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Chapter 3 - Qaatil

Update 8

Mega Update​

Word Count: 3160
Estimated Reading Time: 00:15:00



Raat ke kareeb 2 baje hue the, or Aksh ki aakho ke samne sirf or sirf Sakshi ka chehra dikhayi de raha tha, jab bhi wo aakhe band kar ke sone ki koshish karta, bass Sakshi ki yaade use sata rahi thi.

"Dada..... Dada..... Dada uth bhi ja na ab.... Teri wajah se Hume ghumne jane me late ho jayega..... Dada....."
Yaha Sakshi subah subah chain se soye Aksh ki pith par beth kar use jagane ki koshish me lagi thi, lekin Aksh to sabkuch bhulkar ghode beche soya tha. Ab Sakshi ko bahot gussa ane laga tha, wo bhagte hue kamre se bahar agayi, or dusre kamre me rakha danda lekar firse apne kamre me agayi. Usne ek or baar Aksh ko uthne ka moka diya, lekin wo nahi mana. Ab Sakshi ne danda zor se Aksh ki pith me maar diya, jis se Aksh ki nind turant tut gayi. Wo dard me chillate hue bed par uthkar beth gaya, or samne Gusse me khadi Sakshi ko dekh liya.
Aksh: aye Chipkali..... Ye kya kar rahi he tu?
Sakshi: itni der se tujhe utha rahi hu lekin tu to uthne ka naam nahi le raha tha, Baba aaj hume ghumane le jane wale he.... Bhul gaya....
Wo bahot hi gusse me chillakar kehti he.
Aksh: to isme marne ki kya zarurat thi.... Chipkali.....
Uski baat sunkar Sakshi or zyada gussa ho gayi, or dande se Aksh ko marne ke liye aage badh gayi, lekin Aksh jaldi se us kamre se bahar bhaag jata he.

Aksh: Aai.... Baba..... Aai dekho ye ladki pagal ho gayi he.....
Wo bhagte hue bahar kaam kar rahi Radha ke piche chupte hue kehta he. Jese hi Radha ki nazar samne se gusse me arahi Sakshi par padi to wo bhi chok gayi.

Radha: Sakshi.... Kya kar rahi he tu?
Sakshi: Aai, ye bandar mujhe humesha chipkali bulata he.... Aaj is bandar ko dande se maar maar kar chup karwa dungi.....
Radha: accha? Beta wo danda bhi tujhse zyada lamba he.... Thik se pakad to sahi use.....
Wo Sakshi ka mazak banate hue kehti he. Jo sunkar Sakshi ko muh gusse se ful gaya. Wo danda wahi fek kar kamre me bhag gayi.
Radha: beta zyada waqt matt lagana, ghumne jana he na?
Wo Aksh ko apne samne lakar kehti he.
Aksh: Ho Aai.....
Fir Aksh kamre ke paas akar dhire se kamre me jhak kar dekhne lagta he. Jaha Sakshi gusse me bed par leti hui thi. Aksh dara sehma andar agaya.

Aksh: k.... Kya hua Sakshi.....
Sakshi: kuch nahi hua..... Bandar......
Wo kisi sher ki tarah dahadte hue kehti he. Aksh bhi us se kuch na kehne me hi apni bhalayi samajhta he. Radha ne akar use kapde nikal kar de diye. Or apna kaam karne chali gayi. Aksh ne jab apni t-shirt nikali tabb Sakshi ne dekha ke uski pith par nishan bann gaya he. Sakshi bed se uthkar Aksh ke piche akar khadi ho gayi, or uske nishan par apna haath fer diya, jis se Aksh ko thoda dard ho gaya, or wo Sakshi ki taraf mud gaya.
Sakshi: ye kya hua teri pith par Aksh.....
Aksh: huhhhh..... Khud dande se mujhe marti he, or fir puchti he ye kya hua..... Chipkali......
Itna kehkar wo aage bathroom ki taraf badh jata he, lekin ye sunkar Sakshi ki aakhe bhar ayi, Aksh ne jab mudkar use dekha to paya Sakshi rone lagg gayi he.
Aksh: are..... Tu rone kyu lagg gayi Sakshi?
Wo aage akar apne chote chote haatho se Sakshi ke aasu saaf karte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: tujhe meri wajah se chott lagg gayi na.....
Aksh: are me to bilkul thik hu.... Dekh, me kaha ro raha hu?
Sakshi: to fir teri pith par chot ka Nishan kese aya?
Aksh: are wo to.... Ahhh... Wo.... Ab tu ye sab chhod na, hume ghumne bhi jana he na?
Wo baat ko sambhalte hue kehta he, ab Sakshi bhi apna rona band kar ke muskurane lagg gayi. Aksh wapis bathroom me jane laga, lekin tabhi Sakshi ne aage akar use piche se hi rok diya. Or Aksh ki chot par halke se chum liya.
Aksh: kya kar rahi he Sakshi?
Wo Piche mudkar Sakshi se pichta he.
Sakshi: are Bavlat..... Chot par aise karne se dard gayab ho jata he....
Wo muskurate hue Aksh se kehti he.


Pata nahi kyu lekin ye sari yaade Aksh ka chain chine ja rahi thi, Aksh gusse me upar chatt par agaya, or waha akar kafi gusse me apna workout karne lagg gaya. Kuch der baad Shahid aise hi upar chala ata he, or usne Aksh ko dekhte hi samajh liya ke wo kafi frustrated he.

Shahid: Aksh..... Itni raat ko yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Wo Aksh ke piche khada hokar puchta he, lekin Aksh uski baat ka koi jawab nahi deta.
Shahid: waise Aksh..... Tum Sakshi kyu milna nahi chahte?
Uski baat sunkar Aksh ko or bhi zyada gussa agaya, usne gusse me Shahid ko ghura or firse niche jane laga. Lekin tabhi Shahid ne use rok liya.
Shahid: Aksh.... Kya baat he? Jis Sakshi ke liye tum mujhe jaan se marne ke liye tayar the.... Aaj usi Sakshi ka naam sunkar aakho me itna gussa? Kyu Aksh?
Aksh: tumhe ye sab jaan ne ki koi zarurat nahi he.... Mera hamdard bann ne koshish matt karo.... Mene pehli hi kaha tha, mujhe apna badla pura karne me kisi ki zarurat nahi he.... Na tumhari na Abdul ki....
Wo gusse me Shahid ko dhakka marte hue kehta he. Or waha se chala jata he. Shahid bhi uthkar niche chala gaya.

Wahi dusri taraf Sakshi ki aakho se bhi nind koso dur thi, wo bass baar baar karvate badal badal kar sone ki koshish me lagi thi. Lekin jab use nind nahi ati to wo Aksh ki tasveer apne haatho me lekar us se baate karne lagti he.

Sakshi (mann me): Aksh kya tu mujhe maaf karega? Kyu ke aaj jo kuch halaat he, uski zimmedari kahi na kahi me bhi hu.... Please Aksh, teri Sakshi ko maaf kar dena.... Jo kuch tune khoya he, wo mene bhi to khoya he na? Please maaf kar dena apni Sakshi ko please.......
Wo Aksh ki tasveer ko apne sine se lagaye ro ro kar apna mann halka kar rahi thi, or aise hi rote rote der raat uski aaakh lagg jati he.


Agle din sabkuch as it is ho raha tha, waha Shahid akela bethkar sari Guns saaf kar raha tha tabhi Aksh uske paas akar beth jata he, or Guns saaf karne me lagg jata he.

Aksh: Shahid, Mujhe.... Mujhe maaf karna.....
Wo Shahid se nazre milaye bina kehta he.
Shahid: maaf.... Kis baat ke liye maafi mang rahe ho?
Wo herani se Aksh ki taraf dekhte hue puchta he.
Aksh: wo.... Kal raat.... Kal raat mujhe....
Shahid: koi baat nahi Aksh.... Me to bhul bhi gaya us baat ko... Tum bhi bhul jao....
Wo Aksh ki baat bich me kaat te hue uske kandhe par haath rakh kar kehta he.

Shahid: waise tumhe ek free ki salah zarur dena chahunga me...... Aksh kya he na, agar zindagi me apno ka saath na ho to zindagi kisi kaam ki nahi rehti... Tum jante ho me or Mamu jab kisi begunah ladke ladkiyo ko drugs ke nashe me dalkar use Rana ke hawale kar dete he, to hum Guilty feel nahi karte.... Ab to hum Shayad yaha se kabhi bahar bhi nahi apayenge..... Or iski wajah apno ke saath ki kami he.... Me tumhe bass yahi samjhana chahta hu ke tumhari zindagi me koi he, jiski saase tumhare liye hi chal rahi he... Or mano ya na mano, lekin tumhare dil me Sakshi ke liye aaj bhi utna hi pyaar, utni hi chinta he jitni pehle thi.... Bass tumhari aakho me uske liye thoda sa gussa he.... Me nahi janta ye gussa kyu he, lekin aap gussa bhi sirf us se ho sakte ho jis se pyaar karte ho.....

Itna kehkar Shahid saaf hui Guns uthkar dusre kamre me chala jata he. Lekin uski baato ne Aksh ko soch ne me majbur kar diya. Lekin Aksh ke sar par ye badle ki aag is kadar chadi hui thi ke use sirf apna Badla sabse upar lagg raha tha.


Ye to thi Aksh ki kahani, lekin yaha Rana subah subah apni saline wagairah nikal kat kamre ke bahar agaya, tabhi Abdul ne use dekh liya.

Abdul: Boss..... Aapne Saline kyu nikal di? Kuch chahiye tha to mujhe bata dete....
Rana: ha... Gadi ki chabi chahiye.....
Abdul: gadi? Kyu Boss?
Rana: Abdul, kuch waqt ke liye is shor sharabe se dur jana chahta hu.....
Abdul: lekin is halat me.....
Rana: Abdul.....
Wo Abdul ki baat bich me kaat te hue use chup kara deta he.
Rana: bass kuch baad Rana firse apne purane roop ke saath lautega.... Chabi do.....
Uski baat par Abdul gadi ki chabi Rana ko de deta he. Rana bhi turant waha se nikal gaya. Abdul bilkul heran tha, ke Aksh ke karnamo ne Rana ko is kadar tod diya he.

Khair, sabki dopehar bilkul shanti me guzar rahi thi, waha Sakshi bass soch rahi thi, ke Qaatil takk kese pahocha jaye, kyu ke ab use ye kaam akele karna tha, kyu ke Anant ne koi bhi thos kadam uthane se pehle Uski raay lene ke liye kaha tha, or agar Sakshi is waqt Qaatil ke bate me kuch kehti to Anant use kuch bhi karne se mana kar deta.

Raat ko Abdul bhi Aksh se milne agaya tha, is waqt Aksh, Abdul or Shahid chatt par bethe hue the, or baki tino kuch zaruri saman lene ke liye bahar gaye hue the.

Abdul: waise Aksh, tumne bahot buri tarah se tod diya Rana ko.....
Aksh: ye to bass Shuruwat he, itni battar maut dunga use, ki usne kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha hoga.....
Abdul: lekin ek dikkat he....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh Abdul ko ek takk dekhne lagta he.
Abdul: Rana kahi chala gaya he....
Aksh: chala gaya? Kaha Chala gaya?
Abdul: wo to nahi pata.... Lekin yaad rakhna Aksh, wo jab bhi wapsi karega, to keher Mach sakta he....
Aksh: bahot se keher dekh chuka hu me zindagi me..... Apne pariwar ko aakho ke samne marta dekhne se bada keher koi nahi hota.... To ye Rana kya kar lega ab mera?

Kuch der takk sab bass aise hi bethe rahe, tabhi Aksh Abdul se sawal puchna chahta tha.

Aksh: tumne mujhe Rana ke atit ke bare me kuch kyu nahi bataya.....
Uske sidhe sawal se Abdul ko laga kahi Aksh ko Rana ke atit ke bare me pata chal gaya ho.
Abdul: kesa Atit Aksh.... me Rana ke atit ke bare me kuch nahi janta.....
Aksh: aisa kyu? Agar Rana ki choti se choti baat tum jante ho to fir ye sab........
Abdul: Aksh, Mera or Rana ka koi khun ka rishta nahi he, jo wo apne sare dukh dard mujhse baate.....
Wo Aksh ki baat bich me kaat te hue kafi Sakht lehze me kehta he. Fir kuch der ke liye waha aise hi sannata cha gaya. Waha mojud har insan ke dimag me apne apne plan chal rahe the. Kuch der baad Abdul bhi waha se nikal gaya.


12 ghante ke safar ke baad Rana Bhopal pahoch gaya tha, usne gadi aisi jagah le li, jo ek khadi ki tarah thi. Waha dur dur takk koi insan mojud nahi tha. Thodi der ki drive ke baad Rana ek ped ke samne pahoch gaya. Rana ne jese hi gadi roki, waha zor dar barish shuru ho gayi. Rana door open kar ke gadi ke bahar akar khada ho gaya. Kuch hi Seconds me Rana puri tarah se bhig chuka tha, or tabhi waha zordar bijli kadakti he, jis se wo ilaka kuch Seconds ke liye saaf saaf nazar ane laga tha, or tabhi Rana ko wo ped ke paas ka kissa yaad agaya.


Flashback:


Year 1982 Bhopal, India.


Raat ke ghane andhere me tez barasti barish ke bich, gaon ke log is ped ke samne haatho me lantern liye khade the. Waha 2 logo ko ped se latkaya hua tha, kuch log ye dekh kar khush the, or latkaye gaye logo ke pariwar wale gid gida kar unki jaan Baksh dene ki bhik maang rahe the. Tabhi ek baccha samne khade aadmi ke paas rote hue ajata he.

Baccha: Kaka.... Kaka aap Maa ko utarte kyu nahi? Kaka.... Kuch boliye na..... Kaka Bauji kaha he?
Wo baccha Darasal or koi nahi, Deep, yani ke Rana tha. Wo Joshi Kaka se ped par bandhe apni Maa ko niche utarne ke liye keh raha tha, lekin Joshi bass apna sar jhukaye waha khada raha. Ped par latke log Rana ki Maa, or Gaon ke sabse izzatdar vyaktiyo me se ek Rehmat Ali the. Pure bhopal me Rehmat Ali ko bahot izzat di jati thi, unka swabhav unki baate yaha ke har logo ke dil me jagah banati thi, lekin aaj mahol bilkul ulta tha. Waha Rana ped par latki apni Maa ke per pakad kar ro raha tha. Or Rehmat Ali ki Biwi jo ke pet se thi, use logo ne pakad kar rok rakha tha. Uski halat bhi ro ro kar bilkul tut gayi thi.

In sabke bich waha khade ek aadmi, Shantilal Virani aage akar Rana ki Maa ke paas jane lagta he, lekin sablog unhe chillane lagte he, Shantilal mudkar ek nazar Joshi Kaka par dalte he, lekin Joshi unse apni nazar chura kar nichi kar lete he. Shantilal Rana ko pakad kar piche karne lagte he.

Shantilal: beta.... Beta ruko..... Kya kar rahe ho tum?
Rana: Mama Ji, Mama ji.... Maa ko niche utar dijiye na....
Wo Shantilal ke Haath apne hatho me thamkar kehta he.
Shantilal: beta me kya kar sakta hu? Ye sab to sirf tumhare Joshi Kaka hi kar sakte he.... Mere haath bandhe hue he beta....
Wo Rana ka chehra apne hatho me thamkar kehta he. Uski baat sunkar Rana daud kar jata he, or sidha Joshi Kaka ke pero me gir kar rone lagta he.
Rana: Kaka..... Aap Maa ko utarne ke liye kahiye na.... Meri Maa marr jayegi Kaka, Maa marr jayegi......
Wo Joshi Kaka ke pero me gid gidate hue keh raha tha, Joshi Rana ko apne pero se hata kar khud uske samne ghutno par beth jate he, or Rana ka chehra apne haatho me tham lete he.
Joshi: beta... Beta.... Me kuch nahi kar sakta.... Mujhe maaf kar dijiye....
Ye sab kehte hue unki aakho me dard, Chehre par Sharmindagi ye sab dikh raha tha, lekin Rana abhi ye sare hav bhav samajhne ke liye bahot chota tha.
Rana: kyu kuch nahi kar sakte? Aapki baat sablog mante he.... Fir aap kyu kuch nahi kar sakte.... kahiye na Kaka.....
Uski baat par Joshi ki nazar Rehmat Ali, or uski biwi par chali jati he. Or Joshi apni nazre jhuka lete he. Lekin tabhi waha sab log zor zor se chillane lagte he, kyu ke ped par latke dono logo ne apni jaan chhod di thi. Ek aadmi aage akar Rana ki Maa or Rehmat Ali ko niche utar deta he, jese unhe niche utara gaya, Rana or Rehmat Ali ki biwi waha daud padte he. Ye chotasa baccha Rana apni Maa ko jagane ki koshish kar raha tha, lekin Rehmat Ali ki biwi ko pata tha ke uska pati ab is duniya me nahi raha, isliye wo Rehmat Ali ke sine par sar rakh kar roye ja rahi thi.
Rana: Maa..... Maa utho na.... Maa apni aakhe kholo.... Maa.....
Wo apni Maa ka chehra haatho me thamkar use jagane ki koshish kar raha tha lekin Ab Rana ko bhi ehsas ho gaya ke uski Maa is duniya me nahi rahi. Or wo bhi apni Maa ke sine me sar rakh kar rone laga. Ab waha se sablog dhire dhire jane lage, waha is waqt sirf Rehmat Ali ki Biwi, Shantilal, Rana or Joshi the. Shantilal aage akar Rana ko sambhalne ki koshish kar raha tha, lekin Rana kisi ki sunn ne walo me se nahi tha. Ye dekh kar Joshi Kaka aage agaye, or Rana ko pakad kar piche kar diya, Rana bhi unse lipat kar rone laga.


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Ye sab yaad kar ke Rana rone lagta he, barish ki wajah se uske aasu to chup gaye the, lekin wo dard, wo chot chup nahi sakti thi. Rana aage akar usi jagah beth gaya, jaha akhri baar usne apni Maa ko dekha tha. Rana us zameen par apne haath fer raha tha or roye ja raha tha, ye sochkar ke aaj bhi uske Maa ki aatma wahi par leti hui he.



Khair, puri raat waha guzarne ke baad jab Subah ka ujala dikhne laga, Rana gadi lekar kahi chala jata he. Dopeher ke waqt Rana ne Abdul ko call kar diya. Abdul is waqt Aksh ke saath mojud tha. Kuch zaruri baate karne ke baad Rana call cut karne laga lekin.....

Shahid: kya keh raha tha Rana?
Abdul: ab itna nuksan hua he, to kahi na kahi use bharna he na, to usi ke bare me baat chal rahi thi.....
Aksh: bhar le Rana, jitna ho sake apna nuksan bhar le.... Ek ke baad ek vaar karta jaunga tujhpar, jabtak ke tu khud mujhse apni Maut na maang le.....
Wo bahot hi gusse me apne daat piste hue kehta he.

Lekin waha gadbad ye ho gayi ke Abdul call cut karna bhul gaya, or Rana ne call cut karne ke liye mobile apne kaan se niche hi kiya tha ke use unki baate sunayi deti he. Or ye sab sunkar Rana sadme me chala jata he.

Rana: Abdul.......

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Jab Abdul Aksh se milkar wapis laut raha tha, tabb use Rana ka call agaya, or usne Abdul ko jald se jald milne ke liye Bhopal ke bahar bula liya.


Der raat Abdul Rana ki batayi jagah par pahoch gaya, Rana ne use kamre me bitha kar ek box kholne ke liye de diya. Or khud uthkar uske piche khada ho gaya. Abdul ne jese hi box open kiya, usme se Rukhsar ki tasveer nikli, jo dekh kar Abdul charo khane chitt ho gaya. Lekin tabhi use ek or jhatka lagta he, jab use apne sir ke piche Gun point hone ka ehsas hua.


To Be Continued.......

To Guys Ye tha aaj ka Update, i know length zyada nahi he, lekin bass kuch bato ko focus karna tha is Update me. And next Update Chapter 3 ka last or dhamake dar Update hoga, then is kahani ke 4th Chapter "Frozen Romance" ki Shuruwat hogi. To saath bane rahe.

agar update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. agla update jald hi ayega till then stay tuned and keep smiling

 

[Qaatil]

8th Update of chapter 3 posted, Give A Like And Don't Forget To Post Your Precious Feedback ❤

Akash aya bhi sakshi ke haath lekin nikal gaya lekin kahen na kahen ankhon he ankhon ne ek dusre ko pehchan toh jarur liya hoga jiska ehsas jld he hoga aur ab dekhna aage kya hota hai...

Intazar rahega bhai update ka mind divert bhi ho jayega dhire dhire

Story ko fir se write karne ke liye thank you so much...God bless you...waiting your amazing update

Bhai unki kami to khud bhagwan bhi aa kr nhi puri kr skta bs aapne aap thodi koshish krni pade gi k jindgi shuru ho phir sai ..baki hum aapke sath hai stay strong nd rest in peace ur mother nd grandma ..

Bahut shandar update. Mere paas shabd kam pad gaye he tarif k liye. Bhale hi aapne thoda fast story dikhayi par har patra k sath barabar nyay kiya. Emotions love trejady ka bhandar tha. Bhai aapne ek punch line sakshi k dwara di he ki har khubsurat kahani to adhuri hi rahti he par me bhai aapse request karta hu ki aapki itani khubsurat rachna ko adhuri mat chhod dena. Nice update brother. Vese next update kab aayega.

sahi kaha bhai.

Thank you bhai...ye story bahat hi jyda achchha hai...waiting your next update...

Bhaiya mn apki khani ka silent reader hoon apki dosri khani b parhi boht achi thi full of emotions pr apki ic khani k start mn Jo seen dikhya gya osy soch k dr b lagta hy k ghoom phir k khani mn wo moor too aana hi hy ici liay kamoshi sy khani Read kr rha tha pr aaj socha itni achi khani ki tareef nh karna boht zyadti hogi

Pr kuch swal heen

Mansi k bhai ko marny k baad dosri larki ka zikar aaya too wo larki khee Sakshi too nhi q k mansi too pehly sy onki nazro mn thi oor osy dhondny ki baat samjh nhi aatiap ki khani ki hr update ka besabri sy intyzar rehta hy

Sunday tak sabhi reviews clear

badhiya update bhai ji

KYA BAAT KYA BAAT

Qatil sir ur story is best this story is one of my favourite stories i love it & i eagerly waiting for your new update

Waiting bhai log.

Baught badhia update h bhai

Waiting

Wo ishq hai tumse mera favorite story hai aur hamesha favorite hi rahega...aur mujhe lagta hao ye story bhi bahat hi achchha hai

Ye storie main ne bookmark me save ki thi parhne ke liye jab ye shuru huwi thi lekin phir yaad he nahi raha aj bookmarks khole to saamne ye storie aa gayi sach me kabile tareef storie hai parhte parhte main ne socha ke iss ko pehle kiu nahi parha lekin ab lag raha hai is ko abhi parh ker galti ker di ab intezar he jan le ga iss ke ek update parhne ke baad dusra update kholne me jitna time lag raha tha wo waqt he mujhe zehar lag raha tha Ab to samjho intezar ho ga he nahi Main itna acha review de nahi sakta jitne ki ye storie haqdar hai bus ye kahu ga speechless har kirdar bohat ache tareeke se paish kia hai ap ne har feeling ubhar ke saamne ayi hai ek ek scene dil ko chune wala tha bohat arse baad aisi storie parhne ko mili hai sab updates parh liye hai iss liye hai ye ek naya reader jur gaya hai ab ap ke saath jaldi jaldi update do waiting for next update

Waiting Qaatil si

Ok bhai

Nice update

Waiting

Mast update hai

Nice introduction.......

Jhakaasssss

Super

Next update Qaatil sir aap kab de rho ho

Awesome update

lajwaab update bro

Fantastic update. There seems to be only love between the siblings. Agar lust bhi hota toh aur bhi maza aata.







But please continue as per your story.







I am enjoying it. Thanks

Next part

aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update

sure @Qatil99 bhai aapki story hi itni interesting hai ke banda khud ba khud juda rehta hai...keep writing bro...we readers will definitely support you.

Super update







Ye turning update h







Keep posting

Very good starting and nice script







Full paisa wasool performance.







Waiting for the next update.

Nice update waiting for next

Atulniya Update sirji























Most beautiful scene of this Update ❤

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Nice start bro

Super se bhi uper update

shandar update

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Lajawab update

Nice

Superb Starting bro keep it up

Ohhh sirf poster be hi mera lund kada kiya

Awesome update

Super

Bahut badhiya update bhai

Good name of story.

Me janta hu ke me bht late hu but Congratulations for the story, or kasam se bht hi shandar likh rhe ho, agle update ka intezar he.

Superb update bhai......

Fantastic update..bhai

nice update .waise santosh ne zabardasti science me daal diya aksh ko ..







aur teacher to wakai me ghatiya type tha ,pehle hi din hausla badhane ki jagah taane maarne laga aur maa baap se complain bhi kar di ..







ab aksh class change karna chahta hai isse sakshi naraj ho gayi par aksh ko ghar aane se bura kyu lagta hai .

Bdiya update bhai ji















Update padte padte kab khtm ho jata h pta nhi chalta















Bhai mere hisab se do updates ikathe diya karo to story padne me bhi dilchaspi rhegi chahe do din ke baad update do















Age apki marzi

Nice update..

Aksh does not want to study but he wants to be a successful man, that's a good thing. I have said this before and now I am saying here again that there is no fault of anyone, just need to understand each other and it is not good to have controversy again and again. Sakshi is intelligent and good, taking everyone along and caring. Send that teacher to me, I teach him. If someone says something wrong to Aksh, Sakshi does not like it, reflect her love in anger.







As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.







Thank You...

Shandar Dumdar UpdateAksh Kahin per Bhi galat nahi hai, maa baap ko apne faisle kuch had tak apne baccho per thopna kam kar dene chayiye unhe apne baccho ko moivate karna chayiye saath dene chayiye agar bacche bhatag bhi jaye tho unhe sahi raaste mein lane ka kartawya bhi maa baap ka hai jo ki santosh aur radha mein nahi dekha de rahi hai aur ek taraf yeh zalim zamana to kisis ko bhi chain se zene nahi dete aksar school life mein college life mein, humhe demotivate karna aam baath hogayi log puchthe unhi ko hai zo intelegent, smart, hota hai. Aksh ke saath bhi wahi ho raha hai.







Dekthe hai Aksh ke behaviour mein kya changes aate hai....







Kya aksh apni manzil per pouch payega ya fir yunhi batag tha rahe ga.???







dekthe aage kya hota.....







Waiting for next.....

Shandar Bhai

Khubsurat Update Qaatil bhai ❤







Pyar, dard, kuch karne ka junun sabka kamal combination tha, Next Update ka intezar rahega bhai ❤

For completed 25k views on your story thread.....

hum mera manna hai baap login ko bete ki bhi sunni chahiye wo kya chahta hai kuch usko uske hisaab se bhi aage badhne dena chahiye jabardasti har baat thopna nai chahiye uspar lekin kuch mamle me jaise study me wo kya chahta hai karna kaam kya pasand usko koi bhi subject chota nai hota ok..ab aate hain nibbi par to nibbi na wo chutiya hota hai sayad

Waiting For Next Update

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.







Bahut khoob superb

Waiting bro

Intazar rahega bhai







Or kya chapter 2 me inke pyar ki Shuruwat hogi?

Waiting

Tu hi hai meri jeene ki ummid ,







tujhse judi hai dil ki preet.







Tu hasen to bahare gulzar ho,







Aur roye to jeena hi duswar ho.















Ho sakta hai bhavishya me akash ko kafi muskilo ka samna karna pade lekin jab tak sakshi ka hath sath fir darne ki kya baat hai.







jaise kahani ka title hai us hisab se akash aur sakshi ka rishta aage kya karwat lega ye to bhavishya ki gart me chhupa hai.















Ab kahta hu ek bhai ke point of view se ki bachpan se abtak ke jeevan ke safar me sakshi ne akas ke liye ek bahan se badhakar maa aur best friend ka hak ada kiya hai.







vaise dono bhai bahan ka prem hai adbhut.







Hum kahani aur lekhak mahodaya ke achchhe bhavishya ki kamna karte hai.







Love you dear brother







Waiting for the next update.

Superb update bro

Fabulous update bro

Good story

Bohot hi badiya update bhai muje laga sakshi Akash se apne pyar ka Izhaar kar degi par nahi kia ab age dekhte h kya hota h

Waiting bro

नमस्कार सर जी।







कहानी का पहला भाग आज पढ़ा।















कहानी की शुरुआत देखकर लगता है कि आकाश और साक्षी के माता पिता राधा और संतोष की किसी ने हत्या कर दी है।















अच्छा साक्षी और आकाश के जन्म में बस एक मिनट का अंतर है और दोनों बड़े शरारती है।







पूरा घर सिर पर उठा रखा है दोनों ने।















लेकिन दोनों भाई बहन में बहुत प्यार भी है।।















कहानी की शुरुआत बहुत अच्छी है।







बहुत जल्द पूरी कहानी पढूंगी।

behatrin story bro....................















mene aapki 1st story read ki thi....kafi acchi story thi















but iss story ka to level hi alag h 1st story se kafi improvement kiya h aapne............















hero k emotions uski feelings or life ke sangharsh ke sath sath uski apne sapne ko pura krne ki lalak ko kafi acche se describe kiya h aapne............















sat hi villen ki darindgi or samaj m jahar gholte drugs k bare m kafi acche se likha h .................















whi ek successful businessman ke roop m aman ko bhut acche se prastut kiya h jisme uska ground se juda hona bhi dikhaya h .......















sath hi apni 1st deal pura nhi hone jo ese ldke ne mna kiya tha jiska ye startup tha usse hone wali becheni or life k prati uski najariya ko bdlne wale pal bhi kafi khubsurat the.......................















overall outstanding story till continued update................















next update ka intzar rahega bro.....................

Bhai next update kab ayega?

Waiting for the update qaatil bhaai please post the next update soon.....

Waiting

Zabardast update bht hi kamal ki story writing. Mansi or Sakshi twins hain or dono aksh ki sisters hain agr ye twist hay to bhai bht bara dhamaka honay wala hay, eagerly waiting for next update bhai keep up the fantabolous work

Baught hi shaandaar update h







❤

Umda

Romance is oozing in this story.

Waiting

the story maker

Nice story keep it bhai

Waiting for update....

Bhai thoda fast update do na...waiting nahi ho raha...bahat hi interesting story hai bhai

Qaatil sir apke 25-30 minutes pure ho gye ab to update de do abhi tak ankhe bhi nhi nichi ja rhi jaldi kro bhai

Haha! Thanks a lot bhai!

Aap bas aise hi likhte raho aur readers ko entertain karte raho.

Wishing you good luck!

Story is very good with emotional touches but mansi should be alive

 

[Sauravb]

Nice update bhai but mansi ka maut nehni hona tha

 

[Angelmahi]

Chapter 3 - Qaatil

Update 8

Mega Update​

Word Count: 3160
Estimated Reading Time: 00:15:00



Raat ke kareeb 2 baje hue the, or Aksh ki aakho ke samne sirf or sirf Sakshi ka chehra dikhayi de raha tha, jab bhi wo aakhe band kar ke sone ki koshish karta, bass Sakshi ki yaade use sata rahi thi.

"Dada..... Dada..... Dada uth bhi ja na ab.... Teri wajah se Hume ghumne jane me late ho jayega..... Dada....."
Yaha Sakshi subah subah chain se soye Aksh ki pith par beth kar use jagane ki koshish me lagi thi, lekin Aksh to sabkuch bhulkar ghode beche soya tha. Ab Sakshi ko bahot gussa ane laga tha, wo bhagte hue kamre se bahar agayi, or dusre kamre me rakha danda lekar firse apne kamre me agayi. Usne ek or baar Aksh ko uthne ka moka diya, lekin wo nahi mana. Ab Sakshi ne danda zor se Aksh ki pith me maar diya, jis se Aksh ki nind turant tut gayi. Wo dard me chillate hue bed par uthkar beth gaya, or samne Gusse me khadi Sakshi ko dekh liya.
Aksh: aye Chipkali..... Ye kya kar rahi he tu?
Sakshi: itni der se tujhe utha rahi hu lekin tu to uthne ka naam nahi le raha tha, Baba aaj hume ghumane le jane wale he.... Bhul gaya....
Wo bahot hi gusse me chillakar kehti he.
Aksh: to isme marne ki kya zarurat thi.... Chipkali.....
Uski baat sunkar Sakshi or zyada gussa ho gayi, or dande se Aksh ko marne ke liye aage badh gayi, lekin Aksh jaldi se us kamre se bahar bhaag jata he.

Aksh: Aai.... Baba..... Aai dekho ye ladki pagal ho gayi he.....
Wo bhagte hue bahar kaam kar rahi Radha ke piche chupte hue kehta he. Jese hi Radha ki nazar samne se gusse me arahi Sakshi par padi to wo bhi chok gayi.

Radha: Sakshi.... Kya kar rahi he tu?
Sakshi: Aai, ye bandar mujhe humesha chipkali bulata he.... Aaj is bandar ko dande se maar maar kar chup karwa dungi.....
Radha: accha? Beta wo danda bhi tujhse zyada lamba he.... Thik se pakad to sahi use.....
Wo Sakshi ka mazak banate hue kehti he. Jo sunkar Sakshi ko muh gusse se ful gaya. Wo danda wahi fek kar kamre me bhag gayi.
Radha: beta zyada waqt matt lagana, ghumne jana he na?
Wo Aksh ko apne samne lakar kehti he.
Aksh: Ho Aai.....
Fir Aksh kamre ke paas akar dhire se kamre me jhak kar dekhne lagta he. Jaha Sakshi gusse me bed par leti hui thi. Aksh dara sehma andar agaya.

Aksh: k.... Kya hua Sakshi.....
Sakshi: kuch nahi hua..... Bandar......
Wo kisi sher ki tarah dahadte hue kehti he. Aksh bhi us se kuch na kehne me hi apni bhalayi samajhta he. Radha ne akar use kapde nikal kar de diye. Or apna kaam karne chali gayi. Aksh ne jab apni t-shirt nikali tabb Sakshi ne dekha ke uski pith par nishan bann gaya he. Sakshi bed se uthkar Aksh ke piche akar khadi ho gayi, or uske nishan par apna haath fer diya, jis se Aksh ko thoda dard ho gaya, or wo Sakshi ki taraf mud gaya.
Sakshi: ye kya hua teri pith par Aksh.....
Aksh: huhhhh..... Khud dande se mujhe marti he, or fir puchti he ye kya hua..... Chipkali......
Itna kehkar wo aage bathroom ki taraf badh jata he, lekin ye sunkar Sakshi ki aakhe bhar ayi, Aksh ne jab mudkar use dekha to paya Sakshi rone lagg gayi he.
Aksh: are..... Tu rone kyu lagg gayi Sakshi?
Wo aage akar apne chote chote haatho se Sakshi ke aasu saaf karte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: tujhe meri wajah se chott lagg gayi na.....
Aksh: are me to bilkul thik hu.... Dekh, me kaha ro raha hu?
Sakshi: to fir teri pith par chot ka Nishan kese aya?
Aksh: are wo to.... Ahhh... Wo.... Ab tu ye sab chhod na, hume ghumne bhi jana he na?
Wo baat ko sambhalte hue kehta he, ab Sakshi bhi apna rona band kar ke muskurane lagg gayi. Aksh wapis bathroom me jane laga, lekin tabhi Sakshi ne aage akar use piche se hi rok diya. Or Aksh ki chot par halke se chum liya.
Aksh: kya kar rahi he Sakshi?
Wo Piche mudkar Sakshi se pichta he.
Sakshi: are Bavlat..... Chot par aise karne se dard gayab ho jata he....
Wo muskurate hue Aksh se kehti he.


Pata nahi kyu lekin ye sari yaade Aksh ka chain chine ja rahi thi, Aksh gusse me upar chatt par agaya, or waha akar kafi gusse me apna workout karne lagg gaya. Kuch der baad Shahid aise hi upar chala ata he, or usne Aksh ko dekhte hi samajh liya ke wo kafi frustrated he.

Shahid: Aksh..... Itni raat ko yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Wo Aksh ke piche khada hokar puchta he, lekin Aksh uski baat ka koi jawab nahi deta.
Shahid: waise Aksh..... Tum Sakshi kyu milna nahi chahte?
Uski baat sunkar Aksh ko or bhi zyada gussa agaya, usne gusse me Shahid ko ghura or firse niche jane laga. Lekin tabhi Shahid ne use rok liya.
Shahid: Aksh.... Kya baat he? Jis Sakshi ke liye tum mujhe jaan se marne ke liye tayar the.... Aaj usi Sakshi ka naam sunkar aakho me itna gussa? Kyu Aksh?
Aksh: tumhe ye sab jaan ne ki koi zarurat nahi he.... Mera hamdard bann ne koshish matt karo.... Mene pehli hi kaha tha, mujhe apna badla pura karne me kisi ki zarurat nahi he.... Na tumhari na Abdul ki....
Wo gusse me Shahid ko dhakka marte hue kehta he. Or waha se chala jata he. Shahid bhi uthkar niche chala gaya.

Wahi dusri taraf Sakshi ki aakho se bhi nind koso dur thi, wo bass baar baar karvate badal badal kar sone ki koshish me lagi thi. Lekin jab use nind nahi ati to wo Aksh ki tasveer apne haatho me lekar us se baate karne lagti he.

Sakshi (mann me): Aksh kya tu mujhe maaf karega? Kyu ke aaj jo kuch halaat he, uski zimmedari kahi na kahi me bhi hu.... Please Aksh, teri Sakshi ko maaf kar dena.... Jo kuch tune khoya he, wo mene bhi to khoya he na? Please maaf kar dena apni Sakshi ko please.......
Wo Aksh ki tasveer ko apne sine se lagaye ro ro kar apna mann halka kar rahi thi, or aise hi rote rote der raat uski aaakh lagg jati he.


Agle din sabkuch as it is ho raha tha, waha Shahid akela bethkar sari Guns saaf kar raha tha tabhi Aksh uske paas akar beth jata he, or Guns saaf karne me lagg jata he.

Aksh: Shahid, Mujhe.... Mujhe maaf karna.....
Wo Shahid se nazre milaye bina kehta he.
Shahid: maaf.... Kis baat ke liye maafi mang rahe ho?
Wo herani se Aksh ki taraf dekhte hue puchta he.
Aksh: wo.... Kal raat.... Kal raat mujhe....
Shahid: koi baat nahi Aksh.... Me to bhul bhi gaya us baat ko... Tum bhi bhul jao....
Wo Aksh ki baat bich me kaat te hue uske kandhe par haath rakh kar kehta he.

Shahid: waise tumhe ek free ki salah zarur dena chahunga me...... Aksh kya he na, agar zindagi me apno ka saath na ho to zindagi kisi kaam ki nahi rehti... Tum jante ho me or Mamu jab kisi begunah ladke ladkiyo ko drugs ke nashe me dalkar use Rana ke hawale kar dete he, to hum Guilty feel nahi karte.... Ab to hum Shayad yaha se kabhi bahar bhi nahi apayenge..... Or iski wajah apno ke saath ki kami he.... Me tumhe bass yahi samjhana chahta hu ke tumhari zindagi me koi he, jiski saase tumhare liye hi chal rahi he... Or mano ya na mano, lekin tumhare dil me Sakshi ke liye aaj bhi utna hi pyaar, utni hi chinta he jitni pehle thi.... Bass tumhari aakho me uske liye thoda sa gussa he.... Me nahi janta ye gussa kyu he, lekin aap gussa bhi sirf us se ho sakte ho jis se pyaar karte ho.....

Itna kehkar Shahid saaf hui Guns uthkar dusre kamre me chala jata he. Lekin uski baato ne Aksh ko soch ne me majbur kar diya. Lekin Aksh ke sar par ye badle ki aag is kadar chadi hui thi ke use sirf apna Badla sabse upar lagg raha tha.


Ye to thi Aksh ki kahani, lekin yaha Rana subah subah apni saline wagairah nikal kat kamre ke bahar agaya, tabhi Abdul ne use dekh liya.

Abdul: Boss..... Aapne Saline kyu nikal di? Kuch chahiye tha to mujhe bata dete....
Rana: ha... Gadi ki chabi chahiye.....
Abdul: gadi? Kyu Boss?
Rana: Abdul, kuch waqt ke liye is shor sharabe se dur jana chahta hu.....
Abdul: lekin is halat me.....
Rana: Abdul.....
Wo Abdul ki baat bich me kaat te hue use chup kara deta he.
Rana: bass kuch baad Rana firse apne purane roop ke saath lautega.... Chabi do.....
Uski baat par Abdul gadi ki chabi Rana ko de deta he. Rana bhi turant waha se nikal gaya. Abdul bilkul heran tha, ke Aksh ke karnamo ne Rana ko is kadar tod diya he.

Khair, sabki dopehar bilkul shanti me guzar rahi thi, waha Sakshi bass soch rahi thi, ke Qaatil takk kese pahocha jaye, kyu ke ab use ye kaam akele karna tha, kyu ke Anant ne koi bhi thos kadam uthane se pehle Uski raay lene ke liye kaha tha, or agar Sakshi is waqt Qaatil ke bate me kuch kehti to Anant use kuch bhi karne se mana kar deta.

Raat ko Abdul bhi Aksh se milne agaya tha, is waqt Aksh, Abdul or Shahid chatt par bethe hue the, or baki tino kuch zaruri saman lene ke liye bahar gaye hue the.

Abdul: waise Aksh, tumne bahot buri tarah se tod diya Rana ko.....
Aksh: ye to bass Shuruwat he, itni battar maut dunga use, ki usne kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha hoga.....
Abdul: lekin ek dikkat he....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh Abdul ko ek takk dekhne lagta he.
Abdul: Rana kahi chala gaya he....
Aksh: chala gaya? Kaha Chala gaya?
Abdul: wo to nahi pata.... Lekin yaad rakhna Aksh, wo jab bhi wapsi karega, to keher Mach sakta he....
Aksh: bahot se keher dekh chuka hu me zindagi me..... Apne pariwar ko aakho ke samne marta dekhne se bada keher koi nahi hota.... To ye Rana kya kar lega ab mera?

Kuch der takk sab bass aise hi bethe rahe, tabhi Aksh Abdul se sawal puchna chahta tha.

Aksh: tumne mujhe Rana ke atit ke bare me kuch kyu nahi bataya.....
Uske sidhe sawal se Abdul ko laga kahi Aksh ko Rana ke atit ke bare me pata chal gaya ho.
Abdul: kesa Atit Aksh.... me Rana ke atit ke bare me kuch nahi janta.....
Aksh: aisa kyu? Agar Rana ki choti se choti baat tum jante ho to fir ye sab........
Abdul: Aksh, Mera or Rana ka koi khun ka rishta nahi he, jo wo apne sare dukh dard mujhse baate.....
Wo Aksh ki baat bich me kaat te hue kafi Sakht lehze me kehta he. Fir kuch der ke liye waha aise hi sannata cha gaya. Waha mojud har insan ke dimag me apne apne plan chal rahe the. Kuch der baad Abdul bhi waha se nikal gaya.


12 ghante ke safar ke baad Rana Bhopal pahoch gaya tha, usne gadi aisi jagah le li, jo ek khadi ki tarah thi. Waha dur dur takk koi insan mojud nahi tha. Thodi der ki drive ke baad Rana ek ped ke samne pahoch gaya. Rana ne jese hi gadi roki, waha zor dar barish shuru ho gayi. Rana door open kar ke gadi ke bahar akar khada ho gaya. Kuch hi Seconds me Rana puri tarah se bhig chuka tha, or tabhi waha zordar bijli kadakti he, jis se wo ilaka kuch Seconds ke liye saaf saaf nazar ane laga tha, or tabhi Rana ko wo ped ke paas ka kissa yaad agaya.


Flashback:


Year 1982 Bhopal, India.


Raat ke ghane andhere me tez barasti barish ke bich, gaon ke log is ped ke samne haatho me lantern liye khade the. Waha 2 logo ko ped se latkaya hua tha, kuch log ye dekh kar khush the, or latkaye gaye logo ke pariwar wale gid gida kar unki jaan Baksh dene ki bhik maang rahe the. Tabhi ek baccha samne khade aadmi ke paas rote hue ajata he.

Baccha: Kaka.... Kaka aap Maa ko utarte kyu nahi? Kaka.... Kuch boliye na..... Kaka Bauji kaha he?
Wo baccha Darasal or koi nahi, Deep, yani ke Rana tha. Wo Joshi Kaka se ped par bandhe apne baap ko niche utarne ke liye keh raha tha, lekin Joshi bass apna sar jhukaye waha khada raha. Ped par latke log Rana ki Maa, or Gaon ke sabse izzatdar vyaktiyo me se ek Rehmat Ali the. Pure bhopal me Rehmat Ali ko bahot izzat di jati thi, unka swabhav unki baate yaha ke har logo ke dil me jagah banati thi, lekin aaj mahol bilkul ulta tha. Waha Rana ped par latki apni Maa ke per pakad kar ro raha tha. Or Rehmat Ali ki Biwi jo ke pet se thi, use logo ne pakad kar rok rakha tha. Uski halat bhi ro ro kar bilkul tut gayi thi.

In sabke bich waha khade ek aadmi, Shantilal Virani aage akar Rana ki Maa ke paas jane lagta he, lekin sablog unhe chillane lagte he, Shantilal mudkar ek nazar Joshi Kaka par dalte he, lekin Joshi unse apni nazar chura kar nichi kar lete he. Shantilal Rana ko pakad kar piche karne lagte he.

Shantilal: beta.... Beta ruko..... Kya kar rahe ho tum?
Rana: Mama Ji, Mama ji.... Maa ko niche utar dijiye na....
Wo Shantilal ke Haath apne hatho me thamkar kehta he.
Shantilal: beta me kya kar sakta hu? Ye sab to sirf tumhare Joshi Kaka hi kar sakte he.... Mere haath bandhe hue he beta....
Wo Rana ka chehra apne hatho me thamkar kehta he. Uski baat sunkar Rana daud kar jata he, or sidha Joshi Kaka ke pero me gir kar rone lagta he.
Rana: Kaka..... Aap Maa ko utarne ke liye kahiye na.... Meri Maa marr jayegi Kaka, Maa marr jayegi......
Wo Joshi Kaka ke pero me gid gidate hue keh raha tha, Joshi Rana ko apne pero se hata kar khud uske samne ghutno par beth jate he, or Rana ka chehra apne haatho me tham lete he.
Joshi: beta... Beta.... Me kuch nahi kar sakta.... Mujhe maaf kar dijiye....
Ye sab kehte hue unki aakho me dard, Chehre par Sharmindagi ye sab dikh raha tha, lekin Rana abhi ye sare hav bhav samajhne ke liye bahot chota tha.
Rana: kyu kuch nahi kar sakte? Aapki baat sablog mante he.... Fir aap kyu kuch nahi kar sakte.... kahiye na Kaka.....
Uski baat par Joshi ki nazar Rehmat Ali, or uski biwi par chali jati he. Or Joshi apni nazre jhuka lete he. Lekin tabhi waha sab log zor zor se chillane lagte he, kyu ke ped par latke dono logo ne apni jaan chhod di thi. Ek aadmi aage akar Rana ki Maa or Rehmat Ali ko niche utar deta he, jese unhe niche utara gaya, Rana or Rehmat Ali ki biwi waha daud padte he. Ye chotasa baccha Rana apni Maa ko jagane ki koshish kar raha tha, lekin Rehmat Ali ki biwi ko pata tha ke uska pati ab is duniya me nahi raha, isliye wo Rehmat Ali ke sine par sar rakh kar roye ja rahi thi.
Rana: Maa..... Maa utho na.... Maa apni aakhe kholo.... Maa.....
Wo apni Maa ka chehra haatho me thamkar use jagane ki koshish kar raha tha lekin Ab Rana ko bhi ehsas ho gaya ke uski Maa is duniya me nahi rahi. Or wo bhi apni Maa ke sine me sar rakh kar rone laga. Ab waha se sablog dhire dhire jane lage, waha is waqt sirf Rehmat Ali ki Biwi, Shantilal, Rana or Joshi the. Shantilal aage akar Rana ko sambhalne ki koshish kar raha tha, lekin Rana kisi ki sunn ne walo me se nahi tha. Ye dekh kar Joshi Kaka aage agaye, or Rana ko pakad kar piche kar diya, Rana bhi unse lipat kar rone laga.


Present:


Ye sab yaad kar ke Rana rone lagta he, barish ki wajah se uske aasu to chup gaye the, lekin wo dard, wo chot chup nahi sakti thi. Rana aage akar usi jagah beth gaya, jaha akhri baar usne apni Maa ko dekha tha. Rana us zameen par apne haath fer raha tha or roye ja raha tha, ye sochkar ke aaj bhi uske Maa ki aatma wahi par leti hui he.



Khair, puri raat waha guzarne ke baad jab Subah ka ujala dikhne laga, Rana gadi lekar kahi chala jata he. Dopeher ke waqt Rana ne Abdul ko call kar diya. Abdul is waqt Aksh ke saath mojud tha. Kuch zaruri baate karne ke baad Rana call cut karne laga lekin.....

Shahid: kya keh raha tha Rana?
Abdul: ab itna nuksan hua he, to kahi na kahi use bharna he na, to usi ke bare me baat chal rahi thi.....
Aksh: bhar le Rana, jitna ho sake apna nuksan bhar le.... Ek ke baad ek vaar karta jaunga tujhpar, jabtak ke tu khud mujhse apni Maut na maang le.....
Wo bahot hi gusse me apne daat piste hue kehta he.

Lekin waha gadbad ye ho gayi ke Abdul call cut karna bhul gaya, or Rana ne call cut karne ke liye mobile apne kaan se niche hi kiya tha ke use unki baate sunayi deti he. Or ye sab sunkar Rana sadme me chala jata he.

Rana: Abdul.......

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Jab Abdul Aksh se milkar wapis laut raha tha, tabb use Rana ka call agaya, or usne Abdul ko jald se jald milne ke liye Bhopal ke bahar bula liya.


Der raat Abdul Rana ki batayi jagah par pahoch gaya, Rana ne use kamre me bitha kar ek box kholne ke liye de diya. Or khud uthkar uske piche khada ho gaya. Abdul ne jese hi box open kiya, usme se Rukhsar ki tasveer nikli, jo dekh kar Abdul charo khane chitt ho gaya. Lekin tabhi use ek or jhatka lagta he, jab use apne sir ke piche Gun point hone ka ehsas hua.


To Be Continued.......

To Guys Ye tha aaj ka Update, i know length zyada nahi he, lekin bass kuch bato ko focus karna tha is Update me. And next Update Chapter 3 ka last or dhamake dar Update hoga, then is kahani ke 4th Chapter "Frozen Romance" ki Shuruwat hogi. To saath bane rahe.

agar update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. agla update jald hi ayega till then stay tuned and keep smiling

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Amazing update bhai…lgta hai rana kai attet sai abdul kai attet ka bhi koi to samabnd hai khin rehmat ali ka beta to nhi

 

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Super Duper awesome update Red Skull bhai....

Ye Abdul har baar chutiyapa karta hai aur pakda jata hai.....

 

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Chapter 3 - Qaatil

Update 8

Mega Update​

Word Count: 3160
Estimated Reading Time: 00:15:00



Raat ke kareeb 2 baje hue the, or Aksh ki aakho ke samne sirf or sirf Sakshi ka chehra dikhayi de raha tha, jab bhi wo aakhe band kar ke sone ki koshish karta, bass Sakshi ki yaade use sata rahi thi.

"Dada..... Dada..... Dada uth bhi ja na ab.... Teri wajah se Hume ghumne jane me late ho jayega..... Dada....."
Yaha Sakshi subah subah chain se soye Aksh ki pith par beth kar use jagane ki koshish me lagi thi, lekin Aksh to sabkuch bhulkar ghode beche soya tha. Ab Sakshi ko bahot gussa ane laga tha, wo bhagte hue kamre se bahar agayi, or dusre kamre me rakha danda lekar firse apne kamre me agayi. Usne ek or baar Aksh ko uthne ka moka diya, lekin wo nahi mana. Ab Sakshi ne danda zor se Aksh ki pith me maar diya, jis se Aksh ki nind turant tut gayi. Wo dard me chillate hue bed par uthkar beth gaya, or samne Gusse me khadi Sakshi ko dekh liya.
Aksh: aye Chipkali..... Ye kya kar rahi he tu?
Sakshi: itni der se tujhe utha rahi hu lekin tu to uthne ka naam nahi le raha tha, Baba aaj hume ghumane le jane wale he.... Bhul gaya....
Wo bahot hi gusse me chillakar kehti he.
Aksh: to isme marne ki kya zarurat thi.... Chipkali.....
Uski baat sunkar Sakshi or zyada gussa ho gayi, or dande se Aksh ko marne ke liye aage badh gayi, lekin Aksh jaldi se us kamre se bahar bhaag jata he.

Aksh: Aai.... Baba..... Aai dekho ye ladki pagal ho gayi he.....
Wo bhagte hue bahar kaam kar rahi Radha ke piche chupte hue kehta he. Jese hi Radha ki nazar samne se gusse me arahi Sakshi par padi to wo bhi chok gayi.

Radha: Sakshi.... Kya kar rahi he tu?
Sakshi: Aai, ye bandar mujhe humesha chipkali bulata he.... Aaj is bandar ko dande se maar maar kar chup karwa dungi.....
Radha: accha? Beta wo danda bhi tujhse zyada lamba he.... Thik se pakad to sahi use.....
Wo Sakshi ka mazak banate hue kehti he. Jo sunkar Sakshi ko muh gusse se ful gaya. Wo danda wahi fek kar kamre me bhag gayi.
Radha: beta zyada waqt matt lagana, ghumne jana he na?
Wo Aksh ko apne samne lakar kehti he.
Aksh: Ho Aai.....
Fir Aksh kamre ke paas akar dhire se kamre me jhak kar dekhne lagta he. Jaha Sakshi gusse me bed par leti hui thi. Aksh dara sehma andar agaya.

Aksh: k.... Kya hua Sakshi.....
Sakshi: kuch nahi hua..... Bandar......
Wo kisi sher ki tarah dahadte hue kehti he. Aksh bhi us se kuch na kehne me hi apni bhalayi samajhta he. Radha ne akar use kapde nikal kar de diye. Or apna kaam karne chali gayi. Aksh ne jab apni t-shirt nikali tabb Sakshi ne dekha ke uski pith par nishan bann gaya he. Sakshi bed se uthkar Aksh ke piche akar khadi ho gayi, or uske nishan par apna haath fer diya, jis se Aksh ko thoda dard ho gaya, or wo Sakshi ki taraf mud gaya.
Sakshi: ye kya hua teri pith par Aksh.....
Aksh: huhhhh..... Khud dande se mujhe marti he, or fir puchti he ye kya hua..... Chipkali......
Itna kehkar wo aage bathroom ki taraf badh jata he, lekin ye sunkar Sakshi ki aakhe bhar ayi, Aksh ne jab mudkar use dekha to paya Sakshi rone lagg gayi he.
Aksh: are..... Tu rone kyu lagg gayi Sakshi?
Wo aage akar apne chote chote haatho se Sakshi ke aasu saaf karte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: tujhe meri wajah se chott lagg gayi na.....
Aksh: are me to bilkul thik hu.... Dekh, me kaha ro raha hu?
Sakshi: to fir teri pith par chot ka Nishan kese aya?
Aksh: are wo to.... Ahhh... Wo.... Ab tu ye sab chhod na, hume ghumne bhi jana he na?
Wo baat ko sambhalte hue kehta he, ab Sakshi bhi apna rona band kar ke muskurane lagg gayi. Aksh wapis bathroom me jane laga, lekin tabhi Sakshi ne aage akar use piche se hi rok diya. Or Aksh ki chot par halke se chum liya.
Aksh: kya kar rahi he Sakshi?
Wo Piche mudkar Sakshi se pichta he.
Sakshi: are Bavlat..... Chot par aise karne se dard gayab ho jata he....
Wo muskurate hue Aksh se kehti he.


Pata nahi kyu lekin ye sari yaade Aksh ka chain chine ja rahi thi, Aksh gusse me upar chatt par agaya, or waha akar kafi gusse me apna workout karne lagg gaya. Kuch der baad Shahid aise hi upar chala ata he, or usne Aksh ko dekhte hi samajh liya ke wo kafi frustrated he.

Shahid: Aksh..... Itni raat ko yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Wo Aksh ke piche khada hokar puchta he, lekin Aksh uski baat ka koi jawab nahi deta.
Shahid: waise Aksh..... Tum Sakshi kyu milna nahi chahte?
Uski baat sunkar Aksh ko or bhi zyada gussa agaya, usne gusse me Shahid ko ghura or firse niche jane laga. Lekin tabhi Shahid ne use rok liya.
Shahid: Aksh.... Kya baat he? Jis Sakshi ke liye tum mujhe jaan se marne ke liye tayar the.... Aaj usi Sakshi ka naam sunkar aakho me itna gussa? Kyu Aksh?
Aksh: tumhe ye sab jaan ne ki koi zarurat nahi he.... Mera hamdard bann ne koshish matt karo.... Mene pehli hi kaha tha, mujhe apna badla pura karne me kisi ki zarurat nahi he.... Na tumhari na Abdul ki....
Wo gusse me Shahid ko dhakka marte hue kehta he. Or waha se chala jata he. Shahid bhi uthkar niche chala gaya.

Wahi dusri taraf Sakshi ki aakho se bhi nind koso dur thi, wo bass baar baar karvate badal badal kar sone ki koshish me lagi thi. Lekin jab use nind nahi ati to wo Aksh ki tasveer apne haatho me lekar us se baate karne lagti he.

Sakshi (mann me): Aksh kya tu mujhe maaf karega? Kyu ke aaj jo kuch halaat he, uski zimmedari kahi na kahi me bhi hu.... Please Aksh, teri Sakshi ko maaf kar dena.... Jo kuch tune khoya he, wo mene bhi to khoya he na? Please maaf kar dena apni Sakshi ko please.......
Wo Aksh ki tasveer ko apne sine se lagaye ro ro kar apna mann halka kar rahi thi, or aise hi rote rote der raat uski aaakh lagg jati he.


Agle din sabkuch as it is ho raha tha, waha Shahid akela bethkar sari Guns saaf kar raha tha tabhi Aksh uske paas akar beth jata he, or Guns saaf karne me lagg jata he.

Aksh: Shahid, Mujhe.... Mujhe maaf karna.....
Wo Shahid se nazre milaye bina kehta he.
Shahid: maaf.... Kis baat ke liye maafi mang rahe ho?
Wo herani se Aksh ki taraf dekhte hue puchta he.
Aksh: wo.... Kal raat.... Kal raat mujhe....
Shahid: koi baat nahi Aksh.... Me to bhul bhi gaya us baat ko... Tum bhi bhul jao....
Wo Aksh ki baat bich me kaat te hue uske kandhe par haath rakh kar kehta he.

Shahid: waise tumhe ek free ki salah zarur dena chahunga me...... Aksh kya he na, agar zindagi me apno ka saath na ho to zindagi kisi kaam ki nahi rehti... Tum jante ho me or Mamu jab kisi begunah ladke ladkiyo ko drugs ke nashe me dalkar use Rana ke hawale kar dete he, to hum Guilty feel nahi karte.... Ab to hum Shayad yaha se kabhi bahar bhi nahi apayenge..... Or iski wajah apno ke saath ki kami he.... Me tumhe bass yahi samjhana chahta hu ke tumhari zindagi me koi he, jiski saase tumhare liye hi chal rahi he... Or mano ya na mano, lekin tumhare dil me Sakshi ke liye aaj bhi utna hi pyaar, utni hi chinta he jitni pehle thi.... Bass tumhari aakho me uske liye thoda sa gussa he.... Me nahi janta ye gussa kyu he, lekin aap gussa bhi sirf us se ho sakte ho jis se pyaar karte ho.....

Itna kehkar Shahid saaf hui Guns uthkar dusre kamre me chala jata he. Lekin uski baato ne Aksh ko soch ne me majbur kar diya. Lekin Aksh ke sar par ye badle ki aag is kadar chadi hui thi ke use sirf apna Badla sabse upar lagg raha tha.


Ye to thi Aksh ki kahani, lekin yaha Rana subah subah apni saline wagairah nikal kat kamre ke bahar agaya, tabhi Abdul ne use dekh liya.

Abdul: Boss..... Aapne Saline kyu nikal di? Kuch chahiye tha to mujhe bata dete....
Rana: ha... Gadi ki chabi chahiye.....
Abdul: gadi? Kyu Boss?
Rana: Abdul, kuch waqt ke liye is shor sharabe se dur jana chahta hu.....
Abdul: lekin is halat me.....
Rana: Abdul.....
Wo Abdul ki baat bich me kaat te hue use chup kara deta he.
Rana: bass kuch baad Rana firse apne purane roop ke saath lautega.... Chabi do.....
Uski baat par Abdul gadi ki chabi Rana ko de deta he. Rana bhi turant waha se nikal gaya. Abdul bilkul heran tha, ke Aksh ke karnamo ne Rana ko is kadar tod diya he.

Khair, sabki dopehar bilkul shanti me guzar rahi thi, waha Sakshi bass soch rahi thi, ke Qaatil takk kese pahocha jaye, kyu ke ab use ye kaam akele karna tha, kyu ke Anant ne koi bhi thos kadam uthane se pehle Uski raay lene ke liye kaha tha, or agar Sakshi is waqt Qaatil ke bate me kuch kehti to Anant use kuch bhi karne se mana kar deta.

Raat ko Abdul bhi Aksh se milne agaya tha, is waqt Aksh, Abdul or Shahid chatt par bethe hue the, or baki tino kuch zaruri saman lene ke liye bahar gaye hue the.

Abdul: waise Aksh, tumne bahot buri tarah se tod diya Rana ko.....
Aksh: ye to bass Shuruwat he, itni battar maut dunga use, ki usne kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha hoga.....
Abdul: lekin ek dikkat he....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh Abdul ko ek takk dekhne lagta he.
Abdul: Rana kahi chala gaya he....
Aksh: chala gaya? Kaha Chala gaya?
Abdul: wo to nahi pata.... Lekin yaad rakhna Aksh, wo jab bhi wapsi karega, to keher Mach sakta he....
Aksh: bahot se keher dekh chuka hu me zindagi me..... Apne pariwar ko aakho ke samne marta dekhne se bada keher koi nahi hota.... To ye Rana kya kar lega ab mera?

Kuch der takk sab bass aise hi bethe rahe, tabhi Aksh Abdul se sawal puchna chahta tha.

Aksh: tumne mujhe Rana ke atit ke bare me kuch kyu nahi bataya.....
Uske sidhe sawal se Abdul ko laga kahi Aksh ko Rana ke atit ke bare me pata chal gaya ho.
Abdul: kesa Atit Aksh.... me Rana ke atit ke bare me kuch nahi janta.....
Aksh: aisa kyu? Agar Rana ki choti se choti baat tum jante ho to fir ye sab........
Abdul: Aksh, Mera or Rana ka koi khun ka rishta nahi he, jo wo apne sare dukh dard mujhse baate.....
Wo Aksh ki baat bich me kaat te hue kafi Sakht lehze me kehta he. Fir kuch der ke liye waha aise hi sannata cha gaya. Waha mojud har insan ke dimag me apne apne plan chal rahe the. Kuch der baad Abdul bhi waha se nikal gaya.


12 ghante ke safar ke baad Rana Bhopal pahoch gaya tha, usne gadi aisi jagah le li, jo ek khadi ki tarah thi. Waha dur dur takk koi insan mojud nahi tha. Thodi der ki drive ke baad Rana ek ped ke samne pahoch gaya. Rana ne jese hi gadi roki, waha zor dar barish shuru ho gayi. Rana door open kar ke gadi ke bahar akar khada ho gaya. Kuch hi Seconds me Rana puri tarah se bhig chuka tha, or tabhi waha zordar bijli kadakti he, jis se wo ilaka kuch Seconds ke liye saaf saaf nazar ane laga tha, or tabhi Rana ko wo ped ke paas ka kissa yaad agaya.


Flashback:


Year 1982 Bhopal, India.


Raat ke ghane andhere me tez barasti barish ke bich, gaon ke log is ped ke samne haatho me lantern liye khade the. Waha 2 logo ko ped se latkaya hua tha, kuch log ye dekh kar khush the, or latkaye gaye logo ke pariwar wale gid gida kar unki jaan Baksh dene ki bhik maang rahe the. Tabhi ek baccha samne khade aadmi ke paas rote hue ajata he.

Baccha: Kaka.... Kaka aap Maa ko utarte kyu nahi? Kaka.... Kuch boliye na..... Kaka Bauji kaha he?
Wo baccha Darasal or koi nahi, Deep, yani ke Rana tha. Wo Joshi Kaka se ped par bandhe apni Maa ko niche utarne ke liye keh raha tha, lekin Joshi bass apna sar jhukaye waha khada raha. Ped par latke log Rana ki Maa, or Gaon ke sabse izzatdar vyaktiyo me se ek Rehmat Ali the. Pure bhopal me Rehmat Ali ko bahot izzat di jati thi, unka swabhav unki baate yaha ke har logo ke dil me jagah banati thi, lekin aaj mahol bilkul ulta tha. Waha Rana ped par latki apni Maa ke per pakad kar ro raha tha. Or Rehmat Ali ki Biwi jo ke pet se thi, use logo ne pakad kar rok rakha tha. Uski halat bhi ro ro kar bilkul tut gayi thi.

In sabke bich waha khade ek aadmi, Shantilal Virani aage akar Rana ki Maa ke paas jane lagta he, lekin sablog unhe chillane lagte he, Shantilal mudkar ek nazar Joshi Kaka par dalte he, lekin Joshi unse apni nazar chura kar nichi kar lete he. Shantilal Rana ko pakad kar piche karne lagte he.

Shantilal: beta.... Beta ruko..... Kya kar rahe ho tum?
Rana: Mama Ji, Mama ji.... Maa ko niche utar dijiye na....
Wo Shantilal ke Haath apne hatho me thamkar kehta he.
Shantilal: beta me kya kar sakta hu? Ye sab to sirf tumhare Joshi Kaka hi kar sakte he.... Mere haath bandhe hue he beta....
Wo Rana ka chehra apne hatho me thamkar kehta he. Uski baat sunkar Rana daud kar jata he, or sidha Joshi Kaka ke pero me gir kar rone lagta he.
Rana: Kaka..... Aap Maa ko utarne ke liye kahiye na.... Meri Maa marr jayegi Kaka, Maa marr jayegi......
Wo Joshi Kaka ke pero me gid gidate hue keh raha tha, Joshi Rana ko apne pero se hata kar khud uske samne ghutno par beth jate he, or Rana ka chehra apne haatho me tham lete he.
Joshi: beta... Beta.... Me kuch nahi kar sakta.... Mujhe maaf kar dijiye....
Ye sab kehte hue unki aakho me dard, Chehre par Sharmindagi ye sab dikh raha tha, lekin Rana abhi ye sare hav bhav samajhne ke liye bahot chota tha.
Rana: kyu kuch nahi kar sakte? Aapki baat sablog mante he.... Fir aap kyu kuch nahi kar sakte.... kahiye na Kaka.....
Uski baat par Joshi ki nazar Rehmat Ali, or uski biwi par chali jati he. Or Joshi apni nazre jhuka lete he. Lekin tabhi waha sab log zor zor se chillane lagte he, kyu ke ped par latke dono logo ne apni jaan chhod di thi. Ek aadmi aage akar Rana ki Maa or Rehmat Ali ko niche utar deta he, jese unhe niche utara gaya, Rana or Rehmat Ali ki biwi waha daud padte he. Ye chotasa baccha Rana apni Maa ko jagane ki koshish kar raha tha, lekin Rehmat Ali ki biwi ko pata tha ke uska pati ab is duniya me nahi raha, isliye wo Rehmat Ali ke sine par sar rakh kar roye ja rahi thi.
Rana: Maa..... Maa utho na.... Maa apni aakhe kholo.... Maa.....
Wo apni Maa ka chehra haatho me thamkar use jagane ki koshish kar raha tha lekin Ab Rana ko bhi ehsas ho gaya ke uski Maa is duniya me nahi rahi. Or wo bhi apni Maa ke sine me sar rakh kar rone laga. Ab waha se sablog dhire dhire jane lage, waha is waqt sirf Rehmat Ali ki Biwi, Shantilal, Rana or Joshi the. Shantilal aage akar Rana ko sambhalne ki koshish kar raha tha, lekin Rana kisi ki sunn ne walo me se nahi tha. Ye dekh kar Joshi Kaka aage agaye, or Rana ko pakad kar piche kar diya, Rana bhi unse lipat kar rone laga.


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Ye sab yaad kar ke Rana rone lagta he, barish ki wajah se uske aasu to chup gaye the, lekin wo dard, wo chot chup nahi sakti thi. Rana aage akar usi jagah beth gaya, jaha akhri baar usne apni Maa ko dekha tha. Rana us zameen par apne haath fer raha tha or roye ja raha tha, ye sochkar ke aaj bhi uske Maa ki aatma wahi par leti hui he.



Khair, puri raat waha guzarne ke baad jab Subah ka ujala dikhne laga, Rana gadi lekar kahi chala jata he. Dopeher ke waqt Rana ne Abdul ko call kar diya. Abdul is waqt Aksh ke saath mojud tha. Kuch zaruri baate karne ke baad Rana call cut karne laga lekin.....

Shahid: kya keh raha tha Rana?
Abdul: ab itna nuksan hua he, to kahi na kahi use bharna he na, to usi ke bare me baat chal rahi thi.....
Aksh: bhar le Rana, jitna ho sake apna nuksan bhar le.... Ek ke baad ek vaar karta jaunga tujhpar, jabtak ke tu khud mujhse apni Maut na maang le.....
Wo bahot hi gusse me apne daat piste hue kehta he.

Lekin waha gadbad ye ho gayi ke Abdul call cut karna bhul gaya, or Rana ne call cut karne ke liye mobile apne kaan se niche hi kiya tha ke use unki baate sunayi deti he. Or ye sab sunkar Rana sadme me chala jata he.

Rana: Abdul.......

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Jab Abdul Aksh se milkar wapis laut raha tha, tabb use Rana ka call agaya, or usne Abdul ko jald se jald milne ke liye Bhopal ke bahar bula liya.


Der raat Abdul Rana ki batayi jagah par pahoch gaya, Rana ne use kamre me bitha kar ek box kholne ke liye de diya. Or khud uthkar uske piche khada ho gaya. Abdul ne jese hi box open kiya, usme se Rukhsar ki tasveer nikli, jo dekh kar Abdul charo khane chitt ho gaya. Lekin tabhi use ek or jhatka lagta he, jab use apne sir ke piche Gun point hone ka ehsas hua.


To Be Continued.......

To Guys Ye tha aaj ka Update, i know length zyada nahi he, lekin bass kuch bato ko focus karna tha is Update me. And next Update Chapter 3 ka last or dhamake dar Update hoga, then is kahani ke 4th Chapter "Frozen Romance" ki Shuruwat hogi. To saath bane rahe.

agar update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. agla update jald hi ayega till then stay tuned and keep smiling

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