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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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Sabko acha khasa suroor ho chuka tha aur ab bari thi akhiri destination ki jo tha raat ko nadi me nahana

Vo log nadi ke kinare pahuch chuke the aur sari ladkiya usme kood bhi gaye thi sivay madhuri ke

Vo thoda hickicha rahi thi. Ek to vo suit salwar me thi aur dusra lucifer bhi unke sang me tha jiske samne pani me jane se unhe saram aa rahi thi

Ashmita- common ma’am enjoy na. Aisa din humari bhaag dood bhari jindagi ke kaha hi aata hai?

Madhuri- you guys carry on. Main kapde bhi nahi laye aur mujhe pani se dar bhi lagggghhhahhhhhhh

Vo aage kuch bol pati us se pehle hi lucifer ne unhe gaud me utha kar pani me fek diya

Hahahhahahhahahha charo taraf jor jor se hasi ki aawaz gunj gaye

Inaaya- ab nahi lagega aapko dar pani me hehehe

Madhuri achanak hue hamle se thodi ghabra gaye thi esliye khud ko normal karne me unko thoda time lag gaya

Apne baalo ko sawarte hue dilkas ada se vo lucifer ko dekhne lagi jis par lucifer bas muskura diya aur khud bhi pani me kood gaya

Anisha- kitna thanda hai ye pani aur saaf bhi. Sare paap aaj hi dood dega ye pani

Tara- paap ka to pata nahi lekin man kitna shant ho gaya hai esme aate hi. Bilkul alag hi feel ho raha hai

Ashmita- sahi kah rahi ho didi. Thank you inaaya

Inaaya- anything for my loves sweetheart

Lucifer- koe mere liye bhi kuch kar diya karo? Kya main kisi ka love nahi hu kya?

Ashmita- dunia yaad rakhegi ki lucifer ki dost ko lucifer se etna pyaar tha ki koe had nahi chhodi usne

Lucifer- hayeee main mar jau etna pyaar dekh kar

Anisha- didi thode dhayan se. Ye jo dikhta hai vaisa hai nahi

Lucifer- fuck… kya ye taana tha? Ha ye tana tha but ye tana kyu tha?

Ashmita- because you deserve it. Totally deserve it

Tara- i agree

Lucifer- aap to agree karoge hi. Khud par kabu rahta nahi aapka aur badnaam har baar mujhe hona padta hai

Tara- shut up. Ek second me haya ki ek parat ban gaye tara ke chehre par aur use vo sab yaad aane laga jab vo lucifer me etna kho gaye thi ki ashu ne dono ko dekh liya tha aur vo bhi ek baar nahi kae baar

Madhuri- kya ho gaya? Why you’re blushing ?

Lucifer- ye kya bataegi? Main batata hu aapko

Ashmita- lucifer maar khayega ab tu

Lucifer- ye kya baat hue? Kya yehi tha tera pyaar?

Ashmita- shut up

Inaaya- ye galat baat hai. Sab ke sab mere lucifer ko shut up karte ja rahe hai

Lucifer- tum hi to meri apni ho. Baki sab to jalte hai mujhse aur tumse kyuki etne kam samay me bahut mahnat karke maine tumhre figure me nikaar la diya

Inaaya- shhuutt upp yaar lucifer

“Hahahhahahhahaha” “ aur le eski support” hahahha aur fir sab hasne lag gaye

Lucifer- to maam hua ye tha ki ye jo pagal ladki hai na(ashmita) esko bilkul bhi manners ka nahi pata. Ab aap hi batao jab do log…..

Ashmita- lucifer bahut marungi tujhe bata rahi hu main pehle hi

Anisha- are hua kya hai koe ye bataega?

Lucifer- main bata to raha hu lekin ye bolna kaha de rahi hai?

Tara bechari ka pura chehra gulabi pad chuka tha. Nashe me to vo bhi thi lekin fir bhi bahut sarm feel ho rahi thi use. Ab to aur jada ho rahi thi kyuki ashmita se uski es baare me kabhi koe baat nahi hue aur abhi to ashmita ke sath sath anisha bhi vaha mojud thi

Ashmita- you dont need to feel bad didi. Ye to hai hi kutta kuch bhi bol deta hai

Lucifer- brw she isn’t feeling bad. Vo to tujhse naraj hai jo har baar kabab me haddi ban jati hai

Inaaya- are bas bahut ho gaya ab. You both need to relax nahi to main tum dono ko kahi ek kamre me band kar dungi fir jitna marji lad lena

Lucifer- sath me ek bacha aur nikal jayega fir

Ashmita gusse me lucifer ke upar kuddi lekin lucifer to bahut ache se janta tha ashmita ko esliye pehle to aasani se uske war se bacha fir apne bahoo me bhar kar use pani ke ander leke chala gaya aur jabardasti bahut der tak ander hi dubki marva kar rakhe rakha

Ashmita- kuttte chhod mujhe mujhe etni jaldi nahi marna hai
Bahar aate hi hath aur muh dono ek sath chalate hue boli

Lucifer- pata hai mujhe. Mujhe maar kar hi maregi tu*****


Heaven ka mahool bilkul shant tha halke kaale badal aa chuke the jo bata rahe the ki shaam dhal aaye hai aur dheere dheere hawaye chal rahi thi

Guruji en hawao me kuch galat sense kar chuke the aur esliye hi vo apne aas pass dekhte hue aage badhe ja rahe the. Es waqt bache khel khood kar gharo me laut chuke the aur log apne ghar me hi apne apne kaamo ke busy ho chuke the

Chalte chalte guruji heaven se kafi door nikal chuke the aur ab unhe kaali shaktiya bahut kareeb se feel hone lagi thi esliye apne aap ko hathiyaar se tayar kar liya tha unhone aur ek shield bhi bana liya tha khud ke liye

Vo es baat se khush bhi the ki heaven me ye sab nahi ho raha jiski vajah se masoom safe the aur thoda chinta me bhi the ki etne kareeb aisa hona bilkul bhi subh sankeet nahi hai

Ek jungle ke suruvaat par vo ruk gaye aur apne aakhen band karke dhayan lagane lage lekin safalta mili nahi unhe kyuki kali shaktiyo ka parbhaav bahut jada bhad gaya tha

Aankh khol kar kuch mantra padhe lekin unse bhi jada kuch fayda hua nahi unhe kuch kuch bhi samne nahi aaya

Jab apne mantra khali jate dekhe to unhe thoda thoda idea ho gaya tha ki konsi musibaat yaha ho sakti thi lekin piche hatne ka to sawal hi paida nahi hota tha

Esliye jungle ke ander parvesh kar gaye jaise hi vo ander ghuse pure ke pure jungle ka naksa hi badalne laga. Ye koe mayajal tha jis me vo ghus chuke the

Yaha par ab unhe gyaan ho chuka tha ki ye koe jungle nahi hai bas aankhon ka bharam paida karne ke liye aisa kiya gaya hai aur es se bahar nikalna bilkul bhi aasan nahi hai

Vo jis bhi taraf mud rahe the vo jhatke ke sath pehle wali direction me badal ja rahi thi. Matlab ki pair to chal rahe the lekin aage nahi bad pa rahe the vo

Aisa lag raha tha jaise vo ek hi jagah par hi etne der se ghum rahe hai

Unhone firse dhayan laga kar ek mantra padha aur es baar unko ek chehra dikhne laga. Ek aisa chehra jise vo bahut ache se pahchante the.

“DARK LORD” aankhen kholte hi guruji bole aur tabhi dark lord unke samne prakat ho gaya

Shataani muskaan uske chehre par saji hue thi aur aaj chehre ka ek bhaag kaala bhi pada hua tha jo saaf saaf bata raha tha ki kis had tak usne kaali shaktiya use ki hai aaj

Guruji- sukriya

Dark lord- mujhe laga maafi ki bheekh mangoge aap lekin ye kya? Sukriya? Kis liye?

Guruji- masoomo se door rakhne ke liye es ladae ko

Dark lord- aaj ke liye to door rahegi lekin kal ye ladae un sab jagah tak failegi jaha achai mojud hai

Guruji- pata hai na us achai ke akhiri kinare par kaun khada hua hai?

Dark lord- bahut ache se pata hai. Esliye to aapki madad chahiye. Aapne es dharti par aane wali har musibaat ka samadhan doond rakha hoga to jahir hai aapko ye bhi pata hoga ki agar vo achai burai me badli to use kaise roka ja sakta hai

Guruji- agar mujhe lucifer ke rokne ka tarika pata hoga to ye tumne kaise soch liya ki maine tumhre bare me kuch plan nahi bana rakha hoga?

Dark lord- mujhe maloom hai aapne kuch na kuch to dimag lagaya hi hoga esliye to kaali shaktiya apne sath laya hu. Aap unka estemaal to karne se rahe aur na hi mera pyaara bada bhai karega. Lekin main? Main un kaali shaktiyo ka maha gyaata aapko un shaktiyo se hi mukti dilaunga. Wada raha aapse

Guruji- ek kahani sunata hu bahut rochak hai bahut kam log jante hai eske bare me par aaj tumhe bhi batane ka dil kar raha hai

Dark lord- dil ko rokna nahi chahiye guruji. Boliye aaram se boliye. Humare pass waqt hi waqt hai es jagah koe nahi aa sakta. Aap meri mayavi dunia me ho abhi esliye tension lene ki koe jarurat nahi hai

Guruji- ek bahut shaktishali angel hua karta tha. Etna ki pure bharmand ko apne kadmo me jhuka sakta tha lekin kismat ko kuch aur hi manjur tha, jo sanskaar ko apne kadmo me jhuka sakta tha vo khudke kadmo me hi jhuk gaya. Lekin achi baat ye hue ki eske bavjud vo kamjor nahi pada. Thode waqt tak vo jarur bharm me raha lekin fir jab vo khada hua to pehle se bhi hazar ghuna shaktishali hoke bahar aaya. Na keval rakshah jagat balki bhagwan bhi us se khauf khane lage. Har koe uske samne jane se katrane lage lekin fir kuch aisa hua jo nahi hona chahiye tha. Ek dusra angel jo paida hi sayad tabhai machane ke liye hua tha vo aa gaya. Vo sochta tha ki mere pass kali shaktiyo ka sara gyaan hai aur un shaktiyo ko use karke vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai, kisi ko bhi hara sakta hai lekin vo ek bahut mahtavpuran baat bhul gaya ki jin kali shaktiyo ke dam par vo etna uchalta hai unka baap to pehle wale angel ke pass hai jo ab uska ek atoot hissa ban chuka hai. Vo nasamjh fir bhi nahi samjha aur bhid gaya us se fir kya ache wale angel ne etni jagah se faada use ki koe silne wala tak nahi mila. Aur ant me jaisa humesha hota hai achai ki burai par jeet ho gaye

Dark lord- waw waw waw maja aa gaya guruji kya hi story thi. Bilkul real jaisi lag rahi hai. Acha wala angel to bilkul mere jaisa lag raha hai to matlab meri jeet paki hai

Guruji- jo acha hai uski jeet to pakki hai hi
Aur ek dam se dharti hilane lagi. Es se penle ki dark lord khch react kar pata us jungle ke pedo ki lato ne usko jakad liya

Uske dono hatho ko pedo ki tahniyo ne pakad liya aur use hawa me utha liya

Guruji ne apni sword nikali aur door se hi hawa me ek bahut tej war kiya. Aas pass ki sari hawa jaise ek sath jud gaye ho aur vo sari ki sari full speed me dark lord ke sareer me ja lagi.

Uske pure sareer ko peedo ne pakad rakha tha esliye vo bilkul hil dol nahi pa raha tha aur ek chhoti si ahh nikal gaye jab full pressure ke sath air uske sareer se takrai

Apne pairo ko hawao me ghumate hue ek aur war kiya guruji ne aur vo bhi sateek jagah par laga lekin ab tak dark lord bilkul sambhal chuka tha aur guruji ke last attack ko to jaise usne apne ander absorb kar liya tha

Apne hontho par ek muskaan laye usne guruji ki taraf dekha fir uske sareer se chhote chhote chaku nikalne lage aur agle hi pal vo bilkul aajad ho chuka tha

Hatho ke chamchamati devil sword aa chuki thi jo thi to kale rang ki lekin chamak aise rahi thi ki samne wale ko andha bhi kar sakti hai sath me uski length bhi ek above normal insaan ke height se kahi jada thi

Dark lord- bina kisi reason ke apni etni energy waste kar di na aapne? Kuch natija nikla?

Guruji- natija kya niklega vo bhi jaldi hi tumhe pata lag jayega
Aur guruji bhi apne talwar liya tayar ho chuke the

Fight position me dono aa chuke the jaha dark lord thoda utawala ho raha tha vahi guruji apne position me khada bariki se uske activities ko jaan rahe the

Dark lord laparvahi se guruji ki taraf badhe lekin guruji jaise khade the vaise hi khade rahe. Halka sa bhi movement nahi kiya unhone aur eski vajah se hi dark lord ko thoda sanka hue aur bilkul guruji ke pass aakar vo ruk gaya

“TIME LOOP” etna hi bol paya dark lord kyuki samne khad guruji ka muskurata hua chehra uske sare sawalo ke jawab de raha tha
Bahut badhiya update hai
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Sabko acha khasa suroor ho chuka tha aur ab bari thi akhiri destination ki jo tha raat ko nadi me nahana

Vo log nadi ke kinare pahuch chuke the aur sari ladkiya usme kood bhi gaye thi sivay madhuri ke

Vo thoda hickicha rahi thi. Ek to vo suit salwar me thi aur dusra lucifer bhi unke sang me tha jiske samne pani me jane se unhe saram aa rahi thi

Ashmita- common ma’am enjoy na. Aisa din humari bhaag dood bhari jindagi ke kaha hi aata hai?

Madhuri- you guys carry on. Main kapde bhi nahi laye aur mujhe pani se dar bhi lagggghhhahhhhhhh

Vo aage kuch bol pati us se pehle hi lucifer ne unhe gaud me utha kar pani me fek diya

Hahahhahahhahahha charo taraf jor jor se hasi ki aawaz gunj gaye

Inaaya- ab nahi lagega aapko dar pani me hehehe

Madhuri achanak hue hamle se thodi ghabra gaye thi esliye khud ko normal karne me unko thoda time lag gaya

Apne baalo ko sawarte hue dilkas ada se vo lucifer ko dekhne lagi jis par lucifer bas muskura diya aur khud bhi pani me kood gaya

Anisha- kitna thanda hai ye pani aur saaf bhi. Sare paap aaj hi dood dega ye pani

Tara- paap ka to pata nahi lekin man kitna shant ho gaya hai esme aate hi. Bilkul alag hi feel ho raha hai

Ashmita- sahi kah rahi ho didi. Thank you inaaya

Inaaya- anything for my loves sweetheart

Lucifer- koe mere liye bhi kuch kar diya karo? Kya main kisi ka love nahi hu kya?

Ashmita- dunia yaad rakhegi ki lucifer ki dost ko lucifer se etna pyaar tha ki koe had nahi chhodi usne

Lucifer- hayeee main mar jau etna pyaar dekh kar

Anisha- didi thode dhayan se. Ye jo dikhta hai vaisa hai nahi

Lucifer- fuck… kya ye taana tha? Ha ye tana tha but ye tana kyu tha?

Ashmita- because you deserve it. Totally deserve it

Tara- i agree

Lucifer- aap to agree karoge hi. Khud par kabu rahta nahi aapka aur badnaam har baar mujhe hona padta hai

Tara- shut up. Ek second me haya ki ek parat ban gaye tara ke chehre par aur use vo sab yaad aane laga jab vo lucifer me etna kho gaye thi ki ashu ne dono ko dekh liya tha aur vo bhi ek baar nahi kae baar

Madhuri- kya ho gaya? Why you’re blushing ?

Lucifer- ye kya bataegi? Main batata hu aapko

Ashmita- lucifer maar khayega ab tu

Lucifer- ye kya baat hue? Kya yehi tha tera pyaar?

Ashmita- shut up

Inaaya- ye galat baat hai. Sab ke sab mere lucifer ko shut up karte ja rahe hai

Lucifer- tum hi to meri apni ho. Baki sab to jalte hai mujhse aur tumse kyuki etne kam samay me bahut mahnat karke maine tumhre figure me nikaar la diya

Inaaya- shhuutt upp yaar lucifer

“Hahahhahahhahaha” “ aur le eski support” hahahha aur fir sab hasne lag gaye

Lucifer- to maam hua ye tha ki ye jo pagal ladki hai na(ashmita) esko bilkul bhi manners ka nahi pata. Ab aap hi batao jab do log…..

Ashmita- lucifer bahut marungi tujhe bata rahi hu main pehle hi

Anisha- are hua kya hai koe ye bataega?

Lucifer- main bata to raha hu lekin ye bolna kaha de rahi hai?

Tara bechari ka pura chehra gulabi pad chuka tha. Nashe me to vo bhi thi lekin fir bhi bahut sarm feel ho rahi thi use. Ab to aur jada ho rahi thi kyuki ashmita se uski es baare me kabhi koe baat nahi hue aur abhi to ashmita ke sath sath anisha bhi vaha mojud thi

Ashmita- you dont need to feel bad didi. Ye to hai hi kutta kuch bhi bol deta hai

Lucifer- brw she isn’t feeling bad. Vo to tujhse naraj hai jo har baar kabab me haddi ban jati hai

Inaaya- are bas bahut ho gaya ab. You both need to relax nahi to main tum dono ko kahi ek kamre me band kar dungi fir jitna marji lad lena

Lucifer- sath me ek bacha aur nikal jayega fir

Ashmita gusse me lucifer ke upar kuddi lekin lucifer to bahut ache se janta tha ashmita ko esliye pehle to aasani se uske war se bacha fir apne bahoo me bhar kar use pani ke ander leke chala gaya aur jabardasti bahut der tak ander hi dubki marva kar rakhe rakha

Ashmita- kuttte chhod mujhe mujhe etni jaldi nahi marna hai
Bahar aate hi hath aur muh dono ek sath chalate hue boli

Lucifer- pata hai mujhe. Mujhe maar kar hi maregi tu*****


Heaven ka mahool bilkul shant tha halke kaale badal aa chuke the jo bata rahe the ki shaam dhal aaye hai aur dheere dheere hawaye chal rahi thi

Guruji en hawao me kuch galat sense kar chuke the aur esliye hi vo apne aas pass dekhte hue aage badhe ja rahe the. Es waqt bache khel khood kar gharo me laut chuke the aur log apne ghar me hi apne apne kaamo ke busy ho chuke the

Chalte chalte guruji heaven se kafi door nikal chuke the aur ab unhe kaali shaktiya bahut kareeb se feel hone lagi thi esliye apne aap ko hathiyaar se tayar kar liya tha unhone aur ek shield bhi bana liya tha khud ke liye

Vo es baat se khush bhi the ki heaven me ye sab nahi ho raha jiski vajah se masoom safe the aur thoda chinta me bhi the ki etne kareeb aisa hona bilkul bhi subh sankeet nahi hai

Ek jungle ke suruvaat par vo ruk gaye aur apne aakhen band karke dhayan lagane lage lekin safalta mili nahi unhe kyuki kali shaktiyo ka parbhaav bahut jada bhad gaya tha

Aankh khol kar kuch mantra padhe lekin unse bhi jada kuch fayda hua nahi unhe kuch kuch bhi samne nahi aaya

Jab apne mantra khali jate dekhe to unhe thoda thoda idea ho gaya tha ki konsi musibaat yaha ho sakti thi lekin piche hatne ka to sawal hi paida nahi hota tha

Esliye jungle ke ander parvesh kar gaye jaise hi vo ander ghuse pure ke pure jungle ka naksa hi badalne laga. Ye koe mayajal tha jis me vo ghus chuke the

Yaha par ab unhe gyaan ho chuka tha ki ye koe jungle nahi hai bas aankhon ka bharam paida karne ke liye aisa kiya gaya hai aur es se bahar nikalna bilkul bhi aasan nahi hai

Vo jis bhi taraf mud rahe the vo jhatke ke sath pehle wali direction me badal ja rahi thi. Matlab ki pair to chal rahe the lekin aage nahi bad pa rahe the vo

Aisa lag raha tha jaise vo ek hi jagah par hi etne der se ghum rahe hai

Unhone firse dhayan laga kar ek mantra padha aur es baar unko ek chehra dikhne laga. Ek aisa chehra jise vo bahut ache se pahchante the.

“DARK LORD” aankhen kholte hi guruji bole aur tabhi dark lord unke samne prakat ho gaya

Shataani muskaan uske chehre par saji hue thi aur aaj chehre ka ek bhaag kaala bhi pada hua tha jo saaf saaf bata raha tha ki kis had tak usne kaali shaktiya use ki hai aaj

Guruji- sukriya

Dark lord- mujhe laga maafi ki bheekh mangoge aap lekin ye kya? Sukriya? Kis liye?

Guruji- masoomo se door rakhne ke liye es ladae ko

Dark lord- aaj ke liye to door rahegi lekin kal ye ladae un sab jagah tak failegi jaha achai mojud hai

Guruji- pata hai na us achai ke akhiri kinare par kaun khada hua hai?

Dark lord- bahut ache se pata hai. Esliye to aapki madad chahiye. Aapne es dharti par aane wali har musibaat ka samadhan doond rakha hoga to jahir hai aapko ye bhi pata hoga ki agar vo achai burai me badli to use kaise roka ja sakta hai

Guruji- agar mujhe lucifer ke rokne ka tarika pata hoga to ye tumne kaise soch liya ki maine tumhre bare me kuch plan nahi bana rakha hoga?

Dark lord- mujhe maloom hai aapne kuch na kuch to dimag lagaya hi hoga esliye to kaali shaktiya apne sath laya hu. Aap unka estemaal to karne se rahe aur na hi mera pyaara bada bhai karega. Lekin main? Main un kaali shaktiyo ka maha gyaata aapko un shaktiyo se hi mukti dilaunga. Wada raha aapse

Guruji- ek kahani sunata hu bahut rochak hai bahut kam log jante hai eske bare me par aaj tumhe bhi batane ka dil kar raha hai

Dark lord- dil ko rokna nahi chahiye guruji. Boliye aaram se boliye. Humare pass waqt hi waqt hai es jagah koe nahi aa sakta. Aap meri mayavi dunia me ho abhi esliye tension lene ki koe jarurat nahi hai

Guruji- ek bahut shaktishali angel hua karta tha. Etna ki pure bharmand ko apne kadmo me jhuka sakta tha lekin kismat ko kuch aur hi manjur tha, jo sanskaar ko apne kadmo me jhuka sakta tha vo khudke kadmo me hi jhuk gaya. Lekin achi baat ye hue ki eske bavjud vo kamjor nahi pada. Thode waqt tak vo jarur bharm me raha lekin fir jab vo khada hua to pehle se bhi hazar ghuna shaktishali hoke bahar aaya. Na keval rakshah jagat balki bhagwan bhi us se khauf khane lage. Har koe uske samne jane se katrane lage lekin fir kuch aisa hua jo nahi hona chahiye tha. Ek dusra angel jo paida hi sayad tabhai machane ke liye hua tha vo aa gaya. Vo sochta tha ki mere pass kali shaktiyo ka sara gyaan hai aur un shaktiyo ko use karke vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai, kisi ko bhi hara sakta hai lekin vo ek bahut mahtavpuran baat bhul gaya ki jin kali shaktiyo ke dam par vo etna uchalta hai unka baap to pehle wale angel ke pass hai jo ab uska ek atoot hissa ban chuka hai. Vo nasamjh fir bhi nahi samjha aur bhid gaya us se fir kya ache wale angel ne etni jagah se faada use ki koe silne wala tak nahi mila. Aur ant me jaisa humesha hota hai achai ki burai par jeet ho gaye

Dark lord- waw waw waw maja aa gaya guruji kya hi story thi. Bilkul real jaisi lag rahi hai. Acha wala angel to bilkul mere jaisa lag raha hai to matlab meri jeet paki hai

Guruji- jo acha hai uski jeet to pakki hai hi
Aur ek dam se dharti hilane lagi. Es se penle ki dark lord khch react kar pata us jungle ke pedo ki lato ne usko jakad liya

Uske dono hatho ko pedo ki tahniyo ne pakad liya aur use hawa me utha liya

Guruji ne apni sword nikali aur door se hi hawa me ek bahut tej war kiya. Aas pass ki sari hawa jaise ek sath jud gaye ho aur vo sari ki sari full speed me dark lord ke sareer me ja lagi.

Uske pure sareer ko peedo ne pakad rakha tha esliye vo bilkul hil dol nahi pa raha tha aur ek chhoti si ahh nikal gaye jab full pressure ke sath air uske sareer se takrai

Apne pairo ko hawao me ghumate hue ek aur war kiya guruji ne aur vo bhi sateek jagah par laga lekin ab tak dark lord bilkul sambhal chuka tha aur guruji ke last attack ko to jaise usne apne ander absorb kar liya tha

Apne hontho par ek muskaan laye usne guruji ki taraf dekha fir uske sareer se chhote chhote chaku nikalne lage aur agle hi pal vo bilkul aajad ho chuka tha

Hatho ke chamchamati devil sword aa chuki thi jo thi to kale rang ki lekin chamak aise rahi thi ki samne wale ko andha bhi kar sakti hai sath me uski length bhi ek above normal insaan ke height se kahi jada thi

Dark lord- bina kisi reason ke apni etni energy waste kar di na aapne? Kuch natija nikla?

Guruji- natija kya niklega vo bhi jaldi hi tumhe pata lag jayega
Aur guruji bhi apne talwar liya tayar ho chuke the

Fight position me dono aa chuke the jaha dark lord thoda utawala ho raha tha vahi guruji apne position me khada bariki se uske activities ko jaan rahe the

Dark lord laparvahi se guruji ki taraf badhe lekin guruji jaise khade the vaise hi khade rahe. Halka sa bhi movement nahi kiya unhone aur eski vajah se hi dark lord ko thoda sanka hue aur bilkul guruji ke pass aakar vo ruk gaya

“TIME LOOP” etna hi bol paya dark lord kyuki samne khad guruji ka muskurata hua chehra uske sare sawalo ke jawab de raha tha
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
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Sabko acha khasa suroor ho chuka tha aur ab bari thi akhiri destination ki jo tha raat ko nadi me nahana

Vo log nadi ke kinare pahuch chuke the aur sari ladkiya usme kood bhi gaye thi sivay madhuri ke

Vo thoda hickicha rahi thi. Ek to vo suit salwar me thi aur dusra lucifer bhi unke sang me tha jiske samne pani me jane se unhe saram aa rahi thi

Ashmita- common ma’am enjoy na. Aisa din humari bhaag dood bhari jindagi ke kaha hi aata hai?

Madhuri- you guys carry on. Main kapde bhi nahi laye aur mujhe pani se dar bhi lagggghhhahhhhhhh

Vo aage kuch bol pati us se pehle hi lucifer ne unhe gaud me utha kar pani me fek diya

Hahahhahahhahahha charo taraf jor jor se hasi ki aawaz gunj gaye

Inaaya- ab nahi lagega aapko dar pani me hehehe

Madhuri achanak hue hamle se thodi ghabra gaye thi esliye khud ko normal karne me unko thoda time lag gaya

Apne baalo ko sawarte hue dilkas ada se vo lucifer ko dekhne lagi jis par lucifer bas muskura diya aur khud bhi pani me kood gaya

Anisha- kitna thanda hai ye pani aur saaf bhi. Sare paap aaj hi dood dega ye pani

Tara- paap ka to pata nahi lekin man kitna shant ho gaya hai esme aate hi. Bilkul alag hi feel ho raha hai

Ashmita- sahi kah rahi ho didi. Thank you inaaya

Inaaya- anything for my loves sweetheart

Lucifer- koe mere liye bhi kuch kar diya karo? Kya main kisi ka love nahi hu kya?

Ashmita- dunia yaad rakhegi ki lucifer ki dost ko lucifer se etna pyaar tha ki koe had nahi chhodi usne

Lucifer- hayeee main mar jau etna pyaar dekh kar

Anisha- didi thode dhayan se. Ye jo dikhta hai vaisa hai nahi

Lucifer- fuck… kya ye taana tha? Ha ye tana tha but ye tana kyu tha?

Ashmita- because you deserve it. Totally deserve it

Tara- i agree

Lucifer- aap to agree karoge hi. Khud par kabu rahta nahi aapka aur badnaam har baar mujhe hona padta hai

Tara- shut up. Ek second me haya ki ek parat ban gaye tara ke chehre par aur use vo sab yaad aane laga jab vo lucifer me etna kho gaye thi ki ashu ne dono ko dekh liya tha aur vo bhi ek baar nahi kae baar

Madhuri- kya ho gaya? Why you’re blushing ?

Lucifer- ye kya bataegi? Main batata hu aapko

Ashmita- lucifer maar khayega ab tu

Lucifer- ye kya baat hue? Kya yehi tha tera pyaar?

Ashmita- shut up

Inaaya- ye galat baat hai. Sab ke sab mere lucifer ko shut up karte ja rahe hai

Lucifer- tum hi to meri apni ho. Baki sab to jalte hai mujhse aur tumse kyuki etne kam samay me bahut mahnat karke maine tumhre figure me nikaar la diya

Inaaya- shhuutt upp yaar lucifer

“Hahahhahahhahaha” “ aur le eski support” hahahha aur fir sab hasne lag gaye

Lucifer- to maam hua ye tha ki ye jo pagal ladki hai na(ashmita) esko bilkul bhi manners ka nahi pata. Ab aap hi batao jab do log…..

Ashmita- lucifer bahut marungi tujhe bata rahi hu main pehle hi

Anisha- are hua kya hai koe ye bataega?

Lucifer- main bata to raha hu lekin ye bolna kaha de rahi hai?

Tara bechari ka pura chehra gulabi pad chuka tha. Nashe me to vo bhi thi lekin fir bhi bahut sarm feel ho rahi thi use. Ab to aur jada ho rahi thi kyuki ashmita se uski es baare me kabhi koe baat nahi hue aur abhi to ashmita ke sath sath anisha bhi vaha mojud thi

Ashmita- you dont need to feel bad didi. Ye to hai hi kutta kuch bhi bol deta hai

Lucifer- brw she isn’t feeling bad. Vo to tujhse naraj hai jo har baar kabab me haddi ban jati hai

Inaaya- are bas bahut ho gaya ab. You both need to relax nahi to main tum dono ko kahi ek kamre me band kar dungi fir jitna marji lad lena

Lucifer- sath me ek bacha aur nikal jayega fir

Ashmita gusse me lucifer ke upar kuddi lekin lucifer to bahut ache se janta tha ashmita ko esliye pehle to aasani se uske war se bacha fir apne bahoo me bhar kar use pani ke ander leke chala gaya aur jabardasti bahut der tak ander hi dubki marva kar rakhe rakha

Ashmita- kuttte chhod mujhe mujhe etni jaldi nahi marna hai
Bahar aate hi hath aur muh dono ek sath chalate hue boli

Lucifer- pata hai mujhe. Mujhe maar kar hi maregi tu*****


Heaven ka mahool bilkul shant tha halke kaale badal aa chuke the jo bata rahe the ki shaam dhal aaye hai aur dheere dheere hawaye chal rahi thi

Guruji en hawao me kuch galat sense kar chuke the aur esliye hi vo apne aas pass dekhte hue aage badhe ja rahe the. Es waqt bache khel khood kar gharo me laut chuke the aur log apne ghar me hi apne apne kaamo ke busy ho chuke the

Chalte chalte guruji heaven se kafi door nikal chuke the aur ab unhe kaali shaktiya bahut kareeb se feel hone lagi thi esliye apne aap ko hathiyaar se tayar kar liya tha unhone aur ek shield bhi bana liya tha khud ke liye

Vo es baat se khush bhi the ki heaven me ye sab nahi ho raha jiski vajah se masoom safe the aur thoda chinta me bhi the ki etne kareeb aisa hona bilkul bhi subh sankeet nahi hai

Ek jungle ke suruvaat par vo ruk gaye aur apne aakhen band karke dhayan lagane lage lekin safalta mili nahi unhe kyuki kali shaktiyo ka parbhaav bahut jada bhad gaya tha

Aankh khol kar kuch mantra padhe lekin unse bhi jada kuch fayda hua nahi unhe kuch kuch bhi samne nahi aaya

Jab apne mantra khali jate dekhe to unhe thoda thoda idea ho gaya tha ki konsi musibaat yaha ho sakti thi lekin piche hatne ka to sawal hi paida nahi hota tha

Esliye jungle ke ander parvesh kar gaye jaise hi vo ander ghuse pure ke pure jungle ka naksa hi badalne laga. Ye koe mayajal tha jis me vo ghus chuke the

Yaha par ab unhe gyaan ho chuka tha ki ye koe jungle nahi hai bas aankhon ka bharam paida karne ke liye aisa kiya gaya hai aur es se bahar nikalna bilkul bhi aasan nahi hai

Vo jis bhi taraf mud rahe the vo jhatke ke sath pehle wali direction me badal ja rahi thi. Matlab ki pair to chal rahe the lekin aage nahi bad pa rahe the vo

Aisa lag raha tha jaise vo ek hi jagah par hi etne der se ghum rahe hai

Unhone firse dhayan laga kar ek mantra padha aur es baar unko ek chehra dikhne laga. Ek aisa chehra jise vo bahut ache se pahchante the.

“DARK LORD” aankhen kholte hi guruji bole aur tabhi dark lord unke samne prakat ho gaya

Shataani muskaan uske chehre par saji hue thi aur aaj chehre ka ek bhaag kaala bhi pada hua tha jo saaf saaf bata raha tha ki kis had tak usne kaali shaktiya use ki hai aaj

Guruji- sukriya

Dark lord- mujhe laga maafi ki bheekh mangoge aap lekin ye kya? Sukriya? Kis liye?

Guruji- masoomo se door rakhne ke liye es ladae ko

Dark lord- aaj ke liye to door rahegi lekin kal ye ladae un sab jagah tak failegi jaha achai mojud hai

Guruji- pata hai na us achai ke akhiri kinare par kaun khada hua hai?

Dark lord- bahut ache se pata hai. Esliye to aapki madad chahiye. Aapne es dharti par aane wali har musibaat ka samadhan doond rakha hoga to jahir hai aapko ye bhi pata hoga ki agar vo achai burai me badli to use kaise roka ja sakta hai

Guruji- agar mujhe lucifer ke rokne ka tarika pata hoga to ye tumne kaise soch liya ki maine tumhre bare me kuch plan nahi bana rakha hoga?

Dark lord- mujhe maloom hai aapne kuch na kuch to dimag lagaya hi hoga esliye to kaali shaktiya apne sath laya hu. Aap unka estemaal to karne se rahe aur na hi mera pyaara bada bhai karega. Lekin main? Main un kaali shaktiyo ka maha gyaata aapko un shaktiyo se hi mukti dilaunga. Wada raha aapse

Guruji- ek kahani sunata hu bahut rochak hai bahut kam log jante hai eske bare me par aaj tumhe bhi batane ka dil kar raha hai

Dark lord- dil ko rokna nahi chahiye guruji. Boliye aaram se boliye. Humare pass waqt hi waqt hai es jagah koe nahi aa sakta. Aap meri mayavi dunia me ho abhi esliye tension lene ki koe jarurat nahi hai

Guruji- ek bahut shaktishali angel hua karta tha. Etna ki pure bharmand ko apne kadmo me jhuka sakta tha lekin kismat ko kuch aur hi manjur tha, jo sanskaar ko apne kadmo me jhuka sakta tha vo khudke kadmo me hi jhuk gaya. Lekin achi baat ye hue ki eske bavjud vo kamjor nahi pada. Thode waqt tak vo jarur bharm me raha lekin fir jab vo khada hua to pehle se bhi hazar ghuna shaktishali hoke bahar aaya. Na keval rakshah jagat balki bhagwan bhi us se khauf khane lage. Har koe uske samne jane se katrane lage lekin fir kuch aisa hua jo nahi hona chahiye tha. Ek dusra angel jo paida hi sayad tabhai machane ke liye hua tha vo aa gaya. Vo sochta tha ki mere pass kali shaktiyo ka sara gyaan hai aur un shaktiyo ko use karke vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai, kisi ko bhi hara sakta hai lekin vo ek bahut mahtavpuran baat bhul gaya ki jin kali shaktiyo ke dam par vo etna uchalta hai unka baap to pehle wale angel ke pass hai jo ab uska ek atoot hissa ban chuka hai. Vo nasamjh fir bhi nahi samjha aur bhid gaya us se fir kya ache wale angel ne etni jagah se faada use ki koe silne wala tak nahi mila. Aur ant me jaisa humesha hota hai achai ki burai par jeet ho gaye

Dark lord- waw waw waw maja aa gaya guruji kya hi story thi. Bilkul real jaisi lag rahi hai. Acha wala angel to bilkul mere jaisa lag raha hai to matlab meri jeet paki hai

Guruji- jo acha hai uski jeet to pakki hai hi
Aur ek dam se dharti hilane lagi. Es se penle ki dark lord khch react kar pata us jungle ke pedo ki lato ne usko jakad liya

Uske dono hatho ko pedo ki tahniyo ne pakad liya aur use hawa me utha liya

Guruji ne apni sword nikali aur door se hi hawa me ek bahut tej war kiya. Aas pass ki sari hawa jaise ek sath jud gaye ho aur vo sari ki sari full speed me dark lord ke sareer me ja lagi.

Uske pure sareer ko peedo ne pakad rakha tha esliye vo bilkul hil dol nahi pa raha tha aur ek chhoti si ahh nikal gaye jab full pressure ke sath air uske sareer se takrai

Apne pairo ko hawao me ghumate hue ek aur war kiya guruji ne aur vo bhi sateek jagah par laga lekin ab tak dark lord bilkul sambhal chuka tha aur guruji ke last attack ko to jaise usne apne ander absorb kar liya tha

Apne hontho par ek muskaan laye usne guruji ki taraf dekha fir uske sareer se chhote chhote chaku nikalne lage aur agle hi pal vo bilkul aajad ho chuka tha

Hatho ke chamchamati devil sword aa chuki thi jo thi to kale rang ki lekin chamak aise rahi thi ki samne wale ko andha bhi kar sakti hai sath me uski length bhi ek above normal insaan ke height se kahi jada thi

Dark lord- bina kisi reason ke apni etni energy waste kar di na aapne? Kuch natija nikla?

Guruji- natija kya niklega vo bhi jaldi hi tumhe pata lag jayega
Aur guruji bhi apne talwar liya tayar ho chuke the

Fight position me dono aa chuke the jaha dark lord thoda utawala ho raha tha vahi guruji apne position me khada bariki se uske activities ko jaan rahe the

Dark lord laparvahi se guruji ki taraf badhe lekin guruji jaise khade the vaise hi khade rahe. Halka sa bhi movement nahi kiya unhone aur eski vajah se hi dark lord ko thoda sanka hue aur bilkul guruji ke pass aakar vo ruk gaya

“TIME LOOP” etna hi bol paya dark lord kyuki samne khad guruji ka muskurata hua chehra uske sare sawalo ke jawab de raha tha
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Sabko acha khasa suroor ho chuka tha aur ab bari thi akhiri destination ki jo tha raat ko nadi me nahana

Vo log nadi ke kinare pahuch chuke the aur sari ladkiya usme kood bhi gaye thi sivay madhuri ke

Vo thoda hickicha rahi thi. Ek to vo suit salwar me thi aur dusra lucifer bhi unke sang me tha jiske samne pani me jane se unhe saram aa rahi thi

Ashmita- common ma’am enjoy na. Aisa din humari bhaag dood bhari jindagi ke kaha hi aata hai?

Madhuri- you guys carry on. Main kapde bhi nahi laye aur mujhe pani se dar bhi lagggghhhahhhhhhh

Vo aage kuch bol pati us se pehle hi lucifer ne unhe gaud me utha kar pani me fek diya

Hahahhahahhahahha charo taraf jor jor se hasi ki aawaz gunj gaye

Inaaya- ab nahi lagega aapko dar pani me hehehe

Madhuri achanak hue hamle se thodi ghabra gaye thi esliye khud ko normal karne me unko thoda time lag gaya

Apne baalo ko sawarte hue dilkas ada se vo lucifer ko dekhne lagi jis par lucifer bas muskura diya aur khud bhi pani me kood gaya

Anisha- kitna thanda hai ye pani aur saaf bhi. Sare paap aaj hi dood dega ye pani

Tara- paap ka to pata nahi lekin man kitna shant ho gaya hai esme aate hi. Bilkul alag hi feel ho raha hai

Ashmita- sahi kah rahi ho didi. Thank you inaaya

Inaaya- anything for my loves sweetheart

Lucifer- koe mere liye bhi kuch kar diya karo? Kya main kisi ka love nahi hu kya?

Ashmita- dunia yaad rakhegi ki lucifer ki dost ko lucifer se etna pyaar tha ki koe had nahi chhodi usne

Lucifer- hayeee main mar jau etna pyaar dekh kar

Anisha- didi thode dhayan se. Ye jo dikhta hai vaisa hai nahi

Lucifer- fuck… kya ye taana tha? Ha ye tana tha but ye tana kyu tha?

Ashmita- because you deserve it. Totally deserve it

Tara- i agree

Lucifer- aap to agree karoge hi. Khud par kabu rahta nahi aapka aur badnaam har baar mujhe hona padta hai

Tara- shut up. Ek second me haya ki ek parat ban gaye tara ke chehre par aur use vo sab yaad aane laga jab vo lucifer me etna kho gaye thi ki ashu ne dono ko dekh liya tha aur vo bhi ek baar nahi kae baar

Madhuri- kya ho gaya? Why you’re blushing ?

Lucifer- ye kya bataegi? Main batata hu aapko

Ashmita- lucifer maar khayega ab tu

Lucifer- ye kya baat hue? Kya yehi tha tera pyaar?

Ashmita- shut up

Inaaya- ye galat baat hai. Sab ke sab mere lucifer ko shut up karte ja rahe hai

Lucifer- tum hi to meri apni ho. Baki sab to jalte hai mujhse aur tumse kyuki etne kam samay me bahut mahnat karke maine tumhre figure me nikaar la diya

Inaaya- shhuutt upp yaar lucifer

“Hahahhahahhahaha” “ aur le eski support” hahahha aur fir sab hasne lag gaye

Lucifer- to maam hua ye tha ki ye jo pagal ladki hai na(ashmita) esko bilkul bhi manners ka nahi pata. Ab aap hi batao jab do log…..

Ashmita- lucifer bahut marungi tujhe bata rahi hu main pehle hi

Anisha- are hua kya hai koe ye bataega?

Lucifer- main bata to raha hu lekin ye bolna kaha de rahi hai?

Tara bechari ka pura chehra gulabi pad chuka tha. Nashe me to vo bhi thi lekin fir bhi bahut sarm feel ho rahi thi use. Ab to aur jada ho rahi thi kyuki ashmita se uski es baare me kabhi koe baat nahi hue aur abhi to ashmita ke sath sath anisha bhi vaha mojud thi

Ashmita- you dont need to feel bad didi. Ye to hai hi kutta kuch bhi bol deta hai

Lucifer- brw she isn’t feeling bad. Vo to tujhse naraj hai jo har baar kabab me haddi ban jati hai

Inaaya- are bas bahut ho gaya ab. You both need to relax nahi to main tum dono ko kahi ek kamre me band kar dungi fir jitna marji lad lena

Lucifer- sath me ek bacha aur nikal jayega fir

Ashmita gusse me lucifer ke upar kuddi lekin lucifer to bahut ache se janta tha ashmita ko esliye pehle to aasani se uske war se bacha fir apne bahoo me bhar kar use pani ke ander leke chala gaya aur jabardasti bahut der tak ander hi dubki marva kar rakhe rakha

Ashmita- kuttte chhod mujhe mujhe etni jaldi nahi marna hai
Bahar aate hi hath aur muh dono ek sath chalate hue boli

Lucifer- pata hai mujhe. Mujhe maar kar hi maregi tu*****


Heaven ka mahool bilkul shant tha halke kaale badal aa chuke the jo bata rahe the ki shaam dhal aaye hai aur dheere dheere hawaye chal rahi thi

Guruji en hawao me kuch galat sense kar chuke the aur esliye hi vo apne aas pass dekhte hue aage badhe ja rahe the. Es waqt bache khel khood kar gharo me laut chuke the aur log apne ghar me hi apne apne kaamo ke busy ho chuke the

Chalte chalte guruji heaven se kafi door nikal chuke the aur ab unhe kaali shaktiya bahut kareeb se feel hone lagi thi esliye apne aap ko hathiyaar se tayar kar liya tha unhone aur ek shield bhi bana liya tha khud ke liye

Vo es baat se khush bhi the ki heaven me ye sab nahi ho raha jiski vajah se masoom safe the aur thoda chinta me bhi the ki etne kareeb aisa hona bilkul bhi subh sankeet nahi hai

Ek jungle ke suruvaat par vo ruk gaye aur apne aakhen band karke dhayan lagane lage lekin safalta mili nahi unhe kyuki kali shaktiyo ka parbhaav bahut jada bhad gaya tha

Aankh khol kar kuch mantra padhe lekin unse bhi jada kuch fayda hua nahi unhe kuch kuch bhi samne nahi aaya

Jab apne mantra khali jate dekhe to unhe thoda thoda idea ho gaya tha ki konsi musibaat yaha ho sakti thi lekin piche hatne ka to sawal hi paida nahi hota tha

Esliye jungle ke ander parvesh kar gaye jaise hi vo ander ghuse pure ke pure jungle ka naksa hi badalne laga. Ye koe mayajal tha jis me vo ghus chuke the

Yaha par ab unhe gyaan ho chuka tha ki ye koe jungle nahi hai bas aankhon ka bharam paida karne ke liye aisa kiya gaya hai aur es se bahar nikalna bilkul bhi aasan nahi hai

Vo jis bhi taraf mud rahe the vo jhatke ke sath pehle wali direction me badal ja rahi thi. Matlab ki pair to chal rahe the lekin aage nahi bad pa rahe the vo

Aisa lag raha tha jaise vo ek hi jagah par hi etne der se ghum rahe hai

Unhone firse dhayan laga kar ek mantra padha aur es baar unko ek chehra dikhne laga. Ek aisa chehra jise vo bahut ache se pahchante the.

“DARK LORD” aankhen kholte hi guruji bole aur tabhi dark lord unke samne prakat ho gaya

Shataani muskaan uske chehre par saji hue thi aur aaj chehre ka ek bhaag kaala bhi pada hua tha jo saaf saaf bata raha tha ki kis had tak usne kaali shaktiya use ki hai aaj

Guruji- sukriya

Dark lord- mujhe laga maafi ki bheekh mangoge aap lekin ye kya? Sukriya? Kis liye?

Guruji- masoomo se door rakhne ke liye es ladae ko

Dark lord- aaj ke liye to door rahegi lekin kal ye ladae un sab jagah tak failegi jaha achai mojud hai

Guruji- pata hai na us achai ke akhiri kinare par kaun khada hua hai?

Dark lord- bahut ache se pata hai. Esliye to aapki madad chahiye. Aapne es dharti par aane wali har musibaat ka samadhan doond rakha hoga to jahir hai aapko ye bhi pata hoga ki agar vo achai burai me badli to use kaise roka ja sakta hai

Guruji- agar mujhe lucifer ke rokne ka tarika pata hoga to ye tumne kaise soch liya ki maine tumhre bare me kuch plan nahi bana rakha hoga?

Dark lord- mujhe maloom hai aapne kuch na kuch to dimag lagaya hi hoga esliye to kaali shaktiya apne sath laya hu. Aap unka estemaal to karne se rahe aur na hi mera pyaara bada bhai karega. Lekin main? Main un kaali shaktiyo ka maha gyaata aapko un shaktiyo se hi mukti dilaunga. Wada raha aapse

Guruji- ek kahani sunata hu bahut rochak hai bahut kam log jante hai eske bare me par aaj tumhe bhi batane ka dil kar raha hai

Dark lord- dil ko rokna nahi chahiye guruji. Boliye aaram se boliye. Humare pass waqt hi waqt hai es jagah koe nahi aa sakta. Aap meri mayavi dunia me ho abhi esliye tension lene ki koe jarurat nahi hai

Guruji- ek bahut shaktishali angel hua karta tha. Etna ki pure bharmand ko apne kadmo me jhuka sakta tha lekin kismat ko kuch aur hi manjur tha, jo sanskaar ko apne kadmo me jhuka sakta tha vo khudke kadmo me hi jhuk gaya. Lekin achi baat ye hue ki eske bavjud vo kamjor nahi pada. Thode waqt tak vo jarur bharm me raha lekin fir jab vo khada hua to pehle se bhi hazar ghuna shaktishali hoke bahar aaya. Na keval rakshah jagat balki bhagwan bhi us se khauf khane lage. Har koe uske samne jane se katrane lage lekin fir kuch aisa hua jo nahi hona chahiye tha. Ek dusra angel jo paida hi sayad tabhai machane ke liye hua tha vo aa gaya. Vo sochta tha ki mere pass kali shaktiyo ka sara gyaan hai aur un shaktiyo ko use karke vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai, kisi ko bhi hara sakta hai lekin vo ek bahut mahtavpuran baat bhul gaya ki jin kali shaktiyo ke dam par vo etna uchalta hai unka baap to pehle wale angel ke pass hai jo ab uska ek atoot hissa ban chuka hai. Vo nasamjh fir bhi nahi samjha aur bhid gaya us se fir kya ache wale angel ne etni jagah se faada use ki koe silne wala tak nahi mila. Aur ant me jaisa humesha hota hai achai ki burai par jeet ho gaye

Dark lord- waw waw waw maja aa gaya guruji kya hi story thi. Bilkul real jaisi lag rahi hai. Acha wala angel to bilkul mere jaisa lag raha hai to matlab meri jeet paki hai

Guruji- jo acha hai uski jeet to pakki hai hi
Aur ek dam se dharti hilane lagi. Es se penle ki dark lord khch react kar pata us jungle ke pedo ki lato ne usko jakad liya

Uske dono hatho ko pedo ki tahniyo ne pakad liya aur use hawa me utha liya

Guruji ne apni sword nikali aur door se hi hawa me ek bahut tej war kiya. Aas pass ki sari hawa jaise ek sath jud gaye ho aur vo sari ki sari full speed me dark lord ke sareer me ja lagi.

Uske pure sareer ko peedo ne pakad rakha tha esliye vo bilkul hil dol nahi pa raha tha aur ek chhoti si ahh nikal gaye jab full pressure ke sath air uske sareer se takrai

Apne pairo ko hawao me ghumate hue ek aur war kiya guruji ne aur vo bhi sateek jagah par laga lekin ab tak dark lord bilkul sambhal chuka tha aur guruji ke last attack ko to jaise usne apne ander absorb kar liya tha

Apne hontho par ek muskaan laye usne guruji ki taraf dekha fir uske sareer se chhote chhote chaku nikalne lage aur agle hi pal vo bilkul aajad ho chuka tha

Hatho ke chamchamati devil sword aa chuki thi jo thi to kale rang ki lekin chamak aise rahi thi ki samne wale ko andha bhi kar sakti hai sath me uski length bhi ek above normal insaan ke height se kahi jada thi

Dark lord- bina kisi reason ke apni etni energy waste kar di na aapne? Kuch natija nikla?

Guruji- natija kya niklega vo bhi jaldi hi tumhe pata lag jayega
Aur guruji bhi apne talwar liya tayar ho chuke the

Fight position me dono aa chuke the jaha dark lord thoda utawala ho raha tha vahi guruji apne position me khada bariki se uske activities ko jaan rahe the

Dark lord laparvahi se guruji ki taraf badhe lekin guruji jaise khade the vaise hi khade rahe. Halka sa bhi movement nahi kiya unhone aur eski vajah se hi dark lord ko thoda sanka hue aur bilkul guruji ke pass aakar vo ruk gaya

“TIME LOOP” etna hi bol paya dark lord kyuki samne khad guruji ka muskurata hua chehra uske sare sawalo ke jawab de raha tha
Bohot hi mazedar update he bhai
I enjoyed so much is specially wo scene jaha Lucifer ne Madhuri mam ko pani me dhaka diya 😆.
Jea bhai yea dark lord ki gand kis material se banaya he aap ne jo itni bar fat ne ke bad v fat ta he 😆.
Jea bhai Lucifer aap ni sari girlfriend ke sath intimate ho chuka he sibaye Ashmita ko chhor ke right! mera sawal yea he ke kiya lucifer jo kam ki bat kar raha tha kiya yea wohi kam he?

Wonderful update bhai

please keep writing

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Sabko acha khasa suroor ho chuka tha aur ab bari thi akhiri destination ki jo tha raat ko nadi me nahana

Vo log nadi ke kinare pahuch chuke the aur sari ladkiya usme kood bhi gaye thi sivay madhuri ke

Vo thoda hickicha rahi thi. Ek to vo suit salwar me thi aur dusra lucifer bhi unke sang me tha jiske samne pani me jane se unhe saram aa rahi thi

Ashmita- common ma’am enjoy na. Aisa din humari bhaag dood bhari jindagi ke kaha hi aata hai?

Madhuri- you guys carry on. Main kapde bhi nahi laye aur mujhe pani se dar bhi lagggghhhahhhhhhh

Vo aage kuch bol pati us se pehle hi lucifer ne unhe gaud me utha kar pani me fek diya

Hahahhahahhahahha charo taraf jor jor se hasi ki aawaz gunj gaye

Inaaya- ab nahi lagega aapko dar pani me hehehe

Madhuri achanak hue hamle se thodi ghabra gaye thi esliye khud ko normal karne me unko thoda time lag gaya

Apne baalo ko sawarte hue dilkas ada se vo lucifer ko dekhne lagi jis par lucifer bas muskura diya aur khud bhi pani me kood gaya

Anisha- kitna thanda hai ye pani aur saaf bhi. Sare paap aaj hi dood dega ye pani

Tara- paap ka to pata nahi lekin man kitna shant ho gaya hai esme aate hi. Bilkul alag hi feel ho raha hai

Ashmita- sahi kah rahi ho didi. Thank you inaaya

Inaaya- anything for my loves sweetheart

Lucifer- koe mere liye bhi kuch kar diya karo? Kya main kisi ka love nahi hu kya?

Ashmita- dunia yaad rakhegi ki lucifer ki dost ko lucifer se etna pyaar tha ki koe had nahi chhodi usne

Lucifer- hayeee main mar jau etna pyaar dekh kar

Anisha- didi thode dhayan se. Ye jo dikhta hai vaisa hai nahi

Lucifer- fuck… kya ye taana tha? Ha ye tana tha but ye tana kyu tha?

Ashmita- because you deserve it. Totally deserve it

Tara- i agree

Lucifer- aap to agree karoge hi. Khud par kabu rahta nahi aapka aur badnaam har baar mujhe hona padta hai

Tara- shut up. Ek second me haya ki ek parat ban gaye tara ke chehre par aur use vo sab yaad aane laga jab vo lucifer me etna kho gaye thi ki ashu ne dono ko dekh liya tha aur vo bhi ek baar nahi kae baar

Madhuri- kya ho gaya? Why you’re blushing ?

Lucifer- ye kya bataegi? Main batata hu aapko

Ashmita- lucifer maar khayega ab tu

Lucifer- ye kya baat hue? Kya yehi tha tera pyaar?

Ashmita- shut up

Inaaya- ye galat baat hai. Sab ke sab mere lucifer ko shut up karte ja rahe hai

Lucifer- tum hi to meri apni ho. Baki sab to jalte hai mujhse aur tumse kyuki etne kam samay me bahut mahnat karke maine tumhre figure me nikaar la diya

Inaaya- shhuutt upp yaar lucifer

“Hahahhahahhahaha” “ aur le eski support” hahahha aur fir sab hasne lag gaye

Lucifer- to maam hua ye tha ki ye jo pagal ladki hai na(ashmita) esko bilkul bhi manners ka nahi pata. Ab aap hi batao jab do log…..

Ashmita- lucifer bahut marungi tujhe bata rahi hu main pehle hi

Anisha- are hua kya hai koe ye bataega?

Lucifer- main bata to raha hu lekin ye bolna kaha de rahi hai?

Tara bechari ka pura chehra gulabi pad chuka tha. Nashe me to vo bhi thi lekin fir bhi bahut sarm feel ho rahi thi use. Ab to aur jada ho rahi thi kyuki ashmita se uski es baare me kabhi koe baat nahi hue aur abhi to ashmita ke sath sath anisha bhi vaha mojud thi

Ashmita- you dont need to feel bad didi. Ye to hai hi kutta kuch bhi bol deta hai

Lucifer- brw she isn’t feeling bad. Vo to tujhse naraj hai jo har baar kabab me haddi ban jati hai

Inaaya- are bas bahut ho gaya ab. You both need to relax nahi to main tum dono ko kahi ek kamre me band kar dungi fir jitna marji lad lena

Lucifer- sath me ek bacha aur nikal jayega fir

Ashmita gusse me lucifer ke upar kuddi lekin lucifer to bahut ache se janta tha ashmita ko esliye pehle to aasani se uske war se bacha fir apne bahoo me bhar kar use pani ke ander leke chala gaya aur jabardasti bahut der tak ander hi dubki marva kar rakhe rakha

Ashmita- kuttte chhod mujhe mujhe etni jaldi nahi marna hai
Bahar aate hi hath aur muh dono ek sath chalate hue boli

Lucifer- pata hai mujhe. Mujhe maar kar hi maregi tu*****


Heaven ka mahool bilkul shant tha halke kaale badal aa chuke the jo bata rahe the ki shaam dhal aaye hai aur dheere dheere hawaye chal rahi thi

Guruji en hawao me kuch galat sense kar chuke the aur esliye hi vo apne aas pass dekhte hue aage badhe ja rahe the. Es waqt bache khel khood kar gharo me laut chuke the aur log apne ghar me hi apne apne kaamo ke busy ho chuke the

Chalte chalte guruji heaven se kafi door nikal chuke the aur ab unhe kaali shaktiya bahut kareeb se feel hone lagi thi esliye apne aap ko hathiyaar se tayar kar liya tha unhone aur ek shield bhi bana liya tha khud ke liye

Vo es baat se khush bhi the ki heaven me ye sab nahi ho raha jiski vajah se masoom safe the aur thoda chinta me bhi the ki etne kareeb aisa hona bilkul bhi subh sankeet nahi hai

Ek jungle ke suruvaat par vo ruk gaye aur apne aakhen band karke dhayan lagane lage lekin safalta mili nahi unhe kyuki kali shaktiyo ka parbhaav bahut jada bhad gaya tha

Aankh khol kar kuch mantra padhe lekin unse bhi jada kuch fayda hua nahi unhe kuch kuch bhi samne nahi aaya

Jab apne mantra khali jate dekhe to unhe thoda thoda idea ho gaya tha ki konsi musibaat yaha ho sakti thi lekin piche hatne ka to sawal hi paida nahi hota tha

Esliye jungle ke ander parvesh kar gaye jaise hi vo ander ghuse pure ke pure jungle ka naksa hi badalne laga. Ye koe mayajal tha jis me vo ghus chuke the

Yaha par ab unhe gyaan ho chuka tha ki ye koe jungle nahi hai bas aankhon ka bharam paida karne ke liye aisa kiya gaya hai aur es se bahar nikalna bilkul bhi aasan nahi hai

Vo jis bhi taraf mud rahe the vo jhatke ke sath pehle wali direction me badal ja rahi thi. Matlab ki pair to chal rahe the lekin aage nahi bad pa rahe the vo

Aisa lag raha tha jaise vo ek hi jagah par hi etne der se ghum rahe hai

Unhone firse dhayan laga kar ek mantra padha aur es baar unko ek chehra dikhne laga. Ek aisa chehra jise vo bahut ache se pahchante the.

“DARK LORD” aankhen kholte hi guruji bole aur tabhi dark lord unke samne prakat ho gaya

Shataani muskaan uske chehre par saji hue thi aur aaj chehre ka ek bhaag kaala bhi pada hua tha jo saaf saaf bata raha tha ki kis had tak usne kaali shaktiya use ki hai aaj

Guruji- sukriya

Dark lord- mujhe laga maafi ki bheekh mangoge aap lekin ye kya? Sukriya? Kis liye?

Guruji- masoomo se door rakhne ke liye es ladae ko

Dark lord- aaj ke liye to door rahegi lekin kal ye ladae un sab jagah tak failegi jaha achai mojud hai

Guruji- pata hai na us achai ke akhiri kinare par kaun khada hua hai?

Dark lord- bahut ache se pata hai. Esliye to aapki madad chahiye. Aapne es dharti par aane wali har musibaat ka samadhan doond rakha hoga to jahir hai aapko ye bhi pata hoga ki agar vo achai burai me badli to use kaise roka ja sakta hai

Guruji- agar mujhe lucifer ke rokne ka tarika pata hoga to ye tumne kaise soch liya ki maine tumhre bare me kuch plan nahi bana rakha hoga?

Dark lord- mujhe maloom hai aapne kuch na kuch to dimag lagaya hi hoga esliye to kaali shaktiya apne sath laya hu. Aap unka estemaal to karne se rahe aur na hi mera pyaara bada bhai karega. Lekin main? Main un kaali shaktiyo ka maha gyaata aapko un shaktiyo se hi mukti dilaunga. Wada raha aapse

Guruji- ek kahani sunata hu bahut rochak hai bahut kam log jante hai eske bare me par aaj tumhe bhi batane ka dil kar raha hai

Dark lord- dil ko rokna nahi chahiye guruji. Boliye aaram se boliye. Humare pass waqt hi waqt hai es jagah koe nahi aa sakta. Aap meri mayavi dunia me ho abhi esliye tension lene ki koe jarurat nahi hai

Guruji- ek bahut shaktishali angel hua karta tha. Etna ki pure bharmand ko apne kadmo me jhuka sakta tha lekin kismat ko kuch aur hi manjur tha, jo sanskaar ko apne kadmo me jhuka sakta tha vo khudke kadmo me hi jhuk gaya. Lekin achi baat ye hue ki eske bavjud vo kamjor nahi pada. Thode waqt tak vo jarur bharm me raha lekin fir jab vo khada hua to pehle se bhi hazar ghuna shaktishali hoke bahar aaya. Na keval rakshah jagat balki bhagwan bhi us se khauf khane lage. Har koe uske samne jane se katrane lage lekin fir kuch aisa hua jo nahi hona chahiye tha. Ek dusra angel jo paida hi sayad tabhai machane ke liye hua tha vo aa gaya. Vo sochta tha ki mere pass kali shaktiyo ka sara gyaan hai aur un shaktiyo ko use karke vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai, kisi ko bhi hara sakta hai lekin vo ek bahut mahtavpuran baat bhul gaya ki jin kali shaktiyo ke dam par vo etna uchalta hai unka baap to pehle wale angel ke pass hai jo ab uska ek atoot hissa ban chuka hai. Vo nasamjh fir bhi nahi samjha aur bhid gaya us se fir kya ache wale angel ne etni jagah se faada use ki koe silne wala tak nahi mila. Aur ant me jaisa humesha hota hai achai ki burai par jeet ho gaye

Dark lord- waw waw waw maja aa gaya guruji kya hi story thi. Bilkul real jaisi lag rahi hai. Acha wala angel to bilkul mere jaisa lag raha hai to matlab meri jeet paki hai

Guruji- jo acha hai uski jeet to pakki hai hi
Aur ek dam se dharti hilane lagi. Es se penle ki dark lord khch react kar pata us jungle ke pedo ki lato ne usko jakad liya

Uske dono hatho ko pedo ki tahniyo ne pakad liya aur use hawa me utha liya

Guruji ne apni sword nikali aur door se hi hawa me ek bahut tej war kiya. Aas pass ki sari hawa jaise ek sath jud gaye ho aur vo sari ki sari full speed me dark lord ke sareer me ja lagi.

Uske pure sareer ko peedo ne pakad rakha tha esliye vo bilkul hil dol nahi pa raha tha aur ek chhoti si ahh nikal gaye jab full pressure ke sath air uske sareer se takrai

Apne pairo ko hawao me ghumate hue ek aur war kiya guruji ne aur vo bhi sateek jagah par laga lekin ab tak dark lord bilkul sambhal chuka tha aur guruji ke last attack ko to jaise usne apne ander absorb kar liya tha

Apne hontho par ek muskaan laye usne guruji ki taraf dekha fir uske sareer se chhote chhote chaku nikalne lage aur agle hi pal vo bilkul aajad ho chuka tha

Hatho ke chamchamati devil sword aa chuki thi jo thi to kale rang ki lekin chamak aise rahi thi ki samne wale ko andha bhi kar sakti hai sath me uski length bhi ek above normal insaan ke height se kahi jada thi

Dark lord- bina kisi reason ke apni etni energy waste kar di na aapne? Kuch natija nikla?

Guruji- natija kya niklega vo bhi jaldi hi tumhe pata lag jayega
Aur guruji bhi apne talwar liya tayar ho chuke the

Fight position me dono aa chuke the jaha dark lord thoda utawala ho raha tha vahi guruji apne position me khada bariki se uske activities ko jaan rahe the

Dark lord laparvahi se guruji ki taraf badhe lekin guruji jaise khade the vaise hi khade rahe. Halka sa bhi movement nahi kiya unhone aur eski vajah se hi dark lord ko thoda sanka hue aur bilkul guruji ke pass aakar vo ruk gaya

“TIME LOOP” etna hi bol paya dark lord kyuki samne khad guruji ka muskurata hua chehra uske sare sawalo ke jawab de raha tha
Nice update and so exciting last me time loop wala jabarjast
 
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