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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

sorbobhuk

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Car me bahut shanti thi lucifer drive kar raha tha uske bagal me ashmita bathi thi aur piche tara lekin lucifer ko shanti pasand kaha hai?

Lucifer- aassshhuuuu
Vo ashmita ko irritate karne wali aawaz me bola
Ashmita- muh band rakh apna

Lucifer- tu kabab me haddi banana kab band karegi?
Ashmita- tu gate band karna kab suru karega?

Lucifer- tara batao kab gate band karna sikhogi tum?
Jaldi se sikh lo nahi to ye aise hi mood kharab karti rahegi

Tara bechari pehle hi ashmita se najar nahi mila pa rahi thi upar se lucifer bakchodi pe bakchodi kiye ja raha tha

Ashmita- kutta kahi ka
Lucifer- na khud kuch karti hai na kisi ko karne deti hai
Pata hai tara kitni udaas ho gaye thi jab main usse beech me hi chhod ke aaya

Ashmita- lucifer tujhe marna hai kya?
Chhup chhap drive kar
Lucifer- maar to dena lekin aaj meri baaton se bach nahi payegi tu

Ashmita- mujhe sunana hi nahi hai
Lucifer- tujhe sunanan padega
Kab tak sach se bhagti rahegi?

Ashmita- main bhagti hu?
Khud ko dekh
Apne bare me pata hai tujhe kuch?
Paglo ki tarah yaha vaha muh marta firta hai
Ye tak nahi pata tujhe ki tu hai kon

Bas ye nahi bolna tha ashmita ne vo gusse me bol gaye aur vapas ghadi me shanti chha gaye
Lucifer ke pass es sawal ka koe jawab nahi tha esliye vo chhup ho gaya aur chehra bilkul serious

Jab ashmita ko realize hue ki usne abhi abhi gusse me kya bol diya hai to usne ek second bhi nahi lagaye sorry bolne me

Ashmita- sorry mera vo matlab nahi tha
I'm really sorry
Lucifer- to kya matlab tha tera?
Main sach esliye nahi janana chahta kyuki vaha kuch acha nahi milega
Aur main tujhse kuch chhupa nahi sakta
Tu bata jab tujhe vo sab pata chalega to tu kaise react karegi?
Abhi to tu bol degi ki main humesha sath hu lekin sach ye hai ki besak mujhe yaad na ho ki mera past me kya hua hai lekin mujhe etna bahut ache se pata hai ki jo hua vo etna bura hai ki teri jaisi strong ladki bhi mujhse door ho sakti hai
Main aage badhna chahta hu ashu esliye piche nahi dekhna chahta
Aur agar tu chahti hai main past pata karu to vohi sahi

Ashmita- sorry na
Main gusse gusse me bol gaye
Lucifer- gusse me kuch bhi bol degi kya?
Main kabhi kuch bola hu gusse me tujhe?

Ashmita- ab se nahi bolungi pakka promise
Lucifer- tune ek baar pehle bhi bola tha aur aaj firse bol diya tu kal vapas yehi karegi
Bc meri feelings ki to kadar hi nahi hai

Ashmita- teri feelings ki kadar nahi hai?
Soch samjh ke bol samjha
Lucifer- nahi to kya?
Firse mere past ke bare me majak banayegi?

Ashmita- lucifer main sorry bol chuki hu
Ab kya tere pair pakdu?
Lucifer- ha pair pakad

Ashmita- le pakad liye tere pair
Ab khush?
Lucifer ke pair pakadte hue boli
Lucifer- abhi nahi
Thoda upar se pakad tisra pair mera

Ashmita- bakwas nahi kar ab
Lucifer- main to bakwas hi karta hu
Tu hi to dusro ke past ka mazak banati hai

Ashmita- galti se nikal gaya muh se
Tujhe pata hai main tujhse kitna pyaar karti hu fir bhi tu aisi baat kar raha hai?
Tara- ashu vo majje le raha hai tere
Aur tu bhi eski baaton me aa rahi hai

Ashmita ne ghoor ke lucifer ko dekha to uska serious chehre par hassi aa gaye jis se ashmita aur jada chhid gaye

Lucifer- main bilkul mazak nahi kar raha bahut jada serious hu main
Ashmita- teri maut mere hi hatho likhi hai dekh lena tu?

Lucifer- agar main mar gaya to jee legi tu?
Lucifer ne bola aur ashmita ka gussa wala chehra utar gaya ab usse samjh nahi aaya ki kya bole

Lucifer- bol mar gaya main to jee legi tu?
Ashmita- chhup rah tu
Mujhe nahi baat karni tujhse

Lucifer- to tu drive kar le
Main tara ke sath piche bath jata hu aur ha mirror ulta kar lena kahi hum dono ko dekhti rahe ki kya kar rahe hai hum
Ashmita- chhup rah tu
Bahut gussa aa raha hai mujhe

Lucifer- kya rakha hai gusse me?
Tara- lucifer chhup raho na tum?
Tara thodi normal ho gaye thi ab tak

Lucifer- dekh raho ho binod kitni respect di ja rahi hai Lucifer ko
Bechari tara jo abhi normal hue thi vapas sarma gaye

Ashmita- ja kaha rahe hai hum?
Lucifer-.

Ashmita- bata nahi to main utar jaungi yahi
Lucifer-.

Ashmita- main sach bol rahi hu
Lucifer- tu pehle decide kar le mujhe karna kya hai?
Kabhi bolti hai muh band rah kabhi muh khulvane ka kaam karvati hai
Pata nahi koe etna confused kaise ho sakta hai?

Ashmita- kaha ja rahe hai hum? Ye bata bas sidhe sidhe
Lucifer- hum ja rahe hai mount abu

Ashmita- aur kaha kyu?
Lucifer- mujhe tara ke sath baraf me sex karna hai esliye

Ashmita- to main kyu ja rahi hu?
Lucifer- tu darshak ban kar dekhna humari raasleela

Ashmita- I'm not interested
Lucifer- dekhna padega
Tere pass koe dusra option nahi hai

Ashmita- tune agar faltu bolna band nahi kiya to main utar jani hu es ghadi se bata rahi hu main
Lucifer- arrogant ass****

Mata- ek sawal puchna tha aapse
Supreme- ha bolo

Mata- aapne apne Lucifer ke sath hi aisa kyu kiya?
Supreme- jiske sath bhi karta vo bhi to kisi ka lucifer hota na?

Mata- agar usse bura hi dikhana tha to usme achae kyu dikhae?
Bachpan se hi usse aisa banate ki koe usse pasand nahi karta
Fir sayad kisi ko etna dard nahi hota
Supreme- dard hi jeevan ka saar hai
Humne Lucifer ko pyaar diya lucifer ko pyaar sikhaya tumne
Lekin fir bhi vo bana to satan hi na?
Es se pata chalta hai ki parishthi kab kisi kaha le jaye ye humare hatho me nahi hota
Agar vo suru se hi bura hota to sabko lagta ye to bura hi hai es se hum kis chhij ki umeed kar sakte hai?
Lekin lucifer se umeed ki ja sakti thi jis umeed ko vo todta aur ek sikhsha deta ki jaruri nahi umeed puri hi ho

Mata- ye sab myth hai
Lucifer ne kisi ki umeed nahi todi
Aapne jitna usko bura banane ki kosis ki vo usme bhi achae dund leta tha esliye aapne uske sath aisa kiya
Supreme - lucifer mera beta hai
Main uske sath khel to khelunga nahi
Ye shristhi ke liye bahut jaruri thi

Mata- maan liya us se logo ko kuch sikh milegi
Chalo maan liya
Lekin kya kuch log usme apne aapko nahi dekhne lag jayenge?
Tab kya hoga?
Supreme- tabhi to balance bana rahega achae aur burae ka

Mata- aur uske pyaar ka kya?
Kyu uski jindagi me etni ladkiya aaye?
Agar dhokha dikhana hi aapka maksad tha to vo kisi ek ladki se bhi to dikha sakte the?
Supreme- sirf dhokha nahi dikhana tha
Saanvi ka pyaar dikhana tha, Simran ki dosti to mitika ka samarpan...

Mata- kya eda ne pyaar nahi kiya tha?
Kya eda dosti nahi karna chahti thi?
Kya eda samarpan nahi thi?
Ya jo khubiya bakiyo me thi vo sab eda me nahi thi?
Agar shakti dikhani thi to kya eda roshini se jada shaktishali nahi thi?
Agar bhalae dikhani thi to kya eda shreya se jada logo se pyaar nahi karti thi?
Agar gyaan dikhana tha to kya eda trisha se jada gyaani nahi thi?
Aur chalo maan liya eska aapke pass koe jawab hai lekin ye sab prithvi par vapas karne ka kya jawab hai aapke pass?
Aur eda ko jeevit rakhne ka kya?

Supreme halki muskurahat ke sath
Aaj humari priye humse naraj lag rahi hai?
Mata- main vohi puch rahi hu jo jaruri hai
Mujhe aaj sab bata dijiye
Mujhe sab janana hai
Kahi aisa na ho ek bete ki bagawat aap sambhal nahi pa rahe agar uski maa ne bhi bagawat suru kar di to puri shristhi ka naash aap rok na pao

Supreme- pyaar se suruvaat karte hai
Eda aur saanvi me se saanvi kyu aur eda kyu nahi?
Maine ek baar pehle bhi bola tha ki eda ko lucifer se door rakhne ka ek bahut bada karan tha lekin tumne usse vardaan deke mere kaam me rukavat kar di
Fir bhi main us chhij ko sambhal lunga
Eda aur saanvi ke saanvi sirf esliye hai kyuki eda ka janam lucifer ke liye hua hi nahi
Bahut badi jimmedari aani hai uske jeevan me aur vo abhi us jimmedari ko uthane ke liye tayar ho rahi hai

Dusra sawal eda aur simran me se simran kyu aur eda kyu nahi?
Eda ki baat to ab karenge nahi uska karan main bata chuka hu to sirf simran kyu sirf eski baat karenge
Lucifer ko koe ek aisa chahiye tha jiski baat vo sun sake aur vo ladki apni baat lucifer se manva bhi sake
Simran ke alava aisa koe nahi hai jo lucifer se apni baat manva sake
Sirf vohi hai jiske liye lucifer ke dil me pyaar se badh kar rishta hai
Aisa rishta jo jismani na ho kar rooh se rooh tak ka hai
Aur jitna eda ka aham role hai vo role simran ke bina pura nahi ho sakta esliye simran es kahani ki mukhya abhinetri hai

Ab baari aati hai mitika
Mujhe mitika bahut pasand hai
Vo ek spy ke jaisi hai kahi se bhi kuch bhi pata kar leti hai
Jab jab lucifer apna rasta bhatkega usse sirf mitika hi samne khadi milegi jo usse bataegi ki kis taraf jana hai
Lucifer jab khud ko dundne lagega tab bhi mitika hi uske sath khadi hogi
Vo na to khud ko mitika ke bagar dund payega aur na apne aap ko mitika ke bina pahchan payega
Mitika usse lucifer bana ke rakhne ka kaam karegi
Jab jab lucifer kamjor padega tab tab mitika uska hath pakad kar usse aaena dikhaegi

Ab aage kon?
Shreya?
Sabse pehla sawal to ye aana chahiye ki shreya saanvi se alag kaise hai?
Dono ek jaisi to hai
Soch bhi ek jaisi hai
To fir do alag alag insaan kyu banaye gaye?
Ek antar hai dono me
Vo dono hi lucifer ko behad pyaar karti hai aur agar hum pyaar ki drasti se dekhe to saanvi shreya se jeet bhi jayegi
To shreya kaha jeetegi?
Shreya ek nischal ladki hai
Usse logo me achae ke alava aur kuch nahi dikhta
Shreya ek aisa pavitar sagar hai jisme koe tair nahi paya aur jo tair gaya usne dunia pa li
Vahi saanvi ka pyaar lucifer se hai usse dunia se humdardi hai lekin pyaar nahi hai
Vo acha karna chahti hai lekin kar nahi pati
Usse khud ke bare me bhi sochna hai aur lucifer ke bare me bhi
Yehi chhij hai jo saanvi aur shreya ko alag banate hai
Ek nischal prem kya hota hai vo dikhane ke liye shreya ka janam hua hai

Ab aate hai trisha par

Ek aisa kirdaar jo khud andhere me rahta hai lekin dusro ko roshni dikhata hai
Lucifer se bilkul ulta
Na parivaar hai, na dost hai na kabhi pyaar hua na kabhi socha
Jo bhi eske pass ayega vo apne baare me kuch na kuch jaan kar hi vapas jayega
Lucifer akela rah kar devil bana aur trisha akeli rah kar ek monk
Lucifer ne andhera kiya to ye samne diya leke khadi mili
Esko ache bure ka pata nahi hai agar koe madad mangne aaya ya fir trisha ko laga ki samne wale ko madad ki jarurat hai to ye khud se madad karne pahuch jayegi
Gyaan ka bhandaar hai trisha
Aisa sayad hi koe sawal hoga jiska sateek jawab trisha ke pass na ho
Lucifer ke jeevan me gyaan aur budhi trisha hi leke aayegi

Roshini

Ab etne kirdaar aa gaye to ek aur lucifer ko to aana hi tha
Jaisa lucifer hai bilkul vaisi hi hai roshini
Apne naam ke bilkul ulti
Esne bhi andhere ko hi chhuna aur ussi me sama gaye
Eski aur lucifer ko bahut kam banegi lekin jab banegi to gayab ki banegi
Simran ke alava agar koe hai jo lucifer ke liye jaan le sakta hai vo roshini hi hai
Lucifer ki premika me sabse khatarnaak aur sabse alag
Jab do buraeya aapas me takrati hai to kya hota hai?
Vo dikhegi jab lucifer aur roshini apas me takraenge
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Mata- ek aur bach gaye
Supreme- maya
Maya lucifer ki premika nahi hai

Mata- to kya hai maya?
Supreme- maya lucifer ko ek parivaar ki mahtavta batayegi
Lucifer us se parivaar kya hota hai ye janega
Parivaar ke liye koe kya kya kar sakta hai kis had tak ja sakta hai ye sab maya ke jariye hi lucifer ko pata chalega
Hum lucifer ko parivaar wala pyaar nahi de paye lekin maya usse parivaar degi, uska pyaar degi
Har vo chhij jo lucifer ko ek parivaar me chahiye thi vo sab usse maya se hi milegi

Mata- to kya maya lucifer se pyaar nahi karti?
Supreme- ye sawal hum waqt par chhod dete hai
Aur kuch bacha hai?

Mata- tara?
Supreme- tara ko tumne banaya hai maine nahi

Mata- chalo maan liya ye sab alag alag kaam ke liye bani hai lekin
Supreme- ab bhi lekin bach gaya kya?

Mata- ha
Simran lucifer se pyaar bhi karti thi aur uski dost bhi thi, vo uske liye dunia se lad bhi sakti thi aur dunia ko us se bacha bhi sakti thi, uske pass bahut gyaan tha aur vo lucifer ko lucifer se mila bhi sakti thi, maine simran ko hi sabse pavitra manugi kyuki vo lucifer ke prati samarpit thi
To fir baki sab ko banane ki kya jarurat thi jab vo sare kaam lucifer ke liye simran hi kar sakti thi to?
Supreme- kya vo etna boj utha pati?
Log usse pagal samjh lete ye soch kar ki are ye kabhi hasti hai to kabhi roti hai kabhi pyaar karti hai to kabhi gussa
Kabhi marti hai to kabhi marham lagati hai
Sab ko alag alag karna hi sabse sahi tha taki vo apna kaam bakubi kar sake

Mata- log kya kahenge sirf eske liye aapne etne logo ki jindagi dard se bhar de?
Log kuch to kahenge unka kaam hai kahna

Lucifer- mujhe sab sochna padta hai
Logo ka kaam nahi hai logo ke bare me sochna lekin mera hai

Mata- theek hai ye bhi maan liya lekin prithvi par ye sab vapas dhorane ka kya karan hai?

Supreme- vahi par to honi hai sabki agni pariksha
Kon apne karyo par khara utarta hai vo sab vahi par dikhega

Mata- kya kabhi lucifer vapas angel ban payega?
Supreme- vo angel hi hai humesha se angel hi raha hai
Usse vapas banane ki jarurat nahi

Mata- kitna khoon bahega?
Supreme- ye dharti ne etne paap kiye hai ki ab khoon se hi vo paap saaf honge

Mata- matlab bahut jada bahega
Supreme - jinka jaruri hai unka to bahega hi

Mata- agar lucifer hi na raha to kya aap us se lad paoge?
Aap bhul rahe ho ki keval lucifer hi usko hara sakta hai
Aapka vardaan hai ye
Supreme- aisa koe vachan nahi koe vardaan nahi jo main nahi tod sakta
Maine dunia banae hai aur esme paida hone wale har ek chhij ko maine banaya hai

Mata- aur usme bahut khamiya bhi hai
Aap na to usko hara paoge aur na us ko baand paoge
Aapki banae dunia ko bahut ache se padha hai usne aur un khamiyo se apne aapko banaya hai

Supreme- priye etna nahi socha karte
Sab kuch hoga apne waqt par
Main es dunia ko bahut pehle jaisa bana dunga jaha sirf aur sirf pyaar tha bas uske liye thoda khoon banana jaruri hai
Mata- aapke thode sabad se hi dar lagta hai mujhe
KYA LUCIFER JINDA BACHEGA????
Bahut badhiya update hai Bhai..... Akhir lucifer. Ke life me itne sare premikay kyu aaya hai ye to samaj geye.....liken eda ka man kamna puri nhi ho payega......or lucifer tara or ashmita ko kaha leke geya hai.....
Waiting fot next update
 

krish1152

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Car me bahut shanti thi lucifer drive kar raha tha uske bagal me ashmita bathi thi aur piche tara lekin lucifer ko shanti pasand kaha hai?

Lucifer- aassshhuuuu
Vo ashmita ko irritate karne wali aawaz me bola
Ashmita- muh band rakh apna

Lucifer- tu kabab me haddi banana kab band karegi?
Ashmita- tu gate band karna kab suru karega?

Lucifer- tara batao kab gate band karna sikhogi tum?
Jaldi se sikh lo nahi to ye aise hi mood kharab karti rahegi

Tara bechari pehle hi ashmita se najar nahi mila pa rahi thi upar se lucifer bakchodi pe bakchodi kiye ja raha tha

Ashmita- kutta kahi ka
Lucifer- na khud kuch karti hai na kisi ko karne deti hai
Pata hai tara kitni udaas ho gaye thi jab main usse beech me hi chhod ke aaya

Ashmita- lucifer tujhe marna hai kya?
Chhup chhap drive kar
Lucifer- maar to dena lekin aaj meri baaton se bach nahi payegi tu

Ashmita- mujhe sunana hi nahi hai
Lucifer- tujhe sunanan padega
Kab tak sach se bhagti rahegi?

Ashmita- main bhagti hu?
Khud ko dekh
Apne bare me pata hai tujhe kuch?
Paglo ki tarah yaha vaha muh marta firta hai
Ye tak nahi pata tujhe ki tu hai kon

Bas ye nahi bolna tha ashmita ne vo gusse me bol gaye aur vapas ghadi me shanti chha gaye
Lucifer ke pass es sawal ka koe jawab nahi tha esliye vo chhup ho gaya aur chehra bilkul serious

Jab ashmita ko realize hue ki usne abhi abhi gusse me kya bol diya hai to usne ek second bhi nahi lagaye sorry bolne me

Ashmita- sorry mera vo matlab nahi tha
I'm really sorry
Lucifer- to kya matlab tha tera?
Main sach esliye nahi janana chahta kyuki vaha kuch acha nahi milega
Aur main tujhse kuch chhupa nahi sakta
Tu bata jab tujhe vo sab pata chalega to tu kaise react karegi?
Abhi to tu bol degi ki main humesha sath hu lekin sach ye hai ki besak mujhe yaad na ho ki mera past me kya hua hai lekin mujhe etna bahut ache se pata hai ki jo hua vo etna bura hai ki teri jaisi strong ladki bhi mujhse door ho sakti hai
Main aage badhna chahta hu ashu esliye piche nahi dekhna chahta
Aur agar tu chahti hai main past pata karu to vohi sahi

Ashmita- sorry na
Main gusse gusse me bol gaye
Lucifer- gusse me kuch bhi bol degi kya?
Main kabhi kuch bola hu gusse me tujhe?

Ashmita- ab se nahi bolungi pakka promise
Lucifer- tune ek baar pehle bhi bola tha aur aaj firse bol diya tu kal vapas yehi karegi
Bc meri feelings ki to kadar hi nahi hai

Ashmita- teri feelings ki kadar nahi hai?
Soch samjh ke bol samjha
Lucifer- nahi to kya?
Firse mere past ke bare me majak banayegi?

Ashmita- lucifer main sorry bol chuki hu
Ab kya tere pair pakdu?
Lucifer- ha pair pakad

Ashmita- le pakad liye tere pair
Ab khush?
Lucifer ke pair pakadte hue boli
Lucifer- abhi nahi
Thoda upar se pakad tisra pair mera

Ashmita- bakwas nahi kar ab
Lucifer- main to bakwas hi karta hu
Tu hi to dusro ke past ka mazak banati hai

Ashmita- galti se nikal gaya muh se
Tujhe pata hai main tujhse kitna pyaar karti hu fir bhi tu aisi baat kar raha hai?
Tara- ashu vo majje le raha hai tere
Aur tu bhi eski baaton me aa rahi hai

Ashmita ne ghoor ke lucifer ko dekha to uska serious chehre par hassi aa gaye jis se ashmita aur jada chhid gaye

Lucifer- main bilkul mazak nahi kar raha bahut jada serious hu main
Ashmita- teri maut mere hi hatho likhi hai dekh lena tu?

Lucifer- agar main mar gaya to jee legi tu?
Lucifer ne bola aur ashmita ka gussa wala chehra utar gaya ab usse samjh nahi aaya ki kya bole

Lucifer- bol mar gaya main to jee legi tu?
Ashmita- chhup rah tu
Mujhe nahi baat karni tujhse

Lucifer- to tu drive kar le
Main tara ke sath piche bath jata hu aur ha mirror ulta kar lena kahi hum dono ko dekhti rahe ki kya kar rahe hai hum
Ashmita- chhup rah tu
Bahut gussa aa raha hai mujhe

Lucifer- kya rakha hai gusse me?
Tara- lucifer chhup raho na tum?
Tara thodi normal ho gaye thi ab tak

Lucifer- dekh raho ho binod kitni respect di ja rahi hai Lucifer ko
Bechari tara jo abhi normal hue thi vapas sarma gaye

Ashmita- ja kaha rahe hai hum?
Lucifer-.

Ashmita- bata nahi to main utar jaungi yahi
Lucifer-.

Ashmita- main sach bol rahi hu
Lucifer- tu pehle decide kar le mujhe karna kya hai?
Kabhi bolti hai muh band rah kabhi muh khulvane ka kaam karvati hai
Pata nahi koe etna confused kaise ho sakta hai?

Ashmita- kaha ja rahe hai hum? Ye bata bas sidhe sidhe
Lucifer- hum ja rahe hai mount abu

Ashmita- aur kaha kyu?
Lucifer- mujhe tara ke sath baraf me sex karna hai esliye

Ashmita- to main kyu ja rahi hu?
Lucifer- tu darshak ban kar dekhna humari raasleela

Ashmita- I'm not interested
Lucifer- dekhna padega
Tere pass koe dusra option nahi hai

Ashmita- tune agar faltu bolna band nahi kiya to main utar jani hu es ghadi se bata rahi hu main
Lucifer- arrogant ass****

Mata- ek sawal puchna tha aapse
Supreme- ha bolo

Mata- aapne apne Lucifer ke sath hi aisa kyu kiya?
Supreme- jiske sath bhi karta vo bhi to kisi ka lucifer hota na?

Mata- agar usse bura hi dikhana tha to usme achae kyu dikhae?
Bachpan se hi usse aisa banate ki koe usse pasand nahi karta
Fir sayad kisi ko etna dard nahi hota
Supreme- dard hi jeevan ka saar hai
Humne Lucifer ko pyaar diya lucifer ko pyaar sikhaya tumne
Lekin fir bhi vo bana to satan hi na?
Es se pata chalta hai ki parishthi kab kisi kaha le jaye ye humare hatho me nahi hota
Agar vo suru se hi bura hota to sabko lagta ye to bura hi hai es se hum kis chhij ki umeed kar sakte hai?
Lekin lucifer se umeed ki ja sakti thi jis umeed ko vo todta aur ek sikhsha deta ki jaruri nahi umeed puri hi ho

Mata- ye sab myth hai
Lucifer ne kisi ki umeed nahi todi
Aapne jitna usko bura banane ki kosis ki vo usme bhi achae dund leta tha esliye aapne uske sath aisa kiya
Supreme - lucifer mera beta hai
Main uske sath khel to khelunga nahi
Ye shristhi ke liye bahut jaruri thi

Mata- maan liya us se logo ko kuch sikh milegi
Chalo maan liya
Lekin kya kuch log usme apne aapko nahi dekhne lag jayenge?
Tab kya hoga?
Supreme- tabhi to balance bana rahega achae aur burae ka

Mata- aur uske pyaar ka kya?
Kyu uski jindagi me etni ladkiya aaye?
Agar dhokha dikhana hi aapka maksad tha to vo kisi ek ladki se bhi to dikha sakte the?
Supreme- sirf dhokha nahi dikhana tha
Saanvi ka pyaar dikhana tha, Simran ki dosti to mitika ka samarpan...

Mata- kya eda ne pyaar nahi kiya tha?
Kya eda dosti nahi karna chahti thi?
Kya eda samarpan nahi thi?
Ya jo khubiya bakiyo me thi vo sab eda me nahi thi?
Agar shakti dikhani thi to kya eda roshini se jada shaktishali nahi thi?
Agar bhalae dikhani thi to kya eda shreya se jada logo se pyaar nahi karti thi?
Agar gyaan dikhana tha to kya eda trisha se jada gyaani nahi thi?
Aur chalo maan liya eska aapke pass koe jawab hai lekin ye sab prithvi par vapas karne ka kya jawab hai aapke pass?
Aur eda ko jeevit rakhne ka kya?

Supreme halki muskurahat ke sath
Aaj humari priye humse naraj lag rahi hai?
Mata- main vohi puch rahi hu jo jaruri hai
Mujhe aaj sab bata dijiye
Mujhe sab janana hai
Kahi aisa na ho ek bete ki bagawat aap sambhal nahi pa rahe agar uski maa ne bhi bagawat suru kar di to puri shristhi ka naash aap rok na pao

Supreme- pyaar se suruvaat karte hai
Eda aur saanvi me se saanvi kyu aur eda kyu nahi?
Maine ek baar pehle bhi bola tha ki eda ko lucifer se door rakhne ka ek bahut bada karan tha lekin tumne usse vardaan deke mere kaam me rukavat kar di
Fir bhi main us chhij ko sambhal lunga
Eda aur saanvi ke saanvi sirf esliye hai kyuki eda ka janam lucifer ke liye hua hi nahi
Bahut badi jimmedari aani hai uske jeevan me aur vo abhi us jimmedari ko uthane ke liye tayar ho rahi hai

Dusra sawal eda aur simran me se simran kyu aur eda kyu nahi?
Eda ki baat to ab karenge nahi uska karan main bata chuka hu to sirf simran kyu sirf eski baat karenge
Lucifer ko koe ek aisa chahiye tha jiski baat vo sun sake aur vo ladki apni baat lucifer se manva bhi sake
Simran ke alava aisa koe nahi hai jo lucifer se apni baat manva sake
Sirf vohi hai jiske liye lucifer ke dil me pyaar se badh kar rishta hai
Aisa rishta jo jismani na ho kar rooh se rooh tak ka hai
Aur jitna eda ka aham role hai vo role simran ke bina pura nahi ho sakta esliye simran es kahani ki mukhya abhinetri hai

Ab baari aati hai mitika
Mujhe mitika bahut pasand hai
Vo ek spy ke jaisi hai kahi se bhi kuch bhi pata kar leti hai
Jab jab lucifer apna rasta bhatkega usse sirf mitika hi samne khadi milegi jo usse bataegi ki kis taraf jana hai
Lucifer jab khud ko dundne lagega tab bhi mitika hi uske sath khadi hogi
Vo na to khud ko mitika ke bagar dund payega aur na apne aap ko mitika ke bina pahchan payega
Mitika usse lucifer bana ke rakhne ka kaam karegi
Jab jab lucifer kamjor padega tab tab mitika uska hath pakad kar usse aaena dikhaegi

Ab aage kon?
Shreya?
Sabse pehla sawal to ye aana chahiye ki shreya saanvi se alag kaise hai?
Dono ek jaisi to hai
Soch bhi ek jaisi hai
To fir do alag alag insaan kyu banaye gaye?
Ek antar hai dono me
Vo dono hi lucifer ko behad pyaar karti hai aur agar hum pyaar ki drasti se dekhe to saanvi shreya se jeet bhi jayegi
To shreya kaha jeetegi?
Shreya ek nischal ladki hai
Usse logo me achae ke alava aur kuch nahi dikhta
Shreya ek aisa pavitar sagar hai jisme koe tair nahi paya aur jo tair gaya usne dunia pa li
Vahi saanvi ka pyaar lucifer se hai usse dunia se humdardi hai lekin pyaar nahi hai
Vo acha karna chahti hai lekin kar nahi pati
Usse khud ke bare me bhi sochna hai aur lucifer ke bare me bhi
Yehi chhij hai jo saanvi aur shreya ko alag banate hai
Ek nischal prem kya hota hai vo dikhane ke liye shreya ka janam hua hai

Ab aate hai trisha par

Ek aisa kirdaar jo khud andhere me rahta hai lekin dusro ko roshni dikhata hai
Lucifer se bilkul ulta
Na parivaar hai, na dost hai na kabhi pyaar hua na kabhi socha
Jo bhi eske pass ayega vo apne baare me kuch na kuch jaan kar hi vapas jayega
Lucifer akela rah kar devil bana aur trisha akeli rah kar ek monk
Lucifer ne andhera kiya to ye samne diya leke khadi mili
Esko ache bure ka pata nahi hai agar koe madad mangne aaya ya fir trisha ko laga ki samne wale ko madad ki jarurat hai to ye khud se madad karne pahuch jayegi
Gyaan ka bhandaar hai trisha
Aisa sayad hi koe sawal hoga jiska sateek jawab trisha ke pass na ho
Lucifer ke jeevan me gyaan aur budhi trisha hi leke aayegi

Roshini

Ab etne kirdaar aa gaye to ek aur lucifer ko to aana hi tha
Jaisa lucifer hai bilkul vaisi hi hai roshini
Apne naam ke bilkul ulti
Esne bhi andhere ko hi chhuna aur ussi me sama gaye
Eski aur lucifer ko bahut kam banegi lekin jab banegi to gayab ki banegi
Simran ke alava agar koe hai jo lucifer ke liye jaan le sakta hai vo roshini hi hai
Lucifer ki premika me sabse khatarnaak aur sabse alag
Jab do buraeya aapas me takrati hai to kya hota hai?
Vo dikhegi jab lucifer aur roshini apas me takraenge
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Mata- ek aur bach gaye
Supreme- maya
Maya lucifer ki premika nahi hai

Mata- to kya hai maya?
Supreme- maya lucifer ko ek parivaar ki mahtavta batayegi
Lucifer us se parivaar kya hota hai ye janega
Parivaar ke liye koe kya kya kar sakta hai kis had tak ja sakta hai ye sab maya ke jariye hi lucifer ko pata chalega
Hum lucifer ko parivaar wala pyaar nahi de paye lekin maya usse parivaar degi, uska pyaar degi
Har vo chhij jo lucifer ko ek parivaar me chahiye thi vo sab usse maya se hi milegi

Mata- to kya maya lucifer se pyaar nahi karti?
Supreme- ye sawal hum waqt par chhod dete hai
Aur kuch bacha hai?

Mata- tara?
Supreme- tara ko tumne banaya hai maine nahi

Mata- chalo maan liya ye sab alag alag kaam ke liye bani hai lekin
Supreme- ab bhi lekin bach gaya kya?

Mata- ha
Simran lucifer se pyaar bhi karti thi aur uski dost bhi thi, vo uske liye dunia se lad bhi sakti thi aur dunia ko us se bacha bhi sakti thi, uske pass bahut gyaan tha aur vo lucifer ko lucifer se mila bhi sakti thi, maine simran ko hi sabse pavitra manugi kyuki vo lucifer ke prati samarpit thi
To fir baki sab ko banane ki kya jarurat thi jab vo sare kaam lucifer ke liye simran hi kar sakti thi to?
Supreme- kya vo etna boj utha pati?
Log usse pagal samjh lete ye soch kar ki are ye kabhi hasti hai to kabhi roti hai kabhi pyaar karti hai to kabhi gussa
Kabhi marti hai to kabhi marham lagati hai
Sab ko alag alag karna hi sabse sahi tha taki vo apna kaam bakubi kar sake

Mata- log kya kahenge sirf eske liye aapne etne logo ki jindagi dard se bhar de?
Log kuch to kahenge unka kaam hai kahna

Lucifer- mujhe sab sochna padta hai
Logo ka kaam nahi hai logo ke bare me sochna lekin mera hai

Mata- theek hai ye bhi maan liya lekin prithvi par ye sab vapas dhorane ka kya karan hai?

Supreme- vahi par to honi hai sabki agni pariksha
Kon apne karyo par khara utarta hai vo sab vahi par dikhega

Mata- kya kabhi lucifer vapas angel ban payega?
Supreme- vo angel hi hai humesha se angel hi raha hai
Usse vapas banane ki jarurat nahi

Mata- kitna khoon bahega?
Supreme- ye dharti ne etne paap kiye hai ki ab khoon se hi vo paap saaf honge

Mata- matlab bahut jada bahega
Supreme - jinka jaruri hai unka to bahega hi

Mata- agar lucifer hi na raha to kya aap us se lad paoge?
Aap bhul rahe ho ki keval lucifer hi usko hara sakta hai
Aapka vardaan hai ye
Supreme- aisa koe vachan nahi koe vardaan nahi jo main nahi tod sakta
Maine dunia banae hai aur esme paida hone wale har ek chhij ko maine banaya hai

Mata- aur usme bahut khamiya bhi hai
Aap na to usko hara paoge aur na us ko baand paoge
Aapki banae dunia ko bahut ache se padha hai usne aur un khamiyo se apne aapko banaya hai

Supreme- priye etna nahi socha karte
Sab kuch hoga apne waqt par
Main es dunia ko bahut pehle jaisa bana dunga jaha sirf aur sirf pyaar tha bas uske liye thoda khoon banana jaruri hai
Mata- aapke thode sabad se hi dar lagta hai mujhe
KYA LUCIFER JINDA BACHEGA????
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Aur Lucifer ne jo Tara ka mza ashmita ke samne liya kafi realistic lga
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UPDATE-191


Car me bahut shanti thi lucifer drive kar raha tha uske bagal me ashmita bathi thi aur piche tara lekin lucifer ko shanti pasand kaha hai?

Lucifer- aassshhuuuu
Vo ashmita ko irritate karne wali aawaz me bola
Ashmita- muh band rakh apna

Lucifer- tu kabab me haddi banana kab band karegi?
Ashmita- tu gate band karna kab suru karega?

Lucifer- tara batao kab gate band karna sikhogi tum?
Jaldi se sikh lo nahi to ye aise hi mood kharab karti rahegi

Tara bechari pehle hi ashmita se najar nahi mila pa rahi thi upar se lucifer bakchodi pe bakchodi kiye ja raha tha

Ashmita- kutta kahi ka
Lucifer- na khud kuch karti hai na kisi ko karne deti hai
Pata hai tara kitni udaas ho gaye thi jab main usse beech me hi chhod ke aaya

Ashmita- lucifer tujhe marna hai kya?
Chhup chhap drive kar
Lucifer- maar to dena lekin aaj meri baaton se bach nahi payegi tu

Ashmita- mujhe sunana hi nahi hai
Lucifer- tujhe sunanan padega
Kab tak sach se bhagti rahegi?

Ashmita- main bhagti hu?
Khud ko dekh
Apne bare me pata hai tujhe kuch?
Paglo ki tarah yaha vaha muh marta firta hai
Ye tak nahi pata tujhe ki tu hai kon

Bas ye nahi bolna tha ashmita ne vo gusse me bol gaye aur vapas ghadi me shanti chha gaye
Lucifer ke pass es sawal ka koe jawab nahi tha esliye vo chhup ho gaya aur chehra bilkul serious

Jab ashmita ko realize hue ki usne abhi abhi gusse me kya bol diya hai to usne ek second bhi nahi lagaye sorry bolne me

Ashmita- sorry mera vo matlab nahi tha
I'm really sorry
Lucifer- to kya matlab tha tera?
Main sach esliye nahi janana chahta kyuki vaha kuch acha nahi milega
Aur main tujhse kuch chhupa nahi sakta
Tu bata jab tujhe vo sab pata chalega to tu kaise react karegi?
Abhi to tu bol degi ki main humesha sath hu lekin sach ye hai ki besak mujhe yaad na ho ki mera past me kya hua hai lekin mujhe etna bahut ache se pata hai ki jo hua vo etna bura hai ki teri jaisi strong ladki bhi mujhse door ho sakti hai
Main aage badhna chahta hu ashu esliye piche nahi dekhna chahta
Aur agar tu chahti hai main past pata karu to vohi sahi

Ashmita- sorry na
Main gusse gusse me bol gaye
Lucifer- gusse me kuch bhi bol degi kya?
Main kabhi kuch bola hu gusse me tujhe?

Ashmita- ab se nahi bolungi pakka promise
Lucifer- tune ek baar pehle bhi bola tha aur aaj firse bol diya tu kal vapas yehi karegi
Bc meri feelings ki to kadar hi nahi hai

Ashmita- teri feelings ki kadar nahi hai?
Soch samjh ke bol samjha
Lucifer- nahi to kya?
Firse mere past ke bare me majak banayegi?

Ashmita- lucifer main sorry bol chuki hu
Ab kya tere pair pakdu?
Lucifer- ha pair pakad

Ashmita- le pakad liye tere pair
Ab khush?
Lucifer ke pair pakadte hue boli
Lucifer- abhi nahi
Thoda upar se pakad tisra pair mera

Ashmita- bakwas nahi kar ab
Lucifer- main to bakwas hi karta hu
Tu hi to dusro ke past ka mazak banati hai

Ashmita- galti se nikal gaya muh se
Tujhe pata hai main tujhse kitna pyaar karti hu fir bhi tu aisi baat kar raha hai?
Tara- ashu vo majje le raha hai tere
Aur tu bhi eski baaton me aa rahi hai

Ashmita ne ghoor ke lucifer ko dekha to uska serious chehre par hassi aa gaye jis se ashmita aur jada chhid gaye

Lucifer- main bilkul mazak nahi kar raha bahut jada serious hu main
Ashmita- teri maut mere hi hatho likhi hai dekh lena tu?

Lucifer- agar main mar gaya to jee legi tu?
Lucifer ne bola aur ashmita ka gussa wala chehra utar gaya ab usse samjh nahi aaya ki kya bole

Lucifer- bol mar gaya main to jee legi tu?
Ashmita- chhup rah tu
Mujhe nahi baat karni tujhse

Lucifer- to tu drive kar le
Main tara ke sath piche bath jata hu aur ha mirror ulta kar lena kahi hum dono ko dekhti rahe ki kya kar rahe hai hum
Ashmita- chhup rah tu
Bahut gussa aa raha hai mujhe

Lucifer- kya rakha hai gusse me?
Tara- lucifer chhup raho na tum?
Tara thodi normal ho gaye thi ab tak

Lucifer- dekh raho ho binod kitni respect di ja rahi hai Lucifer ko
Bechari tara jo abhi normal hue thi vapas sarma gaye

Ashmita- ja kaha rahe hai hum?
Lucifer-.

Ashmita- bata nahi to main utar jaungi yahi
Lucifer-.

Ashmita- main sach bol rahi hu
Lucifer- tu pehle decide kar le mujhe karna kya hai?
Kabhi bolti hai muh band rah kabhi muh khulvane ka kaam karvati hai
Pata nahi koe etna confused kaise ho sakta hai?

Ashmita- kaha ja rahe hai hum? Ye bata bas sidhe sidhe
Lucifer- hum ja rahe hai mount abu

Ashmita- aur kaha kyu?
Lucifer- mujhe tara ke sath baraf me sex karna hai esliye

Ashmita- to main kyu ja rahi hu?
Lucifer- tu darshak ban kar dekhna humari raasleela

Ashmita- I'm not interested
Lucifer- dekhna padega
Tere pass koe dusra option nahi hai

Ashmita- tune agar faltu bolna band nahi kiya to main utar jani hu es ghadi se bata rahi hu main
Lucifer- arrogant ass****

Mata- ek sawal puchna tha aapse
Supreme- ha bolo

Mata- aapne apne Lucifer ke sath hi aisa kyu kiya?
Supreme- jiske sath bhi karta vo bhi to kisi ka lucifer hota na?

Mata- agar usse bura hi dikhana tha to usme achae kyu dikhae?
Bachpan se hi usse aisa banate ki koe usse pasand nahi karta
Fir sayad kisi ko etna dard nahi hota
Supreme- dard hi jeevan ka saar hai
Humne Lucifer ko pyaar diya lucifer ko pyaar sikhaya tumne
Lekin fir bhi vo bana to satan hi na?
Es se pata chalta hai ki parishthi kab kisi kaha le jaye ye humare hatho me nahi hota
Agar vo suru se hi bura hota to sabko lagta ye to bura hi hai es se hum kis chhij ki umeed kar sakte hai?
Lekin lucifer se umeed ki ja sakti thi jis umeed ko vo todta aur ek sikhsha deta ki jaruri nahi umeed puri hi ho

Mata- ye sab myth hai
Lucifer ne kisi ki umeed nahi todi
Aapne jitna usko bura banane ki kosis ki vo usme bhi achae dund leta tha esliye aapne uske sath aisa kiya
Supreme - lucifer mera beta hai
Main uske sath khel to khelunga nahi
Ye shristhi ke liye bahut jaruri thi

Mata- maan liya us se logo ko kuch sikh milegi
Chalo maan liya
Lekin kya kuch log usme apne aapko nahi dekhne lag jayenge?
Tab kya hoga?
Supreme- tabhi to balance bana rahega achae aur burae ka

Mata- aur uske pyaar ka kya?
Kyu uski jindagi me etni ladkiya aaye?
Agar dhokha dikhana hi aapka maksad tha to vo kisi ek ladki se bhi to dikha sakte the?
Supreme- sirf dhokha nahi dikhana tha
Saanvi ka pyaar dikhana tha, Simran ki dosti to mitika ka samarpan...

Mata- kya eda ne pyaar nahi kiya tha?
Kya eda dosti nahi karna chahti thi?
Kya eda samarpan nahi thi?
Ya jo khubiya bakiyo me thi vo sab eda me nahi thi?
Agar shakti dikhani thi to kya eda roshini se jada shaktishali nahi thi?
Agar bhalae dikhani thi to kya eda shreya se jada logo se pyaar nahi karti thi?
Agar gyaan dikhana tha to kya eda trisha se jada gyaani nahi thi?
Aur chalo maan liya eska aapke pass koe jawab hai lekin ye sab prithvi par vapas karne ka kya jawab hai aapke pass?
Aur eda ko jeevit rakhne ka kya?

Supreme halki muskurahat ke sath
Aaj humari priye humse naraj lag rahi hai?
Mata- main vohi puch rahi hu jo jaruri hai
Mujhe aaj sab bata dijiye
Mujhe sab janana hai
Kahi aisa na ho ek bete ki bagawat aap sambhal nahi pa rahe agar uski maa ne bhi bagawat suru kar di to puri shristhi ka naash aap rok na pao

Supreme- pyaar se suruvaat karte hai
Eda aur saanvi me se saanvi kyu aur eda kyu nahi?
Maine ek baar pehle bhi bola tha ki eda ko lucifer se door rakhne ka ek bahut bada karan tha lekin tumne usse vardaan deke mere kaam me rukavat kar di
Fir bhi main us chhij ko sambhal lunga
Eda aur saanvi ke saanvi sirf esliye hai kyuki eda ka janam lucifer ke liye hua hi nahi
Bahut badi jimmedari aani hai uske jeevan me aur vo abhi us jimmedari ko uthane ke liye tayar ho rahi hai

Dusra sawal eda aur simran me se simran kyu aur eda kyu nahi?
Eda ki baat to ab karenge nahi uska karan main bata chuka hu to sirf simran kyu sirf eski baat karenge
Lucifer ko koe ek aisa chahiye tha jiski baat vo sun sake aur vo ladki apni baat lucifer se manva bhi sake
Simran ke alava aisa koe nahi hai jo lucifer se apni baat manva sake
Sirf vohi hai jiske liye lucifer ke dil me pyaar se badh kar rishta hai
Aisa rishta jo jismani na ho kar rooh se rooh tak ka hai
Aur jitna eda ka aham role hai vo role simran ke bina pura nahi ho sakta esliye simran es kahani ki mukhya abhinetri hai

Ab baari aati hai mitika
Mujhe mitika bahut pasand hai
Vo ek spy ke jaisi hai kahi se bhi kuch bhi pata kar leti hai
Jab jab lucifer apna rasta bhatkega usse sirf mitika hi samne khadi milegi jo usse bataegi ki kis taraf jana hai
Lucifer jab khud ko dundne lagega tab bhi mitika hi uske sath khadi hogi
Vo na to khud ko mitika ke bagar dund payega aur na apne aap ko mitika ke bina pahchan payega
Mitika usse lucifer bana ke rakhne ka kaam karegi
Jab jab lucifer kamjor padega tab tab mitika uska hath pakad kar usse aaena dikhaegi

Ab aage kon?
Shreya?
Sabse pehla sawal to ye aana chahiye ki shreya saanvi se alag kaise hai?
Dono ek jaisi to hai
Soch bhi ek jaisi hai
To fir do alag alag insaan kyu banaye gaye?
Ek antar hai dono me
Vo dono hi lucifer ko behad pyaar karti hai aur agar hum pyaar ki drasti se dekhe to saanvi shreya se jeet bhi jayegi
To shreya kaha jeetegi?
Shreya ek nischal ladki hai
Usse logo me achae ke alava aur kuch nahi dikhta
Shreya ek aisa pavitar sagar hai jisme koe tair nahi paya aur jo tair gaya usne dunia pa li
Vahi saanvi ka pyaar lucifer se hai usse dunia se humdardi hai lekin pyaar nahi hai
Vo acha karna chahti hai lekin kar nahi pati
Usse khud ke bare me bhi sochna hai aur lucifer ke bare me bhi
Yehi chhij hai jo saanvi aur shreya ko alag banate hai
Ek nischal prem kya hota hai vo dikhane ke liye shreya ka janam hua hai

Ab aate hai trisha par

Ek aisa kirdaar jo khud andhere me rahta hai lekin dusro ko roshni dikhata hai
Lucifer se bilkul ulta
Na parivaar hai, na dost hai na kabhi pyaar hua na kabhi socha
Jo bhi eske pass ayega vo apne baare me kuch na kuch jaan kar hi vapas jayega
Lucifer akela rah kar devil bana aur trisha akeli rah kar ek monk
Lucifer ne andhera kiya to ye samne diya leke khadi mili
Esko ache bure ka pata nahi hai agar koe madad mangne aaya ya fir trisha ko laga ki samne wale ko madad ki jarurat hai to ye khud se madad karne pahuch jayegi
Gyaan ka bhandaar hai trisha
Aisa sayad hi koe sawal hoga jiska sateek jawab trisha ke pass na ho
Lucifer ke jeevan me gyaan aur budhi trisha hi leke aayegi

Roshini

Ab etne kirdaar aa gaye to ek aur lucifer ko to aana hi tha
Jaisa lucifer hai bilkul vaisi hi hai roshini
Apne naam ke bilkul ulti
Esne bhi andhere ko hi chhuna aur ussi me sama gaye
Eski aur lucifer ko bahut kam banegi lekin jab banegi to gayab ki banegi
Simran ke alava agar koe hai jo lucifer ke liye jaan le sakta hai vo roshini hi hai
Lucifer ki premika me sabse khatarnaak aur sabse alag
Jab do buraeya aapas me takrati hai to kya hota hai?
Vo dikhegi jab lucifer aur roshini apas me takraenge
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Mata- ek aur bach gaye
Supreme- maya
Maya lucifer ki premika nahi hai

Mata- to kya hai maya?
Supreme- maya lucifer ko ek parivaar ki mahtavta batayegi
Lucifer us se parivaar kya hota hai ye janega
Parivaar ke liye koe kya kya kar sakta hai kis had tak ja sakta hai ye sab maya ke jariye hi lucifer ko pata chalega
Hum lucifer ko parivaar wala pyaar nahi de paye lekin maya usse parivaar degi, uska pyaar degi
Har vo chhij jo lucifer ko ek parivaar me chahiye thi vo sab usse maya se hi milegi

Mata- to kya maya lucifer se pyaar nahi karti?
Supreme- ye sawal hum waqt par chhod dete hai
Aur kuch bacha hai?

Mata- tara?
Supreme- tara ko tumne banaya hai maine nahi

Mata- chalo maan liya ye sab alag alag kaam ke liye bani hai lekin
Supreme- ab bhi lekin bach gaya kya?

Mata- ha
Simran lucifer se pyaar bhi karti thi aur uski dost bhi thi, vo uske liye dunia se lad bhi sakti thi aur dunia ko us se bacha bhi sakti thi, uske pass bahut gyaan tha aur vo lucifer ko lucifer se mila bhi sakti thi, maine simran ko hi sabse pavitra manugi kyuki vo lucifer ke prati samarpit thi
To fir baki sab ko banane ki kya jarurat thi jab vo sare kaam lucifer ke liye simran hi kar sakti thi to?
Supreme- kya vo etna boj utha pati?
Log usse pagal samjh lete ye soch kar ki are ye kabhi hasti hai to kabhi roti hai kabhi pyaar karti hai to kabhi gussa
Kabhi marti hai to kabhi marham lagati hai
Sab ko alag alag karna hi sabse sahi tha taki vo apna kaam bakubi kar sake

Mata- log kya kahenge sirf eske liye aapne etne logo ki jindagi dard se bhar de?
Log kuch to kahenge unka kaam hai kahna

Lucifer- mujhe sab sochna padta hai
Logo ka kaam nahi hai logo ke bare me sochna lekin mera hai

Mata- theek hai ye bhi maan liya lekin prithvi par ye sab vapas dhorane ka kya karan hai?

Supreme- vahi par to honi hai sabki agni pariksha
Kon apne karyo par khara utarta hai vo sab vahi par dikhega

Mata- kya kabhi lucifer vapas angel ban payega?
Supreme- vo angel hi hai humesha se angel hi raha hai
Usse vapas banane ki jarurat nahi

Mata- kitna khoon bahega?
Supreme- ye dharti ne etne paap kiye hai ki ab khoon se hi vo paap saaf honge

Mata- matlab bahut jada bahega
Supreme - jinka jaruri hai unka to bahega hi

Mata- agar lucifer hi na raha to kya aap us se lad paoge?
Aap bhul rahe ho ki keval lucifer hi usko hara sakta hai
Aapka vardaan hai ye
Supreme- aisa koe vachan nahi koe vardaan nahi jo main nahi tod sakta
Maine dunia banae hai aur esme paida hone wale har ek chhij ko maine banaya hai

Mata- aur usme bahut khamiya bhi hai
Aap na to usko hara paoge aur na us ko baand paoge
Aapki banae dunia ko bahut ache se padha hai usne aur un khamiyo se apne aapko banaya hai

Supreme- priye etna nahi socha karte
Sab kuch hoga apne waqt par
Main es dunia ko bahut pehle jaisa bana dunga jaha sirf aur sirf pyaar tha bas uske liye thoda khoon banana jaruri hai
Mata- aapke thode sabad se hi dar lagta hai mujhe
KYA LUCIFER JINDA BACHEGA????
Aaj ka Update manta hu story ke hisab se important hai. Lakin maja bikul nahi aaya. Bas laga koi sant aa gaya aur ek ke baad ek gyaan diye ja raha ho. Khair koi nahi dekhte hai ye maunt Abu me kya hota hai ? Kya waha aur koi hogi. ?
 
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Finally Budhau ne muh khola, aur humko achha laga :D
Har baar Budhau ke karname ke karan galiyan padhti thi par ab sab picture clear hai.
Story me sab ka role fix he , pura match fix hai :rant1:
Game hi fix hai pura ka pura
Par humko kya humko to maja aa raha hai :D
Bas maja aata rahna chahiye
Rahi baat readers ke response ki to aap hamare jaise achhe response ko consider karo baki nice update great update walo ko ignore karo. Bahot kam stories he idhar jo content deti he thrill deti hai par na waha muh na khulega kisi ka . Kher jane do ab.
Kya pata main khud gayab ho jau
Bas jo humesha sath dete hai unke liye bura lagta hai esliye story complete karni padti hai lekin us level ki writing nahi ho pati jis level ki story deserve karti hai
 
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