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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Lone survivor

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Supreme wo Banda he jo apne writer ki tarah he ,jo jaisi bhi story likh ke Lucifer ki life pehle se he direct karega fir kahega sab kuchh Lucifer ke hath ne he :slap:
Are hume kyu badnaam kar rahe ho bhai?🤣🤣🤣
Ab sabko malum he ke Lucifer ke hath me :jerker: he khali :laughing:
Bas vohi hai uske hath me
 

Lone survivor

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Lone survivor

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UPDATE-127
Payal- kaha chalna hai?
Lucifer- bhul gaya

Payal- matlab?
Lucifer- tumhe dekh kar ab kuch yaad nahi aa raha

Payal- ab bas bhi karo
Main to bilkul simple ho kar aaye hu
Lucifer- simple ho kar?
Yaha saase aatak gaye meri tum simple hone ki baat kar rahe ho?

Payal- bas bas ab jada ho raha hai
Lucifer- mat mano

Payal- ye sab vo bol raha hai jo khud etna handsome hai?
Lucifer- tumhe main handsome lagta hu?
Are waw ye to mujhe pata hi nahi tha?

Payal- ghumao aur ghumao baatein
Lucifer- ab maine kya ghumaya?
Simple way me to baat kar raha hu?

Payal- acha theek hai
Ab batao to kaha jana hai?
Lucifer- tum leke aae ho mujhe date par to tum batao

Payal- main leke aae hu?
Aapne bola tha
Lucifer- mujhe to yaad nahi aa raha
Nashe me hunga sayad aur nashe me insaan kuch bhi bolta hai

Payal- to ab to hosh me ho na ab bata do?
Lucifer- kisne kaha?

Payal- kya?
Lucifer- ki main hosh me hu?

Payal- nahi ho?
Lucifer- tumhri khubsurati ne nashe me kar diya hai mujhe

Payal thoda sarma gaye

Lucifer- hayeeee maregi ye ladki mujhe
Payal- mujhe saram aati hai mat karo aisa

Lucifer- abhi to maine kuch kiya hi nahi
Jab karunga tab kar lenga jitni saram karni hai
Payal- aise hi ho na aap humesha?
Kabhi nahi change hote

Lucifer- change hona bhi nahi chahiye
Payal- badlaav bahut jaruri chhij hai

Lucifer- soch raha hu ab se main bhi desi look me aajata hu
Kya pata mujh par bhi ladkiya marne lag jaye
Payal- jarurat nahi hai aapko

Lucifer- kyu nahi hai?
Tum nahi chahti mera bhaala ho jaye?
Payal- mera matlab hai ki aap aise bhi bahut ache dikhte ho

Lucifer- vo to main dikhta hi hu lekin ab mujhe kahar dhana hai sari ladkiyo par
Payal- hehe
Kuch bhi bolte ho

Lucifer- chalo fir aaj tumhe ek khubsurat jagah leke chalta hu ohh sorry khubsurat to ab tum hi ho bas
Payal- are bas bhi karo
Etni tareef ki aadat nahi hai mujhe

Lucifer- main tareef kar kar ke pajama khol deta hu
Payal- tabhi to bol rahi hu mat karo etni tareef

Lucifer- karni padti hai nahi to pyaase ko pani kaise milega?
Payal- es pyaas se koe nahi marta

Lucifer- main to vaise bhi amar hu
Payal- tabhi to bol rahi hu rahne do

Lucifer- rahne deta hu kuch minutes tak
Saas lelo fir vapas start karunga
Payal- pehle aapki pasand to dikhao

Lucifer- konsi pasand?
Khud ko dekh lo mirror me
Payal- areee main jagah ki baat kar rahi hu

Lucifer- acha acha ha sorry
Chal rahe hai ab wings thodi hai mere ki ud ke chal lenge
Payal- lucifer ke to the wings

Lucifer- vo kaat bhi deta hai fir
Maine bhi kaat diye
Payal- koe baat nahi mere fallen angel aap aise bhi ache ho

Lucifer- mere fallen angel?
Maan liya tumne mujhe apna?
Payal- i mean aap aise bhi ache ho
Sarmate hue boli

Aise hi halki masti ke sath lucifer payal ko leke pahuch gaya city se bahar

Vaha ek chhota sa dhabba type ka bana hua tha jo vaha lage ped ko use karke banaya gaya tha
Usse banane me ek single ped nahi kata balki unki hi help se usse banaya tha

Dekhne me bahut pyaara tha vo aur bahut jada shant bhi

Mumbai tha to halki bunda bandi ho rahi thi jis se uski khubsurati ko char chand lag rahe the

Payal- wow
Lucifer- i know how to impress girls

Payal- yeah i can see that
Lucifer- chale fir?

Payal- hmm
Lucifer ne payal ka hath pakda aur payal ne bhi koe objection nahi kiya aur lucifer ke sath sath chalne lagi

Vaha ek table dekh kar first floor par dono bath gaye

Payal- kitna pyaar hai ye
Lucifer- bilkul tumhari tarah

Payal- thank you
Lucifer- badle me sex lunga main

Waiter- sir order
Waiter aate hue bola
Lucifer- bhai aaj tak kisi ladke ne ladki ko order diya hai jo main dunga?

Ye sunte hi Payal muskura di

Waiter- ma'am order
Payal ek do simple simple chhije order karti hai fir kabhi lucifer to kabhi bahar dekhne lagti hai

Lucifer- mujhme kya dekh rahi ho?
Payal- kuch

Lucifer- kya kuch?
Payal- real you

Lucifer- this is me
Payal- nah. This isn't you

Lucifer- to kya hu main?
Payal- vohi to dekh rahi hu

Lucifer- dhayan se dekhna Ladkiya pagal ho jati hai mujhe dekhte dekhte
Payal- main dhayan rakhungi

Lucifer- maine to warn kar diya hai ab tum jano
Payal- kya chhupa rahe ho aap?

Lucifer- kya chhupa raha hu main?
Payal- vohi to puch rahi hu main

Lucifer- aur vohi main puch raha hu
Payal- aap batao
Kuch to hai jo aap kisi ko nahi bata rahe

Lucifer- tum ne sayad ek baar mera gussa dekha hai?
Dobara dekhna hai?
Payal- nahi sorry

Lucifer- kitni baar maaf kiya jaye?
Baar baar koe kaise etni galtiya kar sakta hai?
Payal- galtiyo ke putle hai hum

Lucifer- bahut sundar putla hai ye

Tabhi khana aa jata hai

Lucifer- ek whiskey
Waiter- sir small large?

Lucifer- bottle le aa bhai
Small, large se kya hoga mera
Waiter- okay sir

Payal- nahi peeni chahiye aapko
Lucifer- khud ka man kar raha hai aur mujhe bol rahi hai

Payal- mera to nahi kar raha man
Lucifer- tumhe dar hai ki peene ke baad tum kahi bahak na jao

Payal- aisa kuch nahi hai
Lucifer- apne aap par tumhra control nahi rahega aur fir apni feelings khul kar batane lag jaogi
Uske baad ahh lucifer ohhh Lucifer bas lucifer etna hi bologi

Payal- aise baat na kiya karo
Lucifer- tumhe bura to bilkul nahi laga

Payal- maine kab kaha ki mujhe bura laga hai?
Lucifer- fir kyu na bolu?

Payal- bas na bola karo
Lucifer- acha acha samajh gaya

Payal- kya samjh gaye?
Lucifer- tumhri feelings mere hontho par aagaye eskiye tumhe ajeeb lag raha hai

Payal- khana khao kuch bhi bolte ho
Lucifer- khana sahi fir

Uske baad dono ache se dinner karte hai aur yuhi moj masti karte hue vapas aajate hai****

Past

Shreya's friend- tujhe kya ho gaya aajkal?
Kahi khoe khoe rahti hai
Shreya- aisa to kuch bhi nahi hai

Rubi- mujhe to aisa hi lag raha hai
Shreya- tujhe hi lag raha hai aisa

Rubi- kuch to hua hai
Tu bata nahi rahi mujhe
Shreya- kya hoga?
Tu har roj har time to mere sath hi rahti hai agar kuch hota to tujhe pata nahi chalta?

Rubi- mujhe nahi chala na pata ye hi to problem hai
Aisa ho kaise gaya ki mujhe kuch pata nahi chala?
Shreya- kyuki kuch hai hi nahi esliye tujhe pata nahi chala

Rubi- mat bata
Pata to main kar hi lungi
Shreya- aur etni mahnat ke baad bhi kuch nahi mila to?

Rubi- to soch lungi ek dost ke liye thoda time waste kar liya
Shreya- matlab karna to hai hi tujhe time waste?

Rubi- ha karna to padega hi ab tu mujhse baatein chhupane lag gaye hai to kya kare?
Shreya- aisa kuch nahi hai
Agar koe baat hoti to sabse pehle tujhe hi batati

Rubi- ha ha main sab samjh rahi hu
Kon hai vo khushnaseeb?
Shreya- kya matlab?

Rubi- tu mujhse kuch nahi bata rahi matlab tujhe koe mil gaya hai
Main bhi dekhti hu kab tak tu usse chhupa kar rakh payegi
Shreya- tujhe kabhi nahi pata chalega

Rubi- vo to waqt hi bataega
Shreya- waqt bhi uska hi hai

Rubi- kabhi humara bhi aayega
Shreya- will see

Rubi- yeah will see
Pata to main karke hi rahungi
Shreya- main khana khane ja rahi hu
Tujhe chalna hai ya yaha bhukhe bathe rahna hai?
Fir sochti rahna bukhe pet

Rubi- are chal rahi hu meri jaan
Tu to chhoti chhoti baaton par naraaj ho jati hai.....
 
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