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[Qaatil]

राणा एक ऐसा गुंडा है जिसने अतीत में कई अपराध किए हैं और अब उसे अपने पापों की सजा मिल रही है, उसके बचने के लिए अभी भी समय है अन्यथा उसकी मृत्यु निश्चित है।
एक तरफ साक्षी, दूसरी तरफ अक्ष और तीसरी तरफ राणा तैयारी कर रहे हैं, अब यह देखना बाकी है कि क्या अक्ष और साक्षी की किस्मत उन्हें साथ ला पाती है या नहीं। अब्दुल मदद क्यों कर रहा है।
आपकी लेखनी इन किरदारों को लेके इतनी सजीव है, उनकी भूमिका को देख और उनकी द्वारा कही गयी बातें पढ़ ऐसा प्रतीत हो की लगे आँखों के सामने ये घटनाएं घट रही थी...
और जो सीन्स क्रिएट की है हर एक अपडेट के हर एक पॉइंट पे वो सच में अद्भुत और काबिले तारीफ है। जगह, परिस्थिति, वक़्त और किरदार,, कैस, कब, किस तरह से, किस कर्म में रहेंगे कहानी में भूमिका निभाते हुए, इसका सटीक मूल्यांकन करके हर एक अपडेट को जिस तरह पेश की है हम रीडर्स के समक्ष वो अपने आपमें बेमिसाल है...
कहानी में एक अत्यधिक रोमांसित कर देने वाली परिस्थिति के साथ साथ परिपूर्ण माहौल बनाने में आप माहिर है।

शानदार लेखन कौशल के साथ शानदार कहानी थी ......

Dil se shukriya Naina aapka is pratikriya ke liye.
Kahani ki Shuruwat me bhi mene kaha tha ke har kirdar ka is story me ek ehem role he, jisme Abdul bhi ata he, uska atit, uska bhavishya sabkuch aage ja kar samne aa hi jayega.
Next Update Will Be Out Soon Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

Rana is a goon who has committed many crimes in the past and now he is getting punishment for his sins, there is still time for him to escape otherwise his death is certain.
Sakshi on one side, Aksh on the other side and Rana on the third side are preparing, now it remains to be seen and whether the fate of Aksh and Sakshi can bring them together or not.

राणा एक ऐसा गुंडा है जिसने अतीत में कई अपराध किए हैं और अब उसे अपने पापों की सजा मिल रही है, उसके बचने के लिए अभी भी समय है अन्यथा उसकी मृत्यु निश्चित है।
एक तरफ साक्षी, दूसरी तरफ अक्ष और तीसरी तरफ राणा तैयारी कर रहे हैं, अब यह देखना बाकी है कि क्या अक्ष और साक्षी की किस्मत उन्हें साथ ला पाती है या नहीं। अब्दुल मदद क्यों कर रहा है।

Ee ka baat hui Naina Ji

 

[Naina]

Dil se shukriya Naina aapka is pratikriya ke liye.
Kahani ki Shuruwat me bhi mene kaha tha ke har kirdar ka is story me ek ehem role he, jisme Abdul bhi ata he, uska atit, uska bhavishya sabkuch aage ja kar samne aa hi jayega.
Next Update Will Be Out Soon Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤





Ee ka baat hui Naina Ji

yahan jitne best reviewers hai sab mere revos dekh dekh revos karna sikh gaye... samajh liyo ye un reviewers ke taraf se gurudakshina hai

 

[Qaatil]

yahan jitne best reviewers hai sab mere revos dekh dekh revos karna sikh gaye... samajh liyo ye un reviewers ke taraf se gurudakshina hai

Ju ko Aise Hi Reader's Leader nahi bolte ❤❤❤

 

[Angelmahi]

Chapter 3 - Qaatil

Update 3 ​

Word Count: 2315
Estimated Reading Time: 00:12:00

Raat ke kareeb 2 baje hue the, ek taraf Aksh itni raat ko bhi apni exercise kar raha tha, wahi dusri taraf Rana apne kamre me bethkar sharab ki ek ke baad ek bottle khali kiye ja raha tha.


Rana (mann me): Aksh..... galati kar di tune, agar ye galati na karta, to itni battar maut nahi deta tujhe, jo jald hi tujhe milne wali he... Bass tu, or teri behen bachi he, uske baad sara hisab chukta ho jayega....

Rana is waqt bahot zyada gusse me tha, Rana ne uthkar apne drawer se ek tasveer nikal li, jise dekh kar Rana ki aakhe khun si laal ho gayi.

Rana: Joshi Kaka..... Apne bete or bahu se to mil liye na? Ab jald hi aapki jama punji, Aksh or Sakshi bhi aapke paas ajayenge, fir sab chain se jina saath milkar....

Wo Joshi Kaka ki tasveer ko mutthi me dubate hue kehta he. Or firse sharan ki bottle khali karne me lagg jata he.

Waha in sab se bekhabar Sakshi subah subah jaag gayi, or ghar ka kuch kaam nipta kar subah 7 baje ke kareeb Anant ki batayi jagah par pahoch gayi. Waha use Sana or Neel pehle se mojud mil gaye.

Sana: Good Morning Sakshi..... To training ke liye tayar?
Sakshi: bilkul....
Neel: okay... So Gun chalani aati he?
Sakshi: ha.... Thodi bahot handle kar leti hu....
Darasal Aksh ne use pehle hi apni safety ke liye Gun chalana sikha diya tha.
Neel: Good....
Fir Sakshi ki Training shuru ho gayi, is waqt Sana or Neel ko Sakshi ki Physical Training par zyada dhyan dena tha, isliye wo Sakshi se kadi Training karane lagte he. Sakshi bass kuch hi der me thakan se chakna chur ho gayi, lekin Aksh ke khayal ne use firse uthne par majbur kar diya. Sakshi ka ye jazba dekh kar Neel or Sana samajh gaye ke Sakshi asani se haar nahi manegi.

Khair, Sakshi ki Training 3 ghante takk bina ruke chalti rahi, or Break me Anant bhi waha achuka tha.

Anant: so... How's Going?
Sana: Sir Better than expected.... agar isi tarah chalta raha to Sakshi jald hi tayar ho kar Field par ja sakti he.
Anant: very Good.....

Anant Sakshi ki Training dekh kar kafi khush ho gaya, kyu ke usne jitna Expect kiya tha, Sakshi ne us se kayi zyada accha kar dikhaya. Anant bhi pura din wahi rehkar Sakshi ki training par nazar rakh raha tha.

Wahi Rana ne Abdul or Bakshi (Rana ka dusra paltu) ko apne kamre me bula liya.

Rana: Bakshi..... Ye chamiya tumhara agla target he....
Wo Sakshi ki tasveer Bakshi ke samne table par fekte hue kehta he. Jise dekh kar Abdul pareshan ho gaya.
Bakshi: thik he Boss..... battar maut dunga ise....
Rana: nahi.... Tu nahi.... Me dunga ise Maut.... Tu bass ise mere samne le kar aja....
Abdul: B..... Boss.... Ye... Ye kaam me kar dunga....
Rana: nahi Abdul, tumhara pura dhyan is waqt Aksh par hona chahiye.... Is kaam ko Bakshi karega.
Abdul: thik he Boss...
Rana: or ha Bakshi..... Ise bilkul takleef nahi honi chahiye.... Samjh gaye....
Wo haiwaniyat bhari nazro se kehta he.
Bakshi: me samajh gaya Boss aap kya kehna chahte he....
Wo muskurate hue jawab de kar waha se chala gaya.
Rana: Abdul is baar Aksh ko dhund ne me koi laparwahi nahi honi chahiye....
Abdul: me use jald se jald pakadne ki puri koshish karunga Boss....

Fir Abdul bhi waha se nikal kar kahi chala jata he.
Dusri taraf Aksh us Jungle me bane ek laute ghar ki chatt par apna shirt nikal kar kadi exercise kar raha tha, Aksh apna din Zyadatar Exercise me hi lag raha tha, or tabhi waha Abdul agaya. Use dekh Aksh apni Exercise rok kar Abdul ke samne khada ho gaya.

Abdul: bahot bada jhatka de diya Aksh tumne Rana ko.... Kal raat se wo apne kamre me hi pada tha....
Aksh: ye to bass Shuruwat thi.... Aage jo karunga, usko Rana ne kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha hoga.....
Wo aage akar Abdul ki taraf pith kar ke kafi gusse me kehta he.
Abdul: Aksh Rana ka agla nishana Sakshi he.....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh ki aakhe gusse me laal ho chuki thi, Aksh bina kuch kahe tezi me waha se jane lagta he, lekin tabhi Abdul ne use rok liya.
Abdul: kaha ja rahe ho?
Aksh: Rana ko kya lagta he, Wo S...... S.. Sakshi ko nuksan pahocha payega.... To uski galat fehmi dur karne ja raha hu....
Wo Abdul se apna haath chhuda kar aage badhte hue kehta he.
Abdul: ruko Aksh..... Sakshi ko kuch nahi hoga.... Ye meri zimmedari he....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh wahi ruk jata he.
Rana: or waise bhi, Sakshi ne firse Surat ane ki galati kar di he....
Sakshi ki Surat me hone ki baat sunkar Aksh ko jhatka lagg gaya.
Aksh: kya? Wo.... Wo yaha kyu?
Abdul: wo to nahi pata...... Lekin is waqt wo tumhare usi ghar me reh rahi he....
Ab ye sari baate sunkar Aksh ka dimag kaam karna band kar gaya.
Aksh: to ab aage....
Abdul: tum chinta matt karo.... Sakshi par me dhyan rakhunga, tum bass apne lakshya par dhyan do....
Uski baat par Aksh bass apna sar haa me hila deta he.
Rana: waise Aksh, aage ka safar or bhi chunotiyo se bhara hone wala he.... Isliye me tumhari har pal madat ke liye kisi ko.....
Aksh: mujhe kisi ki zarurat nahi he.... Tumhari bhi nahi, me akele hi apna badla pura kar sakta hu.....
Wo gusse me Abdul ke nazdeek akar uski aakho me aakhe dalkar kehta he.
Abdul: nahi kar paoge.... Akele kuch nahi kar paoge, Aksh Rana koi rah chalta gunda nahi he... Isliye behtar hoga ke tum meri baat maan jao.... isi me hum dono ki bhalayi he...... Me sham ko unhe le kar ajaunga.....
Or itna kehkar Abdul waha se chala jata he

Shaam ke 6 baje hue the, waha Training Camp me Sakshi ka aaj ka din pura ho chuka tha. Anant ne Sakshi ko Aksh ki car wapis lakar de di, Anant janbujh kar Sakshi ko yaad dila raha tha ke use Aksh ko begunah sabit karna he. Sakshi ka bhi dhyan Aksh ki sari chize dekh kar bilkul dugmaga nahi sakta tha.

Khair, Sakshi ne Car chalana Banglore me rehte hi sikh li thi. Or is waqt wo Aksh ki car se hi ghar laut ayi. Pure din ki thakan ki wajah se Sakshi turant Aksh ke kamre me uske bed par let jati he. Lekin Aksh ki yaade use bilkul akela nahi chhod rahi thi. Or is waqt Sakshi ko apne or Aksh ke wo Khubsurat lamhe yaad ane lage.

Wahi Aksh bhi pure din exercise kar ke thakk chuka tha, or isliye wo akar bed par let gaya, lekin uski aakho me Sakshi or uske saath bitaye Khubsurat pal samne ane lage, or tajjub ki baat ye thi ke Aksh or Sakshi, dono is waqt ek hi pal yaad kar rahe the

"Mumbai me sakht garmi padi hu thi, Sakshi ghar ki chatt par sukhe kapde jama karne me lagi thi, din bhar kaam karne se Sakshi pehle hi thakk chuki thi, usme Mumbai ki taptapati garmi se Sakshi pasine se tar badar ho gayi thi. Usi waqt Aksh Sakshi ko dhund te hue upar agaya.

Aksh: yaar tu kaam kar ke thakk nahi jati?
Wo Aage akar Sakshi ki madat karte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: ghat ke kaam karne me konsi thakan hone lagi?
Aksh: accha to fir ye pasine se bhig kyu gayi?
Wo Sakshi ke dupatte se uske chere se pasina saaf karte hue kehta he, or kapdo ki tokri lekar aage badh jata he.
Sakshi: are Aksh.... Rehne de, me kar rahi hu na....
Wo Aksh ko rokte hue kehti he.
Aksh: chup kar tu.... Or niche ja kar tayar ho ja....
Sakshi: tayar ho jau? Kis liye?
Aksh: bahar jana he... Or kis liye....
Sakshi: bahar? Nahi is waqt nahi ja sakte.... Mujhe abhi khana bhi banana he....
Aksh: wo to Aai ne banana shuru kar bhi diya....
Sakshi: kya? Aai bhi na, mene kaha tha me bana rahi hu khana.....
Wo narazgi me kehte hue niche jane lagti he, lekin tabhi Aksh uska haath pakd kar use rok deta he.
Aksh: are banane de na Aai ko khana, waise bhi kaha tu Aai ko kaam karne ka moka deti he?
Sakshi: are lekin.....
Aksh: karne de na Aai ko kuch kaam.... Pata chala Aai aalsi or moti bann gayi.....
Sakshi: Bavlat.... Kuch bhi bolta he....
Aksh ki baat par Sakshi use marte hue kehti he.
Aksh: ab chal ja jaldi tayar ho ja....
Fir Sakshi apne kamre me ja kar fresh ho gayi, or Aksh ke saath uski Bike par chal padi.

Kuch der baad Aksh Sakshi ko usi Gole wale ke paas le ata he jaha wo dono bachpan me School se ate waqt gola khate the. Ye jagah dekh Sakshi to bilkul khush ho gayi. Dono wahi ped ke niche bethkar Gole ki chuskiya le rahe the, lekin Aksh ki nazre bass Sakshi par hi tiki hui thi. Sakshi ne Aksh ko apni taraf ghurte hue dekh liya.
Sakshi: kya dekh raha he? Gola kha, warna pighal jayega...
Aksh: dekh raha tha ke itne saalo baad bhi teri Gole ke liye ye khushi, ye hasi badli hi nahi.... Aaj bhi chehre par bachpan jesi wo pyari hasi mojud he....
Wo Sakshi ki aakho me dekhte hue bade hi pyaar se kehta he, lekin uski baat sunkar Sakshi sharma gayi."

Lekin ye Sab yaad kar ke Sakshi kafi bhavuk ho gayi. Or uski aakho ne asu bahana shuru kar diya.

Sakshi: kitne khush the hum pehle.... Sab meri galati he, Aksh se pyaar kar bethne ki galati. Agar me apne aap ko kabu me kar pati to shayad.... Shayad Aksh, me Aai Baba sab khushi khushi apni zindagi guzar rahe hote... lekin me.... Me bass apni zindagi ke bare me sochne lagi thi, bhagwaan bhi mujhe maaf nahi karenge... Or shayad usi ki saza bhi mujhe mil gayi...

Yaha Sakshi ilzam apne upar lete hue apne aap ko kose ja rahi thi, or waha Aksh ko in sab khayalo se bahar darwaza khat khatane ki awaz laya. Aksh hosh me akar apne aap ko sambhal kar uth gaya, or Gun le kar Darwaza khola to samne Abdul or Shahid tha. Shahid ko waha dekh kar Aksh ko kafi gussa araha tha.

Aksh: ye.... Ye yaha kya kar raha he?
Wo gusse me Abdul se puchta he. Abdul Aksh ko pehle Andar le jata he.
Abdul: ye mera Bhanja he.... Shahid. Or ab se Shahid tumhara saath dega.....
Aksh: bilkul nahi..... Iska saath? Mera bass chale to me ise abhi....
Ye kehte hue Aksh ne kafi gusse me Shahid par Gun Point kar di. Lekin Abdul ne use rok liya.
Abdul: dekho Aksh.... Purani baato ko bhul jao, sach to ye tha ke Shahid ko tumhare or Sakshi ke bare me kuch nahi pata tha, jis din Shahid ne mujhe Sakshi ke saath kiye bartav ke bare me bataya tha, usdin pehli baar mene ispar haath uthaya.
Uski baat sunkar Aksh apni Gun ko table par rakh deta he.
Abdul: ab me nikalta hu, kal kuch or logo ko lekar aaunga....
Fir Abdul waha se chala jata he. Aksh ko Shahid ka apne saath kaam karna bilkul pasand nahi aya tha. Lekin ab use bhi to Abdul ka saath chahiye tha, isliye wo bhi chup raha, or apne kamre me chala gaya. Shahid uske piche hi uske kamre me agaya.

Shahid: dekho Aksh.... Me tumse firse us din ke liye maafi mangta hu.
Wo Aksh ke aage khade hokar apne haath jodte hue kehta he, fir Aksh bhi samajh gaya, or usne Shahid ke haath niche kar diye.
Shahid: Aksh, me janta hu ke tum mujhe ghatiya insan samajhte ho, jo kaam me or Mamu karte he, wo bahot galat he. Begunah logo ko is drugs ki adat lagana, kisi Maa Baap se uski santan chin lena... Lekin hum Rana ke marne takk ye kaam nahi chhod sakte, ab ise tum majburi samjho ya kuch or....
Aksh: aisi baat nahi he.... Me sab Samjhta hu, Rana ko bass apna kaam pura hota hua dikhna chahiye. Warna to wo na hi Abdul ko maaf karega, na hi kisi or ko....
Shahid: sahi kaha... Or Bhagwaan ne ye sab rokne ke liye hi tumhe chuna he...
Wo Aksh ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kehta he. Kuch der takk Shahid or Aksh aage kya or kese karna he is bare me baate karne lage, or dono ja kar aram karne lage, lekin kuch der ke aram ke baad Aksh uthkar firse apni Exercise karne laga.

Waha Abdul ne Bakshi se Contact banaye rakha tha, use Bakshi ke har kadam ki jankari thi, isliye wo Sakshi ko lekar zyada chintit nahi tha.

Khair, Agle din sabki zindagi ka ek or naya din shuru ho gaya. Waha Sakshi apni Training me lagg gayi. Abdul ne Aksh ke liye 3 or log bulwa liye the, jinke Nickname the Jack, Steph or Karl. Or aaj Aksh un sabke saath bethkar ek planning kar rah tha.

Aksh: aaj raat me ek or khel ke liye sab tayar rehna. Rana ko har pal meri mojudgi ka Ehsaas dilana he.....

To Be Continued.....

To bass yahi tha aaj ke Update me, is Update ko chota rakhne ka karan tha ke kuch chize thi jise Short Summary ki tarah pesh kiya jaye, kyu ke agla Update apne khudke Context me chale. Jald hi milta hu agle Update ke saath.


Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

Fantastic update sir

 

[parkas]

waiting for the next update..

 

[Sanju]

Waiting for next update bhai

 

[Qaatil]

Agla Update aaj raat 10 baje takk Post ho jayega.
Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

Fantastic update sir

waiting for the next update..

Waiting for next update bhai

 

[Werewolf]

Story Line ​

Word Count - 1133

To dosto sidha aate he story par, to Laal Ishq me aapko Incest, Action, Thriller or Romance ka ek tagda Rectangle milega jispe Emotions ka ek zhonk bhi padega, ye kahani he Mumbai ke rehne wale Ek bhai behen ki, dosto Inka pariwar koi amir background se nahi he, kehte he na insan ko survive karne ke liye 3 chize chahiye hoti he "Roti, Kapda or Makan" or ye tino chize inke paas thi, or jesa ke hume pata he, Zyadatar middle class family apne baccho ko bas padhana likhana chahte he, use bas ek 9-5 job ke liye prepare karwate he. Is pariwar me bhi kuch aisa hi mahol tha. Maa baap apne bete beti ko acchese padha likha na chahte the. Lekin Character to apne dil o dimag me kuch or hi sapne lekar betha hua tha.

Ab Aap sochiye, Ek tuta dil, khali jeb or bade sapne milkar kya kar sakte he? Ye sab milkar puri zindagi me tufan la sakte he. To bas is tufan me shamil ho jayiye, or dekhte he ye tufan kesa keher dhata he. Jab ye tufan thamega tab uska after impact kya hota he?

CHARACTERS INTRODUCTION: ​

1) Aksh Joshi(Main Character):
Aksh is story ka pehla ehem kirdar he..... Aksh dikhne me koi hero to nahi he, lekin smart zarur he. To hum Aksh ke bare me kuch bate jaan lete he. Aksh ki soch ek middle class ladke se kuch alag he. Usne 12th ke baad apni padhayi rok di thi, kyu ke use padhai me bilkul intereste nahi tha. Uske marks humesha se hi kam rahe the, use bas kisi tarah ek safal business man bann na he, lekin ye itna asaan to katayi nahi tha. Or is wajah se uske parents uske is decision se bilkul khush nahi the. Lekin sirf ek hi insaan tha is pariwar me jo Aksh ko har mamlo me support karta. Wo insaan or koi nahi Aksh ki behen thi. Usne Aksh ko har mamle me support kiya tha. Aksh ek introvert ladka he, use kisi se zyada baat karna pasand nahi he, wo bas apne me hi khoya rehta. Lekin ye apni behen ko apni sar aakho par bitha ta he, hala ke wo Aksh se thoda darr ke rehti he.

2) Sakshi Joshi(Main Character):
to ye he Aksh ki ek lauti behen Sakshi. Or is kahani ki sabse ehem kirdar. Iska janm Aksh ke kuch der baad hi hua tha. Ye dikhne me bahot pyaari or masum he. Sakshi Abhi Second Year B.cs kar rahi he, Sakshi padhai me kafi hoshiyaar he, humesha se school me top karte ayi thi or ab college me bhi top karti he. Sakshi ke bas kuch gine chune dost he, Sakshi ladko se kam hi baat karti he. Ye Aksh ko humesha har baat me Support karti ayi he. Sakshi ke liye apne pariwar se badh kar kuch bhi nahi he. Waise to Aksh or Sakshi ki acchi jamti he, lekin Aksh me jo badlav aye the use dekh kar to kabhi kabhi to Sakshi bhi darr jati thi.

3) Radha Joshi:
Ye he Aksh or Sakshi ki maa Radha, ye koi padhi likhi aurat nahi he, lekin Radha bas chahti he ke is samaj me uske dono baccho ka naam ho, lekin Radha Aksh ke liye bahot pareshan rehti he. Radha chahti he ke Aksh padhai kar ke ek acchi si naukri kare. Lekin Aksh to iske ulta hi soch kar betha he, jis wajah se Aksh or uske parents ke bich ek tanav bana rehta he.

4) Santosh Joshi:
ye he Aksh or Sakshi ke Pita... Ye ek mehnati or imandar insaan he, ye ek company me chote se level ka kaam karte he. inhone bhi apna bachpan is Middle class soch me hi guzara he, or ye bhi chahte he ke Aksh padh likh kar ek accha insaan bane. Or inka bhi Aksh ke saath tanav bana hi rehta he.



5) Mansi Virani(Main Character):
Mansi dikhne me bahot hi Khubsurat ladki he, apne maa baap ki ek lauti santaan. Mansi apne family ke saath Surat me rehti he. Mansi kafi shararati ladki he, masti mazak karna Mansi ki fitrat he. Lekin ye dil ki bahot hi saaf ladki he. Mansi First Year B.ba kar rahi he ise apne Papa ka Business sambhalne me kafi dilchaspi he. Or aage ja kar Mansi ko hi Uske Papa ka Business sambhalna he.

6) Aman Virani:
Surat ke safal business man, Virani Industries ke malik. ye apni fitness par bahot dhyan dete he. India ke shayad har naamchin logo se inki pehchan he, Apni ek lauti beti se jaan se zyada pyaar karte he. Inki or Mansi ki kafi jamti he. Doni humesha ek dost ki tarah rehte he.

7) Kiran Virani:
ye Mansi ki Maa he, Kiran ek khule mijaz ki Aurat he, sabse ghul mil kar baat karti he. Kiran Mansi ke liye humesha se overprotective Rahi he, or Kiran ek Housewife he.

8) D.G.P. Abhinav Roy:
Abhinav 50 Saal ke ek hatte katte or tandarust Officer he, jab baat dimag se kaam lene ki ho to inke samne shayad hi koi tik sakta he, or inka Intro mene is liye diya kyu ke story me inka bhi ek ehem role hone wala he.


To dosto ye the kuch characters jinke aspas ye kahani chalegi, or kuch bahot hi interesting characters he jo aapko aage kahani me pata chal hi jayenge. Agar intro accha laga ho to like karna or Comment kar ke batana ke Intro kesa laga.

Dusri baat, dosto mujhe yaha story likh kar koi sona chandi to nahi milta, or wo mujhe nahi chahiye, me bas aap sab se ek hi chiz mangta hu, or apne pure dil se mangta he, or wo he aapke comments… please dosto har Update me apna review zarur diya kijiye, me ye nahi keh raha hu ke sirf tarifo ke phool bandhiye, jo aapko lagta he wo mere saath zarur share kare, ke is Update me ye accha laga, is update me ye kami thi… ise is tarah se sudhara ja sakta tha etc…. jis se me apne aap ko or zyada correct kar pau, Or ha.... Is Story ka pehla Update 2nd December 12 P.M. ko Post ho jayega. Or dosto me week me 3-4 Update dunga… i know ye zyada nahi he, lekin kya karu, ab sab kuch back to normal life achuka he, apne kaam waam bhi dekhna hota he, jese hi time milta he likhne beth jata hu, or har Update 2500-4000 words ka hoga, agar me update kam de raha hu to har Update ki Length to acchi khasi rakh hi sakta hu na to bas Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤

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[Qaatil]

Chapter 3 - Qaatil

Update 4

Mega Update​

Word Count: 4400
Estimated Reading Time: 00:25:00


Raat ke 9 baje Sakshi ghar laut ayi, aaj use kafi late ho gaya tha, Sakshi akar sidha so jati he. Lekin dusri taraf Aksh apni Team ke saath tayar ho chuka tha. Sabne is waqt kale rang ke kapde pehne hue the, or chehre par kale rang ka hi Mask pehna tha, jis se koi bhi unhe pehchan na sake. Sabke paas AR Rifle, Pistol or ek ek Khanjar tha, saath saath sabke paas ek ek Bag tha, jisme Guns ki Bullets or kuch zarurat ka saman tha.

Wo sab log apna saman gadi me bharkar apne kaam par nikal gaye, unhe apni manzil par pahochne me kuch waqt tha.

Dusri taraf ek band padi Factory me kareeb 40-50 log the, darasal yaha Rana or ek Mafia mojud tha, or ye sare log Rana or us Mafia ke the.

Mafia: lo Rana, truck bhar ke Maal me khud tumhe dene aya hu....
Rana: bade naseeb wale he fir to hum..... Khair, ab aye ho to chalo, saath me jaam se jaam milate he...
Mafia: zarur.... Chalo...
Fir Rana, Abdul or Mafia ke saath uske 3 aadmi waha se chale gaye, or baki log Mafia ki Truck se sara saman Rana ke logo ke hawale kar ke nikal gaye. Darasal ye saman or kuch nahi, balki Gold Biscuits the. Mafia ke sare aadmi apna Truck khali kar ke chale gaye. Yaha Rana ke 20 log the, or wo maal ko Truck me chadhane se pehle chek kar rahe the. Lekin tabhi waha Aksh or uski Team pahoch gayi.

Aksh: Shahid, tum mere saath aage se jaoge, or tum tino piche se...
Sablog: okay...
Aksh: or sab apne apne Bluetooth connect karlo.... Mere kehne se pehle koi fire nahi karega....
Shahid: sahi kaha... Waha 20-25 log majud honge, or unme se kayi logo ke paas Guns bhi he. To sambhal kar.
Fir sablog apni tay jagah jane lagte he, Jack Steph or Karl Factory ke piche pahoch gaye, wo log bahar ki sidhi ke sahare upar chadd gaye. Unhe apne tay jagah par dekh kar Aksh or Shahid bhi aage badhne lage. Kuch duri par hi Gate ke samne 4 log Gun haath me lekar pehre dari kar rahe the. Aksh or Shahid un logo se chup chupa kar Gate ki dayi taraf akar chup gaye. Shahid piche se ghum kar Gate ki bayi taraf akar khada ho gaya. Aksh ne janbujh kar apni bag ki awaz ki, jise sunkar 2 log Gate ki dayi taraf ane lage, Aksh apne dono haath me khanjar liye bilkul tayar tha, jese hi wo dono Gate ki bayi taraf aye, Aksh ne furti se dono ke gale par ek saath vaar kar diya, or dono ko apni taraf khich kar niche gira diya, or wahi par un dono ke gale me Khanjar ghusane laga. In dono ka kaam to tamam ho gaya, lekin ye awaze sunkar baki 2 log bhi Gate ki Bayi taraf jane lage, dayi taraf chupa Shahid savdhani se un dono ke piche piche Khanjar le kar chalne laga, jese hi wo dono log Aksh ke samne Aye Shahid ne piche se ek aadmi ka gala Khanjar se kaat diya, or Aksh ne dusre Aadmi ka muh daba kar use niche gira ke maar diya.

Yaha pehla padav paar ho chuka tha, Aksh ne baki tino ko is bare me bata diya, or ab dono asani se Factory ke andar ja sakte the, Rana ke log apna kaam Factory ke kafi andar ke hisse me kar rahe the, Aksh or Shahid andar achuke the, dono ne dur se hi sablogo ko dekh liya or ja kar ek jagah chup gaye.

Aksh: Jack, Steph tum dono Factory ke upar hi rahoge....
Jack/Steph: Got It....
Aksh: Karl, tum waha se utar kar un sabko piche se hi cover karoge....
Karl: Okay....
Fir Karl Factory ke upari hisse se savdhani se andar ki taraf niche utarne laga.
Aksh: Jack, Steph tum apni Guns tayar rakho, agar un logo ne Karl ko utarta hua dekh liya to Just Shoot them...
Jack/Steph: Okay, Samajh gaye....
Fir Jack Or Steph ne niche kaam kar rahe logo par Gun Point kar li. Karl bina kisi ki nazro me aye niche utar gaya, ab sablogo ne apni apni Guns tayar kar li. Lekin tabhi ek gadbad ho gayi, jaha par Steph khada tha, wo jagah thodi kamzor thi, jis se Steph ke per ki niche ki jagah tut gayi, Steph khud ko to sambhal leta he, lekin is awaz se waha sare logo ki nazar dono par padd gayi. Ab Jack ke paas Shoot karne ke alawa koi dusra rasta nahi tha. Jack ki Goliyo se 2 log wahi dher ho gaye, or baki yaha waha chupne lage, or is bich unhone samne Aksh or Shahid ko bhi dekh liya. Ek aadmi ne Aksh or Shahid ko dekhte hi waha nishana laga diya, lekin Aksh or Shahid goli chalne se pehle hi column ke piche chup gaye. Aksh or Shahid ne bhi apni Guns Load kar li, Aksh ne furti se nishana laga kar us aadmi ko dher kar diya jisne dono par nishana tana hua tha. Shahid bhagte hue column ke piche se hi Gundo ke nazdeek chala gaya, or Aksh bilkul samne se apne haath me AR Rifle liye aage badhne laga, waha baki log upar khade Jack or Steph par andha dhund firing kar rahe the, or wo dono bass kisi tarah unki firing se bache hue the, niche se Karl ne kuch logo ko dher kar diya, lekin ab uspar bhi goliya chal rahi thi, Aksh tezi se Truck ke paas agaya or waha 5-6 log ke piche khade ho kar sabko Goliyo se bhun diya. Aksh ab aage logo ko dekh raha tha, lekin use ye baat nahi pata thi ke Truck ke Tyre ke paas bhi ek bandha he, us aadmi ne Aksh ko dekh liya, lekin uske paas Koi Gun nahi thi, tabb use niche zameen par ek lohe ka pipe dikh gaya, us aadmi ne pipe utha liya or chupke se Aksh ke piche ja kar Aksh ke sar me wo Pipe de mara, Aksh us chot se dhadam se zameen par gir gaya, ab Aksh ki gun us se kuch dur ja giri, is moke ka fayda uthate hue us aadmi ne Aksh ki pith me Pipe ko maar diya, jis se Aksh Gun takk nahi pahoch paya, Or wo Aadmi furti se Gun par jhapat pada, Aksh ko apni Maut is tarah se katayi manzur nahi thi, isliye wo apne dard ki chinta kiye bina us aadmi par jhapat pada, us aadmi ne Gun ka pichla hissa Aksh ke muh par mara, lekin tabhi Aksh me Gun ko apne bagal me pakad kar apna sar zor se us aadmi ke muh par maar diya, iska natija ye raha ke wo aadmi Gun ko chodd niche gir gaya. Or ab kya tha? Aksh ne uspar Gun point kar ke us aadmi ka Bheja uda diya. Ab Aksh apne muh par aya khun saaf kar ke aage badh gaya. Abtak Shahid ne waha khel sambhal liya tha. Waha ab sirf 5 log bache the, lekin un sabke paas Guns bhi mojud thi, is waqt har koi ek dusre se chupa hua tha, or waha koi goli nahi chal rahi thi, tabhi ek aadmi Karl ko dekhne ke liye apna sar uthata he ke piche khada Aksh uske Sir me Goli maar deta he.

Aksh: dekho, tum logo ke paas ek moka he... Samne ajao, or apni jaan bacha lo....
Wo tez awaz me un bache logo se kehta he. Ye sunkar un logo me se 3 log Gun ko aage fek kar apne haath upar kar liye.
Aksh: bina hoshiyari se tino bahar ajao, tumhe kuch nahi hoga.
Uski baat sunkar wo tino dhire dhire bahar ane lage, Aksh thoda relax hokar bilkul khule me se aage ane laga, or ye dekh kar chupa hua ek Aadmi furti se uthkar Aksh par Fire kar deta he, us aadmi ko dekh kar baki ke tino bhi apno Guns par tut pade, lekin us se pehle hi Karl or Steph ne unhe maar kar gira diya, or jis aadmi ne Aksh par Goli chalayi use Shahid ne dher kar diya. Aksh ke per par Goli lagg chuki thi, ab waha sabkuch clear tha, isliye Shahid or baki sab bhagte hue Aksh ke paas agaye.

Shahid: Aksh.... Tum thik ho na....
Aksh: ha.... Ha.... Bass per par lagi he goli, tum dekho yaha koi or to nahi bacha....
Karl: nahi, sabko maar gira diya humne....
Aksh: Good.... Ab ek kaam karo, ye maal check karo kya he isme?
Wo Shahid ke sahare apne pero par khade hote hue kehta he. Tino ja kar Maal check karte he to usme Gold Biscuits the.
Karl: in sare Boxes me to Gold Biscuits he....
Aksh: thik he, ise Truck me load kar do Or in sari lasho ko bhi Truck me daal do.
Uski baat sunkar tino apne kaam me lagg jate he. Kuch der baad Truck me un sare Admiyo ki laashe or Gold Biscuits ke Boxes Load ho chuke the.

Aksh: me is Truck ko chaluanga, tum sab gadi le kar mere piche chalo....
Fir Aksh ja kar Truck on kar deta he, or use Factory ke bahar le ata he. Aksh Truck lekar aage badh raha tha, or uske piche gadi me Shahid or baki sab the. Aksh ne Truck ko ek Police Station ke kuch dur ruka diya or waha par sare Gold Biscuits ke boxes utar diye. Or ek khali rasta le kar Truck ko Rana ke adde par le jane laga.

Waha Rana apne kamre me betha hua tha, wo Mafia kabka yaha se ja chuka tha. Or thodi der baad Aksh yaha pahoch gaya.

Aksh: suno Shahid.... Apni Gadi ki Headlights Off kar do, or gadi ko Truck ke darwaze ke bilkul nazdeek le aao....
Wo apne Bluetooth Connected device se Shahid se kehta he.
Shahid: Aksh tum kar Kya rahe ho?
Aksh: sawal matt karo, humare paas waqt nahi he...
Uski baat par Shahid Aksh ke kahe nusar Gadi ki Headlights off kar ke gadi ko Truck ke darwaze ke parallel chalane laga. Ab Aksh or baki sab Rana ke adde ke kuch dur hi the, Aksh ne kisi tarah Accelerate pedal ko lock kar diya, jis se truck ek raftar se daudne laga. Aksh darwaza kholkar waha latak gaya, or sawdhani se apni gadi ke andar akar beth gaya. Fir Shahid gadi ko ghuma kar apne raste chala deta he. Waha Rana ke aade ke Gate par 4 log khade the, waha andhera hone se unhe dur se Truck ki light ka exposer nazar araha tha, na ki Aksh or uski gadi. Unhe laga ki uska aadmi hi us Truck ko lekar araha he. Lekin wo Truck bina ruke tezi se us Boundary Wall se takra gaya. Is awaz se Rana bahar balcony me akar dekhta he, jaha kuch duri par Truck diwar se takra gaya tha.

Rana: Matharchod, is behen ke lode ko apni jaan ki fikar na sahi, mere Maal ki Maa chod dega kya?
Wo kafi gusse me chillakar kehta he, or Gun lekar bahar ajata he. Abdul bhi uske saath bahar agaya. Lekin wo sab chok gaye jab unhe Truck me koi nahi dikhayi diya.
Rana: oye.... Truck ko khol jaldi....
Wo apne aadmi ko kehta he. Fir wo aadmi piche akar Truck ka piche ka door open kar deta he. Lekin jese hi Rana ko ye nazara dikhayi diya, uski to bolti band ho gayi. Us Truck me Rana ke admiyo ki bass lashe thi. Or tabhi uska phone bajne laga, usne paya ke wo call Aksh ka he, kyu ke uspar koi Number nahi tha. Rana chup chap Call pick kar leta he.

Aksh: sadma lagg gaya kya sab dekh kar? Agli baar apne admiyo ko Aksh se ladna sikha dena... Warna unka bhi haal isi tarah ho jayega... Or akhir me tera bhi.... kaha tha na tujhe mene ke me tujhe humesha mere zinda hone ka ehsas dilwata rahunga? Agli baar ke liye tayar rehna....
Or itna kehkar Aksh call kaat deta he. Rana Gusse me wahi khada tha.

Rana (mann me): Aksh.... Tere dadaji ki raah par hi chal raha he tu.... Lekin tu nahi janta ki Joshi Kaka ko unke kiye ki saza kese mili thi... Ab tujhe to us se bhi battar saza dunga....



Waha Aksh or baki sab apne adde par pahoch gaye the, Aksh ke sar me or per me is waqt kafi chot ayi thi, isliye use bilkul bhi thik mehsus nahi ho raha tha. Sab log use uthakar andar le jate he. Or andar ja kar Aksh ke ghav bhar dete he. Aksh bhi thakan or dard me tha, yaha par Karl ko Medical ki puri jankari thi, or isi liye Abdul ne use yaha laya tha. Karl ne Aksh ki marham patti kar di, or Shahid se kehkar kuch injection bhi mangwa liye. Injection lagne ke baad Aksh gehri nind me chala gaya. Or baki sab bhi Fresh hokar so gaye.

Lekin waha Rana ki nind bilkul udd chuki thi. Wo apne kamre me tha, or usne Bakshi ko call laga diya.

Rana: Behenchod tujhe ek kaam nahi ho raha he?
Wo apna gussa control karte hue Bakshi se kehta he, lekin Bakshi ye samajh gaya. Or uski bhi ab fatt kar haath me agayi.
Bakshi: B..... Boss.... Me... Me usi ko dhund ne me laga hu... Bass kuch waqt.....
Rana: Matharchod kitna waqt chahiye tujhe? Mujhe jald se jald wo ladki mere samne chahiye.....
Akhir kar Rana ka itni der se roka hua Gussa foot kar bahar agaya.
Rana: mujhe jald se jald wo ladki mere samne chahiye warna tere liye bhi accha nahi hoga.....
Or itna kehkar wo call cut kar deta he.

Khair, sari raat Rana ki nind uda kar Aksh khud gehri nind me tha, Subah uthkar Karl firse Aksh ko kuch dawai or Injection laga deta he. Jese tese wo din nikal gaya, waha Sakshi ab mentally or physically strong ho rahi thi, uski Training sabki ummid se kayi guna behtar rahi. 2 din baad Abdul ko ye baat pata chal gayi ke Sakshi ab CBI me join ho gayi he. Kareeb 2 baje Abdul waha Aksh se milne agaya. Aksh ka ghav puri tarah se to nahi bhara tha, lekin wo ab pichle dino se behtar tha.

Abdul: zyada chot to nahi ayi tumhe?
Aksh: nahi... Me thik hu....
Abdul: us raat tum sabne bahot umda kaam kiya... Lekin ek galati kar di....
Aksh: kesi galati?
Abdul: un Gold Biscuits ko raste par dalne ki galati.... Police ne sare Boxes apne hawale kar liye he...
Aksh: to usme galati kya thi? Tha to wo illegal saman hi na.....
Abdul: tumhe kya lagta he? Ab ye Gold Biscuits ka hisab Police sahi sahi darj karegi?
Uski baat par Aksh chup ho gaya.
Abdul: dekho Aksh, un sab Boxes ko tumhe apne paas rakhna tha... Jis se hume aage jakar na paiso ki kami ho, na kisi or chiz ki.... Khair, agli baar dhyan rakhna...
Uspar Aksh bass apna sar hila deta he.
Abdul: waise tumhare liye ek buri khabar he....
Ab Aksh Abdul ko dekh kar baat jaan na chah raha tha.
Abdul: Sakshi ne CBI Join kar liya he....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh ko bahot bada jhatka lagg jata he.
Aksh: kya? Sakshi...... CBI me.....
Abdul: Ha... Sahi suna tumne....
Ab Aksh ka dimag hi kaam karna band kar gaya.
Abdul: waise ek baat batao Aksh.... Tumhe Jail se riha Anant ne hi karwaya he na?
Aksh: lagta to wahi he.... Kyu ke mujhe pata chala tha ke mere rihayi me kisi bade afsar ka haath he. Or me bass Abhinav Sir or Anant Sir ko hi acche se janta tha... To ye kaam Anant Sir ka hi ho sakta he...
Abdul: Aksh ye Anant zarur koi bada khel khelne ja raha he.... Bass tum dhyan rakhna...
Aksh: ha....
Abdul: thik he to me chalta hu....
Fir wo bahar jane lagta he ke Aksh ne use rok liya.
Abdul: kya baat he?
Aksh: wo..... S..... Wo.....
Wo Abdul se kuch puchna chah raha tha, lekin uski zuban par koi shabd hi nahi arahe the. Lekin Abdul samajh gaya ke Aksh kya kehna chahta he.
Abdul: Sakshi bilkul thik he.... Uski chinta matt karo....
Wo Aksh ke paas akar uske kandhe par haath rakhte hue kehta he. Or waha se chala jata he.

Uske jane ke baad Aksh wahi par sar niche kiye khada tha, tab piche se Shahid uske kandhe par haath rakh deta he.
Shahid: mujhe lagta he ke tumhe ek baar Sakshi se milna chahiye.....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh aage badhkar khidki open kar ke waha ruk gaya.
Aksh: nahi mil sakta..... Me wo Aksh nahi raha jo pehle tha.... Mujhe bass apna badla pura karna he, uske baad me bhi ye sabkuch chhod kar chala jaunga.... Mere zinda rehne ki takat sirf or sirf mera badla he.. warna me bass ek zinda laash hu.....
Wo apni bhigi hui palko se kehta he.
Shahid: Sakshi bhi to tumhare jine ki wajah he na? Wo to ab bhi apne mann me tumse milne ki aas ko le kar jee rahi hogi....
Shahid ki baat ka jawab Aksh ke paas nahi tha, isliye Aksh waha se upar chatt par apne asu bahate beth gaya. Ab uske asu bahane ki wajah kya thi ye to wo khud hi jane.

Khair, waha Bakshi ko Sakshi ki khabar mil chuki thi, ab wo jaan chuka tha ke Sakshi yahi, Surat me reh rahi he. Lekin wo ye nahi janta tha ke Sakshi CBI me Join ho chuki he. Isliye wo apne 2 logo ko Sakshi ko kidnap karne ke liye bhej deta he. Or ye baat usne Abdul ko bhi batayi thi.

Raat ke 9 baje Sakshi apne ghar laut rahi thi, or uske piche piche gadi me 2 log bhi the, or in sabke piche tha Abdul or Shahid. Is waqt Sakshi ki gadi sabse aage thi, use Kidnap karne aye logo ki bich me or Abdul ki akhir me. Ye rasta lagbhag lagbhag khali hi tha, ab Abdul apne gadi ki raftar badha kar use Sakshi or un 2 logo ki gadi ke bich me le aya, Sakshi apni raftar se car chala rahi thi, or Abdul un dono logo ka rasta block karne ke saath saath hi apni raftar kam kar raha tha. Wo dono lagadar horn mare ja rahe the, or akhir kar Abdul gadi ko un dono ke samne hi rok deta he. Wo dono log gusse me gadi se bahar utar gaye, or jese hi samne ki Gadi se Abdul bahar nikla, to dono ka gussa gayab hokar unke chehre par darr cha gaya.

Aadmi: A.... Abdul bhai... Aap yaha? Or....
Wo is se aage kuch kehta ke Abdul ne use sar me goli Markar dharashayi kar diya. Ye dekh kar dusre aadmi ki fatt gayi, or wo gadi ko ghuma ne tayari me lagg gaya, lekin tabhi Shahid ne AR Riffle se us car par Goliya barsana shuru kar diya, kuch hi seconds me gadi ruk gayi, kyu ke andar betha dusra aadmi bhi mara gaya. Abdul or Shahid apna kaam pura kar ke waha se nikal gaye.

Subah ke waqt Bakshi dara sehma sa Rana ke aage khada tha.

Rana: kya saza du tujhe? Ek kaam nahi kar paya tu?
Bakshi: Boss... Me kal raat se un dono ko contact kar raha tha, lekin....
Rana: lekin kya Matharchod....
Wo Bakshi ki baat bich me kaat te hue chillakar kehta he.
Bakshi: Boss.... Please.... Mujhe ek moka dijiye... Ek aakhri moka.... Is baar us ladki ko uske ghar se utha lunga....
Wo Rana ke samne haath jodte hue kehta he.
Rana: ab uski zarurat nahi he... Me khud usi ghar me jaunga.... Wahi Aksh ke wo purane zakhm jude he na?
Abdul: Boss.... Mujhe aapse kuch zaruri baat karni thi.
Rana: Bakshi, tujhe aaj akhri baar maaf kar raha hu, iske aage kabhi galati kar di to dekh lena... Ab ja yaha se....
Fir Bakshi apni jaan ki salamati ke saath kamre ke bahar agaya.
Abdul: mene aapse kaha tha ke me ye sab dekh lunga, or mujhe khabar mili he ke Sakshi CBI me Join ho gayi he.
Rana: ye kya keh rahe ho Abdul?
Abdul: ha boss....
Rana: Matharchod, ye sab chal kya raha he?
Wo Frustration me akar kehta he.
Abdul: Boss... Agar aap meri baat mane to is Waqt Sakshi ko hum kuch nahi karte....
Rana: Abdul tum jante ho tum keh kya rahe ho?
Abdul: Boss, me sirf kuch waqt ke liye keh raha hu, ye baat aap bhi jante ho ki CBI kis tarah haath dho kar aapke piche padi he... Pichli baar to Aksh bass CBI ke saath juda tha, lekin is baar Sakshi khud ek CBI Officer he, agar use kuch hota he to ye humare liye bilkul safe nahi hoga.... Or kya Aap Bauji ki baat bhul gaye? Aksh ke Maa Baap ko aapne bilkul sahi waqt par saza di thi, lekin Bauji ne Aksh or Sakshi ki saza ka bhi to waqt tay kiya tha..... Or ab to wo waqt bhi nazdeek araha he...
Ab Rana bhi apne Baap MP Rana ki kahi baato par dhyan dene lagta he.
Rana: wo badla to Bauji ne jesa kaha he, or jab kaha he, tabb hi pura hoga.... Tum bass us Aksh ko dhundo, karodo ka nuksan kiya he usne mera.....
Abdul: thik he Boss.....
Rana (mann me): bass jaldi se wo Din aye.... Or Bauji ka hisab chukta ho jaye.... Tabhi Bauji ki aatma ko mukti milegi....

Abdul (mann me): Rana..... Jo to soch raha he, wo kabhi nahi hoga..... Shayad tu bhul gaya Rukhsar apa or unke bete ke bare me... Lekin me nahi bhula... Or na hi kabhi bhul paunga......

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Aaj Sakshi Officially ek CBI Officer bann chuki thi, itne dino se chalti uski Training ab ja kar khatm ho gayi thi. Anant, Sana, Neel or kuch

Anant: And now let me Introduce you our New CBI Officer... Sakshi....
Uski baat par sab log taliya baja kar Sakshi ka swagat karte he.
Anant: Sakshi, ab tumhe apni jee jaan laga kar yaha kaam karna he....
Sakshi: yes sir.... I promise me kabhi CBI ko apne kaam se nirash nahi hone dungi...
Anant: mujhe tumse yahi ummid he Sakshi... Now let me show you The cabin jaha se tumhe apne pehle mission ko anjam dena he...
Fir Anant Sakshi ko lekar ek New Cabin me ajata he. Sakshi ke andar bhi ab jazba bhar chuka tha, Anant use kuch baate Samjha raha tha, jise Sakshi apna pura dhyan de kar sunn rahi thi.
Sakshi: sir... Mujhe us Qaatil ke bare me kuch jankari chahiye.....
Anant: okay.... Sakshi humare paas Qaatil ke bare me koi bhi Information nahi he....
Sakshi: to fir use....
Anant: yahi sabse badi chunoti he Sakshi.... Humare paas sirf ek CCTV Footage he, jisme Qaatil apna crime kar ke waha se ja raha tha... Me tumhe wo Clip bhej deta hu, use parkho....
Sakshi: okay sir....
Fir Anant waha se apne Cabin me chala gaya, or Sakshi ke Computer par ek CCTV Footage bhej di, jisme Qaatil mojud tha, darasal ye Footage tabki thi, jab Qaatil bass jail se riha hokar bahar aya tha, or ek jagah usne Rana ke admiyo ko markar ja raha tha.

Sakshi ne wo Video play kiya to usne paya ke Qaatil ne apne chehra kapde se bhand rakha tha, or use bilkul samajh nahi aya ke wo Aksh he, kyu ke uski halat bilkul badal chuki thi, uske dhake chehre se Aksh ko pehchan pana kafi mushkil tha. Ye CCTV Footage bass kuch seconds ki thi, jab Qaatil us jagah se ja raha tha. Sakshi baar baar us Clip ko play kar rahi thi, or tabhi use kuch nazar agaya. Sakshi ne us Video ko pause kar ke Zoom kiya to use Qaatil ke sar ke piche gardan par ek bada sa ghaav dikhayi diya. Ab Sakshi ke liye Qaatil ko pehchan ne ka ye ek hi nishan tha.

Khair, ab Sakshi ko Qaatil ko pakadne ke liye ek tagda plan banana zaruri tha, pura din bass Qaatil ke bare me choti choti jankari Sakshi dhund ne me lagi hui thi, or uska ye din kab nikal gaya iska andaza use bhi nahi tha. Raat ke 8 baje hue the, Anant uske cabin me chala aya, lekin Sakshi ko iski bhanak bhi nahi thi, wo to bass apne kaam me lagi thi, jo dekh kar Anant ko apne faisle par naaz tha.

Anant: Sakshi.....
Uski awaz sunkar Sakshi piche mudkar dekhti he, or Anant ko waha pa kar wo uth kadhi ho jati he.
Sakshi: yes sir....
Anant: Ghar nahi gayi abtak?
Sakshi: nahi.... Bass kuch kaam khatam kar ke chali jaungi....
Anant: Sakshi hume us Qaatil ko aaj ke aaj nahi pakadna.... Is Mission ko tum lead kar rahi ho, tumpar kisi bhi tarah ka dabav nahi he... Aram se is case ko study karna....
Sakshi: okay sir... Me dhyan rakhungi....
Anant: Good... Ab tum jao ghar, or aram karna....
Sakshi: Okay sir....
Fir Anant waha se chala jata he. Sakshi bhi sabkuch samet kar apne ghar nikal jati he.

Waise to Sakshi ko bhuk pyas bhi nahi thi, lekin ab use apni sehat par bhi dhyan dena tha, isliye ghar ja kar wo apne liye khana paka leti he or Aksh ki yaado me kabhi uske chehre par hasi ajati to kabhi udasi. Or ye bhavnaye iske liye swabhavik the.

Khair, ab ane wala samay kiski zindagi me kesa tufan layega, ye dekhna interesting hoga. Ek taraf Anant ne kuch soch kar Sakshi ko CBI join karwaya tha to dusri taraf Abdul in sabme sabse ek mysterious character bann kar Aksh ki madat kar raha tha. Ye khel Tash ke paato ki tarah hi ek ek kar ke samne ane wala tha. To bass isi khel ko aage jari rakhenge.

Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

 

[Qaatil]

4th Update of chapter 3 posted, Give A Like And Don't Forget To Post Your Precious Feedback ❤

Intazar rahega bhai update ka mind divert bhi ho jayega dhire dhire

Story ko fir se write karne ke liye thank you so much...God bless you...waiting your amazing update

Bhai unki kami to khud bhagwan bhi aa kr nhi puri kr skta bs aapne aap thodi koshish krni pade gi k jindgi shuru ho phir sai ..baki hum aapke sath hai stay strong nd rest in peace ur mother nd grandma ..

Bahut shandar update. Mere paas shabd kam pad gaye he tarif k liye. Bhale hi aapne thoda fast story dikhayi par har patra k sath barabar nyay kiya. Emotions love trejady ka bhandar tha. Bhai aapne ek punch line sakshi k dwara di he ki har khubsurat kahani to adhuri hi rahti he par me bhai aapse request karta hu ki aapki itani khubsurat rachna ko adhuri mat chhod dena. Nice update brother. Vese next update kab aayega.

sahi kaha bhai.

Thank you bhai...ye story bahat hi jyda achchha hai...waiting your next update...

Bhaiya mn apki khani ka silent reader hoon apki dosri khani b parhi boht achi thi full of emotions pr apki ic khani k start mn Jo seen dikhya gya osy soch k dr b lagta hy k ghoom phir k khani mn wo moor too aana hi hy ici liay kamoshi sy khani Read kr rha tha pr aaj socha itni achi khani ki tareef nh karna boht zyadti hogi

Pr kuch swal heen

Mansi k bhai ko marny k baad dosri larki ka zikar aaya too wo larki khee Sakshi too nhi q k mansi too pehly sy onki nazro mn thi oor osy dhondny ki baat samjh nhi aatiap ki khani ki hr update ka besabri sy intyzar rehta hy

Sunday tak sabhi reviews clear

badhiya update bhai ji

KYA BAAT KYA BAAT

Qatil sir ur story is best this story is one of my favourite stories i love it & i eagerly waiting for your new update

Waiting bhai log..

Baught badhia update h bhai

Waiting

Wo ishq hai tumse mera favorite story hai aur hamesha favorite hi rahega...aur mujhe lagta hao ye story bhi bahat hi achchha hai

Ye storie main ne bookmark me save ki thi parhne ke liye jab ye shuru huwi thi lekin phir yaad he nahi raha aj bookmarks khole to saamne ye storie aa gayi sach me kabile tareef storie hai parhte parhte main ne socha ke iss ko pehle kiu nahi parha lekin ab lag raha hai is ko abhi parh ker galti ker di ab intezar he jan le ga iss ke ek update parhne ke baad dusra update kholne me jitna time lag raha tha wo waqt he mujhe zehar lag raha tha Ab to samjho intezar ho ga he nahi Main itna acha review de nahi sakta jitne ki ye storie haqdar hai bus ye kahu ga speechless har kirdar bohat ache tareeke se paish kia hai ap ne har feeling ubhar ke saamne ayi hai ek ek scene dil ko chune wala tha bohat arse baad aisi storie parhne ko mili hai sab updates parh liye hai iss liye hai ye ek naya reader jur gaya hai ab ap ke saath jaldi jaldi update do waiting for next update

Waiting Qaatil sir

Ok bhai

Nice update

Waiting

Mast update hai

Nice introduction.......

Jhakaasssss

Super

Next update Qaatil sir aap kab de rho ho

Awesome update

lajwaab update bro

Fantastic update. There seems to be only love between the siblings. Agar lust bhi hota toh aur bhi maza aata.

But please continue as per your story.

I am enjoying it. Thanks

Next part

aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update

sure @Qatil99 bhai aapki story hi itni interesting hai ke banda khud ba khud juda rehta hai...keep writing bro...we readers will definitely support you.

Super update

Ye turning update h

Keep posting

Very good starting and nice script

Full paisa wasool performance.

Waiting for the next update.

Nice update waiting for next

Atulniya Update sirji





Most beautiful scene of this Update ❤

N

Nice start bro

Super se bhi uper update

shandar update

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𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐧𝐢𝐜𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠



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Lajawab update

Nice

Superb Starting bro keep it up

Ohhh sirf poster be hi mera lund kada kiya

Awesome update

Super

Bahut badhiya update bhai

Good name of story.

Me janta hu ke me bht late hu but Congratulations for the story, or kasam se bht hi shandar likh rhe ho, agle update ka intezar he.

Superb update bhai......

Fantastic update..bhai

nice update .waise santosh ne zabardasti science me daal diya aksh ko ..

aur teacher to wakai me ghatiya type tha ,pehle hi din hausla badhane ki jagah taane maarne laga aur maa baap se complain bhi kar di ..

ab aksh class change karna chahta hai isse sakshi naraj ho gayi par aksh ko ghar aane se bura kyu lagta hai .

Bdiya update bhai ji



Update padte padte kab khtm ho jata h pta nhi chalta



Bhai mere hisab se do updates ikathe diya karo to story padne me bhi dilchaspi rhegi chahe do din ke baad update do



Age apki marzi

Nice update..

Aksh does not want to study but he wants to be a successful man, that's a good thing. I have said this before and now I am saying here again that there is no fault of anyone, just need to understand each other and it is not good to have controversy again and again. Sakshi is intelligent and good, taking everyone along and caring. Send that teacher to me, I teach him. If someone says something wrong to Aksh, Sakshi does not like it, reflect her love in anger.

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

Shandar Dumdar UpdateAksh Kahin per Bhi galat nahi hai, maa baap ko apne faisle kuch had tak apne baccho per thopna kam kar dene chayiye unhe apne baccho ko moivate karna chayiye saath dene chayiye agar bacche bhatag bhi jaye tho unhe sahi raaste mein lane ka kartawya bhi maa baap ka hai jo ki santosh aur radha mein nahi dekha de rahi hai aur ek taraf yeh zalim zamana to kisis ko bhi chain se zene nahi dete aksar school life mein college life mein, humhe demotivate karna aam baath hogayi log puchthe unhi ko hai zo intelegent, smart, hota hai. Aksh ke saath bhi wahi ho raha hai.

Dekthe hai Aksh ke behaviour mein kya changes aate hai....

Kya aksh apni manzil per pouch payega ya fir yunhi batag tha rahe ga.???

dekthe aage kya hota.....

Waiting for next.....

Shandar Bhai

Khubsurat Update Qaatil bhai ❤

Pyar, dard, kuch karne ka junun sabka kamal combination tha, Next Update ka intezar rahega bhai ❤

For completed 25k views on your story thread.....

hum mera manna hai baap login ko bete ki bhi sunni chahiye wo kya chahta hai kuch usko uske hisaab se bhi aage badhne dena chahiye jabardasti har baat thopna nai chahiye uspar lekin kuch mamle me jaise study me wo kya chahta hai karna kaam kya pasand usko koi bhi subject chota nai hota ok..ab aate hain nibbi par to nibbi na wo chutiya hota hai sayad

Waiting For Next Update

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.

Bahut khoob superb

Waiting bro

Intazar rahega bhai

Or kya chapter 2 me inke pyar ki Shuruwat hogi?

Waiting

Tu hi hai meri jeene ki ummid ,

tujhse judi hai dil ki preet.

Tu hasen to bahare gulzar ho,

Aur roye to jeena hi duswar ho.



Ho sakta hai bhavishya me akash ko kafi muskilo ka samna karna pade lekin jab tak sakshi ka hath sath fir darne ki kya baat hai.

jaise kahani ka title hai us hisab se akash aur sakshi ka rishta aage kya karwat lega ye to bhavishya ki gart me chhupa hai.



Ab kahta hu ek bhai ke point of view se ki bachpan se abtak ke jeevan ke safar me sakshi ne akas ke liye ek bahan se badhakar maa aur best friend ka hak ada kiya hai.

vaise dono bhai bahan ka prem hai adbhut.

Hum kahani aur lekhak mahodaya ke achchhe bhavishya ki kamna karte hai.

Love you dear brother

Waiting for the next update.

Superb update bro

Fabulous update bro

Good story

Bohot hi badiya update bhai muje laga sakshi Akash se apne pyar ka Izhaar kar degi par nahi kia ab age dekhte h kya hota h

Waiting bro

नमस्कार सर जी।

कहानी का पहला भाग आज पढ़ा।



कहानी की शुरुआत देखकर लगता है कि आकाश और साक्षी के माता पिता राधा और संतोष की किसी ने हत्या कर दी है।



अच्छा साक्षी और आकाश के जन्म में बस एक मिनट का अंतर है और दोनों बड़े शरारती है।

पूरा घर सिर पर उठा रखा है दोनों ने।



लेकिन दोनों भाई बहन में बहुत प्यार भी है।।



कहानी की शुरुआत बहुत अच्छी है।

बहुत जल्द पूरी कहानी पढूंगी।

behatrin story bro....................



mene aapki 1st story read ki thi....kafi acchi story thi



but iss story ka to level hi alag h 1st story se kafi improvement kiya h aapne............



hero k emotions uski feelings or life ke sangharsh ke sath sath uski apne sapne ko pura krne ki lalak ko kafi acche se describe kiya h aapne............



sat hi villen ki darindgi or samaj m jahar gholte drugs k bare m kafi acche se likha h .................



whi ek successful businessman ke roop m aman ko bhut acche se prastut kiya h jisme uska ground se juda hona bhi dikhaya h .......



sath hi apni 1st deal pura nhi hone jo ese ldke ne mna kiya tha jiska ye startup tha usse hone wali becheni or life k prati uski najariya ko bdlne wale pal bhi kafi khubsurat the.......................



overall outstanding story till continued update................



next update ka intzar rahega bro.....................

Bhai next update kab ayega?

Waiting for the update qaatil bhaai please post the next update soon.....

Waiting

Zabardast update bht hi kamal ki story writing. Mansi or Sakshi twins hain or dono aksh ki sisters hain agr ye twist hay to bhai bht bara dhamaka honay wala hay, eagerly waiting for next update bhai keep up the fantabolous work

Baught hi shaandaar update h

❤

Umda

Romance is oozing in this story.

Waiting

the story maker

Nice story keep it bhai

Waiting for update....

Bhai thoda fast update do na...waiting nahi ho raha...bahat hi interesting story hai bhai

Qaatil sir apke 25-30 minutes pure ho gye ab to update de do abhi tak ankhe bhi nhi nichi ja rhi jaldi kro bhai