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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Thakur

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Inaaya apne office chali gaye aur vaha se lucifer ashmita ke ghar
Ab vo kisi ki baat kab se manene laga ki inaaya ki maan kar kuch nahi karta?

Gusse me to humesha hi rahta tha aur aaj to aur jada aa raha tha
Sidha gate teji se kholte hue vo ashmita ke ghar ghusa vaha hall me hi ashmita aur Tara bathi thi

Lucifer ko gusse me dekh kar hi ashmita samjh gaye thi ki kya hone wala hai abhi

Lucifer- baap kaha hai tera?
Ashmita- lucifer please meri baat sun

Lucifer- main puch raha hu baap kaha hai tera?
Ashmita- please sun na lucifer
Main unki taraf se tujhse maafi mangti hu, please gussa shant karle
Galti hogaye unse
Main samjhaungi unhe

Lucifer- ya to tu bata de mujhe ki vo kaha hai ya fir main apne tarike se dundoga aur anjaam theek nahi hoga
Ashmita- main galti maan rahi hu na
Please na lucifer hum dono(vo aur tara) ka unke alava aur koe nahi hai
Please samjh na Lucifer

Lucifer- nahi bataegi tu?
Main fir lagau apne bando ko kaam par?
Ashmita- kya etni hi importance hai meri teri life me?
Tu meri ek baat nahi maan sakta?

Lucifer- nahi maan sakta
Aur kuch?
Tara- lucifer manti hu unse galti hue hai aur hum maafi bhi maang rahe hai
Inaaya hume jo saja degi vo hume accept hogi lekin please tum kuch mat karo

Lucifer- saja inaaya nahi main dunga
Aur jaan bujh kar ki gaye galti galti nahi hoti
Tara- kya karoge tum?

Lucifer- insaan ko realise hona chahiye ki usse kab kya karna chahiye
Ashmita- tujhe realise hai?
Tu kab konsa kaam sahi tarike se karta hai?
Manti hu tujhe inaaya se pyaar hai lekin esse tumhe humare mamlo me aane ka hak kisne de diya?

Lucifer- mujhe majbur mat kar ashu
Anjaam acha nahi hoga
Ashmita- tu meri inaaya se baat kara de
Agar vo bol degi ki usne tujhe allow kiya hai to main bich se hat jaungi

Lucifer- nahi Hati to mujhe hatana bhi aata hai
Ashmita- to tu hata hi le

Lucifer- so this is the end?
Ashmita- this is the end Lucifer

Lucifer- acha hai fir
Dekh ab tu mujhe aur kya karta hu main tere baap ke sath usko bhi
Aur agar hai himmat to mujhe rok ke dikha

Etna bol kar lucifer vaha se chala gaya aur pata nahi kitne salo ke baad ashmita ki aankhon me aashu chhod gaye
Uske baap ki vajah se aaj usne almost Lucifer ko kho hi diya
Vo inaaya ko, arjun ko to pehle hi kho chuki thi ab bas lucifer bacha tha aur vo bhi ja chuka tha

Uski himmat nahi bachi kuch karne ki
Badi muskilo se Tara ne usse soffe par bathaya aur pani pilakar normal karne ki kosis karne lagi

Lucifer to gusse me tha hi vo vaha se sidha Naag ke pass chala gaya jo kuch karne me laga hua tha

Lucifer- naag
Mujhe suresh mc chahiye aaj ki aaj
Chahe ashmita ne usse kahi bhi chhupa rakha ho
Mujhe vo chahiye matlab chahiye
Naag- kon suresh bhai?

Lucifer- suresh raichand mc
Ashmita ka baap suresh
Mujhe vo chahiye
Naag- kya kar diya usne?
Kyu etne gusse me ho bhai aap?

Lucifer- naag mera dimag bahut kharab hai aur ab main dekhunga nahi ki samne mere kon hai esliye chhup chhap usse leke aa mere samne
Naag- main bolta hu apne bando ki

Lucifer- jaldi bol aur saraab leke aa mere liye
Naag- jee bhai
Aur naag vaha se jaldi se bhag gaya usse bhi pata chal chuka tha ki agar vahi raha to gand sut sakti hai

Mansi- bhaiya pani
Lucifer- naag tere se aaj tak pani manga hai maine?
Saraab leke aa saraab
Lucifer etne gusse me tha ki usne ye bhi mahsus kiya ki pani dene wali mansi hai naag nahi

Mansi- bhaiya???
Bahut pyaar se boli to lucifer ko mud kar dekhna hi pada ki kon hai aur kon usse bhaiya bol raha hai
Mud ke dekha to mansi hath me pani liye khadi thi

Lucifer- nahi chahiye
Mansi- pee lo bhaiya
Gussa baad me kar lena
Aapko kon hi rokta hai?

Lucifer ko pata nahi kyu gussa nahi aaya mansi par aur usne glass le liya aur thoda sa pee kar vapas vahi rakh diya

Lucifer- naag ko bejhna kaha rah gaya vo?
Lucifer- mujhe bata dijiye kya kaam hai
Main free hi hu main kar dungi

Lucifer- mujhe kisi ko marna hai aur bahut maarna hai
Esliye naag ko bejh do kaha hai vo
Mansi- vo to gaye

Lucifer- kaha gaya vo?
Usko maine daru lane ko bola tha
Mansi- main le aati hu
Unhone bola ki bhai ne kuch kaam ki kaha hai esliye ja raha hu aur mujhe pani ki bol ke gaye

Lucifer- bahut din ho gaye uski class nahi li hai esliye jada udne lag gaya hai vo
Mansi- aap kyu gussa ho?
Aap to humesha haste khelte rahte ho?

Lucifer- humesha hasne wala jaruri to vo khush ho?
Mansi- ye to mujhe bhi pata hai
Ashmita didi se ladae hue hai kya?

Lucifer- usko bhi pyaar hazam nahi hua
Aaj vo mere khilaaf khadi ho gaye?
Maine socha tha main matter karta hu uske liye lekin koe baat nahi
Sabko sab kuch milega
Mansi- kya kiya unhone?

Lucifer- vo apne baap ko bachane ke liye mere raste aa gaye
Mansi- ye to koe bhi karta
Apne pita ko bachane ke liye to bache hi samne aate hai na

Lucifer- jo galat hai vo galat hai
Mansi- lekin apne to apne hote hai na

Lucifer- koe apna nahi hota aaj ke time me
Mansi- aap aankhen khol kar dekhiye bahut log dikhenge aapko

Lucifer- naag to chutiya hai
Sach bata raha hu
Pata nahi tumne kya dekh liya usme
Aur ashmita ne apna rang dikha diya
Inaaya ke sath kabhi na kabhi sath chhut hi jayega
Ma'am ke sath to kya hi bolu?
Aur hai kon?
Kabhi Sali ye life achi lagti hai to kabhi pehli
Ye emotions to nahi the tab
Mansi- emotions ache hote hai
Unke jariye hum dikha to sakte hai ki kaisa feel kar rahe hai nahi to ghut ghut ke hi mar jayenge

Lucifer- marna bhi to sabke naseeb me nahi hota
Mansi- hahaha etni jaldi mukti kisko hi milti hai?

Lucifer- ye bhi sach hi hai
Etni jaldi mukti kaha hi milegi

Ring ring ring ring ring
Lucifer ka phone bajane laga dekha to ashmita ka tha esliye uthaya hi nahi
Bahut baar ashmita ki call aaye lekin lucifer ne nahi uthaya

Fir inaaya ka aagya pehle to socha ashmita ki vajah se kar rahi hogi esliye eska bhi nahi uthau lekin fir apne aap attend hogya

Lucifer- hello
Inaaya- kaha ho?

Lucifer- bahar hu
Kya hua?
Inaaya- ye ashmita mujhe baar baar call kyu kar rahi hai?

Lucifer- mujhe kya pata?
Inaaya- tum sath nahi ho?

Lucifer- aur bhi bahut kaam hote hai mujhe
Inaaya- jaise?

Lucifer- are tum kaam bolo na
Inaaya- main tumhre flat aaungi aaj

Lucifer- theek hai le aaunga main
Inaaya- saaf safae kar lena

Lucifer- tum aakar kar dena
Mujhe bahar kaam hai thoda
Late ho jaunga
Inaaya- tum suresh uncle ko to kuch nahi karne wale?

Lucifer- main kya karunga?
Ngo ja raha hu main to
Inaaya- bahut ache se janti hu tumhe
Ghar saaf kar lena

Lucifer- tum jab free ho jao to call kar dena sath me kar lenge
Inaaya- theek hai OK bye

Lucifer- bye
Aur phone kaat deta hai

Mansi- aap to bol rahe the koe nahi hai?
Lucifer- koe nahi bachega
Thank you pani ke liye
Chalta hu ab

Mansi- kaha ja rahe ho?
Aap to saraab peene aaye the na?
Lucifer- kuch kaam hai
Bye

Aur vaha se payal ke pass chala jata hai
Vaha sab kuch ready tha bas samaan deport karna hai

Lucifer ne pehle hi bande laga diye the uske liye vo aaj bas sab check karne aaya tha

Lucifer- sab theek?
Payal- abhi to theek hai

Lucifer- to problem kaha hai?
Payal- jab kuch nahi bikega tab problem aaegi

Lucifer- bik jayega
Tension mat lo
Payal- aap theek ho?

Lucifer- ha mujhe kya hoga?
Payal- nahi bas aise hi laga mujhe
Sahi me theek ho aap?

Lucifer- sahi me theek hai
Online platform par bhi daal sakte hai
Vaha se bhi kuch na kuch to bikega hi
Payal- hmm maine bhi socha hai es bare me

Lucifer- ek baar logo ko pata chal jayega
Ye quality wise bahut acha hai aur design bhi kafi acha hai
Bahut bhagega
Payal- hope so

Lucifer- baki koe problem ho to batao?
Buddhe log theek hai?
Payal- uncle aunties bhi to bol sakte ho?

Lucifer- samjh gaye na tum?
Kaise hai sab?
Koe aakhiri din me to nahi pahuch gaya?
Payal- uska to kya hi pata

Arohi- didi vo samaan load hogya
Lucifer- ye kon hai?

Arohi- main arohi
Bahut suna hai aapke bare me
Didi bahut baatein karti hai aapke bare
Lucifer- hai?
Ye to mujhe nahi pata tha
Kya baat karti hai?

Payal- kuch nahi karti
Bas ye bata rahi thi ki tum kitne helpful ho
Lucifer- kya naam hai tumhra?

Arohi- arohi
Lucifer- arohi ye baatein karti hai didi tumhri?

Arohi- nahi nahi
Bahut kuch bolti hai jaise aap ek handsome egoistic person ho
Thode sanki bhi ho lekin kabhi kabhi pyaare bhi lagte ho
Payal- bas bas bahut ho gaya
Kuch bhi bolti hai pagal ladki

Lucifer- arohi tum chalo
Hum baatein karte hai tumhri didi ko karne do kaam
Payal- arohi ander jao tum
Aur kuch baatein nahi honi chahiye aap dono me

Lucifer- kyu nahi ho sakti?
Etni sartyvaan ladki se main kyu nahi baat karunga?
Arohi tum mera number le lo
Payal- arohi jao

Arohi ander bhag gaye
Payal- bachi hai vo
Lucifer- mujhe bhi dikhta hai
Andha thodi hu

Payal- uske sath kuch nahi
Lucifer- oye meri najar tum par hai aur tum apni chhoti behan ki taraf dhakel rahi ho mujhe?

Payal- main kahi nahi dhakel rahi
Aur mujh par bhi najar mat rakho
Lucifer- main to rakhunga
Meri najar
Acha koe kaam ho to kar lena mujhe bahut kaam hai Main nikalta hu

Ab inaaya ne bola hai to safae bhi to karni hi padegi aur safae karne ke liye safae ka samaan bhi lena hoga to vohi lene vaha se lucifer nikal gaya.....
Nice update bhai

Keep going 🔥🔥🔥
 

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Inaaya apne office chali gaye aur vaha se lucifer ashmita ke ghar
Ab vo kisi ki baat kab se manene laga ki inaaya ki maan kar kuch nahi karta?

Gusse me to humesha hi rahta tha aur aaj to aur jada aa raha tha
Sidha gate teji se kholte hue vo ashmita ke ghar ghusa vaha hall me hi ashmita aur Tara bathi thi

Lucifer ko gusse me dekh kar hi ashmita samjh gaye thi ki kya hone wala hai abhi

Lucifer- baap kaha hai tera?
Ashmita- lucifer please meri baat sun

Lucifer- main puch raha hu baap kaha hai tera?
Ashmita- please sun na lucifer
Main unki taraf se tujhse maafi mangti hu, please gussa shant karle
Galti hogaye unse
Main samjhaungi unhe

Lucifer- ya to tu bata de mujhe ki vo kaha hai ya fir main apne tarike se dundoga aur anjaam theek nahi hoga
Ashmita- main galti maan rahi hu na
Please na lucifer hum dono(vo aur tara) ka unke alava aur koe nahi hai
Please samjh na Lucifer

Lucifer- nahi bataegi tu?
Main fir lagau apne bando ko kaam par?
Ashmita- kya etni hi importance hai meri teri life me?
Tu meri ek baat nahi maan sakta?

Lucifer- nahi maan sakta
Aur kuch?
Tara- lucifer manti hu unse galti hue hai aur hum maafi bhi maang rahe hai
Inaaya hume jo saja degi vo hume accept hogi lekin please tum kuch mat karo

Lucifer- saja inaaya nahi main dunga
Aur jaan bujh kar ki gaye galti galti nahi hoti
Tara- kya karoge tum?

Lucifer- insaan ko realise hona chahiye ki usse kab kya karna chahiye
Ashmita- tujhe realise hai?
Tu kab konsa kaam sahi tarike se karta hai?
Manti hu tujhe inaaya se pyaar hai lekin esse tumhe humare mamlo me aane ka hak kisne de diya?

Lucifer- mujhe majbur mat kar ashu
Anjaam acha nahi hoga
Ashmita- tu meri inaaya se baat kara de
Agar vo bol degi ki usne tujhe allow kiya hai to main bich se hat jaungi

Lucifer- nahi Hati to mujhe hatana bhi aata hai
Ashmita- to tu hata hi le

Lucifer- so this is the end?
Ashmita- this is the end Lucifer

Lucifer- acha hai fir
Dekh ab tu mujhe aur kya karta hu main tere baap ke sath usko bhi
Aur agar hai himmat to mujhe rok ke dikha

Etna bol kar lucifer vaha se chala gaya aur pata nahi kitne salo ke baad ashmita ki aankhon me aashu chhod gaye
Uske baap ki vajah se aaj usne almost Lucifer ko kho hi diya
Vo inaaya ko, arjun ko to pehle hi kho chuki thi ab bas lucifer bacha tha aur vo bhi ja chuka tha

Uski himmat nahi bachi kuch karne ki
Badi muskilo se Tara ne usse soffe par bathaya aur pani pilakar normal karne ki kosis karne lagi

Lucifer to gusse me tha hi vo vaha se sidha Naag ke pass chala gaya jo kuch karne me laga hua tha

Lucifer- naag
Mujhe suresh mc chahiye aaj ki aaj
Chahe ashmita ne usse kahi bhi chhupa rakha ho
Mujhe vo chahiye matlab chahiye
Naag- kon suresh bhai?

Lucifer- suresh raichand mc
Ashmita ka baap suresh
Mujhe vo chahiye
Naag- kya kar diya usne?
Kyu etne gusse me ho bhai aap?

Lucifer- naag mera dimag bahut kharab hai aur ab main dekhunga nahi ki samne mere kon hai esliye chhup chhap usse leke aa mere samne
Naag- main bolta hu apne bando ki

Lucifer- jaldi bol aur saraab leke aa mere liye
Naag- jee bhai
Aur naag vaha se jaldi se bhag gaya usse bhi pata chal chuka tha ki agar vahi raha to gand sut sakti hai

Mansi- bhaiya pani
Lucifer- naag tere se aaj tak pani manga hai maine?
Saraab leke aa saraab
Lucifer etne gusse me tha ki usne ye bhi mahsus kiya ki pani dene wali mansi hai naag nahi

Mansi- bhaiya???
Bahut pyaar se boli to lucifer ko mud kar dekhna hi pada ki kon hai aur kon usse bhaiya bol raha hai
Mud ke dekha to mansi hath me pani liye khadi thi

Lucifer- nahi chahiye
Mansi- pee lo bhaiya
Gussa baad me kar lena
Aapko kon hi rokta hai?

Lucifer ko pata nahi kyu gussa nahi aaya mansi par aur usne glass le liya aur thoda sa pee kar vapas vahi rakh diya

Lucifer- naag ko bejhna kaha rah gaya vo?
Lucifer- mujhe bata dijiye kya kaam hai
Main free hi hu main kar dungi

Lucifer- mujhe kisi ko marna hai aur bahut maarna hai
Esliye naag ko bejh do kaha hai vo
Mansi- vo to gaye

Lucifer- kaha gaya vo?
Usko maine daru lane ko bola tha
Mansi- main le aati hu
Unhone bola ki bhai ne kuch kaam ki kaha hai esliye ja raha hu aur mujhe pani ki bol ke gaye

Lucifer- bahut din ho gaye uski class nahi li hai esliye jada udne lag gaya hai vo
Mansi- aap kyu gussa ho?
Aap to humesha haste khelte rahte ho?

Lucifer- humesha hasne wala jaruri to vo khush ho?
Mansi- ye to mujhe bhi pata hai
Ashmita didi se ladae hue hai kya?

Lucifer- usko bhi pyaar hazam nahi hua
Aaj vo mere khilaaf khadi ho gaye?
Maine socha tha main matter karta hu uske liye lekin koe baat nahi
Sabko sab kuch milega
Mansi- kya kiya unhone?

Lucifer- vo apne baap ko bachane ke liye mere raste aa gaye
Mansi- ye to koe bhi karta
Apne pita ko bachane ke liye to bache hi samne aate hai na

Lucifer- jo galat hai vo galat hai
Mansi- lekin apne to apne hote hai na

Lucifer- koe apna nahi hota aaj ke time me
Mansi- aap aankhen khol kar dekhiye bahut log dikhenge aapko

Lucifer- naag to chutiya hai
Sach bata raha hu
Pata nahi tumne kya dekh liya usme
Aur ashmita ne apna rang dikha diya
Inaaya ke sath kabhi na kabhi sath chhut hi jayega
Ma'am ke sath to kya hi bolu?
Aur hai kon?
Kabhi Sali ye life achi lagti hai to kabhi pehli
Ye emotions to nahi the tab
Mansi- emotions ache hote hai
Unke jariye hum dikha to sakte hai ki kaisa feel kar rahe hai nahi to ghut ghut ke hi mar jayenge

Lucifer- marna bhi to sabke naseeb me nahi hota
Mansi- hahaha etni jaldi mukti kisko hi milti hai?

Lucifer- ye bhi sach hi hai
Etni jaldi mukti kaha hi milegi

Ring ring ring ring ring
Lucifer ka phone bajane laga dekha to ashmita ka tha esliye uthaya hi nahi
Bahut baar ashmita ki call aaye lekin lucifer ne nahi uthaya

Fir inaaya ka aagya pehle to socha ashmita ki vajah se kar rahi hogi esliye eska bhi nahi uthau lekin fir apne aap attend hogya

Lucifer- hello
Inaaya- kaha ho?

Lucifer- bahar hu
Kya hua?
Inaaya- ye ashmita mujhe baar baar call kyu kar rahi hai?

Lucifer- mujhe kya pata?
Inaaya- tum sath nahi ho?

Lucifer- aur bhi bahut kaam hote hai mujhe
Inaaya- jaise?

Lucifer- are tum kaam bolo na
Inaaya- main tumhre flat aaungi aaj

Lucifer- theek hai le aaunga main
Inaaya- saaf safae kar lena

Lucifer- tum aakar kar dena
Mujhe bahar kaam hai thoda
Late ho jaunga
Inaaya- tum suresh uncle ko to kuch nahi karne wale?

Lucifer- main kya karunga?
Ngo ja raha hu main to
Inaaya- bahut ache se janti hu tumhe
Ghar saaf kar lena

Lucifer- tum jab free ho jao to call kar dena sath me kar lenge
Inaaya- theek hai OK bye

Lucifer- bye
Aur phone kaat deta hai

Mansi- aap to bol rahe the koe nahi hai?
Lucifer- koe nahi bachega
Thank you pani ke liye
Chalta hu ab

Mansi- kaha ja rahe ho?
Aap to saraab peene aaye the na?
Lucifer- kuch kaam hai
Bye

Aur vaha se payal ke pass chala jata hai
Vaha sab kuch ready tha bas samaan deport karna hai

Lucifer ne pehle hi bande laga diye the uske liye vo aaj bas sab check karne aaya tha

Lucifer- sab theek?
Payal- abhi to theek hai

Lucifer- to problem kaha hai?
Payal- jab kuch nahi bikega tab problem aaegi

Lucifer- bik jayega
Tension mat lo
Payal- aap theek ho?

Lucifer- ha mujhe kya hoga?
Payal- nahi bas aise hi laga mujhe
Sahi me theek ho aap?

Lucifer- sahi me theek hai
Online platform par bhi daal sakte hai
Vaha se bhi kuch na kuch to bikega hi
Payal- hmm maine bhi socha hai es bare me

Lucifer- ek baar logo ko pata chal jayega
Ye quality wise bahut acha hai aur design bhi kafi acha hai
Bahut bhagega
Payal- hope so

Lucifer- baki koe problem ho to batao?
Buddhe log theek hai?
Payal- uncle aunties bhi to bol sakte ho?

Lucifer- samjh gaye na tum?
Kaise hai sab?
Koe aakhiri din me to nahi pahuch gaya?
Payal- uska to kya hi pata

Arohi- didi vo samaan load hogya
Lucifer- ye kon hai?

Arohi- main arohi
Bahut suna hai aapke bare me
Didi bahut baatein karti hai aapke bare
Lucifer- hai?
Ye to mujhe nahi pata tha
Kya baat karti hai?

Payal- kuch nahi karti
Bas ye bata rahi thi ki tum kitne helpful ho
Lucifer- kya naam hai tumhra?

Arohi- arohi
Lucifer- arohi ye baatein karti hai didi tumhri?

Arohi- nahi nahi
Bahut kuch bolti hai jaise aap ek handsome egoistic person ho
Thode sanki bhi ho lekin kabhi kabhi pyaare bhi lagte ho
Payal- bas bas bahut ho gaya
Kuch bhi bolti hai pagal ladki

Lucifer- arohi tum chalo
Hum baatein karte hai tumhri didi ko karne do kaam
Payal- arohi ander jao tum
Aur kuch baatein nahi honi chahiye aap dono me

Lucifer- kyu nahi ho sakti?
Etni sartyvaan ladki se main kyu nahi baat karunga?
Arohi tum mera number le lo
Payal- arohi jao

Arohi ander bhag gaye
Payal- bachi hai vo
Lucifer- mujhe bhi dikhta hai
Andha thodi hu

Payal- uske sath kuch nahi
Lucifer- oye meri najar tum par hai aur tum apni chhoti behan ki taraf dhakel rahi ho mujhe?

Payal- main kahi nahi dhakel rahi
Aur mujh par bhi najar mat rakho
Lucifer- main to rakhunga
Meri najar
Acha koe kaam ho to kar lena mujhe bahut kaam hai Main nikalta hu

Ab inaaya ne bola hai to safae bhi to karni hi padegi aur safae karne ke liye safae ka samaan bhi lena hoga to vohi lene vaha se lucifer nikal gaya.....
Excellent update.. bhai.. 💥💥
 

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Inaaya apne office chali gaye aur vaha se lucifer ashmita ke ghar
Ab vo kisi ki baat kab se manene laga ki inaaya ki maan kar kuch nahi karta?

Gusse me to humesha hi rahta tha aur aaj to aur jada aa raha tha
Sidha gate teji se kholte hue vo ashmita ke ghar ghusa vaha hall me hi ashmita aur Tara bathi thi

Lucifer ko gusse me dekh kar hi ashmita samjh gaye thi ki kya hone wala hai abhi

Lucifer- baap kaha hai tera?
Ashmita- lucifer please meri baat sun

Lucifer- main puch raha hu baap kaha hai tera?
Ashmita- please sun na lucifer
Main unki taraf se tujhse maafi mangti hu, please gussa shant karle
Galti hogaye unse
Main samjhaungi unhe

Lucifer- ya to tu bata de mujhe ki vo kaha hai ya fir main apne tarike se dundoga aur anjaam theek nahi hoga
Ashmita- main galti maan rahi hu na
Please na lucifer hum dono(vo aur tara) ka unke alava aur koe nahi hai
Please samjh na Lucifer

Lucifer- nahi bataegi tu?
Main fir lagau apne bando ko kaam par?
Ashmita- kya etni hi importance hai meri teri life me?
Tu meri ek baat nahi maan sakta?

Lucifer- nahi maan sakta
Aur kuch?
Tara- lucifer manti hu unse galti hue hai aur hum maafi bhi maang rahe hai
Inaaya hume jo saja degi vo hume accept hogi lekin please tum kuch mat karo

Lucifer- saja inaaya nahi main dunga
Aur jaan bujh kar ki gaye galti galti nahi hoti
Tara- kya karoge tum?

Lucifer- insaan ko realise hona chahiye ki usse kab kya karna chahiye
Ashmita- tujhe realise hai?
Tu kab konsa kaam sahi tarike se karta hai?
Manti hu tujhe inaaya se pyaar hai lekin esse tumhe humare mamlo me aane ka hak kisne de diya?

Lucifer- mujhe majbur mat kar ashu
Anjaam acha nahi hoga
Ashmita- tu meri inaaya se baat kara de
Agar vo bol degi ki usne tujhe allow kiya hai to main bich se hat jaungi

Lucifer- nahi Hati to mujhe hatana bhi aata hai
Ashmita- to tu hata hi le

Lucifer- so this is the end?
Ashmita- this is the end Lucifer

Lucifer- acha hai fir
Dekh ab tu mujhe aur kya karta hu main tere baap ke sath usko bhi
Aur agar hai himmat to mujhe rok ke dikha

Etna bol kar lucifer vaha se chala gaya aur pata nahi kitne salo ke baad ashmita ki aankhon me aashu chhod gaye
Uske baap ki vajah se aaj usne almost Lucifer ko kho hi diya
Vo inaaya ko, arjun ko to pehle hi kho chuki thi ab bas lucifer bacha tha aur vo bhi ja chuka tha

Uski himmat nahi bachi kuch karne ki
Badi muskilo se Tara ne usse soffe par bathaya aur pani pilakar normal karne ki kosis karne lagi

Lucifer to gusse me tha hi vo vaha se sidha Naag ke pass chala gaya jo kuch karne me laga hua tha

Lucifer- naag
Mujhe suresh mc chahiye aaj ki aaj
Chahe ashmita ne usse kahi bhi chhupa rakha ho
Mujhe vo chahiye matlab chahiye
Naag- kon suresh bhai?

Lucifer- suresh raichand mc
Ashmita ka baap suresh
Mujhe vo chahiye
Naag- kya kar diya usne?
Kyu etne gusse me ho bhai aap?

Lucifer- naag mera dimag bahut kharab hai aur ab main dekhunga nahi ki samne mere kon hai esliye chhup chhap usse leke aa mere samne
Naag- main bolta hu apne bando ki

Lucifer- jaldi bol aur saraab leke aa mere liye
Naag- jee bhai
Aur naag vaha se jaldi se bhag gaya usse bhi pata chal chuka tha ki agar vahi raha to gand sut sakti hai

Mansi- bhaiya pani
Lucifer- naag tere se aaj tak pani manga hai maine?
Saraab leke aa saraab
Lucifer etne gusse me tha ki usne ye bhi mahsus kiya ki pani dene wali mansi hai naag nahi

Mansi- bhaiya???
Bahut pyaar se boli to lucifer ko mud kar dekhna hi pada ki kon hai aur kon usse bhaiya bol raha hai
Mud ke dekha to mansi hath me pani liye khadi thi

Lucifer- nahi chahiye
Mansi- pee lo bhaiya
Gussa baad me kar lena
Aapko kon hi rokta hai?

Lucifer ko pata nahi kyu gussa nahi aaya mansi par aur usne glass le liya aur thoda sa pee kar vapas vahi rakh diya

Lucifer- naag ko bejhna kaha rah gaya vo?
Lucifer- mujhe bata dijiye kya kaam hai
Main free hi hu main kar dungi

Lucifer- mujhe kisi ko marna hai aur bahut maarna hai
Esliye naag ko bejh do kaha hai vo
Mansi- vo to gaye

Lucifer- kaha gaya vo?
Usko maine daru lane ko bola tha
Mansi- main le aati hu
Unhone bola ki bhai ne kuch kaam ki kaha hai esliye ja raha hu aur mujhe pani ki bol ke gaye

Lucifer- bahut din ho gaye uski class nahi li hai esliye jada udne lag gaya hai vo
Mansi- aap kyu gussa ho?
Aap to humesha haste khelte rahte ho?

Lucifer- humesha hasne wala jaruri to vo khush ho?
Mansi- ye to mujhe bhi pata hai
Ashmita didi se ladae hue hai kya?

Lucifer- usko bhi pyaar hazam nahi hua
Aaj vo mere khilaaf khadi ho gaye?
Maine socha tha main matter karta hu uske liye lekin koe baat nahi
Sabko sab kuch milega
Mansi- kya kiya unhone?

Lucifer- vo apne baap ko bachane ke liye mere raste aa gaye
Mansi- ye to koe bhi karta
Apne pita ko bachane ke liye to bache hi samne aate hai na

Lucifer- jo galat hai vo galat hai
Mansi- lekin apne to apne hote hai na

Lucifer- koe apna nahi hota aaj ke time me
Mansi- aap aankhen khol kar dekhiye bahut log dikhenge aapko

Lucifer- naag to chutiya hai
Sach bata raha hu
Pata nahi tumne kya dekh liya usme
Aur ashmita ne apna rang dikha diya
Inaaya ke sath kabhi na kabhi sath chhut hi jayega
Ma'am ke sath to kya hi bolu?
Aur hai kon?
Kabhi Sali ye life achi lagti hai to kabhi pehli
Ye emotions to nahi the tab
Mansi- emotions ache hote hai
Unke jariye hum dikha to sakte hai ki kaisa feel kar rahe hai nahi to ghut ghut ke hi mar jayenge

Lucifer- marna bhi to sabke naseeb me nahi hota
Mansi- hahaha etni jaldi mukti kisko hi milti hai?

Lucifer- ye bhi sach hi hai
Etni jaldi mukti kaha hi milegi

Ring ring ring ring ring
Lucifer ka phone bajane laga dekha to ashmita ka tha esliye uthaya hi nahi
Bahut baar ashmita ki call aaye lekin lucifer ne nahi uthaya

Fir inaaya ka aagya pehle to socha ashmita ki vajah se kar rahi hogi esliye eska bhi nahi uthau lekin fir apne aap attend hogya

Lucifer- hello
Inaaya- kaha ho?

Lucifer- bahar hu
Kya hua?
Inaaya- ye ashmita mujhe baar baar call kyu kar rahi hai?

Lucifer- mujhe kya pata?
Inaaya- tum sath nahi ho?

Lucifer- aur bhi bahut kaam hote hai mujhe
Inaaya- jaise?

Lucifer- are tum kaam bolo na
Inaaya- main tumhre flat aaungi aaj

Lucifer- theek hai le aaunga main
Inaaya- saaf safae kar lena

Lucifer- tum aakar kar dena
Mujhe bahar kaam hai thoda
Late ho jaunga
Inaaya- tum suresh uncle ko to kuch nahi karne wale?

Lucifer- main kya karunga?
Ngo ja raha hu main to
Inaaya- bahut ache se janti hu tumhe
Ghar saaf kar lena

Lucifer- tum jab free ho jao to call kar dena sath me kar lenge
Inaaya- theek hai OK bye

Lucifer- bye
Aur phone kaat deta hai

Mansi- aap to bol rahe the koe nahi hai?
Lucifer- koe nahi bachega
Thank you pani ke liye
Chalta hu ab

Mansi- kaha ja rahe ho?
Aap to saraab peene aaye the na?
Lucifer- kuch kaam hai
Bye

Aur vaha se payal ke pass chala jata hai
Vaha sab kuch ready tha bas samaan deport karna hai

Lucifer ne pehle hi bande laga diye the uske liye vo aaj bas sab check karne aaya tha

Lucifer- sab theek?
Payal- abhi to theek hai

Lucifer- to problem kaha hai?
Payal- jab kuch nahi bikega tab problem aaegi

Lucifer- bik jayega
Tension mat lo
Payal- aap theek ho?

Lucifer- ha mujhe kya hoga?
Payal- nahi bas aise hi laga mujhe
Sahi me theek ho aap?

Lucifer- sahi me theek hai
Online platform par bhi daal sakte hai
Vaha se bhi kuch na kuch to bikega hi
Payal- hmm maine bhi socha hai es bare me

Lucifer- ek baar logo ko pata chal jayega
Ye quality wise bahut acha hai aur design bhi kafi acha hai
Bahut bhagega
Payal- hope so

Lucifer- baki koe problem ho to batao?
Buddhe log theek hai?
Payal- uncle aunties bhi to bol sakte ho?

Lucifer- samjh gaye na tum?
Kaise hai sab?
Koe aakhiri din me to nahi pahuch gaya?
Payal- uska to kya hi pata

Arohi- didi vo samaan load hogya
Lucifer- ye kon hai?

Arohi- main arohi
Bahut suna hai aapke bare me
Didi bahut baatein karti hai aapke bare
Lucifer- hai?
Ye to mujhe nahi pata tha
Kya baat karti hai?

Payal- kuch nahi karti
Bas ye bata rahi thi ki tum kitne helpful ho
Lucifer- kya naam hai tumhra?

Arohi- arohi
Lucifer- arohi ye baatein karti hai didi tumhri?

Arohi- nahi nahi
Bahut kuch bolti hai jaise aap ek handsome egoistic person ho
Thode sanki bhi ho lekin kabhi kabhi pyaare bhi lagte ho
Payal- bas bas bahut ho gaya
Kuch bhi bolti hai pagal ladki

Lucifer- arohi tum chalo
Hum baatein karte hai tumhri didi ko karne do kaam
Payal- arohi ander jao tum
Aur kuch baatein nahi honi chahiye aap dono me

Lucifer- kyu nahi ho sakti?
Etni sartyvaan ladki se main kyu nahi baat karunga?
Arohi tum mera number le lo
Payal- arohi jao

Arohi ander bhag gaye
Payal- bachi hai vo
Lucifer- mujhe bhi dikhta hai
Andha thodi hu

Payal- uske sath kuch nahi
Lucifer- oye meri najar tum par hai aur tum apni chhoti behan ki taraf dhakel rahi ho mujhe?

Payal- main kahi nahi dhakel rahi
Aur mujh par bhi najar mat rakho
Lucifer- main to rakhunga
Meri najar
Acha koe kaam ho to kar lena mujhe bahut kaam hai Main nikalta hu

Ab inaaya ne bola hai to safae bhi to karni hi padegi aur safae karne ke liye safae ka samaan bhi lena hoga to vohi lene vaha se lucifer nikal gaya.....
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and awesome update....
 

ANUJ KUMAR

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** ghane janglo me aadhi raat ke waqt bahut sare rakshasho ke bich me lucifer khada hua tha
Uski aankhen aur aankhon ke aas pass ka pura area kala ho rakha tha aur aisa lag raha tha jaise aaj ye raat apne sath kayamat laye hai kyuki jaise hi ek rakshash lucifer ki taraf bhada lucifer ne ek behad khatarnaak punch mara uske pet me aur dusre hath se uske sareer ko pakde rakha taki vo door jake na geere aur agle hi pal uske sari aatandiya(intestine) lucifer uske pet se bahar nikaal laya
Usse door fekte hue apni talvaar nikali aur buri tarah unko kaatne lag gaya
Uski raftaar aisi ho rakhi thi ki aam insaan to usse dekh hi na paye aur kuch hi minutes me vaha sirf lashe bach gaye aur unke upar batha hua tha lucifer***

Next day vo utha aur kuch soch ke ek jagah khada ho gaya aur kisi chhij ka intezaar karne laga
Ye ek t point tha aur agar kisi ko left mudna ho to usse dikhega nahi ki samne koe hai ya nahi

Vahi khada khada lucifer intezaar karne laga kisi ka aur usse intezaar bhi jada der karna nahi pada

Kyuki vahi kali car usse door se aate dikhae di aur lucifer vahi side me khada hogya aur jaise hi usne turn liya ek dum se uske samne aagaya

Car bahut speed me thi esliye lucifer udta hu door jake geera aur usme bathe ladkiyo ko din me taare dikhne lage

Vo dono jaldi se car ke bahar aaye aur lucifer ki taraf bhage jo uthne ki kosis kar raha tha
Morning ka time tha esliye usse thoda pain ho raha tha abhi lekin fir bhi vo uth khada hua aur apne kapde theek karne laga

Bahut sundar ladki- tumhe dikhae nahi deta kya?
Ya fir marne ka shauk chada hai aur agar chada hai to kahi aur jake kyu nahi marte?
Meri hi ghadi mili thi kya marne ke liye?
Usse kaam sunder ladki- tum theek ho?
Kahi chot to nahi aaye?

Bahut sundar ladki- aise log jaan bhuj ke humari gadiyo ke niche aate hai taki paise mil sake
Usse Kam sunder ladki- hospital leke chale kya tumhe?

Bahut sundar ladki- apne purse se paise nikalte hue
Ye lo aur niklo yaha se
Lucifer ki taraf ek notes ki gaadi karte hue boli

Lucifer jo abhi tak kuch nahi bola tha uski taraf dekha, hatho se paise liye aur
Lucifer- kal yahi par milenge aur paise pure laana aur ye bol Kar vaha se chala gaya

Ye dono ladkiya bas usse dekhti rah gaye ki sala abhi hua kya?

"Ashmita aisa nahi bolna chahiye tha tumhe" kam sunder wali boli
Ashmita- didi aise logo ke sath aisa hi karna chahiye
Aur dekha nahi aapne kaise paise leke chala gaya
Tara- tumne bola hi aise usse
Aur dekha nahi chala bhi nahi ja raha tha vo to acha hua usne case nahi Kiya

Ashmita- kar deta to bhi kya ho jata
Chalo college vaise bhi late kara diya es pagal ne
Aur fir dono college ke liye nikal gaye

Lucifer vahi park me jake bath gaya lekin aaj aisi jagah ki kisi ko vo dikhae na de aur aise hi waqt gujar gaya aur aagaya agli morning

Lucifer aaj fir usse jagah khada hua tha lekin aaj ashmita ne usse dekh liya aur apna muh banate hue uske side se nikal gaye

Vo bhi muskurata hua college ki taraf chal diya aur parking me hi ashmita ko rok liya

Ashmita gusse me- what you want?
Lucifer- mere paise

Ashmita- what?
Konse paise?
Lucifer- main Kab se vaha khada hua tha ki koe ameer ghadi mujhe thokegi aur main mar jaunga fir jo paise milege usse aish karunga

Ashmita- tum pagal ho?
Lucifer- mujhe mere paise de do aur main chala jaunga

Ashmita- main kyu du paise?
Aaj thodi thoka hai maine?
Lucifer- ye tumhri galti hai
Main to vahi khada tha
Tumne nahi thoka to esme main kya karunga
Mujhe mere paise de do main bahut gareeb hu mere family bhuki mar jayegi

Ashmita- dekho mujhe irritate mat karo nahi to dad se bol kar haddi pasli ek kara dungi
Lucifer- vo bhi try kar lena
Lekin abhi meri mahnat ki kamae de do
Nahi to pure college ke samne izzat kharab kar dunga

Ashmita ko ab gussa aane laga tha aur vo irritate bhi ho gaye thi lekin esse pehle ki vo kuch karti

Tara- ye lo tumhre paise aur jao yaha se aur aage se humare ghadi ke aage mat aana
Ashmita- didi...
Tara ne usse bich me hi rok diya aur uska hath pakad ke ander le jane lagi

Lucifer paise leke muda to uske just piche madhuri ma'am khadi thi

Ma'am- kya ho raha tha yaha?
Lucifer- ma'am ye ameer log kaam kara lete hai fir paiso ke time par aanakani karte hai

Ma'am- aisa kya kaam karaya enhone tumse?
Lucifer- vo nahi bata sakta
Aap mujhe phone use karna sikha sakte ho?

Ma'am- tumhe nahi aata?
Lucifer- tabhi to puch raha hu

Ma'am- mujhe kya milega?
Lucifer- guru daksina

Ma'am- thank you lekin mujhe nahi chahiye
Aur college me kisi student ko pareshan nahi karoge
Lucifer- main kis ko pareshan kar raha hu?

Ma'am- vo koe aam ladkiya nahi hai esliye bol rahi hu door raho unse
Aurr fir Ma'am bina lucifer ka jawab sune vaha se chali gaye

Uske baad vo bhi vaha se chala gaya
Paise bhi bahut mil gaye the ab to esliye shopping karne ki sochi aur pahuch gaya ek mall me

Usse yaha ka vaise koe idea to nahi tha aur na hi brands vagra ke bare me usse pata tha
Bas aise hi edhar udhar ghumta raha fir kuch kale kapde liye aur ek iPhone leke vapas college chala gaya

Late to ho hi gaya tha esliye college off chuka tha aur sab vaha se ja chuke the

Lucifer ne ek baar ashmita ke ghar ke bahar check Kiya sab okay tha fir vahi chhup ke bath gaya aur phone chalana sikhne laga
Vaise usse jada waqt nahi laga expert banane me
Abhi bhi ek problem thi aur vo thi sim ki
Sim kaise le?
Koe I'd to thi nahi uske pass

Abhi vo phone me ghusa hi hua tha ki usse door kahi kuch aadmi khade dikhe aur unko dekh ke ye to pata chal raha tha ki ache aadmi to ye bilkul nahi lag rahe

Lucifer ne phone vapas pant me dala aur unki harkato par najar rakhne laga

Vo sab baar baar ashmita ke ghar ki taraf dekh rahe the aur fir apne charo taraf
Unko dekh ke ye to pata chal raha tha ki unki gand fati hue thi lekin sayad kisi ne gand me sariya kiya hoga esliye yaha tak aagaye honge

Thodi der baad vo vaha se chale gaye aur lucifer vahi batha rah gaya

Fir kuch soch ke crossed leg bath gaya aur aankhen band karke dhayan lagane laga aur man me bolne laga ashmita raichand ashimta raichand ashmita raichand
Aur uski aankhon ke samne kuch dhundla dhundla dikhne laga lekin usse kuch bhi saaf nahi dikh raha tha ya fir yu bole ki kuch bhi samjh nahi aa raha thi bas bahut tej tej aawaz sunae de rahi thi aur aisi aawaz lucifer bahut ache se pahchanta tha
Uska sareer pasino se bhig chuka tha aur hath kapne lag rahe the ausa lag raha tha ki agar vo kuch der aur es mantra ke bahar nahi aaya to uska sareer uska sath chhod dega aur esliye hi majburi me uski aankhen khul gaye ya kisi ne khol di aur lucifer buri tarah hafne laga

Uska pura sareer pasine me nahaya hua tha aur vo sochne par majbur hogya ki aisa kya hai es ladki me ki vo eske bare me jaan nahi paya
Kuch baatein to hai jo guruji ne usse bataye nahi thi lekin ab usse janni thi

Guruji to batayenge nahi esliye usse aisi jagah se pata karna tha jaha se usse information bhi mil jaye aur koe jada sawal jawab bhi na kare
Lekin aisi jagah milegi kaha ye bahut bada sawal tha jiska jawab lucifer ke pass abhi ke waqt to nahi tha...
nice update
 

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Lucifer raat ko apne flat vapas aagya aur gate khol raha tha ki piche se ek ball udte hue uske taraf aaye jisko lucifer ne bina dekhe bas hath piche karke pakad liya aur fir dheere dheere piche muda
Uski aankhen ka rang badlane laga tha lekin samne dekhte hi bilkul normal ho gya kyuki samne madhuri ma'am khadi thi aur unke sath ek chhoti bachhi

Bachhi- wow uncle aapne bina dekhe kaise pakde ball?
Lucifer kuch nahi bola ball uski taraf feki aur apne flat me ghus gaya

Madhuri ma'am bas uski harkatein dekhti rah gaye
Ma'am- alia ander chalo beta
Alia- mumma vo uncle gunge hai kya?

Ma'am- beta aise nahi bolte
Alia- fir vo bina bole kyu chale gaye?

Ma'am- kya pata unko kuch kaam hoga esliye chale gaye honge
Alia- aapko aata hai aise bina dekhe ball pakadna?

Ma'am- mujhe to nahi aata beta
Alia- fir aap un uncle ko bolo na vo mujhe sikhaye?

Ma'am- pehle tum badi ho jao fir sikh lena
Alia- nahi mujhe abhi sikhna hai
Aap bolo na un uncle ko
Please mumma

Ma'am- theek hai baba main bol dungi tere uncle ko
Khush ab?
Alia- Kab?

Ma'am- kal
Alia- promise?

Ma'am- agar mujhe mila to bol dunga
Ab no more questions chalo jake apna homework karo
Aur Ma'am ne Alia ko uske room me bejh diya aur khud khana banane kitchen me chali gaye

Pata nahi kyu lekin khana banate banate Ma'am lucifer ke bare me hi soch rahi thi
" ajeeb hi ladka hai bilkul, pata nahi kaha se aaya hai
Pehle to kabhi nahi dekha, naya hi hoga
Lekin usko mobile chalana tak nahi aata, aaj ke time me Alia ko bhi aata hai mobile use karna
Sayad majak kar raha hoga
Vaisa ladka bura nahi hai, uski aankhon me kuch ganda nahi dikhta kisi ladki ke bare me
Kya pata main bahut jaldi sochne lag gaye lekin main soch kyu rahi hu?
Pehle to kabhi nahi socha kisi ke bare me
Fir aise hi sochte sochte vo khana bana leti hai aur dono maa beti kha kar so jati hai

Vahi lucifer to aaj alag hi dunia me tha usse yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha ki uski shaktiya ek insaan ke bare me janane me nakaam rahi

Esliye hi chhilam marne laga aur bahut Nasha karne ke baad flat se nikla aur kahi chalta ja raha tha

Bahut der baad ek badnaam Gali me vo pahuch chuka tha
Yaha saraab to jaise bah rahi thi aur jaisa area tha uske hisab se yaha smell bhi bahut gandi aa rahi thi

Lucifer aage badha ek table se kisi ki hi bottle uthae aur dusri table par jake bath gaya

" kon hai be tu?
Aur yaha kaise bath gaya"
Ek aadmi bola jiski table par lucifer jake batha tha

Lucifer apni pocket se ek photo nikalta hai aur table par rakh deta hai
Lucifer- eske bare me information chahiye

Naag- pehle ye bata tu hai kon aur yaha bathne ki himmat kaise hue teri?
Lucifer- dekh marne lag gaya to maar hi dunga esliye jo mujhe chahiye vo mujhe de aur jo tujhe chahiye vo main tujhe de dunga
Deal?

"Deal?
Teri abhi sari Deal nikalta hu
Ek dusra banda lucifer ki coller pakadte hue bola

Ayr yahi usne galti kar di kyuki uske sareer par etna tez punch pada tha ki vaha bhukamp jaisa feel hogya tha

Sab logo ke kaan khade hogaye
Unke area me aake kisi ne unke hi aadmi ki dhajjiya uda di

Lucifer vaha fir se bath gaya
Lucifer- jaldi bata waqt nahi hai mere pass
Tu mujhe eski information de aur main tujhe meri protection dunga
Es sehar me aisa koe aadmi nahi hoga jo tere ya tere bando ki taraf dekhne ki himmat karega

Naag- kaha se aaya hai tu?
Lucifer- pataal lok se
Ab jaldi bhokna suru kar nahi to main marna suru karta hu

Naag- ander chal
Lucifer- ander chal le
Lekin waqt kam hai mere pass

Fir dono andar chale jate hai aur ek ek chair par bath jate hai

Naag- tune kaha tha ek hath se de aur ek hath se le?
Lucifer- apne hi hath se maar le
Mere aise shauk nahi hai

Naag- ye ashmita raichand hai
Lucifer- naam pata hai mujhe

Naag- suresh raichand ki beti
Lucifer- kaam ki baat bol

Naag- raichand bahut bada naam hai apne desh ke esliye enki bahut chalti hai desh me
Vaise to suresh bahut sareef aadmi hai lekin kabhi kabhi gandgi me ghusna padta hai usse bhi etne bade business ko sahi salamaat chalane ke liye
Lucifer- abhi tak tune kaam ki baat nahi bataye

Naag- confirm nahi hu lekin ek khabar hai jo bahut aati hai unke bare me
Lucifer- ab kya main tujhe confirmation du batane ka?

Naag- ye vo ha matlab
Lucifer- Abe muh me kya loda fas gaya?

Naag- sun ne aaya hai ki suresh illuminati ka member hai
Vaise to main en chhijo me yakeen nahi karta lekin etni baar sun liya ki ab Sala juth bhi sach lagne lag jaye
Lucifer- aur kon kon hai family me?

Naag- badi beti Tara aur wife
Bas
Lucifer- illuminati ke liye sacrifices diya jata hai vo bhi kisi behad apne ka
Vo kya diya

Naag- bhai mujhe kya pata?
Mujhe jitna pata tha Maine bata diya
Lucifer- ladki ke bare me bata

Naag- behad sunder hai
Lucifer- agli baar uski taraf agar najar gaye to teri aankhen tere sareer ka sath chhod degi

Naag- buri najar nahi thi
Lucifer- aage bol

Naag- kisi se baat nahi karti aur behad gusse wali hai
Lucifer- aage

Naag- intelligent bhi hai
Bas aur nahi pata mujhe
Lucifer- najar rakhni hai us par
Kar sakega?

Naag- har chhij ki ek kimat hoti hai yaha
Lucifer- hath tu faila bharunga main lekin ek baat yaad rakhna dhoke ki sirf ek saja hoti hai dardnaak maut

Naag- samjh gaya bhai
Lucifer- kimat bata apni ab

Naag- mere kuch aadmi police ne pakad rakhe hai unhe vaha se nikalna hai
Lucifer- ho jayega
Tu apna kaam kar aur kisi ko shak nahi hona chahiye aur ha chhoti se chhoti chhij mujhe pata honi chahiye

Naag- theek hai
Tumhra naam to bata do?
Lucifer- lucifer naam hai mera
Yaad rakhne ki koe jarurat nahi hai

Aur lucifer vaha se chala gaya

Jungle me

""Kya vo kar payega?""
Guruji- usse acha vikalap nahi hai humare pass

Aadmi- lekin vo insaano ke liye khatarnaak hai
Guruji- vo hi sabse acha hai
Usse dekh ke insaan yehi sochenge ki ye to humare jaisa hi hai

Aadmi- hume usse sab bata dena chahiye tha
Guruji- main sab soch samjh ke karta hu
Aur usse jitna pata hona chahiye utna usse pata hai baki waqt par chhod dena chahiye
Dheere dheere sab theek ho jayega

Aadmi- vo fail hua to?
Guruji- asambhav(impossible)
Tum jante ho usse vo kabhi haar nahi sakta

Aadmi- mujhe dar lagta hai usse
Pata nahi kyu mujhe theek nahi lag raha usse bejh kar
Guruji- apne aas pass dekho kya tumhe koe aur dikh raha hai jo us prakar ki shaktiyo ka samna kar payega?
Sirf lucifer hi hai jo na keval samna kar sakta hai balki unhe hara bhi sakta hai

Aadmi- din ke waqt vo bhi lucifer ko hara sakti hai
Guruji- lekin maar nahi sakti
Aur jis waqt vo lucifer ke hatho raat ko aaye to fir tum samjh sakte ho unke sath kya kya ho sakta hai?

Aadmi- jee
Guruji- ab jao yaha se
Mujhe dhayan lagana hai....
fabulous update
 

ANUJ KUMAR

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UPDATE-6
Lucifer morning me apne flat se nikal raha tha ki tabhi samne wale flat se ma'am bhi nikal rahi thi

Dono ne ek dusre ko dekha lekin koe kuch nahi bola aur sidhe lift me chale gaye

Maam- Alia bol rahi thi ki kya tum usse ball pakadna sikha sakte ho?
Ab bachho ke liye parents ko kya kya karna padta hai
Lucifer- nahi
Ek simple tarike se lucifer ne mana kar diya

Ma'am- main tumhe phone chalana sikha dungi
Lucifer- it's not good for a kid to stay near me
Aur ye bol ke lucifer nikal gaya kyuki lift ground floor par aa chuki thi

Ma'am bas usse dekhte hi rah gaye
Lekin kuch boli nahi

Lucifer bahar nikla to samne se ashmita ki car aati dikhae di lekin usne ignore kar diya aur ye baat dono behano ne bahut ache se notice kar li thi

Ashmita gusse me pata nahi kya samjhta hai apne aapko
Kisi din muh na tod du main eska
Tara- tujhe kya bola ab vo?

Ashmita- didi aap uski side kyu leti ho?
Kitna rude hai vo
Tara- acha acha sorry
Ab mood theek kar apna
Aur dono nikal gaye college ki taraf

Lucifer bhi vahi tha park me aur ye dono bhi vahi se gujari
Dono ki najre mili lekin ashmita aankh chadate hue chali gaye aur lucifer expressionless vahi batha raha

Abhi uske dimag me bahut kuch chal raha tha ki samne se vohi aadmi dikhe usse jo ashmita ke ghar ke bahar the

Vo sayad ashmita aur Tara par najar rakhe hue the lekin aaj unka din acha nahi tha kyuki lucifer ko gussa to kisi aur chhij ka chada hua tha aur aaj vo niklene wala tha en dono par

Vo utha aur aur sidhe ek ke sar par bahut jor se hath maara aur vo Jamin me ghus gaya aur dusre par laat ko gate par jake gira

Ye etne jor ke dhamke the ki sab udhar hi dekhne lage jinme ashmita bhi thi

Lucifer ne dono ko kandho par uthaya aur vaha se chala gaya

Sab behanchod dekhte rah gaye ki abhi yaha hua kya lekin eski vajah se ab lucifer ka yaha par bathna ban ho sakta tha

Kuch der vaha yehi khusar phusar rahi fir sab shant hogaye aur class me chale gaye

Lucifer un dono ko leke naag ke adde par chala gaya

Naag- vo bhai ye kon hai?
Yaha kyu laya hai?
Lucifer- apne logo ko informe kar de ki aaj ready rahe raat ko azaadi milne wali hai

Naag- vo to theek hai lekin ye kon hai?
Lucifer- abhi nahi uthega
Jab uthega to essi se puch lena
Mujhe sab janana hai ki kisne bejha hai kyu bejha hai
Sab kuch

Naag- torcher karna hai kya?
Lucifer- jo karna hai kar lekin marna sirf information milne ke baad hi chahiye

Naag- samjh gaya
Fir lucifer vaha se chala jata hai

Vahi suresh apne office me batha hua kisi se baat Kar raha tha

Suresh- mujhe bhi aisa hi lag raha hai
Ashmita aur Tara ke sath guards bejhne padenge
Malik- main bhi to Kab se yehi bol raha hu sir aapko
Dusman badte ja rahe hai apne

Suresh- naam badhta hai to dusman apne aap badhne lag jate hai malik
Malik- sir aap bhi apne sath security rakh lijiye

Suresh- mere sath upar wala hai
Meri chinta mat karo bas meri betiyo ke bare me socho
Aisa kon hai jo unko har situation se bacha sakta hai aur jis par hum trust bhi kar sake
Malik- paiso me sab beek jate hai sir

Suresh- fir to tu bhi bik jayega
Malik- etne paise aur kaha milenge?

Suresh- true
Dekho kisi trustable insaan ko aur thoda jaldi karo
Malik- theek hai sir

Suresh- college jake bhi pata karo ki kich unusual to nahi ho raha hai aur raste par bhi dekho
Malik- main dekh leta hu sir
Aap jaye meeting ka time ho raha hai

Uske baad Suresh vaha se chala jata hai

Vahi lucifer naag ke pass se vapas aa raha tha aur thoda late hogya kyuki college ke time khatam ho chuka tha

Vo kuch soch raha tha ki tabhi dhaaaaam

Lucifer gira kyuki usse kisi ghadi ne thok diya tha

Lucifer- behan ke lodooooo lucifer bahut jor se chhilaya lekin samne car dekh ke shant hogya kyuki ye ashmita ki hi car thi

Lucifer ke etne tez chhilane se vo bahut buri tarah dar gaye fir darte hue bahar aaye

Lucifer ab tak shant ho chuka tha
" esko driving school kyu nahi bejh dete?
Kisi din maar degi kisi ko ye ya fir mujhe hi"

Tara- sorry
Vo hum jaldi me the
Lucifer- Sala tang tood di beha....
Aur bolta bolta ruk gaya

Ashmita- sorry bol to rahe hai
Lucifer- ahsaan kar rahi hai mujh par sorry bol ke?
Apna sorry apne pass rakh aur thoda jake apna dimag ka ilaaz kara
Pagal kahi ki

Jaise hi lucifer ne ashmita ko Pagal kaha usne gusse me lucifer ki coller pakad li
"Pagal kisi bola tu?"

Lucifer- tujhe hi bolunga na kyuki tuhi to hai
Bahut paise hai tere baap ke pass to thoda hospital me bhi laga dete
Kya pata theek ho jati ya fir mere pass aaja raat ko main sab theek kar dunga
Ashmita- dekha didi main nahi bolti thi ye hai hi ganda ladka
Aaj dikha hi diya esne apna asli roop

Tara- ashmita shant hoja aur chal
Lucifer- ha lejao esko hospital aur ache se illaz karao eska
Tang tood di meri

Ashmita- tu bhi chal
Tujhe bhi to jarurat hogi na
Lucifer- tujhe mental hospital jana hai
Mujhe civil

Ashmita- you....
Tara- bas bahut ho gaya tum dono ka drama
Chalo yaha se
Tara thodi tej aawaz me boli

Lucifer- mere paise dekhe jao
Ashmita- ek futi kodi nahi denge tujhe

Lucifer- tu nahi to tera baap dega
Ashmita- mere ghar me ghus ke to dekh agar tu ander pahuch gaya to tu jo bolega vo main karungi

Lucifer- deal
Ashmita- deal
Aur apna muh banate hue vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer bhi utha aur police station ke pass chala gaya aur raat hone ka intezaar karne laga

Jab raat gahri hue tab lucifer ne apna muh par ek kapde band liya aur police station me ghus gaya

"Oye kon hai be tu?" Piche se ek hawaldaar bola
Lekin eske aage kuch bol nahi paya kyuki lucifer ne ek chamaat mara aur vo vahi behosh hogya

Tab tak police station me sab ko malum pad chuka tha ki kuch gadbad hai esliye sab lucifer ko gher lete hai

Lekin raat ke waqt kisi devil ko rokna muskil hi nahi namumkeen hota hai

Ek minute bhi nahi lagi lucifer ko sab ko sulane me

Aage badha aur jail me pahuch gaya jaha usse naag ke aadmi dikh gaye
Usne ek hath se lock ko pakda aur aise tood diya jaise paper se bana hua ho aur bando ko leke bahar aagya

Lucifer- sidha adde par pahuch jao

Fir lucifer unhe vaha chhod ke naag ko phone mila deta hai

Lucifer- tere bando ko nikal diya hai
Kuch der me pahuch jayenge tere pass
Naag- ye kaise Kiya bhai aapne?

Lucifer- police walo ko Peet kar?
Naag- kyaaaaa?
Tera dimag to kharab nahi ho gaya hai?
Kal vo full force leke aayenge aur unke sath sath naye bando ko bhi utha le jayenge

Lucifer- tune bola tha bande nikalne ko
Kaise?
Ye nahi bataya
Maine apna kaam kar diya hai aur ab tu apna kar nahi to mere hatho hi maara jayega
Naag- kaise karu?
Abhi tak hosh to aaya nahi hai enko

Lucifer- jala do behanchodo ko jinda
Agar hosh me aagaye to bacha lena varna marne dena Salo ko
Naag-kyaa?

Lucifer- theek suna tune
Aur mujhe baar baar dobara bolne ka mat kaha kar
Kisi din mera dimag satak gaya to narak ke drawaje khol dunga tere liye
Naag- sorry

Lucifer- kal se ashmita ke piche apne aadmi hone chahiye aur mujhe pal pal ki khabar chahiye
Naag- Maine aaj hi bol diya tha
Kal tak lag jayenge bande

Lucifer fir phone kaat deta hai aur ashmita ke ghar ki taraf chalne lagta hai
Lekin tabhi pata nahi esse kya hua vapas muda aur apne flat par chala gaya...
very nice update
 

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Tara- tujhe kya hogya hai aajkal?
Bahut gussa karne lag gaye hai?
Ashmita- mujhe na vo ladka dekh ke pata nahi kya ho jata hai
Main out of control ho jati hu

Tara- lekin usne to aisa kuch kiya bhi nahi?
Ashmita- mujhe nahi pata
Usse dekhte hi mujhe gussa aane lagta hai

Tara- kahi tujhe usse pyaar to nahi hogya? Hahaha
Ashmita- didiiii
Sakal dekhi hai aapne uski?

Tara- ha
Bahut handsome hai
Ashmita- kya didi ek dam gunda lagta hai aur sirf ek dress hai uske pass vo bhi kali
Pata nahi sayad sota bhi sadko par hoga

Tara- to?
Aise logo ko kya koe pyaar nahi kar sakta?
Ashmita- didi kuch chhij to honi chahiye na pyaar karne ke liye
Aur usme aise ek bhi chhij nahi hai
Na baat karne ka tareeka na personality aur na kuch aur

Tara- dekh personality to hai
Ha thoda rude hai lekin handsome bahut bai
Ashmita- thoda nahi bahut rude hai
Aise logo ke pass bhi na jau main

Tara- acha fir tumne yaha kyu aane ko kaha?
Ashmita- kya didi aapko sach me lagta hai vo yaha aaega?
Aur agar aagya to apne pairo par vapas nahi ja payega

Tara- tune dekha nahi college me un do bando ko kaise mara tha usne?
Ashmita- koe sareef honge esliye unhe maar ke hava baji kar raha hoga
Vaise bhi hai to ek gunda hi

Tara- to gunda to yaha bhi aa sakta hai?
Aur gunda to hume nuksaan bhi pahucha sakta hai?
Ashmita- aap kahna kya chahte ho saaf saaf bolo na

Tara- main kuch nahi kahna chahti meri princess
Bas tu khush raha kar
Ashmita- jab tak aap sath ho tab tak main khush hi hu didi

Aise hi ye dono kuch der aur baatein karti hai Fir apne apne kamre me jake so jati hai

Lucifer naag ke adde par chala jata hai

Lucifer- kuch bataya enhone?
Naag- hosh hi nahi aaya

Lucifer- tujhe bola to tha hosh na aaye to jala dena
Naag- bhai main insaan hu hawan nahi

Lucifer- lekin main hawan hu aur vo un dono ko aag laga deta hai
Aag se unko hosh to aajata hai lekin fir bhi lucifer unhe nahi bachata aur marne deta hai

Naag- ye bol to raha tha
Lucifer- ab mood change hogya mera
Kal un dono ladkiyo ke piche aadmi laga dena nahi to kal enki jagah teri body hogi

Naag- bhai aap mujhe bahut darate ho
Lucifer- darna jaruri hai
Eske chalte hi main hu

Uske baad vaha se bhi vapas apne flat par aajata hai

Koe usse dekh ke ye bilkul aasani se bol sakta tha ki aaj ye kuch kaand karke aaya hai vaise to jaise jaise raat hoti thi lucifer dikhne bhi aisa hi lag jata tha aur ab to usse bahut din ho gaye the kuch Kiya bhi

Lucifer flat pahucha aur apne room me jake dhayan lagane lag gaya

Uske dimag se ye baat ja hi nahi rahi thi ki vo ashmita ke bare me kuch dekh nahi paa raha tha esliye usne socha ki ma'am ke bare me janane ki kosis karta hu
Agar kuch pata chal gaya to matlab ashmita jarur special hai aur agar nahi pata chala to matlab lucifer ke sath hi problem hai

Esliye usne aankhen band ki aur dhayan lagane lag gaya

Thodi hi der me madhuri ma'am ki history geography usse dikhne lagi

Madhuri ma'am ek married woman hai lekin unke husband ek highly functioned sociopath hai jo unko bahug torcher karte the aur marte peetate the
Esliye ma'am vaha se bhag aaye aur ab yaha padhane lagi
Unke ek beta aur ek beti aur bhi hai jo unke saas sasur ke pass rahti hai aur madhuri ma'am ko vaha jana allowed nahi hai
Ma'am ki family aisi nahi hai ki unko kisi bhi type ki support kar sake kyuki bahut middle class aur sareef log hai
Vo ab ma'am ko hi samjhate hai ki jo ho gaya vo hogya ab ek new life start kare lekin ma'am apne bache vapas chahti hai esliye bich bich me kuch na kuch harkate karti rahti hai aur unki saja bhi bhugati rahti hai

Unki ek beti alia unke sath rahti hai abhi bahut chhoti hai aur bahut shataan bhi hai lekin age se pehle badi hogaye hai aur apni mom ki condition ko samjhne lagi hai
Esliye humesha unhe hasane ki kosis karti rahti hai

More about madhuri ma'am

Ek bahut simple aur culture se related woman hai, jindagi bhar khushiyo ke liye tarsi hai aur shadi ke baad to jo thodi bahut khusiya thi vo bhi khatam hogaye hai

Aur fir dheere dheere lucifer normal hone laga aur fir uski aankhen khulne lagi

Lucifer ko jada kuch feel to nahi hua lekin ek baat samjh me aagaye thi ki kuch to special hai ashmita me jiski vajah se vo uske bare me dekh nahi sakta

Eske baad jada kuch nahi hota aur next day ho jata hai

Aaj vo college nahi jata kyuki naag ke aadmi pehle hi ashmita par najar rakhe hue the esliye uska jana etna important nahi tha

Information to vaise bhi usse mil hi rahi thi

Shayam ko ghumne nikal gaya ye soch ke pure din room par pada pada kare bhi to kya?

Vahi pass me ek park tha vaha pahuch gaya aur abhi ghum hi raha tha ki vapas piche se ek ball aati feel hue aur fir se usne bina dekhe ball pakad li

Mud ke dekha to Alia bhagti hue uske pass aa rahi thi

Alia- aap mere sath kheloge?
Lucifer- mujhe kya milega tumhre sath khelne par?

Alia- main aapko chocolates dungi
Lucifer- lekin mujhe to chocolates pasand hi nahi hai

Alia- chocolates to sab ko pasand hoti hai
Lucifer- mujhe to nahi hai

Tab tak ma'am bhi vaha aagaye
Ma'am- Alia beta chalo bahut time hogya
Alia- mama chachu mere sath khelenge esliye thodi der aur

Lucifer- maine kab kaha ki main khelunga?
Alia- chalo two chocolates ab to kheloge na
Aur fir lucifer ka hath pakad ke usse khechne lagi

Vo mana karna chahta tha kyuki usse bachho se door rahna hi sahi lagta tha lekin abhi mana kar nahi pa raha tha esliye usne umeed bhari najaro se madhuri ma'am ko dekha

Jo ye samjh gaye ki abhi usse kuch kaam hoga ya fir kahi jana hoga ya fir usse lucifer ki baat yaad aa gaye hogi ki bache usse door hi sahi hai esliye usse hi bich me bolna pada

Ma'am- beta chachu ko na ek bahut urgent kaam hai esliye vo aapke sath fir kabhi khelenge
Abhi jane do unhe
Alia- aapko kaise pata?
Main to bas 5 minutes ki bol rahi hu

Ma'am- Alia zid nahi karte
Baad me khel lena
Alia bichari ka muh utar gaya aur bas theek hai hi bola

Lucifer aur ma'am dono ko acha nahi laga lekin dono kuch kar nahi sakte the

Lucifer- next time main chocolate leke aaunga tumhre liye fir khelenge uske gaal sahlate hue lucifer bola

Fir vaha se chala gaya...
fantastic update
 

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