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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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UPDATE-275
“Ahhhhh” ek halki krah nikali lucifer ke muh se kyuki ek giant gande ne uske baye bath me apna bhala ghusa diya tha

Hare rang ka khoon jaise hi jamin par mila mitti ki sundarta me alag hi nikhaar aa gaya vahi lucifer ki aankhon me gussa tairne laga

Abhi jaha vo bahut aasani se kide makodo ko maar raha tha ek dam se hi hathi jaise giants aa gaye aur vo tadaad me etne jada tha ki lucifer aur guruji dono ko hi thoda dard sahn karna pad raha tha

Daye hath se lucifer ne apne baye hath me ghusa bhala bahar nikala aur sidhe us giant ke pet me ghusa diya jisne use mara tha

Guruji- lucifer ye angel knife ka vaar hai etni jaldi nahi bharega tumhe ilaaz ki jarurat hai

Lucifer- aap mera apman kar rahe ho guruji ya khud ka?
Kahte hue usne do aur giant ko beech se faad diya

Khoon abhi bhi uske hatho se bah raha tha jo rukne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha lekin lucifer ko kaha hi uski koe parvaah thi

Guruji- maine kaha tha na chakarvayu me kya hota hai? Dekho hum aage badhte ja rahe hai aur faste ja rahe hai

Lucifer- sare vayu tood dunga aaj main aur ek aur giant ne apna dam tood diya

Guruji aur lucifer jitno ko maar rahe the us se doguni raftaar se aur nikal nikal ke aa rahe the. Aisa lag raha tha ki ye silsila kabhi rukega hi nahi

Jo insaan ye sab dekh rahe the unhe to apni aankhon par yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha. Sab dare sahme apne apne bhagwano se prathana kar rahe the ki es sankat ki ghadi me unki madad kare

Lekin aaj unhe bachane ke liye aur koe aane wala nahi tha.

Guruji- lucifer chehra samne lana hi padega

Lucifer- maine to pehle hi kaha tha guruji
Aur uska chehra badalne laga

Ek muskaan uski chehre par tair rahi thi vahi logo ke chehre par ab dar dekhne ko mil raha tha

Jaise hi lucifer apne devil form me aaya kuch log to sirf uska chehra dekh kar hi behosh ho gaye

Aisa hi kuch haal naag ke farmhouse par tha jaha anisha aur ashmita ko chhod kar baki sab ke pasine chhut gaye the

Kisi ko kuch samjh me nahi aa raha tha ki ye kya ho raha hai aur lucifer actual me hai kaun?

Ek dar ka mahool ban gaya tha charo taraf aur lucifer ki asliyat dunia ke samne aa chuki thi

Jo kaala jaadu nikla lucifer ke sareer se usne ek baar me hi sare giants ka vinaash kar diya lekin ek baat aur thi jis par uska dhayan nahi gaya aur vo thi uske hatho se nikalta hua khoon abhi band nahi hua tha

Lucifer jab bhi apne devil roop me aata tha uske ghaav apne aap bhar jate the bas uski premika uske aas pass na ho. Aaj uske aaspas koe nahi tha fir bhi uske hath ka ghaav vaisa ka vaisa hi tha vo ek percent bhi nahi bhara aur usme se khoon nikala bhi band nahi hua tha

Guruji- lucifer tumhra hath….
Es se pehle guruji kuch aur bol pate vaha hawao me ek awaz gunj gaye

“ HAAAAA AAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHA LUCIFER AAKHIR KAAR TUMHE AANA HI PADA APNE ASLI ROOP ME. MAIN KAB SE ES DIN KA INTEZAAR KAR RAHA THA. AB AAYEGA MAZA JAB MIL BATHENGE HEAVEN KE EK SE JADA ANGELS AUR KARENGE TERA SARVINASH”

Ye batane ki jarurat nahi thi ki ye aawaz kiski thi sab jante the guruji aur lucifer bhi

Guruji- heaven ke angel se kya matlab hai eska?

Lucifer- gaddar. Heaven ke gaddar aayenge ab apni maut ke pass. Abhi to aur paap honge humse guruji. Aapne kabhi kisi angel ko mara nahi hai na? Aaj aapka ye kalank bhi hat jayega

Guruji- supreme aisa hone nahi dega

Lucifer- aap kuch jada hi bharosa karte ho supreme par. Vaise idea hai kuch aapko ki kon kon aayega ya fir main batau?

Guruji- kavish? Vo jinda hai?

Lucifer- kavish to mere lund barabar hai. Lekin yaha ab vo aayega jise heaven me sachae ka saboot mante hai

Guruji- nahi. Aisa nahi ho sakta. Vo nahi, vo heaven ke prati vafadar hai. Vo nahi…. Kya… lucifer??? Nahi nahi nahi haye bhagwan…..

Guruji bahut ache se samjh gaye the ki lucifer kiski baat kar raha hai aur vo ye bilkul nahi chahte the ki ye sach ho lekin vo lucifer ko bhi bahut ache se jante the unhe pata tha agar lucifer ne kaha hai to bahut soch samjh kar kaha hoga aur vohi sach hoga

Lucifer- apne aapko tayar kar lijiye guruji. Bahut buri tarah dil tootne wala hai aapka

Lucifer bola aur unke samnr bahut sare angels ke sath raaj khada ho gaya. Guruji je jab raaj ko apne against khada dekha to ek dard utha unke dil me

Unhone hi en bacho ko bachpan ke sab kuch sikhaya tha aur aaj vohi uske against khade hai. Pehle kavish tha to ab raaj aur aage pata nahi kaun kaun hoga

Guruji es chhij se bahut aahat hue the lekin lucifer ko to jaise andaja ho gaya tha es baat ka bahut pehle hi esliye vo shant khada tha

Guruji- kyu?
Bas etna hi bol paye vo aur unka gala bhar aaya

Lucifer- muhobaat hai hi aisi chhij guruji. Esko lagta hai eda ne esko dhoka diya hai. Bachpan se aaj tak eda ko pane ke na jane kitne prayaash kiye honge esne aur aaj mila kya?

Vaise lucifer ki baaton me sachai bahut thi. Eda ko pane ke liye raaj ne pata nahi kya kya papad bele lekin ant me use mila kya? Ha ye jarur tha ki thode waqt ke liye eda uske sath rahi lekin usne kabhi raaj se nischal muhobat nahi ki. Eda ke dimag aur dil me bas ek hi person samaya hua tha aur vo tha lucifer

Raaj ne use lucifer se door karne ki bahut kosis ki lekin eda ko lucifer se door kar nahi paya fir ek waqt aaya jab usne haar maan li. Fir socha kya fark padta hai eda ke dil me kaun hai? Uske sath to raaj hi hai na

Lekin fir kismat me karvat badli aur eda ne supreme ke khilaf hi hathiyar utha liya aur use vaha se bahut door bejh diya gaya

Raaj ne fir bahut kosis ki eda ko vapas lane ki lekin koe bhi kosis kamyab nahi ho paye aur fir ant me raaj ne apna asli rang dikhana suru kar diya

Pehle to aad me aakar usne kavish ka istemaal karna suru kiya. Vo use bali ka bakra banana chahta tha jo vo bana bhi lekin us se raaj ko haseel kuch nahi hua

Na to heaven me kuch badi position par pahuch paya, na eda vapas aa paye aur na lucifer ko nuksan pahucha paya

Ek ke baad ek uska dil tootata gaya aur ant me vo jakar dark lord ke sath mil gaya. Raaj ye baat bahut ache se janta tha ki vo akela lucifer ka baal bhi nahi ukhad sakta eske liye use bahut powerful insaan ki jarurat thi aur aisa powerful sirf ek tha dark lord

Guruji- raaj abhi bhi waqt hai raste se hato aur vapas chale jao main vada karta hu tumhe koe kuch nahi karega

Raaj- jab tak ye(lucifer) jinda hai eda meri kabhi nahi ho sakti esliye eska marna behad jaruri hai

Lucifer- eda to mere marne ke baad bhi teri nahi hogi
Muskurate hue bola

Raaj- lekin tu mar to jayega hi na. Sukoon milega mujhe

Guruji- main nahi chahta koe angel mere hatho se mare jaye. Chale jao raaj vapas

Raaj- ab nahi ja sakta aur attacking mode me aa gaya aur jab uske kaale pankh bahar aaye tab guruji bhi samjh gaye ki ab unke pass koe rasta nahi bacha

Raaj aur baki sare angels ek sath lucifer aur guruji ki taraf badhe

Jab bhi koe angel dark magic use karne lag jaye to uski takaat 100 guna badh jati thi aur yehi abhi hua. Etne sare angels the sab dark energy ke jaal me fase hue guruji aur lucifer ko charo taraf se gher lete hai

Lucifer- kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai sala apna to aatank hi khatam ho gaya hai. Koe mere against uthane se pehle ek baar sochta hi nahi hai
Lucifer ne bola aur fir apni chamakati talwar utha kar unpar hamla karne laga

Lekin vo sab aasani se lucifer ki speed ko match kar rahe the ya yu kahe ki lucifer ki speed ko kaat rahe the

Jisko vajah se pal pal lucifer ka gussa badhta ja raha tha jo ek acha sanket bilkul bhi nahi tha

Vahi guruji ko halki fulki kharoche aane suru ho gaye thi

Pehle vo jin se lad rahe the vo mamuli rakshah the aur abhi wale angels jo pehle hi takatwar hote hai aur ab to aur jada ho gaye the

Guruji- lucifer bacho….. khaacccchhhh… ek angel lucifer ke pith par war karne wala tha ki guruji chhikhe aur lucifer ne khaachhh ki ek aawaz se use beech me se kaat diya

Kaale khoon ne dharti ki khusburati me ek daag laga diya tha jo abhi bahut gehra hone wala tha

Guruji ne bhi apni dark side dikhani suru kar di kyuki achai se to bahut lamba kheech jane wala tha ye khel

Aur vaha achanak se hi mahol badal gaya, ghane kaale badal chha gaye aur guruji aur lucifer ke charo taraf mandrane lage

Lucifer- yeaaahhhh i can smell death now
Chhilate hue bola aur vo badal sharp roop leke angels ki taraf behad tej raftaar me badhne lage

Unhe katna behad muskil ho gaya tha yaha tak ki teen char angels ko to un badalo ne apni chapet me bhi le liya tha

Ab jab guruji ne attack kiya to lucifer kaise piche hat sakta tha? Usne bhi apne sareer se nikalne wale singho(horns) se hamla suru kiya aur fir kuch angels mare gaye

Abhi tak jo fight lucifer ki taraf se defensive ho rahi thi usne apna ruk badal liya tha

Lucifer aur guruji dono aage badhe lekin unhe beech me hi rukna pada kyuki samne ka najra hi kuch aisa tha

Vo dono kitne bhi bure ho lekin masumo ke liye thodi bahut hamdardi to abhi bhi bachi thi unke ander aur esi hamdardi ne unhe aage badhne se rok diya

Raaj- ab pehle tumhri rooh ko marunga aur fir tumhe
Hahahahaha….
 

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“Ahhhhh” ek halki krah nikali lucifer ke muh se kyuki ek giant gande ne uske baye bath me apna bhala ghusa diya tha

Hare rang ka khoon jaise hi jamin par mila mitti ki sundarta me alag hi nikhaar aa gaya vahi lucifer ki aankhon me gussa tairne laga

Abhi jaha vo bahut aasani se kide makodo ko maar raha tha ek dam se hi hathi jaise giants aa gaye aur vo tadaad me etne jada tha ki lucifer aur guruji dono ko hi thoda dard sahn karna pad raha tha

Daye hath se lucifer ne apne baye hath me ghusa bhala bahar nikala aur sidhe us giant ke pet me ghusa diya jisne use mara tha

Guruji- lucifer ye angel knife ka vaar hai etni jaldi nahi bharega tumhe ilaaz ki jarurat hai

Lucifer- aap mera apman kar rahe ho guruji ya khud ka?
Kahte hue usne do aur giant ko beech se faad diya

Khoon abhi bhi uske hatho se bah raha tha jo rukne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha lekin lucifer ko kaha hi uski koe parvaah thi

Guruji- maine kaha tha na chakarvayu me kya hota hai? Dekho hum aage badhte ja rahe hai aur faste ja rahe hai

Lucifer- sare vayu tood dunga aaj main aur ek aur giant ne apna dam tood diya

Guruji aur lucifer jitno ko maar rahe the us se doguni raftaar se aur nikal nikal ke aa rahe the. Aisa lag raha tha ki ye silsila kabhi rukega hi nahi

Jo insaan ye sab dekh rahe the unhe to apni aankhon par yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha. Sab dare sahme apne apne bhagwano se prathana kar rahe the ki es sankat ki ghadi me unki madad kare

Lekin aaj unhe bachane ke liye aur koe aane wala nahi tha.

Guruji- lucifer chehra samne lana hi padega

Lucifer- maine to pehle hi kaha tha guruji
Aur uska chehra badalne laga

Ek muskaan uski chehre par tair rahi thi vahi logo ke chehre par ab dar dekhne ko mil raha tha

Jaise hi lucifer apne devil form me aaya kuch log to sirf uska chehra dekh kar hi behosh ho gaye

Aisa hi kuch haal naag ke farmhouse par tha jaha anisha aur ashmita ko chhod kar baki sab ke pasine chhut gaye the

Kisi ko kuch samjh me nahi aa raha tha ki ye kya ho raha hai aur lucifer actual me hai kaun?

Ek dar ka mahool ban gaya tha charo taraf aur lucifer ki asliyat dunia ke samne aa chuki thi

Jo kaala jaadu nikla lucifer ke sareer se usne ek baar me hi sare giants ka vinaash kar diya lekin ek baat aur thi jis par uska dhayan nahi gaya aur vo thi uske hatho se nikalta hua khoon abhi band nahi hua tha

Lucifer jab bhi apne devil roop me aata tha uske ghaav apne aap bhar jate the bas uski premika uske aas pass na ho. Aaj uske aaspas koe nahi tha fir bhi uske hath ka ghaav vaisa ka vaisa hi tha vo ek percent bhi nahi bhara aur usme se khoon nikala bhi band nahi hua tha

Guruji- lucifer tumhra hath….
Es se pehle guruji kuch aur bol pate vaha hawao me ek awaz gunj gaye

“ HAAAAA AAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHA LUCIFER AAKHIR KAAR TUMHE AANA HI PADA APNE ASLI ROOP ME. MAIN KAB SE ES DIN KA INTEZAAR KAR RAHA THA. AB AAYEGA MAZA JAB MIL BATHENGE HEAVEN KE EK SE JADA ANGELS AUR KARENGE TERA SARVINASH”

Ye batane ki jarurat nahi thi ki ye aawaz kiski thi sab jante the guruji aur lucifer bhi

Guruji- heaven ke angel se kya matlab hai eska?

Lucifer- gaddar. Heaven ke gaddar aayenge ab apni maut ke pass. Abhi to aur paap honge humse guruji. Aapne kabhi kisi angel ko mara nahi hai na? Aaj aapka ye kalank bhi hat jayega

Guruji- supreme aisa hone nahi dega

Lucifer- aap kuch jada hi bharosa karte ho supreme par. Vaise idea hai kuch aapko ki kon kon aayega ya fir main batau?

Guruji- kavish? Vo jinda hai?

Lucifer- kavish to mere lund barabar hai. Lekin yaha ab vo aayega jise heaven me sachae ka saboot mante hai

Guruji- nahi. Aisa nahi ho sakta. Vo nahi, vo heaven ke prati vafadar hai. Vo nahi…. Kya… lucifer??? Nahi nahi nahi haye bhagwan…..

Guruji bahut ache se samjh gaye the ki lucifer kiski baat kar raha hai aur vo ye bilkul nahi chahte the ki ye sach ho lekin vo lucifer ko bhi bahut ache se jante the unhe pata tha agar lucifer ne kaha hai to bahut soch samjh kar kaha hoga aur vohi sach hoga

Lucifer- apne aapko tayar kar lijiye guruji. Bahut buri tarah dil tootne wala hai aapka

Lucifer bola aur unke samnr bahut sare angels ke sath raaj khada ho gaya. Guruji je jab raaj ko apne against khada dekha to ek dard utha unke dil me

Unhone hi en bacho ko bachpan ke sab kuch sikhaya tha aur aaj vohi uske against khade hai. Pehle kavish tha to ab raaj aur aage pata nahi kaun kaun hoga

Guruji es chhij se bahut aahat hue the lekin lucifer ko to jaise andaja ho gaya tha es baat ka bahut pehle hi esliye vo shant khada tha

Guruji- kyu?
Bas etna hi bol paye vo aur unka gala bhar aaya

Lucifer- muhobaat hai hi aisi chhij guruji. Esko lagta hai eda ne esko dhoka diya hai. Bachpan se aaj tak eda ko pane ke na jane kitne prayaash kiye honge esne aur aaj mila kya?

Vaise lucifer ki baaton me sachai bahut thi. Eda ko pane ke liye raaj ne pata nahi kya kya papad bele lekin ant me use mila kya? Ha ye jarur tha ki thode waqt ke liye eda uske sath rahi lekin usne kabhi raaj se nischal muhobat nahi ki. Eda ke dimag aur dil me bas ek hi person samaya hua tha aur vo tha lucifer

Raaj ne use lucifer se door karne ki bahut kosis ki lekin eda ko lucifer se door kar nahi paya fir ek waqt aaya jab usne haar maan li. Fir socha kya fark padta hai eda ke dil me kaun hai? Uske sath to raaj hi hai na

Lekin fir kismat me karvat badli aur eda ne supreme ke khilaf hi hathiyar utha liya aur use vaha se bahut door bejh diya gaya

Raaj ne fir bahut kosis ki eda ko vapas lane ki lekin koe bhi kosis kamyab nahi ho paye aur fir ant me raaj ne apna asli rang dikhana suru kar diya

Pehle to aad me aakar usne kavish ka istemaal karna suru kiya. Vo use bali ka bakra banana chahta tha jo vo bana bhi lekin us se raaj ko haseel kuch nahi hua

Na to heaven me kuch badi position par pahuch paya, na eda vapas aa paye aur na lucifer ko nuksan pahucha paya

Ek ke baad ek uska dil tootata gaya aur ant me vo jakar dark lord ke sath mil gaya. Raaj ye baat bahut ache se janta tha ki vo akela lucifer ka baal bhi nahi ukhad sakta eske liye use bahut powerful insaan ki jarurat thi aur aisa powerful sirf ek tha dark lord

Guruji- raaj abhi bhi waqt hai raste se hato aur vapas chale jao main vada karta hu tumhe koe kuch nahi karega

Raaj- jab tak ye(lucifer) jinda hai eda meri kabhi nahi ho sakti esliye eska marna behad jaruri hai

Lucifer- eda to mere marne ke baad bhi teri nahi hogi
Muskurate hue bola

Raaj- lekin tu mar to jayega hi na. Sukoon milega mujhe

Guruji- main nahi chahta koe angel mere hatho se mare jaye. Chale jao raaj vapas

Raaj- ab nahi ja sakta aur attacking mode me aa gaya aur jab uske kaale pankh bahar aaye tab guruji bhi samjh gaye ki ab unke pass koe rasta nahi bacha

Raaj aur baki sare angels ek sath lucifer aur guruji ki taraf badhe

Jab bhi koe angel dark magic use karne lag jaye to uski takaat 100 guna badh jati thi aur yehi abhi hua. Etne sare angels the sab dark energy ke jaal me fase hue guruji aur lucifer ko charo taraf se gher lete hai

Lucifer- kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai sala apna to aatank hi khatam ho gaya hai. Koe mere against uthane se pehle ek baar sochta hi nahi hai
Lucifer ne bola aur fir apni chamakati talwar utha kar unpar hamla karne laga

Lekin vo sab aasani se lucifer ki speed ko match kar rahe the ya yu kahe ki lucifer ki speed ko kaat rahe the

Jisko vajah se pal pal lucifer ka gussa badhta ja raha tha jo ek acha sanket bilkul bhi nahi tha

Vahi guruji ko halki fulki kharoche aane suru ho gaye thi

Pehle vo jin se lad rahe the vo mamuli rakshah the aur abhi wale angels jo pehle hi takatwar hote hai aur ab to aur jada ho gaye the

Guruji- lucifer bacho….. khaacccchhhh… ek angel lucifer ke pith par war karne wala tha ki guruji chhikhe aur lucifer ne khaachhh ki ek aawaz se use beech me se kaat diya

Kaale khoon ne dharti ki khusburati me ek daag laga diya tha jo abhi bahut gehra hone wala tha

Guruji ne bhi apni dark side dikhani suru kar di kyuki achai se to bahut lamba kheech jane wala tha ye khel

Aur vaha achanak se hi mahol badal gaya, ghane kaale badal chha gaye aur guruji aur lucifer ke charo taraf mandrane lage

Lucifer- yeaaahhhh i can smell death now
Chhilate hue bola aur vo badal sharp roop leke angels ki taraf behad tej raftaar me badhne lage

Unhe katna behad muskil ho gaya tha yaha tak ki teen char angels ko to un badalo ne apni chapet me bhi le liya tha

Ab jab guruji ne attack kiya to lucifer kaise piche hat sakta tha? Usne bhi apne sareer se nikalne wale singho(horns) se hamla suru kiya aur fir kuch angels mare gaye

Abhi tak jo fight lucifer ki taraf se defensive ho rahi thi usne apna ruk badal liya tha

Lucifer aur guruji dono aage badhe lekin unhe beech me hi rukna pada kyuki samne ka najra hi kuch aisa tha

Vo dono kitne bhi bure ho lekin masumo ke liye thodi bahut hamdardi to abhi bhi bachi thi unke ander aur esi hamdardi ne unhe aage badhne se rok diya

Raaj- ab pehle tumhri rooh ko marunga aur fir tumhe
Hahahahaha….
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UPDATE-275
“Ahhhhh” ek halki krah nikali lucifer ke muh se kyuki ek giant gande ne uske baye bath me apna bhala ghusa diya tha

Hare rang ka khoon jaise hi jamin par mila mitti ki sundarta me alag hi nikhaar aa gaya vahi lucifer ki aankhon me gussa tairne laga

Abhi jaha vo bahut aasani se kide makodo ko maar raha tha ek dam se hi hathi jaise giants aa gaye aur vo tadaad me etne jada tha ki lucifer aur guruji dono ko hi thoda dard sahn karna pad raha tha

Daye hath se lucifer ne apne baye hath me ghusa bhala bahar nikala aur sidhe us giant ke pet me ghusa diya jisne use mara tha

Guruji- lucifer ye angel knife ka vaar hai etni jaldi nahi bharega tumhe ilaaz ki jarurat hai

Lucifer- aap mera apman kar rahe ho guruji ya khud ka?
Kahte hue usne do aur giant ko beech se faad diya

Khoon abhi bhi uske hatho se bah raha tha jo rukne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha lekin lucifer ko kaha hi uski koe parvaah thi

Guruji- maine kaha tha na chakarvayu me kya hota hai? Dekho hum aage badhte ja rahe hai aur faste ja rahe hai

Lucifer- sare vayu tood dunga aaj main aur ek aur giant ne apna dam tood diya

Guruji aur lucifer jitno ko maar rahe the us se doguni raftaar se aur nikal nikal ke aa rahe the. Aisa lag raha tha ki ye silsila kabhi rukega hi nahi

Jo insaan ye sab dekh rahe the unhe to apni aankhon par yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha. Sab dare sahme apne apne bhagwano se prathana kar rahe the ki es sankat ki ghadi me unki madad kare

Lekin aaj unhe bachane ke liye aur koe aane wala nahi tha.

Guruji- lucifer chehra samne lana hi padega

Lucifer- maine to pehle hi kaha tha guruji
Aur uska chehra badalne laga

Ek muskaan uski chehre par tair rahi thi vahi logo ke chehre par ab dar dekhne ko mil raha tha

Jaise hi lucifer apne devil form me aaya kuch log to sirf uska chehra dekh kar hi behosh ho gaye

Aisa hi kuch haal naag ke farmhouse par tha jaha anisha aur ashmita ko chhod kar baki sab ke pasine chhut gaye the

Kisi ko kuch samjh me nahi aa raha tha ki ye kya ho raha hai aur lucifer actual me hai kaun?

Ek dar ka mahool ban gaya tha charo taraf aur lucifer ki asliyat dunia ke samne aa chuki thi

Jo kaala jaadu nikla lucifer ke sareer se usne ek baar me hi sare giants ka vinaash kar diya lekin ek baat aur thi jis par uska dhayan nahi gaya aur vo thi uske hatho se nikalta hua khoon abhi band nahi hua tha

Lucifer jab bhi apne devil roop me aata tha uske ghaav apne aap bhar jate the bas uski premika uske aas pass na ho. Aaj uske aaspas koe nahi tha fir bhi uske hath ka ghaav vaisa ka vaisa hi tha vo ek percent bhi nahi bhara aur usme se khoon nikala bhi band nahi hua tha

Guruji- lucifer tumhra hath….
Es se pehle guruji kuch aur bol pate vaha hawao me ek awaz gunj gaye

“ HAAAAA AAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHAHA LUCIFER AAKHIR KAAR TUMHE AANA HI PADA APNE ASLI ROOP ME. MAIN KAB SE ES DIN KA INTEZAAR KAR RAHA THA. AB AAYEGA MAZA JAB MIL BATHENGE HEAVEN KE EK SE JADA ANGELS AUR KARENGE TERA SARVINASH”

Ye batane ki jarurat nahi thi ki ye aawaz kiski thi sab jante the guruji aur lucifer bhi

Guruji- heaven ke angel se kya matlab hai eska?

Lucifer- gaddar. Heaven ke gaddar aayenge ab apni maut ke pass. Abhi to aur paap honge humse guruji. Aapne kabhi kisi angel ko mara nahi hai na? Aaj aapka ye kalank bhi hat jayega

Guruji- supreme aisa hone nahi dega

Lucifer- aap kuch jada hi bharosa karte ho supreme par. Vaise idea hai kuch aapko ki kon kon aayega ya fir main batau?

Guruji- kavish? Vo jinda hai?

Lucifer- kavish to mere lund barabar hai. Lekin yaha ab vo aayega jise heaven me sachae ka saboot mante hai

Guruji- nahi. Aisa nahi ho sakta. Vo nahi, vo heaven ke prati vafadar hai. Vo nahi…. Kya… lucifer??? Nahi nahi nahi haye bhagwan…..

Guruji bahut ache se samjh gaye the ki lucifer kiski baat kar raha hai aur vo ye bilkul nahi chahte the ki ye sach ho lekin vo lucifer ko bhi bahut ache se jante the unhe pata tha agar lucifer ne kaha hai to bahut soch samjh kar kaha hoga aur vohi sach hoga

Lucifer- apne aapko tayar kar lijiye guruji. Bahut buri tarah dil tootne wala hai aapka

Lucifer bola aur unke samnr bahut sare angels ke sath raaj khada ho gaya. Guruji je jab raaj ko apne against khada dekha to ek dard utha unke dil me

Unhone hi en bacho ko bachpan ke sab kuch sikhaya tha aur aaj vohi uske against khade hai. Pehle kavish tha to ab raaj aur aage pata nahi kaun kaun hoga

Guruji es chhij se bahut aahat hue the lekin lucifer ko to jaise andaja ho gaya tha es baat ka bahut pehle hi esliye vo shant khada tha

Guruji- kyu?
Bas etna hi bol paye vo aur unka gala bhar aaya

Lucifer- muhobaat hai hi aisi chhij guruji. Esko lagta hai eda ne esko dhoka diya hai. Bachpan se aaj tak eda ko pane ke na jane kitne prayaash kiye honge esne aur aaj mila kya?

Vaise lucifer ki baaton me sachai bahut thi. Eda ko pane ke liye raaj ne pata nahi kya kya papad bele lekin ant me use mila kya? Ha ye jarur tha ki thode waqt ke liye eda uske sath rahi lekin usne kabhi raaj se nischal muhobat nahi ki. Eda ke dimag aur dil me bas ek hi person samaya hua tha aur vo tha lucifer

Raaj ne use lucifer se door karne ki bahut kosis ki lekin eda ko lucifer se door kar nahi paya fir ek waqt aaya jab usne haar maan li. Fir socha kya fark padta hai eda ke dil me kaun hai? Uske sath to raaj hi hai na

Lekin fir kismat me karvat badli aur eda ne supreme ke khilaf hi hathiyar utha liya aur use vaha se bahut door bejh diya gaya

Raaj ne fir bahut kosis ki eda ko vapas lane ki lekin koe bhi kosis kamyab nahi ho paye aur fir ant me raaj ne apna asli rang dikhana suru kar diya

Pehle to aad me aakar usne kavish ka istemaal karna suru kiya. Vo use bali ka bakra banana chahta tha jo vo bana bhi lekin us se raaj ko haseel kuch nahi hua

Na to heaven me kuch badi position par pahuch paya, na eda vapas aa paye aur na lucifer ko nuksan pahucha paya

Ek ke baad ek uska dil tootata gaya aur ant me vo jakar dark lord ke sath mil gaya. Raaj ye baat bahut ache se janta tha ki vo akela lucifer ka baal bhi nahi ukhad sakta eske liye use bahut powerful insaan ki jarurat thi aur aisa powerful sirf ek tha dark lord

Guruji- raaj abhi bhi waqt hai raste se hato aur vapas chale jao main vada karta hu tumhe koe kuch nahi karega

Raaj- jab tak ye(lucifer) jinda hai eda meri kabhi nahi ho sakti esliye eska marna behad jaruri hai

Lucifer- eda to mere marne ke baad bhi teri nahi hogi
Muskurate hue bola

Raaj- lekin tu mar to jayega hi na. Sukoon milega mujhe

Guruji- main nahi chahta koe angel mere hatho se mare jaye. Chale jao raaj vapas

Raaj- ab nahi ja sakta aur attacking mode me aa gaya aur jab uske kaale pankh bahar aaye tab guruji bhi samjh gaye ki ab unke pass koe rasta nahi bacha

Raaj aur baki sare angels ek sath lucifer aur guruji ki taraf badhe

Jab bhi koe angel dark magic use karne lag jaye to uski takaat 100 guna badh jati thi aur yehi abhi hua. Etne sare angels the sab dark energy ke jaal me fase hue guruji aur lucifer ko charo taraf se gher lete hai

Lucifer- kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai sala apna to aatank hi khatam ho gaya hai. Koe mere against uthane se pehle ek baar sochta hi nahi hai
Lucifer ne bola aur fir apni chamakati talwar utha kar unpar hamla karne laga

Lekin vo sab aasani se lucifer ki speed ko match kar rahe the ya yu kahe ki lucifer ki speed ko kaat rahe the

Jisko vajah se pal pal lucifer ka gussa badhta ja raha tha jo ek acha sanket bilkul bhi nahi tha

Vahi guruji ko halki fulki kharoche aane suru ho gaye thi

Pehle vo jin se lad rahe the vo mamuli rakshah the aur abhi wale angels jo pehle hi takatwar hote hai aur ab to aur jada ho gaye the

Guruji- lucifer bacho….. khaacccchhhh… ek angel lucifer ke pith par war karne wala tha ki guruji chhikhe aur lucifer ne khaachhh ki ek aawaz se use beech me se kaat diya

Kaale khoon ne dharti ki khusburati me ek daag laga diya tha jo abhi bahut gehra hone wala tha

Guruji ne bhi apni dark side dikhani suru kar di kyuki achai se to bahut lamba kheech jane wala tha ye khel

Aur vaha achanak se hi mahol badal gaya, ghane kaale badal chha gaye aur guruji aur lucifer ke charo taraf mandrane lage

Lucifer- yeaaahhhh i can smell death now
Chhilate hue bola aur vo badal sharp roop leke angels ki taraf behad tej raftaar me badhne lage

Unhe katna behad muskil ho gaya tha yaha tak ki teen char angels ko to un badalo ne apni chapet me bhi le liya tha

Ab jab guruji ne attack kiya to lucifer kaise piche hat sakta tha? Usne bhi apne sareer se nikalne wale singho(horns) se hamla suru kiya aur fir kuch angels mare gaye

Abhi tak jo fight lucifer ki taraf se defensive ho rahi thi usne apna ruk badal liya tha

Lucifer aur guruji dono aage badhe lekin unhe beech me hi rukna pada kyuki samne ka najra hi kuch aisa tha

Vo dono kitne bhi bure ho lekin masumo ke liye thodi bahut hamdardi to abhi bhi bachi thi unke ander aur esi hamdardi ne unhe aage badhne se rok diya

Raaj- ab pehle tumhri rooh ko marunga aur fir tumhe
Hahahahaha….
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....
 
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Lucifer ashmita ke bed par pada hua use irritate kar raha tha ki

“Nearby threat” ki ek notification uske dimag me baji
Notification? Bhai message kiya Mobile pe aya tha? Kiuki aap ne kabhi or koi software ke bare me nehi bataya he to Notification kis chijka?
Jo lucifer etne der se sirf aur sirf bakchodiya kar raha tha uska chehre jhatke ke sath dead serious ho gaya aur ye baat ashmita se bhi chhupi nahi thi

Vo lucifer ko chhup karane ke liye uski taraf hi dekh rahi thi aur jab use dekha ki lucifer ke chehre ka haav bhaav ek dam se change ho gaya hai to vo turant lucifer ke pass pahuch gaye

Ashmita- lucifer? Kya ho gaya? Sab theek hai? Chehra kyu murjha gaya tera?
Bina lucifer ko bolne ka time diye usne ek ke baad ek sawal lucifer par taan diye

Lucifer- bolne degi to kuch bol paunga na?

Ashmita- ha to bol maine kab roka hai? Jab dekho sadu bana batha rahta hai
Nakhre ke sath ashu boli

Ashmita- ab bolta kyu nahi hai? Bolne de to rahi hu?

Lucifer- ajeeb pagal aurat hai ye yaar

Lucifer- main ye soch raha tha ki jab main tujhe ladki se aurat banaunga tab tu sarmayegi kaise? I mean sarmane jaisa kuch to tujhe aata hi nahi hoga na? Fir tu sarmaegi kaise?

Ashmita- shut up aur sach sach bata

Lucifer- esme sach juth kaha se aa gaya? Tu hi bata kaise sarmayegi tu? Aata hai tujhe? Bas ladva lo tujhse ya fir peet lo mujhe. Yehi sab to aata hai tujhe aur aata hi kya hai?

Ashmita- ab tu kuch mat bol mujhe kaam karne de

Lucifer- ha ha tu kar kaam mujhr bahut kaam hai ja raha hu main
Aur lucifer jane ke liye vaha se khada ho gaya

Ashmita- kahi jane ki jarurat nahi hai. Chhup chhap pada rah yaha

Lucifer- fir bolegi mujhe irritate kar raha hai kaam nahi karne de raha hai. Ab jab ja raha hu to tujhe us se bhi problem hai?

Ashmita- bol mat bas kuch bhi

Lucifer- muh band kar de na mera. Tabhi ruk paunga main

Ashmita- main hi karungi tera muh band tension mat le bilkul bhi

Lucifer- ye to mujhe pata hai. Acha mujhe kaam hai main ja raha hu

Ashmita- jake dikha teri tange na tood du main
Aur lucifer ke samne apni kamar par hath rakh kar khadi ho gaye

Lucifer- oye insaan ko kaam nahi hote kya? Jaruri kaam hai abhi aata hu karke

Ashmita- jab tak tu sach nahi batayega tab tak to tujhe bilkul bhi jane nahi dungi main tujhe. Ab sab tere pe depend hai tu kya karta hai

Lucifer- konsa sach? Sab to pata hai tujhe

Ashmita- abhi jo tera muh tatti jaisa hua tha uska reason kya hai ye bata aur agar juth bola to soch lena lucifer tu

Lucifer- mera chehra hi aisa hai esme main kya kar sakta hu? Aur tujh jaisi chudel se juth bol kar kya mil jayega mujhe?

Ashmita- ab dosti tujhse ki hai to angel to banungi nahi chudel ban kar hi jee sakti hu na?

Lucifer- angel banana bhi mat. Baki sab to dekh lenge lekin angel mat banana

Ashmita- topic change mat kar. Kya hua hai ye bata.

Lucifer- aa raha hu raat ko vapas tere sath sone. Fir dunga tere har sawalo ke jawab sath me lungi teri madmast jawani ke majje

Ashmita- faltu ki baatein kara lo bas

Lucifer- ok bye
Aur lucifer light ki raftaar se vaha se gayab hua. Ashmita ko to pata bhi nahi chala ki lucifer kab utha aur kab chala gaya. Vo hairaani bhari aankhen fade bas dekhti rah gaye
Oh I love that part always Lucifer or Ashmita ka conversations mujhe sabse jiyada pasand atahe or yea to sarbopare satiya he ke koi v purus kisi v nari se tark me jit nehi sakta 🤣
Lucifer vaha se nikla aur jaldi se apni senses use karte hue target ki taraf badhne laga

Smell etni strong thi ki lucifer ko uska picha karne me bilkul bhi pareshani nahi ho rahi thi. Sayad samne wala chahta bhi yehi tha ki lucifer uske pass pahuche

Lekin abhi dimag ki jagah dil kaam me le raha tha lucifer aur esliye hi to bina kuch soche samjhe bas chale ja raha tha

Ek baar bhi usne ye nahi socha ki ye ek trap bhi to ho sakta hai? Sayad apne aap har had se jada yakeen tha use aur ye bhi ki koe use trap ke fasa nahi sakta

Sala chahe angel ho devil ya human ego sabki ek jaisi hi hoti hai. Jaisi abhi lucifer ki hai. Maana tum bahut shaktishali ho aur tum kisi se nahi darte lekin lucifer ko apne dusmano ko kamjor nahi samjhna chahiye tha

Vo us disha me aage badh hi raha tha ki door kahi dhadaam dhadaam dhadaam dhadaam ek ke baad ek char bahut bhayanak dhamake hue

Vo dhamake lucifer se to kafi door hue the lekin fir bhi etne powerful the ki lucifer jaha khada tha vaha tak ki jamin kaamp gaye the

Protection shield jo lucifer ne apno ko bachane ke liye banaye thi vo bina lucifer ke bole active ho gaye aur lucifer bhagte hue logo se door ek ghar ke pass chala gaya jaha koe nahi tha aur vaha se ud gaya

Pahucha to samne ka darashay dil dhahla dene wala tha. Laasho ka to jaise antim sanskaar bhi ho gaya tha vahi jo jinda bache the unki halaat dekh kar lucifer jaisa cold hearted ki bhi aankhen bhar aaye thi

Apne dil ko majbut banaya usne aur logo ke sath injured ki madad karne laga. Ambulance ke sath sath fire brigade aur police aur investigation departman ke bade bade adhikari bhi is ghanta ki vajah se vaha pahuchne lag gaye the

Har kisi ko yehi lag raha tha ki ye terrorist attack hai aur pure sehar me red alert ghosit kar diya

Logo ko ghar se bahar nikalne tak ki permission band kar di thi

Ye ek dasak ka sabse ghataak attack tha jisne sakdo ki shankhya me log maare ja chuke the aur vo tadaad badti hi ja rahi th

Abhi vo apne thought process ko pura bhi nahi kar paya tha ki uske kaano me firse dhamako ki aawaz sunae dene lagi jo pichle wale dhamake se bahut adhik tej thi aur ab uske piche se aawaz aa rahi thi

Door use aasman me kaale duo ke badal bante dikhe. Vo dua hi etni jada thi ki aisa lag raha tha jaise pure sehar ne andere ki chadar od li hai

Lucifer beech me khada ka khada rah gaya tha. Na vo apne samne paide logo ki sahayata kar pa raha tha aur na vo dusri jagah ja raha tha

Aise lag raha tha jaise uske pair vahi jameen par chipak kar rah gaye ho. Chehre par to koe bhaav nahi dikh raha tha lekin aankhon me dard ka salaab kabhi bhi bah sakta tha

Vo etna jada apne aap me kho gaya tha ki use abhi tak ye andaja bhi nahi hua tha ki pichle ek ghante se uska mobile continuous baj raha tha. Uski taraf to lucifer ka dhayan hi nahi gaya tha

“Ohh bhai vaha khada khada kya kar raha hai? Yaha madad nahi kar sakta?” Lucifer ke piche se ek aawaz aaye jisne use apni nind se jagaya

Ek ladka jo 20-22 saal ko hoga pura khoon me sana logo ko ambulance me bharne ki kosis kar raha tha. Uske sareer par laga khoon uska nahi tha vo to un sareer se nikal raha tha jinhe vo utha raha tha

Lucifer ne jab usko dekha to turant sare khayalo ko chhod uski taraf badh gaya aur uski madad karne laga

Uske kaano se logo ki chhikhane chhilane ki aawaz gunjana band hi nahi ho rahi thi. Jo use pagal kar rahi thi agar jaldi hi lucifer ko kisi ne sambhala nahi to vo puri taraf out of control ho jayega aur tabhai kya hoti hai vo to uske baad dikhegi

Thodi hi der me amulance ki ghadiya bhar bhar kar vaha se jane lagi aur dusri aane lagi. Jo log es dhamake se bach gaye the vo bhi bina kisi rule regulation ki parvaah kiye insaaniyat ki khateer ek dusro ki madad karne me lage hue the

“Bhaaaiii” ek aur jani pahchani aawaz lucifer ke kaano me pahuchi

Naag- main kabse aapko phone kar raha hu. Ashmita maam aur inaaya maam ke bhi etne phone aa chuke hai. Ek jawab to dena chahiye na ki aap theek ho?
Naag ghabrate hue lucifer se bola. Chinta aur dar uske chehre se saaf dikhaye de raha tha

Lekin lucifer ke muh se kuch nahi nikla. Usne ek najar naag par dali. Use sahi salamat dekh kar uske kando par ek halki si thapki maari aur vapas logo ki madad karne laga

Naag ne bhi lucifer ke mano dasa ache se samjhi aur aage kuch nahi bola. Bas call karke sabko bata diya ki lucifer theek hai aur fir vo bhi madad karne me lag gaya…
Bhai kuchh swal he ek to blast ke turant bad Ambulance, fire engin kese pohoch gai kiya wo standby pe the? Mera dusra sawal Naag ne Lucifer ko dhunda kese? Tisra sawal Bomb blast se lucifer ka kiya connection he? Or ek sawal Lucifer kabse itana kamjor hogaya ke kuchh lase dekh ke dil bhar aya? Jitna v aap ne Lucifer ke bareme bataya he us hisab se to Lucifer ne is bomb blast me mare log se 100 guna log mar chuka he chahe wo koi v ho. Ek alag hi Lucifer ko dekh raha hu me.
Aur ab hum aa chuke hai es story ke last chapter ki taraf. I know pichle kuch time se update time par nahi aa paye and i am not giving any excuses just want to say sorry. From now onwards update regular aayenge and within a week or two hum es story ko khatam kar denge and will start a new journey. Agar aapko lagta hai kuch sawalo ke jawab nahi mile hai to aap abhi comments karke puch sakte ho because in the end kuch na kuch to rah hi jata hai and most of you knows how good i am in writing the climax🤦. Anyways thank you so much for all the love and support. I am always grateful🙏🙏
Bhai aaise na bolo grateful to hum he jo aap jesa writer mila he aap ne ek se badhkar ek story dihe hame so thank to you and we all are enjoyed so so much or agle story ke liye all the best.

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