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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Death Kiñg

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Saala Lucifer ka katayi pata nahi lagta, kab kya aur kyun karta hai... Pichhle kuchh updates se yahi lag raha hai ke wo Inaaya se doori banaye huye hai, use ignore karne ki koshish kar raha hai... Iska kaaran halanki abhi tak pata nahi chala hai... But ho sakta hai wo bina kisi wajah ke hi ye kar raha ho, kewal Inaaya ko pareshan karne ke liye, waise bhi dimaag thikane par hai nahi uska... Wahin, baat karen Inaaya ki to uski baaton aur harkaton se saaf dikhayi de raha hai ke wo Lucifer se kitna zyada pyaar karne lagi hai, aur Lucifer ke is rukhe bartav ka asar bhi uspar pad sakta hai... Ab use kaha to hai Lucifer ne Milne ka, but kahin ek baar fir use taal na de...

Idhar Ashmita ka behaviour bhi bohot had tak badal sa gaya hai... Dheere – dheere Lucifer uski zindagi ka ek important hissa ban chuka hai, joki uski baaton se bhi saaf zahir hai... Isiliye usne Lucifer ke liye doctor ka bhi prabandh kiya, but hum sabko pata hai ke Lucifer ka doctor kuchh nahi kar sakta... Uska past sirf wo khud hi pata laga sakta hai... But jo baat important rahi wo thi, Ashmita ka Lucifer ko kiss karna, us samay adhik gusse mein aa jaane ke kaaran bhi Ashmita ne ye step liya... Par uski baaton ne ek baar fir darsha diya ke wo Lucifer aur uski khushi ke liye kuchh bhi kar sakti hai... Khair, Lucifer ki baat mein chhupe dard ko bhi wo mehsoos kar gayi, dekhte hain Ashmita aage kya karti hai... Kyonki doctor waala idea bhale hi fail ho gaya ho par wo koshish to karegi hi Lucifer ki madad karne ki...

Anisha ki Mom ne use Lucifer ko ek baar fir Dinner par bulane ka kaha tha joki wo do baar Lucifer se bol chuki hai... But of course, ye bhai to wahi karega jo iska mann hoga... And I'm sure ke Anisha ki baat wo maane ya na maane, ek do din baad bina bataye uske ghar pahunch bhi jaayega... But Anisha ki Mom ko Lucifer mein itna sudden interest kaise paida ho gaya..? Kya uske behaviour ki wajah se ya koyi aur baat hai... Anisha ko Lucifer bhi apne flat par bula raha tha, reason wahi book jo Inaaya laayi thi, abhi tak Lucifer ko kuchh praapt nahi hua hai us kitaab se, dekhna hai ke aage kuchh pata chalega ya nahi... Wahin abhi tak Arjun ke baare mein bhi kuchh pata nahi chal paaya hai Anisha ko...

Idhar, Payal ko Naag ne kuchh ideas diye hain jo use khud bhi sahi lage... Ye Naag ka dimaag kabse chalne laga..? Pyaar ke side effects nazar aa rahen hain uspar bhi but I think iski prem kahani bhi poori shayad nahi hogi, after all Lucifer ki sangati ka kuchh to asar hoga hi... Payal bhi ab kuchh had tak Lucifer ke behaviour ko samajhne lagi hai... Wo jaan gayi hai ke Lucifer jo khud ko dikhata hai asal mein wo hai nahi... Let's see dono ke beech aage kya hota hai aur Aarohi kya aage picture mein aayegi...

Idhar Eda aur Raaj ghayal ho chuke hain jiska kaaran kisi ko bhi samajh nahi aa raha... Eda aur Raaj, dono hi abhi tak kaafi powerful lage hain, past ki ghatnaye ho ya present ki, dono ka auhda Heaven mein kaafi bada hai aur itni buri tarah kisi ke dwara ghayal ho jaana... Lagta hai Heaven par khatra mandra raha hai... Ab do hi options hain unke paas, ya to Supreme khud lade ya fir Lucifer ko ladna hoga... But kya Lucifer bina apni yaad dasht poori tarah se paaye lad paayega..? Us se badi baat, jab Lucifer ki yaad dasht lautegi to wo Heaven ke saath hoga ya khilaaf..?

Ek aur ladki ki entry ho gayi hai kahani mein jiska taaluk kisi gurukul se hai... Ye Guruji waala hi hai kya..? Aur Kaashvi kaun hai? Koyi angel hai ya Lucifer ki zindagi mein ab tak aayi baaki ladkiyon ki hi tarah iska role hoga... Lucifer ki baaton se aur fir usi ke kahne mutaabik baarish hone se hairaan ho chuki hai wo, dekhna hoga aage dono ke beech kya hota hai... Lucifer usi jagah par gira tha jab uski yaad dasht chali gayi... Kya wo kisi ladayi mein zakhmi hokar earth par gira tha ya fir koyi aur curse tha..? Past mein Simran se ek do baar kaha tha Lucifer ne ke wo Earth par zaroor milenge, yaani wo pehle se hi jaanta tha ke wo Earth par hoga aane waale samay mein..?

Idhar Mitika aur Lucifer ke past scene mein Simran ka zikr hua... Usne Lucifer ke liye hathiyaar utha liye the... Kya Lucifer par koyi khatra tha ya koyi aur baat..? Aur uske baad Simran ke saath kya hua tha... Kya wo mar gayi thi..? Ya isi kaaran se wo bhi Lucifer se door ho gayi thi..?

Sawaal aur suspense barabar bane huye hain kahani mein joki Lucifer ka past saamne aane tak yunhi bane rahenge... Ek baar uska past saamne aa jaaye to kuchh had tak sawaalon ke jawaab mil jaayenge... Let's see aage kya hota hai...

Sabhi Updates bohot badhiya the bhai... As I've said ke humour likhne mein aap maahir ho, Lucifer ki normal conversation padhkar bhi apne aap chehre par muskaan aa hi jaati hai... Great job bro..!!

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
 

parkas

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In heaven

Eda aur raaj jhakmi halaat me pade hue the aur bahut sare guards unhe utha kar ved ke pass leke ja rahe the

Aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi khukhar janwar ne un par hamla kiya ho aur unki halaat khafi kharab bataye ja rahi thi

Bahut sare veds unka ilaaz kar rahe the aur heaven me dar ka mahool bana hua tha
Eske do teen reason the jaise ki ek to heaven me eda aur raaj par hamla kiya kisne?
Dusra reason ki jisne bhi kiya hai vo kitna powerful hoga ki usne eda aur raaj dono ko ek sath jhakmi kar diya?
Eda aur raaj dono guruji ke sisya the aur dono hi bahut shaktishali mane jate the
Un dono ko ek sath harana aaj tak sambhav nahi hua tha
Jab eda aur kavish kisi raksash se ladne gaye the aur kavish jhakmi ho gaya tha tab eda akele na keval us rakshah se ladi thi balki kavish ko jinda vaha se bacha kar bhi laye thi
Tisra reason ye tha ki agar eda aur raaj hi safe nahi hai to fir safe hoga kon? Aur es musibaat se unhe bachaega kon?

Guruji to prithvi par rahte hai aur unhone yudh karna chhod rakha hai
Baki agar koe etni badi shakti se lad sakta tha to vo the eda, raaj, Supreme aur lucifer

Eda aur raaj to pehle hi jhakmi ho chuke hai
Ab bache kon Supreme aur lucifer

Supreme ne to pata nahi kitne sakdo saalo se yudh kiya hi nahi hai
Aur aise samay me jab Supreme ki position ka koe deserving candidate nahi hai to aise me unka battle field me utarna kahi se bhi sahi nahi hai

Ab sirf lucifer bacha
Jiske yaha aane ke lagbhag namatar ke chances hai
Vo prithvi par hai, apni yaddast kho chuka hai, khud ki sari shaktiyo ke bare me pata nahi hai, KAAL se hi marte marte bacha tha,khud ki life ke lode lage hue hai

Aise me lucifer se ye expect karna ki vo heaven jaye, problem solve kare aur vapas aajaye ye bahut jada hi tha
Almost namumkin hi tha

Abhi ke liye eda aur raaj ko khatre se bahar bataya gaya tha aur unhe aaram karne ke liye bola tha

Mantri aur senapati ne ek meeting bulaye aur guards badha diye heaven me aur raat ko bina kisi jaruri kaam ke bahar nikalane ke liye manaye ki gaye sath me koe bhi akela kahi nahi jayega ye bhi hidayat di gaye

Jab tak en sab ke piche kon hai ye pata nahi lag jata tab tak heaven ko ek prison type ka bana diya gaya jaha us prison ke andar sari sukh suvidha available hai lekin us se bahar nahi nikal sakte****

Ashmita apna kaam kar rahi thi, lucifer phone chala raha tha, anisha lucifer ke bahar nikalne ka intezaar kar rahi thi, inaaya bahut sare kaam ek sath kar rahi thi, payal naag ke dwara diye gaye suggestion par kaam kar rahi thi aur Tara
Tara kuch to kar rahi thi vo

Lucifer utha aur bahar jane laga

Ashmita- kaha ja raha hai?
Lucifer- kuch kaam hai

Ashmita- kya?
Lucifer- personal

Ashmita- personal?
Lucifer- nahi ho sakta?

Ashmita- nahi ho sakta
Lucifer- lekin hai

Ashmita- to ja fir kyu time pass kar raha hai?
Lucifer- teri koe life hai kaam ke bahar?

Ashmita- ek dost hai mera usse mere alava sab dikhta hai aur jab main kuch bol deti hu to ladne lag jata hai esliye ha koe life nahi hai meri kaam ke bahar
Lucifer- bc tere drame khatam hone ka naam hi nahi lete?

Ashmita- ja na kyu dekh raha hai fir mere drame?
Lucifer- ja hi raha hu
Ek fair laga hai city me

Ashmita- to main kya karu?
Lucifer- chalegi mere sath?

Ashmita- nahi tera time waste nahi karana chahti main
Vaise bhi tu kuch jada hi busy rahta hau
Lucifer- dekh le soch le
Main kal jaunga tere sath ya tere bina lekin jaunga jarur
Etna bol kar lucifer bahar aagya jaha kab se anisha lucifer ka wait kar rahi thi

Anisha- hie
Lucifer- bye

Anisha- suno to
Lucifer- nahi sunu to?

Anisha- aaj dinner par aana tha na aapka
Aaoge na?
Lucifer- siya mera busy schedule to dikhana jara

Siya- hai?
Lucifer- sorry bahut tight schedule hai mera
Time nahi nikal sakta

Anisha- aisa mat karo
Aapne bola tha aaj aaoge
Lucifer- siya kuch adjustment ho sakta hai kya mere tight schedule me?

Siya- sir???
Lucifer- ohh shit nahi ho sakta
Pata nahi kaise manage karunga main etna sara kaam
Tum ek kaam karo mere manager ko call karke appointment le lo

Anisha- kon manager?
Kya bol rahe ho?
Kyu confuse kar rahe ho mujhe?
Lucifer- call my manager
Aur lucifer bahar nikal gaya fir vapas ashmita ke cabin me aagya

Ashmita- kya hua?
Badi jaldi aagaye vapas?
Lucifer- keys dena?

Ashmita- kis chhij ki?
Lucifer- meri ghadi ki

Ashmita- konsi ghadi ki?
Lucifer- are meri black audi hai na jisse tu use karti hai uski chabi de

Ashmita- kaha jana hai tujhe?
Aur tu chala lega ghadi?
Lucifer- main chala lunga
Aur apne liye naye car le lena meri ko todti rahti hai

Ashmita- dhayan rakhna
Aur ashmita usse keys de deti hai to lucifer ashmita ki ghadi le kar nikal jata hai

Bahut der tak drive karne ke baad vo ek jungle me pahuch jata hai aur car jungle ke ander ghusa deta hai

Chhote chhote rasto se bachate hue vo bahut dheere dheere ghadi chala raha tha kyuki aati bhi to bahut kam thi usse

Fir ek jagah ruk gaya aur utar gaya vaha edhar udhar ghumne laga

Ek jagah bath kar jameen ko dekhne laga aur vaha hath fira fira kar kuch check karne laga

Kaashvi- rasta bhatak gaye ho kya?
Lucifer ke piche se kisi ladki ki aawaz aae
Aur jab lucifer ne piche mud ke dekha to ek pure white dress me ek ladki khadi thi
Uske hatho me kuch sushi lakdiya thi aur chehre par ek alag hi tez

Kaashvi- raat ko jungle khatarnaak ho jata hai
Aap ko yaha se jana chahiye
Lucifer- abhi to raat nahi hue hai

Kaashvi- yaha jaldi hoti hai
Aapko abhi suraj dikh raha hai aur agle hi pal andhera chha jayega
Lucifer- fir yaha aise me ek ladki akele kya kar rahi hai?

Kaashvi- aap ladkiyo ko kamjor samjhte ho?
Lucifer- dunia ke sabse shaktisali insaan ko ek ladki ne phinghala diya tha
Us ladki ko kamjor samjhne ki bhul aur murakhata main nahi karna chahta

Kaashvi- bas to fir main apna dhayan rakh sakti hu
Lucifer- aur main apna
Lakdiya kaha leke ja rahi ho?

Kaashvi- ghar par
Lucifer- jungle me ghar hai tumhra?

Kaashvi- nahi ho sakta?
Lucifer- bilkul ho sakta hai
Main to bas confirm kar raha tha

Kaashvi- akele yaha sehar se etni door kya kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- tumhe dekh kar lagta hai ki tum ek spy ho jo yaha kisi secret mission ko karne aaye ho

Kaashvi- gurukul hai yaha
Main vaha padhti hu
Lucifer- maine to kabhi nahi dekha yaha par

Kaashvi- aate jate rahte ho kya yaha?
Lucifer- yahi se to aaya tha

Kaashvi- matlab?
Lucifer- pehli chhij yahi yaad hai
Esliye yaha aagya sayad kuch aur yaad aajaye

Kaashvi- acha to aap vo ho jo safeed light chhodte hue giri the bahut saal pehle yaha par
Lucifer- tumne dekha tha?

Kaashvi- sabne dekha tha
Humare guruji aur hum aaye bhi the dekhne lekin ek bade gaddhe ke alava kuch nahi dikha

Lucifer- kaha tha vo gaddha?
Kaashvi- humne bhar diya tha
Usme kuch bhi nahi tha
Aisa lag raha tha jaise koe bhari chhije bahut tej raftaar se aakar giri ho aur uski vajah se vo gaddha bana ho

Lucifer- vo bhari chhij main hi tha?
Kaashvi- aap hi to bata rahe ho

Lucifer- kya tum mujhe tumhra gurukul dikha sakte ho?
Kaashvi- nahi main aisa nahi kar sakti

Lucifer- to kya main tumhra gurukul tabhah kar sakta hu?
Kaashvi- nahi aap aisa nahi kar sakte

Lucifer- kya tum sure ho?
Agar main vohi hua jo us din gira aur jiski vajah se etna bada gaddha hua to kya main tumhra gurukul tabhah bhi nahi kar sakta?
Kaashvi- kyu karoge ye mera pehla parsan hai?
Sirf esliye ki main aapko vaha leke nahi gaye?

Lucifer- ye reason bahut bada hai
Ek ladki aise jungle me bina dare akele ghum rahi hai aur mujhe yaha se jane ko bol rahi hai to of course us gurukul me kuch na kuch to abnormal ho raha hoga jo mujhe janana hai
Kaashvi- aisi jagah par hoga to normal to hoga nahi?

Lucifer- pani to peela sakti ho?
Kaashvi- pass me hi ek nadi bah rahi hai

Lucifer- rasta dikha sakti ho?
Agar koe janwar aa gaya to?
Kaashvi- aapko dekh kar lagta nahi hai apko janwaro se dar lag raha hai fir bhi main dikha deti hu kyuki pani manga hai aapne aur hum pani ke liye mana nahi karte

Lucifer- chaliye fir
Lao ye lakdiya main leke chal lu?
Kaashvi- apna bhaar khud uthana chahiye

Lucifer- mujh se bahtar ye kon samjh sakta hai
Kaashvi- ya to aap pagal ho ya jo aap bol rahe ho vo sach hai

Lucifer- tumhe kya lagta hai?
Kaashvi- mujhe to ye lagta hai ki mujhe yaha jada der nahi rukna chahiye

Lucifer- lekin ab to rukna padega
Kaashvi- kyu?

Lucifer- aisi baarish me kaha jaogi?
Kaashvi- kaha barish ho rahi hai?

Lucifer- pani to peene do
Barish apne aap ho jayegi
Kaashvi- etna tej suraj chamak raha haj

Lucifer- fir bhi aaj barish hogi
Dekh lena
Kaashvi- pagal hi ho
Aa gaye nadi
Pee lo pani fir mujhe jana bhi hai

Lucifer- jagah dikhane ke liye sukriya
Bahut khubsurat hai
Kaashvi- jagah dekhne aaye the ya pani peene?

Lucifer bas muskura deta hai aur vo jaise jaise pani ki taraf bhadne laga vaise vaise suraj chhupane laga aur mosam kharab hone laga

Aur jab usne apni hatheli me lekar pani peena suru kiya aasman ne bhi pani bahana suru kar diya aur ye jaise hi pani ki bunde kaashvi par giri vo ek dam shocked ho gaye

Vo kabhi lucifer ko dekhti to kabhi aasman ki taraf dekhti

Kuch hi seconds me pani ki raftaar etni tej hogaye ki lucifer aur kaashvi dono buri tarah bheeg gaye aur lucifer pani pee kar vapas aagya

Lucifer- khadi kyu ho?
Chhupne ki jagah dikha do nahi to tum bimar pad jaogi
Kaashvi bas hath se ishara hi kar paye kyuki muh ne to sath hi chhod diya tha....
Nice and lovely update....
 

The king

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UPDATE-81
In heaven

Eda aur raaj jhakmi halaat me pade hue the aur bahut sare guards unhe utha kar ved ke pass leke ja rahe the

Aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi khukhar janwar ne un par hamla kiya ho aur unki halaat khafi kharab bataye ja rahi thi

Bahut sare veds unka ilaaz kar rahe the aur heaven me dar ka mahool bana hua tha
Eske do teen reason the jaise ki ek to heaven me eda aur raaj par hamla kiya kisne?
Dusra reason ki jisne bhi kiya hai vo kitna powerful hoga ki usne eda aur raaj dono ko ek sath jhakmi kar diya?
Eda aur raaj dono guruji ke sisya the aur dono hi bahut shaktishali mane jate the
Un dono ko ek sath harana aaj tak sambhav nahi hua tha
Jab eda aur kavish kisi raksash se ladne gaye the aur kavish jhakmi ho gaya tha tab eda akele na keval us rakshah se ladi thi balki kavish ko jinda vaha se bacha kar bhi laye thi
Tisra reason ye tha ki agar eda aur raaj hi safe nahi hai to fir safe hoga kon? Aur es musibaat se unhe bachaega kon?

Guruji to prithvi par rahte hai aur unhone yudh karna chhod rakha hai
Baki agar koe etni badi shakti se lad sakta tha to vo the eda, raaj, Supreme aur lucifer

Eda aur raaj to pehle hi jhakmi ho chuke hai
Ab bache kon Supreme aur lucifer

Supreme ne to pata nahi kitne sakdo saalo se yudh kiya hi nahi hai
Aur aise samay me jab Supreme ki position ka koe deserving candidate nahi hai to aise me unka battle field me utarna kahi se bhi sahi nahi hai

Ab sirf lucifer bacha
Jiske yaha aane ke lagbhag namatar ke chances hai
Vo prithvi par hai, apni yaddast kho chuka hai, khud ki sari shaktiyo ke bare me pata nahi hai, KAAL se hi marte marte bacha tha,khud ki life ke lode lage hue hai

Aise me lucifer se ye expect karna ki vo heaven jaye, problem solve kare aur vapas aajaye ye bahut jada hi tha
Almost namumkin hi tha

Abhi ke liye eda aur raaj ko khatre se bahar bataya gaya tha aur unhe aaram karne ke liye bola tha

Mantri aur senapati ne ek meeting bulaye aur guards badha diye heaven me aur raat ko bina kisi jaruri kaam ke bahar nikalane ke liye manaye ki gaye sath me koe bhi akela kahi nahi jayega ye bhi hidayat di gaye

Jab tak en sab ke piche kon hai ye pata nahi lag jata tab tak heaven ko ek prison type ka bana diya gaya jaha us prison ke andar sari sukh suvidha available hai lekin us se bahar nahi nikal sakte****

Ashmita apna kaam kar rahi thi, lucifer phone chala raha tha, anisha lucifer ke bahar nikalne ka intezaar kar rahi thi, inaaya bahut sare kaam ek sath kar rahi thi, payal naag ke dwara diye gaye suggestion par kaam kar rahi thi aur Tara
Tara kuch to kar rahi thi vo

Lucifer utha aur bahar jane laga

Ashmita- kaha ja raha hai?
Lucifer- kuch kaam hai

Ashmita- kya?
Lucifer- personal

Ashmita- personal?
Lucifer- nahi ho sakta?

Ashmita- nahi ho sakta
Lucifer- lekin hai

Ashmita- to ja fir kyu time pass kar raha hai?
Lucifer- teri koe life hai kaam ke bahar?

Ashmita- ek dost hai mera usse mere alava sab dikhta hai aur jab main kuch bol deti hu to ladne lag jata hai esliye ha koe life nahi hai meri kaam ke bahar
Lucifer- bc tere drame khatam hone ka naam hi nahi lete?

Ashmita- ja na kyu dekh raha hai fir mere drame?
Lucifer- ja hi raha hu
Ek fair laga hai city me

Ashmita- to main kya karu?
Lucifer- chalegi mere sath?

Ashmita- nahi tera time waste nahi karana chahti main
Vaise bhi tu kuch jada hi busy rahta hau
Lucifer- dekh le soch le
Main kal jaunga tere sath ya tere bina lekin jaunga jarur
Etna bol kar lucifer bahar aagya jaha kab se anisha lucifer ka wait kar rahi thi

Anisha- hie
Lucifer- bye

Anisha- suno to
Lucifer- nahi sunu to?

Anisha- aaj dinner par aana tha na aapka
Aaoge na?
Lucifer- siya mera busy schedule to dikhana jara

Siya- hai?
Lucifer- sorry bahut tight schedule hai mera
Time nahi nikal sakta

Anisha- aisa mat karo
Aapne bola tha aaj aaoge
Lucifer- siya kuch adjustment ho sakta hai kya mere tight schedule me?

Siya- sir???
Lucifer- ohh shit nahi ho sakta
Pata nahi kaise manage karunga main etna sara kaam
Tum ek kaam karo mere manager ko call karke appointment le lo

Anisha- kon manager?
Kya bol rahe ho?
Kyu confuse kar rahe ho mujhe?
Lucifer- call my manager
Aur lucifer bahar nikal gaya fir vapas ashmita ke cabin me aagya

Ashmita- kya hua?
Badi jaldi aagaye vapas?
Lucifer- keys dena?

Ashmita- kis chhij ki?
Lucifer- meri ghadi ki

Ashmita- konsi ghadi ki?
Lucifer- are meri black audi hai na jisse tu use karti hai uski chabi de

Ashmita- kaha jana hai tujhe?
Aur tu chala lega ghadi?
Lucifer- main chala lunga
Aur apne liye naye car le lena meri ko todti rahti hai

Ashmita- dhayan rakhna
Aur ashmita usse keys de deti hai to lucifer ashmita ki ghadi le kar nikal jata hai

Bahut der tak drive karne ke baad vo ek jungle me pahuch jata hai aur car jungle ke ander ghusa deta hai

Chhote chhote rasto se bachate hue vo bahut dheere dheere ghadi chala raha tha kyuki aati bhi to bahut kam thi usse

Fir ek jagah ruk gaya aur utar gaya vaha edhar udhar ghumne laga

Ek jagah bath kar jameen ko dekhne laga aur vaha hath fira fira kar kuch check karne laga

Kaashvi- rasta bhatak gaye ho kya?
Lucifer ke piche se kisi ladki ki aawaz aae
Aur jab lucifer ne piche mud ke dekha to ek pure white dress me ek ladki khadi thi
Uske hatho me kuch sushi lakdiya thi aur chehre par ek alag hi tez

Kaashvi- raat ko jungle khatarnaak ho jata hai
Aap ko yaha se jana chahiye
Lucifer- abhi to raat nahi hue hai

Kaashvi- yaha jaldi hoti hai
Aapko abhi suraj dikh raha hai aur agle hi pal andhera chha jayega
Lucifer- fir yaha aise me ek ladki akele kya kar rahi hai?

Kaashvi- aap ladkiyo ko kamjor samjhte ho?
Lucifer- dunia ke sabse shaktisali insaan ko ek ladki ne phinghala diya tha
Us ladki ko kamjor samjhne ki bhul aur murakhata main nahi karna chahta

Kaashvi- bas to fir main apna dhayan rakh sakti hu
Lucifer- aur main apna
Lakdiya kaha leke ja rahi ho?

Kaashvi- ghar par
Lucifer- jungle me ghar hai tumhra?

Kaashvi- nahi ho sakta?
Lucifer- bilkul ho sakta hai
Main to bas confirm kar raha tha

Kaashvi- akele yaha sehar se etni door kya kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- tumhe dekh kar lagta hai ki tum ek spy ho jo yaha kisi secret mission ko karne aaye ho

Kaashvi- gurukul hai yaha
Main vaha padhti hu
Lucifer- maine to kabhi nahi dekha yaha par

Kaashvi- aate jate rahte ho kya yaha?
Lucifer- yahi se to aaya tha

Kaashvi- matlab?
Lucifer- pehli chhij yahi yaad hai
Esliye yaha aagya sayad kuch aur yaad aajaye

Kaashvi- acha to aap vo ho jo safeed light chhodte hue giri the bahut saal pehle yaha par
Lucifer- tumne dekha tha?

Kaashvi- sabne dekha tha
Humare guruji aur hum aaye bhi the dekhne lekin ek bade gaddhe ke alava kuch nahi dikha

Lucifer- kaha tha vo gaddha?
Kaashvi- humne bhar diya tha
Usme kuch bhi nahi tha
Aisa lag raha tha jaise koe bhari chhije bahut tej raftaar se aakar giri ho aur uski vajah se vo gaddha bana ho

Lucifer- vo bhari chhij main hi tha?
Kaashvi- aap hi to bata rahe ho

Lucifer- kya tum mujhe tumhra gurukul dikha sakte ho?
Kaashvi- nahi main aisa nahi kar sakti

Lucifer- to kya main tumhra gurukul tabhah kar sakta hu?
Kaashvi- nahi aap aisa nahi kar sakte

Lucifer- kya tum sure ho?
Agar main vohi hua jo us din gira aur jiski vajah se etna bada gaddha hua to kya main tumhra gurukul tabhah bhi nahi kar sakta?
Kaashvi- kyu karoge ye mera pehla parsan hai?
Sirf esliye ki main aapko vaha leke nahi gaye?

Lucifer- ye reason bahut bada hai
Ek ladki aise jungle me bina dare akele ghum rahi hai aur mujhe yaha se jane ko bol rahi hai to of course us gurukul me kuch na kuch to abnormal ho raha hoga jo mujhe janana hai
Kaashvi- aisi jagah par hoga to normal to hoga nahi?

Lucifer- pani to peela sakti ho?
Kaashvi- pass me hi ek nadi bah rahi hai

Lucifer- rasta dikha sakti ho?
Agar koe janwar aa gaya to?
Kaashvi- aapko dekh kar lagta nahi hai apko janwaro se dar lag raha hai fir bhi main dikha deti hu kyuki pani manga hai aapne aur hum pani ke liye mana nahi karte

Lucifer- chaliye fir
Lao ye lakdiya main leke chal lu?
Kaashvi- apna bhaar khud uthana chahiye

Lucifer- mujh se bahtar ye kon samjh sakta hai
Kaashvi- ya to aap pagal ho ya jo aap bol rahe ho vo sach hai

Lucifer- tumhe kya lagta hai?
Kaashvi- mujhe to ye lagta hai ki mujhe yaha jada der nahi rukna chahiye

Lucifer- lekin ab to rukna padega
Kaashvi- kyu?

Lucifer- aisi baarish me kaha jaogi?
Kaashvi- kaha barish ho rahi hai?

Lucifer- pani to peene do
Barish apne aap ho jayegi
Kaashvi- etna tej suraj chamak raha haj

Lucifer- fir bhi aaj barish hogi
Dekh lena
Kaashvi- pagal hi ho
Aa gaye nadi
Pee lo pani fir mujhe jana bhi hai

Lucifer- jagah dikhane ke liye sukriya
Bahut khubsurat hai
Kaashvi- jagah dekhne aaye the ya pani peene?

Lucifer bas muskura deta hai aur vo jaise jaise pani ki taraf bhadne laga vaise vaise suraj chhupane laga aur mosam kharab hone laga

Aur jab usne apni hatheli me lekar pani peena suru kiya aasman ne bhi pani bahana suru kar diya aur ye jaise hi pani ki bunde kaashvi par giri vo ek dam shocked ho gaye

Vo kabhi lucifer ko dekhti to kabhi aasman ki taraf dekhti

Kuch hi seconds me pani ki raftaar etni tej hogaye ki lucifer aur kaashvi dono buri tarah bheeg gaye aur lucifer pani pee kar vapas aagya

Lucifer- khadi kyu ho?
Chhupne ki jagah dikha do nahi to tum bimar pad jaogi
Kaashvi bas hath se ishara hi kar paye kyuki muh ne to sath hi chhod diya tha....
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
 

ROAN R

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In heaven

Eda aur raaj jhakmi halaat me pade hue the aur bahut sare guards unhe utha kar ved ke pass leke ja rahe the

Aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi khukhar janwar ne un par hamla kiya ho aur unki halaat khafi kharab bataye ja rahi thi

Bahut sare veds unka ilaaz kar rahe the aur heaven me dar ka mahool bana hua tha
Eske do teen reason the jaise ki ek to heaven me eda aur raaj par hamla kiya kisne?
Dusra reason ki jisne bhi kiya hai vo kitna powerful hoga ki usne eda aur raaj dono ko ek sath jhakmi kar diya?
Eda aur raaj dono guruji ke sisya the aur dono hi bahut shaktishali mane jate the
Un dono ko ek sath harana aaj tak sambhav nahi hua tha
Jab eda aur kavish kisi raksash se ladne gaye the aur kavish jhakmi ho gaya tha tab eda akele na keval us rakshah se ladi thi balki kavish ko jinda vaha se bacha kar bhi laye thi
Tisra reason ye tha ki agar eda aur raaj hi safe nahi hai to fir safe hoga kon? Aur es musibaat se unhe bachaega kon?

Guruji to prithvi par rahte hai aur unhone yudh karna chhod rakha hai
Baki agar koe etni badi shakti se lad sakta tha to vo the eda, raaj, Supreme aur lucifer

Eda aur raaj to pehle hi jhakmi ho chuke hai
Ab bache kon Supreme aur lucifer

Supreme ne to pata nahi kitne sakdo saalo se yudh kiya hi nahi hai
Aur aise samay me jab Supreme ki position ka koe deserving candidate nahi hai to aise me unka battle field me utarna kahi se bhi sahi nahi hai

Ab sirf lucifer bacha
Jiske yaha aane ke lagbhag namatar ke chances hai
Vo prithvi par hai, apni yaddast kho chuka hai, khud ki sari shaktiyo ke bare me pata nahi hai, KAAL se hi marte marte bacha tha,khud ki life ke lode lage hue hai

Aise me lucifer se ye expect karna ki vo heaven jaye, problem solve kare aur vapas aajaye ye bahut jada hi tha
Almost namumkin hi tha

Abhi ke liye eda aur raaj ko khatre se bahar bataya gaya tha aur unhe aaram karne ke liye bola tha

Mantri aur senapati ne ek meeting bulaye aur guards badha diye heaven me aur raat ko bina kisi jaruri kaam ke bahar nikalane ke liye manaye ki gaye sath me koe bhi akela kahi nahi jayega ye bhi hidayat di gaye

Jab tak en sab ke piche kon hai ye pata nahi lag jata tab tak heaven ko ek prison type ka bana diya gaya jaha us prison ke andar sari sukh suvidha available hai lekin us se bahar nahi nikal sakte****

Ashmita apna kaam kar rahi thi, lucifer phone chala raha tha, anisha lucifer ke bahar nikalne ka intezaar kar rahi thi, inaaya bahut sare kaam ek sath kar rahi thi, payal naag ke dwara diye gaye suggestion par kaam kar rahi thi aur Tara
Tara kuch to kar rahi thi vo

Lucifer utha aur bahar jane laga

Ashmita- kaha ja raha hai?
Lucifer- kuch kaam hai

Ashmita- kya?
Lucifer- personal

Ashmita- personal?
Lucifer- nahi ho sakta?

Ashmita- nahi ho sakta
Lucifer- lekin hai

Ashmita- to ja fir kyu time pass kar raha hai?
Lucifer- teri koe life hai kaam ke bahar?

Ashmita- ek dost hai mera usse mere alava sab dikhta hai aur jab main kuch bol deti hu to ladne lag jata hai esliye ha koe life nahi hai meri kaam ke bahar
Lucifer- bc tere drame khatam hone ka naam hi nahi lete?

Ashmita- ja na kyu dekh raha hai fir mere drame?
Lucifer- ja hi raha hu
Ek fair laga hai city me

Ashmita- to main kya karu?
Lucifer- chalegi mere sath?

Ashmita- nahi tera time waste nahi karana chahti main
Vaise bhi tu kuch jada hi busy rahta hau
Lucifer- dekh le soch le
Main kal jaunga tere sath ya tere bina lekin jaunga jarur
Etna bol kar lucifer bahar aagya jaha kab se anisha lucifer ka wait kar rahi thi

Anisha- hie
Lucifer- bye

Anisha- suno to
Lucifer- nahi sunu to?

Anisha- aaj dinner par aana tha na aapka
Aaoge na?
Lucifer- siya mera busy schedule to dikhana jara

Siya- hai?
Lucifer- sorry bahut tight schedule hai mera
Time nahi nikal sakta

Anisha- aisa mat karo
Aapne bola tha aaj aaoge
Lucifer- siya kuch adjustment ho sakta hai kya mere tight schedule me?

Siya- sir???
Lucifer- ohh shit nahi ho sakta
Pata nahi kaise manage karunga main etna sara kaam
Tum ek kaam karo mere manager ko call karke appointment le lo

Anisha- kon manager?
Kya bol rahe ho?
Kyu confuse kar rahe ho mujhe?
Lucifer- call my manager
Aur lucifer bahar nikal gaya fir vapas ashmita ke cabin me aagya

Ashmita- kya hua?
Badi jaldi aagaye vapas?
Lucifer- keys dena?

Ashmita- kis chhij ki?
Lucifer- meri ghadi ki

Ashmita- konsi ghadi ki?
Lucifer- are meri black audi hai na jisse tu use karti hai uski chabi de

Ashmita- kaha jana hai tujhe?
Aur tu chala lega ghadi?
Lucifer- main chala lunga
Aur apne liye naye car le lena meri ko todti rahti hai

Ashmita- dhayan rakhna
Aur ashmita usse keys de deti hai to lucifer ashmita ki ghadi le kar nikal jata hai

Bahut der tak drive karne ke baad vo ek jungle me pahuch jata hai aur car jungle ke ander ghusa deta hai

Chhote chhote rasto se bachate hue vo bahut dheere dheere ghadi chala raha tha kyuki aati bhi to bahut kam thi usse

Fir ek jagah ruk gaya aur utar gaya vaha edhar udhar ghumne laga

Ek jagah bath kar jameen ko dekhne laga aur vaha hath fira fira kar kuch check karne laga

Kaashvi- rasta bhatak gaye ho kya?
Lucifer ke piche se kisi ladki ki aawaz aae
Aur jab lucifer ne piche mud ke dekha to ek pure white dress me ek ladki khadi thi
Uske hatho me kuch sushi lakdiya thi aur chehre par ek alag hi tez

Kaashvi- raat ko jungle khatarnaak ho jata hai
Aap ko yaha se jana chahiye
Lucifer- abhi to raat nahi hue hai

Kaashvi- yaha jaldi hoti hai
Aapko abhi suraj dikh raha hai aur agle hi pal andhera chha jayega
Lucifer- fir yaha aise me ek ladki akele kya kar rahi hai?

Kaashvi- aap ladkiyo ko kamjor samjhte ho?
Lucifer- dunia ke sabse shaktisali insaan ko ek ladki ne phinghala diya tha
Us ladki ko kamjor samjhne ki bhul aur murakhata main nahi karna chahta

Kaashvi- bas to fir main apna dhayan rakh sakti hu
Lucifer- aur main apna
Lakdiya kaha leke ja rahi ho?

Kaashvi- ghar par
Lucifer- jungle me ghar hai tumhra?

Kaashvi- nahi ho sakta?
Lucifer- bilkul ho sakta hai
Main to bas confirm kar raha tha

Kaashvi- akele yaha sehar se etni door kya kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- tumhe dekh kar lagta hai ki tum ek spy ho jo yaha kisi secret mission ko karne aaye ho

Kaashvi- gurukul hai yaha
Main vaha padhti hu
Lucifer- maine to kabhi nahi dekha yaha par

Kaashvi- aate jate rahte ho kya yaha?
Lucifer- yahi se to aaya tha

Kaashvi- matlab?
Lucifer- pehli chhij yahi yaad hai
Esliye yaha aagya sayad kuch aur yaad aajaye

Kaashvi- acha to aap vo ho jo safeed light chhodte hue giri the bahut saal pehle yaha par
Lucifer- tumne dekha tha?

Kaashvi- sabne dekha tha
Humare guruji aur hum aaye bhi the dekhne lekin ek bade gaddhe ke alava kuch nahi dikha

Lucifer- kaha tha vo gaddha?
Kaashvi- humne bhar diya tha
Usme kuch bhi nahi tha
Aisa lag raha tha jaise koe bhari chhije bahut tej raftaar se aakar giri ho aur uski vajah se vo gaddha bana ho

Lucifer- vo bhari chhij main hi tha?
Kaashvi- aap hi to bata rahe ho

Lucifer- kya tum mujhe tumhra gurukul dikha sakte ho?
Kaashvi- nahi main aisa nahi kar sakti

Lucifer- to kya main tumhra gurukul tabhah kar sakta hu?
Kaashvi- nahi aap aisa nahi kar sakte

Lucifer- kya tum sure ho?
Agar main vohi hua jo us din gira aur jiski vajah se etna bada gaddha hua to kya main tumhra gurukul tabhah bhi nahi kar sakta?
Kaashvi- kyu karoge ye mera pehla parsan hai?
Sirf esliye ki main aapko vaha leke nahi gaye?

Lucifer- ye reason bahut bada hai
Ek ladki aise jungle me bina dare akele ghum rahi hai aur mujhe yaha se jane ko bol rahi hai to of course us gurukul me kuch na kuch to abnormal ho raha hoga jo mujhe janana hai
Kaashvi- aisi jagah par hoga to normal to hoga nahi?

Lucifer- pani to peela sakti ho?
Kaashvi- pass me hi ek nadi bah rahi hai

Lucifer- rasta dikha sakti ho?
Agar koe janwar aa gaya to?
Kaashvi- aapko dekh kar lagta nahi hai apko janwaro se dar lag raha hai fir bhi main dikha deti hu kyuki pani manga hai aapne aur hum pani ke liye mana nahi karte

Lucifer- chaliye fir
Lao ye lakdiya main leke chal lu?
Kaashvi- apna bhaar khud uthana chahiye

Lucifer- mujh se bahtar ye kon samjh sakta hai
Kaashvi- ya to aap pagal ho ya jo aap bol rahe ho vo sach hai

Lucifer- tumhe kya lagta hai?
Kaashvi- mujhe to ye lagta hai ki mujhe yaha jada der nahi rukna chahiye

Lucifer- lekin ab to rukna padega
Kaashvi- kyu?

Lucifer- aisi baarish me kaha jaogi?
Kaashvi- kaha barish ho rahi hai?

Lucifer- pani to peene do
Barish apne aap ho jayegi
Kaashvi- etna tej suraj chamak raha haj

Lucifer- fir bhi aaj barish hogi
Dekh lena
Kaashvi- pagal hi ho
Aa gaye nadi
Pee lo pani fir mujhe jana bhi hai

Lucifer- jagah dikhane ke liye sukriya
Bahut khubsurat hai
Kaashvi- jagah dekhne aaye the ya pani peene?

Lucifer bas muskura deta hai aur vo jaise jaise pani ki taraf bhadne laga vaise vaise suraj chhupane laga aur mosam kharab hone laga

Aur jab usne apni hatheli me lekar pani peena suru kiya aasman ne bhi pani bahana suru kar diya aur ye jaise hi pani ki bunde kaashvi par giri vo ek dam shocked ho gaye

Vo kabhi lucifer ko dekhti to kabhi aasman ki taraf dekhti

Kuch hi seconds me pani ki raftaar etni tej hogaye ki lucifer aur kaashvi dono buri tarah bheeg gaye aur lucifer pani pee kar vapas aagya

Lucifer- khadi kyu ho?
Chhupne ki jagah dikha do nahi to tum bimar pad jaogi
Kaashvi bas hath se ishara hi kar paye kyuki muh ne to sath hi chhod diya tha....
Bhai bahut hi badhiya update hai ...
Lagta hai abhi se pareshan ho gyi hai kaashvi abhi toh Puri raat baaki hai ...
Dekhte hai kaashvi ka kya haal hota hai ...
 

jitutripathi00

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UPDATE-81
In heaven

Eda aur raaj jhakmi halaat me pade hue the aur bahut sare guards unhe utha kar ved ke pass leke ja rahe the

Aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi khukhar janwar ne un par hamla kiya ho aur unki halaat khafi kharab bataye ja rahi thi

Bahut sare veds unka ilaaz kar rahe the aur heaven me dar ka mahool bana hua tha
Eske do teen reason the jaise ki ek to heaven me eda aur raaj par hamla kiya kisne?
Dusra reason ki jisne bhi kiya hai vo kitna powerful hoga ki usne eda aur raaj dono ko ek sath jhakmi kar diya?
Eda aur raaj dono guruji ke sisya the aur dono hi bahut shaktishali mane jate the
Un dono ko ek sath harana aaj tak sambhav nahi hua tha
Jab eda aur kavish kisi raksash se ladne gaye the aur kavish jhakmi ho gaya tha tab eda akele na keval us rakshah se ladi thi balki kavish ko jinda vaha se bacha kar bhi laye thi
Tisra reason ye tha ki agar eda aur raaj hi safe nahi hai to fir safe hoga kon? Aur es musibaat se unhe bachaega kon?

Guruji to prithvi par rahte hai aur unhone yudh karna chhod rakha hai
Baki agar koe etni badi shakti se lad sakta tha to vo the eda, raaj, Supreme aur lucifer

Eda aur raaj to pehle hi jhakmi ho chuke hai
Ab bache kon Supreme aur lucifer

Supreme ne to pata nahi kitne sakdo saalo se yudh kiya hi nahi hai
Aur aise samay me jab Supreme ki position ka koe deserving candidate nahi hai to aise me unka battle field me utarna kahi se bhi sahi nahi hai

Ab sirf lucifer bacha
Jiske yaha aane ke lagbhag namatar ke chances hai
Vo prithvi par hai, apni yaddast kho chuka hai, khud ki sari shaktiyo ke bare me pata nahi hai, KAAL se hi marte marte bacha tha,khud ki life ke lode lage hue hai

Aise me lucifer se ye expect karna ki vo heaven jaye, problem solve kare aur vapas aajaye ye bahut jada hi tha
Almost namumkin hi tha

Abhi ke liye eda aur raaj ko khatre se bahar bataya gaya tha aur unhe aaram karne ke liye bola tha

Mantri aur senapati ne ek meeting bulaye aur guards badha diye heaven me aur raat ko bina kisi jaruri kaam ke bahar nikalane ke liye manaye ki gaye sath me koe bhi akela kahi nahi jayega ye bhi hidayat di gaye

Jab tak en sab ke piche kon hai ye pata nahi lag jata tab tak heaven ko ek prison type ka bana diya gaya jaha us prison ke andar sari sukh suvidha available hai lekin us se bahar nahi nikal sakte****

Ashmita apna kaam kar rahi thi, lucifer phone chala raha tha, anisha lucifer ke bahar nikalne ka intezaar kar rahi thi, inaaya bahut sare kaam ek sath kar rahi thi, payal naag ke dwara diye gaye suggestion par kaam kar rahi thi aur Tara
Tara kuch to kar rahi thi vo

Lucifer utha aur bahar jane laga

Ashmita- kaha ja raha hai?
Lucifer- kuch kaam hai

Ashmita- kya?
Lucifer- personal

Ashmita- personal?
Lucifer- nahi ho sakta?

Ashmita- nahi ho sakta
Lucifer- lekin hai

Ashmita- to ja fir kyu time pass kar raha hai?
Lucifer- teri koe life hai kaam ke bahar?

Ashmita- ek dost hai mera usse mere alava sab dikhta hai aur jab main kuch bol deti hu to ladne lag jata hai esliye ha koe life nahi hai meri kaam ke bahar
Lucifer- bc tere drame khatam hone ka naam hi nahi lete?

Ashmita- ja na kyu dekh raha hai fir mere drame?
Lucifer- ja hi raha hu
Ek fair laga hai city me

Ashmita- to main kya karu?
Lucifer- chalegi mere sath?

Ashmita- nahi tera time waste nahi karana chahti main
Vaise bhi tu kuch jada hi busy rahta hau
Lucifer- dekh le soch le
Main kal jaunga tere sath ya tere bina lekin jaunga jarur
Etna bol kar lucifer bahar aagya jaha kab se anisha lucifer ka wait kar rahi thi

Anisha- hie
Lucifer- bye

Anisha- suno to
Lucifer- nahi sunu to?

Anisha- aaj dinner par aana tha na aapka
Aaoge na?
Lucifer- siya mera busy schedule to dikhana jara

Siya- hai?
Lucifer- sorry bahut tight schedule hai mera
Time nahi nikal sakta

Anisha- aisa mat karo
Aapne bola tha aaj aaoge
Lucifer- siya kuch adjustment ho sakta hai kya mere tight schedule me?

Siya- sir???
Lucifer- ohh shit nahi ho sakta
Pata nahi kaise manage karunga main etna sara kaam
Tum ek kaam karo mere manager ko call karke appointment le lo

Anisha- kon manager?
Kya bol rahe ho?
Kyu confuse kar rahe ho mujhe?
Lucifer- call my manager
Aur lucifer bahar nikal gaya fir vapas ashmita ke cabin me aagya

Ashmita- kya hua?
Badi jaldi aagaye vapas?
Lucifer- keys dena?

Ashmita- kis chhij ki?
Lucifer- meri ghadi ki

Ashmita- konsi ghadi ki?
Lucifer- are meri black audi hai na jisse tu use karti hai uski chabi de

Ashmita- kaha jana hai tujhe?
Aur tu chala lega ghadi?
Lucifer- main chala lunga
Aur apne liye naye car le lena meri ko todti rahti hai

Ashmita- dhayan rakhna
Aur ashmita usse keys de deti hai to lucifer ashmita ki ghadi le kar nikal jata hai

Bahut der tak drive karne ke baad vo ek jungle me pahuch jata hai aur car jungle ke ander ghusa deta hai

Chhote chhote rasto se bachate hue vo bahut dheere dheere ghadi chala raha tha kyuki aati bhi to bahut kam thi usse

Fir ek jagah ruk gaya aur utar gaya vaha edhar udhar ghumne laga

Ek jagah bath kar jameen ko dekhne laga aur vaha hath fira fira kar kuch check karne laga

Kaashvi- rasta bhatak gaye ho kya?
Lucifer ke piche se kisi ladki ki aawaz aae
Aur jab lucifer ne piche mud ke dekha to ek pure white dress me ek ladki khadi thi
Uske hatho me kuch sushi lakdiya thi aur chehre par ek alag hi tez

Kaashvi- raat ko jungle khatarnaak ho jata hai
Aap ko yaha se jana chahiye
Lucifer- abhi to raat nahi hue hai

Kaashvi- yaha jaldi hoti hai
Aapko abhi suraj dikh raha hai aur agle hi pal andhera chha jayega
Lucifer- fir yaha aise me ek ladki akele kya kar rahi hai?

Kaashvi- aap ladkiyo ko kamjor samjhte ho?
Lucifer- dunia ke sabse shaktisali insaan ko ek ladki ne phinghala diya tha
Us ladki ko kamjor samjhne ki bhul aur murakhata main nahi karna chahta

Kaashvi- bas to fir main apna dhayan rakh sakti hu
Lucifer- aur main apna
Lakdiya kaha leke ja rahi ho?

Kaashvi- ghar par
Lucifer- jungle me ghar hai tumhra?

Kaashvi- nahi ho sakta?
Lucifer- bilkul ho sakta hai
Main to bas confirm kar raha tha

Kaashvi- akele yaha sehar se etni door kya kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- tumhe dekh kar lagta hai ki tum ek spy ho jo yaha kisi secret mission ko karne aaye ho

Kaashvi- gurukul hai yaha
Main vaha padhti hu
Lucifer- maine to kabhi nahi dekha yaha par

Kaashvi- aate jate rahte ho kya yaha?
Lucifer- yahi se to aaya tha

Kaashvi- matlab?
Lucifer- pehli chhij yahi yaad hai
Esliye yaha aagya sayad kuch aur yaad aajaye

Kaashvi- acha to aap vo ho jo safeed light chhodte hue giri the bahut saal pehle yaha par
Lucifer- tumne dekha tha?

Kaashvi- sabne dekha tha
Humare guruji aur hum aaye bhi the dekhne lekin ek bade gaddhe ke alava kuch nahi dikha

Lucifer- kaha tha vo gaddha?
Kaashvi- humne bhar diya tha
Usme kuch bhi nahi tha
Aisa lag raha tha jaise koe bhari chhije bahut tej raftaar se aakar giri ho aur uski vajah se vo gaddha bana ho

Lucifer- vo bhari chhij main hi tha?
Kaashvi- aap hi to bata rahe ho

Lucifer- kya tum mujhe tumhra gurukul dikha sakte ho?
Kaashvi- nahi main aisa nahi kar sakti

Lucifer- to kya main tumhra gurukul tabhah kar sakta hu?
Kaashvi- nahi aap aisa nahi kar sakte

Lucifer- kya tum sure ho?
Agar main vohi hua jo us din gira aur jiski vajah se etna bada gaddha hua to kya main tumhra gurukul tabhah bhi nahi kar sakta?
Kaashvi- kyu karoge ye mera pehla parsan hai?
Sirf esliye ki main aapko vaha leke nahi gaye?

Lucifer- ye reason bahut bada hai
Ek ladki aise jungle me bina dare akele ghum rahi hai aur mujhe yaha se jane ko bol rahi hai to of course us gurukul me kuch na kuch to abnormal ho raha hoga jo mujhe janana hai
Kaashvi- aisi jagah par hoga to normal to hoga nahi?

Lucifer- pani to peela sakti ho?
Kaashvi- pass me hi ek nadi bah rahi hai

Lucifer- rasta dikha sakti ho?
Agar koe janwar aa gaya to?
Kaashvi- aapko dekh kar lagta nahi hai apko janwaro se dar lag raha hai fir bhi main dikha deti hu kyuki pani manga hai aapne aur hum pani ke liye mana nahi karte

Lucifer- chaliye fir
Lao ye lakdiya main leke chal lu?
Kaashvi- apna bhaar khud uthana chahiye

Lucifer- mujh se bahtar ye kon samjh sakta hai
Kaashvi- ya to aap pagal ho ya jo aap bol rahe ho vo sach hai

Lucifer- tumhe kya lagta hai?
Kaashvi- mujhe to ye lagta hai ki mujhe yaha jada der nahi rukna chahiye

Lucifer- lekin ab to rukna padega
Kaashvi- kyu?

Lucifer- aisi baarish me kaha jaogi?
Kaashvi- kaha barish ho rahi hai?

Lucifer- pani to peene do
Barish apne aap ho jayegi
Kaashvi- etna tej suraj chamak raha haj

Lucifer- fir bhi aaj barish hogi
Dekh lena
Kaashvi- pagal hi ho
Aa gaye nadi
Pee lo pani fir mujhe jana bhi hai

Lucifer- jagah dikhane ke liye sukriya
Bahut khubsurat hai
Kaashvi- jagah dekhne aaye the ya pani peene?

Lucifer bas muskura deta hai aur vo jaise jaise pani ki taraf bhadne laga vaise vaise suraj chhupane laga aur mosam kharab hone laga

Aur jab usne apni hatheli me lekar pani peena suru kiya aasman ne bhi pani bahana suru kar diya aur ye jaise hi pani ki bunde kaashvi par giri vo ek dam shocked ho gaye

Vo kabhi lucifer ko dekhti to kabhi aasman ki taraf dekhti

Kuch hi seconds me pani ki raftaar etni tej hogaye ki lucifer aur kaashvi dono buri tarah bheeg gaye aur lucifer pani pee kar vapas aagya

Lucifer- khadi kyu ho?
Chhupne ki jagah dikha do nahi to tum bimar pad jaogi
Kaashvi bas hath se ishara hi kar paye kyuki muh ne to sath hi chhod diya tha....
Kya baat hai bhai, ek aur aa gyi Kaashvi.
Abhi kitni aayegi Lucifer ki life me
Bahut shandaar update. Waiting for today's update
 
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johnsamuri

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Good updates sirji
Waiting for next
And have to say this taht u have beautifully designed character of Lucifer
And how many ladies names are there cannot remember
Who is heroine is saanvi Or any other
Characters of innaya is very dominting we cannot understand
And asmita we cannot know but she has decent character for now it seems
And why are u leading to all charecter
 

Lone survivor

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Lucifer ne to faad ke rakh di us ladki ki.
Aur Heven me ye ho gya raj aur eda ka plan lgta h kaam kr jayega.
Dekhte h aage kya hota hai.
Nice one Lone survivor bhai.
Ladki ki kaha fati bhai?
Uski etni aasani se nahi fategi
 
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