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Fantasy Love is not important without family

Kiya is story men aagy sex scene hona chahye ?

  • Yes

    Votes: 54 78.3%
  • No

    Votes: 15 21.7%

  • Total voters
    69
  • Poll closed .

Dev the lover

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story acchi hai bhai kaafi par agar scenes ki deatailing par dhyaan do toh chaar chaand lag jaaye saayad aap kahe ki bhai starting toda jaldi nikal raha par mere hisab sai starting hi detailed honi caahiye jaase ek baat point out karunga aapnai fihal sab update ki sabsai khaas baat asse likh diya jasse koi aam baat thi
aap kudh jaanate honege ki woh koi aam serum injection yaa joh bhi hero ko diya gaya hai yeh bhaut important hogi chalooo koi baat nahi par aage sai koi important incident asse naa khole toh aacha hoga yeh ek bhai ki tarah bol raha huu naa ki apne ko aacha
 

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story acchi hai bhai kaafi par agar scenes ki deatailing par dhyaan do toh chaar chaand lag jaaye saayad aap kahe ki bhai starting toda jaldi nikal raha par mere hisab sai starting hi detailed honi caahiye jaase ek baat point out karunga aapnai fihal sab update ki sabsai khaas baat asse likh diya jasse koi aam baat thi
aap kudh jaanate honege ki woh koi aam serum injection yaa joh bhi hero ko diya gaya hai yeh bhaut important hogi chalooo koi baat nahi par aage sai koi important incident asse naa khole toh aacha hoga yeh ek bhai ki tarah bol raha huu naa ki apne ko aacha

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Thanks For ur Lovely comment
bhai meri story aise bahut se mistakes hain jo apne point out kiyw mujhe bahut acha lga apky is baat se scenes pr dhyaan dun bhai men koe writer to hun nhi bs ek fantasy h use pura kr raha hun aur rahi baat injection ki bhai uske liye men apko story men ek flashback de dunga jise apko sahi smjh aa jaiga
please aese hi aage bhi suggest krty rhye ga
 

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Update8

Kher chod mene sari kitaben wahi pr rakhi aur usi pipe se nichi aa ker men Ghr ki tarf chal diya....


AB AAGEE…

Jb Men Ghr pohncha Raat k 10 bj chuke thy mene bell bjai to krib 30 sec men Gate khula Aur gate kholni wali aur koe nhi meri api nisha hi thi
Men ghr k ander aya…
Nisha api -Tum jaake hath muhn dho lo men m tumhara khana garm krti hun…
Mene ok kaha aur kamre men aya Men Fresh hoke niche aya to api abhi kitchen main thi main dinning table p beth gya… thori der baad api Khana le aye khana khane k baad bartan dhone ka ka bol kr apny kamre m chli gyi…
Mene khana finsh kiya bartan dhoke kr kitchen men rakhe aur apne kamre m jane k bjai api k kamre k trf chal dya api ka kamra joke ami abu k kamre k pass men hi tha…men gate k phonch ker knock kiya to ander se api ki awaz ayi

“Fais Darwaza khula h ander aa jao…
Api ander se boli…
Men darwaza khol k ander aya to api bed p bethi uske per farsh per thy men api k pass aya bina koe baat kiya api ke pero ko pkr bed ki trf pr rakhe aur api ko lita diya aur khud api k pero k pass beth…..
Men: apo Naraz hai kiya ap mujhse???
Nisha api-;(rukhe andaz men)nhi to men kyu hongi tumse naraz…?
Main; (Rowansi awaz) app kiya mujhse Koe galti hoi hai kiya ager hui hai to mujhe saza den apni galti ka plz aise Rukhe andaz men mat bole….
Nisha-Api;(Full rude men) nhi men tumse naraz nhi hun aur tum jao jaake so jao raat bahut ho gai hai….
Ye bolke api dusre traf mun krke let gyi…
Ye dekh mujhe bahut bura lga karib 30 mint tk main aisa betha raha is waqat mere dimag aur koe baat nhi thi baat thi to sirf ye k api mujhse naraz hai… men pta kiya kiya soch raha tha . men khiyalon ki duniya se tab baher aya jb mere mobile m bettry low ka notification aya ..
Khyalo ki duniya se baher ane ke baad men bed se utha aor api k chehre k pass aya api is waqat so rahi thi uske chehrs bahut hi massom lg rha tha aur thori mayusi bhi thi chehre pe jo mujhe nazer aa gyi thi…men api kamre se araam se nikl gya aur apny kamre men aa gya…..
Mujhe kuch bhi acha nhi lag raha tha pta nhi ek an jany si dil men bechaini thi…… mere peda hone se lekr ab tk ki sari baten mujhe yaad aa rhi thi

FLASHBACK…
(Note; Mujhe Ye Sari Baate Ami ne 18 birthday btai thi aur men apni zubani likhunga)

Jab men peda hua to ami mujhe ghar le ayi api bahut choti thi us waqat mujhe dekh k api totli awaz men boli
Nisha-Api; Ama Ye bata tis ka hai..(Ami ye bacha kis ka hai)
Ami uski awaz sunke muskrati hui boli
Ami; Sweety ye tera bhai hai…..
Api Ye sun k bahut khush hui aur mere pass aake meri dono galo pr kiss kiya
Ami ye sab dekh k Api se boli
Ami; Sweety 1 baat ka hamesha dhyan rakhna…
1) Tere bhai ankhon kabhi anson nhi aane chahye hamesha khush rakhna isee
Phiir kiya tha Ye baat api k man man ghar kr liya ..
Api mera ami se zyada mera khiyal rakhti thi
Aihsta aihsta men bada hone lga is bich fiza bhi peda hui uski age mere se ek sal choti thi
Sab ghr wale khush khushi rehne lgy pta nhi humse kis ki nazer lg gyi
Men …aishta aihata men bahut bemaar pad gya ami ne mujhe bahut se doctron dhikhaya mager meri ilaj kisi ke pass nhi tha
Bemaari aesi thi k meri jism ka khoon aihsta aihsta jamta jaa raha tha doctron ka kehna tha men kuch dino ka mehman hun
Ye baat mujhe ami ne nhi btayi thi k men kuch dino ka mehmaan hun
Api bhi bahut preshan thi is waqat ami abu k bech ladai shuru thi kya ladai thi chalo dekhte hai…
Ami; hume ye karna hi hoga ager mere faisal ko kuch ho gya na to men to jeete ji mar jaongi…
Abu; tum samjhti kyu nhi ho agr humne faisal pr formula use kiya to faisla k bachne k chance baut km hain kyu abhi uska jism itna khun nhi k wo formula samnhal paaye…
Ami; mere jism ka sara khun lelo mager mere bache ko bacha
Abu: ager tumhara yahi faisla hai to yahi sahi…
Dono faisal k kamre jate hain faisl Is waqt so raha tha faisal k ami abu uske galo pe kiss krty hai aur Faisal K Abu faisal apny hatho se utha ker ek kamre men le jate hai kamre ko agr sahi mayino main kaha jai to wo kamra nhi lab tha
Kher chodo
Faisal k Abu Faisal ko bed p lita dete hain aur Faisal ki ami dusri bed p let jati hai Aur Faisal K Abu Faisal ko khun Charha dety hain joke uski ami de rahi
Faisal K Abu Ka blood O+
Faisal k Ami ka bloodO-
Wese Nisha ka bhi blood O- tha pr wo abhi choti thi islye khun nhi de skti thi
1L khun dene ka baad faisal ki ami ko bahut kamzori mehsoos ho rahi thi
Ye dekh faisal k abu kitchen men jaate hai aur juice bna k laaty hain faisal ki ami juice pene k baad faisal k abu ko kuch ishara krti hai Faisal k abu k cupboard ki trf jate aur cupboard ke ander ek button ko dabate ho to cupboard do hiso men ho jata hai diwaar per ek locker tha Faisal ke abu us locker per apna hath rakhte hain aur locker Khul jata hai usme ek chota se bag pada hua tha faisal k abu wo bag utha k Faisal ke pass aty hain aur bag khol dete hai us bag men ek injection pda hua aur faisal k abu injection utha te hai aur faisal k hath paker ker lagane wale hoty hain wo ek nazer apni begam ki trf dekhty hain begam haa men apna sar hilati aur faisal k abu wo injection Faisal k Ander inject kr dete hai…….

FLASHBACK… CONTINUED
(Dosto Ye update read karke ye zrur batyega apko update kaisa lga ager koe suggesion dena chahta hai to de skta hai
Aur agr kahi update men mustake hui ho maaf karna
Keep suppoet)
MR Faisu…..
 
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