Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[A.B.KING]

Extraordinary update bro....

 

[Lone survivor]

Abhi bhi mokka hai jinho review nahi diya hai jaldi de do nahi to update nahi milega aaj

 

[D231]

Hahahahaha. Sahi khel rahe ho ..ji bhi hai Bai ek baat ji dil se nikalti hai aapke liye. Kya baat hai... superb...love u jatta

 

[deepg]

Bhai tum regular update dete ho na islye koi review ne deta ...tum bhi ek adh baar regular mat diya kro bhai fir dekho .... Inko ese hi kadhar hoti hai

 

[parkas]

Lone survivor bhai next update kab tak aayega?

 

[Mana6262]

Vai Vai Esa mat Karo....

 

[KDM 1994]

Nice update bhai...

 

[Loser X]

Nice update bhai

 

[Death Kiñg]

Lucifer ke sapnon ko lekar jis tarah ki bhavishyavani Mitika ne ki thi bilkul waise hi ho raha hai uske saath... NGO mein baithe huye bhi use similar sapne aane lage & fun part was, use har scene ki kewal ek jhalak hi dekhne ko mil rahi thi... Lucifer ke liye inhe samajh na of course aasan nahi hai as it's really really confusing... But Lucifer aise hi to wo nahi hai jiske naam se hi achhe achhe kaanp uth te hain... As expected, wo usi jungle mein ja pahuncha jahaan uski mulakat Kaashvi se huyi thi...

Kaashvi... Jaisa ke pehle bhi laga tha,kaafi rahasmayi kirdar hai... Anisha ne book ke zariye Lucifer ki premikayon ke baare mein bataya tha, tab usne kaha tha ke unmein se ek angel bhi thi... Saanvi ke flashback scene mein usne saaf kaha ke wo ek insaan hai... Seems like Kaashvi hi wo ladki hai, I mean an angel... Kya wo Lucifer ke baare mein sab kuchh jaanti hai..? Kya wo jaanti hai ke Lucifer ki asliyat kya hai aur uski yaad dasht kaise waapis aayegi..? Uska behaviour is update mein bhi thoda ajeeb laga... Dono mein kewal ek hi mulakat huyi hai but she was behaving like they know each other for years...

Past scenes mein Saanvi aur Lucifer ke prem ki yaatra ka ek sankshipt varnan mila... Saanvi aur Lucifer dono hi shayad pehli nazar mein hi ek – doosre ko chahne lage the... But just like many girls, Saanvi ne apne bhaavon ko prakat karne mein samay lagaya... Fir, Saanvi ko Lucifer ke curse aur uske parinaam ke baare mein bhi sab kuchh pata chala gaya tha... Apni aur Lucifer ki prem kahani ke anjaam ke baare mein bhi wo jaan gayi thi... Aur yahin uske vyavahar mein badlav aaya... I think uski soch thi ke yadi Lucifer achhayi aur dayaluta ke raaste par aa jaaye tab wo aur Lucifer milkar shayad Supreme se Lucifer ka bhagya badalwa saken... (Yahaan, wo bechari jaanti nahi thi ke jo kuchh Lucifer ke saath hona tha wo Supreme pehle hi likh chuke the, I think jo panna Saanvi ne padha, Lucifer ke bhaagya ko lekar wo shayad Supreme dwara hi likha gaya ho)...

Saanvi ka ye scene shayad kahani mein pehle bhi aa chuka hai, jab wo Lucifer se kehti hai, ke wo un vyaktiyon ka hriday Parivartan karke dikhaye, unhe maarne ki jagah... But of course, Lucifer did exactly what he was trained to do... Par jaisa ke Saanvi ne use sachet kiya hi tha wo chali gayi... Kya uski maut ho gayi..? Aatmahataya? Ya fir wo kisi aur sthaan par chali gayi..? Jis prakar ka reaction Lucifer ka tha us se to yahi lagta hai ke wo shayad mar gayi thi... But jo sawaal yahaan hai wo ye ki Lucifer ko is bhayankar haalat se nikaala kisne hoga... Jaisa ki aapne last lines mein likha bhi ke uske rudan se heaven tak kaanp gaya tha, wo aise hi to shaant nahi ho gaya hoga...

Beharhal, jo kaagaz Saanvi ko mila tha usmein jo gaur karne yogya baat thi wo thi Lucifer ki ek aur premika ke baare mein! Simran, i guess... Uska sthaan bilkul Saanvi ke barabar ka bataya gaya tha... Aur ye bhi ke sabse bada balidaan wahi degi... Is balidan ka matlab kya tha? Jo baat Mitika ne kahi thi ek past scene mein ke “Simran Didi ki hi tarah main bhi sabko kaat dungi"! Kya iski taraf ishara kiya gaya tha us kaagaz mein ya fir wo balidaan yaani Lucifer ki uske haathon mukti hoga...

Khair, ab Lucifer ko at least Saanvi ke baare mein to sab yaad aa hi gaya hai... Dekhte hain ab aage wo apni yaad dasht ko lekar kya karta hai... Aur Kaashvi ko lekar bhi obviously kayi sawaal hain...

Idhar, Jab Lucifer NGO se nikla to, Maadhuri ne seedhe Ashmita ko call kar diya... Iske baad Ashmita aur Inaaya ki jugalbandi dekhne ko mili jiski mujhe bilkul bhi umeed nahi thi... Yahaan Inaaya ne kaha ke Ashmita ne apne do doston ko chhod diya tha... Inaaya of course unmein se ek thi, doosra Arjun tha..? Aur Inaaya ne ye bhi kaha tum “ek baar fir" mujhse kuchh apna chheenogi, yahaan bhi uska ishara Arjun ki hi taraf tha kya..? Dekhne yogya baat ye hai ki Ashmita spasht roop se Inaaya se behad pyaar karti hai, Inaaya ke bheetar bhi Ashmita ke liye bhaav hain par uske oopar shayad dard aur gusse ka aavran dhakh gaya hai...

Khair, yahaan to ek hi baat saamne aati hai aur wo ye ki yadi koyi in dono ko firse paas la sakta hai to wo beshak Lucifer hi hai... Lucifer ne in dono ko hi apne sapnon ke baare mein bata diya hai, aur ab shayad Ashmita bhi uski help ke liye kuchh kare... Beharhal, Ashmita ko Inaaya ne uske nickname se pukara zaroor par ye nahi bhoolna chahiye ke Suresh abhi zinda hai... Aur uske dwara aage jo harkat ki jaane waali hai wo kaafi ho sakti hai inke beech ki deewar ko aur bada karne ke liye... Let's see ke kaise dono ki dosti firse zinda hogi...

Dono Updates bohot hi badhiya the bhai... Naag aur Lucifer ki conversation ek baar fir kaafi badhiya thi... Wahin Ashmita aur Inaaya ka Lucifer ki chinta karna, wo scene bhi kaafi realistic laga... And of course, jo chhota sa part Saanvi aur Lucifer ke beech ka tha,wo nischit hi behad khubsurat tha...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

 

[Mr.X796]

Waiting next update bro . . .