Fantasy Love - Family (Romance , Thriller , Action, Drama Comedy)

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who is Your Favorite Character In This Story?

  • Faisu

    Votes: 20 58.8%
  • Arman

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Nisha

    Votes: 5 14.7%
  • Heer

    Votes: 2 5.9%
  • Fiza

    Votes: 6 17.6%
  • Farha

    Votes: 1 2.9%
  • Aliza

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    34

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pichle saal mene Yahan ek story Post ki Thi ""Love is not important without family " Mujhy koi idea nhi tha story kese likhna bs Jo dimag mein aa rha tha wo likhta jata Is bich meri family mein ek ke baad ek 3 deaths hui jis se mein kuch mahine ky liye xforum se Cut off ho gya usky baad aya toh koi idea nhi aya kese likhna hai socha idea ayega toh likh lunga mene story report krke off krdi

so Finally mujhy idea mil chuka hai Story aagy badhane ka isly mein naye sire se shuru kr rha hun taake sb ko smjh aa jaye Kuch story mein changes hongi jinhone padhi hai wo smjh jayege
 

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introduction

Mera Naam Hai Faisal Shaikh Age 20 colour Fair Dikhne handsome hun Agr Koe Larki Dekhe To sedha ignore nhi krengi mere bary men Sochegi Zaror men abhi university k First year men hun





mere Dad ka Naam hai Aslam Shaikh Age 43 mere dad businessman hain aur Docter bhi hain...


meri mom name Shumaila hai age 42 meri mom ek docter hain meri mom aur dad ek sath hospital men kaam krty thy phir dono mere piyar ho gya Aur phir shadi krli


Meri badi Bhen Nisha Age 22 dikhne men bahut Khubsurt hai .. mujhe apna sab kuch manti hai Abhi univerty ke 3rd year men hai



Meri Choti Bhen Fiza Age 19 Dikhne Bahut Khubsurt aur masoom hai aur intelligent bhi bahut hai iski Ek buri adat hai ghr men kisi se zyada baat nhi krti Bs kaam se kaam rkhti is ky liye study hi sub kuch hai... Ye bhi mere sath hi padhti hai
 
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Hello Dosto mujhe Story likhne ka koe experience nhi hai ye story mene apni khiyalat ko ap sabhi dosto se byan krne ko likha raha hun Dosto Ap sab Support krty rahye ga


Sardyo (winter) Ka Mausam tha karb shaam ka time tha Men Apni Dhun men apni bike se ghr aa raha tabhi **Baaaaachhaaaaaooo*Ye chekh sun kr mene bike ko break lgai aur As pass dekhne lga lkn mujhe kuch Nazar nhi aya to men wapis Bike start ki aur aage badha di


**Baaaachaaao Baaachaaao ** is baar jb mene ye cheekh suni to awaz ka peecha krte hue dekha ye cheekh paas hi ek jungle Se aa rhi thi mene bike jungle Trfa badha


**Hahaahah Jitna Chilana hai chila lo Yahan tumhe koe bachane wala nhi aayega hahahha**

Yahan 4 Admi khre thy dikhne mein Gunde hi lag rhe the

Wo Ek larki ko ghere hue thy wo lrki bahut dri hui. Thi Aur Roe ja rhi

Larki; (Rote hue) Please mujhe chod do mene tum sbka kiya bigada hai

Admi1; (Gusse se) Bigada tune nhi tere baap ne hai hamara croro ka nuksan Kr dya aur us Nuksan ki bharpai ab tum krogi .....

Larki ye sun Ke Dar maare kapne Lagti hai ...

Admi1 Chaku larki ko marne hi wala tha tabhi ek Khaternak awaz sun ke Ruk jata hai.. Jb peecha dekhta hai to waha ko koe lrka khara tha

Larka; (Gussy Se) Chod do is larki ko warna Anjam Bahut bura hoga.....

Wo Charo hasne Lagte hain

Admi1; Hahahh Dekho re kal ka launda hume dhamka rha hai hahaha
Dekh larky agr apni Jaan piyari hai to bhaag ja yahan se verna is larki k marne ke baad agla number tera

Larka; (chilate hue) Jaan to ab teri nhi bachegi Tune is larki ko kidnap krke bahut bari glti krdi ab tujhe koe nhi bacha skta....

Admi1; Jaao re Maaro saale ko

Admi 1 ka baat sunte hi teeno admi us lrke k pass jane lgty hain...

Ek Admi chaku se us larky per waar krta hai
Mager ye kiya uska chaku larky tak pohncha hi nhi aur wo admi nichi gir gya...

Hua yun k jaise hi admi chaku waar krta hai larka Tezi se uske Gardan paker leta hai dusre hath se uska chaku pkr leta hai uska hath maror kr uske seene Ghoomp deta hai
Ye Kuch hi second men hua kisi ko kuch samjh nhi aya

Ab Admi3 Aur Admi4 bache hi Thy
Jb dono dekha k Wo admi2 mar gya h to dono ko apni mout samne dikhne lgi

Wo larka Dono ki trf baghta h aur kuch minto men dono nichi pre hue thy Admi4 Ke hath pair tote hue thy aur Admi3 ka gardan marora hua tha

Admi1 jb ye dekha to uske hath pair kaampne lge

Larka Admi1 tarf barhne lagta hai
Aur pohncha kr ek punch uske mun marta hai aur nichi gir jata hai neeche girte hi larka uska Gardan maror deta hai

Larka; (narmi se)Kya naam hai apka......

Larki larke ki narmi dekh k hairan ho gyi

Larki; (haklati hui) m..,,m..Era Naam Farah.....hai

Larke ne jb larki ka naam Suna use ek jhatka lga.......


 
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Larka; Kiya Naam Hai Apka...??

Larki(Haklati hue) M ..mera Nnnam Farrahhh hai..

Larke Ne Jab Larki ka naam Suna to use ek jhatka lga......


Ab Aage....

(Dosto Ab Larki ko Farah Likhung)

Jungle men andhera tha is waja se larke ne larki ka chehra nhi dikhta hai

Larka; (Piyaar Se) Ok Ab Daro mat chalo mere sath wo Gunde mar gye

Larke ki baat sun kr Farah khud ko sambhalti hai aur uth jati hai aur larke k peeche Chalne lgti hai Chalte Chalte dono Jungle se Baher Aa gai Jahan per Larke ki Bike Khadi hue thi Larka Bike per beth jata hai aur Farah ko peeche bathne ko bolta hai Phir larke bike Aage Badha Di Farah Ne Abhi Tk Larke ka Chehra nhi Dekha Kyu ke Larke k Chehre per Rumaal Bandha hua tha Raste men Larke ne Farah se Uske ghr ka Adress Puchta hai Phir Larka Usko ghr k baher drop krta hai aur Aage chala jata Hai Thorda door jaker Wo apne mun se rumaal hatata hai OMG....Are Are Ye to Apna Hero Hai Haan bhai apna Hero (Faisu) Hai....
(3rd to 1st Person)

Maine Mun Se Rumaal nikala aur Rumal jeb m rakh k bike aage badhai Mene Farah ko bacha to lya tha mager men ak shock men tha......

(New Character Introduction)

Chacha Umair Age 43 Retired Acp Shareef aur nek dil insan ye kisi ka bura nhi cahte sabko khush dekhna chahte hai

Chachi Rehana Age 42 Dikhne Se nhi lagta inki itni Age Hai Chachi housewife hai Chachi Faisu Ko zyada Pasand nhi krti kyu Pasand nhi krti wo aage Chalke pta chlega

Bada Beta Akram age 22 Bhai iske Baary men jitni tareef ki jai kam bahut hi nek dil insan Bilkul apne baap ki tarah Abhi isne Ye Software ingnear hai...

Badi beti Rukhsar Age 20 Bahut hi khubsurt aur chul bulli hai Faisu ko bhai se bhi bhadker manti hai

Choti Beti Farah Age 18 Bahut khubsurt aur masoom hai Bilkul fiza ki trah agr dono ko ek sath Ye bhi faisu se kam hi baat krti hai eska bhi ak reason hai wo aage chlke pta chlega ye fiza k sath hi parhti hai
 
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Main; (Man men) Akher Chacha ne kiya bigara hai in Gundo ka???? aese bahut se man men Sawal the mager jawab ek bhi nhi tha

Aese hi sochte men ghr men pohnch gya Bike Park karke Ghr ke Ander aya

Main; Hi Ammi

Ami; Hi Beta aao Dinner kro...

Main; Ami Fresh hoke ata hun

Men kamre se freah hoke neeche aaya
Main; didi Kaisi Hain Ap..?

Nisha didi; Babu Main Theek tm Sunao…

Main; Bilkul Theek…

Nisha ; Ao Betho….

Main Jaake Api nisha Ke sath beth gya Dinner krne ke baad sabKO GUD night wish karke apny kamre men Aya Subah university ka first day Tha islye jaldi so Gya

Next Day……

Mera Room floor pr tha Floor pr 3 room the ek mera Ak Fiza ka Ek Store Room tha.. ……

Main Subah Fresh hoke neeche aya

Hello everyone

Main Jaake Api Nisha Ke pass Beth gya…..

Ami ; Beta Uni Men Kisi Se Jhagra na krna….

Main; ok mom..waise apo bhi to wahi hij na Ami islye no tention…..

Sabne Nashta Kiya Aur Apne Kaam pe Chle gye mtlb

Abu Office Men Uni Fiza School Apo saheli k Ghr Ami Hospital Ami 12 bje wapis Aa jati thi

Nisha Babu Tu Chal men Rukhsar k Sath aa jaongi….

Main; ok didi no problem

Maine Bike k p beth k chaldya Uni aj First Day tha uni ka islye excited tha thora nervous bhi tha nervous islye k Ragging na Ho waise main chahta to koe mera baal bhi baka nhi kar skta tha But Ami Ka kehna Nhi Taal sakta tha ……
Is Trah Sochte sochte men Uni pohnch gya bike park karke uni ke Ander Aya To …. Bahut Saare larke Larkiye k Ragging ho rahi Thii… Mujhe ek baat achi lagi Junior Ladko k ragging Senior ladke le Rahe thy wahi Junior lardkiyon ke Ragging Senior ladkiyan le rahi thi
Is trah main bachte bachte Uni K beech m agya mager yahan meri kismat jawab de gyi…..

“”Ae Ladke Kaha ja raha hai…’’
Mene Peeche mud ke dekha to Waha 3Ladke the (Ab men Ladka1 Ladka2 Ladka3 likhunga…)Dikhne se senior lag Rahe thy mene socha beta ab to teri lag gyi…..

Ladka1;Mene kuch pucha h tujhse…..

Main;Sir Class men ja rha hun….

Ladka1; Zara idhr to aa na…

Men uske paass gya. Jjii Sir….

Ladka1…dekh Aj tera first day ragging to honi hi honi h men tujhe 2 option deta hun…

1…. Yahan Per Ek Larki aa gyi uske purpose karna hoga..tunhe…

2… Yahan pr murga banja Ek minute ke liye…

Main Soch main pad gya..Agr Ladki ko purpose karta to bhi bezzati hoti…
Murga banna bhi bezati h hai….
Men kuch soch ker bola

Main; Ladki Ko purpose krunga…..

ladka1; Waah Dikha di na Ashique Mujhe pta tha tu yahi choose krega…..

ladka2…. Bhai kya Timing hai wo dekh ladki aa rhi hai…

Mene jaise hi us tarf dekha meri sari preshani dur ho gyi…

Ladka1; Ja Beta…..

Men larki ki tarf barhne laga




*iiii Lllooveeee yyyoouu*

Main ye Ye Baat Us Larki se Neeche beth K ki thi…..

Larki; Chal Babu Naotanki Band……


Main; Sorry didi wo….

Nisha; Chal Kuch nhii Shuker Mana main thi ager koe aur hoti to thaper parna tha tere ko…koe nhi ja Class Men….

Men Nisha didi aur rukhsar api se bye karke apni class men aa gya ……

larka1;……Oooh ye larka bach kese… gaya..

Larka2… Bhai ager larke thaper parta ab tk 99 ka rcord tut m wo 100 pura ho jata……

Ladka1;….Kya 99 matbal….

ladka3: Jbse ye larki yahan ayi tabse 99 larko thaper par chuka h un men se 3 hum bhi hai…..

Phir teeno class men chle jaty hai……

(Ab Chalte Hai Fiza Ke pass)

Fiza ne abhi college men admission liya tha aj uska first day… Islye wo apni saheli k ghr ati h…..

(New Characters introduction)

Yasser; age 40 Duniya ke jane mane businessmen hai Faisu k papa k bachpan ka dost hain Faisu Ko Apna Beta mante h kyu ke iska ka koe Beta nhi h sirf do betiyan thi…..

Anila; Age 38 Dikhne men 30 ki lagti hai Faisu Se bahut piyar Krti h (Galt mat samjhna Ek maa ki trah piyar krti h)

Badi Beti Aliza Age 22 bahut khush mizaj hain aur khubsurt bhi hai Ye abhi USA Men hain High studies ky liye….

Choti Beti HEER age 18 Bahut masoom aur khubsurt hai ager sahi maino kaha jae khubsurti ka dusra naam aisa lagta h khuda ne fursat bana k bheja h waise ye bahut chulbuli si h mager fiza k samne nhi fiza k samne bas study study….…aur ye faisu ko dilo dil men bahut chahti hai mager kabhi apni feeling ko zahir hone nhi diya…


BTTH

Fiza Gate knock krti hai thori der bad Ek Anila ake Kholti h samne fiza ko dekh k uske Mun pr smile aa jati ha

Fiza; (A A) Aunt kasi hai ap….


Anila;(W S )men theek hun aur tm kesi ho.. Aaj subah subah yahan


Fiza; g aunty m theek hun wo ap Heer ko bula de aj college ka fisrt day h aur men late hona nhi chahti….


Abhi anila kuch kehne hi wali thi tabhi wahan heer ajati hai Dono Anila se bye krke college nikil jati hai…

BTTH(Back to the Hero)


Recesses time main canteen jane lagta hun mere sath 2 aur larke thy jo mere sath chal rahe thy

AOA Dear Men Ayaan Kiya hum friend ban sakte

pehle wala ladka bola uski Hight 5’8 in thi Dikhne smart hi tha…
Main; WS Bhai Mera Faisal Hai…

Mene ek nazer Ayaan k face per dali phir kuch soch kar hath aage bhadha dya..... Ayaan hath milane k baad .. Dusre larke naam pucha

Dusra Larka; Mera naam Sam hai Men Aur Ayaan school friends hai. …Mene sam se bhi hath milaya aur hum teeno canteen men aa gye bate Krty karty coffee pe phir baki k classes li Aur ghr aa gya
 
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