushi ko bhi ho rahi thi

Ayushi- I really appreciate it ma'am sir
Lucifer- just spreading smile that it
Naag sab kuch shift kara de ander
Naag- jee bhai

Lucifer- ye mera card hai. Aapko agar kabhi in future kisi bhi chhij ki koe requirement ho to bejhijak call her
We will be happy to help

Ayushi- thank you thank you so much sir

Uske baad lucifer payal ko aise hi kae sare orphanage leke gaya aur sabke yaha jarurat ka sara samaan uplabad karaya

Payal to khushi ke mare satve aasman par thi. Es waqt uski khushi ko koe maap hi nahi sakta tha aur essi vajah se ek alag hi tarah se glow kar rahi thi vo

Payal- thank you Lucifer. Thank you so so much
Khushi se jhumte hue lucifer se boli

Lucifer- abhi se?
Abhi to suruvaat hue hai
Payal- what do you mean suruvaat hue hai?
Ab aur kya bach gaya?

Lucifer- the real surprise
Payal- what is it?

Lucifer- surprise hai to surprise ki tarah hi rahne do na

Payal- I'm so happy today
Mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye but agar aap bol rahe ho to let's see

Lucifer- tumhri mom kaha hai?
Payal- ye achanak se meri maa kaha se aa gaye?

Lucifer- just asking
Payal- maine bataya tha pehle bhi

Lucifer- bhul gaya sayad
Payal- vo anath asaram me jo hai vohi meri family hai
I don't know anything about my real family. Main ek orphanage me hi pali badi hue hu aur vohi mera sab kuch hai

Lucifer- kabhi kosis nahi ki pata karne ki?
Payal- kaise karti?
Kisi ko kuch pata hi nahi tha
I even don't know ki mujhe vaha chhod ke kaun gaya, mere maa paa jinda bhi ya nahi. I don't know anything. Pehle bura lagta tha lekin ab aadat ho gaye hai

Lucifer- may be I can help if you want
Payal- etni badi aabadi hai humare desh ki kaise dundoge?
Aur kyu dundoge?
Agar unhe mujh se koe vasta rakhna hi tha to mujhe chhod ke hi kyu jate?

Lucifer- koe majburi rahi hogi
Payal- ho sakta hai but it's okay now
Ab etne saal akele gujaar liye ab mil bhi gaye to kya hi fayda?
Na to vo emotionally mere se jud payenge aur na bachpan vapas aa payega

Lucifer- at least khud ki pahchan to pata chal jayegi
Payal- khud ki pahchan hum khud banate hai lucifer
Main jaise bhi hu jo bhi hu khush hu.

Lucifer- okaaaayyyy

Payal- what about you?

Lucifer- what about me?
Payal- aapke kon hai? Aur aap kon ho?

Lucifer- meri sachae aayegi ek din sabke samne. Tab tum bhi jaan lena
Payal- aur agar mujhe tumse hi sunana ho to?

Lucifer- kisi din suna dunga to
Payal- I'm not forcing you
Agar man nahi ho to koe issue nahi hai

Lucifer- aaj to tumhra din hai. Mere bare me kabhi aur baat karenge
To payal are you ready??

Payal- I'm (smile)
Lucifer- let's go then

Payal- yaha kya hai?
Lucifer- yaha koe nahi hai. Jaisa ki maine bataya tha koe tumhri chhikhe nahi sun payega yaha

Payal- seriously??
Batao na yaha kya hai kyuki mujhe to kuch nahi dikh raha
Lucifer- yaha kuch nahi hai
Hum bas lunch karne aaye hai

Payal- lekin karenge kya?
Main vegetarian hu btw
Lucifer- mujhe pata nahi jisko main thodi der me khane wala hu vo vegetarian me aata hai ya non vegetarian me

Payal- chalo vaise bhi aapse to kisi bare me baat karna hi bekar hai
Lucifer- baat to karni bhi nahi hai
Kuch aur hi karna hai

Payal- chalo bhi ab
Aur payal lucifer ka hath pakad kar ander ki taraf chalne lagti hai. Vo sayad bahut excited thi samne ka najara dekhne ke liye aur lucifer ne kya kya plan kar rakha hai uske liye

Vaise to lucifer ne ek hi chhij ka plan kar rakha tha aur vo aaj honi bhi thi lekin us se pehle to payal ko special mahsus karana chahta tha

Ek garden type ka kuch bana hua tha jiske aakhiri chhor par ek table, do chair lagi hue thi aur un par khana rakha tha

Sath me table ke hi side me bahut khusburat jharna gir raha tha. Jharne ki aawaz aur hava ki sheetalta vaha dekhne layak thi

Ek dam shant jagah thi aur aisa lag raha tha jaise lucifer ne hi usse shant karvaya hai aaj

Etni shant jagah dekh kar payal to khushi se jhumne lagi aur vo khud jharne ki taraf badh gaye

Piche lucifer dheere dheere uski taraf aa raha tha. Londo ko piche rahna pasand bhi hai ladkiyo ke. Eska bahut bada fayda jo hai

Esliye hi lucifer usse piche se dekh raha tha aur soch raha tha kya hi ladki hai ye aur kya kismat paye hai usne(lucifer ne)

Payal- wow. I don't know maine life me kya kiya tha jo mujhe etna special feel kara rahe ho tum. Thank you so much lucifer.

Lucifer bas muskura diya

Payal- mujh par karj chada rahe ho tum.
Lucifer- hisaab rakh raha hu. Tension mat lo
Now can we?
Ek chair kheech kar payal ko bathne ke liye bolte hai

Payal bhi muskurate hue bath gaye aur lucifer ne gentlemen ki tarah chair aage badha di aur khud samne jake bath gaye

Lucifer- start karo
Payal- aap karo

Lucifer- tumhre liye hai sab to tum start karo. Mujhe jo khana hai usme abhi waqt hai

Payal muskurate hue samne rakhe khane ko khol kar dekhne lagi

Usme daal thi, bhindi, bangan, kuch aur sabjiya thi jo hum regular khate hai

Lucifer- I know tumhe yehi sab pasand aayega to maine yehi banva diya
Payal- you know me well lucifer
Aur dono ki plate ke khana parosne lagi

Halke fulki baatein karte hue dono ne khana finish kiya. Payal to ladki thi to vo vaise hi kam khati thi lekin lucifer ne bhi bahut halka hi khaya tha
Reason?
Samjh jao

Payal- mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ki aaj ka din abhi khatam nahi hua hai?
Lucifer- abhi to starters the main course to ab start hoga

Payal- kaha?
Lucifer- khana kha liya?
What about shower now?

Payal- shower?
Lucifer- kitna acha shower chal raha hai. Chalo aajao nahate hai

Payal- koe dekh lega
Lucifer- koe nahi aayega yaha aaj

Payal- pakka?
Lucifer- you don't trust me?

Payal- let's go then
Lucifer- kapde to laye nahi tum

Payal- kapde pahan kar shower lete ho aap?
Lucifer- haye haye ladki
Chalo fir

Shaam dhal chuki thi aur halka halka andera hone lag gaya tha. Pani aur jungle ki vajah se halki thand bhi hone lag gaye thi

Payal lucifer ka hath thame jharne ki taraf chal di. Uska chehra halka laal padne lag gaye tha kyuki vo imagine karne lag gaye thi ki abhi kya hone wala hai vaha esliye hi lucifer ka hath thoda jor se tham liya tha usne

Halanki thoda dar bhi rahi thi vo kyuki open area tha lekin lucifer par vo trust bhi bahut karti thi esliye lucifer ke ek baar bolne par hi tayaar ho gaye thi

Lucifer- ab ky.....
Bas etna hi bol paya lucifer jharne ke pass khade hokar kyuki payal ne sari sarm chhod kar lucifer ke hontho se apne honth jod diye aur usse chhumne lagi

Subah to bas honth mile the lekin asli milan to ab ho raha tha

Kuch hi seconds me passionate kiss ki jagah wild kiss ne le li aur payal lucifer ki shirt nikalne lag gaye jisme usse bahut jaldi safalta bhi mil gaye

Lucifer ke nange badan ko mahsus karte hi payal ke sareer me jhanjhat fail gaye aur vo aur teji se usse kiss karne lagi

Lucifer ke hatho ne bhi payal ke sareer par harkatein karni suru kar di. Kabhi vo uski gand ko dabochta to kabhi uske ubhaar kar lekin payal ne suit pahna hua tha jisse utarne me dono ko ek dusre se alag hona padta esliye abhi upar upar se hi kaam chal raha tha

Jo ab khatam hone wala tha kyuki payal ne jis furti se lucifer se alag hokar apna suit nikala lucifer to notice bhi nahi kar paya aur vapas dono ek dusre se jud gaye

Ek light blue color ki simple bra pahan rakhi thi payal ne jisme se uske ubhaar nikalne ko betaab the aur lucifer ne uski betabhi bakhubhi samjhi bhi aur bra ko sareer se alag kar diya

Sath me salwar ka naada khol kar usse bhi sareer se alag kar diya

Jab payal ko ye sab mahush hua to vo aur jada chhipak gaye lucifer aur aur kisi tarah lucifer ki pant ko bhi uske sareer se aazad kar diya

Ab dono nange ho chuke the aur pani me aag lagane ko tayaar the

Lucifer ne gand se pakad kar payal ko hava me uthaya aur jharne ke niche chalne laga

Jaise hi paani ki bunde unke sareer ko chhune lagi vaise vaise unki aag badhakne lagi aur ab hontho se alag hokar ek dusre ke dusre aango se khelne lag gaye

Lucifer ka muh to sidhe hi payal ke ubhaaro par gaya aur sidhe unhe muh me bhar liya

Ek shirhan dood gaye payal ke sareer se aur bahut madaak aahh nikali

Payal ke ubhaaro ka hi jaado tha ki lucifer unhe kho gaya
Halka sa bhi dhilapan nahi tha un me aur bilkul perfect size me the vo

Vahi payal apne hatho se lucifer ki pith par es milan ke nisaan chhodne lagi

Lucifer ka ek hath jaise hi payal ki panty par pahucha vaise hi payal ke nakhoon lucifer ke peeth me dhas gaye

Pani ki vajah se geele to vo dono pehle hi vo chuke the lekin lucifer ko chhikna pan bahut ache se feel ho gaya tha jo bata raha tha ki payal bhi khub enjoy kar rahi thi

Payal- I want to taste you
Bahut dheere se lucifer ke kaan me boli payal to lucifer ne usko dheela chhod diya aur vo dheere dheere niche bathne lagi

Dhadkane etni tej ho chuki thi ki kab fat jaye koe bharosa nahi sath me hatho me bhi kampan paida hone lag gaya tha

Jaise hi lucifer ke underwear se uske ajgar ke size ka aabash hua payal ko vo aur pagal hone lagi lekin abhi himmat mahi ho rahi thi uski ki underwear niche karke usse dekh sake

Jisme lucifer ne turant uski sahayata ki aur khud hi apna kacha niche kar diya

Jaise hi niche hua kisi spring ki tarah lucifer ka lund payal ke muh par jakar laga. Ek millisecond ke liye jaise payal ke dil ne dhadakna hi band kar diya

Lekin fir khud ko kabhi me karte hue lund ko apne hatho me bhar liya aur ek do baar aage piche karke dekha

Fir apni jib se sirf tope ko touch kiya
Ahhhhhh kya feeling thi

Jaise jaise payal aage badh rahi thi vaise vaise lucifer ki aankhen band hoti ja rahi thi aur vo es moment ko pura feel karne ki kosis karne lag gaya tha

Payal jeeb se hi bahar wali side ko chhumne chhatne lagi

Uska bhi ye first time hi tha aur vo koe jaldbaji nahi karna chahti thi esliye jitna ho sake utna slow seductive tarika use kar rahi thi vo

Aur eski hi vajah se lucifer ko thoda alag feel ho raha tha. Kyuki etna slow seductive to kisi ke sath nahi hua tha. Vahi tara ke sath jitna wild ho gaya tha scene vo to bilkul hi alag baat hai

Dheere dheere payal ne jitna us se ho paya utna muh me bhar kar chusna start kar diya. Lucifer bhi uske sar ko piche se pakad kar uski help karne laga

Kuch hi der me payal thak gaye kyuki pani me bathne me bhi dikkat ho rahi thi aur upar se lagatar speed me pani geer bhi raha tha

Esliye hi lucifer ne usse vapas khada kar liya ek pyaara sa kiss usse dekhte hue kiya aur fir

Lucifer- you ready??
Ek muskaan ke sath kiss return karte hue payal ne haami bhari

Lucifer ne payal ko jaha se jharna start hota hai us chataan par hath rakhva kar piche ki taraf jhuka diya

Lucifer- pain hoga, jitni jor se chhikh sako chhik lena
Koe nahi sunega aaj tumhri mere alava
Aur khud niche bath kar payal ki chut ko ek baar muh me bhar ke taste kiya jiski vajah se payal ke hath chataan par kas gaye

Fir position me akar piche se apna lund payal ki chut par set karne laga

Sahi angel milne par payal ke face ko piche ghuma kar uski aankhon me dekhte hue aage badhne ka pucha aur payal ne bhi aankhon se hi sahmati de di

To payal ko pehle to ache se thama aur fir bahut jor laga kar dheere dheere aage badhne laga

Jor bahut laga diya tha lucifer ne esliye lund ek baar bhi target se nahi bhatka aur bahut aaram se payal ki chut me sama gaya

Dard ki ek lahar dhod gaye payal ke sareer me aur khoon ki kuch bunde bah gaye us jharne ke pani ke sath

Aur lucifer bilkul pyaar se aaram aaram se aage piche hone laga. Vo es baat ka pura dhayaan rakh raha tha ki payal ko jitna ho sake utna kam dard ho lekin kisi first timer ke liye lucifer jaise insaan ka lund lene me dikkat to hoti hi hai na

Vohi payal ke sath ho raha tha. Chahe lucifer bahut aaram se kar raha tha lekin fir bhi payal jor jor se chhikh chhikh kar rona chahti thi khushi me lekin vo pata nahi kyu apne aapko control kiye hue the

Halanki uske aashu dikh nahi rahe the pani ki vajah se lekin uske chehre par umda dard saaf baya kar raha tha ki es waqt vo bahut dard me hai

Lucifer ne esliye hi usko kiss karna start kar diya aur uska mind divert karne ke liye uske aango se khelna bhi sath me bilkul aaram aaram se usse chhodne bhi laga

Panch minute ke baad payal ko thodi shanti feel hone lagi aur sath me acha bhi lagne laga esliye ab uski gand khud aage piche hone lag gaye thi aur muh se halki halki siskiya bhi suru ho gaye

To lucifer ne bhi speed thodi badhae aur ab pani ke sath thap thap ki aawaze bhi gunjane lagi

Fir payal hi aage badh gaye aur lucifer ka lund uski chut se nikal gaya jab lucifer ne payal ki taraf dekha to vo samjh gaya ki payal usse dekhte hue karna chahti hai

Lucifer ne bhi kisi taraf patharo par khud ko aur payal ko adjust kiya aur aamne samne face karke usse chhodne laga

Vahut kamuk mahool ho gaya tha upar se payal ke facial expression to aur kayamat dhaa rahe the

Vo lucifer ko aise dekh rahi thi jaise aaj usme puri tarah sama jana chahti ho

Aise hi aadhe gante tak en dono ka milan chalta raha fir lucifer payal ke muh me hi pura jhad gaya.....
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and awesome update....
 
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