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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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Nice one bhai.
Ab naag to Suresh ko pakad ke jarur layega. Lakin dekhte hai Lucifer kuch karta bhi hai ya nahi.
Aur ab in dono ki fight kitne lambi chlegi ye bhi dekhne wali baat hai.
Lucifer kuch to karega hi aise hi uska naam kharab thodi ho rakha hai
 

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Lucifer ne Inaaya se apne pyaar ka izhaar kar diya hai... Bohot hi unexpected scene tha ye, especially tab jab wo Saanvi se bichhadne ki yaadon ko jeekar aa raha tha... Of course, Lucifer jaanta hai ke use uska pyaar kabhi bhi nahi mil sakta, bichhadna hi uske pyaar ki niyati hai, fir bhi usne Inaaya se pyaar ka izhaar kar diya... Kya Inaaya ka chehra Saanvi jaisa hai..? Maybe yahi ek kaaran ho sakta hai jiski wajah se Lucifer apne aap ko rok hi nahi paaya... Khair, Inaaya aur Lucifer ne kuchh pal saath bhi bitaaye, Inaaya apne aap ko poori tarah se Lucifer ko samarpit sa kar chuki hai... Ab dekhne laayak hoga ki Lucifer ki kismat in dono ke saath kya khel khelti hai... Btw. Kahin na kahin Inaaya bhi jaanti hi hai ke Lucifer sadaiv uske paas nahi rahega aur ek na ek din chala hi jaayega...
Kya pata lucifer pehle se hi inaaya se pyaar karta ho bas dikha nahi raha ho? Aur aise time par kisi ka sath to chahiye hi hota hai insaan ko aur agar sath dena wale aapka pyaar ho to alag hi baat hai. Jitna time hai usko aise jee lo ki koe regret hi na rahe
As expected Raichand ne apna kameenapan dikha hi diya... Jaisa ke usne plan kiya tha usike mutabik Rathore ki aur uski premika yaani Samira ki photographs viral kar di... Suresh business mein aage rehne ke liye hi ye sab kar raha hai ye to saaf hai, par Rathore aur Inaaya ki baaton se ye bhi laga ke pehle bhi Suresh kuchh na kuchh ghatiya harkaten karta hua aaya hai... Maybe, kaafi pehle se donon ke beech business rivalry chali aa rahi ho... Aur bilkul possible hai ki Inaaya jo aaj Ashmita se itni nafrat karti hai, uske pichhe jo bhi wajah hai, uska kaaran bhi Suresh hi raha ho... Khair, ab Rathore aur Samira ne shaadi karne ka faisla liya hai aur Inaaya ne bhi apni sehmati de di hai... Dekha jaaye to shayad yahaan yahi sahi faisla hai kyonki maybe shaadi se Rathore ki media mein maili ho rahi image kuchh hadh tak behtar ho jaaye...
Kuch to hai hi dono family ke bich me. Suresh aur rathore ki vajah se hi to sabke rishte nahi chude hai?
Lucifer ka reaction is baat par waisa hi tha jaisa ki expected tha... Parantu, Inaaya ne use saaf mana kar diya ke wo Suresh ko koyi nuksaan na pahunchaye... But obviously, wo to wahi karega jo use sahi lagega, and for a change, yahaan jo Lucifer ne kiya wahi karna sahi bhi tha... Aisa keh dena ke Lucifer gusse mein ulta seedha kar deta hai, galat hai, afterall wo jaane kitne samay tak heaven mein nyay karta aaya hai aur doshion ko saza deta aaya hai, to yahaan wo galat faisla kaise le sakta hai..?
Nahi bhai lucifer ne Heaven me jo kuch bhi kiya vo khud ki marji se nahi kiya
Vo bas order follow karta tha ha thoda bloodshed jada karta tha lekin khud ke decision nahi hote the uske
Ashmita ka reaction bhi jaayaz tha, afterall wo to apne pita ka bachav karegi hi... Wo bhi jaanti hai ke galti Suresh ki hi thi, but it's not possible for her to witness what Lucifer would do with her father... Beharhal, ek aur baar lagta hai ke Ashmita aur Inaaya ke beech ki khaayi gehri ho jaane waali hai...
Facts
Ashmita ka reaction sabse genuine tha
Idhar, Ashmita aur Lucifer ke beech huyi behes ne ek tarah se unki dosti ke beech bhi daraar paida kar di hai... Ashmita bhi us moment par ajeeb kashmakash mein fansi huyi dikhayi pad rahi thi... Par shayad uske shabdon ne Lucifer ko trigger kar diya... Ab dekhna hoga ke Ashmita aage kya karegi aur kya uske aur Inaaya ke beech ki deewar aur bhi badi ho jaayegi...
Karega to lucifer hi
Ashmita kya hi kar sakti hai?
Wahin, Lucifer ne Naag ko kaam saunpa hai ki wo Suresh ka pata lagaye aur use lekar aaye... Kya wo ye kaam kar paayega, us se bada sawaal kya abhi tak Suresh underground nahi ho chuka hoga..? Btw. Shayad Naag ko Inaaya hi phone karke mana kar de, yadi use Ashmita se is ghatna ka pata chalta hai to... Idhar, Maansi aur Lucifer ke beech ki conversation bhi rochak thi... Lucifer ne naa hi uske saamne apni aadat anusaar koyi bakwaas ki aur naa hi krodh dikhaya... Maybe, Maansi ka bhi heaven aur Lucifer se koyi talluk ho..?
Kya hi pata bhai
Lucifer aaj ache se baat Kar raha hai kal marne par aa jaye kya hi bola jaye?
Payal ke NGO ka bhi kaam poora ho chuka hai aur ab bas selling phase hi baaki reh gaya hai... Lagta to yahi hai ki Payal ki mehnat ka phal use zaroor milega... Idhar Aarohi sachmein satyavadi nikli aur Lucifer ke saamne hi Payal ki baatein khol di...
Mahnat ka fal to milna hi chahiye bhai
Eda aur Raaj ko hosh aa chuka hai aur ye bhi pata chal gaya ke un dono khud hi apni ye haalat ki thi... Dono hi baaghi ho rahen hain, ye saaf hai aur shayad jaldi hi ek bada toofaan bhi heaven mein aane waala hai jiska nateeja shayad hamesha ki tarah Lucifer ko hi bhugatna pade... Par Supreme aur Eda ke beech huyi baaton ka kya arth tha? “Eda ka to samajh aata hai ke wo Lucifer ke liye kyon lad rahi hai", ye baat kahi thi Supreme ne Raaj se...
Mujhe to dono ka hi samjh nahi aata. Are apni jaan bachao na
Kya past mein Eda aur Raaj ke beech bhi kuchh tha..
Mujhe bhi nahi lagta.
. I don't think so, kyonki ye saaf dikhaya gaya hai ke Raaj aur Eda ek doosre se prem karte hain... Wahin ek past scene mein Lucifer ne ye kaha tha ke wo Eda ko pasand karta hai par wo us se baat bhi nahi karti... Ab dekhna hoga ke ye dono aage kya karenge aur uske reaction mein Supreme ka step kya hoga...
Aaj pasand na ho kal ho sakta hai?
Aur bhi koe reason ho sakta hai
Bahut saal rahe hai heaven me
Teenon hi updates bohot badhiya the bhai... Inaaya aur Lucifer ke beech prem ka izhaar hua, wo scene behad hi khubsurat tha... Wahin Maansi aur Lucifer ke beech ki conversation bhi bohot badhiya likhi aapne...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Thank you so much bhai
Keep supporting
 
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Inaaya- change kar lo
Fir esko ghar jaisa banayenge
Lucifer- tum kapde laye ho?

Inaaya- tumhri koe shirt de do
Lucifer- meri shirt tumhre aaegi?

Inaaya- aajayegi do to
Lucifer- shirt bhi bahut hai
Niche kuch pahane ki kya jarurat hai?

Inaaya- maine kab kaha main niche kuch pahan rahi hu?
Lucifer- sach me?

Inaaya- laye hu main lower
T shirt Lani bhul gaye
Chehra dekho apna kaise chammak gaya hai
Lucifer- bad luck

Inaaya- mujhe do ek shirt aur khud bhi change karlo jaldi se
Lucifer- jo chahiye le lo vaha se
Aur mujhe bhi de do

Fir dono change kar lete hai
Lucifer ki extra large shirt me inaaya kya lag rahi thi bc
Garmi ho gaye thi pure flat me lekin ye garmi lucifer ko bahut aage tak sahni thi

Lucifer- kya karna hai abhi?
Inaaya- chalo kitchen se start karte hai

Aur dono kitchen me aajate hai
Inaaya- tum heavy chhije hall me rakh do aur ek bucket me pani le aao
Lucifer- edhar nal hai to?

Inaaya- bucket me le aao
Baar baar nahi uthana padega
Lucifer- mere pass nahi hai bucket

Inaaya lucifer ko ek look deti hai aur lucifer muskura jata hai
Inaaya- nahate kaise ho tum?
Lucifer- shower se

Inaaya- kuch aisa to hoga esme pani bhar sako?
Lucifer kuch doond ke deta hai usko aur fir inaaya kitchen pani se saaf karne lagti hai aur lucifer sukhe kapde se

Pani ki vajah se inaaya ki shirt halki halki gilli hone lag gaye thi aur vo loose jada thi to bich bich me uski bra bhi dikh rahi thi lekin lucifer sarif ladke ki tarah apni najaro ko control me rakhe hue tha

Inaaya- ye ek baar me to hoga nahi
Lucifer- kisi ko bula kar kara lete hai na saaf
Paise to hai hi bahut tumhre pass

Inaaya- apne ghar ko khud saaf karne me kya problem hai tumhe?
Lucifer- koe problem nahi hai lekin agar tum abhi thak gaye to puri raat kaise handle karogi?

Inaaya- esliye meri help ache se karao nahi to main so jaungi raat ko
Lucifer- madam aap bahar jakar soffe par aaram kyu nahi kar lete?
Main dekho kaise chamakata hu pure ghar ko?

Inaaya- hehehe nice
Ek baar aur kar dete hai fir theek ho jayega

Aur thodi mahnat aur karke kitchen ko theek kar diya tha dono ne

Inaaya- ab room ki bari
Lucifer- room to saaf hi hai

Inaaya- esko saaf bolte ho?
Bimari ka ghar hai ye
Lucifer- main bimar nahi hota

Inaaya- main to hoti hu
Ye bed sheet hatao
Lucifer- mere pass aur nahi hai

Inaaya- pata hai mujhe esliye main laye hu
Bedsheet change karke ab yaha jitne bhi nashe ki chhij hai vo sab room ke bahar honi chahiye

Lucifer- fir to main bhi room ke bahar hi rahunga
Sabse jada nasha to mujhme hi hai aur mujhse jada tum me
Chalo hall me nasha todte hai

Inaaya- sari chilam, saraab, ashtray sab ko balcony me rakh ke aao
Lucifer- saraab kon rakhta hai balcony me?

Inaaya- dusre room me rakh do
Master bedroom me sirf bed aur hum dono hone chahiye

Inaaya- okay madam
Aur lucifer sab chhije dusre room me shift kar deta hai
Lucifer- hogya?

Inaaya- pani se kon saaf karega?
Lucifer- main karunga aur kon karega?

Inaaya muskurae aur fir dono room ko saaf karne lagte hai
Kapde pehle se jada gile ho chuke the lekin abhi magan ho kar ghar saaf ho raha tha

Bich bich me Ashmita ki call bhi aa rahi thi jis se pareshan ho kar phone off kar liya tha

Inaaya- thak gaye main to
Lucifer- oye nahi nahi nahi thakna nahi hai abhi to bahut lambi raat bachi hai

Inaaya- hall me chalo
Lucifer- main kar dunga hall saaf
Tu rest kar lo

Inaaya- etne utavle ho rahe ho?
Nahi soungi tumhe tadpa kar
Khush ab?
Lucifer- main chamka dunga hall tum thodi der rest karlo
Chamka dunga main

Inaaya- mujhe dekhna hai fir kaise chamkate ho tum
Fir hall me aate hai aur hall saaf karne lagte hai

Saaf karte karte inaaya pani ko utha ke le ja rahi thi aur pair slip ho kar Sara pani uske upar hi gir gaya
Vo jo typical har movies, show me hota hai na bilkul vaisa hi hua yaha bhi

Shirt puri uske sareer par chipak gaye thi aur vohi haal uske lower ka tha

Lucifer- lagi to nahi?
Ye sab chhijo ko ignore karte hue lucifer bola
Inaaya- ha pairo me lagi
Sayad mud gaya

Lucifer- dikhao
Aur lucifer inaaya ke pass bath kar uske gore, mulayam pairo ko hath me leke dekhne laga

Lekin jaise hi usne hath lagaya inaaya ne usko pakda aur apni taraf khech kar apne honth Chipka diye uske hontho par

Lucifer to kabka control karke chup tha inaaya ke es hamle se out of control ho gaya aur bahut hi jada wild kissing start ho gaye dono ke bich me

Bathe bathe problem ho rahi thi to lucifer ne kiss karte karte hi inaaya ko gaud me utha liya aur vaha ek slab bani hue thi us par bitha diya

Lucifer ab inaaya ke neck ke side me kiss kar raha tha aur inaaya paglo ki tarah Lucifer ke sareer par naakhun chuba rahi thi

Fir jab thoda niche aaya to control ka baandh toot gaya aur lucifer ki ek naye mangi shirt ek jhatke me fhaat gaye

Aaj usne kholne me time waste karna theek nahi samjha aur shirt ko faad diya aur samne bahut well shaped inaaya ke ubhaar black designer bra me saamne aagaye

Lucifer ka muh udhar ja hi raha tha ki

*level 50 threat detected*

Lucifer ke dimag me ek ghanti baji aur vo 50 sunte hi jhatke se door ho gaya inaaya se

Inaaya jo hosh me nahi thi jab lucifer ka jhatka laga aur fir movement honi band ho gaye to aankh khol kar lucifer ki taraf dekha jo usse bahut piche khada tha aur niche dekh kar kuch soch raha tha
Uske hatho ki movements bhi bahut tej ho rahi thi aur uske dimag me bas level 50 hi gunj raha tha

Inaaya- lucifer?
Lucifer you okay?
Bahut muskilo se vo etna hi bol paye

Lekin level 50 uske dimag se nikla nahi tha
Vo inaaya ko akeli nahi chhod sakta tha aur na hi usse apne sath le ja sakta tha
Ma'am ki shield me level 50 ke samne kuch kaam nahi aane wali thi vahi ashmita, anisha, Tara, payal sab ke sab akele the aur kisi bhi second mar sakte the

Inaaya ne jab lucifer ke chehre par etni tension dekhi to vo thoda ghabra gaye usse laga lucifer ko kuch past ka yaad aa raha hai
Esliye aise kar raha hai esliye usne apni shirt ko hath me hi pakad kar apne sareer ko chupaya aur lucifer ki taraf chal di

Inaaya- kya hua?
Sab theek hai?
Lucifer- shis shis shis
Sochne do bolo mat kuch bhi

Inaaya bechari chhup ho gaye vahi lucifer ko pasine aane lage

Bc threat level 50 hai aur etne sare ladkiyo ko vo kaise bachaye aur abhi to usse ye bhi nahi pata ki vo 50 level ke threat ko hara bhi sakta hai ya nahi

Soch lucifer kuch to soch
Agar kisi ko kuch hua to bahut problem ho jayegi tabhi uske dimag me guruji ki baat aati hai aur ye baat uske dimag me bahut pehle aajani chahiye thi Jab se bhasad suru hue thi
" save ashmita and people around her"
Eske mutabit to suresh ko bhi usse bachana hi tha

Lucifer- apne kapde pahno
Inaaya- hua kya hai?

Lucifer- just do it and do it fast
Inaaya ko bas upar ka hi pahnana tha aur vo usne ek second me pahan liya

Lucifer- chalo
Inaaya- kaha?

Lucifer- aaj kuch mat puchna
Bas main jo bol raha hu vo karte jana
Aur inaaya ko lekar niche aagya fir uski hi car me Ashmita ke ghar ki taraf chal diya

Aur uske ghar se thodi door car rok li

Inaaya- lucifer tum mujhe dara rahe ho
Lucifer- koe khatra hai aaj mere aas pass ke logo ko
Main sab ko ek sath nahi bacha sakta esliye ek jagah par la raha hu

Inaaya- kis se khatra?
Kaisa khatra?
Abhi vo kuch bolti ki time ruk gaya, sab ek dam se statue ho gaye
Aisa ek baar aur hua tha Jab eda aaye thi earth par

Lucifer ke dimag me pehla naam uska hi aaya lekin us se koe khatra nahi tha lucifer ko
Esliye pehle to car se bahar nikla aur edar udhar dekhne laga ki door kahi kaala dua hone laga aur uske bich se koe nikal raha tha

Ek bahut muscular aur bahut handsome lucifer ki age jaisa dikhne wala hi koe ladka tha, jiske chehre par bahut evil smile thi

Jo bahut dheere dheere lucifer ke kareeb aa raha tha aur lucifer ke bina bole hi uski talwar aur dusre hath me ek bahut bada bhala type ka hathiyaar nikal aaya tha

Jiska sidha sa matlab tha ki samne wala dost to bilkul nahi hai

"Brother, brother, brother"
" how are you my brother"
" mujhe miss nahi kiya"
Vo door se hi chhilate hue bolne laga lekin lucifer bilkul shant hi raha
Uske hath uske hathiyaar par aur jada tight ho gaye the

"Main aaj ladne nahi aaya hu mere bhai, main to bas dekhne aaya hu aapko, kaise ho aap?, dekho kya halaat kar di aapki aur dekho kya halaat ho gaye meri? Lekin ab chinta ki bilkul baat nahi hai, hum dono ko vo milega jo hume bahut pehle mil jana chahiye tha, aapko mukti aur mujhe gadhi, lekin aap chinta mat karo, jab tak aap apni sari premikao se mil nahi lete aur aap sab ka milap nahi ho jata main marunga nahi aapko, ab etna to farz banta hai mera ki mere bhai ke etne saalo ki tadap bekaar na jaye, aaj to main bas mulakat karne aagya, vo kya hai na bahut yaad aati hai aapki aur mujhe pata hai aapko bhi meri yaad aati hogi, aati hogi na bhaiya?"

Lucifer- kon ho tum?
"To kya vo sab sach hai?
Sach hi hoga vaise
Koe baat nahi nahi yaad to aapko main
Lekin vada karta hu main jaldi aaunga aur aapko es jeevan se mukti de dunga"

Lucifer- kon ho tum?
Mujhse kya chahte ho?
" jada kuch nahi bas aapki maut
Vo kya hai na jab tak aap zinda ho mujhe vo nahi mil sakta jo main chahta hu esliye aapko marna padega
Bura mat manana koe personal issue nahi hai aapse lekin kya kare kuch kar nahi sakta main"

Lucifer- jab aaj marna hi nahi tha to yaha aaya kyu hai?
Jis din marna ho us din hi aana mere samne
" marna nahi maarna hai mujhe
Vo bhai mere aapko aajadi milegi es jindagi se, main dunga aapko aajadi
Chalo theek hai aapki ichacha puri kar deta hu
Sari premikao se nahi jab saanvi se prem milap ho jayega Tab aaunga main vapas"

Lucifer- to ja yaha se
Aur aana jab maut pukar rahi ho tujhe
"Aaunga lekin kiski maut pukaregi us din ye dekhna padega"....
 

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Inaaya- change kar lo
Fir esko ghar jaisa banayenge
Lucifer- tum kapde laye ho?

Inaaya- tumhri koe shirt de do
Lucifer- meri shirt tumhre aaegi?

Inaaya- aajayegi do to
Lucifer- shirt bhi bahut hai
Niche kuch pahane ki kya jarurat hai?

Inaaya- maine kab kaha main niche kuch pahan rahi hu?
Lucifer- sach me?

Inaaya- laye hu main lower
T shirt Lani bhul gaye
Chehra dekho apna kaise chammak gaya hai
Lucifer- bad luck

Inaaya- mujhe do ek shirt aur khud bhi change karlo jaldi se
Lucifer- jo chahiye le lo vaha se
Aur mujhe bhi de do

Fir dono change kar lete hai
Lucifer ki extra large shirt me inaaya kya lag rahi thi bc
Garmi ho gaye thi pure flat me lekin ye garmi lucifer ko bahut aage tak sahni thi

Lucifer- kya karna hai abhi?
Inaaya- chalo kitchen se start karte hai

Aur dono kitchen me aajate hai
Inaaya- tum heavy chhije hall me rakh do aur ek bucket me pani le aao
Lucifer- edhar nal hai to?

Inaaya- bucket me le aao
Baar baar nahi uthana padega
Lucifer- mere pass nahi hai bucket

Inaaya lucifer ko ek look deti hai aur lucifer muskura jata hai
Inaaya- nahate kaise ho tum?
Lucifer- shower se

Inaaya- kuch aisa to hoga esme pani bhar sako?
Lucifer kuch doond ke deta hai usko aur fir inaaya kitchen pani se saaf karne lagti hai aur lucifer sukhe kapde se

Pani ki vajah se inaaya ki shirt halki halki gilli hone lag gaye thi aur vo loose jada thi to bich bich me uski bra bhi dikh rahi thi lekin lucifer sarif ladke ki tarah apni najaro ko control me rakhe hue tha

Inaaya- ye ek baar me to hoga nahi
Lucifer- kisi ko bula kar kara lete hai na saaf
Paise to hai hi bahut tumhre pass

Inaaya- apne ghar ko khud saaf karne me kya problem hai tumhe?
Lucifer- koe problem nahi hai lekin agar tum abhi thak gaye to puri raat kaise handle karogi?

Inaaya- esliye meri help ache se karao nahi to main so jaungi raat ko
Lucifer- madam aap bahar jakar soffe par aaram kyu nahi kar lete?
Main dekho kaise chamakata hu pure ghar ko?

Inaaya- hehehe nice
Ek baar aur kar dete hai fir theek ho jayega

Aur thodi mahnat aur karke kitchen ko theek kar diya tha dono ne

Inaaya- ab room ki bari
Lucifer- room to saaf hi hai

Inaaya- esko saaf bolte ho?
Bimari ka ghar hai ye
Lucifer- main bimar nahi hota

Inaaya- main to hoti hu
Ye bed sheet hatao
Lucifer- mere pass aur nahi hai

Inaaya- pata hai mujhe esliye main laye hu
Bedsheet change karke ab yaha jitne bhi nashe ki chhij hai vo sab room ke bahar honi chahiye

Lucifer- fir to main bhi room ke bahar hi rahunga
Sabse jada nasha to mujhme hi hai aur mujhse jada tum me
Chalo hall me nasha todte hai

Inaaya- sari chilam, saraab, ashtray sab ko balcony me rakh ke aao
Lucifer- saraab kon rakhta hai balcony me?

Inaaya- dusre room me rakh do
Master bedroom me sirf bed aur hum dono hone chahiye

Inaaya- okay madam
Aur lucifer sab chhije dusre room me shift kar deta hai
Lucifer- hogya?

Inaaya- pani se kon saaf karega?
Lucifer- main karunga aur kon karega?

Inaaya muskurae aur fir dono room ko saaf karne lagte hai
Kapde pehle se jada gile ho chuke the lekin abhi magan ho kar ghar saaf ho raha tha

Bich bich me Ashmita ki call bhi aa rahi thi jis se pareshan ho kar phone off kar liya tha

Inaaya- thak gaye main to
Lucifer- oye nahi nahi nahi thakna nahi hai abhi to bahut lambi raat bachi hai

Inaaya- hall me chalo
Lucifer- main kar dunga hall saaf
Tu rest kar lo

Inaaya- etne utavle ho rahe ho?
Nahi soungi tumhe tadpa kar
Khush ab?
Lucifer- main chamka dunga hall tum thodi der rest karlo
Chamka dunga main

Inaaya- mujhe dekhna hai fir kaise chamkate ho tum
Fir hall me aate hai aur hall saaf karne lagte hai

Saaf karte karte inaaya pani ko utha ke le ja rahi thi aur pair slip ho kar Sara pani uske upar hi gir gaya
Vo jo typical har movies, show me hota hai na bilkul vaisa hi hua yaha bhi

Shirt puri uske sareer par chipak gaye thi aur vohi haal uske lower ka tha

Lucifer- lagi to nahi?
Ye sab chhijo ko ignore karte hue lucifer bola
Inaaya- ha pairo me lagi
Sayad mud gaya

Lucifer- dikhao
Aur lucifer inaaya ke pass bath kar uske gore, mulayam pairo ko hath me leke dekhne laga

Lekin jaise hi usne hath lagaya inaaya ne usko pakda aur apni taraf khech kar apne honth Chipka diye uske hontho par

Lucifer to kabka control karke chup tha inaaya ke es hamle se out of control ho gaya aur bahut hi jada wild kissing start ho gaye dono ke bich me

Bathe bathe problem ho rahi thi to lucifer ne kiss karte karte hi inaaya ko gaud me utha liya aur vaha ek slab bani hue thi us par bitha diya

Lucifer ab inaaya ke neck ke side me kiss kar raha tha aur inaaya paglo ki tarah Lucifer ke sareer par naakhun chuba rahi thi

Fir jab thoda niche aaya to control ka baandh toot gaya aur lucifer ki ek naye mangi shirt ek jhatke me fhaat gaye

Aaj usne kholne me time waste karna theek nahi samjha aur shirt ko faad diya aur samne bahut well shaped inaaya ke ubhaar black designer bra me saamne aagaye

Lucifer ka muh udhar ja hi raha tha ki

*level 50 threat detected*

Lucifer ke dimag me ek ghanti baji aur vo 50 sunte hi jhatke se door ho gaya inaaya se

Inaaya jo hosh me nahi thi jab lucifer ka jhatka laga aur fir movement honi band ho gaye to aankh khol kar lucifer ki taraf dekha jo usse bahut piche khada tha aur niche dekh kar kuch soch raha tha
Uske hatho ki movements bhi bahut tej ho rahi thi aur uske dimag me bas level 50 hi gunj raha tha

Inaaya- lucifer?
Lucifer you okay?
Bahut muskilo se vo etna hi bol paye

Lekin level 50 uske dimag se nikla nahi tha
Vo inaaya ko akeli nahi chhod sakta tha aur na hi usse apne sath le ja sakta tha
Ma'am ki shield me level 50 ke samne kuch kaam nahi aane wali thi vahi ashmita, anisha, Tara, payal sab ke sab akele the aur kisi bhi second mar sakte the

Inaaya ne jab lucifer ke chehre par etni tension dekhi to vo thoda ghabra gaye usse laga lucifer ko kuch past ka yaad aa raha hai
Esliye aise kar raha hai esliye usne apni shirt ko hath me hi pakad kar apne sareer ko chupaya aur lucifer ki taraf chal di

Inaaya- kya hua?
Sab theek hai?
Lucifer- shis shis shis
Sochne do bolo mat kuch bhi

Inaaya bechari chhup ho gaye vahi lucifer ko pasine aane lage

Bc threat level 50 hai aur etne sare ladkiyo ko vo kaise bachaye aur abhi to usse ye bhi nahi pata ki vo 50 level ke threat ko hara bhi sakta hai ya nahi

Soch lucifer kuch to soch
Agar kisi ko kuch hua to bahut problem ho jayegi tabhi uske dimag me guruji ki baat aati hai aur ye baat uske dimag me bahut pehle aajani chahiye thi Jab se bhasad suru hue thi
" save ashmita and people around her"
Eske mutabit to suresh ko bhi usse bachana hi tha

Lucifer- apne kapde pahno
Inaaya- hua kya hai?

Lucifer- just do it and do it fast
Inaaya ko bas upar ka hi pahnana tha aur vo usne ek second me pahan liya

Lucifer- chalo
Inaaya- kaha?

Lucifer- aaj kuch mat puchna
Bas main jo bol raha hu vo karte jana
Aur inaaya ko lekar niche aagya fir uski hi car me Ashmita ke ghar ki taraf chal diya

Aur uske ghar se thodi door car rok li

Inaaya- lucifer tum mujhe dara rahe ho
Lucifer- koe khatra hai aaj mere aas pass ke logo ko
Main sab ko ek sath nahi bacha sakta esliye ek jagah par la raha hu

Inaaya- kis se khatra?
Kaisa khatra?
Abhi vo kuch bolti ki time ruk gaya, sab ek dam se statue ho gaye
Aisa ek baar aur hua tha Jab eda aaye thi earth par

Lucifer ke dimag me pehla naam uska hi aaya lekin us se koe khatra nahi tha lucifer ko
Esliye pehle to car se bahar nikla aur edar udhar dekhne laga ki door kahi kaala dua hone laga aur uske bich se koe nikal raha tha

Ek bahut muscular aur bahut handsome lucifer ki age jaisa dikhne wala hi koe ladka tha, jiske chehre par bahut evil smile thi

Jo bahut dheere dheere lucifer ke kareeb aa raha tha aur lucifer ke bina bole hi uski talwar aur dusre hath me ek bahut bada bhala type ka hathiyaar nikal aaya tha

Jiska sidha sa matlab tha ki samne wala dost to bilkul nahi hai

"Brother, brother, brother"
" how are you my brother"
" mujhe miss nahi kiya"
Vo door se hi chhilate hue bolne laga lekin lucifer bilkul shant hi raha
Uske hath uske hathiyaar par aur jada tight ho gaye the

"Main aaj ladne nahi aaya hu mere bhai, main to bas dekhne aaya hu aapko, kaise ho aap?, dekho kya halaat kar di aapki aur dekho kya halaat ho gaye meri? Lekin ab chinta ki bilkul baat nahi hai, hum dono ko vo milega jo hume bahut pehle mil jana chahiye tha, aapko mukti aur mujhe gadhi, lekin aap chinta mat karo, jab tak aap apni sari premikao se mil nahi lete aur aap sab ka milap nahi ho jata main marunga nahi aapko, ab etna to farz banta hai mera ki mere bhai ke etne saalo ki tadap bekaar na jaye, aaj to main bas mulakat karne aagya, vo kya hai na bahut yaad aati hai aapki aur mujhe pata hai aapko bhi meri yaad aati hogi, aati hogi na bhaiya?"

Lucifer- kon ho tum?
"To kya vo sab sach hai?
Sach hi hoga vaise
Koe baat nahi nahi yaad to aapko main
Lekin vada karta hu main jaldi aaunga aur aapko es jeevan se mukti de dunga"

Lucifer- kon ho tum?
Mujhse kya chahte ho?
" jada kuch nahi bas aapki maut
Vo kya hai na jab tak aap zinda ho mujhe vo nahi mil sakta jo main chahta hu esliye aapko marna padega
Bura mat manana koe personal issue nahi hai aapse lekin kya kare kuch kar nahi sakta main"

Lucifer- jab aaj marna hi nahi tha to yaha aaya kyu hai?
Jis din marna ho us din hi aana mere samne
" marna nahi maarna hai mujhe
Vo bhai mere aapko aajadi milegi es jindagi se, main dunga aapko aajadi
Chalo theek hai aapki ichacha puri kar deta hu
Sari premikao se nahi jab saanvi se prem milap ho jayega Tab aaunga main vapas"

Lucifer- to ja yaha se
Aur aana jab maut pukar rahi ho tujhe
"Aaunga lekin kiski maut pukaregi us din ye dekhna padega"....
Nice update bhai 👍
 

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To akhirkar lucifer badal raha h dekhte hain ye aane wale badlav ka uske jiwan main kesa prabhaav padta hai wese dekha jaye to ye bhi lucifer ke hath main hi hoga
 

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UPDATE-92
Inaaya- change kar lo
Fir esko ghar jaisa banayenge
Lucifer- tum kapde laye ho?

Inaaya- tumhri koe shirt de do
Lucifer- meri shirt tumhre aaegi?

Inaaya- aajayegi do to
Lucifer- shirt bhi bahut hai
Niche kuch pahane ki kya jarurat hai?

Inaaya- maine kab kaha main niche kuch pahan rahi hu?
Lucifer- sach me?

Inaaya- laye hu main lower
T shirt Lani bhul gaye
Chehra dekho apna kaise chammak gaya hai
Lucifer- bad luck

Inaaya- mujhe do ek shirt aur khud bhi change karlo jaldi se
Lucifer- jo chahiye le lo vaha se
Aur mujhe bhi de do

Fir dono change kar lete hai
Lucifer ki extra large shirt me inaaya kya lag rahi thi bc
Garmi ho gaye thi pure flat me lekin ye garmi lucifer ko bahut aage tak sahni thi

Lucifer- kya karna hai abhi?
Inaaya- chalo kitchen se start karte hai

Aur dono kitchen me aajate hai
Inaaya- tum heavy chhije hall me rakh do aur ek bucket me pani le aao
Lucifer- edhar nal hai to?

Inaaya- bucket me le aao
Baar baar nahi uthana padega
Lucifer- mere pass nahi hai bucket

Inaaya lucifer ko ek look deti hai aur lucifer muskura jata hai
Inaaya- nahate kaise ho tum?
Lucifer- shower se

Inaaya- kuch aisa to hoga esme pani bhar sako?
Lucifer kuch doond ke deta hai usko aur fir inaaya kitchen pani se saaf karne lagti hai aur lucifer sukhe kapde se

Pani ki vajah se inaaya ki shirt halki halki gilli hone lag gaye thi aur vo loose jada thi to bich bich me uski bra bhi dikh rahi thi lekin lucifer sarif ladke ki tarah apni najaro ko control me rakhe hue tha

Inaaya- ye ek baar me to hoga nahi
Lucifer- kisi ko bula kar kara lete hai na saaf
Paise to hai hi bahut tumhre pass

Inaaya- apne ghar ko khud saaf karne me kya problem hai tumhe?
Lucifer- koe problem nahi hai lekin agar tum abhi thak gaye to puri raat kaise handle karogi?

Inaaya- esliye meri help ache se karao nahi to main so jaungi raat ko
Lucifer- madam aap bahar jakar soffe par aaram kyu nahi kar lete?
Main dekho kaise chamakata hu pure ghar ko?

Inaaya- hehehe nice
Ek baar aur kar dete hai fir theek ho jayega

Aur thodi mahnat aur karke kitchen ko theek kar diya tha dono ne

Inaaya- ab room ki bari
Lucifer- room to saaf hi hai

Inaaya- esko saaf bolte ho?
Bimari ka ghar hai ye
Lucifer- main bimar nahi hota

Inaaya- main to hoti hu
Ye bed sheet hatao
Lucifer- mere pass aur nahi hai

Inaaya- pata hai mujhe esliye main laye hu
Bedsheet change karke ab yaha jitne bhi nashe ki chhij hai vo sab room ke bahar honi chahiye

Lucifer- fir to main bhi room ke bahar hi rahunga
Sabse jada nasha to mujhme hi hai aur mujhse jada tum me
Chalo hall me nasha todte hai

Inaaya- sari chilam, saraab, ashtray sab ko balcony me rakh ke aao
Lucifer- saraab kon rakhta hai balcony me?

Inaaya- dusre room me rakh do
Master bedroom me sirf bed aur hum dono hone chahiye

Inaaya- okay madam
Aur lucifer sab chhije dusre room me shift kar deta hai
Lucifer- hogya?

Inaaya- pani se kon saaf karega?
Lucifer- main karunga aur kon karega?

Inaaya muskurae aur fir dono room ko saaf karne lagte hai
Kapde pehle se jada gile ho chuke the lekin abhi magan ho kar ghar saaf ho raha tha

Bich bich me Ashmita ki call bhi aa rahi thi jis se pareshan ho kar phone off kar liya tha

Inaaya- thak gaye main to
Lucifer- oye nahi nahi nahi thakna nahi hai abhi to bahut lambi raat bachi hai

Inaaya- hall me chalo
Lucifer- main kar dunga hall saaf
Tu rest kar lo

Inaaya- etne utavle ho rahe ho?
Nahi soungi tumhe tadpa kar
Khush ab?
Lucifer- main chamka dunga hall tum thodi der rest karlo
Chamka dunga main

Inaaya- mujhe dekhna hai fir kaise chamkate ho tum
Fir hall me aate hai aur hall saaf karne lagte hai

Saaf karte karte inaaya pani ko utha ke le ja rahi thi aur pair slip ho kar Sara pani uske upar hi gir gaya
Vo jo typical har movies, show me hota hai na bilkul vaisa hi hua yaha bhi

Shirt puri uske sareer par chipak gaye thi aur vohi haal uske lower ka tha

Lucifer- lagi to nahi?
Ye sab chhijo ko ignore karte hue lucifer bola
Inaaya- ha pairo me lagi
Sayad mud gaya

Lucifer- dikhao
Aur lucifer inaaya ke pass bath kar uske gore, mulayam pairo ko hath me leke dekhne laga

Lekin jaise hi usne hath lagaya inaaya ne usko pakda aur apni taraf khech kar apne honth Chipka diye uske hontho par

Lucifer to kabka control karke chup tha inaaya ke es hamle se out of control ho gaya aur bahut hi jada wild kissing start ho gaye dono ke bich me

Bathe bathe problem ho rahi thi to lucifer ne kiss karte karte hi inaaya ko gaud me utha liya aur vaha ek slab bani hue thi us par bitha diya

Lucifer ab inaaya ke neck ke side me kiss kar raha tha aur inaaya paglo ki tarah Lucifer ke sareer par naakhun chuba rahi thi

Fir jab thoda niche aaya to control ka baandh toot gaya aur lucifer ki ek naye mangi shirt ek jhatke me fhaat gaye

Aaj usne kholne me time waste karna theek nahi samjha aur shirt ko faad diya aur samne bahut well shaped inaaya ke ubhaar black designer bra me saamne aagaye

Lucifer ka muh udhar ja hi raha tha ki

*level 50 threat detected*

Lucifer ke dimag me ek ghanti baji aur vo 50 sunte hi jhatke se door ho gaya inaaya se

Inaaya jo hosh me nahi thi jab lucifer ka jhatka laga aur fir movement honi band ho gaye to aankh khol kar lucifer ki taraf dekha jo usse bahut piche khada tha aur niche dekh kar kuch soch raha tha
Uske hatho ki movements bhi bahut tej ho rahi thi aur uske dimag me bas level 50 hi gunj raha tha

Inaaya- lucifer?
Lucifer you okay?
Bahut muskilo se vo etna hi bol paye

Lekin level 50 uske dimag se nikla nahi tha
Vo inaaya ko akeli nahi chhod sakta tha aur na hi usse apne sath le ja sakta tha
Ma'am ki shield me level 50 ke samne kuch kaam nahi aane wali thi vahi ashmita, anisha, Tara, payal sab ke sab akele the aur kisi bhi second mar sakte the

Inaaya ne jab lucifer ke chehre par etni tension dekhi to vo thoda ghabra gaye usse laga lucifer ko kuch past ka yaad aa raha hai
Esliye aise kar raha hai esliye usne apni shirt ko hath me hi pakad kar apne sareer ko chupaya aur lucifer ki taraf chal di

Inaaya- kya hua?
Sab theek hai?
Lucifer- shis shis shis
Sochne do bolo mat kuch bhi

Inaaya bechari chhup ho gaye vahi lucifer ko pasine aane lage

Bc threat level 50 hai aur etne sare ladkiyo ko vo kaise bachaye aur abhi to usse ye bhi nahi pata ki vo 50 level ke threat ko hara bhi sakta hai ya nahi

Soch lucifer kuch to soch
Agar kisi ko kuch hua to bahut problem ho jayegi tabhi uske dimag me guruji ki baat aati hai aur ye baat uske dimag me bahut pehle aajani chahiye thi Jab se bhasad suru hue thi
" save ashmita and people around her"
Eske mutabit to suresh ko bhi usse bachana hi tha

Lucifer- apne kapde pahno
Inaaya- hua kya hai?

Lucifer- just do it and do it fast
Inaaya ko bas upar ka hi pahnana tha aur vo usne ek second me pahan liya

Lucifer- chalo
Inaaya- kaha?

Lucifer- aaj kuch mat puchna
Bas main jo bol raha hu vo karte jana
Aur inaaya ko lekar niche aagya fir uski hi car me Ashmita ke ghar ki taraf chal diya

Aur uske ghar se thodi door car rok li

Inaaya- lucifer tum mujhe dara rahe ho
Lucifer- koe khatra hai aaj mere aas pass ke logo ko
Main sab ko ek sath nahi bacha sakta esliye ek jagah par la raha hu

Inaaya- kis se khatra?
Kaisa khatra?
Abhi vo kuch bolti ki time ruk gaya, sab ek dam se statue ho gaye
Aisa ek baar aur hua tha Jab eda aaye thi earth par

Lucifer ke dimag me pehla naam uska hi aaya lekin us se koe khatra nahi tha lucifer ko
Esliye pehle to car se bahar nikla aur edar udhar dekhne laga ki door kahi kaala dua hone laga aur uske bich se koe nikal raha tha

Ek bahut muscular aur bahut handsome lucifer ki age jaisa dikhne wala hi koe ladka tha, jiske chehre par bahut evil smile thi

Jo bahut dheere dheere lucifer ke kareeb aa raha tha aur lucifer ke bina bole hi uski talwar aur dusre hath me ek bahut bada bhala type ka hathiyaar nikal aaya tha

Jiska sidha sa matlab tha ki samne wala dost to bilkul nahi hai

"Brother, brother, brother"
" how are you my brother"
" mujhe miss nahi kiya"
Vo door se hi chhilate hue bolne laga lekin lucifer bilkul shant hi raha
Uske hath uske hathiyaar par aur jada tight ho gaye the

"Main aaj ladne nahi aaya hu mere bhai, main to bas dekhne aaya hu aapko, kaise ho aap?, dekho kya halaat kar di aapki aur dekho kya halaat ho gaye meri? Lekin ab chinta ki bilkul baat nahi hai, hum dono ko vo milega jo hume bahut pehle mil jana chahiye tha, aapko mukti aur mujhe gadhi, lekin aap chinta mat karo, jab tak aap apni sari premikao se mil nahi lete aur aap sab ka milap nahi ho jata main marunga nahi aapko, ab etna to farz banta hai mera ki mere bhai ke etne saalo ki tadap bekaar na jaye, aaj to main bas mulakat karne aagya, vo kya hai na bahut yaad aati hai aapki aur mujhe pata hai aapko bhi meri yaad aati hogi, aati hogi na bhaiya?"

Lucifer- kon ho tum?
"To kya vo sab sach hai?
Sach hi hoga vaise
Koe baat nahi nahi yaad to aapko main
Lekin vada karta hu main jaldi aaunga aur aapko es jeevan se mukti de dunga"

Lucifer- kon ho tum?
Mujhse kya chahte ho?
" jada kuch nahi bas aapki maut
Vo kya hai na jab tak aap zinda ho mujhe vo nahi mil sakta jo main chahta hu esliye aapko marna padega
Bura mat manana koe personal issue nahi hai aapse lekin kya kare kuch kar nahi sakta main"

Lucifer- jab aaj marna hi nahi tha to yaha aaya kyu hai?
Jis din marna ho us din hi aana mere samne
" marna nahi maarna hai mujhe
Vo bhai mere aapko aajadi milegi es jindagi se, main dunga aapko aajadi
Chalo theek hai aapki ichacha puri kar deta hu
Sari premikao se nahi jab saanvi se prem milap ho jayega Tab aaunga main vapas"

Lucifer- to ja yaha se
Aur aana jab maut pukar rahi ho tujhe
"Aaunga lekin kiski maut pukaregi us din ye dekhna padega"....
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Mr.X796

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superb update bhai ab ye kon aa gaya mujhe to lag raha kaal ne jise apni rooh di thi wahi hai isiliye bhai bol raha h kyoki ab uski paas kaal ki memory hogi hi dekhte hain aage kya hota hai
 
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