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Hi friends I m new here, I hope main likhne ki jo koshish karne ja raha hu wo, aap sabko pasand aaye
Mujhe jada bhumika banani nahi aati toh sidha story pe chalte hai
Note- main story likhne main naya hu, so agar koi mistake ho toh plz turant bata de
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Tez raftar se chalti hui train main ek aadmi jiske bade bade baal aur dekhne se hi koi gunda mawali lag raha tha wo train k bathroom k pass aise baitha hua tha maano kisi se chup raha ho
Tabhi ek station pe gadi rukti hai aur wo aadmi jaldi se train se utar k station k bahar nikalne lagta hai, chalte chalte wo charo taraf aise dekh raha tha manao kisi se chupne ki koshish main ho
Par wo jaise hi station k bahar aata hai, use samne police ki gadi aur usi k pass kuch police wale dikhte hai,
Wo aadmi buri tarah pasine pasine ho jata hai
"Beta Mohan, yaha toh police ki line lagi hai, agar inke hath aaya toh jail k sath chori ka sara sona bhi hath se jayega"
Mohan naam ka wo aadmi buri tarah dar jata hai aur khud se hi baaten karne lagta hai,
Mohan ek 40 k karib ka aadmi tha, usko bus ek hi kaam aata hai chori aur thagi karna
Aur chori se jo paise aaye unhe kisi mast randi pe uda dena,
Yani rule tha mohan ki life ka
Na koi family na koi piyar ka chakkar,
Ek line main agar kahu toh
*Na Biwi Na Bachha, Na Baap Bada Na Maiyan,
The Whole Thing Is That, Ke Bhaiya Sabse Bada Rupaiya*
Yahi line hi mohan ki zindagi ka pura saar hai,
Chori aur thagi se paise banao aur phir kisi achi randi pe udha lo
Mohan ne eske alawa apne jeevan main kabhi kuch nahi kiya
Par es time station k bahar police ko dekh k mohan dar gaya tha
"Agar ye police yaha mere liye aayi hogi, toh mujhe inse bach k rehna hoga, warna jail k sath sath sara sona bhi hath se jayega"
Mohan jaldi se wapas station k andar ki taraf chal padta hai, par tabhi wo kisi se takra jata hai
Mohan- (gusse se) madarchod andha hai kiya
Aadmi- maaf kare bhaisahab..wo meri natak mandli aage nikal gayi hai, aur mujhe dair ho rahi hai...esi wajah se mera dhiyan aur kahi thi
Itna bol k wo aadmi jaldi se niche gire apne bag ko uthane lagta hai,
Takkar ki wajah se uske hath se uksa bag gir jata hai jismain uske kapde aur make-up ka samaan hota hai
Mohan- ye sab saman....?
Aadmi- ji wo main natak main sadhu ka role karta hu na toh usi k liye ye nakali munche aur baal aur sab kapde hai
Mohan bachpan se hi chori karta aa raha hai, jis karan wo kai bar roop badal k bhi chori kar chuka hai,
Aur aaj us aadmi k pass makeup aur sadhu k kapde dekh k uske man main ek plan aata hai
Wo dekhta hai ki wo aadmi apna saman utha k station pe bane bathroom ki taraf ja raha tha, mohan bhi chup k uske piche chal padta hai
Wo aadmi apna saman bathroom k bahar rakh k jaldi se bathroom k andar ghus jata hai, jise dekh k mohan man hi man hasne lagta hai
"Wahhh... Jay ho saitan ki... Sala aaj toh bina mehnat k hi kaam ban gaya"
Mohan jaldi se uska bag utha k wapas usi train pe aa jata hai aur jaldi se bathroom main ghus k apna roop badalne lagta hai
Abhi use 5 min hi hue honge ki tabhi train k bathroom pe koi knock karta hai
"Police...kholo jaldi"
Mohan tab tak puri tarah apna roop badal chuka tha, par ab bhi use dar lag raha tha,
Wo dhire se darwaja kholta hai
Police wala- are Maharaj aap maaf karna... Hum wo ek chor ko dhundh rahe thay
Mohan man hi man sukun ki sans leta hai, usne bahut si hindi filmon main dekhta tha ki sadhu kaise baat karte hai, wo waisa hi natak karta hai
"Kiya hua bacha, tumhare mathe ki lakiren bata rahi hai, tum kisi ko dhund rahe ho"
Police wala- Maharaj aap toh antaryami ho, ha Maharaj main ek chor ko dhund raha ho.. sala 50 lakh ki chori karke bhaaga hai
Mohan ye sun k man hi man gadgad ho jata hai
'wahhh... Jay ho saitan ki... Mujhe toh laga tha 20-25 lakh ka sona ho..par yaha toh 50 lakh ka hath lag gaya'
Police wala- kiya hua maharaj kaha kho gaye ?
Mohan- kuch nahi bacha... Paise toh samajik bandhanon ki sabse badi baidi hai, jise tod k manushya ko parmatma main man lagana chahiye
Mohan ko khud hi samajh nahi aa raha th ki wo kiya bol raha tha, usne toh bus jo filmo main dekha tha wahi dohra raha tha
Police wala- Maharaj aapki baat thik hai, par wo mohan sirf 50 lakh ki chori karke nahi bhaaga hai balki usne dukan k malik ka khoon bhi kiya hai
Khoon ki bat sunte hi mohan buri tarah uchal jata hai,
Mohan- kiya khoon ?
Police wala- aap itna q chauk rahe hai Maharaj
Mohan khud ko sambhalte hue
"Nahi nahi main soch raha tha ki ek chor khoon q karega ?"
Police wala- ye toh wo chor mohan hi bata sakta hai.. uske liye humne har bade station pe police lagwa di hai, jaldi hi wo police ki pakad main hoga, qki jis dukan ko usne luta hai aur jiska khoon usne kiya hai wo koi mamlu aadmi tha
Mohan- kon tha wo ?
Police wala- Maharaj wo es saal election main khada hone wala tha, aur logo ka kehna hai uska jitna tay tha, esliye ye baat kafi uper tak gayi hai.. ek do din main sayad use dekhte hi goli marne ka farman bhi aa jayega
Ye sunte hi mohan andar tak kaanp sa jata hai
Phir wo police wala mohan k pair chu k waha se chala jata hai, qki us bechare police wale ko kiya pata ki jise wo sadhu samajh raha hai wo wahi mohan hai
Mohan buri tarah dar jata hai, aur wo wahi bathroom k bhar baith jata hai
Train bhi ab chalni suru ho chuki thi, par mohan ab buri tarah fas chuka tha
"Ye khoon kaha se aa gaya, maine toh jab chori ki thi tab dukan puri tarah khali thi, phir ye khoon ka kiya mamla hai, kahi ye sab usi ka kiya hua toh nahi hai..ha ha ye sab jarur usi ghumnam aadmi ka hi kiya hua hoga... jisne mujhe kisi private number se phone karke chori karne k liye samay aur sari jankari di thi"
Mohan apna sar pakad k baith jata hai, qki ab wo buri tarah fas chuka tha
"Saala ye kaha fas gaya hu, ab toh jab tak ye file band nahi ho jati, chup k rehna hoga aur wo chori ka sona bhi bahar nahi nikal sakta"
Mohan wahi bathroom k pass baitha baitha na jane kiya kiya sochta rehta hai aur khud ko gaaliya dene lagta hai, ki bina soche samjhe lalach main aake usne ek ghumnam aadmi pe barosha q kar liya
Tabhi train phir se ek chote se station pe rukti hai aur 2 jawan ladke train main sawar hote hai,
Wo dono bhi wahi bathroom k pass mohan k samne hi baith jate hai
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Main pehli bar kuch likhne ki try kar raha hu, koshish karunga aap sabhi ko pasand aaye
Sath hi agar mujhse koi mistake ho toh plz mujhe bata de main use right kar dunga
Ok by
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Hi friends I m new here, I hope main likhne ki jo koshish karne ja raha hu wo, aap sabko pasand aaye
Mujhe jada bhumika banani nahi aati toh sidha story pe chalte hai
Note- main story likhne main naya hu, so agar koi mistake ho toh plz turant bata de
::
Tez raftar se chalti hui train main ek aadmi jiske bade bade baal aur dekhne se hi koi gunda mawali lag raha tha wo train k bathroom k pass aise baitha hua tha maano kisi se chup raha ho
Tabhi ek station pe gadi rukti hai aur wo aadmi jaldi se train se utar k station k bahar nikalne lagta hai, chalte chalte wo charo taraf aise dekh raha tha manao kisi se chupne ki koshish main ho
Par wo jaise hi station k bahar aata hai, use samne police ki gadi aur usi k pass kuch police wale dikhte hai,
Wo aadmi buri tarah pasine pasine ho jata hai
"Beta Mohan, yaha toh police ki line lagi hai, agar inke hath aaya toh jail k sath chori ka sara sona bhi hath se jayega"
Mohan naam ka wo aadmi buri tarah dar jata hai aur khud se hi baaten karne lagta hai,
Mohan ek 40 k karib ka aadmi tha, usko bus ek hi kaam aata hai chori aur thagi karna
Aur chori se jo paise aaye unhe kisi mast randi pe uda dena,
Yani rule tha mohan ki life ka
Na koi family na koi piyar ka chakkar,
Ek line main agar kahu toh
*Na Biwi Na Bachha, Na Baap Bada Na Maiyan,
The Whole Thing Is That, Ke Bhaiya Sabse Bada Rupaiya*
Yahi line hi mohan ki zindagi ka pura saar hai,
Chori aur thagi se paise banao aur phir kisi achi randi pe udha lo
Mohan ne eske alawa apne jeevan main kabhi kuch nahi kiya
Par es time station k bahar police ko dekh k mohan dar gaya tha
"Agar ye police yaha mere liye aayi hogi, toh mujhe inse bach k rehna hoga, warna jail k sath sath sara sona bhi hath se jayega"
Mohan jaldi se wapas station k andar ki taraf chal padta hai, par tabhi wo kisi se takra jata hai
Mohan- (gusse se) madarchod andha hai kiya
Aadmi- maaf kare bhaisahab..wo meri natak mandli aage nikal gayi hai, aur mujhe dair ho rahi hai...esi wajah se mera dhiyan aur kahi thi
Itna bol k wo aadmi jaldi se niche gire apne bag ko uthane lagta hai,
Takkar ki wajah se uske hath se uksa bag gir jata hai jismain uske kapde aur make-up ka samaan hota hai
Mohan- ye sab saman....?
Aadmi- ji wo main natak main sadhu ka role karta hu na toh usi k liye ye nakali munche aur baal aur sab kapde hai
Mohan bachpan se hi chori karta aa raha hai, jis karan wo kai bar roop badal k bhi chori kar chuka hai,
Aur aaj us aadmi k pass makeup aur sadhu k kapde dekh k uske man main ek plan aata hai
Wo dekhta hai ki wo aadmi apna saman utha k station pe bane bathroom ki taraf ja raha tha, mohan bhi chup k uske piche chal padta hai
Wo aadmi apna saman bathroom k bahar rakh k jaldi se bathroom k andar ghus jata hai, jise dekh k mohan man hi man hasne lagta hai
"Wahhh... Jay ho saitan ki... Sala aaj toh bina mehnat k hi kaam ban gaya"
Mohan jaldi se uska bag utha k wapas usi train pe aa jata hai aur jaldi se bathroom main ghus k apna roop badalne lagta hai
Abhi use 5 min hi hue honge ki tabhi train k bathroom pe koi knock karta hai
"Police...kholo jaldi"
Mohan tab tak puri tarah apna roop badal chuka tha, par ab bhi use dar lag raha tha,
Wo dhire se darwaja kholta hai
Police wala- are Maharaj aap maaf karna... Hum wo ek chor ko dhundh rahe thay
Mohan man hi man sukun ki sans leta hai, usne bahut si hindi filmon main dekhta tha ki sadhu kaise baat karte hai, wo waisa hi natak karta hai
"Kiya hua bacha, tumhare mathe ki lakiren bata rahi hai, tum kisi ko dhund rahe ho"
Police wala- Maharaj aap toh antaryami ho, ha Maharaj main ek chor ko dhund raha ho.. sala 50 lakh ki chori karke bhaaga hai
Mohan ye sun k man hi man gadgad ho jata hai
'wahhh... Jay ho saitan ki... Mujhe toh laga tha 20-25 lakh ka sona ho..par yaha toh 50 lakh ka hath lag gaya'
Police wala- kiya hua maharaj kaha kho gaye ?
Mohan- kuch nahi bacha... Paise toh samajik bandhanon ki sabse badi baidi hai, jise tod k manushya ko parmatma main man lagana chahiye
Mohan ko khud hi samajh nahi aa raha th ki wo kiya bol raha tha, usne toh bus jo filmo main dekha tha wahi dohra raha tha
Police wala- Maharaj aapki baat thik hai, par wo mohan sirf 50 lakh ki chori karke nahi bhaaga hai balki usne dukan k malik ka khoon bhi kiya hai
Khoon ki bat sunte hi mohan buri tarah uchal jata hai,
Mohan- kiya khoon ?
Police wala- aap itna q chauk rahe hai Maharaj
Mohan khud ko sambhalte hue
"Nahi nahi main soch raha tha ki ek chor khoon q karega ?"
Police wala- ye toh wo chor mohan hi bata sakta hai.. uske liye humne har bade station pe police lagwa di hai, jaldi hi wo police ki pakad main hoga, qki jis dukan ko usne luta hai aur jiska khoon usne kiya hai wo koi mamlu aadmi tha
Mohan- kon tha wo ?
Police wala- Maharaj wo es saal election main khada hone wala tha, aur logo ka kehna hai uska jitna tay tha, esliye ye baat kafi uper tak gayi hai.. ek do din main sayad use dekhte hi goli marne ka farman bhi aa jayega
Ye sunte hi mohan andar tak kaanp sa jata hai
Phir wo police wala mohan k pair chu k waha se chala jata hai, qki us bechare police wale ko kiya pata ki jise wo sadhu samajh raha hai wo wahi mohan hai
Mohan buri tarah dar jata hai, aur wo wahi bathroom k bhar baith jata hai
Train bhi ab chalni suru ho chuki thi, par mohan ab buri tarah fas chuka tha
"Ye khoon kaha se aa gaya, maine toh jab chori ki thi tab dukan puri tarah khali thi, phir ye khoon ka kiya mamla hai, kahi ye sab usi ka kiya hua toh nahi hai..ha ha ye sab jarur usi ghumnam aadmi ka hi kiya hua hoga... jisne mujhe kisi private number se phone karke chori karne k liye samay aur sari jankari di thi"
Mohan apna sar pakad k baith jata hai, qki ab wo buri tarah fas chuka tha
"Saala ye kaha fas gaya hu, ab toh jab tak ye file band nahi ho jati, chup k rehna hoga aur wo chori ka sona bhi bahar nahi nikal sakta"
Mohan wahi bathroom k pass baitha baitha na jane kiya kiya sochta rehta hai aur khud ko gaaliya dene lagta hai, ki bina soche samjhe lalach main aake usne ek ghumnam aadmi pe barosha q kar liya
Tabhi train phir se ek chote se station pe rukti hai aur 2 jawan ladke train main sawar hote hai,
Wo dono bhi wahi bathroom k pass mohan k samne hi baith jate hai
:::
Main pehli bar kuch likhne ki try kar raha hu, koshish karunga aap sabhi ko pasand aaye
Sath hi agar mujhse koi mistake ho toh plz mujhe bata de main use right kar dunga
Ok by
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