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Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

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Chapter 4 - Frozen Romance


Update 2



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Word Count: 4320
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Subah subah Sakshi Aksh se milne Jail me agayi thi, wo jakar Aksh ke cell me dekhti he to Aksh lete hue chatt ko ek takk dekhe ja raha tha. Darwaza khulne ki awaz se Aksh us taraf dekhta he to waha Sakshi ko mojud dekh wo uthkar beth jata he, or apna muh us se fer leta he. Sakshi akar Aksh ke bagal me beth gayi, uske chehre ki muskurahat bata rahi thi ke uski zindagi me Aksh ka hona na hona kitna mayne rakhta he.

Sakshi: itni subah subah kyu uth gaya Aksh tu?
Wo Aksh ka chehra apni taraf karte hue puchti he. Ek pal ko to Aksh uspar bahot gussa ho raha tha, lekin jese hi usne Sakshi ke chehre par wo khushi, wo muskurahat dekhi, tabb uske muh se ek shabd bhi nahi nikal paya. Usne bass Sakshi se apni nazre fer li.

Sakshi: dekha.... Me janti thi tu mujhse gussa nahi reh payega.... Kal to bass mujhe darane ke liye gussa kar raha tha na? Tujhe kya laga me tujhse darr jaungi? Huhhh.... Khayali pulav hi pakate rehna tu..... Bavlat kuthla (pagal kahi ka)....
Wo Aksh ke sar me halke se marte hue kehti he. Lekin Aksh ab bhi koi response nahi deta, Darasal raat se hi Aksh ki tabiyat kuch thik nahi thi, use na hi kuch bolne ma mann kar raha tha or na hi kuch karne ka. Sakshi ne kuch kehne ke liye Aksh ke haath par apna haath rakha to usne paya ke Aksh ka haath kafi garam ho chuka he. Sakshi ne jab Aksh ke mathe ko chu kar dekha to use pata chala ke Aksh ko tez bukhar he.

Sakshi: Aksh.... Tujhe.... Tujhe kafi tez bukhar aya he..... Tune Jailer se kaha nahi is bare me?
Wo Aksh ke samne bethkar uska chehra apne haatho me thamkar kehti he. Lekin Aksh bina us se nazre milaye apne hatho se Sakshi ke haath alag kar deta he. Jese hi Sakshi Medical Department me call kar ke Aksh ki khabar pahochne wali hoti he ke tabhi wah Anant chay ka cup lekar waha agaya. Anant Sakshi ke yaha hone ki ummid nahi kar raha tha.

Sakshi: Good Morning Sir.....
Anant: Sakshi tum yaha?
Sakshi: yes sir wo me.....
Anant: Sakshi tumhe pehle Mujhe batana chahiye tha ke tum yaha arahi ho....
Wo Sakht lehze me Sakshi se kehta he.
Sakshi: I'm sorry sir.....
Wo apna sar jhuka kar Anant se mafi mang leti he.

Aksh ne Anant ke haath me chay ki pyali dekh li, or usne Anant ke samne khade hokar Anant ke haath se chay le li, lekin jese hi Aksh chay ki chuski lene ke liye badha, to wo ruk gaya or muskurate hue Anant ki taraf dekhte hue wo chay Anant ke hi chehre par fek di jis se Anant ka chehra jalne laga. Sakshi jaldi se Anant ke chehre par pani maar kar gusse me Aksh ko dekh rahi thi. Lekin Aksh ko ye sab dekh kar bahot sukoon mil raha tha, isliye wo bass Anant ko ek takk dekhe hass raha tha.

Sakshi: Aksh.... Ye tu kya kar raha he?
Wo gusse me Aksh ke samne khadi ho gayi, lekin piche se Anant use rok deta he.
Anant: Sakshi.... Koi baat nahi, it's okay.....
Sakshi: but sir.....
Anant: Sakshi..... I think right now you should be in the office.....
Wo Sakshi ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he. Fir Sakshi palat kar ek baar Aksh ko dekhti he or waha se nikal jati he. Sakshi ke jane ke baad Anant Aksh ke nazdeek akar ruk gaya.

Anant: yaar tumne to chay barbad kar di.... Koi baat nahi, ek or cup le kat ata hu....
Wo shaitani hasi ke saath Aksh ki aakho me dekhte hue kehta he. Or kisi se kehkar ek chay ka cup mangwa kar firse Aksh ki halat kharab karne lagta he. Kareeb ek ghante takk Anant Aksh ko torcher kar raha tha, Aksh ke andar bhi itni takat nahi thi ke wo Anant se ladd sake. Isliye wo bass Anant ka har humla sahe ja raha tha.

Thodi der baad waha Doctor bhi agaya, or usne Aksh ko Hospital me admit karne ke liye keh diya. Kyu ke uska bukhar kafi badh chuka tha. Aksh ko hatkadi pehna kar high Security me nazdeek ke Hospital me le jaya jata he, jaha uska ilaj hona tha.

Berehaal, kuch isi tarah din nikal raha tha, waha Sakshi din bhar apne kamo me lagi hui thi, or sham ko jab wo ghar jane ke liye nikli, to use Ashna (Kriti) se milkar ana thik laga, isliye wo pehle Ashna ke ghar chali gayi. Ashna bhi use dekh kar kafi khush lagg rahi thi. Lekin Sakshi ne dekha ke uski aakhe kafi laal ho gayi he, or wo kuch nashe me lagg rahi he.

Sakshi: Ashna, tumhari aakhe.... Kahi tum kisi tarah ka nasha to nahi kar rahi ho?
Wo andar akar Ashna ki bahe pakad kar kehti he. Uski baat par Ashna bass apna sar jhuka leti he, jis se Sakshi ko yakeen ho jata he ke Ashna nasha kar rahi he. Lekin jab Sakshi ki nazar samne pade table par gayi to usne paya ke waha white powder ki strips bani hui thi, Sakshi waha ja kar us powder ko ungli par lekar smell karti he to use pata lagta he ke ye to Drugs he.
Sakshi: Ashna tum pagal ho? Tum Ye sab kya kar rahi ho?
Ashna: or me kya karu Sakshi? Akela pann to waise hi mujhe maar dega....
Wo chillate hue Sakshi se kehti he.
Sakshi: ye tum kya keh rahi ho Ashna... Aise Drugs ka sahara lekar kabtak apna akela pann dur karogi? Kuch palo ke liye?
Ashna: kuch palo ke liye hi sahi, lekin ye mera akela pann to dur karta hi hena?
Sakshi: tum.... Tum pagal ho gayi ho.... Ashna tumhare parents ne kabhi ye nahi chaha hoga, ke unki beti aise kadam uthane lage....
Ashna: Sakshi me sach keh rahi hu, me chah kar bhi apne aap ko rok nahi pati... Koi nahi he jo mere saath baat kar sake, mere saath waqt guzar sake.....
Wo Sakshi ko gale lagakar rote hue kehti he. Sakshi bhi samajh jati he ke isme galati Ashna ki nahi he. Kuch der baad Sakshi ne use chup kar ke pani pila diya.
Sakshi: okay listen..... kal Saturday and Sunday mera office me off hota he.... To hum 2 din kahi ghumne jate he.....
Ashna: kya? Ghumne... Lekin kaha?
Sakshi: tum kabhi Mumbai gayi ho?
Ashna: Mumbai? Nahi me kabhi nahi gayi waha....
Sakshi: okay, so hum Mumbai jayenge. Me tumhe puri Mumbai ghumaungi.. and I'm sure you will Love Mumbai....
Ashna: okay....

Fir un dono ka Mumbai jane ka plan tay ho jata he. Sakshi kafi der takk waha bethi rahi, or wahi Ashna ke saath dinner kar ke apne ghar chali ayi.

Agli subah Sakshi Ashna lo lekar Mumbai jane ke liye nikal gayi, waise to wo Aksh ko aise 2 din akela chhod kar kahi nahi jana chahti thi, lekin usne is waqt Ashna ki halat ko zyada ehmiyat di. Is Mumbai ki trip par dono kafi ghul mil chuke the. Saks bhi bahot khush thi, kyu ke itne waqt baad wo Mumbai ayi thi, uska kafi mann tha apne purane ghar ko dekhne ka, lekin usne apna mann maar diya.

Khair, in 2 dino me Sakshi kafi refresh ho gayi thi, lekin dusri taraf Anant to bass Aksh ka haal batt se battar karne me laga tha. Or ab to Sakshi yaha nahi thi, to use zyada moka mil raha tha Aksh ko torcher karne ka.

Wednesday ke din Aksh ki Court me pehli Hearing thi, Sakshi bhi Sunday ko wapis laut ayi thi. Sakshi ne Anant ko kafi minnate ki, tabb ja kar Anant use bhi Court me ane ke liye maan gaya.

Tuesday ki subah Jail ke bahar kadi security me kuch gadiya khadi thi, Sakshi ye sab dekh kar kafi darr gayi thi.

Sakshi: sir.... Ye sab.... Itni security kis liye?
Anant: Sakshi ye sab Aksh ke liye hi he.... Tum janti ho na pichli baar Aksh band cell se bhag nikal tha, or is baar agar Aksh ne ye galati kar di to ye uske liye hi janleva ho sakta he.... Tum samajh rahi ho na?
Wo Sakshi ko Court ke orders ka darr dikhate hue kehta he. Ab Sakshi bhi wo sab soch kar chup ho jati he.
Anant: chinta matt karo Sakshi, agli Hearing me Aksh bilkul azad ho jayega.... Fir tum khushi khushi apni zindagi uske saath bita sakogi.....
Wo Sakshi ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kehta he.
Anant: okay, me Aksh ko lekar ata hu.....
Sakshi: sir please me Aksh ko lekar aau?
Anant: Sakshi tum.....
Sakshi: sir please....
Anant: okay....
Fir Sakshi kuch Police walo ke saath Aksh ki cell takk pahoch jati he. Sakshi door open kar ke andar agayi or akar Aksh ke dono haath apne hatho me tham liye.
Sakshi: Aksh.... Dekh tu darna matt. Anant sir ne tujhpar lage sare ilzam jhute he sabit karne ke liye sare saboot ikhatta kar liye he.... Next Hearing me tujhpar koi bhi arop nahi hoga... You Will Be Free
Wo muskurate hue Aksh se kehti he. Lekin ye sunkar pata nahi kyu Aksh ko Ghabrahat hone lagi, waise to Aksh akhri baar yaha se nikalne ki koshish karne wala tha. Lekin wo janta tha ke agar usne bhagne ki koshish ki to wo zinda nahi bachega. Or usme Anant ne Sakshi ko bhi dhoke me rakha tha.

Aksh (mann me): Anant ne Sakshi ko andhere me rakha he? Wo nahi janti ke mere saath kya hone wala he.... Kya karu? Use sab sach batau?

Jabtak Aksh kuch soch raha tha or tabhi usne Sakshi ko kuch kehne ka mann bana liya, lekin usi waqt door par Anant ajata he.
Anant: Sakshi..... We are getting late.
Uske yaha ane se Aksh ko kuch bolne ka moka nahi milta. Uske baad Aksh ko charo taraf se Police gher kar Van me bitha deti he. Waha kul mila kar 4 gadiya thi, sabse aage Police ki 2 Jeep, uske baad bich me Aksh ko bitayi hui Van or piche Anant ki car, jisme Anant, Sakshi or Sana jane wale the.

Court me nikalne se pehle Anant waha rehkar kuch paperwork kar raha tha, Sana or Sakshi Security sunishchit kar rahi thi, lekin tabhi Anant ko apni Biwi ka call agaya. Anant ne 2-3 bar call reject kar di, lekin firse call ane par wo samajh gaya ke uski biwi ko zarur koi important baat karni hogi, isliye Anant ne call pick kar li.

A. Biwi: Anant please tum jaldi se Hospital ajao....
Anant: Hospital.... Kya hua? Or Tumhari awaz....
A. Biwi: Anant Rudra (Anant ka beta) ka Accident ho gaya he.... Me.... Me... Use Hospital lekar ayi hu. Tum jaldi ajao.....
Wo rote hue Anant se kehti he. Ab ye baat sunkar Anant ke pasine chutt gaye.
Anant: kya? Tum.... Tum Chinta matt karo.... Me bass kuch der me waha ajaunga....
Wo jaldi se call cut kar deta he or waha se nikalne lagta he. Use dekh kar Sana waha ajati he.

Sana: sir.... Kya hua? Aap itne pareshan kyu ho?
Anant: Sana.... Rudra ka accident ho gaya he... Wo is waqt Hospital me he to me wahi ja raha hu....
Sana: kya?
Anant: ha, tum please yaha sabkuch samjhal lena... Or ha Sakshi ko Kuch bhi kar ke Court ke andar matt ane dena, use kisi bahane se bhej dena....
Wo Van ki chabiya Sana ke haath me dete hue kehta he.
Sana: Okay sir.... Aap chinta na kare.....
Fir Anant tezi se Hospital ki taraf car dauda deta he.

Sakshi: kya hua? Sir kaha chale gaye?
Wo Sana ke samne akar puchti he.
Sana: Darasal unke bete ka Accident ho gaya he, to wo is Hospital me gaye he... Khair, chalo me apni car lekar ati hu....
Sakshi: Okay....

Uske baad sari gadiya ek ke baad ek Jail se bahar nikal jati he. Kuch duri par jate hi Sakshi apne Mobile me kisi ko Message kar rahi hoti he. Thodi der baad wo sab ek khule raste par pahoch gaye. Sabkuch bilkul Normal chal raha tha. Lekin tabhi ek chaurahe se Truck akar Aksh jis Van me betha tha use thokar maar deta he. Darasal wo thokar janbujh kar mari gayi thi, or wo itni tez nahi thi ke andar kisi ki jaan chali jaye. Ye dekh kar sari gadiya ruk gayi or sare Police gadiyo se utar kat Truck par humla karne lage. Lekin Truck me unse zyada log Gun liye mojud the. Or wo log bass Police par Goliya barsa rahe the. Wahi andar jese hi Truck ludka Aksh ne moke ka fayda utha kar ek Hawaldar se gun chinn kar andar ke tino Hawaldaro ko maar gira diya. Wahi Sana or Sakshi utar kar ek taraf ludaki hui Van ke piche chup kar Truck pe humla kar rahi thi.

Sana: Sakshi.... Tum dusri taraf se jao.... Me yaha sambhal leti hu.....
Uske Kehne par Sakshi ka koi bhi jawab nahi aya, isliye Sana piche mudi, lekin piche mudte hi uske hosh udd gaye. Kyu ke Sakshi ne uske sar pe Gun Point ki hui thi.

Sakshi: aapko kya laga? Anant sir or aap milkar mere begunah Aksh ko saza dilwa paoge? Maaf karna lekin aapki sazish puri nahi ho payegi......
Itna kehkar wo Gun ko reload kar deti he, Sana ne apna bachav karne ke liye Sakshi par Gun chalani chahi, lekin uske pehle hi Sakshi ne Sana ke sar me goli maar kar uska khel khatam kar diya. Sakshi ne aage akar dekha ke waha kisi bhi Police ki jaan nahi bachi he. Wo baki logo ko waha se jane ko bol deti he. Truck me zinda bache kuch log turant waha se faraar ho gaye. Sakshi ne sabse pehle Sana ki jeb se chabi nikal kar Van ka darwaza khol diya. Jese hi Aksh ko ehsas hua ke Van ka Door open ho raha he, wo darwaze par Gun point kiye tayar tha. Lekin jese hi door open hua uski ungli turant Trigger par se hatt gayi.

Sakshi: Aksh.... Jaldi se bahar aja....
Wo Aksh ka haath pakad kar use bahar ane me madat karne lagti he. Aksh jese hi bahar aya, Sakshi ne uske piche akar uski Collar me lage ek Tracking chip ko hata kar tod diya. Jis se koi bhi Aksh ko track na kar paye. Aksh ab bhi bilkul in sab se bekhabar tha. Sakshi use jaldi se car me bitha deti he, or car ko high speed se ek private Runway ki taraf le chalti he.
Sakshi: Aksh.... Meri bag me Shirt rakha he, jaldi se ise Change kar de.....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh bass use dekhe ja raha tha.
Sakshi: Aksh.... Tujhe samajh nahi araha me kya keh rahi hu? Ya yahi rehkar jo jurm tune kiya nahi uski saza me fasi se latakna he?
Wo kafi gusse me Aksh se kehti he. Aksh ko bhi is waqt or koi rasta nazar nahi araha tha. Usne apni kaidiyo wali shirt utar kar Sakshi ki bag se ek shirt pehen li.

Kuch der baad Sakshi ko Anant ka call ane lagta he, lekin Sakshi uske call ka jawab diye bagair tezi se gadi bhaga rahi thi. Kuch der baad wo Runway pahoch gayi, usne sabkuch pehle hi plan kar rakha tha, wo sidha Runway ke back se hokar main Runway ki taraf ajati he, jaha ek private plane khada hua tha.

Sakshi: chal Aksh.... Jaldi kar humare paas zyada waqt nahi he....
Aksh: kaha le ja rahi he tu mujhe?
Sakshi: in Matlabi logo se bahot dur.....
Aksh: me apna badla pura kiye bina kahi nahi jane wala.....
Uski baat sunkar Sakshi ko bahot gussa ajata he, or wo ek zordar thappad Aksh ko maar deti he.
Sakshi: bass ho gayi teri mann mani.... Kya karega yaha rehkar? Yaha tera saath koi nahi dega.... Agar kuch milega to wo tere na kiye hue jurm ki saza hogi.... or jaha takk baat rahi tere badle ki, to wo zarur pura hoga.....
Wo gusse me chillate hue Aksh se kehti he. Or use zabardasti Plane me bitha deti he. Jese hi plane take off karta he, Sakshi apna Mobile phone par News check karti he, jaha par Aksh ke saath saath Sakshi ke bhaag jane ki khabar flash ho rahi thi. Lekin ab jakar Sakshi chain ki saas leti he. Kyu ke wo dono Anant ke changul se bach chuke the. Sakshi ne Aksh par nazar dali tabb usne paya ke Aksh ke chehre par jo chote thi, unme se khun nikal raha he. Sakshi us khun ko saaf kar rahi thi, or fir usne pani ka glass apne haath me lekar Aksh ko pilana chaha, lekin Aksh ne gusse me Sakshi ka haath jhatak diya.

Sakshi: Aksh sach kahu, jab tu aise gussa karta he na to mujhe badi hasi ati he.....
Wo Aksh ka mazak udate hue kehti he. Lekin Aksh bina kuch react kiye waise hi betha raha. Sakshi ko firse Aksh ko pareshan karne ka dil karne laga.

Sakshi: waise mene thappad mara to wo zyada zor se nahi na laga?
Wo Aksh ka gaal sehlate hue kuch der pehle ki baat yaad dilate hue kehti or uspar hasne lagti he. Lekin ab Aksh ko gussa ane lag, wo gusse me apni chair se uthne laga ke tabhi Sakshi ne uska haath pakad liya.

Sakshi: accha sorry sorry.... Me aage kuch nahi Kahungi.... Promise.
Wo Aksh ko pakad kar seat par bithate hue kehti he. Aksh bhi fir wahi bethkar Sakshi ke aise behavior ke bare me sochne lagta he.

Kyu ke Surat Gujarat me tha, or Gujrat ka adha hissa Samandar ki taraf tha, isliye Kuch hi der baad Plane India ke Ocean Cost ko paar kar ke Arabian Sea ke upar udd raha tha.

Wahi dusri taraf Anant ko in sabki khabar milte hi wo Crime Scene par pahoch chuka tha. Usne dekha waha bass lashe hi lashe he, lekin usne paya ke Van ke paas Sana ki bhi laash mojud thi. Anant aage akar Sana ki laash ke paas khada ho gaya, usne paya ke Sana ke mathe ke bicho bich goli lagi he, or uske aakhe bhi khuli hui thi, Anant ne niche jhuk kar Sana ki aakhe band kar di.

Anant: Sakshi..... Tumhe bhi apne kiye ki saza zarur milegi.....


Pure desh bhar me Sakshi or Aksh ki news flash ho rahi thi, Aksh or Sakshi ke Mama or Mami bhi ye sab dekh kar dangg reh gaye the.

Wahi Anant ne CCTV ke zariye Sakshi ke bhag nikalne ka rasta dhund liya tha. Wo jald se jald us private Runway par chala gaya usne Sakshi ke bhag nikalne wale plane ki details to nikal li thi, lekin ek Private plane hone se use ye nahi pata chal paya ke wo plane akhir kis manzil par rukne wala he. Anant pakke taur par janta tha ke Sakshi Aksh ko lekar out of country chali jane wali he. Isliye usne Supreme Court ke zariye is matter ko International Court me bhejne ki iccha jata di. Ab isme to kuch waqt lagna tha, or shayad tabtak Sakshi Aksh ko lekar apni tay jagah par pahoch bhi jati.

Tabtak hum jaan lete he ke akhir Sakshi ko kese Anant ke irado ki bhanak lagg gayi. Darasal baat tabb ki he jab Sakshi Mumbai se laut ayi or apne kaam par lagg gayi.

Flashback:

Sakshi aaj din bhar kaam me kafi busy thi, wahi Anant Sana ke cabin me parso Aksh ki hearing ke bare me Sana se baatchit kar raha tha. Sakshi apne kaam se free hokar kuch files Sana ko dene ke liye ati he or waha Anant ko bhi pati he.

Anant: tum gayi nahi Sakshi Abtak?
Sakshi: ha sir bass ye file de kar ja hi rahi hu....
Anant: okay.... And please jate hue ye file mere cabin me rakh dena....
Wo ek file ko Sakshi ke haath me dete hue kehta he. Sakshi wo file lekar Anant ke cabin me chali gayi, usne file ko samne ki shelf me rakh diya, lekin tabhi uski nazar wahi padi ek file par chali gayi, jo ki Aksh ki file thi. Pata nahi kyu Sakshi ne us file ko ek baar dekhna chaha, lekin jese hi usne File ko open kiya to uske hosh udd gaye. Kyu ke usme jo kuch papers mojud the, wo Aksh ke khilaf the. Ye sab dekh kar Sakshi ke hosh udd gaye. Wo jaldi se File lekar Anant se is bare me baat karne Sana ke cabin ki taraf nikal gayi. Lekin uske per kadam cabin ke bahar hi tham gaye, kyu ke andar Anant or Sana isi mamle par baat kar rahe the.

Sana: but sir, hum ab Rana ko kese pakad payenge? Kyu ke jesa aapne socha tha ke Aksh ko Jail se riha kar ke hum Rana ka bhi khel khatam kar sakte the, lekin....
Anant: har baar plan humare mutabik nahi chalte Sana.... Me janta hu Rana ko Aksh badi asani se maar payega.... Lekin is waqt hume Rana se zyada khatra Aksh se he.... Isliye me Aksh ko uske kiye ki saza dilwana chahta hu....
Sana: yes sir sahi kaha aapne.... But sir Sakshi ke samne to ye baat ayegi hi na ke Aksh ko Riha karne ke nahi, balki fasi dene ke order aye he tabb.... Tabb hum kya karenge?
Anant: isme hum kya kar sakte he Sana? Aksh ko saza to milke hi rahegi, or ek criminal ko saza dilwane ke liye mujhe Sakshi se jhut bolna pada, uska mujhe koi afsos nahi he....

Yaha bahar khadi Sakshi ye sab sunkar bilkul dangg reh jati he. Uske to jese pero tale zameen hi khisak gayi thi, uska dimag kaam karna band kar gaya. Lekin tabhi Sakshi ne thande dimag se kaam Lena behtar samjha, or sabse pehle us File ko apni jagah rakh diya. Sakshi jab ghar laut rahi thi to usne plan bana liya ke wo Aksh ko yaha se kahi dur le jayegi. Kyu ke agar usne CBI me kisi ko bhanak takk lagne di ke use Anant ki asliyat pata chal gayi he, to waise bhi Aksh mara hi jata. Sakshi ne apne CBI Officer hone ka fayda uthate hue 2 dino me hi Aksh ke jhute documents bana kar uske or apne London jane ka intezam kar liya. Wo ye to janti thi ke wo London passenger plane se nahi ja payegi. Isliye usne ek Private Plane ka intezam kar diya. Aksh ki hearing ke din Sakshi ne hi Anant ke bete ka Accident karwaya take wo Sana ko akele handle kar paye. Or jo Truck bhar ke log waha aye the, unka intezam bhi Sakshi ne hi kiya tha. Or uska ye plan bilkul success raha.


Present:

Kareeb 9 ghanto ka safar tay karne ke baad Sakshi or Aksh London land kar chuke the. Sakshi ne pehle hi ek Lawyer se baat kar rakhi thi, jis se wo asani se yaha reh sake. Sakshi ne tabtak ek ghar rent par le liya tha. Jaha usne apne agle kuch din guzarna sahi samjha.

Khair, ghar me ate hi Sakshi ne khane ke liye kuch order kar diya, dono hi kafi bhuke the. Sakshi khana plate me nikal kar Aksh ke samne beth gayi, or apne haatho se Aksh ko niwala khilane lagi, lekin Aksh ne us se apna muh fer liya.

Sakshi: Aksh, please khana kha le.... Apne liye nahi to kam se kam mere liye kha le.... Tujhe bachane ke chakkar me pichle 2 dino se mene thik se khana nahi khaya.... Sachme ab bahot bhuk lagg rahi he mujhe, or agar tu kuch nahi khayega to me kese kuch kha lu?
Wo kisi baccho ki tarah roti shakal banate hue Aksh se kehti he. Aksh ne khud apne haath se hi niwala kha liya, jise dekh kar Sakshi mann hi mann hasne lagi.

Sakshi (mann me): dekha... Me janti thi tu mujhse kabhi bhi nafrat nahi kar sakta.... Kese choti si dhamki me meri baat maan gaya.... Bavlat.

Fir Sakshi bhi khana khane lagti he. Aksh to bina Sakshi se nazre milaye khana kha raha tha, lekin Sakshi ki nazre to Aksh se hatt hi nahi rahi thi.

Khair, jese tese dono ne kuch niwale kha liye, or uske baad dono fresh hokar aram karne ke liye sochte he. Lekin wo ghar kafi chota sa tha, jisme sirf ek hi bedroom tha, or bahar hall me sone layak jagah nahi thi. Aksh bedroom me akar zameen par hi let gaya, lekin Sakshi akele bed par kese let jati, isliye wo bhi Aksh ke bagal me let gayi. Ab Aksh bhi kafi thaka hua tha, isliye wo Sakshi ki taraf pith kar ke sone ki koshish karne lagta he.


To Be Continued......


To dosto ye tha aaj ka Update, Sakshi ki bahaduri or chalaki se aaj Aksh or wo Anant ke irado se bach nikle the. Lekin kabtak? Akhir kabtak wo is tarah reh pate? Kyu ke Anant ne to unhe fasane ki puri planning bana li thi. Wahi ab Sakshi bhi Aksh ke badle ko pura karne ke liye tayar thi, lekin apne desh se dur rehkar wo log kese Rana se badla le pate? Wahi jab Rana ko is bare me pata chalega tabb? Sawal to kayi sare he, lekin uska jawab to ane wale Updates me chupa he.


agar update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. agla update jald hi ayega till then stay tuned and keep smiling ЁЯШК ЁЯШК
 

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Bahut shandar update. Mere paas shabd kam pad gaye he tarif k liye. Bhale hi aapne thoda fast story dikhayi par har patra k sath barabar nyay kiya. Emotions love trejady ka bhandar tha. Bhai aapne ek punch line sakshi k dwara di he ki har khubsurat kahani to adhuri hi rahti he par me bhai aapse request karta hu ki aapki itani khubsurat rachna ko adhuri mat chhod dena. Nice update brother. Vese next update kab aayega.



sahi kaha bhai.

Thank you bhai...ye story bahat hi jyda achchha hai...waiting your next update...

Bhaiya mn apki khani ka silent reader hoon apki dosri khani b parhi boht achi thi full of emotions pr apki ic khani k start mn Jo seen dikhya gya osy soch k dr b lagta hy k ghoom phir k khani mn wo moor too aana hi hy ЁЯШФЁЯШФЁЯШФ ici liay kamoshi sy khani Read kr rha tha pr aaj socha itni achi khani ki tareef nh karna boht zyadti hogi ЁЯШНЁЯШН

Pr kuch swal heen

Mansi k bhai ko marny k baad dosri larki ka zikar aaya too wo larki khee Sakshi too nhi q k mansi too pehly sy onki nazro mn thi oor osy dhondny ki baat samjh nhi aatiЁЯдФЁЯдФЁЯдФap ki khani ki hr update ka besabri sy intyzar rehta hy ЁЯШНЁЯШНЁЯШН

Sunday tak sabhi reviews clear :check:

badhiya update bhai ji

KYA BAAT KYA BAAT :peace:

Qatil sir ur story is best this story is one of my favourite stories i love it & i eagerly waiting for your new update

Waiting bhai log..

Baught badhia update h bhai


Wo ishq hai tumse mera favorite story hai aur hamesha favorite hi rahega...aur mujhe lagta hao ye story bhi bahat hi achchha hai

Ye storie main ne bookmark me save ki thi parhne ke liye jab ye shuru huwi thi lekin phir yaad he nahi raha aj bookmarks khole to saamne ye storie aa gayi sach me kabile tareef storie hai parhte parhte main ne socha ke iss ko pehle kiu nahi parha lekin ab lag raha hai is ko abhi parh ker galti ker di ab intezar he jan le ga iss ke ek update parhne ke baad dusra update kholne me jitna time lag raha tha wo waqt he mujhe zehar lag raha tha Ab to samjho intezar ho ga he nahi Main itna acha review de nahi sakta jitne ki ye storie haqdar hai bus ye kahu ga speechless har kirdar bohat ache tareeke se paish kia hai ap ne har feeling ubhar ke saamne ayi hai ek ek scene dil ko chune wala tha bohat arse baad aisi storie parhne ko mili hai sab updates parh liye hai iss liye hai ye ek naya reader jur gaya hai ab ap ke saath jaldi jaldi update do waiting for next update

Waiting Qaatil sir




Nice update ЁЯСН


Mast update hai

Nice introduction.......

JhakaasssssЁЯШЗ


Next update Qaatil sir aap kab de rho ho

Awesome update

lajwaab update bro

Fantastic update. There seems to be only love between the siblings. Agar lust bhi hota toh aur bhi maza aata.

But please continue as per your story.

I am enjoying it. Thanks

Next part

aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update

sure @Qatil99 bhai aapki story hi itni interesting hai ke banda khud ba khud juda rehta hai...keep writing bro...we readers will definitely support you.

Super update

Ye turning update h

Keep posting

Very good starting and nice script

Full paisa wasool performance.

Waiting for the next update.

Nice update waiting for next

Atulniya Update sirji ЁЯШН





Most beautiful scene of this Update тЭд

N

Nice start ЁЯСНЁЯСН bro

Super se bhi uper update

shandar update

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ЁЭРЪЁЭРзЁЭРЭ ЁЭРзЁЭРвЁЭРЬЁЭРЮ ЁЭРмЁЭРнЁЭРЪЁЭРлЁЭРнЁЭРвЁЭРзЁЭРа



ЁЭРЫЁЭРлЁЭРи

Lajawab update


Superb Starting bro keep it up

Ohhh sirf poster be hi mera lund kada kiya

Awesome update


Bahut badhiya update bhai

Good name of story. ЁЯШИ

Me janta hu ke me bht late hu but Congratulations for the story, or kasam se bht hi shandar likh rhe ho, agle update ka intezar he.

Superb update bhai...... :applause: :applause: :applause:

Fantastic update..bhai

nice update .waise santosh ne zabardasti science me daal diya aksh ko ..

aur teacher to wakai me ghatiya type tha ,pehle hi din hausla badhane ki jagah taane maarne laga aur maa baap se complain bhi kar di ..

ab aksh class change karna chahta hai isse sakshi naraj ho gayi par aksh ko ghar aane se bura kyu lagta hai ЁЯдФЁЯдФ.

Bdiya update bhai ji :love:



Update padte padte kab khtm ho jata h pta nhi chalta ЁЯШнЁЯШн



Bhai mere hisab se do updates ikathe diya karo to story padne me bhi dilchaspi rhegi chahe do din ke baad update do



Age apki marzi

Nice update..

Aksh does not want to study but he wants to be a successful man, that's a good thing. I have said this before and now I am saying here again that there is no fault of anyone, just need to understand each other and it is not good to have controversy again and again.:sigh: Sakshi is intelligent and good, taking everyone along and caring.:shy: Send that teacher to me, I teach him. :angry: If someone says something wrong to Aksh, Sakshi does not like it, reflect her love in anger.:love:

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

ЁЯЦдЁЯЦдЁЯЦд

Shandar Dumdar UpdateЁЯСПЁЯСПЁЯСПAksh Kahin per Bhi galat nahi hai, maa baap ko apne faisle kuch had tak apne baccho per thopna kam kar dene chayiye unhe apne baccho ko moivate karna chayiye saath dene chayiye agar bacche bhatag bhi jaye tho unhe sahi raaste mein lane ka kartawya bhi maa baap ka hai jo ki santosh aur radha mein nahi dekha de rahi hai aur ek taraf yeh zalim zamana to kisis ko bhi chain se zene nahi dete aksar school life mein college life mein, humhe demotivate karna aam baath hogayi log puchthe unhi ko hai zo intelegent, smart, hota hai. Aksh ke saath bhi wahi ho raha hai.

Dekthe hai Aksh ke behaviour mein kya changes aate hai....

Kya aksh apni manzil per pouch payega ya fir yunhi batag tha rahe ga.???

dekthe aage kya hota.....

Waiting for next.....

Shandar Bhai

Khubsurat Update Qaatil bhai тЭд

Pyar, dard, kuch karne ka junun sabka kamal combination tha, Next Update ka intezar rahega bhai тЭд

:congrats: For completed 25k views on your story thread.....

hum mera manna hai baap login ko bete ki bhi sunni chahiye wo kya chahta hai kuch usko uske hisaab se bhi aage badhne dena chahiye jabardasti har baat thopna nai chahiye uspar lekin kuch mamle me jaise study me wo kya chahta hai karna kaam kya pasand usko koi bhi subject chota nai hota ok..ab aate hain nibbi par to nibbi na wo chutiya hota hai sayad :D

Waiting For Next Update

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.

Bahut khoob superb

Waiting bro

Intazar rahega bhai ЁЯШК

Or kya chapter 2 me inke pyar ki Shuruwat hogi?


Tu hi hai meri jeene ki ummid ,

tujhse judi hai dil ki preet.

Tu hasen to bahare gulzar ho,

Aur roye to jeena hi duswar ho.



Ho sakta hai bhavishya me akash ko kafi muskilo ka samna karna pade lekin jab tak sakshi ka hath sath fir darne ki kya baat hai.

jaise kahani ka title hai us hisab se akash aur sakshi ka rishta aage kya karwat lega ye to bhavishya ki gart me chhupa hai.



Ab kahta hu ek bhai ke point of view se ki bachpan se abtak ke jeevan ke safar me sakshi ne akas ke liye ek bahan se badhakar maa aur best friend ka hak ada kiya hai.

vaise dono bhai bahan ka prem hai adbhut.

Hum kahani aur lekhak mahodaya ke achchhe bhavishya ki kamna karte hai.

Love you dear brother

Waiting for the next update.

Superb update bro

Fabulous update bro ЁЯСМЁЯТе

Good story

Bohot hi badiya update bhai muje laga sakshi Akash se apne pyar ka Izhaar kar degi par nahi kia ab age dekhte h kya hota h ЁЯСН

Waiting bro

рдирдорд╕реНрдХрд╛рд░ рд╕рд░ рдЬреАред

рдХрд╣рд╛рдиреА рдХрд╛ рдкрд╣рд▓рд╛ рднрд╛рдЧ рдЖрдЬ рдкреЭрд╛ред



рдХрд╣рд╛рдиреА рдХреА рд╢реБрд░реБрдЖрдд рджреЗрдЦрдХрд░ рд▓рдЧрддрд╛ рд╣реИ рдХрд┐ рдЖрдХрд╛рд╢ рдФрд░ рд╕рд╛рдХреНрд╖реА рдХреЗ рдорд╛рддрд╛ рдкрд┐рддрд╛ рд░рд╛рдзрд╛ рдФрд░ рд╕рдВрддреЛрд╖ рдХреА рдХрд┐рд╕реА рдиреЗ рд╣рддреНрдпрд╛ рдХрд░ рджреА рд╣реИред



рдЕрдЪреНрдЫрд╛ рд╕рд╛рдХреНрд╖реА рдФрд░ рдЖрдХрд╛рд╢ рдХреЗ рдЬрдиреНрдо рдореЗрдВ рдмрд╕ рдПрдХ рдорд┐рдирдЯ рдХрд╛ рдЕрдВрддрд░ рд╣реИ рдФрд░ рджреЛрдиреЛрдВ рдмреЬреЗ рд╢рд░рд╛рд░рддреА рд╣реИред

рдкреВрд░рд╛ рдШрд░ рд╕рд┐рд░ рдкрд░ рдЙрдард╛ рд░рдЦрд╛ рд╣реИ рджреЛрдиреЛрдВ рдиреЗред



рд▓реЗрдХрд┐рди рджреЛрдиреЛрдВ рднрд╛рдИ рдмрд╣рди рдореЗрдВ рдмрд╣реБрдд рдкреНрдпрд╛рд░ рднреА рд╣реИредред



рдХрд╣рд╛рдиреА рдХреА рд╢реБрд░реБрдЖрдд рдмрд╣реБрдд рдЕрдЪреНрдЫреА рд╣реИред

рдмрд╣реБрдд рдЬрд▓реНрдж рдкреВрд░реА рдХрд╣рд╛рдиреА рдкрдвреВрдВрдЧреАред

behatrin story bro....................



mene aapki 1st story read ki thi....kafi acchi story thi



but iss story ka to level hi alag h 1st story se kafi improvement kiya h aapne............



hero k emotions uski feelings or life ke sangharsh ke sath sath uski apne sapne ko pura krne ki lalak ko kafi acche se describe kiya h aapne............



sat hi villen ki darindgi or samaj m jahar gholte drugs k bare m kafi acche se likha h .................



whi ek successful businessman ke roop m aman ko bhut acche se prastut kiya h jisme uska ground se juda hona bhi dikhaya h .......



sath hi apni 1st deal pura nhi hone jo ese ldke ne mna kiya tha jiska ye startup tha usse hone wali becheni or life k prati uski najariya ko bdlne wale pal bhi kafi khubsurat the.......................



overall outstanding story till continued update................



next update ka intzar rahega bro.....................

Bhai next update kab ayega?

Waiting for the update qaatil bhaai please post the next update soon.....


Zabardast update bht hi kamal ki story writing. Mansi or Sakshi twins hain or dono aksh ki sisters hain agr ye twist hay to bhai bht bara dhamaka honay wala hay, eagerly waiting for next update bhai keep up the fantabolous work

Baught hi shaandaar update h

:heart: ЁЯМ╣тЭд


Romance is oozing in this story.


the story maker

Nice story keep it bhai

Waiting for update....

Bhai thoda fast update do na...waiting nahi ho raha...bahat hi interesting story hai bhai

Qaatil sir apke 25-30 minutes pure ho gye ab to update de do abhi tak ankhe bhi nhi nichi ja rhi jaldi kro bhai

Bahut shandar update. Mere paas shabd kam pad gaye he tarif k liye. Bhale hi aapne thoda fast story dikhayi par har patra k sath barabar nyay kiya. Emotions love trejady ka bhandar tha. Bhai aapne ek punch line sakshi k dwara di he ki har khubsurat kahani to adhuri hi rahti he par me bhai aapse request karta hu ki aapki itani khubsurat rachna ko adhuri mat chhod dena. Nice update brother. Vese next update kab aayega.
 

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Update bhai


Bahut shandar update. Mere paas shabd kam pad gaye he tarif k liye. Bhale hi aapne thoda fast story dikhayi par har patra k sath barabar nyay kiya. Emotions love trejady ka bhandar tha. Bhai aapne ek punch line sakshi k dwara di he ki har khubsurat kahani to adhuri hi rahti he par me bhai aapse request karta hu ki aapki itani khubsurat rachna ko adhuri mat chhod dena. Nice update brother. Vese next update kab aayega.



sahi kaha bhai.

Thank you bhai...ye story bahat hi jyda achchha hai...waiting your next update...

Bhaiya mn apki khani ka silent reader hoon apki dosri khani b parhi boht achi thi full of emotions pr apki ic khani k start mn Jo seen dikhya gya osy soch k dr b lagta hy k ghoom phir k khani mn wo moor too aana hi hy ЁЯШФЁЯШФЁЯШФ ici liay kamoshi sy khani Read kr rha tha pr aaj socha itni achi khani ki tareef nh karna boht zyadti hogi ЁЯШНЁЯШН

Pr kuch swal heen

Mansi k bhai ko marny k baad dosri larki ka zikar aaya too wo larki khee Sakshi too nhi q k mansi too pehly sy onki nazro mn thi oor osy dhondny ki baat samjh nhi aatiЁЯдФЁЯдФЁЯдФap ki khani ki hr update ka besabri sy intyzar rehta hy ЁЯШНЁЯШНЁЯШН

Sunday tak sabhi reviews clear :check:

badhiya update bhai ji

KYA BAAT KYA BAAT :peace:

Qatil sir ur story is best this story is one of my favourite stories i love it & i eagerly waiting for your new update

Waiting bhai log..

Baught badhia update h bhai


Wo ishq hai tumse mera favorite story hai aur hamesha favorite hi rahega...aur mujhe lagta hao ye story bhi bahat hi achchha hai

Ye storie main ne bookmark me save ki thi parhne ke liye jab ye shuru huwi thi lekin phir yaad he nahi raha aj bookmarks khole to saamne ye storie aa gayi sach me kabile tareef storie hai parhte parhte main ne socha ke iss ko pehle kiu nahi parha lekin ab lag raha hai is ko abhi parh ker galti ker di ab intezar he jan le ga iss ke ek update parhne ke baad dusra update kholne me jitna time lag raha tha wo waqt he mujhe zehar lag raha tha Ab to samjho intezar ho ga he nahi Main itna acha review de nahi sakta jitne ki ye storie haqdar hai bus ye kahu ga speechless har kirdar bohat ache tareeke se paish kia hai ap ne har feeling ubhar ke saamne ayi hai ek ek scene dil ko chune wala tha bohat arse baad aisi storie parhne ko mili hai sab updates parh liye hai iss liye hai ye ek naya reader jur gaya hai ab ap ke saath jaldi jaldi update do waiting for next update

Waiting Qaatil sir




Nice update ЁЯСН


Mast update hai

Nice introduction.......

JhakaasssssЁЯШЗ


Next update Qaatil sir aap kab de rho ho

Awesome update

lajwaab update bro

Fantastic update. There seems to be only love between the siblings. Agar lust bhi hota toh aur bhi maza aata.

But please continue as per your story.

I am enjoying it. Thanks

Next part

aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update

sure @Qatil99 bhai aapki story hi itni interesting hai ke banda khud ba khud juda rehta hai...keep writing bro...we readers will definitely support you.

Super update

Ye turning update h

Keep posting

Very good starting and nice script

Full paisa wasool performance.

Waiting for the next update.

Nice update waiting for next

Atulniya Update sirji ЁЯШН





Most beautiful scene of this Update тЭд

N

Nice start ЁЯСНЁЯСН bro

Super se bhi uper update

shandar update

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ЁЭРЫЁЭРлЁЭРи

Lajawab update


Superb Starting bro keep it up

Ohhh sirf poster be hi mera lund kada kiya

Awesome update


Bahut badhiya update bhai

Good name of story. ЁЯШИ

Me janta hu ke me bht late hu but Congratulations for the story, or kasam se bht hi shandar likh rhe ho, agle update ka intezar he.

Superb update bhai...... :applause: :applause: :applause:

Fantastic update..bhai

nice update .waise santosh ne zabardasti science me daal diya aksh ko ..

aur teacher to wakai me ghatiya type tha ,pehle hi din hausla badhane ki jagah taane maarne laga aur maa baap se complain bhi kar di ..

ab aksh class change karna chahta hai isse sakshi naraj ho gayi par aksh ko ghar aane se bura kyu lagta hai ЁЯдФЁЯдФ.

Bdiya update bhai ji :love:



Update padte padte kab khtm ho jata h pta nhi chalta ЁЯШнЁЯШн



Bhai mere hisab se do updates ikathe diya karo to story padne me bhi dilchaspi rhegi chahe do din ke baad update do



Age apki marzi

Nice update..

Aksh does not want to study but he wants to be a successful man, that's a good thing. I have said this before and now I am saying here again that there is no fault of anyone, just need to understand each other and it is not good to have controversy again and again.:sigh: Sakshi is intelligent and good, taking everyone along and caring.:shy: Send that teacher to me, I teach him. :angry: If someone says something wrong to Aksh, Sakshi does not like it, reflect her love in anger.:love:

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

ЁЯЦдЁЯЦдЁЯЦд

Shandar Dumdar UpdateЁЯСПЁЯСПЁЯСПAksh Kahin per Bhi galat nahi hai, maa baap ko apne faisle kuch had tak apne baccho per thopna kam kar dene chayiye unhe apne baccho ko moivate karna chayiye saath dene chayiye agar bacche bhatag bhi jaye tho unhe sahi raaste mein lane ka kartawya bhi maa baap ka hai jo ki santosh aur radha mein nahi dekha de rahi hai aur ek taraf yeh zalim zamana to kisis ko bhi chain se zene nahi dete aksar school life mein college life mein, humhe demotivate karna aam baath hogayi log puchthe unhi ko hai zo intelegent, smart, hota hai. Aksh ke saath bhi wahi ho raha hai.

Dekthe hai Aksh ke behaviour mein kya changes aate hai....

Kya aksh apni manzil per pouch payega ya fir yunhi batag tha rahe ga.???

dekthe aage kya hota.....

Waiting for next.....

Shandar Bhai

Khubsurat Update Qaatil bhai тЭд

Pyar, dard, kuch karne ka junun sabka kamal combination tha, Next Update ka intezar rahega bhai тЭд

:congrats: For completed 25k views on your story thread.....

hum mera manna hai baap login ko bete ki bhi sunni chahiye wo kya chahta hai kuch usko uske hisaab se bhi aage badhne dena chahiye jabardasti har baat thopna nai chahiye uspar lekin kuch mamle me jaise study me wo kya chahta hai karna kaam kya pasand usko koi bhi subject chota nai hota ok..ab aate hain nibbi par to nibbi na wo chutiya hota hai sayad :D

Waiting For Next Update

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.

Bahut khoob superb

Waiting bro

Intazar rahega bhai ЁЯШК

Or kya chapter 2 me inke pyar ki Shuruwat hogi?


Tu hi hai meri jeene ki ummid ,

tujhse judi hai dil ki preet.

Tu hasen to bahare gulzar ho,

Aur roye to jeena hi duswar ho.



Ho sakta hai bhavishya me akash ko kafi muskilo ka samna karna pade lekin jab tak sakshi ka hath sath fir darne ki kya baat hai.

jaise kahani ka title hai us hisab se akash aur sakshi ka rishta aage kya karwat lega ye to bhavishya ki gart me chhupa hai.



Ab kahta hu ek bhai ke point of view se ki bachpan se abtak ke jeevan ke safar me sakshi ne akas ke liye ek bahan se badhakar maa aur best friend ka hak ada kiya hai.

vaise dono bhai bahan ka prem hai adbhut.

Hum kahani aur lekhak mahodaya ke achchhe bhavishya ki kamna karte hai.

Love you dear brother

Waiting for the next update.

Superb update bro

Fabulous update bro ЁЯСМЁЯТе

Good story

Bohot hi badiya update bhai muje laga sakshi Akash se apne pyar ka Izhaar kar degi par nahi kia ab age dekhte h kya hota h ЁЯСН

Waiting bro

рдирдорд╕реНрдХрд╛рд░ рд╕рд░ рдЬреАред

рдХрд╣рд╛рдиреА рдХрд╛ рдкрд╣рд▓рд╛ рднрд╛рдЧ рдЖрдЬ рдкреЭрд╛ред



рдХрд╣рд╛рдиреА рдХреА рд╢реБрд░реБрдЖрдд рджреЗрдЦрдХрд░ рд▓рдЧрддрд╛ рд╣реИ рдХрд┐ рдЖрдХрд╛рд╢ рдФрд░ рд╕рд╛рдХреНрд╖реА рдХреЗ рдорд╛рддрд╛ рдкрд┐рддрд╛ рд░рд╛рдзрд╛ рдФрд░ рд╕рдВрддреЛрд╖ рдХреА рдХрд┐рд╕реА рдиреЗ рд╣рддреНрдпрд╛ рдХрд░ рджреА рд╣реИред



рдЕрдЪреНрдЫрд╛ рд╕рд╛рдХреНрд╖реА рдФрд░ рдЖрдХрд╛рд╢ рдХреЗ рдЬрдиреНрдо рдореЗрдВ рдмрд╕ рдПрдХ рдорд┐рдирдЯ рдХрд╛ рдЕрдВрддрд░ рд╣реИ рдФрд░ рджреЛрдиреЛрдВ рдмреЬреЗ рд╢рд░рд╛рд░рддреА рд╣реИред

рдкреВрд░рд╛ рдШрд░ рд╕рд┐рд░ рдкрд░ рдЙрдард╛ рд░рдЦрд╛ рд╣реИ рджреЛрдиреЛрдВ рдиреЗред



рд▓реЗрдХрд┐рди рджреЛрдиреЛрдВ рднрд╛рдИ рдмрд╣рди рдореЗрдВ рдмрд╣реБрдд рдкреНрдпрд╛рд░ рднреА рд╣реИредред



рдХрд╣рд╛рдиреА рдХреА рд╢реБрд░реБрдЖрдд рдмрд╣реБрдд рдЕрдЪреНрдЫреА рд╣реИред

рдмрд╣реБрдд рдЬрд▓реНрдж рдкреВрд░реА рдХрд╣рд╛рдиреА рдкрдвреВрдВрдЧреАред

behatrin story bro....................



mene aapki 1st story read ki thi....kafi acchi story thi



but iss story ka to level hi alag h 1st story se kafi improvement kiya h aapne............



hero k emotions uski feelings or life ke sangharsh ke sath sath uski apne sapne ko pura krne ki lalak ko kafi acche se describe kiya h aapne............



sat hi villen ki darindgi or samaj m jahar gholte drugs k bare m kafi acche se likha h .................



whi ek successful businessman ke roop m aman ko bhut acche se prastut kiya h jisme uska ground se juda hona bhi dikhaya h .......



sath hi apni 1st deal pura nhi hone jo ese ldke ne mna kiya tha jiska ye startup tha usse hone wali becheni or life k prati uski najariya ko bdlne wale pal bhi kafi khubsurat the.......................



overall outstanding story till continued update................



next update ka intzar rahega bro.....................

Bhai next update kab ayega?

Waiting for the update qaatil bhaai please post the next update soon.....


Zabardast update bht hi kamal ki story writing. Mansi or Sakshi twins hain or dono aksh ki sisters hain agr ye twist hay to bhai bht bara dhamaka honay wala hay, eagerly waiting for next update bhai keep up the fantabolous work

Baught hi shaandaar update h

:heart: ЁЯМ╣тЭд


Romance is oozing in this story.


the story maker

Nice story keep it bhai

Waiting for update....

Bhai thoda fast update do na...waiting nahi ho raha...bahat hi interesting story hai bhai

Qaatil sir apke 25-30 minutes pure ho gye ab to update de do abhi tak ankhe bhi nhi nichi ja rhi jaldi kro bhai

Bahut shandar update. Mere paas shabd kam pad gaye he tarif k liye. Bhale hi aapne thoda fast story dikhayi par har patra k sath barabar nyay kiya. Emotions love trejady ka bhandar tha. Bhai aapne ek punch line sakshi k dwara di he ki har khubsurat kahani to adhuri hi rahti he par me bhai aapse request karta hu ki aapki itani khubsurat rachna ko adhuri mat chhod dena. Nice update brother. Vese next update kab aayega.
 

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Thank You So Much Dosto Aap Sabke Comments Ke Liye тЭдя╕ПтЭдя╕П

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Awesome Update Bro
superbb behatrin update bro
superbb jabardast behatrin update bro
Excellent update
Awesome update
Behtreen update Qaatil bhai....
Nice and superb update...
Bhai....Bhai....Bhai
Ghazab ka shanadar or jabardast update tha bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Bade hi aade tirchhe mod aaye is update me.
Thrill.
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....
 

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рдЕрдзреНрдпрд╛рдп рдЪрд╛рд░ рдХрд╛ рдкрд╣рд▓рд╛ рднрд╛рдЧ

рдмрд╣реБрдд рд╣реА рдмреЗрд╣рддрд░реАрдиредред

рдпреЗ рдЕрдирдВрдд рддреЛ рдЕрдХреНрд╖ рдХреЗ рдкреАрдЫреЗ рд╣рд╛рде рдореБрдВрд╣ рдФрд░ рдирд╣рд╛ рдзреЛрдХрд░ рдкреЬ рдЧрдпрд╛ рд╣реИред рд╕рд╛рдХреНрд╖реА рдХреЛ рднреА рдЧреБрдорд░рд╛рд╣ рдХрд░ рд░рд╣рд╛ рд╣реИ рдЕрдирдиреНрддред рдЕрдирдВрдд рдХреЛ рдбрд░ рд╣реИ рдХрд┐ рдЕрдЧрд░ рд╕рд╛рдХреНрд╖реА рдХреЛ рдЙрд╕рдХреЗ рдЗрд░рд╛рджреЛрдВ рдХреА рднрдирдХ рд▓рдЧ рдЧрдИ рддреЛ рд╡реЛ рдЕрдХреНрд╖ рдХреЛ рдлрд╛рдВрд╕реА рдХрднреА рдирд╣реАрдВ рд╣реЛрдиреЗ рджреЗрдЧреА, рдЗрд╕рд▓рд┐рдП рдЙрд╕рдиреЗ рдЭреВрда рдмреЛрд▓рд╛ рд╕рд╛рдХреНрд╖реА рд╕реЗ рдХрд┐ рд╡реЛ рдЕрдХреНрд╖ рдХреЛ рдмрдЪрд╛рдиреЗ рдХреА рдХреЛрд╢рд┐рд╢ рдХрд░ рд░рд╣рд╛ рд╣реИредред рдПрдХ рдмрд╛рдд рд╕рдордЭ рдореЗ рдирд╣реАрдВ рдЖрддреА рдХрд┐ рдЬрдм рдЕрдирдВрдд рдХреЛ рдпреЗ рд╕рдВрджреЗрд╣ рд╣реИ рдХрд┐ рдЕрдХреНрд╖ рдиреЗ рдЕрднрд┐рдирд╡ рдХреЛ рдорд╛рд░рд╛ рд╣реИ рдФрд░ рдХреНрдпреЛрдВ рдорд╛рд░рд╛ рд╣реИ рдпреЗ рдмрд╛рд░ рдмрд╛рд░ рдХрд╣ рд░рд╣рд╛ рд╣реИ рддреЛ рдЕрдХреНрд╖ рдЕрдирдВрдд рдХреЛ рдпреЗ рдмрддрд╛ рдХреНрдпреЛрдВ рдирд╣реАрдВ рджреЗрддрд╛ рдХрд┐ рдЙрд╕рдиреЗ рдирд╣реАрдВ рдмрд▓реНрдХрд┐ рд░рд╛рдгрд╛ рдиреЗ рдорд╛рд░рд╛ рд╣реИ рдЕрднрд┐рдирд╡ рдХреЛред рд╢рд╛рдпрдж рдЕрдирдВрдд рдЙрд╕рдХреА рдмрд╛рдд рдкрд░ рд╡рд┐рд╢реНрд╡рд╛рд╕ рдХрд░ рд▓реЗредред

рдЕрдирдВрдд рдиреЗ рдЕрдХреНрд╖ рдХреЛ рдмрд╣реБрдд рдмреБрд░реА рддрд░рд╣ рдпрд╛рддрдирд╛ рджреА рд╣реИ, рд╕рд╛рдХреНрд╖реА рдХреЗ рдмрд╛рд░ рдмрд╛рд░ рдХрд╣рдиреЗ рдкрд░ рдЕрдирдВрдд рд╕рд╛рдХреНрд╖реА рдХреЛ рдЕрдХреНрд╖ рд╕реЗ рдорд┐рд▓рд╛рдиреЗ рд▓реЗ рдЬрд╛рддрд╛ рд╣реИред рдЕрдХреНрд╖ рдХреА рд╣рд╛рд▓рдд рджреЗрдЦрдХрд░ рд╕рд╛рдХреНрд╖реА рдХреЛ рдмрд╣реБрдд рдмреБрд░рд╛ рд▓рдЧрддрд╛ рд╣реИред рдЕрдХреНрд╖ рд╕рд╛рдХреНрд╖реА рдХреЛ рджреБрддреНрдХрд╛рд░ рджреЗрддрд╛ рд╣реИред рдЗрд╕рдХреЗ рдкреАрдЫреЗ рдЕрдХреНрд╖ рдХреА рдирдлрд░рдд рдирд╣реАрдВ рдмрд▓реНрдХрд┐ рдЙрд╕рдХрд╛ рд╕рд╛рдХреНрд╖реА рдХреЗ рдкреНрд░рддрд┐ рдкреНрд░реЗрдо рд╣реИ рдЬреЛ рдЙрд╕реЗ рдХрд┐рд╕реА рдореБрд╕реАрдмрдд рд╕реЗ рджреВрд░ рд░рдЦрдиреЗ рдХреА рдХреЛрд╢рд┐рд╢ рдХрд░ рд░рд╣рд╛ рд╣реИред рд░рд╛рдгрд╛ рдХреА рдЪрд╛рд▓ рдХрд╛рдордпрд╛рдм рд░рд╣реАред рдХреАрд░реНрддрд┐ рдиреЗ рдирдХрд▓реА рд╣рдорджрд░реНрджреА рдФрд░ рдордЧрд░рдордЪреНрдЫреА рдЖрдВрд╕реВ рдмрд╣рд╛рдХрд░ рд╕рд╛рдХреНрд╖реА рд╕реЗ рджреЛрд╕реНрддреА рдХрд░ рд▓реА рд╣реИредред

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рдЬрдм рдЕрдирдВрдд рдХреЛ рдпреЗ рд╕рдВрджреЗрд╣ рд╣реИ рдХрд┐ рдЕрдХреНрд╖ рдиреЗ рдЕрднрд┐рдирд╡ рдХреЛ рдорд╛рд░рд╛ рд╣реИ рдФрд░ рдХреНрдпреЛрдВ рдорд╛рд░рд╛ рд╣реИ рдпреЗ рдмрд╛рд░ рдмрд╛рд░ рдХрд╣ рд░рд╣рд╛ рд╣реИ рддреЛ рдЕрдХреНрд╖ рдЕрдирдВрдд рдХреЛ рдпреЗ рдмрддрд╛ рдХреНрдпреЛрдВ рдирд╣реАрдВ рджреЗрддрд╛ рдХрд┐ рдЙрд╕рдиреЗ рдирд╣реАрдВ рдмрд▓реНрдХрд┐ рд░рд╛рдгрд╛ рдиреЗ рдорд╛рд░рд╛ рд╣реИ рдЕрднрд┐рдирд╡ рдХреЛред рд╢рд╛рдпрдж рдЕрдирдВрдд рдЙрд╕рдХреА рдмрд╛рдд рдкрд░ рд╡рд┐рд╢реНрд╡рд╛рд╕ рдХрд░ рд▓реЗредред

Nahi, baat to Aksh ne maan hi li he na ke usi me Abhinav ko mara he, lekin uski wajah abtak kisi ko nahi pata. Or wahi wajah Anant jaan na chahta he.

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New chapter start ho gya aur jitni ummeed ki thi usse v behtar suruat hui hai Aksh jail mein hai aur anant use fansi dilwna chahta hai aur sakshi is baat se anjan hai. Kya Aksh ko sakshi se nafrat ho gai hai Aur ye Ashna kon hai kya isme rana ki koi chaal hai bahot saare sawal hai jinke jawab ka intazar hai aane wale updates ka beshabri se intazar rahegaЁЯЩП

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