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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

Lone survivor

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School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

parkas

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Dark lord- to ye thi aapki chaal ha? Mujhe time loop me fasa kar ghuma do aur apni dunia ko bacha lo? Lekin aap ek baat bhul rahe ho guruji

Guruji- aur vo kya hai?

Dark lord- main dark lord ban chuka hu, kaali shaktiya mere ander vaas hi nahi karti vo mere ander se janam leti hai esliye time loop bhi mujhe jada der tak nahi rok sakti

Guruji- aisa hai to kadam badhao apne aur apne aapko sacha sabit karo

Dark lord- sabdo ke her fer se koe fayda nahi hone wala. Main apke time loop ko tood sakta hu lekin todunga nahi. Aapko bhi to pata hona chahiye ki ab dark lord kya ban chuka hai, vo ab aapko bina chuhe hi hara sakta hai

Dark lord apni jagah se thoda piche hue aur aankhen band karke mantra padhne lage

Ek jhatke me pura mahool hi change ho gaya, asmaan me bilkul kaale badaal aa gaye, pure jungle upside down hone laga, aur bahut tej tej hawaye chalne lagi

Guruji ko apne pairo ko ek jagah rakhne me hi muskil feel hone lagi, apni talwar ko jamin me gaad kar vo uske sahare khade rakhne ki kosis karne lage

Jo unhone time loop ka ghera banya tha vo bhi totne laga aur dark lord dharti se thoda upar hawa me apni shaktiyo ko jodne laga

Guruji ne bhi situation ki najakat ko samjha aur hawao ke bahaav ko vapas dark lord ki taraf modne ka prayataran karne lage

Jisme vo kamyaab nahi ho pa rahe the kyuki yaha achai nahi thi, jo yaha mojud tha vo sab kaala hi tha jispar guruji chah kar bhi kuch kar nahi paa rahe the

Dheere dheere guruji ke samne wali jamin ukhadne lagi aur vaha ek bahut bada gadha ban gaya.

Es se pehle ki guruji usne samate vo bhi hawao me udne lage aur full speed me talwar ko dark lord ki taraf karte hue uski taraf badhne lage

His tarah thodi der pehle dark lord guruji ke pass ruk gaye the theek vaise hi guruji bhi uske pass ruk gaye bas fark etna tha ki dark lord apni marji se ruka tha vahi guruji ko kaali shaktiya rook rahi thi

Ek bahut bada kaala bavandar dark lord ke charo taraf fail gaya jisne guruji ko uske pass aane se rok diya tha

Bahut tej garmi aur hava se guruji ke kapde fatne lag gaye aur unhe majburi me apni jagah chhodni padi aur vo dark lord se piche hat gaye

“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA” ek khaufnaak hasi pure jungle me failne lagi jo badhti hi ja rahi thi kyuki ek ke baad ek ek ke baad ek dark lord ke clown bante chale gaye

Ab beech me guruji khade the aur unke charo taraf sirf dark lord hi dikh rahe the upar se mosasm aisa ho gaya tha ki sab kuch ujhaad dega

Charo taraf se ek sath guruji par hamla hone laga aur guruji bahut aasani se sabko maat dene lage

Lekin ye kya? Unpar to kuch asar hi nahi ho raha tha. Guruji ek ko marta to uski jagah dusra janam le leta dusre ko marta to tisra janam le leta

Bahut jaldi hi guruji samjh gaye gaye ki vo apne bharam se lad rahe hai aur vaha koe nahi hai. Ek kadam piche hote hue apni ungli ko halka sa talwar se kata aur khoon ki boond par ek mantra padha aur pure jungle me roshini fail gaye

Etne tej roshini hue ki sare ke sare clown gayab ho gaye aur dark lord jo aankhen band karke apna mayajal bicha raha tha uska bhi dhyan toot gaya aur sidha jamin par aakar geera

Dark lord- ahh ye aapke khoon ki mahak mujhe pagal bana rahi hai. Esko rok lijiye guruji kahi aisa na ho ki aapke sareer ki ek ek boond main pee jao aur apke sareer me sirf paani hi bach jaye

Katch katch katch karke aawaz aane lagi aur guruji ki talwar se andha dhun roshini nikalne lagi jo bahut teji se dark lord ke upar barasne lagi

Vo kali shaktiyo ka maalik roshini se kaise lad sakta tha? Khud hi aankhen khol kar vo roshini dekh bhi nahi pa raha tha unse bachna to bahut door ki baat thi

Usne ek hath upar karke guruji ka gala pakadne ki kosis ki door se hi lekin guruji se usko bhi kaat diya aur ab dheere dheere uski taraf badhne bhi lag gaya tha

Dark lord ne himmat juta kar apni pith dikha di guruji ko aur piche mud kar demons knife chalaye alag alag dishao me jo aakhiri me lage sidhe guruji ko hi

Guruji dark lord par etne jada focused the ki unhe dekha hi nahi ki usne kya kiya hai

Jaise hi demons knife guruji ko lage unka dhayan bhatka aur dark lord ne mokke ka fayda utha kar apne aapko gayab kar liya

Guruji ko pata tha dark lord ek kapti insaan hai aur vo etni jaldi madaan chhod kar to bilkul bhi nahi bhagega esliye hi guruji ne charo taraf roshini faila di

Eske do karan the ek to ye ki dark lord nahi aa payega dusra karaan tha es illusion se bahar nikalna

Apni angelic power ka use guruji kaali shaktiyo ko dabane ke liye kar rahe the aur unki ye chal kamyaab bhi ho rahi thi

Kyuki junge ka ek sira unhe dikhae dene lag gaya jise deke kar ek baar fir guruji ka dhayan bhatak gaya. Vo khud vaha se bina kisi nirnay nikale nahi jana chahte the

Agar vo aise hi yaha se chale gaye aur baad me dark lord ne kisi public place par hamla kar diya to bahut musibaat ho sakti thi

Es se pehle guruji koe mantra padhte unke samne rakshaho ki fauz dikhae dene lagi jo ek powerful gharane ke rakshah the lekin unse ladna guruji ke liye koe badi baat nahi thi

Aur es baar sayam rakhte hue ek baar me hi guruji ne sabko jala kar raakh kar diya

Apni shaktiyo ka istemaal karte hue unhe aag jalaye aur ek line bana di. Jo jo us line ko cross karte aag me sama jate

Abhi sare rakshah us aag ki bheet chade lekin fir vo aag apne aap hi shant ho gaye. Guruji ko gyaan ho gaya tha ki dark lord abhi bhi vahi hai bas dikhae nahi de raha

Esliye antaratma se guruji ne dark lord ko doond nikala aur use bahar nikalne par vivas kar diya

Ek baar fir dono aapne samne the lekin halaat change ho chuki thi

Dark lord ke samne aate hi usne guruji par betahasa hamle karne suru kar diye jiska jawab guruji de nahi paye aur vo gayal hone lage

Pehle se hi demon knife ki vajah se uske sareer par chhot aa gaye thi aur ab dark lord ki kaali shaktiya unke sareer ke sath khilvaad karne lagi

Dark lord jo thodi der pehle apna aadha bhi use nahi kar raha tha ab puri takaat ke sath guruji ke samne aa chuka tha

Guruji koe hamla karne ke liye tayar hote us se pehle hi dark lord ke war unke sareer par lag jate aur unka dhayan bhang ho jata

Unke aas pass kaale saaye mandarane lage aur unhe ghutan feel hone lagi

Dark lord- meri hasi mazak ko aapne meri kamjori samjh liya tha guruji?
Main etni shaktiya leke aaya hu ki aapko, aapke heaven ko, aapke supreme ko aur aapke lucifer ko akela hara sakta hu. Trailer to aapne dekh hi liya hoga aap apna hathiyaar tak nahi utha pa rahe mere samne

Guruji jinki halaat ab kuch theek nahi lag rahi thi vo bas kisi tarah apne pairo par khade hue the abhi tak lekin unhe dekh kar lag raha tha ki agar aisa hi chalta raha to vo jada der khade nahi rah payenge


“Hey parampitama mujhe maaf karna”

Apne man me unhone apne bhagwano se maafi mangi
Kyu?
Sayad ab vo aisa kuch karne wale the jo unhe nahi karna chahiye tha ya fir aisa jis se puri ki puri story hi change ho sakti thi

Dark lord- koe nahi aayega aaj aapki madad ke liye
Aaj aapko marna hi padeeggggggggg…..

Guruji ke chehre aur aankhon ke badalte kaale rang ko dekhte hue dark lord ke sabad uske muh ke ander hi rah gaye. Chehre par pehli baar sikan dikhaye dene lagi uske aur ek boond pasine ki unke mathe se tapak gaye

Dark lord- na….naahhhnahi ye nahi ho sakta
Jabaan ne bhi uske sath bagawat kar di thi

Kyuki samne ab heaven ka rakhwala nahi khada tha sakshaat ek yamraaj dikhae de raha tha

Guruji ke pure sareer ka rang bilkul kaala pad gaya tha aur aankhon ke pass vohi kaala jala hua rang aa chuka tha jo dark magic use karne par aata hai

Guruji- tune pucha tha na kya plan bana rakha hai maine tujhe harane ka?
Guruji ki aawaz jaise gunjane lagi pure jungle me jo dark lord ke bhi rongte khade kar dene ke liye kaafi thi

Guruji- main tujhe tere hi tarike se haraunga aur sirf haraunga hi nahi balki tujhe aaj main mukti bhi dunga
Aaj aisa koe shraap ya aashirwad tere koe kaam nahi aa payega. Aaj mere kahar se tujhe samav supreme bhi nahi bacha payega

Guruji ke ek ek sabad dark lord ki halat patli kar dene ke bahut jada the vahi jo rakshah dark lord ne bulaye the vo to kab ke madaan chhod kar bhaag chuke the

Unke samne unka kaal jo khada tha maut ban kar aur aisa hi kuch haal dark lord ka bhi tha. Usko to apni aankhon par yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha

Kaise guruji jo achai ka prateek mane jate the, jinhone royal blood ko acha galat sikhaya tha, humesha jindagi ke favour me rahte the vo aaj khud kaali shaktiya liye khade the

Guruji(tej aur bhaari aawaz me) ab konsi chaal chalega? Kya tujhe lagta hai ki teri koe bhi chaal mujh par kamyaab ho payegi?

Kya tu mujhe hara sakta hai? Harana to chhod kya tu mujhse bach kar nikal sakta hai yaha se? Aisa lag to nahi raha ki tere praan ab kisi layak bache hai esliye unhe tumse chhina hi behtar hoga

Dark lord ke chehre par dar saaf jhalak raha tha. Vo khud black magic ka bahut bada gyaata tha aur guruji ko dekh kar hi vo samjh chuka tha ki kis had tak kaala jaadu unke ragoo me bah raha hai aur aise halaat me vo bilkul bhi guruji se ladna nahi chahta tha

Halanki ye bhi sach hi tha ki guruji aur dark lord ki shaktiya ek dusre se bilkul bhi kam nahi thi fir bhi dark lord dar raha tha

Kyu?

Kyuki guruji ke sath achai bhi thi aur jab achae aur burai ek sath ek jagah judti hai to fir sirf aur sirf vinaas hi hota hai jo agar abhi yudh hua to usme ek atuhasik vinaash dekhne ko milega

Dark lord- chhod raha hu aapke praan. Jao aur mere ahsaanmand rahna jitni bhi jindagi jeeye utne me
Apne ander ka dar chhupate hue dark lord bola

“HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA” shataani hasi jo thodi der pehle dark lord ki gunj rahi thi vo ab guruji ke muh se nikalne lagi

Aur dark lord ko hava me utha liya guruji ne vo kab uske pass pahucha kab uska gala pakda aur kab hava me utha liya kisi ko pata tak nahi chala

Dark lord ghutan se chatpatane laga aur vaha se gayab hone ki kosis karne laga lekin guruji ne jo mayajal racha us se vo bach kar nikal nahi paa raha tha

“No resurrection this time” bolte hue guruji dark lord ke gale ko todne hi wale the ki ek roshini fail gaye. Etne tej safeed roshini thi ki na to dark lord ki aankh khul paye aur na guruji ki

Aur kab guruji ko hosh aaya to unhone khud ko us jungle se bahut door paya. Vo jamin par pade hue the aur kisi ke pair unke samne khade the….
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai.....
Nice and beautiful update.....
 

sorbobhuk

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Dark lord- to ye thi aapki chaal ha? Mujhe time loop me fasa kar ghuma do aur apni dunia ko bacha lo? Lekin aap ek baat bhul rahe ho guruji

Guruji- aur vo kya hai?

Dark lord- main dark lord ban chuka hu, kaali shaktiya mere ander vaas hi nahi karti vo mere ander se janam leti hai esliye time loop bhi mujhe jada der tak nahi rok sakti

Guruji- aisa hai to kadam badhao apne aur apne aapko sacha sabit karo

Dark lord- sabdo ke her fer se koe fayda nahi hone wala. Main apke time loop ko tood sakta hu lekin todunga nahi. Aapko bhi to pata hona chahiye ki ab dark lord kya ban chuka hai, vo ab aapko bina chuhe hi hara sakta hai

Dark lord apni jagah se thoda piche hue aur aankhen band karke mantra padhne lage

Ek jhatke me pura mahool hi change ho gaya, asmaan me bilkul kaale badaal aa gaye, pure jungle upside down hone laga, aur bahut tej tej hawaye chalne lagi

Guruji ko apne pairo ko ek jagah rakhne me hi muskil feel hone lagi, apni talwar ko jamin me gaad kar vo uske sahare khade rakhne ki kosis karne lage

Jo unhone time loop ka ghera banya tha vo bhi totne laga aur dark lord dharti se thoda upar hawa me apni shaktiyo ko jodne laga

Guruji ne bhi situation ki najakat ko samjha aur hawao ke bahaav ko vapas dark lord ki taraf modne ka prayataran karne lage

Jisme vo kamyaab nahi ho pa rahe the kyuki yaha achai nahi thi, jo yaha mojud tha vo sab kaala hi tha jispar guruji chah kar bhi kuch kar nahi paa rahe the

Dheere dheere guruji ke samne wali jamin ukhadne lagi aur vaha ek bahut bada gadha ban gaya.

Es se pehle ki guruji usne samate vo bhi hawao me udne lage aur full speed me talwar ko dark lord ki taraf karte hue uski taraf badhne lage

His tarah thodi der pehle dark lord guruji ke pass ruk gaye the theek vaise hi guruji bhi uske pass ruk gaye bas fark etna tha ki dark lord apni marji se ruka tha vahi guruji ko kaali shaktiya rook rahi thi

Ek bahut bada kaala bavandar dark lord ke charo taraf fail gaya jisne guruji ko uske pass aane se rok diya tha

Bahut tej garmi aur hava se guruji ke kapde fatne lag gaye aur unhe majburi me apni jagah chhodni padi aur vo dark lord se piche hat gaye

“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA” ek khaufnaak hasi pure jungle me failne lagi jo badhti hi ja rahi thi kyuki ek ke baad ek ek ke baad ek dark lord ke clown bante chale gaye

Ab beech me guruji khade the aur unke charo taraf sirf dark lord hi dikh rahe the upar se mosasm aisa ho gaya tha ki sab kuch ujhaad dega

Charo taraf se ek sath guruji par hamla hone laga aur guruji bahut aasani se sabko maat dene lage

Lekin ye kya? Unpar to kuch asar hi nahi ho raha tha. Guruji ek ko marta to uski jagah dusra janam le leta dusre ko marta to tisra janam le leta

Bahut jaldi hi guruji samjh gaye gaye ki vo apne bharam se lad rahe hai aur vaha koe nahi hai. Ek kadam piche hote hue apni ungli ko halka sa talwar se kata aur khoon ki boond par ek mantra padha aur pure jungle me roshini fail gaye

Etne tej roshini hue ki sare ke sare clown gayab ho gaye aur dark lord jo aankhen band karke apna mayajal bicha raha tha uska bhi dhyan toot gaya aur sidha jamin par aakar geera

Dark lord- ahh ye aapke khoon ki mahak mujhe pagal bana rahi hai. Esko rok lijiye guruji kahi aisa na ho ki aapke sareer ki ek ek boond main pee jao aur apke sareer me sirf paani hi bach jaye

Katch katch katch karke aawaz aane lagi aur guruji ki talwar se andha dhun roshini nikalne lagi jo bahut teji se dark lord ke upar barasne lagi

Vo kali shaktiyo ka maalik roshini se kaise lad sakta tha? Khud hi aankhen khol kar vo roshini dekh bhi nahi pa raha tha unse bachna to bahut door ki baat thi

Usne ek hath upar karke guruji ka gala pakadne ki kosis ki door se hi lekin guruji se usko bhi kaat diya aur ab dheere dheere uski taraf badhne bhi lag gaya tha

Dark lord ne himmat juta kar apni pith dikha di guruji ko aur piche mud kar demons knife chalaye alag alag dishao me jo aakhiri me lage sidhe guruji ko hi

Guruji dark lord par etne jada focused the ki unhe dekha hi nahi ki usne kya kiya hai

Jaise hi demons knife guruji ko lage unka dhayan bhatka aur dark lord ne mokke ka fayda utha kar apne aapko gayab kar liya

Guruji ko pata tha dark lord ek kapti insaan hai aur vo etni jaldi madaan chhod kar to bilkul bhi nahi bhagega esliye hi guruji ne charo taraf roshini faila di

Eske do karan the ek to ye ki dark lord nahi aa payega dusra karaan tha es illusion se bahar nikalna

Apni angelic power ka use guruji kaali shaktiyo ko dabane ke liye kar rahe the aur unki ye chal kamyaab bhi ho rahi thi

Kyuki junge ka ek sira unhe dikhae dene lag gaya jise deke kar ek baar fir guruji ka dhayan bhatak gaya. Vo khud vaha se bina kisi nirnay nikale nahi jana chahte the

Agar vo aise hi yaha se chale gaye aur baad me dark lord ne kisi public place par hamla kar diya to bahut musibaat ho sakti thi

Es se pehle guruji koe mantra padhte unke samne rakshaho ki fauz dikhae dene lagi jo ek powerful gharane ke rakshah the lekin unse ladna guruji ke liye koe badi baat nahi thi

Aur es baar sayam rakhte hue ek baar me hi guruji ne sabko jala kar raakh kar diya

Apni shaktiyo ka istemaal karte hue unhe aag jalaye aur ek line bana di. Jo jo us line ko cross karte aag me sama jate

Abhi sare rakshah us aag ki bheet chade lekin fir vo aag apne aap hi shant ho gaye. Guruji ko gyaan ho gaya tha ki dark lord abhi bhi vahi hai bas dikhae nahi de raha

Esliye antaratma se guruji ne dark lord ko doond nikala aur use bahar nikalne par vivas kar diya

Ek baar fir dono aapne samne the lekin halaat change ho chuki thi

Dark lord ke samne aate hi usne guruji par betahasa hamle karne suru kar diye jiska jawab guruji de nahi paye aur vo gayal hone lage

Pehle se hi demon knife ki vajah se uske sareer par chhot aa gaye thi aur ab dark lord ki kaali shaktiya unke sareer ke sath khilvaad karne lagi

Dark lord jo thodi der pehle apna aadha bhi use nahi kar raha tha ab puri takaat ke sath guruji ke samne aa chuka tha

Guruji koe hamla karne ke liye tayar hote us se pehle hi dark lord ke war unke sareer par lag jate aur unka dhayan bhang ho jata

Unke aas pass kaale saaye mandarane lage aur unhe ghutan feel hone lagi

Dark lord- meri hasi mazak ko aapne meri kamjori samjh liya tha guruji?
Main etni shaktiya leke aaya hu ki aapko, aapke heaven ko, aapke supreme ko aur aapke lucifer ko akela hara sakta hu. Trailer to aapne dekh hi liya hoga aap apna hathiyaar tak nahi utha pa rahe mere samne

Guruji jinki halaat ab kuch theek nahi lag rahi thi vo bas kisi tarah apne pairo par khade hue the abhi tak lekin unhe dekh kar lag raha tha ki agar aisa hi chalta raha to vo jada der khade nahi rah payenge


“Hey parampitama mujhe maaf karna”

Apne man me unhone apne bhagwano se maafi mangi
Kyu?
Sayad ab vo aisa kuch karne wale the jo unhe nahi karna chahiye tha ya fir aisa jis se puri ki puri story hi change ho sakti thi

Dark lord- koe nahi aayega aaj aapki madad ke liye
Aaj aapko marna hi padeeggggggggg…..

Guruji ke chehre aur aankhon ke badalte kaale rang ko dekhte hue dark lord ke sabad uske muh ke ander hi rah gaye. Chehre par pehli baar sikan dikhaye dene lagi uske aur ek boond pasine ki unke mathe se tapak gaye

Dark lord- na….naahhhnahi ye nahi ho sakta
Jabaan ne bhi uske sath bagawat kar di thi

Kyuki samne ab heaven ka rakhwala nahi khada tha sakshaat ek yamraaj dikhae de raha tha

Guruji ke pure sareer ka rang bilkul kaala pad gaya tha aur aankhon ke pass vohi kaala jala hua rang aa chuka tha jo dark magic use karne par aata hai

Guruji- tune pucha tha na kya plan bana rakha hai maine tujhe harane ka?
Guruji ki aawaz jaise gunjane lagi pure jungle me jo dark lord ke bhi rongte khade kar dene ke liye kaafi thi

Guruji- main tujhe tere hi tarike se haraunga aur sirf haraunga hi nahi balki tujhe aaj main mukti bhi dunga
Aaj aisa koe shraap ya aashirwad tere koe kaam nahi aa payega. Aaj mere kahar se tujhe samav supreme bhi nahi bacha payega

Guruji ke ek ek sabad dark lord ki halat patli kar dene ke bahut jada the vahi jo rakshah dark lord ne bulaye the vo to kab ke madaan chhod kar bhaag chuke the

Unke samne unka kaal jo khada tha maut ban kar aur aisa hi kuch haal dark lord ka bhi tha. Usko to apni aankhon par yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha

Kaise guruji jo achai ka prateek mane jate the, jinhone royal blood ko acha galat sikhaya tha, humesha jindagi ke favour me rahte the vo aaj khud kaali shaktiya liye khade the

Guruji(tej aur bhaari aawaz me) ab konsi chaal chalega? Kya tujhe lagta hai ki teri koe bhi chaal mujh par kamyaab ho payegi?

Kya tu mujhe hara sakta hai? Harana to chhod kya tu mujhse bach kar nikal sakta hai yaha se? Aisa lag to nahi raha ki tere praan ab kisi layak bache hai esliye unhe tumse chhina hi behtar hoga

Dark lord ke chehre par dar saaf jhalak raha tha. Vo khud black magic ka bahut bada gyaata tha aur guruji ko dekh kar hi vo samjh chuka tha ki kis had tak kaala jaadu unke ragoo me bah raha hai aur aise halaat me vo bilkul bhi guruji se ladna nahi chahta tha

Halanki ye bhi sach hi tha ki guruji aur dark lord ki shaktiya ek dusre se bilkul bhi kam nahi thi fir bhi dark lord dar raha tha

Kyu?

Kyuki guruji ke sath achai bhi thi aur jab achae aur burai ek sath ek jagah judti hai to fir sirf aur sirf vinaas hi hota hai jo agar abhi yudh hua to usme ek atuhasik vinaash dekhne ko milega

Dark lord- chhod raha hu aapke praan. Jao aur mere ahsaanmand rahna jitni bhi jindagi jeeye utne me
Apne ander ka dar chhupate hue dark lord bola

“HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA” shataani hasi jo thodi der pehle dark lord ki gunj rahi thi vo ab guruji ke muh se nikalne lagi

Aur dark lord ko hava me utha liya guruji ne vo kab uske pass pahucha kab uska gala pakda aur kab hava me utha liya kisi ko pata tak nahi chala

Dark lord ghutan se chatpatane laga aur vaha se gayab hone ki kosis karne laga lekin guruji ne jo mayajal racha us se vo bach kar nikal nahi paa raha tha

“No resurrection this time” bolte hue guruji dark lord ke gale ko todne hi wale the ki ek roshini fail gaye. Etne tej safeed roshini thi ki na to dark lord ki aankh khul paye aur na guruji ki

Aur kab guruji ko hosh aaya to unhone khud ko us jungle se bahut door paya. Vo jamin par pade hue the aur kisi ke pair unke samne khade the….
bahut badhiya update hai.....maja aageya hai....is update par sirf dark lord and guruji ko hi dekhne ko milahai.....guruji kali shaktiya istemal karne lagi liken bich koun aageye ab.......guruji ko jab maar padh raha tha tab kaha the wo or ab jab dark lord ko mar raha tha ab aageye hai bich me........mujhe lagta hai supreme ya fir mata ji aaya hai......liken fir bhi mere hisaab se supreme hi hona change jawda hai.....dekhte hai koun hai ye .....
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Sabko acha khasa suroor ho chuka tha aur ab bari thi akhiri destination ki jo tha raat ko nadi me nahana

Vo log nadi ke kinare pahuch chuke the aur sari ladkiya usme kood bhi gaye thi sivay madhuri ke

Vo thoda hickicha rahi thi. Ek to vo suit salwar me thi aur dusra lucifer bhi unke sang me tha jiske samne pani me jane se unhe saram aa rahi thi

Ashmita- common ma’am enjoy na. Aisa din humari bhaag dood bhari jindagi ke kaha hi aata hai?

Madhuri- you guys carry on. Main kapde bhi nahi laye aur mujhe pani se dar bhi lagggghhhahhhhhhh

Vo aage kuch bol pati us se pehle hi lucifer ne unhe gaud me utha kar pani me fek diya

Hahahhahahhahahha charo taraf jor jor se hasi ki aawaz gunj gaye

Inaaya- ab nahi lagega aapko dar pani me hehehe

Madhuri achanak hue hamle se thodi ghabra gaye thi esliye khud ko normal karne me unko thoda time lag gaya

Apne baalo ko sawarte hue dilkas ada se vo lucifer ko dekhne lagi jis par lucifer bas muskura diya aur khud bhi pani me kood gaya

Anisha- kitna thanda hai ye pani aur saaf bhi. Sare paap aaj hi dood dega ye pani

Tara- paap ka to pata nahi lekin man kitna shant ho gaya hai esme aate hi. Bilkul alag hi feel ho raha hai

Ashmita- sahi kah rahi ho didi. Thank you inaaya

Inaaya- anything for my loves sweetheart

Lucifer- koe mere liye bhi kuch kar diya karo? Kya main kisi ka love nahi hu kya?

Ashmita- dunia yaad rakhegi ki lucifer ki dost ko lucifer se etna pyaar tha ki koe had nahi chhodi usne

Lucifer- hayeee main mar jau etna pyaar dekh kar

Anisha- didi thode dhayan se. Ye jo dikhta hai vaisa hai nahi

Lucifer- fuck… kya ye taana tha? Ha ye tana tha but ye tana kyu tha?

Ashmita- because you deserve it. Totally deserve it

Tara- i agree

Lucifer- aap to agree karoge hi. Khud par kabu rahta nahi aapka aur badnaam har baar mujhe hona padta hai

Tara- shut up. Ek second me haya ki ek parat ban gaye tara ke chehre par aur use vo sab yaad aane laga jab vo lucifer me etna kho gaye thi ki ashu ne dono ko dekh liya tha aur vo bhi ek baar nahi kae baar

Madhuri- kya ho gaya? Why you’re blushing ?

Lucifer- ye kya bataegi? Main batata hu aapko

Ashmita- lucifer maar khayega ab tu

Lucifer- ye kya baat hue? Kya yehi tha tera pyaar?

Ashmita- shut up

Inaaya- ye galat baat hai. Sab ke sab mere lucifer ko shut up karte ja rahe hai

Lucifer- tum hi to meri apni ho. Baki sab to jalte hai mujhse aur tumse kyuki etne kam samay me bahut mahnat karke maine tumhre figure me nikaar la diya

Inaaya- shhuutt upp yaar lucifer

“Hahahhahahhahaha” “ aur le eski support” hahahha aur fir sab hasne lag gaye

Lucifer- to maam hua ye tha ki ye jo pagal ladki hai na(ashmita) esko bilkul bhi manners ka nahi pata. Ab aap hi batao jab do log…..

Ashmita- lucifer bahut marungi tujhe bata rahi hu main pehle hi

Anisha- are hua kya hai koe ye bataega?

Lucifer- main bata to raha hu lekin ye bolna kaha de rahi hai?

Tara bechari ka pura chehra gulabi pad chuka tha. Nashe me to vo bhi thi lekin fir bhi bahut sarm feel ho rahi thi use. Ab to aur jada ho rahi thi kyuki ashmita se uski es baare me kabhi koe baat nahi hue aur abhi to ashmita ke sath sath anisha bhi vaha mojud thi

Ashmita- you dont need to feel bad didi. Ye to hai hi kutta kuch bhi bol deta hai

Lucifer- brw she isn’t feeling bad. Vo to tujhse naraj hai jo har baar kabab me haddi ban jati hai

Inaaya- are bas bahut ho gaya ab. You both need to relax nahi to main tum dono ko kahi ek kamre me band kar dungi fir jitna marji lad lena

Lucifer- sath me ek bacha aur nikal jayega fir

Ashmita gusse me lucifer ke upar kuddi lekin lucifer to bahut ache se janta tha ashmita ko esliye pehle to aasani se uske war se bacha fir apne bahoo me bhar kar use pani ke ander leke chala gaya aur jabardasti bahut der tak ander hi dubki marva kar rakhe rakha

Ashmita- kuttte chhod mujhe mujhe etni jaldi nahi marna hai
Bahar aate hi hath aur muh dono ek sath chalate hue boli

Lucifer- pata hai mujhe. Mujhe maar kar hi maregi tu*****


Heaven ka mahool bilkul shant tha halke kaale badal aa chuke the jo bata rahe the ki shaam dhal aaye hai aur dheere dheere hawaye chal rahi thi

Guruji en hawao me kuch galat sense kar chuke the aur esliye hi vo apne aas pass dekhte hue aage badhe ja rahe the. Es waqt bache khel khood kar gharo me laut chuke the aur log apne ghar me hi apne apne kaamo ke busy ho chuke the

Chalte chalte guruji heaven se kafi door nikal chuke the aur ab unhe kaali shaktiya bahut kareeb se feel hone lagi thi esliye apne aap ko hathiyaar se tayar kar liya tha unhone aur ek shield bhi bana liya tha khud ke liye

Vo es baat se khush bhi the ki heaven me ye sab nahi ho raha jiski vajah se masoom safe the aur thoda chinta me bhi the ki etne kareeb aisa hona bilkul bhi subh sankeet nahi hai

Ek jungle ke suruvaat par vo ruk gaye aur apne aakhen band karke dhayan lagane lage lekin safalta mili nahi unhe kyuki kali shaktiyo ka parbhaav bahut jada bhad gaya tha

Aankh khol kar kuch mantra padhe lekin unse bhi jada kuch fayda hua nahi unhe kuch kuch bhi samne nahi aaya

Jab apne mantra khali jate dekhe to unhe thoda thoda idea ho gaya tha ki konsi musibaat yaha ho sakti thi lekin piche hatne ka to sawal hi paida nahi hota tha

Esliye jungle ke ander parvesh kar gaye jaise hi vo ander ghuse pure ke pure jungle ka naksa hi badalne laga. Ye koe mayajal tha jis me vo ghus chuke the

Yaha par ab unhe gyaan ho chuka tha ki ye koe jungle nahi hai bas aankhon ka bharam paida karne ke liye aisa kiya gaya hai aur es se bahar nikalna bilkul bhi aasan nahi hai

Vo jis bhi taraf mud rahe the vo jhatke ke sath pehle wali direction me badal ja rahi thi. Matlab ki pair to chal rahe the lekin aage nahi bad pa rahe the vo

Aisa lag raha tha jaise vo ek hi jagah par hi etne der se ghum rahe hai

Unhone firse dhayan laga kar ek mantra padha aur es baar unko ek chehra dikhne laga. Ek aisa chehra jise vo bahut ache se pahchante the.

“DARK LORD” aankhen kholte hi guruji bole aur tabhi dark lord unke samne prakat ho gaya

Shataani muskaan uske chehre par saji hue thi aur aaj chehre ka ek bhaag kaala bhi pada hua tha jo saaf saaf bata raha tha ki kis had tak usne kaali shaktiya use ki hai aaj

Guruji- sukriya

Dark lord- mujhe laga maafi ki bheekh mangoge aap lekin ye kya? Sukriya? Kis liye?

Guruji- masoomo se door rakhne ke liye es ladae ko

Dark lord- aaj ke liye to door rahegi lekin kal ye ladae un sab jagah tak failegi jaha achai mojud hai

Guruji- pata hai na us achai ke akhiri kinare par kaun khada hua hai?

Dark lord- bahut ache se pata hai. Esliye to aapki madad chahiye. Aapne es dharti par aane wali har musibaat ka samadhan doond rakha hoga to jahir hai aapko ye bhi pata hoga ki agar vo achai burai me badli to use kaise roka ja sakta hai

Guruji- agar mujhe lucifer ke rokne ka tarika pata hoga to ye tumne kaise soch liya ki maine tumhre bare me kuch plan nahi bana rakha hoga?

Dark lord- mujhe maloom hai aapne kuch na kuch to dimag lagaya hi hoga esliye to kaali shaktiya apne sath laya hu. Aap unka estemaal to karne se rahe aur na hi mera pyaara bada bhai karega. Lekin main? Main un kaali shaktiyo ka maha gyaata aapko un shaktiyo se hi mukti dilaunga. Wada raha aapse

Guruji- ek kahani sunata hu bahut rochak hai bahut kam log jante hai eske bare me par aaj tumhe bhi batane ka dil kar raha hai

Dark lord- dil ko rokna nahi chahiye guruji. Boliye aaram se boliye. Humare pass waqt hi waqt hai es jagah koe nahi aa sakta. Aap meri mayavi dunia me ho abhi esliye tension lene ki koe jarurat nahi hai

Guruji- ek bahut shaktishali angel hua karta tha. Etna ki pure bharmand ko apne kadmo me jhuka sakta tha lekin kismat ko kuch aur hi manjur tha, jo sanskaar ko apne kadmo me jhuka sakta tha vo khudke kadmo me hi jhuk gaya. Lekin achi baat ye hue ki eske bavjud vo kamjor nahi pada. Thode waqt tak vo jarur bharm me raha lekin fir jab vo khada hua to pehle se bhi hazar ghuna shaktishali hoke bahar aaya. Na keval rakshah jagat balki bhagwan bhi us se khauf khane lage. Har koe uske samne jane se katrane lage lekin fir kuch aisa hua jo nahi hona chahiye tha. Ek dusra angel jo paida hi sayad tabhai machane ke liye hua tha vo aa gaya. Vo sochta tha ki mere pass kali shaktiyo ka sara gyaan hai aur un shaktiyo ko use karke vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai, kisi ko bhi hara sakta hai lekin vo ek bahut mahtavpuran baat bhul gaya ki jin kali shaktiyo ke dam par vo etna uchalta hai unka baap to pehle wale angel ke pass hai jo ab uska ek atoot hissa ban chuka hai. Vo nasamjh fir bhi nahi samjha aur bhid gaya us se fir kya ache wale angel ne etni jagah se faada use ki koe silne wala tak nahi mila. Aur ant me jaisa humesha hota hai achai ki burai par jeet ho gaye

Dark lord- waw waw waw maja aa gaya guruji kya hi story thi. Bilkul real jaisi lag rahi hai. Acha wala angel to bilkul mere jaisa lag raha hai to matlab meri jeet paki hai

Guruji- jo acha hai uski jeet to pakki hai hi
Aur ek dam se dharti hilane lagi. Es se penle ki dark lord khch react kar pata us jungle ke pedo ki lato ne usko jakad liya

Uske dono hatho ko pedo ki tahniyo ne pakad liya aur use hawa me utha liya

Guruji ne apni sword nikali aur door se hi hawa me ek bahut tej war kiya. Aas pass ki sari hawa jaise ek sath jud gaye ho aur vo sari ki sari full speed me dark lord ke sareer me ja lagi.

Uske pure sareer ko peedo ne pakad rakha tha esliye vo bilkul hil dol nahi pa raha tha aur ek chhoti si ahh nikal gaye jab full pressure ke sath air uske sareer se takrai

Apne pairo ko hawao me ghumate hue ek aur war kiya guruji ne aur vo bhi sateek jagah par laga lekin ab tak dark lord bilkul sambhal chuka tha aur guruji ke last attack ko to jaise usne apne ander absorb kar liya tha

Apne hontho par ek muskaan laye usne guruji ki taraf dekha fir uske sareer se chhote chhote chaku nikalne lage aur agle hi pal vo bilkul aajad ho chuka tha

Hatho ke chamchamati devil sword aa chuki thi jo thi to kale rang ki lekin chamak aise rahi thi ki samne wale ko andha bhi kar sakti hai sath me uski length bhi ek above normal insaan ke height se kahi jada thi

Dark lord- bina kisi reason ke apni etni energy waste kar di na aapne? Kuch natija nikla?

Guruji- natija kya niklega vo bhi jaldi hi tumhe pata lag jayega
Aur guruji bhi apne talwar liya tayar ho chuke the

Fight position me dono aa chuke the jaha dark lord thoda utawala ho raha tha vahi guruji apne position me khada bariki se uske activities ko jaan rahe the

Dark lord laparvahi se guruji ki taraf badhe lekin guruji jaise khade the vaise hi khade rahe. Halka sa bhi movement nahi kiya unhone aur eski vajah se hi dark lord ko thoda sanka hue aur bilkul guruji ke pass aakar vo ruk gaya

“TIME LOOP” etna hi bol paya dark lord kyuki samne khad guruji ka muskurata hua chehra uske sare sawalo ke jawab de raha tha
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Dark lord- to ye thi aapki chaal ha? Mujhe time loop me fasa kar ghuma do aur apni dunia ko bacha lo? Lekin aap ek baat bhul rahe ho guruji

Guruji- aur vo kya hai?

Dark lord- main dark lord ban chuka hu, kaali shaktiya mere ander vaas hi nahi karti vo mere ander se janam leti hai esliye time loop bhi mujhe jada der tak nahi rok sakti

Guruji- aisa hai to kadam badhao apne aur apne aapko sacha sabit karo

Dark lord- sabdo ke her fer se koe fayda nahi hone wala. Main apke time loop ko tood sakta hu lekin todunga nahi. Aapko bhi to pata hona chahiye ki ab dark lord kya ban chuka hai, vo ab aapko bina chuhe hi hara sakta hai

Dark lord apni jagah se thoda piche hue aur aankhen band karke mantra padhne lage

Ek jhatke me pura mahool hi change ho gaya, asmaan me bilkul kaale badaal aa gaye, pure jungle upside down hone laga, aur bahut tej tej hawaye chalne lagi

Guruji ko apne pairo ko ek jagah rakhne me hi muskil feel hone lagi, apni talwar ko jamin me gaad kar vo uske sahare khade rakhne ki kosis karne lage

Jo unhone time loop ka ghera banya tha vo bhi totne laga aur dark lord dharti se thoda upar hawa me apni shaktiyo ko jodne laga

Guruji ne bhi situation ki najakat ko samjha aur hawao ke bahaav ko vapas dark lord ki taraf modne ka prayataran karne lage

Jisme vo kamyaab nahi ho pa rahe the kyuki yaha achai nahi thi, jo yaha mojud tha vo sab kaala hi tha jispar guruji chah kar bhi kuch kar nahi paa rahe the

Dheere dheere guruji ke samne wali jamin ukhadne lagi aur vaha ek bahut bada gadha ban gaya.

Es se pehle ki guruji usne samate vo bhi hawao me udne lage aur full speed me talwar ko dark lord ki taraf karte hue uski taraf badhne lage

His tarah thodi der pehle dark lord guruji ke pass ruk gaye the theek vaise hi guruji bhi uske pass ruk gaye bas fark etna tha ki dark lord apni marji se ruka tha vahi guruji ko kaali shaktiya rook rahi thi

Ek bahut bada kaala bavandar dark lord ke charo taraf fail gaya jisne guruji ko uske pass aane se rok diya tha

Bahut tej garmi aur hava se guruji ke kapde fatne lag gaye aur unhe majburi me apni jagah chhodni padi aur vo dark lord se piche hat gaye

“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA” ek khaufnaak hasi pure jungle me failne lagi jo badhti hi ja rahi thi kyuki ek ke baad ek ek ke baad ek dark lord ke clown bante chale gaye

Ab beech me guruji khade the aur unke charo taraf sirf dark lord hi dikh rahe the upar se mosasm aisa ho gaya tha ki sab kuch ujhaad dega

Charo taraf se ek sath guruji par hamla hone laga aur guruji bahut aasani se sabko maat dene lage

Lekin ye kya? Unpar to kuch asar hi nahi ho raha tha. Guruji ek ko marta to uski jagah dusra janam le leta dusre ko marta to tisra janam le leta

Bahut jaldi hi guruji samjh gaye gaye ki vo apne bharam se lad rahe hai aur vaha koe nahi hai. Ek kadam piche hote hue apni ungli ko halka sa talwar se kata aur khoon ki boond par ek mantra padha aur pure jungle me roshini fail gaye

Etne tej roshini hue ki sare ke sare clown gayab ho gaye aur dark lord jo aankhen band karke apna mayajal bicha raha tha uska bhi dhyan toot gaya aur sidha jamin par aakar geera

Dark lord- ahh ye aapke khoon ki mahak mujhe pagal bana rahi hai. Esko rok lijiye guruji kahi aisa na ho ki aapke sareer ki ek ek boond main pee jao aur apke sareer me sirf paani hi bach jaye

Katch katch katch karke aawaz aane lagi aur guruji ki talwar se andha dhun roshini nikalne lagi jo bahut teji se dark lord ke upar barasne lagi

Vo kali shaktiyo ka maalik roshini se kaise lad sakta tha? Khud hi aankhen khol kar vo roshini dekh bhi nahi pa raha tha unse bachna to bahut door ki baat thi

Usne ek hath upar karke guruji ka gala pakadne ki kosis ki door se hi lekin guruji se usko bhi kaat diya aur ab dheere dheere uski taraf badhne bhi lag gaya tha

Dark lord ne himmat juta kar apni pith dikha di guruji ko aur piche mud kar demons knife chalaye alag alag dishao me jo aakhiri me lage sidhe guruji ko hi

Guruji dark lord par etne jada focused the ki unhe dekha hi nahi ki usne kya kiya hai

Jaise hi demons knife guruji ko lage unka dhayan bhatka aur dark lord ne mokke ka fayda utha kar apne aapko gayab kar liya

Guruji ko pata tha dark lord ek kapti insaan hai aur vo etni jaldi madaan chhod kar to bilkul bhi nahi bhagega esliye hi guruji ne charo taraf roshini faila di

Eske do karan the ek to ye ki dark lord nahi aa payega dusra karaan tha es illusion se bahar nikalna

Apni angelic power ka use guruji kaali shaktiyo ko dabane ke liye kar rahe the aur unki ye chal kamyaab bhi ho rahi thi

Kyuki junge ka ek sira unhe dikhae dene lag gaya jise deke kar ek baar fir guruji ka dhayan bhatak gaya. Vo khud vaha se bina kisi nirnay nikale nahi jana chahte the

Agar vo aise hi yaha se chale gaye aur baad me dark lord ne kisi public place par hamla kar diya to bahut musibaat ho sakti thi

Es se pehle guruji koe mantra padhte unke samne rakshaho ki fauz dikhae dene lagi jo ek powerful gharane ke rakshah the lekin unse ladna guruji ke liye koe badi baat nahi thi

Aur es baar sayam rakhte hue ek baar me hi guruji ne sabko jala kar raakh kar diya

Apni shaktiyo ka istemaal karte hue unhe aag jalaye aur ek line bana di. Jo jo us line ko cross karte aag me sama jate

Abhi sare rakshah us aag ki bheet chade lekin fir vo aag apne aap hi shant ho gaye. Guruji ko gyaan ho gaya tha ki dark lord abhi bhi vahi hai bas dikhae nahi de raha

Esliye antaratma se guruji ne dark lord ko doond nikala aur use bahar nikalne par vivas kar diya

Ek baar fir dono aapne samne the lekin halaat change ho chuki thi

Dark lord ke samne aate hi usne guruji par betahasa hamle karne suru kar diye jiska jawab guruji de nahi paye aur vo gayal hone lage

Pehle se hi demon knife ki vajah se uske sareer par chhot aa gaye thi aur ab dark lord ki kaali shaktiya unke sareer ke sath khilvaad karne lagi

Dark lord jo thodi der pehle apna aadha bhi use nahi kar raha tha ab puri takaat ke sath guruji ke samne aa chuka tha

Guruji koe hamla karne ke liye tayar hote us se pehle hi dark lord ke war unke sareer par lag jate aur unka dhayan bhang ho jata

Unke aas pass kaale saaye mandarane lage aur unhe ghutan feel hone lagi

Dark lord- meri hasi mazak ko aapne meri kamjori samjh liya tha guruji?
Main etni shaktiya leke aaya hu ki aapko, aapke heaven ko, aapke supreme ko aur aapke lucifer ko akela hara sakta hu. Trailer to aapne dekh hi liya hoga aap apna hathiyaar tak nahi utha pa rahe mere samne

Guruji jinki halaat ab kuch theek nahi lag rahi thi vo bas kisi tarah apne pairo par khade hue the abhi tak lekin unhe dekh kar lag raha tha ki agar aisa hi chalta raha to vo jada der khade nahi rah payenge


“Hey parampitama mujhe maaf karna”

Apne man me unhone apne bhagwano se maafi mangi
Kyu?
Sayad ab vo aisa kuch karne wale the jo unhe nahi karna chahiye tha ya fir aisa jis se puri ki puri story hi change ho sakti thi

Dark lord- koe nahi aayega aaj aapki madad ke liye
Aaj aapko marna hi padeeggggggggg…..

Guruji ke chehre aur aankhon ke badalte kaale rang ko dekhte hue dark lord ke sabad uske muh ke ander hi rah gaye. Chehre par pehli baar sikan dikhaye dene lagi uske aur ek boond pasine ki unke mathe se tapak gaye

Dark lord- na….naahhhnahi ye nahi ho sakta
Jabaan ne bhi uske sath bagawat kar di thi

Kyuki samne ab heaven ka rakhwala nahi khada tha sakshaat ek yamraaj dikhae de raha tha

Guruji ke pure sareer ka rang bilkul kaala pad gaya tha aur aankhon ke pass vohi kaala jala hua rang aa chuka tha jo dark magic use karne par aata hai

Guruji- tune pucha tha na kya plan bana rakha hai maine tujhe harane ka?
Guruji ki aawaz jaise gunjane lagi pure jungle me jo dark lord ke bhi rongte khade kar dene ke liye kaafi thi

Guruji- main tujhe tere hi tarike se haraunga aur sirf haraunga hi nahi balki tujhe aaj main mukti bhi dunga
Aaj aisa koe shraap ya aashirwad tere koe kaam nahi aa payega. Aaj mere kahar se tujhe samav supreme bhi nahi bacha payega

Guruji ke ek ek sabad dark lord ki halat patli kar dene ke bahut jada the vahi jo rakshah dark lord ne bulaye the vo to kab ke madaan chhod kar bhaag chuke the

Unke samne unka kaal jo khada tha maut ban kar aur aisa hi kuch haal dark lord ka bhi tha. Usko to apni aankhon par yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha

Kaise guruji jo achai ka prateek mane jate the, jinhone royal blood ko acha galat sikhaya tha, humesha jindagi ke favour me rahte the vo aaj khud kaali shaktiya liye khade the

Guruji(tej aur bhaari aawaz me) ab konsi chaal chalega? Kya tujhe lagta hai ki teri koe bhi chaal mujh par kamyaab ho payegi?

Kya tu mujhe hara sakta hai? Harana to chhod kya tu mujhse bach kar nikal sakta hai yaha se? Aisa lag to nahi raha ki tere praan ab kisi layak bache hai esliye unhe tumse chhina hi behtar hoga

Dark lord ke chehre par dar saaf jhalak raha tha. Vo khud black magic ka bahut bada gyaata tha aur guruji ko dekh kar hi vo samjh chuka tha ki kis had tak kaala jaadu unke ragoo me bah raha hai aur aise halaat me vo bilkul bhi guruji se ladna nahi chahta tha

Halanki ye bhi sach hi tha ki guruji aur dark lord ki shaktiya ek dusre se bilkul bhi kam nahi thi fir bhi dark lord dar raha tha

Kyu?

Kyuki guruji ke sath achai bhi thi aur jab achae aur burai ek sath ek jagah judti hai to fir sirf aur sirf vinaas hi hota hai jo agar abhi yudh hua to usme ek atuhasik vinaash dekhne ko milega

Dark lord- chhod raha hu aapke praan. Jao aur mere ahsaanmand rahna jitni bhi jindagi jeeye utne me
Apne ander ka dar chhupate hue dark lord bola

“HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA” shataani hasi jo thodi der pehle dark lord ki gunj rahi thi vo ab guruji ke muh se nikalne lagi

Aur dark lord ko hava me utha liya guruji ne vo kab uske pass pahucha kab uska gala pakda aur kab hava me utha liya kisi ko pata tak nahi chala

Dark lord ghutan se chatpatane laga aur vaha se gayab hone ki kosis karne laga lekin guruji ne jo mayajal racha us se vo bach kar nikal nahi paa raha tha

“No resurrection this time” bolte hue guruji dark lord ke gale ko todne hi wale the ki ek roshini fail gaye. Etne tej safeed roshini thi ki na to dark lord ki aankh khul paye aur na guruji ki

Aur kab guruji ko hosh aaya to unhone khud ko us jungle se bahut door paya. Vo jamin par pade hue the aur kisi ke pair unke samne khade the….
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Dark lord- to ye thi aapki chaal ha? Mujhe time loop me fasa kar ghuma do aur apni dunia ko bacha lo? Lekin aap ek baat bhul rahe ho guruji

Guruji- aur vo kya hai?

Dark lord- main dark lord ban chuka hu, kaali shaktiya mere ander vaas hi nahi karti vo mere ander se janam leti hai esliye time loop bhi mujhe jada der tak nahi rok sakti

Guruji- aisa hai to kadam badhao apne aur apne aapko sacha sabit karo

Dark lord- sabdo ke her fer se koe fayda nahi hone wala. Main apke time loop ko tood sakta hu lekin todunga nahi. Aapko bhi to pata hona chahiye ki ab dark lord kya ban chuka hai, vo ab aapko bina chuhe hi hara sakta hai

Dark lord apni jagah se thoda piche hue aur aankhen band karke mantra padhne lage

Ek jhatke me pura mahool hi change ho gaya, asmaan me bilkul kaale badaal aa gaye, pure jungle upside down hone laga, aur bahut tej tej hawaye chalne lagi

Guruji ko apne pairo ko ek jagah rakhne me hi muskil feel hone lagi, apni talwar ko jamin me gaad kar vo uske sahare khade rakhne ki kosis karne lage

Jo unhone time loop ka ghera banya tha vo bhi totne laga aur dark lord dharti se thoda upar hawa me apni shaktiyo ko jodne laga

Guruji ne bhi situation ki najakat ko samjha aur hawao ke bahaav ko vapas dark lord ki taraf modne ka prayataran karne lage

Jisme vo kamyaab nahi ho pa rahe the kyuki yaha achai nahi thi, jo yaha mojud tha vo sab kaala hi tha jispar guruji chah kar bhi kuch kar nahi paa rahe the

Dheere dheere guruji ke samne wali jamin ukhadne lagi aur vaha ek bahut bada gadha ban gaya.

Es se pehle ki guruji usne samate vo bhi hawao me udne lage aur full speed me talwar ko dark lord ki taraf karte hue uski taraf badhne lage

His tarah thodi der pehle dark lord guruji ke pass ruk gaye the theek vaise hi guruji bhi uske pass ruk gaye bas fark etna tha ki dark lord apni marji se ruka tha vahi guruji ko kaali shaktiya rook rahi thi

Ek bahut bada kaala bavandar dark lord ke charo taraf fail gaya jisne guruji ko uske pass aane se rok diya tha

Bahut tej garmi aur hava se guruji ke kapde fatne lag gaye aur unhe majburi me apni jagah chhodni padi aur vo dark lord se piche hat gaye

“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA” ek khaufnaak hasi pure jungle me failne lagi jo badhti hi ja rahi thi kyuki ek ke baad ek ek ke baad ek dark lord ke clown bante chale gaye

Ab beech me guruji khade the aur unke charo taraf sirf dark lord hi dikh rahe the upar se mosasm aisa ho gaya tha ki sab kuch ujhaad dega

Charo taraf se ek sath guruji par hamla hone laga aur guruji bahut aasani se sabko maat dene lage

Lekin ye kya? Unpar to kuch asar hi nahi ho raha tha. Guruji ek ko marta to uski jagah dusra janam le leta dusre ko marta to tisra janam le leta

Bahut jaldi hi guruji samjh gaye gaye ki vo apne bharam se lad rahe hai aur vaha koe nahi hai. Ek kadam piche hote hue apni ungli ko halka sa talwar se kata aur khoon ki boond par ek mantra padha aur pure jungle me roshini fail gaye

Etne tej roshini hue ki sare ke sare clown gayab ho gaye aur dark lord jo aankhen band karke apna mayajal bicha raha tha uska bhi dhyan toot gaya aur sidha jamin par aakar geera

Dark lord- ahh ye aapke khoon ki mahak mujhe pagal bana rahi hai. Esko rok lijiye guruji kahi aisa na ho ki aapke sareer ki ek ek boond main pee jao aur apke sareer me sirf paani hi bach jaye

Katch katch katch karke aawaz aane lagi aur guruji ki talwar se andha dhun roshini nikalne lagi jo bahut teji se dark lord ke upar barasne lagi

Vo kali shaktiyo ka maalik roshini se kaise lad sakta tha? Khud hi aankhen khol kar vo roshini dekh bhi nahi pa raha tha unse bachna to bahut door ki baat thi

Usne ek hath upar karke guruji ka gala pakadne ki kosis ki door se hi lekin guruji se usko bhi kaat diya aur ab dheere dheere uski taraf badhne bhi lag gaya tha

Dark lord ne himmat juta kar apni pith dikha di guruji ko aur piche mud kar demons knife chalaye alag alag dishao me jo aakhiri me lage sidhe guruji ko hi

Guruji dark lord par etne jada focused the ki unhe dekha hi nahi ki usne kya kiya hai

Jaise hi demons knife guruji ko lage unka dhayan bhatka aur dark lord ne mokke ka fayda utha kar apne aapko gayab kar liya

Guruji ko pata tha dark lord ek kapti insaan hai aur vo etni jaldi madaan chhod kar to bilkul bhi nahi bhagega esliye hi guruji ne charo taraf roshini faila di

Eske do karan the ek to ye ki dark lord nahi aa payega dusra karaan tha es illusion se bahar nikalna

Apni angelic power ka use guruji kaali shaktiyo ko dabane ke liye kar rahe the aur unki ye chal kamyaab bhi ho rahi thi

Kyuki junge ka ek sira unhe dikhae dene lag gaya jise deke kar ek baar fir guruji ka dhayan bhatak gaya. Vo khud vaha se bina kisi nirnay nikale nahi jana chahte the

Agar vo aise hi yaha se chale gaye aur baad me dark lord ne kisi public place par hamla kar diya to bahut musibaat ho sakti thi

Es se pehle guruji koe mantra padhte unke samne rakshaho ki fauz dikhae dene lagi jo ek powerful gharane ke rakshah the lekin unse ladna guruji ke liye koe badi baat nahi thi

Aur es baar sayam rakhte hue ek baar me hi guruji ne sabko jala kar raakh kar diya

Apni shaktiyo ka istemaal karte hue unhe aag jalaye aur ek line bana di. Jo jo us line ko cross karte aag me sama jate

Abhi sare rakshah us aag ki bheet chade lekin fir vo aag apne aap hi shant ho gaye. Guruji ko gyaan ho gaya tha ki dark lord abhi bhi vahi hai bas dikhae nahi de raha

Esliye antaratma se guruji ne dark lord ko doond nikala aur use bahar nikalne par vivas kar diya

Ek baar fir dono aapne samne the lekin halaat change ho chuki thi

Dark lord ke samne aate hi usne guruji par betahasa hamle karne suru kar diye jiska jawab guruji de nahi paye aur vo gayal hone lage

Pehle se hi demon knife ki vajah se uske sareer par chhot aa gaye thi aur ab dark lord ki kaali shaktiya unke sareer ke sath khilvaad karne lagi

Dark lord jo thodi der pehle apna aadha bhi use nahi kar raha tha ab puri takaat ke sath guruji ke samne aa chuka tha

Guruji koe hamla karne ke liye tayar hote us se pehle hi dark lord ke war unke sareer par lag jate aur unka dhayan bhang ho jata

Unke aas pass kaale saaye mandarane lage aur unhe ghutan feel hone lagi

Dark lord- meri hasi mazak ko aapne meri kamjori samjh liya tha guruji?
Main etni shaktiya leke aaya hu ki aapko, aapke heaven ko, aapke supreme ko aur aapke lucifer ko akela hara sakta hu. Trailer to aapne dekh hi liya hoga aap apna hathiyaar tak nahi utha pa rahe mere samne

Guruji jinki halaat ab kuch theek nahi lag rahi thi vo bas kisi tarah apne pairo par khade hue the abhi tak lekin unhe dekh kar lag raha tha ki agar aisa hi chalta raha to vo jada der khade nahi rah payenge


“Hey parampitama mujhe maaf karna”

Apne man me unhone apne bhagwano se maafi mangi
Kyu?
Sayad ab vo aisa kuch karne wale the jo unhe nahi karna chahiye tha ya fir aisa jis se puri ki puri story hi change ho sakti thi

Dark lord- koe nahi aayega aaj aapki madad ke liye
Aaj aapko marna hi padeeggggggggg…..

Guruji ke chehre aur aankhon ke badalte kaale rang ko dekhte hue dark lord ke sabad uske muh ke ander hi rah gaye. Chehre par pehli baar sikan dikhaye dene lagi uske aur ek boond pasine ki unke mathe se tapak gaye

Dark lord- na….naahhhnahi ye nahi ho sakta
Jabaan ne bhi uske sath bagawat kar di thi

Kyuki samne ab heaven ka rakhwala nahi khada tha sakshaat ek yamraaj dikhae de raha tha

Guruji ke pure sareer ka rang bilkul kaala pad gaya tha aur aankhon ke pass vohi kaala jala hua rang aa chuka tha jo dark magic use karne par aata hai

Guruji- tune pucha tha na kya plan bana rakha hai maine tujhe harane ka?
Guruji ki aawaz jaise gunjane lagi pure jungle me jo dark lord ke bhi rongte khade kar dene ke liye kaafi thi

Guruji- main tujhe tere hi tarike se haraunga aur sirf haraunga hi nahi balki tujhe aaj main mukti bhi dunga
Aaj aisa koe shraap ya aashirwad tere koe kaam nahi aa payega. Aaj mere kahar se tujhe samav supreme bhi nahi bacha payega

Guruji ke ek ek sabad dark lord ki halat patli kar dene ke bahut jada the vahi jo rakshah dark lord ne bulaye the vo to kab ke madaan chhod kar bhaag chuke the

Unke samne unka kaal jo khada tha maut ban kar aur aisa hi kuch haal dark lord ka bhi tha. Usko to apni aankhon par yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha

Kaise guruji jo achai ka prateek mane jate the, jinhone royal blood ko acha galat sikhaya tha, humesha jindagi ke favour me rahte the vo aaj khud kaali shaktiya liye khade the

Guruji(tej aur bhaari aawaz me) ab konsi chaal chalega? Kya tujhe lagta hai ki teri koe bhi chaal mujh par kamyaab ho payegi?

Kya tu mujhe hara sakta hai? Harana to chhod kya tu mujhse bach kar nikal sakta hai yaha se? Aisa lag to nahi raha ki tere praan ab kisi layak bache hai esliye unhe tumse chhina hi behtar hoga

Dark lord ke chehre par dar saaf jhalak raha tha. Vo khud black magic ka bahut bada gyaata tha aur guruji ko dekh kar hi vo samjh chuka tha ki kis had tak kaala jaadu unke ragoo me bah raha hai aur aise halaat me vo bilkul bhi guruji se ladna nahi chahta tha

Halanki ye bhi sach hi tha ki guruji aur dark lord ki shaktiya ek dusre se bilkul bhi kam nahi thi fir bhi dark lord dar raha tha

Kyu?

Kyuki guruji ke sath achai bhi thi aur jab achae aur burai ek sath ek jagah judti hai to fir sirf aur sirf vinaas hi hota hai jo agar abhi yudh hua to usme ek atuhasik vinaash dekhne ko milega

Dark lord- chhod raha hu aapke praan. Jao aur mere ahsaanmand rahna jitni bhi jindagi jeeye utne me
Apne ander ka dar chhupate hue dark lord bola

“HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA” shataani hasi jo thodi der pehle dark lord ki gunj rahi thi vo ab guruji ke muh se nikalne lagi

Aur dark lord ko hava me utha liya guruji ne vo kab uske pass pahucha kab uska gala pakda aur kab hava me utha liya kisi ko pata tak nahi chala

Dark lord ghutan se chatpatane laga aur vaha se gayab hone ki kosis karne laga lekin guruji ne jo mayajal racha us se vo bach kar nikal nahi paa raha tha

“No resurrection this time” bolte hue guruji dark lord ke gale ko todne hi wale the ki ek roshini fail gaye. Etne tej safeed roshini thi ki na to dark lord ki aankh khul paye aur na guruji ki

Aur kab guruji ko hosh aaya to unhone khud ko us jungle se bahut door paya. Vo jamin par pade hue the aur kisi ke pair unke samne khade the….
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Dark lord- to ye thi aapki chaal ha? Mujhe time loop me fasa kar ghuma do aur apni dunia ko bacha lo? Lekin aap ek baat bhul rahe ho guruji

Guruji- aur vo kya hai?

Dark lord- main dark lord ban chuka hu, kaali shaktiya mere ander vaas hi nahi karti vo mere ander se janam leti hai esliye time loop bhi mujhe jada der tak nahi rok sakti

Guruji- aisa hai to kadam badhao apne aur apne aapko sacha sabit karo

Dark lord- sabdo ke her fer se koe fayda nahi hone wala. Main apke time loop ko tood sakta hu lekin todunga nahi. Aapko bhi to pata hona chahiye ki ab dark lord kya ban chuka hai, vo ab aapko bina chuhe hi hara sakta hai

Dark lord apni jagah se thoda piche hue aur aankhen band karke mantra padhne lage

Ek jhatke me pura mahool hi change ho gaya, asmaan me bilkul kaale badaal aa gaye, pure jungle upside down hone laga, aur bahut tej tej hawaye chalne lagi

Guruji ko apne pairo ko ek jagah rakhne me hi muskil feel hone lagi, apni talwar ko jamin me gaad kar vo uske sahare khade rakhne ki kosis karne lage

Jo unhone time loop ka ghera banya tha vo bhi totne laga aur dark lord dharti se thoda upar hawa me apni shaktiyo ko jodne laga

Guruji ne bhi situation ki najakat ko samjha aur hawao ke bahaav ko vapas dark lord ki taraf modne ka prayataran karne lage

Jisme vo kamyaab nahi ho pa rahe the kyuki yaha achai nahi thi, jo yaha mojud tha vo sab kaala hi tha jispar guruji chah kar bhi kuch kar nahi paa rahe the

Dheere dheere guruji ke samne wali jamin ukhadne lagi aur vaha ek bahut bada gadha ban gaya.

Es se pehle ki guruji usne samate vo bhi hawao me udne lage aur full speed me talwar ko dark lord ki taraf karte hue uski taraf badhne lage

His tarah thodi der pehle dark lord guruji ke pass ruk gaye the theek vaise hi guruji bhi uske pass ruk gaye bas fark etna tha ki dark lord apni marji se ruka tha vahi guruji ko kaali shaktiya rook rahi thi

Ek bahut bada kaala bavandar dark lord ke charo taraf fail gaya jisne guruji ko uske pass aane se rok diya tha

Bahut tej garmi aur hava se guruji ke kapde fatne lag gaye aur unhe majburi me apni jagah chhodni padi aur vo dark lord se piche hat gaye

“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA” ek khaufnaak hasi pure jungle me failne lagi jo badhti hi ja rahi thi kyuki ek ke baad ek ek ke baad ek dark lord ke clown bante chale gaye

Ab beech me guruji khade the aur unke charo taraf sirf dark lord hi dikh rahe the upar se mosasm aisa ho gaya tha ki sab kuch ujhaad dega

Charo taraf se ek sath guruji par hamla hone laga aur guruji bahut aasani se sabko maat dene lage

Lekin ye kya? Unpar to kuch asar hi nahi ho raha tha. Guruji ek ko marta to uski jagah dusra janam le leta dusre ko marta to tisra janam le leta

Bahut jaldi hi guruji samjh gaye gaye ki vo apne bharam se lad rahe hai aur vaha koe nahi hai. Ek kadam piche hote hue apni ungli ko halka sa talwar se kata aur khoon ki boond par ek mantra padha aur pure jungle me roshini fail gaye

Etne tej roshini hue ki sare ke sare clown gayab ho gaye aur dark lord jo aankhen band karke apna mayajal bicha raha tha uska bhi dhyan toot gaya aur sidha jamin par aakar geera

Dark lord- ahh ye aapke khoon ki mahak mujhe pagal bana rahi hai. Esko rok lijiye guruji kahi aisa na ho ki aapke sareer ki ek ek boond main pee jao aur apke sareer me sirf paani hi bach jaye

Katch katch katch karke aawaz aane lagi aur guruji ki talwar se andha dhun roshini nikalne lagi jo bahut teji se dark lord ke upar barasne lagi

Vo kali shaktiyo ka maalik roshini se kaise lad sakta tha? Khud hi aankhen khol kar vo roshini dekh bhi nahi pa raha tha unse bachna to bahut door ki baat thi

Usne ek hath upar karke guruji ka gala pakadne ki kosis ki door se hi lekin guruji se usko bhi kaat diya aur ab dheere dheere uski taraf badhne bhi lag gaya tha

Dark lord ne himmat juta kar apni pith dikha di guruji ko aur piche mud kar demons knife chalaye alag alag dishao me jo aakhiri me lage sidhe guruji ko hi

Guruji dark lord par etne jada focused the ki unhe dekha hi nahi ki usne kya kiya hai

Jaise hi demons knife guruji ko lage unka dhayan bhatka aur dark lord ne mokke ka fayda utha kar apne aapko gayab kar liya

Guruji ko pata tha dark lord ek kapti insaan hai aur vo etni jaldi madaan chhod kar to bilkul bhi nahi bhagega esliye hi guruji ne charo taraf roshini faila di

Eske do karan the ek to ye ki dark lord nahi aa payega dusra karaan tha es illusion se bahar nikalna

Apni angelic power ka use guruji kaali shaktiyo ko dabane ke liye kar rahe the aur unki ye chal kamyaab bhi ho rahi thi

Kyuki junge ka ek sira unhe dikhae dene lag gaya jise deke kar ek baar fir guruji ka dhayan bhatak gaya. Vo khud vaha se bina kisi nirnay nikale nahi jana chahte the

Agar vo aise hi yaha se chale gaye aur baad me dark lord ne kisi public place par hamla kar diya to bahut musibaat ho sakti thi

Es se pehle guruji koe mantra padhte unke samne rakshaho ki fauz dikhae dene lagi jo ek powerful gharane ke rakshah the lekin unse ladna guruji ke liye koe badi baat nahi thi

Aur es baar sayam rakhte hue ek baar me hi guruji ne sabko jala kar raakh kar diya

Apni shaktiyo ka istemaal karte hue unhe aag jalaye aur ek line bana di. Jo jo us line ko cross karte aag me sama jate

Abhi sare rakshah us aag ki bheet chade lekin fir vo aag apne aap hi shant ho gaye. Guruji ko gyaan ho gaya tha ki dark lord abhi bhi vahi hai bas dikhae nahi de raha

Esliye antaratma se guruji ne dark lord ko doond nikala aur use bahar nikalne par vivas kar diya

Ek baar fir dono aapne samne the lekin halaat change ho chuki thi

Dark lord ke samne aate hi usne guruji par betahasa hamle karne suru kar diye jiska jawab guruji de nahi paye aur vo gayal hone lage

Pehle se hi demon knife ki vajah se uske sareer par chhot aa gaye thi aur ab dark lord ki kaali shaktiya unke sareer ke sath khilvaad karne lagi

Dark lord jo thodi der pehle apna aadha bhi use nahi kar raha tha ab puri takaat ke sath guruji ke samne aa chuka tha

Guruji koe hamla karne ke liye tayar hote us se pehle hi dark lord ke war unke sareer par lag jate aur unka dhayan bhang ho jata

Unke aas pass kaale saaye mandarane lage aur unhe ghutan feel hone lagi

Dark lord- meri hasi mazak ko aapne meri kamjori samjh liya tha guruji?
Main etni shaktiya leke aaya hu ki aapko, aapke heaven ko, aapke supreme ko aur aapke lucifer ko akela hara sakta hu. Trailer to aapne dekh hi liya hoga aap apna hathiyaar tak nahi utha pa rahe mere samne

Guruji jinki halaat ab kuch theek nahi lag rahi thi vo bas kisi tarah apne pairo par khade hue the abhi tak lekin unhe dekh kar lag raha tha ki agar aisa hi chalta raha to vo jada der khade nahi rah payenge


“Hey parampitama mujhe maaf karna”

Apne man me unhone apne bhagwano se maafi mangi
Kyu?
Sayad ab vo aisa kuch karne wale the jo unhe nahi karna chahiye tha ya fir aisa jis se puri ki puri story hi change ho sakti thi

Dark lord- koe nahi aayega aaj aapki madad ke liye
Aaj aapko marna hi padeeggggggggg…..

Guruji ke chehre aur aankhon ke badalte kaale rang ko dekhte hue dark lord ke sabad uske muh ke ander hi rah gaye. Chehre par pehli baar sikan dikhaye dene lagi uske aur ek boond pasine ki unke mathe se tapak gaye

Dark lord- na….naahhhnahi ye nahi ho sakta
Jabaan ne bhi uske sath bagawat kar di thi

Kyuki samne ab heaven ka rakhwala nahi khada tha sakshaat ek yamraaj dikhae de raha tha

Guruji ke pure sareer ka rang bilkul kaala pad gaya tha aur aankhon ke pass vohi kaala jala hua rang aa chuka tha jo dark magic use karne par aata hai

Guruji- tune pucha tha na kya plan bana rakha hai maine tujhe harane ka?
Guruji ki aawaz jaise gunjane lagi pure jungle me jo dark lord ke bhi rongte khade kar dene ke liye kaafi thi

Guruji- main tujhe tere hi tarike se haraunga aur sirf haraunga hi nahi balki tujhe aaj main mukti bhi dunga
Aaj aisa koe shraap ya aashirwad tere koe kaam nahi aa payega. Aaj mere kahar se tujhe samav supreme bhi nahi bacha payega

Guruji ke ek ek sabad dark lord ki halat patli kar dene ke bahut jada the vahi jo rakshah dark lord ne bulaye the vo to kab ke madaan chhod kar bhaag chuke the

Unke samne unka kaal jo khada tha maut ban kar aur aisa hi kuch haal dark lord ka bhi tha. Usko to apni aankhon par yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha

Kaise guruji jo achai ka prateek mane jate the, jinhone royal blood ko acha galat sikhaya tha, humesha jindagi ke favour me rahte the vo aaj khud kaali shaktiya liye khade the

Guruji(tej aur bhaari aawaz me) ab konsi chaal chalega? Kya tujhe lagta hai ki teri koe bhi chaal mujh par kamyaab ho payegi?

Kya tu mujhe hara sakta hai? Harana to chhod kya tu mujhse bach kar nikal sakta hai yaha se? Aisa lag to nahi raha ki tere praan ab kisi layak bache hai esliye unhe tumse chhina hi behtar hoga

Dark lord ke chehre par dar saaf jhalak raha tha. Vo khud black magic ka bahut bada gyaata tha aur guruji ko dekh kar hi vo samjh chuka tha ki kis had tak kaala jaadu unke ragoo me bah raha hai aur aise halaat me vo bilkul bhi guruji se ladna nahi chahta tha

Halanki ye bhi sach hi tha ki guruji aur dark lord ki shaktiya ek dusre se bilkul bhi kam nahi thi fir bhi dark lord dar raha tha

Kyu?

Kyuki guruji ke sath achai bhi thi aur jab achae aur burai ek sath ek jagah judti hai to fir sirf aur sirf vinaas hi hota hai jo agar abhi yudh hua to usme ek atuhasik vinaash dekhne ko milega

Dark lord- chhod raha hu aapke praan. Jao aur mere ahsaanmand rahna jitni bhi jindagi jeeye utne me
Apne ander ka dar chhupate hue dark lord bola

“HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA” shataani hasi jo thodi der pehle dark lord ki gunj rahi thi vo ab guruji ke muh se nikalne lagi

Aur dark lord ko hava me utha liya guruji ne vo kab uske pass pahucha kab uska gala pakda aur kab hava me utha liya kisi ko pata tak nahi chala

Dark lord ghutan se chatpatane laga aur vaha se gayab hone ki kosis karne laga lekin guruji ne jo mayajal racha us se vo bach kar nikal nahi paa raha tha

“No resurrection this time” bolte hue guruji dark lord ke gale ko todne hi wale the ki ek roshini fail gaye. Etne tej safeed roshini thi ki na to dark lord ki aankh khul paye aur na guruji ki

Aur kab guruji ko hosh aaya to unhone khud ko us jungle se bahut door paya. Vo jamin par pade hue the aur kisi ke pair unke samne khade the….
Awesome update bhai

Yea thora unknowing he, guruji ek angel he firbhi unke undar dark lord jitna kali saktiya he, kese? Mene jitna jana he angel ek pure white energy se bhara soul hota he, agar usme 1% bhi black energy ho to wo angel nehi ban sakta fir guruji kese ek angel ho sakte he or usse bhi bada sawal guruji ke andar black energy ai kese?

Umid karta hu is sawal ka apke pass undebatable answer hoga.

No doubt update bohot achha tha. Ummid karta hu mere sawal apko nirash nehi karenge.

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Awesome update bhai

Yea thora unknowing he, guruji ek angel he firbhi unke undar dark lord jitna kali saktiya he, kese? Mene jitna jana he angel ek pure white energy se bhara soul hota he, agar usme 1% bhi black energy ho to wo angel nehi ban sakta fir guruji kese ek angel ho sakte he or usse bhi bada sawal guruji ke andar black energy ai kese?

Umid karta hu is sawal ka apke pass undebatable answer hoga.

No doubt update bohot achha tha. Ummid karta hu mere sawal apko nirash nehi karenge.

Please keep writing

Waiting for next
Guruji angel kab ban gaye?
Vo to angels ke teacher hai khud angel thode hi hai
 
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