Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Lone survivor]

Awesome Update Bro
Keep Posting

Thank you bhai

 

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Nice and lovely update....

Thank you bhai

 

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Superb update

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Fantastic update... Ashmita aur Lucifer ki 36 ka akda

Mujhe lagta hai aisa hi rahega humesha

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update bhai ji

Thank you bhai

 

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Waiting for next update.....

Coming

 

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Waiting

Coming

 

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UPDATE-07
Tara- tujhe kya hogya hai aajkal?
Bahut gussa karne lag gaye hai?
Ashmita- mujhe na vo ladka dekh ke pata nahi kya ho jata hai
Main out of control ho jati hu

Tara- lekin usne to aisa kuch kiya bhi nahi?
Ashmita- mujhe nahi pata
Usse dekhte hi mujhe gussa aane lagta hai

Tara- kahi tujhe usse pyaar to nahi hogya? Hahaha
Ashmita- didiiii
Sakal dekhi hai aapne uski?

Tara- ha
Bahut handsome hai
Ashmita- kya didi ek dam gunda lagta hai aur sirf ek dress hai uske pass vo bhi kali
Pata nahi sayad sota bhi sadko par hoga

Tara- to?
Aise logo ko kya koe pyaar nahi kar sakta?
Ashmita- didi kuch chhij to honi chahiye na pyaar karne ke liye
Aur usme aise ek bhi chhij nahi hai
Na baat karne ka tareeka na personality aur na kuch aur

Tara- dekh personality to hai
Ha thoda rude hai lekin handsome bahut bai
Ashmita- thoda nahi bahut rude hai
Aise logo ke pass bhi na jau main

Tara- acha fir tumne yaha kyu aane ko kaha?
Ashmita- kya didi aapko sach me lagta hai vo yaha aaega?
Aur agar aagya to apne pairo par vapas nahi ja payega

Tara- tune dekha nahi college me un do bando ko kaise mara tha usne?
Ashmita- koe sareef honge esliye unhe maar ke hava baji kar raha hoga
Vaise bhi hai to ek gunda hi

Tara- to gunda to yaha bhi aa sakta hai?
Aur gunda to hume nuksaan bhi pahucha sakta hai?
Ashmita- aap kahna kya chahte ho saaf saaf bolo na

Tara- main kuch nahi kahna chahti meri princess
Bas tu khush raha kar
Ashmita- jab tak aap sath ho tab tak main khush hi hu didi

Aise hi ye dono kuch der aur baatein karti hai Fir apne apne kamre me jake so jati hai

Lucifer naag ke adde par chala jata hai

Lucifer- kuch bataya enhone?
Naag- hosh hi nahi aaya

Lucifer- tujhe bola to tha hosh na aaye to jala dena
Naag- bhai main insaan hu hawan nahi

Lucifer- lekin main hawan hu aur vo un dono ko aag laga deta hai
Aag se unko hosh to aajata hai lekin fir bhi lucifer unhe nahi bachata aur marne deta hai

Naag- ye bol to raha tha
Lucifer- ab mood change hogya mera
Kal un dono ladkiyo ke piche aadmi laga dena nahi to kal enki jagah teri body hogi

Naag- bhai aap mujhe bahut darate ho
Lucifer- darna jaruri hai
Eske chalte hi main hu

Uske baad vaha se bhi vapas apne flat par aajata hai

Koe usse dekh ke ye bilkul aasani se bol sakta tha ki aaj ye kuch kaand karke aaya hai vaise to jaise jaise raat hoti thi lucifer dikhne bhi aisa hi lag jata tha aur ab to usse bahut din ho gaye the kuch Kiya bhi

Lucifer flat pahucha aur apne room me jake dhayan lagane lag gaya

Uske dimag se ye baat ja hi nahi rahi thi ki vo ashmita ke bare me kuch dekh nahi paa raha tha esliye usne socha ki ma'am ke bare me janane ki kosis karta hu
Agar kuch pata chal gaya to matlab ashmita jarur special hai aur agar nahi pata chala to matlab lucifer ke sath hi problem hai

Esliye usne aankhen band ki aur dhayan lagane lag gaya

Thodi hi der me madhuri ma'am ki history geography usse dikhne lagi

Madhuri ma'am ek married woman hai lekin unke husband ek highly functioned sociopath hai jo unko bahug torcher karte the aur marte peetate the
Esliye ma'am vaha se bhag aaye aur ab yaha padhane lagi
Unke do bete aur bhi hai jo unke saas sasur ke pass rahti hai aur madhuri ma'am ko vaha jana allowed nahi hai
Ma'am ki family aisi nahi hai ki unko kisi bhi type ki support kar sake kyuki bahut middle class aur sareef log hai
Vo ab ma'am ko hi samjhate hai ki jo ho gaya vo hogya ab ek new life start kare lekin ma'am apne bache vapas chahti hai esliye bich bich me kuch na kuch harkate karti rahti hai aur unki saja bhi bhugati rahti hai

Unki ek beti alia unke sath rahti hai abhi bahut chhoti hai aur bahut shataan bhi hai lekin age se pehle badi hogaye hai aur apni mom ki condition ko samjhne lagi hai
Esliye humesha unhe hasane ki kosis karti rahti hai

More about madhuri ma'am

Ek bahut simple aur culture se related woman hai, jindagi bhar khushiyo ke liye tarsi hai aur shadi ke baad to jo thodi bahut khusiya thi vo bhi khatam hogaye hai

Aur fir dheere dheere lucifer normal hone laga aur fir uski aankhen khulne lagi

Lucifer ko jada kuch feel to nahi hua lekin ek baat samjh me aagaye thi ki kuch to special hai ashmita me jiski vajah se vo uske bare me dekh nahi sakta

Eske baad jada kuch nahi hota aur next day ho jata hai

Aaj vo college nahi jata kyuki naag ke aadmi pehle hi ashmita par najar rakhe hue the esliye uska jana etna important nahi tha

Information to vaise bhi usse mil hi rahi thi

Shayam ko ghumne nikal gaya ye soch ke pure din room par pada pada kare bhi to kya?

Vahi pass me ek park tha vaha pahuch gaya aur abhi ghum hi raha tha ki vapas piche se ek ball aati feel hue aur fir se usne bina dekhe ball pakad li

Mud ke dekha to Alia bhagti hue uske pass aa rahi thi

Alia- aap mere sath kheloge?
Lucifer- mujhe kya milega tumhre sath khelne par?

Alia- main aapko chocolates dungi
Lucifer- lekin mujhe to chocolates pasand hi nahi hai

Alia- chocolates to sab ko pasand hoti hai
Lucifer- mujhe to nahi hai

Tab tak ma'am bhi vaha aagaye
Ma'am- Alia beta chalo bahut time hogya
Alia- mama chachu mere sath khelenge esliye thodi der aur

Lucifer- maine kab kaha ki main khelunga?
Alia- chalo two chocolates ab to kheloge na
Aur fir lucifer ka hath pakad ke usse khechne lagi

Vo mana karna chahta tha kyuki usse bachho se door rahna hi sahi lagta tha lekin abhi mana kar nahi pa raha tha esliye usne umeed bhari najaro se madhuri ma'am ko dekha

Jo ye samjh gaye ki abhi usse kuch kaam hoga ya fir kahi jana hoga ya fir usse lucifer ki baat yaad aa gaye hogi ki bache usse door hi sahi hai esliye usse hi bich me bolna pada

Ma'am- beta chachu ko na ek bahut urgent kaam hai esliye vo aapke sath fir kabhi khelenge
Abhi jane do unhe
Alia- aapko kaise pata?
Main to bas 5 minutes ki bol rahi hu

Ma'am- Alia zid nahi karte
Baad me khel lena
Alia bichari ka muh utar gaya aur bas theek hai hi bola

Lucifer aur ma'am dono ko acha nahi laga lekin dono kuch kar nahi sakte the

Lucifer- next time main chocolate leke aaunga tumhre liye fir khelenge uske gaal sahlate hue lucifer bola

Fir vaha se chala gaya...

 

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UPDATE-07
Tara- tujhe kya hogya hai aajkal?
Bahut gussa karne lag gaye hai?
Ashmita- mujhe na vo ladka dekh ke pata nahi kya ho jata hai
Main out of control ho jati hu

Tara- lekin usne to aisa kuch kiya bhi nahi?
Ashmita- mujhe nahi pata
Usse dekhte hi mujhe gussa aane lagta hai

Tara- kahi tujhe usse pyaar to nahi hogya? Hahaha
Ashmita- didiiii
Sakal dekhi hai aapne uski?

Tara- ha
Bahut handsome hai
Ashmita- kya didi ek dam gunda lagta hai aur sirf ek dress hai uske pass vo bhi kali
Pata nahi sayad sota bhi sadko par hoga

Tara- to?
Aise logo ko kya koe pyaar nahi kar sakta?
Ashmita- didi kuch chhij to honi chahiye na pyaar karne ke liye
Aur usme aise ek bhi chhij nahi hai
Na baat karne ka tareeka na personality aur na kuch aur

Tara- dekh personality to hai
Ha thoda rude hai lekin handsome bahut bai
Ashmita- thoda nahi bahut rude hai
Aise logo ke pass bhi na jau main

Tara- acha fir tumne yaha kyu aane ko kaha?
Ashmita- kya didi aapko sach me lagta hai vo yaha aaega?
Aur agar aagya to apne pairo par vapas nahi ja payega

Tara- tune dekha nahi college me un do bando ko kaise mara tha usne?
Ashmita- koe sareef honge esliye unhe maar ke hava baji kar raha hoga
Vaise bhi hai to ek gunda hi

Tara- to gunda to yaha bhi aa sakta hai?
Aur gunda to hume nuksaan bhi pahucha sakta hai?
Ashmita- aap kahna kya chahte ho saaf saaf bolo na

Tara- main kuch nahi kahna chahti meri princess
Bas tu khush raha kar
Ashmita- jab tak aap sath ho tab tak main khush hi hu didi

Aise hi ye dono kuch der aur baatein karti hai Fir apne apne kamre me jake so jati hai

Lucifer naag ke adde par chala jata hai

Lucifer- kuch bataya enhone?
Naag- hosh hi nahi aaya

Lucifer- tujhe bola to tha hosh na aaye to jala dena
Naag- bhai main insaan hu hawan nahi

Lucifer- lekin main hawan hu aur vo un dono ko aag laga deta hai
Aag se unko hosh to aajata hai lekin fir bhi lucifer unhe nahi bachata aur marne deta hai

Naag- ye bol to raha tha
Lucifer- ab mood change hogya mera
Kal un dono ladkiyo ke piche aadmi laga dena nahi to kal enki jagah teri body hogi

Naag- bhai aap mujhe bahut darate ho
Lucifer- darna jaruri hai
Eske chalte hi main hu

Uske baad vaha se bhi vapas apne flat par aajata hai

Koe usse dekh ke ye bilkul aasani se bol sakta tha ki aaj ye kuch kaand karke aaya hai vaise to jaise jaise raat hoti thi lucifer dikhne bhi aisa hi lag jata tha aur ab to usse bahut din ho gaye the kuch Kiya bhi

Lucifer flat pahucha aur apne room me jake dhayan lagane lag gaya

Uske dimag se ye baat ja hi nahi rahi thi ki vo ashmita ke bare me kuch dekh nahi paa raha tha esliye usne socha ki ma'am ke bare me janane ki kosis karta hu
Agar kuch pata chal gaya to matlab ashmita jarur special hai aur agar nahi pata chala to matlab lucifer ke sath hi problem hai

Esliye usne aankhen band ki aur dhayan lagane lag gaya

Thodi hi der me madhuri ma'am ki history geography usse dikhne lagi

Madhuri ma'am ek married woman hai lekin unke husband ek highly functioned sociopath hai jo unko bahug torcher karte the aur marte peetate the
Esliye ma'am vaha se bhag aaye aur ab yaha padhane lagi
Unke ek beta aur ek beti aur bhi hai jo unke saas sasur ke pass rahti hai aur madhuri ma'am ko vaha jana allowed nahi hai
Ma'am ki family aisi nahi hai ki unko kisi bhi type ki support kar sake kyuki bahut middle class aur sareef log hai
Vo ab ma'am ko hi samjhate hai ki jo ho gaya vo hogya ab ek new life start kare lekin ma'am apne bache vapas chahti hai esliye bich bich me kuch na kuch harkate karti rahti hai aur unki saja bhi bhugati rahti hai

Unki ek beti alia unke sath rahti hai abhi bahut chhoti hai aur bahut shataan bhi hai lekin age se pehle badi hogaye hai aur apni mom ki condition ko samjhne lagi hai
Esliye humesha unhe hasane ki kosis karti rahti hai

More about madhuri ma'am

Ek bahut simple aur culture se related woman hai, jindagi bhar khushiyo ke liye tarsi hai aur shadi ke baad to jo thodi bahut khusiya thi vo bhi khatam hogaye hai

Aur fir dheere dheere lucifer normal hone laga aur fir uski aankhen khulne lagi

Lucifer ko jada kuch feel to nahi hua lekin ek baat samjh me aagaye thi ki kuch to special hai ashmita me jiski vajah se vo uske bare me dekh nahi sakta

Eske baad jada kuch nahi hota aur next day ho jata hai

Aaj vo college nahi jata kyuki naag ke aadmi pehle hi ashmita par najar rakhe hue the esliye uska jana etna important nahi tha

Information to vaise bhi usse mil hi rahi thi

Shayam ko ghumne nikal gaya ye soch ke pure din room par pada pada kare bhi to kya?

Vahi pass me ek park tha vaha pahuch gaya aur abhi ghum hi raha tha ki vapas piche se ek ball aati feel hue aur fir se usne bina dekhe ball pakad li

Mud ke dekha to Alia bhagti hue uske pass aa rahi thi

Alia- aap mere sath kheloge?
Lucifer- mujhe kya milega tumhre sath khelne par?

Alia- main aapko chocolates dungi
Lucifer- lekin mujhe to chocolates pasand hi nahi hai

Alia- chocolates to sab ko pasand hoti hai
Lucifer- mujhe to nahi hai

Tab tak ma'am bhi vaha aagaye
Ma'am- Alia beta chalo bahut time hogya
Alia- mama chachu mere sath khelenge esliye thodi der aur

Lucifer- maine kab kaha ki main khelunga?
Alia- chalo two chocolates ab to kheloge na
Aur fir lucifer ka hath pakad ke usse khechne lagi

Vo mana karna chahta tha kyuki usse bachho se door rahna hi sahi lagta tha lekin abhi mana kar nahi pa raha tha esliye usne umeed bhari najaro se madhuri ma'am ko dekha

Jo ye samjh gaye ki abhi usse kuch kaam hoga ya fir kahi jana hoga ya fir usse lucifer ki baat yaad aa gaye hogi ki bache usse door hi sahi hai esliye usse hi bich me bolna pada

Ma'am- beta chachu ko na ek bahut urgent kaam hai esliye vo aapke sath fir kabhi khelenge
Abhi jane do unhe
Alia- aapko kaise pata?
Main to bas 5 minutes ki bol rahi hu

Ma'am- Alia zid nahi karte
Baad me khel lena
Alia bichari ka muh utar gaya aur bas theek hai hi bola

Lucifer aur ma'am dono ko acha nahi laga lekin dono kuch kar nahi sakte the

Lucifer- next time main chocolate leke aaunga tumhre liye fir khelenge uske gaal sahlate hue lucifer bola

Fir vaha se chala gaya...

Nice update

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

UPDATE-07
Tara- tujhe kya hogya hai aajkal?
Bahut gussa karne lag gaye hai?
Ashmita- mujhe na vo ladka dekh ke pata nahi kya ho jata hai
Main out of control ho jati hu

Tara- lekin usne to aisa kuch kiya bhi nahi?
Ashmita- mujhe nahi pata
Usse dekhte hi mujhe gussa aane lagta hai

Tara- kahi tujhe usse pyaar to nahi hogya? Hahaha
Ashmita- didiiii
Sakal dekhi hai aapne uski?

Tara- ha
Bahut handsome hai
Ashmita- kya didi ek dam gunda lagta hai aur sirf ek dress hai uske pass vo bhi kali
Pata nahi sayad sota bhi sadko par hoga

Tara- to?
Aise logo ko kya koe pyaar nahi kar sakta?
Ashmita- didi kuch chhij to honi chahiye na pyaar karne ke liye
Aur usme aise ek bhi chhij nahi hai
Na baat karne ka tareeka na personality aur na kuch aur

Tara- dekh personality to hai
Ha thoda rude hai lekin handsome bahut bai
Ashmita- thoda nahi bahut rude hai
Aise logo ke pass bhi na jau main

Tara- acha fir tumne yaha kyu aane ko kaha?
Ashmita- kya didi aapko sach me lagta hai vo yaha aaega?
Aur agar aagya to apne pairo par vapas nahi ja payega

Tara- tune dekha nahi college me un do bando ko kaise mara tha usne?
Ashmita- koe sareef honge esliye unhe maar ke hava baji kar raha hoga
Vaise bhi hai to ek gunda hi

Tara- to gunda to yaha bhi aa sakta hai?
Aur gunda to hume nuksaan bhi pahucha sakta hai?
Ashmita- aap kahna kya chahte ho saaf saaf bolo na

Tara- main kuch nahi kahna chahti meri princess
Bas tu khush raha kar
Ashmita- jab tak aap sath ho tab tak main khush hi hu didi

Aise hi ye dono kuch der aur baatein karti hai Fir apne apne kamre me jake so jati hai

Lucifer naag ke adde par chala jata hai

Lucifer- kuch bataya enhone?
Naag- hosh hi nahi aaya

Lucifer- tujhe bola to tha hosh na aaye to jala dena
Naag- bhai main insaan hu hawan nahi

Lucifer- lekin main hawan hu aur vo un dono ko aag laga deta hai
Aag se unko hosh to aajata hai lekin fir bhi lucifer unhe nahi bachata aur marne deta hai

Naag- ye bol to raha tha
Lucifer- ab mood change hogya mera
Kal un dono ladkiyo ke piche aadmi laga dena nahi to kal enki jagah teri body hogi

Naag- bhai aap mujhe bahut darate ho
Lucifer- darna jaruri hai
Eske chalte hi main hu

Uske baad vaha se bhi vapas apne flat par aajata hai

Koe usse dekh ke ye bilkul aasani se bol sakta tha ki aaj ye kuch kaand karke aaya hai vaise to jaise jaise raat hoti thi lucifer dikhne bhi aisa hi lag jata tha aur ab to usse bahut din ho gaye the kuch Kiya bhi

Lucifer flat pahucha aur apne room me jake dhayan lagane lag gaya

Uske dimag se ye baat ja hi nahi rahi thi ki vo ashmita ke bare me kuch dekh nahi paa raha tha esliye usne socha ki ma'am ke bare me janane ki kosis karta hu
Agar kuch pata chal gaya to matlab ashmita jarur special hai aur agar nahi pata chala to matlab lucifer ke sath hi problem hai

Esliye usne aankhen band ki aur dhayan lagane lag gaya

Thodi hi der me madhuri ma'am ki history geography usse dikhne lagi

Madhuri ma'am ek married woman hai lekin unke husband ek highly functioned sociopath hai jo unko bahug torcher karte the aur marte peetate the
Esliye ma'am vaha se bhag aaye aur ab yaha padhane lagi
Unke ek beta aur ek beti aur bhi hai jo unke saas sasur ke pass rahti hai aur madhuri ma'am ko vaha jana allowed nahi hai
Ma'am ki family aisi nahi hai ki unko kisi bhi type ki support kar sake kyuki bahut middle class aur sareef log hai
Vo ab ma'am ko hi samjhate hai ki jo ho gaya vo hogya ab ek new life start kare lekin ma'am apne bache vapas chahti hai esliye bich bich me kuch na kuch harkate karti rahti hai aur unki saja bhi bhugati rahti hai

Unki ek beti alia unke sath rahti hai abhi bahut chhoti hai aur bahut shataan bhi hai lekin age se pehle badi hogaye hai aur apni mom ki condition ko samjhne lagi hai
Esliye humesha unhe hasane ki kosis karti rahti hai

More about madhuri ma'am

Ek bahut simple aur culture se related woman hai, jindagi bhar khushiyo ke liye tarsi hai aur shadi ke baad to jo thodi bahut khusiya thi vo bhi khatam hogaye hai

Aur fir dheere dheere lucifer normal hone laga aur fir uski aankhen khulne lagi

Lucifer ko jada kuch feel to nahi hua lekin ek baat samjh me aagaye thi ki kuch to special hai ashmita me jiski vajah se vo uske bare me dekh nahi sakta

Eske baad jada kuch nahi hota aur next day ho jata hai

Aaj vo college nahi jata kyuki naag ke aadmi pehle hi ashmita par najar rakhe hue the esliye uska jana etna important nahi tha

Information to vaise bhi usse mil hi rahi thi

Shayam ko ghumne nikal gaya ye soch ke pure din room par pada pada kare bhi to kya?

Vahi pass me ek park tha vaha pahuch gaya aur abhi ghum hi raha tha ki vapas piche se ek ball aati feel hue aur fir se usne bina dekhe ball pakad li

Mud ke dekha to Alia bhagti hue uske pass aa rahi thi

Alia- aap mere sath kheloge?
Lucifer- mujhe kya milega tumhre sath khelne par?

Alia- main aapko chocolates dungi
Lucifer- lekin mujhe to chocolates pasand hi nahi hai

Alia- chocolates to sab ko pasand hoti hai
Lucifer- mujhe to nahi hai

Tab tak ma'am bhi vaha aagaye
Ma'am- Alia beta chalo bahut time hogya
Alia- mama chachu mere sath khelenge esliye thodi der aur

Lucifer- maine kab kaha ki main khelunga?
Alia- chalo two chocolates ab to kheloge na
Aur fir lucifer ka hath pakad ke usse khechne lagi

Vo mana karna chahta tha kyuki usse bachho se door rahna hi sahi lagta tha lekin abhi mana kar nahi pa raha tha esliye usne umeed bhari najaro se madhuri ma'am ko dekha

Jo ye samjh gaye ki abhi usse kuch kaam hoga ya fir kahi jana hoga ya fir usse lucifer ki baat yaad aa gaye hogi ki bache usse door hi sahi hai esliye usse hi bich me bolna pada

Ma'am- beta chachu ko na ek bahut urgent kaam hai esliye vo aapke sath fir kabhi khelenge
Abhi jane do unhe
Alia- aapko kaise pata?
Main to bas 5 minutes ki bol rahi hu

Ma'am- Alia zid nahi karte
Baad me khel lena
Alia bichari ka muh utar gaya aur bas theek hai hi bola

Lucifer aur ma'am dono ko acha nahi laga lekin dono kuch kar nahi sakte the

Lucifer- next time main chocolate leke aaunga tumhre liye fir khelenge uske gaal sahlate hue lucifer bola

Fir vaha se chala gaya...

Superb update..bhai