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Fantasy Love - Family (Romance , Thriller , Action, Drama Comedy)

who is Your Favorite Character In This Story?

  • Faisu

    Votes: 26 61.9%
  • Arman

    Votes: 1 2.4%
  • Nisha

    Votes: 5 11.9%
  • Heer

    Votes: 2 4.8%
  • Fiza

    Votes: 7 16.7%
  • Farha

    Votes: 1 2.4%
  • Aliza

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    42

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Update 12 (Aqsa)

Arman; (rumaal se anson pohnchty Hue) nhi mein nhi sambhal paonga Aqsa(bachi) ko kyu ke jb bhi mein Aqsa ko dekhunga Mujhy Amjid(dost) ki yaad ayegi

Mein; (arman ki pith thapthapate hue) Sambhal bhai Chal Aqsa ko Hospital le chalte hain

Arman ne bhi haan mein sar hilaya mene bike start ki Arman piche Aqsa ko gaod mein liye beth gya hm hospital ky liye chal diye.....

|AB AAGE|


Hm Hospital pohnche toh mujhy Apne Abu bahar parking mein hi mil gye unhone hme dekha toh Wo hamari trf aa gye

Abu; Kiya hua beta aur Yeh Bachi kon hai...

Mein; Baad mein btata hun Abu Abhi Yeh behosh hai Jaldi chaliye

Uske Baad Hmne Aqsa Ko Admit kiya wo abhi tk Behosh thi Abu ne Btaya ke Thodi mein hosh ho aa jayega Raat ke 8 bjne ko thy Mene Abu ko sb btata diya jo Aj Hua Wo Bhi thodi der ky liye khamosh hue Aqsa ky liye sympathy bhi hui Abu ne kaha Aqsa ab se uski Sbse Choti beti hai yeh kehte hue abu ne ek baar Aqsa jo Abhi Leti hui Thi Uske sar pr hath bhi fer diya Mujhy bhi Behad khushi Thi Abu ke faisle se aur Mein yahi chahta tha

Mein; Abu ap abhi ghr jaye sb preshan ho rhy honge Mein khana Idhr se Pack krwa lunga

Abu; Hn mein bhi wohi soch rha mein Khana pack krwa Kr bhijwa deta hun subah mein Jaldi aaonga

Mein; Thik Abu Jaan Sbko Bta Dena Aqsa ky baare mein

Abu; wo toh tum na bolte toh bhi bta deta Acha beta baat sun Aqsa ky bhai aur Ami ky Kaatilo ky baare Mein kiya socha hai

Mein; Abhi tk toh kuch nhi lkn Jaldi Sochunga agr sochna shuru kiya Toh Ap bhi Ache se jante phir Wo log chahe wo Kaha bhi chhupe hon wohi jakr Kutte ki mout marunga

Abu; Mein bs itna Kahunga beta Soch samjh kr Har Kadam Uthana aur tere har Kadam pr Har waqt Mein Tumhare sath hun aur haan ek aur bhi hai Shayed wo jldi aayega

Mein;(muskrahte hue) Usko Bulane mein Thoda Time hai Abhi Shayed ab Tk use pta chal gya hoga khair baate bahut ho gyi abhi Ap jaye Ghr wale tension mein honge

Abu Mujhy Khuda Hafiz keh kr Nikal gye Abu ne Jaate hi Khana pack krwa kr bhijwa diya Arman Jo hamare sath Hi aya tha Wo ek Jagah Baitha Khamoshi se Ek Ache Dost ky kho jane ka Dukh Bahut Zyada gehra hota hai Abhi wohi dukh mein Arman tha Jo har waqt Mazak Masti krne wala aj Khamosh betha tha Mein Chalta hua Arman ke pass aya Uske kandhe pr hath rkha toh wo sadmy se Bahar aya meri ankhon mein dekhne lga

Arman; Un Madarchodo ko mein apne Hathon se Marunga Faisu Jinhone mere Ache dost ko Maar diya mein nhi chhounga unhe

Mein;(arman ka peeth thapthapte hue) Housla rkh mere Yrr Sbko Saza Bhugtni padegi Abhi Tu ghr Jaw Tere ghr pr sbhi preshan honge Baad mein dekhenge abhi hme Aqsa Ko sambhalna hai Subah Ghr aa jana Mene Aqsa ko sbse Milwana Dukhi toh wo hogi lkn Naya ghr naye log Yeh sb use Ajeeb lagega lkn wo Sambhal jayegi mujhy pura bharosa hai hme Aqsa ko pyaar dena jo pyaar usko apni Ami aur Bhaiya se mila tha usse bhi kahi zyada pyaar dena hoga Aqsa ko khair Tu uth Ja Cooler se muh hath dho le Phir Seedha Ghr chale jana agr tujhse drive nhi hota bike toh mein chhor du

Arman; (ankhon ki nami se) Itna Kamzor nhi hun mein Tum sahi bol abhi hm Aqsa ko sambhalna chahye mein subah aa jaonga Mein Ja rha hun Ghr Aqsa ka dhiyan rkhna

Mene Haan mein Sar hilaya Arman muh hath Dho kr Ghr ky liye Nikal Gya Mein Abhi Aqsa ky pass hi Baitha tha Wo Soti hui bhi bahut pyaari lg rhi thi aur cute aur masoomiyat bhari hui thi uske chehre mein Darindo ne is masoom ko baksh diya tha shayed iski masoomiyat dekh kr Chhor diya hoga Wo Toh ab Aqsa bata Sakti thi lkn Abhi wo is Halt mein nhi thi Wo kuch bta ske

Mene Apna Mobile utha kr check kiya bahut Sari missed calls lgy thy Usme Nisha didi ky sbse zyada calls thy Uske baad Rukhsar ky Ami ky bhi missed calls lgy hue thy aur Heer ki missed calls thi Fiza ne koi call nhi kiya mein janta tha bhale wo mujhy call na kre lkn preshan toh wo zrur hui hogi khair mene sbse Pehle Nisha didi ka No milaya Udhr se turant Call Receive ho gyi


Nisha; Hello Faisu kaise ho? khana kha liya na ? Aur Meri Chhoti si pyaari si bhn kaisi hai?

Mein; Araam se Didi Mein Thik Hun Aur Khana Abhi nhi khaya Aur Hamari Chhoti si bhn Bahut pyaari hai Thik hai Bs Sadma Bardasht nhi kr ski islye behosh ho gyi Abhi thodi der mein Aqsa ko Hosh ayega toh uske sath hi mein khana kha lunga

Nisha; Hmm Sadma Bahut Gehra lga hai Itni Chhoti Age mein yeh sb mujhy soch kr rona aa rha

Mein; Didi Sambhaliye khudko Ap Aisi rone lgogi Toh Aqsa ko kese sambhalenge Use Ab Sabse Zyada Pyaar dena itna Ky wo apne Bite Kal ko bhul kr Nayi Shurwaat kre

Nisha; Sahi keh rhe tum Acha Khiyal rkhna Apna bhi Aqsa ka bhi us ko subah Ghr le aana Hm sb tum dono ka intzaar krenge

Mein; Jii Didi Jaldi aonga Acha rkhta hun Bye

Uske baad mene thodi der Ammi se baat ki Usky Baad Thodi der Heer se Baat ki usky baad Rukhsar se halake sbko pta chal chuka Aqsa ke baare Sabne baat krte waqt Aqsa ky liye hamdardi jatayi aur Subah Ghr milne ka Bol diya

Sbse baat krne ke baad mein Relex ho Gya Mene Aqsa ki Trf Nazrein ghumayi toh Uski Ankhen khuli Hui thi Aqsa Pure ward ko Ghur ghur kr idhr udhr dekh rhi thi tbhi uski nzr mujhse Takrayi wo thoda dar gyi mein Koi baat kiye bina hi jaldi se wahan se Nikla Aur Dr. Ke Cabin mein ghuss gya Wahan ek Lady dr. Thi Age Shayed 28 29 hogi Khair mein usko lene ke baad apne Ward mein Aya Lady dr. Ne Aqsa ka Checkup kiya aur Mujhse boli

Lady Dr.; Yeh Ab bilkul thik hai ise bhook lgi hogi ap Khana khila dijiye uske baad yeh dwai khila dena thik hai ab mein jati hun Agr Koi problem ho toh Mere cabin mein aa jyega

Usky baad Lady doctor chali gyi mein pack kiya hua khana lekr Aqsa pass Baith Gya Aqsa mujhy Ghur kr dekh rhi Thi Aur shayed dar bhi Rhi thi Mene socha Pehle baat kr loon aise toh hargiz kuch nhi khane wali yeh

Mein; Hello Aqsa Kaisi ho...

Aqsa pehle toh meri baat sun kr bahut chonki agle hi pal usne mujhy apni Pyaari si awaaz mein jawab diya

Aqsa; Ap kon ho? mein kahan hun? mere Amju Bhaiya Kaha hain? Meri Ammi kaha hai?

Mein; Are Beta Aram se Mera naam Faisal hai sb pyaar se faisu bulate hain Tum abhi Hospital mein ho aur...

Aqsa; (roti hui)Mere bhaiya kaha unhone mere bhaiya goli maar diya meri ammi ko goli maar di mere bhaiya aur ami ko maar diya...

Aqsa phut phut kr rone lgi wese itni Masoom bachi ko rota dekh toh Koi bhi Pathar dil insan rone lg jaye toh bhala mein kese chup hota meri ankhen bhi nam ho gyi lkn mene apne apko Control krte hue kaha

Mein; Are beta ro mt Agr tum royegi toh tumhare bhaiya aur Ami ko Takleef hogi kiya tum chahti ho kiya tumhare bhaiya aur Ammi takleef mein rhe

Aqsa roti hui Na mein sar hilati hai lkn Sisk toh ab bhi rhi thi

Mein; Yeh hui naa baat ab Bs rona band krdo Ajse mein Tumhara Amju Bhaiya Hun tum mujhy Bhaiya keh kr bula skti Ho

Aqsa;(siskti hui) nhi mujhy wohi amju bhaiya chahye

Mein; Tum phir se rone lgi Tumhare amju mujhse naraz ho jayege unko takleef bhi hogi mtlb tum chahti tumhare amju bhaiya ko takleef ho

Meri is baat se Aqsa pr Gehra asr hua Aqsa Ne rona band kr diya lkn Sisk ab bhi rhi thi

Mein; shabash chalo ab apne Amju bhaiya ko gale lgao

Lkn Aqsa waisi hi leti siskti rahi mene uska hath pkd kr utha diya apne seene se lga liya Aqsa Thodi der roti rhi Lkn 5 minute baad Aqsa ka siskna band ho gya be sudh ho kr mere gale lgi hui Thi

Mein; Aqsa !!.

No response

Mein; Aqsa beta Chalo Khana khalo !!

Aqsa; Nhi Amju Bhiaiya mujhy nhi khana

Mein; Are kha lo na tum nhi khaogi toh Mein bhi nhi khaonga tum apne bhaiya ko aise bhookhe pait sone dogi

Aqsa phirse na mein sar hilati

Mein; Toh phir jaldi se kha lo Mujhy bhookh lgi hai

Aqsa mere seene se Sar utha kr baith jati hai Mein pass mein pady khane ko Lekr Aqsa ke samne baith jata hun aur apne hathon se Aqsa ko khilane Lgta Ek do baar na mein Sar hilati nhi khana lkn mein khila hi deta hun Aqsa ko Dwai bhi khila deta jis se use nind aane lgti toh wo so jaati hai

Mein bhi thoda Bahut khana kha kr Aqsa ky pass hi lait jata hun uske sar hath pherne lgta hun meri bhi ankh lg jati hai
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''Amju Bhaiya Uthye na ...

Mene Ankhen kholi toh Aqsa mujhy Jaga rhi Thi mein uth kr baith gya Aqsa Ke sar par hath pherte hue kaha

Mein; Kiya hua beta

Aqsa; (preshan hoti hui) Bhaiya wo mein..

Mein; washrom Jana hai

Aqsa Haan mein Sar Hilati hai toh mein wahan se uth kr khada ho jata hun Aqsa ka hath pkr ward se bahar le ata wahan pr kaam krti nurse ko bulaya Use kaha ke Aqsa ko ache se Nehla bhi de Jispr Aqsa ne thoda na nakur kiya lkn mene Mana liya Wo nahane gyi toh mein bhi washroom se fresh ho kr Aa gya Aqsa bhi Aa gyi mene use apni goad mein utha liya Mujhse ab nhi dar rhi Aqsa mujhy apna Amjid Bhaiya hi smjh rhi thi

Tabhi waheen Abu aaty hue dikhayi diye Unhone mujhy door se hi dekh liya wo hamari trf hi aa gye

Abu; Kaise Ho faisu beta ho aur meri Pyaari Bachi kesi hai

Yeh bolte hue abu ne Aqsa ke sar par hath fer diya

Mein; Mein thik hu Abu Aqsa bhi thik hai

Mein; Aqsa Inse milo yeh hamare Abu Hain

Aqsa; Abu Jaan

Yeh bolti Aqsa meri trf Hairani se dekhti hai toh mein Haan mein sar hila deta hun Abu Asalm ne Aqsa ke gaal pr kiss krte hue bole

Abu Aslam; Hn mein abse tumhara abu jaan hun chalo tum beti tum Apne bhaiya Ke sath ghr chalo wahan tumhari Ami Intzaar kr rhi hai

Aqsa; Amiiii !!!

Yeh bolti Aqsa rone lgti hai Mein Use chup krate hue bolta hun

Mein; Are Aqi Chup ho jao na Jese tumne Mujhy apna Amju bhiaya mana wese hi meri Ami bhi toh tumhari Ami hui na

Meri baat sun kr Aqsa chhup ho jati hai mene Abu se Car ki key li usky baad Hospital se bahar aa gya mene Aqsa apni Pass wali seat pe bitha diya car mein beth kr Uske chehre pr khushi nzer aa rhi thi jo bahut Pyaari lg rhi thi Bs Aqsa Ke kapde thode old thy khair mein kuch sochta hua gadi Hospital se nikal kr ek Restaurant pr ruka Jahan mene aur Aqsa ne nashta kiya uskye mall mein Akr mene Aqsa ko usky size Ky kapde kharide aur shoes bhi li ek Suite Aqsa ko pehna diya Aqsa na nakur krti rhi lkn mein kaha manne wala tha Aqsa Frock mein bahut cute lg rhi Thi khair in sb time 12 bj gye thy

Aqsa Car mein bethi Ab bahut Khush thi Kyu ke shayed aj se pehle Aqsa ne Itne mehnge kapde shoes pehne hon lkn ab toh uski saari khuwashain puri krne wala ghr mil gya toh yeh sb toh lazim hi tha

Khair Ghr pohnch gye Sb ghr wale Car ki awaaz sun kr sb bahar aa gye


Mein Aqsa ko Goud mein Utha liya Sbke samne Khada Ho gya Yahi sbhi Excited thy Aqsa se milne ky liye Ami Nisha Didi Fiza Rukhsar Fiza Farha aur Arman bhi Side mein Khada tha

Mein; (Ami Ki trf ishara Krte hue) Aqsa woh rhi tumhari Ami

Aqsa Bhagti hui Ami ke gale lg gyi Rone bhi lgi lkn Ami use Chup krwati aur pyaar krne lg gyi jis se Aqsa jld hi chup ho gyi Khair uske baad Baari baari sb Aqsa se milne lgy Jo bhi milta Wo Aqsa Ko goud mein utha leta khair last Nisha didi ne Aqsa ko Goud mein Utha kr Ghr ke andr le aye Sb Aqsa pyaar se baat kr rhy thy koi bhi uski Ghr walo ko baare mein nhi puch rha tha sbko pta tha agr Past ki baat ki Aqsa rone lg jayegi khair Kuch ghnte mein Sb Aqsa se ghul mil gye Ami ne Aqsa Ko apne room mein Rehne ka keh diya jis pr Nisha didi Ne thoda jhgra bhi kiya lkn Ami ne ek na suni jispr Nisha didi ko manna pada

Mein Fresh hone apne Kamre mein chala aaya Aj Commissioner se bhi baat krni thi Socha dinner Pr Jakr mil lunga........
 

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Ye jo suru mein gyan diya ye bilkul samajh nahi aaya kyuki urdu sir ke upper se jaati hai mere :D

Aur ab story mein naya twist aaya hai aur saath saath do character jo ki kaafi heavy hai gaffar aur sikander,

Lekin armaan ke dost ka murder kyu kar diya kisi ne sayad unhe pata lag gaya hoga ki ye dhokebaaz hai :dazed:

Aur ab is aqsa kon rakhega :hmm:

Khair see what happens next?

Brilliant update :claps:
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Update 12 (Aqsa)

Arman; (rumaal se anson pohnchty Hue) nhi mein nhi sambhal paonga Aqsa(bachi) ko kyu ke jb bhi mein Aqsa ko dekhunga Mujhy Amjid(dost) ki yaad ayegi

Mein; (arman ki pith thapthapate hue) Sambhal bhai Chal Aqsa ko Hospital le chalte hain

Arman ne bhi haan mein sar hilaya mene bike start ki Arman piche Aqsa ko gaod mein liye beth gya hm hospital ky liye chal diye.....

|AB AAGE|


Hm Hospital pohnche toh mujhy Apne Abu bahar parking mein hi mil gye unhone hme dekha toh Wo hamari trf aa gye

Abu; Kiya hua beta aur Yeh Bachi kon hai...

Mein; Baad mein btata hun Abu Abhi Yeh behosh hai Jaldi chaliye

Uske Baad Hmne Aqsa Ko Admit kiya wo abhi tk Behosh thi Abu ne Btaya ke Thodi mein hosh ho aa jayega Raat ke 8 bjne ko thy Mene Abu ko sb btata diya jo Aj Hua Wo Bhi thodi der ky liye khamosh hue Aqsa ky liye sympathy bhi hui Abu ne kaha Aqsa ab se uski Sbse Choti beti hai yeh kehte hue abu ne ek baar Aqsa jo Abhi Leti hui Thi Uske sar pr hath bhi fer diya Mujhy bhi Behad khushi Thi Abu ke faisle se aur Mein yahi chahta tha

Mein; Abu ap abhi ghr jaye sb preshan ho rhy honge Mein khana Idhr se Pack krwa lunga

Abu; Hn mein bhi wohi soch rha mein Khana pack krwa Kr bhijwa deta hun subah mein Jaldi aaonga

Mein; Thik Abu Jaan Sbko Bta Dena Aqsa ky baare mein

Abu; wo toh tum na bolte toh bhi bta deta Acha beta baat sun Aqsa ky bhai aur Ami ky Kaatilo ky baare Mein kiya socha hai

Mein; Abhi tk toh kuch nhi lkn Jaldi Sochunga agr sochna shuru kiya Toh Ap bhi Ache se jante phir Wo log chahe wo Kaha bhi chhupe hon wohi jakr Kutte ki mout marunga

Abu; Mein bs itna Kahunga beta Soch samjh kr Har Kadam Uthana aur tere har Kadam pr Har waqt Mein Tumhare sath hun aur haan ek aur bhi hai Shayed wo jldi aayega

Mein;(muskrahte hue) Usko Bulane mein Thoda Time hai Abhi Shayed ab Tk use pta chal gya hoga khair baate bahut ho gyi abhi Ap jaye Ghr wale tension mein honge

Abu Mujhy Khuda Hafiz keh kr Nikal gye Abu ne Jaate hi Khana pack krwa kr bhijwa diya Arman Jo hamare sath Hi aya tha Wo ek Jagah Baitha Khamoshi se Ek Ache Dost ky kho jane ka Dukh Bahut Zyada gehra hota hai Abhi wohi dukh mein Arman tha Jo har waqt Mazak Masti krne wala aj Khamosh betha tha Mein Chalta hua Arman ke pass aya Uske kandhe pr hath rkha toh wo sadmy se Bahar aya meri ankhon mein dekhne lga

Arman; Un Madarchodo ko mein apne Hathon se Marunga Faisu Jinhone mere Ache dost ko Maar diya mein nhi chhounga unhe

Mein;(arman ka peeth thapthapte hue) Housla rkh mere Yrr Sbko Saza Bhugtni padegi Abhi Tu ghr Jaw Tere ghr pr sbhi preshan honge Baad mein dekhenge abhi hme Aqsa Ko sambhalna hai Subah Ghr aa jana Mene Aqsa ko sbse Milwana Dukhi toh wo hogi lkn Naya ghr naye log Yeh sb use Ajeeb lagega lkn wo Sambhal jayegi mujhy pura bharosa hai hme Aqsa ko pyaar dena jo pyaar usko apni Ami aur Bhaiya se mila tha usse bhi kahi zyada pyaar dena hoga Aqsa ko khair Tu uth Ja Cooler se muh hath dho le Phir Seedha Ghr chale jana agr tujhse drive nhi hota bike toh mein chhor du

Arman; (ankhon ki nami se) Itna Kamzor nhi hun mein Tum sahi bol abhi hm Aqsa ko sambhalna chahye mein subah aa jaonga Mein Ja rha hun Ghr Aqsa ka dhiyan rkhna

Mene Haan mein Sar hilaya Arman muh hath Dho kr Ghr ky liye Nikal Gya Mein Abhi Aqsa ky pass hi Baitha tha Wo Soti hui bhi bahut pyaari lg rhi thi aur cute aur masoomiyat bhari hui thi uske chehre mein Darindo ne is masoom ko baksh diya tha shayed iski masoomiyat dekh kr Chhor diya hoga Wo Toh ab Aqsa bata Sakti thi lkn Abhi wo is Halt mein nhi thi Wo kuch bta ske

Mene Apna Mobile utha kr check kiya bahut Sari missed calls lgy thy Usme Nisha didi ky sbse zyada calls thy Uske baad Rukhsar ky Ami ky bhi missed calls lgy hue thy aur Heer ki missed calls thi Fiza ne koi call nhi kiya mein janta tha bhale wo mujhy call na kre lkn preshan toh wo zrur hui hogi khair mene sbse Pehle Nisha didi ka No milaya Udhr se turant Call Receive ho gyi


Nisha; Hello Faisu kaise ho? khana kha liya na ? Aur Meri Chhoti si pyaari si bhn kaisi hai?

Mein; Araam se Didi Mein Thik Hun Aur Khana Abhi nhi khaya Aur Hamari Chhoti si bhn Bahut pyaari hai Thik hai Bs Sadma Bardasht nhi kr ski islye behosh ho gyi Abhi thodi der mein Aqsa ko Hosh ayega toh uske sath hi mein khana kha lunga

Nisha; Hmm Sadma Bahut Gehra lga hai Itni Chhoti Age mein yeh sb mujhy soch kr rona aa rha

Mein; Didi Sambhaliye khudko Ap Aisi rone lgogi Toh Aqsa ko kese sambhalenge Use Ab Sabse Zyada Pyaar dena itna Ky wo apne Bite Kal ko bhul kr Nayi Shurwaat kre

Nisha; Sahi keh rhe tum Acha Khiyal rkhna Apna bhi Aqsa ka bhi us ko subah Ghr le aana Hm sb tum dono ka intzaar krenge

Mein; Jii Didi Jaldi aonga Acha rkhta hun Bye

Uske baad mene thodi der Ammi se baat ki Usky Baad Thodi der Heer se Baat ki usky baad Rukhsar se halake sbko pta chal chuka Aqsa ke baare Sabne baat krte waqt Aqsa ky liye hamdardi jatayi aur Subah Ghr milne ka Bol diya

Sbse baat krne ke baad mein Relex ho Gya Mene Aqsa ki Trf Nazrein ghumayi toh Uski Ankhen khuli Hui thi Aqsa Pure ward ko Ghur ghur kr idhr udhr dekh rhi thi tbhi uski nzr mujhse Takrayi wo thoda dar gyi mein Koi baat kiye bina hi jaldi se wahan se Nikla Aur Dr. Ke Cabin mein ghuss gya Wahan ek Lady dr. Thi Age Shayed 28 29 hogi Khair mein usko lene ke baad apne Ward mein Aya Lady dr. Ne Aqsa ka Checkup kiya aur Mujhse boli

Lady Dr.; Yeh Ab bilkul thik hai ise bhook lgi hogi ap Khana khila dijiye uske baad yeh dwai khila dena thik hai ab mein jati hun Agr Koi problem ho toh Mere cabin mein aa jyega

Usky baad Lady doctor chali gyi mein pack kiya hua khana lekr Aqsa pass Baith Gya Aqsa mujhy Ghur kr dekh rhi Thi Aur shayed dar bhi Rhi thi Mene socha Pehle baat kr loon aise toh hargiz kuch nhi khane wali yeh

Mein; Hello Aqsa Kaisi ho...

Aqsa pehle toh meri baat sun kr bahut chonki agle hi pal usne mujhy apni Pyaari si awaaz mein jawab diya

Aqsa; Ap kon ho? mein kahan hun? mere Amju Bhaiya Kaha hain? Meri Ammi kaha hai?

Mein; Are Beta Aram se Mera naam Faisal hai sb pyaar se faisu bulate hain Tum abhi Hospital mein ho aur...

Aqsa; (roti hui)Mere bhaiya kaha unhone mere bhaiya goli maar diya meri ammi ko goli maar di mere bhaiya aur ami ko maar diya...

Aqsa phut phut kr rone lgi wese itni Masoom bachi ko rota dekh toh Koi bhi Pathar dil insan rone lg jaye toh bhala mein kese chup hota meri ankhen bhi nam ho gyi lkn mene apne apko Control krte hue kaha

Mein; Are beta ro mt Agr tum royegi toh tumhare bhaiya aur Ami ko Takleef hogi kiya tum chahti ho kiya tumhare bhaiya aur Ammi takleef mein rhe

Aqsa roti hui Na mein sar hilati hai lkn Sisk toh ab bhi rhi thi

Mein; Yeh hui naa baat ab Bs rona band krdo Ajse mein Tumhara Amju Bhaiya Hun tum mujhy Bhaiya keh kr bula skti Ho

Aqsa;(siskti hui) nhi mujhy wohi amju bhaiya chahye

Mein; Tum phir se rone lgi Tumhare amju mujhse naraz ho jayege unko takleef bhi hogi mtlb tum chahti tumhare amju bhaiya ko takleef ho

Meri is baat se Aqsa pr Gehra asr hua Aqsa Ne rona band kr diya lkn Sisk ab bhi rhi thi

Mein; shabash chalo ab apne Amju bhaiya ko gale lgao

Lkn Aqsa waisi hi leti siskti rahi mene uska hath pkd kr utha diya apne seene se lga liya Aqsa Thodi der roti rhi Lkn 5 minute baad Aqsa ka siskna band ho gya be sudh ho kr mere gale lgi hui Thi

Mein; Aqsa !!.

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Mein; Aqsa beta Chalo Khana khalo !!

Aqsa; Nhi Amju Bhiaiya mujhy nhi khana

Mein; Are kha lo na tum nhi khaogi toh Mein bhi nhi khaonga tum apne bhaiya ko aise bhookhe pait sone dogi

Aqsa phirse na mein sar hilati

Mein; Toh phir jaldi se kha lo Mujhy bhookh lgi hai

Aqsa mere seene se Sar utha kr baith jati hai Mein pass mein pady khane ko Lekr Aqsa ke samne baith jata hun aur apne hathon se Aqsa ko khilane Lgta Ek do baar na mein Sar hilati nhi khana lkn mein khila hi deta hun Aqsa ko Dwai bhi khila deta jis se use nind aane lgti toh wo so jaati hai

Mein bhi thoda Bahut khana kha kr Aqsa ky pass hi lait jata hun uske sar hath pherne lgta hun meri bhi ankh lg jati hai
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''Amju Bhaiya Uthye na ...

Mene Ankhen kholi toh Aqsa mujhy Jaga rhi Thi mein uth kr baith gya Aqsa Ke sar par hath pherte hue kaha

Mein; Kiya hua beta

Aqsa; (preshan hoti hui) Bhaiya wo mein..

Mein; washrom Jana hai

Aqsa Haan mein Sar Hilati hai toh mein wahan se uth kr khada ho jata hun Aqsa ka hath pkr ward se bahar le ata wahan pr kaam krti nurse ko bulaya Use kaha ke Aqsa ko ache se Nehla bhi de Jispr Aqsa ne thoda na nakur kiya lkn mene Mana liya Wo nahane gyi toh mein bhi washroom se fresh ho kr Aa gya Aqsa bhi Aa gyi mene use apni goad mein utha liya Mujhse ab nhi dar rhi Aqsa mujhy apna Amjid Bhaiya hi smjh rhi thi

Tabhi waheen Abu aaty hue dikhayi diye Unhone mujhy door se hi dekh liya wo hamari trf hi aa gye

Abu; Kaise Ho faisu beta ho aur meri Pyaari Bachi kesi hai

Yeh bolte hue abu ne Aqsa ke sar par hath fer diya

Mein; Mein thik hu Abu Aqsa bhi thik hai

Mein; Aqsa Inse milo yeh hamare Abu Hain

Aqsa; Abu Jaan

Yeh bolti Aqsa meri trf Hairani se dekhti hai toh mein Haan mein sar hila deta hun Abu Asalm ne Aqsa ke gaal pr kiss krte hue bole

Abu Aslam; Hn mein abse tumhara abu jaan hun chalo tum beti tum Apne bhaiya Ke sath ghr chalo wahan tumhari Ami Intzaar kr rhi hai

Aqsa; Amiiii !!!

Yeh bolti Aqsa rone lgti hai Mein Use chup krate hue bolta hun

Mein; Are Aqi Chup ho jao na Jese tumne Mujhy apna Amju bhiaya mana wese hi meri Ami bhi toh tumhari Ami hui na

Meri baat sun kr Aqsa chhup ho jati hai mene Abu se Car ki key li usky baad Hospital se bahar aa gya mene Aqsa apni Pass wali seat pe bitha diya car mein beth kr Uske chehre pr khushi nzer aa rhi thi jo bahut Pyaari lg rhi thi Bs Aqsa Ke kapde thode old thy khair mein kuch sochta hua gadi Hospital se nikal kr ek Restaurant pr ruka Jahan mene aur Aqsa ne nashta kiya uskye mall mein Akr mene Aqsa ko usky size Ky kapde kharide aur shoes bhi li ek Suite Aqsa ko pehna diya Aqsa na nakur krti rhi lkn mein kaha manne wala tha Aqsa Frock mein bahut cute lg rhi Thi khair in sb time 12 bj gye thy

Aqsa Car mein bethi Ab bahut Khush thi Kyu ke shayed aj se pehle Aqsa ne Itne mehnge kapde shoes pehne hon lkn ab toh uski saari khuwashain puri krne wala ghr mil gya toh yeh sb toh lazim hi tha

Khair Ghr pohnch gye Sb ghr wale Car ki awaaz sun kr sb bahar aa gye


Mein Aqsa ko Goud mein Utha liya Sbke samne Khada Ho gya Yahi sbhi Excited thy Aqsa se milne ky liye Ami Nisha Didi Fiza Rukhsar Fiza Farha aur Arman bhi Side mein Khada tha

Mein; (Ami Ki trf ishara Krte hue) Aqsa woh rhi tumhari Ami

Aqsa Bhagti hui Ami ke gale lg gyi Rone bhi lgi lkn Ami use Chup krwati aur pyaar krne lg gyi jis se Aqsa jld hi chup ho gyi Khair uske baad Baari baari sb Aqsa se milne lgy Jo bhi milta Wo Aqsa Ko goud mein utha leta khair last Nisha didi ne Aqsa ko Goud mein Utha kr Ghr ke andr le aye Sb Aqsa pyaar se baat kr rhy thy koi bhi uski Ghr walo ko baare mein nhi puch rha tha sbko pta tha agr Past ki baat ki Aqsa rone lg jayegi khair Kuch ghnte mein Sb Aqsa se ghul mil gye Ami ne Aqsa Ko apne room mein Rehne ka keh diya jis pr Nisha didi Ne thoda jhgra bhi kiya lkn Ami ne ek na suni jispr Nisha didi ko manna pada

Mein Fresh hone apne Kamre mein chala aaya Aj Commissioner se bhi baat krni thi Socha dinner Pr Jakr mil lunga........
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Update 12 (Aqsa)

Arman; (rumaal se anson pohnchty Hue) nhi mein nhi sambhal paonga Aqsa(bachi) ko kyu ke jb bhi mein Aqsa ko dekhunga Mujhy Amjid(dost) ki yaad ayegi

Mein; (arman ki pith thapthapate hue) Sambhal bhai Chal Aqsa ko Hospital le chalte hain

Arman ne bhi haan mein sar hilaya mene bike start ki Arman piche Aqsa ko gaod mein liye beth gya hm hospital ky liye chal diye.....

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Hm Hospital pohnche toh mujhy Apne Abu bahar parking mein hi mil gye unhone hme dekha toh Wo hamari trf aa gye

Abu; Kiya hua beta aur Yeh Bachi kon hai...

Mein; Baad mein btata hun Abu Abhi Yeh behosh hai Jaldi chaliye

Uske Baad Hmne Aqsa Ko Admit kiya wo abhi tk Behosh thi Abu ne Btaya ke Thodi mein hosh ho aa jayega Raat ke 8 bjne ko thy Mene Abu ko sb btata diya jo Aj Hua Wo Bhi thodi der ky liye khamosh hue Aqsa ky liye sympathy bhi hui Abu ne kaha Aqsa ab se uski Sbse Choti beti hai yeh kehte hue abu ne ek baar Aqsa jo Abhi Leti hui Thi Uske sar pr hath bhi fer diya Mujhy bhi Behad khushi Thi Abu ke faisle se aur Mein yahi chahta tha

Mein; Abu ap abhi ghr jaye sb preshan ho rhy honge Mein khana Idhr se Pack krwa lunga

Abu; Hn mein bhi wohi soch rha mein Khana pack krwa Kr bhijwa deta hun subah mein Jaldi aaonga

Mein; Thik Abu Jaan Sbko Bta Dena Aqsa ky baare mein

Abu; wo toh tum na bolte toh bhi bta deta Acha beta baat sun Aqsa ky bhai aur Ami ky Kaatilo ky baare Mein kiya socha hai

Mein; Abhi tk toh kuch nhi lkn Jaldi Sochunga agr sochna shuru kiya Toh Ap bhi Ache se jante phir Wo log chahe wo Kaha bhi chhupe hon wohi jakr Kutte ki mout marunga

Abu; Mein bs itna Kahunga beta Soch samjh kr Har Kadam Uthana aur tere har Kadam pr Har waqt Mein Tumhare sath hun aur haan ek aur bhi hai Shayed wo jldi aayega

Mein;(muskrahte hue) Usko Bulane mein Thoda Time hai Abhi Shayed ab Tk use pta chal gya hoga khair baate bahut ho gyi abhi Ap jaye Ghr wale tension mein honge

Abu Mujhy Khuda Hafiz keh kr Nikal gye Abu ne Jaate hi Khana pack krwa kr bhijwa diya Arman Jo hamare sath Hi aya tha Wo ek Jagah Baitha Khamoshi se Ek Ache Dost ky kho jane ka Dukh Bahut Zyada gehra hota hai Abhi wohi dukh mein Arman tha Jo har waqt Mazak Masti krne wala aj Khamosh betha tha Mein Chalta hua Arman ke pass aya Uske kandhe pr hath rkha toh wo sadmy se Bahar aya meri ankhon mein dekhne lga

Arman; Un Madarchodo ko mein apne Hathon se Marunga Faisu Jinhone mere Ache dost ko Maar diya mein nhi chhounga unhe

Mein;(arman ka peeth thapthapte hue) Housla rkh mere Yrr Sbko Saza Bhugtni padegi Abhi Tu ghr Jaw Tere ghr pr sbhi preshan honge Baad mein dekhenge abhi hme Aqsa Ko sambhalna hai Subah Ghr aa jana Mene Aqsa ko sbse Milwana Dukhi toh wo hogi lkn Naya ghr naye log Yeh sb use Ajeeb lagega lkn wo Sambhal jayegi mujhy pura bharosa hai hme Aqsa ko pyaar dena jo pyaar usko apni Ami aur Bhaiya se mila tha usse bhi kahi zyada pyaar dena hoga Aqsa ko khair Tu uth Ja Cooler se muh hath dho le Phir Seedha Ghr chale jana agr tujhse drive nhi hota bike toh mein chhor du

Arman; (ankhon ki nami se) Itna Kamzor nhi hun mein Tum sahi bol abhi hm Aqsa ko sambhalna chahye mein subah aa jaonga Mein Ja rha hun Ghr Aqsa ka dhiyan rkhna

Mene Haan mein Sar hilaya Arman muh hath Dho kr Ghr ky liye Nikal Gya Mein Abhi Aqsa ky pass hi Baitha tha Wo Soti hui bhi bahut pyaari lg rhi thi aur cute aur masoomiyat bhari hui thi uske chehre mein Darindo ne is masoom ko baksh diya tha shayed iski masoomiyat dekh kr Chhor diya hoga Wo Toh ab Aqsa bata Sakti thi lkn Abhi wo is Halt mein nhi thi Wo kuch bta ske

Mene Apna Mobile utha kr check kiya bahut Sari missed calls lgy thy Usme Nisha didi ky sbse zyada calls thy Uske baad Rukhsar ky Ami ky bhi missed calls lgy hue thy aur Heer ki missed calls thi Fiza ne koi call nhi kiya mein janta tha bhale wo mujhy call na kre lkn preshan toh wo zrur hui hogi khair mene sbse Pehle Nisha didi ka No milaya Udhr se turant Call Receive ho gyi


Nisha; Hello Faisu kaise ho? khana kha liya na ? Aur Meri Chhoti si pyaari si bhn kaisi hai?

Mein; Araam se Didi Mein Thik Hun Aur Khana Abhi nhi khaya Aur Hamari Chhoti si bhn Bahut pyaari hai Thik hai Bs Sadma Bardasht nhi kr ski islye behosh ho gyi Abhi thodi der mein Aqsa ko Hosh ayega toh uske sath hi mein khana kha lunga

Nisha; Hmm Sadma Bahut Gehra lga hai Itni Chhoti Age mein yeh sb mujhy soch kr rona aa rha

Mein; Didi Sambhaliye khudko Ap Aisi rone lgogi Toh Aqsa ko kese sambhalenge Use Ab Sabse Zyada Pyaar dena itna Ky wo apne Bite Kal ko bhul kr Nayi Shurwaat kre

Nisha; Sahi keh rhe tum Acha Khiyal rkhna Apna bhi Aqsa ka bhi us ko subah Ghr le aana Hm sb tum dono ka intzaar krenge

Mein; Jii Didi Jaldi aonga Acha rkhta hun Bye

Uske baad mene thodi der Ammi se baat ki Usky Baad Thodi der Heer se Baat ki usky baad Rukhsar se halake sbko pta chal chuka Aqsa ke baare Sabne baat krte waqt Aqsa ky liye hamdardi jatayi aur Subah Ghr milne ka Bol diya

Sbse baat krne ke baad mein Relex ho Gya Mene Aqsa ki Trf Nazrein ghumayi toh Uski Ankhen khuli Hui thi Aqsa Pure ward ko Ghur ghur kr idhr udhr dekh rhi thi tbhi uski nzr mujhse Takrayi wo thoda dar gyi mein Koi baat kiye bina hi jaldi se wahan se Nikla Aur Dr. Ke Cabin mein ghuss gya Wahan ek Lady dr. Thi Age Shayed 28 29 hogi Khair mein usko lene ke baad apne Ward mein Aya Lady dr. Ne Aqsa ka Checkup kiya aur Mujhse boli

Lady Dr.; Yeh Ab bilkul thik hai ise bhook lgi hogi ap Khana khila dijiye uske baad yeh dwai khila dena thik hai ab mein jati hun Agr Koi problem ho toh Mere cabin mein aa jyega

Usky baad Lady doctor chali gyi mein pack kiya hua khana lekr Aqsa pass Baith Gya Aqsa mujhy Ghur kr dekh rhi Thi Aur shayed dar bhi Rhi thi Mene socha Pehle baat kr loon aise toh hargiz kuch nhi khane wali yeh

Mein; Hello Aqsa Kaisi ho...

Aqsa pehle toh meri baat sun kr bahut chonki agle hi pal usne mujhy apni Pyaari si awaaz mein jawab diya

Aqsa; Ap kon ho? mein kahan hun? mere Amju Bhaiya Kaha hain? Meri Ammi kaha hai?

Mein; Are Beta Aram se Mera naam Faisal hai sb pyaar se faisu bulate hain Tum abhi Hospital mein ho aur...

Aqsa; (roti hui)Mere bhaiya kaha unhone mere bhaiya goli maar diya meri ammi ko goli maar di mere bhaiya aur ami ko maar diya...

Aqsa phut phut kr rone lgi wese itni Masoom bachi ko rota dekh toh Koi bhi Pathar dil insan rone lg jaye toh bhala mein kese chup hota meri ankhen bhi nam ho gyi lkn mene apne apko Control krte hue kaha

Mein; Are beta ro mt Agr tum royegi toh tumhare bhaiya aur Ami ko Takleef hogi kiya tum chahti ho kiya tumhare bhaiya aur Ammi takleef mein rhe

Aqsa roti hui Na mein sar hilati hai lkn Sisk toh ab bhi rhi thi

Mein; Yeh hui naa baat ab Bs rona band krdo Ajse mein Tumhara Amju Bhaiya Hun tum mujhy Bhaiya keh kr bula skti Ho

Aqsa;(siskti hui) nhi mujhy wohi amju bhaiya chahye

Mein; Tum phir se rone lgi Tumhare amju mujhse naraz ho jayege unko takleef bhi hogi mtlb tum chahti tumhare amju bhaiya ko takleef ho

Meri is baat se Aqsa pr Gehra asr hua Aqsa Ne rona band kr diya lkn Sisk ab bhi rhi thi

Mein; shabash chalo ab apne Amju bhaiya ko gale lgao

Lkn Aqsa waisi hi leti siskti rahi mene uska hath pkd kr utha diya apne seene se lga liya Aqsa Thodi der roti rhi Lkn 5 minute baad Aqsa ka siskna band ho gya be sudh ho kr mere gale lgi hui Thi

Mein; Aqsa !!.

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Mein; Aqsa beta Chalo Khana khalo !!

Aqsa; Nhi Amju Bhiaiya mujhy nhi khana

Mein; Are kha lo na tum nhi khaogi toh Mein bhi nhi khaonga tum apne bhaiya ko aise bhookhe pait sone dogi

Aqsa phirse na mein sar hilati

Mein; Toh phir jaldi se kha lo Mujhy bhookh lgi hai

Aqsa mere seene se Sar utha kr baith jati hai Mein pass mein pady khane ko Lekr Aqsa ke samne baith jata hun aur apne hathon se Aqsa ko khilane Lgta Ek do baar na mein Sar hilati nhi khana lkn mein khila hi deta hun Aqsa ko Dwai bhi khila deta jis se use nind aane lgti toh wo so jaati hai

Mein bhi thoda Bahut khana kha kr Aqsa ky pass hi lait jata hun uske sar hath pherne lgta hun meri bhi ankh lg jati hai
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''Amju Bhaiya Uthye na ...

Mene Ankhen kholi toh Aqsa mujhy Jaga rhi Thi mein uth kr baith gya Aqsa Ke sar par hath pherte hue kaha

Mein; Kiya hua beta

Aqsa; (preshan hoti hui) Bhaiya wo mein..

Mein; washrom Jana hai

Aqsa Haan mein Sar Hilati hai toh mein wahan se uth kr khada ho jata hun Aqsa ka hath pkr ward se bahar le ata wahan pr kaam krti nurse ko bulaya Use kaha ke Aqsa ko ache se Nehla bhi de Jispr Aqsa ne thoda na nakur kiya lkn mene Mana liya Wo nahane gyi toh mein bhi washroom se fresh ho kr Aa gya Aqsa bhi Aa gyi mene use apni goad mein utha liya Mujhse ab nhi dar rhi Aqsa mujhy apna Amjid Bhaiya hi smjh rhi thi

Tabhi waheen Abu aaty hue dikhayi diye Unhone mujhy door se hi dekh liya wo hamari trf hi aa gye

Abu; Kaise Ho faisu beta ho aur meri Pyaari Bachi kesi hai

Yeh bolte hue abu ne Aqsa ke sar par hath fer diya

Mein; Mein thik hu Abu Aqsa bhi thik hai

Mein; Aqsa Inse milo yeh hamare Abu Hain

Aqsa; Abu Jaan

Yeh bolti Aqsa meri trf Hairani se dekhti hai toh mein Haan mein sar hila deta hun Abu Asalm ne Aqsa ke gaal pr kiss krte hue bole

Abu Aslam; Hn mein abse tumhara abu jaan hun chalo tum beti tum Apne bhaiya Ke sath ghr chalo wahan tumhari Ami Intzaar kr rhi hai

Aqsa; Amiiii !!!

Yeh bolti Aqsa rone lgti hai Mein Use chup krate hue bolta hun

Mein; Are Aqi Chup ho jao na Jese tumne Mujhy apna Amju bhiaya mana wese hi meri Ami bhi toh tumhari Ami hui na

Meri baat sun kr Aqsa chhup ho jati hai mene Abu se Car ki key li usky baad Hospital se bahar aa gya mene Aqsa apni Pass wali seat pe bitha diya car mein beth kr Uske chehre pr khushi nzer aa rhi thi jo bahut Pyaari lg rhi thi Bs Aqsa Ke kapde thode old thy khair mein kuch sochta hua gadi Hospital se nikal kr ek Restaurant pr ruka Jahan mene aur Aqsa ne nashta kiya uskye mall mein Akr mene Aqsa ko usky size Ky kapde kharide aur shoes bhi li ek Suite Aqsa ko pehna diya Aqsa na nakur krti rhi lkn mein kaha manne wala tha Aqsa Frock mein bahut cute lg rhi Thi khair in sb time 12 bj gye thy

Aqsa Car mein bethi Ab bahut Khush thi Kyu ke shayed aj se pehle Aqsa ne Itne mehnge kapde shoes pehne hon lkn ab toh uski saari khuwashain puri krne wala ghr mil gya toh yeh sb toh lazim hi tha

Khair Ghr pohnch gye Sb ghr wale Car ki awaaz sun kr sb bahar aa gye


Mein Aqsa ko Goud mein Utha liya Sbke samne Khada Ho gya Yahi sbhi Excited thy Aqsa se milne ky liye Ami Nisha Didi Fiza Rukhsar Fiza Farha aur Arman bhi Side mein Khada tha

Mein; (Ami Ki trf ishara Krte hue) Aqsa woh rhi tumhari Ami

Aqsa Bhagti hui Ami ke gale lg gyi Rone bhi lgi lkn Ami use Chup krwati aur pyaar krne lg gyi jis se Aqsa jld hi chup ho gyi Khair uske baad Baari baari sb Aqsa se milne lgy Jo bhi milta Wo Aqsa Ko goud mein utha leta khair last Nisha didi ne Aqsa ko Goud mein Utha kr Ghr ke andr le aye Sb Aqsa pyaar se baat kr rhy thy koi bhi uski Ghr walo ko baare mein nhi puch rha tha sbko pta tha agr Past ki baat ki Aqsa rone lg jayegi khair Kuch ghnte mein Sb Aqsa se ghul mil gye Ami ne Aqsa Ko apne room mein Rehne ka keh diya jis pr Nisha didi Ne thoda jhgra bhi kiya lkn Ami ne ek na suni jispr Nisha didi ko manna pada

Mein Fresh hone apne Kamre mein chala aaya Aj Commissioner se bhi baat krni thi Socha dinner Pr Jakr mil lunga........
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Aqsa ke sath bura hua lekin jis tarah faisu aur uski family ne usko sambhala wo gazab tha :D
Aur lagta hai kahani mein character aane wala hai aur ab dekhte hai commissioner se kya baate hoti hai :D
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