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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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To yah sapna aaya tha Luci bhaya ko, jb Vo prathvi me aakr gira to uske sath kya kya hua Vo bhi fast forward me alag alag jagah ka... Vo coin kya abhi bhi Luci bhaya ke pass hai ya kahi gir gya...
Asmita or inaya ke Bich Luci bhaya ke chalte thodi thodi bate hone lagi hai jiske chalte aaj inaya ne asmita ko ashu kahkr bhi bula diya... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast and :respekt: for the writer...
Hum sab kuch theek kar denge sab ke beech me lekin sab kuch bahut jada bigaad kar
 
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Lone survivor bhai....so so so beautiful update bhai....ab story thodi line par aane lagi hai....but bro ab to lucfier ki bhuk khatam karo sex wali😂🤣 kab tak bechara hath Mai leke ghumta rahega....ma'am, inaya ya ashmita ya tara....sabse pehle kiska number lagega..... waiting for nextttttt
Jaldi hi suru hogi vo bhi lekin sex ki bhukh kabhi khatam hoti hai kya?
Sabse pehle kiska number lagvana hai?
 
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Jaldi hi suru hogi vo bhi lekin sex ki bhukh kabhi khatam hoti hai kya?
Sabse pehle kiska number lagvana hai?
I think ma'am wo kabse akeli hai unko bhi to pyaar chahiye aur jese ki ashimta, inaaya, tara,ashmita ye sab to virgin hai fir bhi khudko control kar lengi but to married hai na aur Lucifer ki is life ki first female friend to unko hi ye khushi sabse pehle milni chahiye...😂🤣 Waiting for nexttttt
 
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I think ma'am wo kabse akeli hai unko bhi to pyaar chahiye aur jese ki ashimta, inaaya, tara,ashmita ye sab to virgin hai fir bhi khudko control kar lengi but to married hai na aur Lucifer ki is life ki first female friend to unko hi ye khushi sabse pehle milni chahiye...😂🤣 Waiting for nexttttt
Afsos aapka ma'am ke liye etna sheh dekh kar bhi main kuch nahi kar sakta bas meri aankhen gilli hogaye🤣🤣🤣
 
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Na bhai ye to cheating hai🤣😂🤣😂 bechari maam ko bhi to pyaar ki sakhth jarurat hai baaki aap par hai aapne hi to kahani ko plot kiya hai...ye to bata do ki ma'am ke saath kuch hoga ya nahi
Ye koe cheating nahi hai
Ma'am pyaar ko pyaar ki jarurat hai sex ke nahi bhai
Galat kaam na hone denge hum
 
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UPDATE-88
Ashmita- aaj fir kaha ja raha hai tu?
Lucifer- kuch kaam hai

Ashmita- lucifer tu sach nahi bataega to hum help kaise kar payenge teri?
Har roj kahi jata hai fir gayab ho jata hai fir late night aata hai
Chal kya raha hai?
Lucifer- main yaha batha batha jawab nahi dund sakta
Bahut kuch janana hai mujhe aur uske liye bahar nikalna padta hai

Ashmita- to bata kar bhi ja sakta hai
Lucifer- ashu mere aage piche khatra hi khatra hai
Main apne aap ko abhi theek se nahi bacha sakta agar tum me se kisi ko kuch ho gaya to kya kar lunga main?

Ashmita- tu kya hume force kar raha hai?
Jo hume karna hai vo humari marji se hota hai esme teri koe galti nahi hai
Lucifer- mujhe jana hai
Late ho raha hu

Ashmita- dhayan rakhna
Aur lucifer vaha se chala jata hai
Kaha?

Ussi jungle me
Kyuki uske sapne me ek vohi jagah thi jiska lucifer ko pata tha baki sab to koe hell me thi to koe heaven me aur unke bare me lucifer ko kuch nahi pata tha

Lucifer drive karta vaha pahucha aur jaha pehle car park ki thi vahi khadi karke edhar udhar dekhne laga

Fir baarish yaad aaye aur barish nadi ke kinare aae thi to vaha chala gaya aur ek uche pathar ke upar khada ho kar door tak dekhne ki kosis karne laga

Lekin paed podho ke alava usse kuch dikh nahi raha tha to vahi us pathar par bath gaya
Usse ek minute hi hue thi ki

Kaashvi- aaj bhi pyaas lagi hai kya aapko?
Lucifer ne mud ke dekha to vohi lakdiyo ka gatha liye kaashvi khadi thi

Lucifer- mujhe follow kar rahi ho tum?
Hell se nikali pret aatma to nahi ho tum?
Kaashvi- kha jaungi fir to aapko main

Lucifer- tumhre guru tumse sirf lakdiya hi ikkatha karate hai kya?
Kaashvi- sab ka kaam batta hua hai

Lucifer- tumhra lakdiya ikkatha karna hai?
Kaashvi- ha
Aap kya karte ho es jungle me?

Lucifer- tumse milne aata hu ab to
Etni sunder ho aur umar bhi theek lag rahi hai
Kabhi saririk jarurato ki kami mahsus nahi hue?
Kaashvi- ajeeb to ho aap
Kisi ladki se aisi baat kon karta hai?

Lucifer- main karta hu
Kaashvi- nahi karni chahiye

Lucifer- ab jo hai vo hai
Kaashvi- ab batao bhi kyu aate ho yaha?
Kya pata main aapki madad kar saku

Lucifer- sapne aate hai es jagah ke bare me
Lagta hai mujhse judi hue hai esliye yaha aata hu ki sayad kuch pata chal sake apne bare me

Kaashvi ne apni lakdiya ek side me patki aur us pathar ke upar bina kisi support ke Chad gaye

Lucifer- kar dunga tumhri jarurate puri
Kaashvi- agar maine aapki madad kari to aap mere liye kya kar sakte ho?

Lucifer- kya karvana hai tumhe?
Mujhe pata hai tumhre dimag me kuch to hoga hi
Kaashvi- mujhe ek baar logo ko dekhna hai

Lucifer- mujhe dekh to rahi ho
Kaashvi- mera matlab normal logo se tha

Lucifer- main normal nahi hu?
Kaashvi- aap normal ho to fir main bhi normal hu

Lucifer- mujhe to normal hi lag rahi hai
Kaashvi- esliye hi bol rahi hu mujhe ek baar sehar dikha laoge?
Mujhe dekhna hai normal log kaise jeete hai kya karte hai sab kuch

Lucifer- abhi chalo
Abhi dikha Lata hu
Kaashvi- abhi nahi ja sakti
Aur aapko ye bhi sure karna padega ki kisi ko pata na chale

Lucifer- wings hote mere pass to easy rahta
Kaashvi- boliye manjur?

Lucifer- deal
Kaashvi- aankhen band kariye apni

Lucifer- izzat mat loot lena meri
Kaashvi- uske liye aapki aankhen band karane ki jarurat nahi hai mujhe

Lucifer- bc bejjati
Kaashvi- aankhen band kariye aur yaad kariye us moment ko jo aapko sabse jada khushi deti hai

Lucifer- sex?
Sex ke bare me yaad karu?
Kiske sath wala yaad karu?
Kaashvi- relax rellllllaaaaaaxxxx bahut dheere se lucifer ki chest par hath ferte hue bolti hai to lucifer bilkul shant ho jata hai

Kaashvi- ab baki dunia ko bhul jayeye aur sirf uske bare me sochiye jiske bare me janana hai aapko

*of course it was saanvi*

Kaashvi- dheere dheere apne aapko uske sath mahsoos karo

---Lucifer dream---
Scene 1
saanvi bahut door khadi muskurate hue phulo ko paani de rahi thi aur door khade lucifer ko chhor najaro se dekh rahi thi

Usse pata tha lucifer usse dekh raha hai lekin usse tadapane ke liye bilkul bhi uski taraf dhayan nahi de rahi

Lucifer man meye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi
Saanvi door khadi man me ye ladka mujhe pagal kar dega

Lucifer- dekhta hu kitne din control kar pati hai
Ek na ek din to sach muh par aaega hi
Saanvi- aisa hi raha to jada din control nahi kar paungi main

Lucifer- fir to meri bahoo me hi aaega
Abhi tadpa le jitna tadpana hai
Saanvi- ek na ek din jana to tumhri bahoo me hi hai
Kuch din aur tadpa leti hu

SCENE- 2

Lucifer- aagaye na tum meri bahoo me?
Ab batao kaha jaogi bach kar?
Saanvi- bach kar jana bhi kaha hai ab?
Esko hi zindagi bana li hai maine

Lucifer- jane bhi nahi dunga main ab
Saanvi- main ek insaan hu aur tum angel
Mujhe to ek na ek din jana hi padega

Lucifer- nahi tum humesha mere sath rahogi
Main lucifer morningstar apne pyaar ko sakshi maang kar ye sapath leta hu ki mere juban par koe naam ho na ho, mere pass meri shaktiya ho na ho, meri yaadadast chahe chali jaye lekin saanvi ki yaadein mujhse kabhi door nahi hogi, main hone nahi dunga

Saanvi- etni muhobaat main sah nahi paungi
Lucifer- ab tumhe aadat daal leni chahiye
Ye muhobaat har din har ghante har second sirf badhegi aur sirf badhegi

SCENE-3

FIRST PHYSICAL ENCOUNTER

SCENE-4

Saanvi kisi bahut purane mandir type me thi
Etne jarjar halaat wali jagah vo lucifer se chhupane gaye thi
Kuch hua nahi tha unke bich bas vo usse pareshan kar rahi thi

Lekin vaha mili usse vo book jisme lucifer ke bare me sab kuch likha hua tha

Jaise jaise vo book padhti ja rahi thi uski aankhon me se aashuo ki nadiya bahti ja rahi thi

BOOK KI KUCH LINES

" lucifer ka pyaar kabhi saanvi ke liye khatam nahi hoga, vo apne sari premikao me se saanvi se sabse adhik prem karega lekin ek aisi bhi ladki uske jeevan me aayegi jo sab kuch badal kar rakh degi, us tarah ka pyaar na to lucifer ko pehle kabhi mila hoga aur na kabhi milega, vo ladki hi aisi hogi jo lucifer ke jeevan me agar saanvi se upar na sahi to saanvi ke barabar jagah haseel karegi, agar saanvi nichal prem ke liye jani jayegi to vo balidaan ke liye jani jayegi.... sabse bada aur sabse muskil balidaan vohi degi jo lucifer ki kahani ko badal ke rakh dega"

SCENE-5

Lucifer- kya hoga hai tumhe?
Aajkal kuch uddas udas dekhti ho
Saanvi- main thodi serious ho jau to tumko udas dikhne lag jati hu
Are mere pyaare main to hum dono ke bare me soch rahi thi

Lucifer- to esme etna serious hone ki kya jarurat hai?
Saanvi- tum pagal ho
Kuch nahi samjte

Lucifer- pagal to tumne kar diya hai mujhe aur ab sach me kuch samjh nahj aata
Saanvi- esliye to bol rahi hu
Aur lucifer ke galle me apni bahee daal kar uski taraf face kar leti hai

Lucifer- fir se dunia bhul jaunga main en aankhon me
Saanvi- bhul jao kuch waqt ke liye bas main hu aur tum ho

Lucifer- hum dono hi hai har waqt
Saanvi- kal kab aaoge?

Lucifer- tum bolo to jau hi na?
Saanvi- mat jao

Lucifer- maine kaha tha na kuch chhij tumhe pareshan kar rahi hai
Aaj se pehle tumne aisa kabhi nahi bola
Saanvi- aisa kuch nahi hai

Lucifer- tumhe nahi batana to jane do
Saanvi- mujhe dikhana hai
Aur lucifer ke hontho par apne honth chipka deti hai


SCENE-6


Saanvi- usko ek mokka aur dena padega tumko
Lucifer- jindagi me dusra mokka nahi milta saanvi
Vo monsters hai aur main angel
Mujhe unko maar kar logo ko bachana hai

Saanvi- tum unhe kaid bhi to kar sakte ho
Unko achi sikh bhi to de sakte ho jinse vo kuch sikh sake?
Kya pata vo badal jaye?
Tum unhe maroge aur kal unki maut ka badla lene koe aur aajayega aur fir ye silsila yuhi chalta rahega
Lucifer- meri talwar kabhi kamjor nahi padegi
Aane do jitno ko aana hai main sab ko maar dalunga

Saanvi- ye koe solution to nahi
Lucifer - yehi ek matar solution hai
Saja aisi milni chahiye jiske baad samne wala kabhi dusra gunah nahi kar sake

Saanvi- ye galat soch hai
Lucifer- soch chahe galat ho lekin asal zindagi me yehi sach hai
Aaj nahi to kal tumhe ye manana hi padega

Saanvi- tum badal rahe ho
Pehle aise nahi the
Lucifer- main humesha se hi aisa tha
Lehle tumhe mere kaam ke bare me pata nahi tha aur ab tum sab kuch dekhne lagi ho


SCENE-7

Saanvi- Agar tumne unko maar diya to mujhe kho doge
Yaad rakhna lucifer tumhre liye kya important hai
Kisi ki maut tumhe mujhse alag kar sakti hai

Lucifer- tum badal rahi hu saanvi
Tumhe pata hai agar maine hathiyaar nahi uthaye to vaha se jinda bach ke nikalna namumkin hai
Saanvi- tum mar nahi sakte
Tum lucifer ho tum bahut aasani se bach kar nikal sakte ho

Lucifer- mujhe curses me viswas nahi hai
Saanvi- mujhe tum par viswas hai

Lucifer- agar vaha kisi ki jaan unki vajah se gaye to jimmedari tumhri hogi
Saanvi- jaan bachane ke liye to tumhe bejh rahe hai na

Lucifer- main jaan leta hu bach apne aap jati hai
Saanvi- aaj bina jaan liye kisi ko bacha ke dikhao

Lucifer- tum ye sab jaan bujh kar rahi ho na
Saanvi- agar tum badal gaye to hum Prathana karke tumhri mukti ka sadhan dund sakte hai

Lucifer- mujhe jarurat nahi hai saanvi
Tum mujhe kamjor kar rahi hu
Ye mera kaam hai aur mujhe ye karna hi hai
Saanvi- maine bol diya jo bolna tha
Aur agar main tumhe kamjor kar rahi hu to chali jane do mujhe apne se door aur baha do jitna khoon bahana hai tumhe

SCENE-8

Lucifer khoon me sana hua ek gaon se bahar aaya
Usse dekh kar hi lag raha tha jaise pata nahi kitna khoon baha kar aaya hai aaj vo
Gaon ke ander se logo ke chhilane ki, rone ki, bhagne ki aawaze aa rahi thi

Pata nahi ye ander aaj kya tabhae macha ke aaya tha lekin kyu?
Jab saanvi ne saaf saaf sabdo me bol diya tha to kya majburi pad gaye thi ki usne etna katleaam macha diya?

Lucifer kisi se bina kuch bole bina edhar udhar dekhe vaha se chala gaya

Lekin udaasi uske chehre se saaf dikh rahi thi

SCENE-09

Bahut sundar white dress(jo sapne me pahan rakhi thi) vo pahan kar lucifer saanvi se milne ja raha tha
Usse pata tha vo aaj bahut naraaj hogi lekin lucifer ko bhi yakeen tha ki agar vo saanvi ko sab sach sach batatega to vo maan jayegi
Esliye hi vo saanvi ka favorite white color pahan kar gaya tha

Vo jaise jaise saanvi ke ghar ke pass pahuch raha tha uske dil ki dhadakan bahut tej hoti ja rahi thi
Aisa to kabhi kisi ko marte time bhi nahi hota tha lucifer ke sath

Aur vo jab ghar pahuch gaya to vaha shanata chaya hua tha
Koe nahi tha vaha par bas the to vo sunder sunder ped podhe jo saanvi ne lagaye hue the uske alava vaha kuch nahi tha

Lucifer ne jab samne dekha to uske hath pair fulne lage, usne to sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki saanvi sach me usse chhod ke chali jayegi

Vo kapte kadmo se ander ja raha tha aur uske chehre ka rang badalta ja raha tha

Ander ek letter pada hua tha
Lucifer ne usse uthaya aur padhne laga

Jaise jaise vo letter padh raha tha uska dimag fatne lag gaya tha

Fir ek jordaar chhikhhh nikali uske muh se aur
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Chhilate hue lucifer ghutno par gir pada
Lekin uski etni shaktishali chhikh ne Heaven ko hila kar rakh diya

Jab lucifer shant nahi hua to uske sareer ki garmi se bahut tej tej aag ki lapte nikalne lag gaye aur saanvi ka ghar ki chat ko faadte hue vo aasman ki taraf jane lag gaya

Lucifer ki na to chhikhe kam ho rahi thi, na uska dard kam ho raha tha aur na hi uska gussa

Es waqt agar vo saanvi ki kasam me bandha nahi hota to aaj pure heaven ko aag laga deta

Aur esliye hi uski sari shaktiya puri tarah se bahar nahi aa pa rahi thi aur agar vo aise hi jalta raha to yahi fat jayega aur apne sath sath aadhe heaven ko bhi leke jayega

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Lucifer etna sab dekh chuka tha ki jab usse hosh aaya to us pathar se dhadaam se niche gira
Sayad kaashvi ko etna idea ho gaya tha esliye usne thoda bahut bacha liya tha lucifer ko

Fir bhagte hue nadi me se pani laye kuch lucifer ko pilaya aur kuch uske face par daalne lagi

Thande thande pani ne usko thodi bahut rahaat jarur de thi

Kaashvi- aap theek ho?
Kuch pata chala aapko?
Lucifer- bahut khubsurat thi meri saanvi.......


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