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YE STORY KASi LAGi AP KO?

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Bahut hi sandar lajvab update bhai
Very bad bhai aapne dragon arc bol ke aakash aur Rocky ka chutiyapa dikha diya bhai

Viraj ne apni aur present ko hide ker diya hai jisse ridun aur Sunil ko bhi pata nahi chala jo itne high level ke power full hai bhai

Viraj ne apni mala ke moti se portal ko bhi block kar Diya hai
Jisse dragon King zerga bhi kuch dekha nhi pa Raha hai bhai

Aisa to kya magic kiya hai viraj ne ki portal se koi aa ja nhi sakta balki aik dusre se contact bhi nhi kar pa rahe hai upar se zerga ka dimag kharab ki magic ball blast ho gayi dusri vali me only black bata rhi hai
Sala ho kya rha lour world me kuch samajh nahi AA Raha hai bhai use

Idhar rudin ka bhi same hal hai jaise hi viraj ne apni power realise ki
Use samjh aane lage hai kuch bura hone wala hai uske sath


Ozen ne jab viraj ko apni terf blue anergi ke rup me aata dekha to vo bhi pagla gaya ki yehi master

Is chakkar me uska gaal bhi lal ho gaya
Aaj use apni life sabse jyada afsos ho raha hoga ki uske pass earth ki sebse power full chij thi fir bhi vo mara gaya


Dragon ne surksha kavech me crack ker diya hai bahut sare

Ye Sunil kya kar raha hai rudin ke pass
Bhun dega aike hi foonke me to elina ka kya hoga

Ha elina se yad aaya Rocky usse flirt kar raha hai
Aakash ne kya chutiyapa fela rekha hai bhai

Jack ki hava thit Elina ko btane se mana kiya tha Sunil ne
Aur bhi jyada wat legegy jab pata chalega uska bhai viraj ki girl friend se flirt kar raha hai

Newzealand ka to kuch btaya hi nahi update me
Sirf surksha kavech me crack ke alawa bhai
Next update kab aayega bhai
Zoro x ...... bro 1st of All ye dragon arc hi hy ....
update me ny boht long likhi thi ...upto 7.5k words ...or Ye Arc us my bhi khatm ni ho raha tha🤦🏻 ....phir me ny us my se 4.7k words ki 1update bana kr post kar di hy ....

Rudin or Sunil apni apni jagha powerful hain ..but viraj ka power level alag hy 😁

Next update yahi se continue ho gi jab aap wo next update read karo gy to aap ko samjh aa jay gi ky ye wala update kitna important tha ...


abhi aap ky bohat se question hain ...jub new update post karo ga to ap ko in questions ky ans mil jayen gy.

is update ko aap story line samjh lo abhi ky lia ....Fight to next update my honi....
Viraj apni identity aasy hi khud se to reveal nahi kar sakta sub logo ky samny keu ky wo jo kuch bhi hy .......Akhir hy to ik servant na??? Lord ka servant ..to wo sirf order follow karta hy apni marzi sy kuch ni krta......

Or Zoro bro 1 bat .... ye story koi anime se inspired nhi hy .. ky me waha se daikh kar yaha bas type kar du ....

khud se likh raha hun or bady size ki update deta hun lea time lagta hy long update likhny me...

Me 2 ...3 update jitni story 1 update me post kar rha hun .. agar my rooz update karo to phir us update ka size boht chota ho ga.

abhi jo update ap ny read kia ye update bhi lagbhag 2update ky equal tha.

agar aap chaho to phir my bhi choty choty size ki update roz de dia karo ga

....is me bas mera faida ho ga choty size ki update ke wajha se story ki updates ka number tezi se badhay ga .....

but readers ko phir choti choti update wali story read krny me maza ni aay ga.
 
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Kya baat hai rudin ke Jane ke sare raste block kar diye viraj ne apni motiyo ki mala ki madad se, dragon king ka rudin se sampark bhi tod diya or to or uska magical gola bhi fod diya Jisme vo king dekhta tha...

Ab aane Jane ka rasta to band hi ho gya hai to viraj nikal gya apni human seal ko khol kr rudin se bhidne sath hi usne apna aura bhi release kar diya hai jo jarurat mando ko ummid dikha rha tha...

Wizard Sunil jo rudin ki koi kamjori dekhne gye the unhe bhi koi kamjori nhi mili or unhe khali hath wapas teleport hona pada...

Ye rocky miya to full lattu Ho gye hai Elina ke liye or Vo bas flart hi karne me laga hua hai jaha usne emargancy ka bta diya hai, Vaise uske drisya sandar likhe aapne bhai or ek ye akash jo usse bhi bada vala namoona, nashe me Sapne dekhne me lga hua tha pani me doob kr nasha utara, eliana ne khoob maze liye unhe dekh kr, jack Apne Ghar le gya hai akash or eliana ko, jaha badi si TV me vo neujeeland ka broadcast dekhne me lage hai, yah drisya bhi bahut Jabardast rha...

Viraj or us azgar vala drisya bhi mazedar tha vo Macchar or gaal laal vala...

Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab amazing
Xabhi Thank you story like karny k lia bro apna qeemti time is story ko deny or itna acha review deny ky lea....
Sala rudin ke man me bhay paida ho gya hai pr apni hi akad me vhi baitha hua khud ko majboot dikhane me laga hai...

Dragon king to sala Apne singhasan se hi gir gya tha or jb usne dekha ki use baukhalaya hua uski praja ke log dekh rhe hai to unhe bhaga diya galiya dekr...

Superb bhai sandar jabarjast
Xabhi Bro ye update ik tarha se next update ka plot hi hy ....😉 keu ky ye full update ka bas ik part hi hy to ye ik pori update jitna tha is lea post karna pada..agar single update me sub much post karta to ye update 10k words ko cross kar jati🤦🏻

keu ky me 1...1 charecter pe focus kar raha hun sirf viraj pe hi focus rakhu to Dragon Arc to half update me hi khatm 😂 phir story read karny me kia maza aay ga?


ho sakta hy Readers ko thoda boring lagy but fight se hat kar life me or bhi bohat kuch hota mujhy un chezo pe bhi focus karna hy is story me.🤔

Ap agar apni koi qeemti raay ya suggestion dena chaho to im waiting😍
 

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mast update
Ak47203 ..Bro thanks ...Story like karny k lia..
Superb update 🔥😍
Surya_021 ... Bro thank you for your support...
ekdum lajawab kahaani, jabardast aur mast update ♥️
spritemathews Bro thnk you .ap support krty rehna😍
Next update kab aayega bhai
Zoro x .. Bro Next update jaldi mil jay gi.
Superb update bro...
Waiting for next
Reza ...thank you for your support ..next update jaldi mily gi...
 

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ky ab aagy wohi hoga jo bhagwan ki marzi hy...

viraj tezi se Moon island ki taeaf uddta chala jaa raha tha .
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Aab Aagy

Ep.No .12
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Dragon iNvasion. (3rd chapter)
................Dragon arc.................

Viraj moon island ki taraf jaty howy apny maan me soch raha tha ....

Us pagal "Zerga" ka paltu kutta RuDin bohat chalak hy ab bhi us ny portal bohat dor bnaya hy .. but is bar my us ky bhagny ky sub rasty band kr du ga...

phir us ka dehan LORD ki taraf chala jata hy ... Lord wapis aarha hy haan 300 sal baad me Lord ko dekhu ga.
Ab jald hi hum apni khooi howi jaghaa phir se wapis paa len gy...

bas sirf Lord haan mera Lord hi Supreme hy ab har wo gaddar maar dia jaay ga jis ny Lord se gadari ki thi...
Mujhy ready hona ho ga us war ky lea jis ki shuraat 300 sal pehly howi thi.........or aaj ik baar phir se wohi Aaag bhadakai gie hy but ab ki baar koi ni bach paay ga sub ko jalaa kar rakh kar dea jay ga..

yahi baten sochty sochty wo Moon island pe pohnch gya tha. or ab wo portal us ky samny tha jo Humans realm or dragon realm ko ik dosry se connect kiay howy tha...
(Ye portal Dragon realm & Human realm ka Gateway tha)

Ab viraj uddty howy us portal ky charo taraf ghoom raha tha or bohat dehan se usko daikh raha tha .or apny maan me soch raha tha ky Lord ny kaha tha ky portal ko toodna ni ... but yaha to mujhy daikhny wala bhi koi ni hy agar me portal ko tood du to is se koi problem to nhi hony wali na🤔

phir kuch soch kar wo hawa me us portal ky samny ruk jata hy or apny galy me padi apni purple clour wali mala ki taraf hath badhata hy (jo har waqt us ky galy me latki rehti thi but kisi ko dikhai ni deti thi)...or maala ky 6 moti maala se aalag ho kar us ky hath ki muthi me aa jaty hain...

phir wo apna hath oper utthata hy or apni mutthi khol deta hy or maala ky wo 6 mooti ahista ahista hawa me utthny lagty hain hain or aahista aahista us portal ki taraf badhny lagty hain or portal ky bohat qareeb pohnch kar ruk jaty hain portal or un mootio ky bech bas 1fet ka hi distance tha phir 2 mooti us portal ky charo taraf ghomn lagty hain wo dono ik dosry ki opposite direction me ghoom rahy thy or har round ky sath un ki speed ab badhti jaa rhi thi ....or kuch hi seconds me waha portal ky ird gird bas 2 purple lights ghomti nazr arhi thin.........

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iN Upper world .Dragon Realm

"Viraj ki maala ky wo mooti jub us portal ky ird gird ghomny lagy thay to"....

Us waqt Dragon realm me Dragon king ZeRga apny Royal Palace me apny throne pe baitha tha or us ky samny wohi magical ball rakhi hoi thi
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jis me Zerga Apni dragon army ko daikh raha tha ky wo kesy Us Protections barrier ko thoodny my laagy howy thay or ye daikh noblesse ki halat kharab hoti jaa rhi thi or unko apni mout dragon's ki shakal my apny samny nazar arhi thi ...

ye situation ZeRga ko bohat maza de rahi thi or wo zoor zoor se hass raha tha or apny samny baithy kuch dragon ko bol raha tha deikha tum ny daikha ZeRga ki power ky samny koi nhi tikk sakta ...

wo dragon bhi us ki haan my haan milaty hain or onchy onchy naary lgany laag jaty hain ... king zerga is supreme...Our King is Great ...

or zirga hasny lagta hy ...Hahahahaha..... Hahahahaha..
ky achanak us ki hassi ruk gie thi wo magical ball bilkul black ho jati hy or phir ik dum se booom ik zoordar blast hota hy or wo magical ball phaat kar tukdy tykdy ho gie thi or ZeRga jo aankhy faddy us magical ball ko daikh raha tha ...us blast ki wajha ullat kar apny throne ki pichli side pe gir gya tha...

phir ZeRga jaldi se utthta hy or apna crown jo nechy gir gya tha usy utha ky apny sar pe rakhta hy or akad ky phir se apny throne pe baith jata hy or apny aap se baten karny lagta hy ...

ZeRga:- preshani se .....Ye ye kia hy .ohhh ye kesy howa ...ohhh shit mujhy kuch gad bad lagti hy ...mujy Rudin se bat karni ho gi......phir wo apny mind me Rudin se contact karny ki koshish karta hy .....but wo is me kamyaab nahi ho pata....or apna sar pakad ky chilaty howy bolta hy yee kia asa nhi ho sakta..... me rudin se contact keu nhi ho pa raha ..jub me Rudin se contact krny ki try karta hu to mera mind bilkul blank keu ho jata hy........

Zerga ky samny bethy dragons ki halat kharab ho chuki thi or wo fati aankho se kabhi Zerga ko daikhty to kabhi ik dosry ki taraf daikhty ....or apny maan me sooch rahy thay lagta hy ab humari shamat any wali hy ...

phir Zerga ki nazar samny baithy dragons pe jati hy jo monh kholy fatti ankho se zerga ko hi daikh rahy thy or ik dum se Zerga ko unsy sharmindgi mehsoos hoti hy ky me to dragons ka king hun or in kamjoor dragins ky samny bilkyl paglo wali harkaten kar raha hun ..

jesy hi us ky mind my ye bat ati hy to wo ghusse se un dragons ko galia de kar waha se bhaga deta hy..

or wo bhi khushi khushi waha se bhag jaty hain keu ky is me hi unka faida tha ...

phir un ky jany ky bad zerga apny throne se uthh kar preshani se idhr udhar tahlny lagta or usy kuch samjh ni arha tha ky ye kia howa hy .. mujhy ab kia karna chahye ..... phir wo dosri magicl ball mangwata hy but ye kia wo magicl ball to kuch kuch dikha hi ni rahi thi.......Agar us my kuch nazar arha tha to wo thi darkness bas andhereee ..gehraa kalaa andherraaa............

or ab ye daikh kar ZerGa ky mathy pe halka halka paseena phootny laga tha..........
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iN Lower World .Human Realm

jub wo dono mooti us Portal ki ird gird opposite directions me light ki speed se ghoomny lagy thay...

to baqi ky 4motti boht teezi se 4diffrenet Directions me chaly jaty hain............

Viraj ye sub daikh kar halki se smile karta hy..us ky bad wo khud pe lagi wo Restrictions khatm kar deta hy jo human form me rehny ki wajha se us ny khud pe laga rakhi thinn...

ab wo apna Aura release karny lagta hy ...uski body se boht heavey amount me energy nikal rahi thi jiska Clour blue tha. Us ki eyes bhi itni zyada glow kar rahi thin un me se nikal rahi blue light asy feel ho rhi thi jesy uski aankho se blue clour ki aag nikal rahi ho ...

(ye sub us blue clour ky mask ki wajha se tha . warna agar ye mask na hota to Viraj ka Aura Golden hota jis se golden clour or Us mala ki wajha se thodi purple clour ki energy hi niklti nazr ati .. is lea abhi Viraj Emperor ki warrior ky is blue mask sy pora pora faida uthany ky mode me tha) .

or wo apna sar hilta hy or ik lambi sans leta hy ......or khud se kehta ...Ab thoda Acha feel ho raha hy .. aaj ka din mera lucky day maloom hota hy jo mujhy itny kaam ki cheez mil gie.......(ye bat wo us blue mask ky bary my soch kr kehta hy)

phir wo us portal ko daikhty howy kehta hy ...To ab is portal se na to koi bahir aa sakta hy na andar jaa sakta hy ..... Or na is world my ab koi new portal bana kr aaa skta hy hmmm😏

or wapis wo newzealad ki taraf mudd kar daikhta hy. samny usy saaf nazar arha tha ky newzealand or un Noblesse ky oper bana hoaa protection barrier dragon's ky attack ki wajha se bohat tezi se carack hota jaa raha tha .. or kisi bhi waqat toot sakta tha..........

phir wo tezi se uddta howa Ozen ki taraf jany lagta hy .....

jise ko ab Ozen ny bhi dor se daikh lea tha ik Blue light jo bohat tezi se Ozen ki taraf arhi rhi or ye daikh kar Ozen ka monh khula reh gya tha wo thoda ghabrany bhi laga tha.... keu ky jub se us ny viraj ko pehli bar dekha tha tab se lay kar ab tak usy viraj me koi asi enrgy feel ni hoi thi....

Ozen khud se baten karty howy ....Baap re baap kia me koi khwab daikh raha hu ye mery master viraj hain kia? laag to asa hi raha hy .ab wo ankhe faad faad kar samny daikhney lagta hy me koi sapna daikh ra hu kia.

or ik dum aapny face pe ik thapad marta hy ...SssssEeee ahhhhhh ohhhhh maar gaya ..
or tezi se apna wohi gaal malny lagta hy ...keu ky us ny josh me boht zoor se khud ko thapad de maara tha .

haan aab yaqeen ho gya ye to master hi hain wo halki se smile karta hy ahhh mee ny kuch zyada hi zoor se thapad mar dea ....wo phir se apna gaall sehlany lagta hy ....or tab tak Viraj us ky pass pohnch chuka tha .....

Viraj :- Kia howa tumhara gaall keu laal howa pada hy ...

Ozen:- apni nazre churaty howy .....ik machar ny kaat lia tha😐

viraj:- or tum ny us bechary ko thapad mar dea ho ga na🤷🏻

Ozen kuch bolny ky lea monh kholta hy but phir sakhti se monh band kr leta or apny maan me sochta hy ... hmmm to is ka matlb master ny daikh lea tha😨

Viraj us ki Shoulder pe khada ho chuka tha ....

Viraj:- Ab chalo bhi kia saari umar yahi rehna hy ... jaldi se waha pohncho apni full speed se.....

Ozen:- yes master ..

or phir wo apni full power ko use karty howy samny ki taraf badhany lagta hy ....Viraj ky honto pe ik bohat ajeeb se smile thi jo RuDin ki taraf daikhty howy or geehri ho jati thi... or ab wo apna Aura boht heavy ammount me har taraf release karna start kardeta hy ..ye ik ajeeb sa ehsas tha jo marny walo ko zindgi ki umeed deta tha .... Mushkil me phasy howy logo ko umeed ki kiran dikhata tha tha .......

RuDin jo Rakiura island ky ik onchy pahad pe baitha bohat mazy se Noblesse ko harty howy daikh raha tha ...

achanak se uska dil ghabrany lagta hy ...usy asa mehsoos hota hy jesy koi bohat bada khunkhar creatures apna bada sa monh kholy us ki taraf badhta chala aaa raha hy jo usko zinda niggal jay ga ....

ab us pe ghabrahat taari hony lag jati hy ...or wo ik dum se utth khada hota hy or idhar udhar daikhny lagta hy but dor dor tak use kuch bhi asa nazar ni aata aata jis se usko koi khatra ho .....

but ye sala dil bhi ajeeb hy naa......Or dil to Rudin ky andar bhi tha..Rudin ka dil kuch zyada hi teez dhadakny laga tha kuch to gadbad thi jo laakh koshish karny ky baad bhi RuDin ki samjh my nahi arhi thi .

ik ajeeb se bechani or dar us ky dil my baith chuka tha or RuDin chahh kar bhi khud ko releax nahi kar paa raha tha ...........

RuDin apna Sar jhatak kr khud ko tasli deta hy ky...sub acha hy everything is fine........keu ky wo Dragon army ka genral tha is lea wo khud pe qaboo pany ki koshish kar raha tha.... phir Rudin idhar udhar ghoomny lagta hy ...or thodi dair baad phir se samny chal rahi fight daikhny lagta hy ...

Rudin ky pechy thoodi dor ik bady se pathar ky sath baitha howa ik saya jo bohat hi dehan se RuDin ko daikh raha tha or us ky power lavel ka hisab lagany ki koshish kar raha tha ...

wo bhi chouk kar idhr udhar daikhny lagty hy or phir wo hawa my hath hilata hy to us pathar ke pechy ik white portal banta or wo saya us portal me ghuss jata hy .
Ye or koi ni master SuniL hi tha ..... jo yaha RuDin ko daikhny aaya tha taky wo Rudin ki koi kamzoori dhoond saky .... jo ky pori koshish karny ky baad bhi master SuniL ko ni mali thi............Akhir Rudin Dragons ka General tha koi halwa thoda na tha???

or phir master suniL ko bhi ik unknow se power ka Ehsass howa tha. or ye Ehsass har guzarty pal ky sath badhata hi jaa raha tha is lea us ny Wapis jany ka failsa kia tha or waha se teleport ho kar chala gya tha.

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in WN Hotel . Room no.121

Knock.......Knock.......knock.....

koi bohat zoor zoor se Room.no.121bka darwaza peet raha tha ...... keu ky andar Akash sooya howa tha ... jo pichli rat Vilaayti daru pee kar Tunnn ho kar Room me aya tha or asa soya tha ky pora din bhi guzar gya tha or phir se sham ho chuki thi but us ki neend nahi khuli thi.. .......

shoor ki awaz sunn kar Room No 122 ka door open hota hy or ik ladki bahir aati hy or dekhti hy koi ladka room no 121 ka door bohat zoor zoor se peet raha tha ......... to wo bolti hy ...

Ladki:- hey mr..kon ho tum or ye subha subha kia Udhaam macha rakha hy tum ny ...

wo ladka wapis mudta hy or us ka monh khuly ka khula reh jata hy us ky pechy room no 122 ky door my ik ladki khadi hoi thi .. blue jens pe us ny ik white t-shirt pehni howi thi us ky black hair jo halky halky golden bhi thay ponytail style me bandh rakhy thay us ny jo us ki personality ho char chand laga rahy thay....

wo ladka usy daikh kar kuch bol ni pata or apny maan my hi sapnay daikhny lagta hy .....
Oh god itni haseen ladki me ny apni life me aaj tak ni dekhi ....kash is se meri shadi ho jay choti se family ho zyada ni 15.....20 bachy hon or bas meeri ye haseen bwwi ....subha subha mujhy kiss kar ky good morning bolty howy uthaya kary ......

is se pehly ky wo khuli aankho se zyada lamby sapny daikhta wo ladki apna hath aagy badha kar us ki ankho ky samny ik Chukttki bajaty howy...

O hello mr. kaha gum ho gy my ne kuch pocha hy ...

wo ladka haklaty howy mee..me. mera naam rocky hy ..

wo ladki:- ......to tum yaha kia kar rahy ho kia ye tumhara room hy?

Rocky:- han ni ni wo mera matlb ye room mera ni hy mery dost ka hy .. wesy aap ka kia naam hy miss?

Wo ladki :- mera naam Elina hy .

Rocky:- dant nikalty howy wow boht sundar naam hy aap ka bilkul aap ki tarha ...

Elina:- thank you .or agar ye ap ky dost ka room hy to Reception se deplicate key le lo or door open kar lo ... asy door peetna very bad manners......its clear?

Rocky:- jaldi se ...Oh yes.. yes Yes .. emergency ki chalty mujhy is ka khyal hi ni aya ....

Elina:- kesi emergency?

Rocky:- ary aap kis dunya me rehti ho ap ko ni malom. Qayanat agie hy qayamat.

Elina:- thoda preshan hoty howy ..keu asa kia ho gya..

Rocky:- Ary 3rd world war start ho chuki hy.

Elina:- Shock..kia...........

tabhi ik awaz aati hy .. hey you idiot ghanta ho gya my ny tum ko is kaam se bheja tha ...or tum abbi tak yahi khady ho mujhy yehi umeed thi tum sy ..

ye or koi ni Mr.jack tha jo unki taraf arha tha ...

Rocky ko to bas baton ka bahana chahye tha wo to chahta tha ky pora din Elina ky sath hi chipka rahy ...is lea wo Elina ko baton my lgay howy thay ..or jis kam ky lea mr.jack ny usy bheja tha wo kam kab ka usy bhool chuka tha ....or ab usy jack ki awaz sunai di thi to us ny dil hi dil my 400 galia de thi 200 jack ko or 200 Elina ko .

(1st..jack ny bhi abhi aana tha?
(2nd.Elina ny bhi abhi samny ana tha kisi or waqt samny aati na jub rocky free hota...?
Bcz its Logic of Rocky ...apun kabhi galat ni ho sakta ..galti hamesha dosry ki hoti hy ....)

Mr.Jack qareeb aa chuka tha or ua ny rocky ko ghoor ke dekha jesy bol raha ho tu akely me mil phir btata hu tujhy ..or phir Elina ki taraf daikhty howy.

Mr.Jack:-Hello miss Elina ab kesi tbeat hy aap ki.. ab kesa feel kar rhi hain...

Elina jo abhi tak world war ka sunn kr shock thi ...dhemi awaz me bolti hy ..

Elina:- im feeling good now .... Master ne meri injuries heal kar di thi ... but ye mr.rocky kia keh rahy hain world war start ho gie .

Mr.jack ka maan kar raha tha ky wo apna sar peet lay ...ky us ny rocky ko yaha bhej kr galti ki thi ...wo ghusy se rocky ko daikhty howy bolta hy...

Mr.jack :- mujhy maloom tha idiot tum key le kar nahi aay thay or door ky sath wrestling kar rahy ho gey is lea mujhy bhi yaha aana pada tumko sath laana ka faida kia howa😤

Or rocky kuch nhi bolta wo to asay behave kar raha tha jesy us ny un dono ki baten suni hi na ho ...keu ky wo samjh chuka tha ky yaha se nikalny my hi uski bhalai hy ...or ahista ahista seeti bajaty ho idhar udhar daikhty howy..... waha se wapis jany lagta hy jesy wo in dono ko janta hi na ho ...

Mr.jack khamoshi se rocky ko jaty howy daikhta rehta hy .. phir wo Elina se bolta hy .... jo rocky ki harkat daikh kar hans rahi thi...

Mr.jack:- yaha koi world war nhi ho rhi .rocky mera chota bhai hy zaroor is ny koi bakwas hi ki ho gi.

Elina:- oh acha to wo ap ka bhai hy... phir Elina Jack ki ankho my daikhty howy .. but wo bol raha tha energency hy koi... to mujhy bhi btaen konsi emergency hy?

Mr.Jack:- thoda ghabraty howy . asa kuch bhi ni hy miss.Elina.
(Keu ky master SuniL ny Nawzealand jaty waqt jack ko bola tha ky Elina ko kuch na btaya jay keu ky abhi wo physically fitt ni thi battlefield me jany k lea)

Mr.jsck:- Excuse me mujhy thoda kam hy mr.viraj se . phir bat hogi ap se 😊

Elina:- oh to ye mr.viraj ka room hy mujhy pata hi ni tha..

Mr.Jack:- yes ....ok phir bat hogi ..it bol kar mr.jack apni jeb se key nikalta hy or door open kar ky andar chala jata hy ......

Elina ko mr.jack ka behavior thoda ajeeb laga tha jesy wo kuch chupa raha ho ..Elina aagy badhti hy or Room no.121 ka door thoda sa opan karti hy or andr se arhi awaz Sunn'ny ki koshish karby lagti hy ...

Mr.jack:- Ary utth jao Aakash bhai ...Mr.viraj kaha hain

Aakash:- neend me hi Jao jao zalim Dunya walo tum mujhy mari mehbooba se juda ni kar pao gy ...
itna bol kar wo ik pillo ko zoor se hug kar leta hy ...me jaan tum ghabrao nahi my kahi nahi jany du ga tumko ...

Mr.jack apny maan me sochta hy ...lagta hy abhi tak chadgi hoi hy isko Raat ko pori bottle gatak gya or dakar bhi ni li ..or ab hal dekho ...

phir wo kuch soch kar side table pe rakhy jug se thoda pani leta hy or aakash pe phainkta hy ...

Aakash:- zoor se Chilaty howy naaaahi meri Rose me tumko doobny nahi du ga or bed par asy hath pair marny lagta hy jesy wo swimming kar raha ho ...

Mr.jack apna sar pakad kr bath jata hy ..ab kia karu Rat ko to itni badi badi haank raha tha hum india me desi daru pety hain...desi daru ky samny ye Vilaayti daru kia cheez hy .....or ab halat dekho.

phir wo Aakash ko utthata hy ja kr sedha bath-tub me phaink deta hy or jesy hi pani aakash ki naak my ghusta hy to sara nasha gayab ho jata hy or usky 14 tabaq roshan ho jaty hain or wo jhaat se bath tub bahir niklta hy or lambi lambi sansy leny lagta hy ....

Mr.Jack:- Smile krty howy ...
keu sahab ji hosh aaya ya thoda nasha baqi hy?

Aakash:- ik towel utthaty howy ap bal khushak karty howy ...or monh bnaty howy bolta hy .....bachy ki jaan lo gy kia ... itna mast sapna daikh raha tha my🙁

idr bahir Elina se apni hassi rokna mushkil ho raha tha kia ajooba hy ye banda...

Mr.jack:- Acha ye btao Mr.viraj kaha hy .un ka koi number hy ?

Aakash:- mujhy kia pata ni🤷🏻

Mr.jack:- Aakash ko thoda ghoor ky daikhta hy .

Aakaah:- mera matlb phone to 1 hi hy or wo to mery pas hi tha rat ko.
Or viraj bhai to ghomny phirny cahly gaye thay rat ko. abhi tak wo wapis ni ayy kia?

Mr.jack :-Aakash ko asy dekhta hy jesy us ki aqal pe matam karny ka irada rakhta Ho.

Mr.Jack:- O aqal ki Dukan ...agar Mr.viraj yaha hota to my idr zaleel ho raha hota tumhy hosh my lany ky lea...

Aakash:- Ary jack bhai Chill karo kia aag laag gie hy .... Aaa jay gy viraj bhai.

Mr.jack :- Aag hi samjh lo mujhy kuch info deni rhi or Viraj se request krni thi .

Aakash:- To mujy bata to jub viraj bhai aay gy to my bta du ga unko .

Mr.Jack sar se paun tak aakash ko daikhty howy....Apny maan me sochta hy .... jub tak viraj aay ga tab tak pe phir se pee kr tunn ho chuka ho ga.

Mr.jack:- apna cell phone pe ik clip Aakash ko dikhaty howy ...ye daikho Dragons ka Attack howa hy newzeland pe seenkro noblesse ki death ho chuki hy or hazaro Civilians ki death ho chuki hy ...abhi Exact numbers ni malom ky kitny loog maar chuky hain...

or 5 S.Rank wizard bhi fight join kar chuky hai. me is lea aaya tha ky agar mr.viraj bhi humara sath den to humri position thodi or mazboot ho jay gi ..keu ky viraj 23 sal ki age me hi ik AA.Rank Wizard ban chuka hy.
or itni se age me koi asy hi AA.Rank wizard ni ban jata zroor Un ky pas kuch special Abilities hon gi .....

((idr Elina Dragons attack ka sunn ky hi Shock thi or 5 S rank wizard choti moti battle's join nahi kia karty thay ...Or oper se Viraj jo 23 sal ki age my hi AA Rank Achieve kar chuka tha or wo bhi Wizard type..... ))

idr aakash to bas monh kholy dragon's ko daikh raha tha .... usy jhaat birabar bhi khabar ni thi ky jack kia bol raha....

or soch raha tha.. Bc abb newzealand kesy jaon waha bina ticket ky dragons ki real movies dekhny ko mil rahi hy ..... dragons real my hoty hain...
dekho kitna bada dragon hy .ohh fuck ye to bilkul asli awali aag nikal rahi is ky monh se .....or loogo ko daikho Selfi bana rahy .... apni bhi to ik aadh selfi honi chahye na Dragons ky sath🤔 ..

Mr.jack jo ky ab bilkul chup ho chuka tha usy smjh aagie thi ky us ny jo kuch bola hy Aakash ki khopdi ky oper sy guzar gya hy us ny kuch bhi ni suna..

kafi dair kamoshi ky ky aakash mr.jack ko daikhta hy .

Aakash :- ary kia howa jack bhai chup keu ho..yar qasam se me to dar hi gya dragons ko daikh kar.

Mr.jack:- kuch boly bina apna phone aakash se le leta or wapis jany lgta hy ....boht ghatya joke tha...

Aakash :- jack bhai tum to naraz hi ho gy yar ..suno to please jack bhai mujyh real me dragon daikhna hy please😥
Mr.jack:-ye koi khail tamasha chal rha hy..koi cricket ka match chal raha jo tum ny stadium my baith ky daikhna?

Aakash:- roti hoi shakl bana kar ...please jack bhai ..😥

Mr.jack:- bas bas itni ghatya acting karny ki koi zrorat ni ... Screen pe live daikhna hy to chalo mery ghar ...warna newzealand jany ka sochna bhi mat ..

Aakash:- ary jack bhai keu nhi ...bilkul chalo ga balky doodty howy chalo ga ap ky ghar .screen pe live ye to mast idea hy.. ... newzealand jany ki zrorat kia hy ...my koi pagal thori hun itny pesy waste hon gy or agar kise dragon ny mujhy pakad lia to raam naam sattyee hi ho jay ga...Ab Bath to my le hi chuka hun bs kapdy change kar lu phir chalty hain😁

Mr.jack..Monh kholny bs Aakash ko daikhy ja raha tha ....ye insan hy ya girget kitni jaldi rang badalta hy. abi newzealand jany ky lea maary jaa raha tha or ab keh raha hy k newzealand jaa kar marna hy kia???

Mr.jack:- ok chalo jaldi karo my bahir wait krta hu..or jack bahir jany lagta hy...

or jesy hi door open kar ky bahir niklta hy ....Samny Elina khadi usy ghoor rhi thi ....

Jack apny maan my bolta hy lagta hy Miss Elina ne sub kuch sunn lia hy ..... Rocky manhoos kahi kay kaha phasa dia tum ny....

Tabhi Aakash room se bahir ata hy or pehly nazar Elina pe padti or us ny monh se niklta bhaaabhiiiiiiiiii...

Jack or elina mud kr ik sath Aakash ko daikhty ....or akash dil my bc har jagha ye zuban phisal keu jati hy sali ..or jaldi se bat bnnaty howy

Aakash:-smile karty howy .....wo Bhaabi ki call aagie thi...hal chal poch rhi thin ...hehehe apna mobile dukhaty howy......hi miss Elina kesi ho aap ........

Elina:- me thek hun ....phir wo jack ko daikhty howy bolti ....to chalen phir?

aakash kuch na samjahty howy jack ko daikhta hy jo murda si awaz my bolta hy ...han or phir bahir jany lagta hy or Elina bhi us ko follow karti hy ..

Akish ko kuch samjh ni aata ky ye kia chal raha hy ....phir wo bhi kandhy uchkata howa un ky pechy jany lagta hy .....mujhy kia my to bas dragon daikhny real waly🤷🏻

Thodi dair baad wo ik car me bethy Mr.jack ky ghar ja rahy thy ...Rocky car drive kar raha tha ....kafi dair driving ky baad wo loog jack kr ghar pohnch jaty hain ...or phir jack unko ik room ke ley kar aata hy jaha us ka laptop ik badi screen se connected tha or ....WN branch Newzealand se live Borascast me battleField me chal rahi dragons or Noblesse ki fight dikhai jaa rahi thi .....

(is Live broadcast ka link sirf noblesse ko hi dea gya tha..Civilian or baaqi sari public is bat se anjan thi ky waha ki current situation kia hy...but pory world ky noblesse Newzealand me chal rhi Dragons & Noblesse ki ye battle daikh paa rahy thay)).....

Elina or Aakash bhi waha rakhy sofas pe baith jaaty hain or samny lagi screen pr nazar aarhi fight ko daikhny lagty hain...

or Mr.hack screen pe nazar arhy S.Rank wizarad ky bary me aakash or Elina ko btany lagta hy or unko batata hy waha is waqt 5 S rank wizard moujood hain or phir bhi situation un ky control se bahir maloom padti hy ...

Aakash or Elina shocked thay ye sub daikh kar ky waha protection Barrier tootny wala tha or jis ky chalty sub noblesse redy ho rahy thay dragons ko rokny ky lea apni aakhri koshiah karny ky lea....

idr ye sub kuch ho raha tha itni Difficult Situation ... to dosri taraf rocky bas Elina ko hi daikhy jaa raha tha ..Uska bas nahi chal raha tha ky jack or aakash ko uttha kar room se bahir phaik dy ..keu ky un ky samny wo Elina pe Line marny ki himat ni kar sakta thw ....... .. Aaag lagy basti my Rocky miyaa gum apni masti may🤷🏻



to be continue.......
Bahut hi mast update tha bhai maja hi aa gaya. Aapke update me mujhe jo baat sbse jyada pasand hai wo hai comedy jo ki bahut mast wali hoti hai. Batao ye akash to such me bawla ho hai jise kisi chij ka kuch nahi pata bas apne ko dragon dekhna hai wo bhi asli wala. Aur Rocky to isase bhi ek kadam aage jise bas elina se baat karni hai. Aur in sub ke bich bechara jack fas gaya.
Waise ye akash ne Elina ko bhabhi kyu bola ? Aur kya viraj aisehi sare mission me bhaag lega apni identity bataye bina aise me to koi jaan hi nahi payega ki wo kitna powerful hai.
Aur ye lord kab aa rahe hai ? Kisne unke sath bagawat ki thi ? Aur kb unko saja milegi ? Aur ye Lord ne kyu mana kya wo portal todne se ? Bahut se swal hai dekhte hai kab sbke jawab milne suru hote hai.
 
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