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Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

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Bhut hi bdiya update bhai ji :love:


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Abhi sayad aur late hoga ye izhar
Kyonki pehle to sakshi surat jane se pehle hi btane wali thi aksh ko apne dil ki baat , lekin ab vo aksh ke sath rehkar hi dhire dhire is kaam ko age bdhayegi

Aur ye mansi ka kya role rehne wala h :hmm: kya vo bhi aksh se pyaar karne lgegi ya sirf dosti ka :waiting:

Eagerly waiting for next update :elephant:
Hope agla update jaldi aye
Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Beautiful Review ❤️❤️
Izhar to hona hi he, lekin shayad ab ye izhar kuch alag mahol me hona he, or uske liye zyada der nahi he, itna to pakka he....
Bhai jesa mene kaha tha ke har kisi ka role is kahani me connected he, to bass Mansi bhi kuch aisa hi role nibhane wali he. Next Update Will Be Out Tomorrow, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤️❤️
 

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This is a big controversy and many people will be involved and it will take time to clean up and we will give a painful death to the main man we want to kill.
The closeness of Sakshi and Aksh relaxes my heart. 110 crore deal is huge and Akshay is successful once again, it is a pleasure. Poor Sakshi tries to get away from Aksh, the closer she gets. There are many questions in mind, but I will not ask, just enjoy this happy moment. :toohappy:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

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Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Lovely Review ❤️❤️
Yes it will take some time, but sabkuch sahi hoga.... Happy moment to shuru ho chuke he, ab dekhte he dono milkar in Happy moments ko sambhal payenge ya nahi.... Next Update Will Be Out Tomorrow, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤️❤️
 

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Story Line

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To dosto sidha aate he story par, to Laal Ishq me aapko Incest, Action, Thriller or Romance ka ek tagda Rectangle milega jispe Emotions ka ek zhonk bhi padega, ye kahani he Mumbai ke rehne wale Ek bhai behen ki, dosto Inka pariwar koi amir background se nahi he, kehte he na insan ko survive karne ke liye 3 chize chahiye hoti he "Roti, Kapda or Makan" or ye tino chize inke paas thi, or jesa ke hume pata he, Zyadatar middle class family apne baccho ko bas padhana likhana chahte he, use bas ek 9-5 job ke liye prepare karwate he. Is pariwar me bhi kuch aisa hi mahol tha. Maa baap apne bete beti ko acchese padha likha na chahte the. Lekin Character to apne dil o dimag me kuch or hi sapne lekar betha hua tha.

Ab Aap sochiye, Ek tuta dil, khali jeb or bade sapne milkar kya kar sakte he? Ye sab milkar puri zindagi me tufan la sakte he. To bas is tufan me shamil ho jayiye, or dekhte he ye tufan kesa keher dhata he. Jab ye tufan thamega tab uska after impact kya hota he?
Aur ishe kehte hai writing jagat mein master stroke... jo facts kahani ke introductions ke waqt pe jarurat padti hai wo kuch hi shabdon mein samilit hai.. na zyada, na kam, bilkul perfect
CHARACTERS INTRODUCTION:


1) Aksh Joshi(Main Character):
Aksh is story ka pehla ehem kirdar he..... Aksh dikhne me koi hero to nahi he, lekin smart zarur he. To hum Aksh ke bare me kuch bate jaan lete he. Aksh ki soch ek middle class ladke se kuch alag he. Usne 12th ke baad apni padhayi rok di thi, kyu ke use padhai me bilkul intereste nahi tha. Uske marks humesha se hi kam rahe the, use bas kisi tarah ek safal business man bann na he, lekin ye itna asaan to katayi nahi tha. Or is wajah se uske parents uske is decision se bilkul khush nahi the. Lekin sirf ek hi insaan tha is pariwar me jo Aksh ko har mamlo me support karta. Wo insaan or koi nahi Aksh ki behen thi. Usne Aksh ko har mamle me support kiya tha. Aksh ek introvert ladka he, use kisi se zyada baat karna pasand nahi he, wo bas apne me hi khoya rehta. Lekin ye apni behen ko apni sar aakho par bitha ta he, hala ke wo Aksh se thoda darr ke rehti he.

2) Sakshi Joshi(Main Character):
to ye he Aksh ki ek lauti behen Sakshi. Or is kahani ki sabse ehem kirdar. Iska janm Aksh ke kuch der baad hi hua tha. Ye dikhne me bahot pyaari or masum he. Sakshi Abhi Second Year B.cs kar rahi he, Sakshi padhai me kafi hoshiyaar he, humesha se school me top karte ayi thi or ab college me bhi top karti he. Sakshi ke bas kuch gine chune dost he, Sakshi ladko se kam hi baat karti he. Ye Aksh ko humesha har baat me Support karti ayi he. Sakshi ke liye apne pariwar se badh kar kuch bhi nahi he. Waise to Aksh or Sakshi ki acchi jamti he, lekin Aksh me jo badlav aye the use dekh kar to kabhi kabhi to Sakshi bhi darr jati thi.

3) Radha Joshi:
Ye he Aksh or Sakshi ki maa Radha, ye koi padhi likhi aurat nahi he, lekin Radha bas chahti he ke is samaj me uske dono baccho ka naam ho, lekin Radha Aksh ke liye bahot pareshan rehti he. Radha chahti he ke Aksh padhai kar ke ek acchi si naukri kare. Lekin Aksh to iske ulta hi soch kar betha he, jis wajah se Aksh or uske parents ke bich ek tanav bana rehta he.

4) Santosh Joshi:
ye he Aksh or Sakshi ke Pita... Ye ek mehnati or imandar insaan he, ye ek company me chote se level ka kaam karte he. inhone bhi apna bachpan is Middle class soch me hi guzara he, or ye bhi chahte he ke Aksh padh likh kar ek accha insaan bane. Or inka bhi Aksh ke saath tanav bana hi rehta he.



5) Mansi Virani(Main Character):

Mansi dikhne me bahot hi Khubsurat ladki he, apne maa baap ki ek lauti santaan. Mansi apne family ke saath Surat me rehti he. Mansi kafi shararati ladki he, masti mazak karna Mansi ki fitrat he. Lekin ye dil ki bahot hi saaf ladki he. Mansi First Year B.ba kar rahi he ise apne Papa ka Business sambhalne me kafi dilchaspi he. Or aage ja kar Mansi ko hi Uske Papa ka Business sambhalna he.

6) Aman Virani:
Surat ke safal business man, Virani Industries ke malik. ye apni fitness par bahot dhyan dete he. India ke shayad har naamchin logo se inki pehchan he, Apni ek lauti beti se jaan se zyada pyaar karte he. Inki or Mansi ki kafi jamti he. Doni humesha ek dost ki tarah rehte he.

7) Kiran Virani:
ye Mansi ki Maa he, Kiran ek khule mijaz ki Aurat he, sabse ghul mil kar baat karti he. Kiran Mansi ke liye humesha se overprotective Rahi he, or Kiran ek Housewife he.

8) D.G.P. Abhinav Roy:
Abhinav 50 Saal ke ek hatte katte or tandarust Officer he, jab baat dimag se kaam lene ki ho to inke samne shayad hi koi tik sakta he, or inka Intro mene is liye diya kyu ke story me inka bhi ek ehem role hone wala he.


To dosto ye the kuch characters jinke aspas ye kahani chalegi, or kuch bahot hi interesting characters he jo aapko aage kahani me pata chal hi jayenge. Agar intro accha laga ho to like karna or Comment kar ke batana ke Intro kesa laga.

Dusri baat, dosto mujhe yaha story likh kar koi sona chandi to nahi milta, or wo mujhe nahi chahiye, me bas aap sab se ek hi chiz mangta hu, or apne pure dil se mangta he, or wo he aapke comments… please dosto har Update me apna review zarur diya kijiye, me ye nahi keh raha hu ke sirf tarifo ke phool bandhiye, jo aapko lagta he wo mere saath zarur share kare, ke is Update me ye accha laga, is update me ye kami thi… ise is tarah se sudhara ja sakta tha etc…. jis se me apne aap ko or zyada correct kar pau, Or ha.... Is Story ka pehla Update 2nd December 12 P.M. ko Post ho jayega. Or dosto me week me 3-4 Update dunga… i know ye zyada nahi he, lekin kya karu, ab sab kuch back to normal life achuka he, apne kaam waam bhi dekhna hota he, jese hi time milta he likhne beth jata hu, or har Update 2500-4000 words ka hoga, agar me update kam de raha hu to har Update ki Length to acchi khasi rakh hi sakta hu na to bas Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤
again.... amazing writing skills ke sath kirdaaro ka ek details ke sath vivaran.. saare mul kahani ke kirdaar kya hai, kya soch rakhte hai,unke tallukat etc in sabhi ki ek spast roop se paatra varnan kiye hai writer sahab ne... :thumbup:
 

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Guys Update 16 Will Be Out At 10 PM
Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤️❤️

 

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Aur ishe kehte hai writing jagat mein master stroke... jo facts kahani ke introductions ke waqt pe jarurat padti hai wo kuch hi shabdon mein samilit hai.. na zyada, na kam, bilkul perfect

again.... amazing writing skills ke sath kirdaaro ka ek details ke sath vivaran.. saare mul kahani ke kirdaar kya hai, kya soch rakhte hai,unke tallukat etc in sabhi ki ek spast roop se paatra varnan kiye hai writer sahab ne... :thumbup:
Are are Naina Ji..... Ayiye.... Aapka hi intezar tha 😍
Sabse pehle to Thank You So Much aapka kimti waqt is thread par dene ke liye.... aapke Reviews ka intezar rahega, Keep Reading And Keep Supporting ❤️❤️
 

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Chapter 2 - The Journey

Update 16

Mega Update


Word Count: 2725
Estimated Reading Time: 00:15:00




Subah 8 baje Aksh or Sakshi ki Airport pahochana tha, kareeb 7 bajne aye the, Aksh tayar ho kar hall me khade Sakshi ka intezar kar raha tha. Jab Sakshi bahar nahi ati to Aksh uske kamre me chala jata he.

Aksh: yaar Sakshi chalna jaldi.... Kitni der lagayegi or?
Wo ayne ke samne khadi Sakshi ke piche khada ho kar kehta he.
Sakshi: ha ho gaya.... Bass baal to bandh lene de...
Wo apne baalo ko samet kar bandh te hue kehti he.
Aksh: yaar rehne de.... Aise khule baalo me acchi lagti he tu....
Wo muskurate hue mirror me dekh kar Sakshi se kehta he, Sakshi bhi Aksh ki baat mante hue apne baal khule hi rehne deti he. Kuch der me dono Gujrat jane ke liye nikal jate he, or kareeb 11 baje wo dono CBI Headquarter pahoch gaye the, Sakshi pehli baar aisi jagah par ayi thi, uske chehre par darr saaf saaf nazar araha tha, Aksh uska haath pakad kar use akho me hi na darne ka ishara karta he. Dono andar agaye the, tabhi Aksh ko samne se Anant ata dikhayi diya.

Anant: Good Morning Mr. Aksh....
Wo Aksh ke nazdeek akar us se haath milate hue kehta he.
Aksh: Good Morning sir....
Anant: DGP sahab tumhara hi intezar kar rahe he....
Or fir wo Abhinav ke cabin ki taraf chal padte he.
Anant: ye sir ka cabin he... Tum jao andar, me ek zaruri kaam se ja raha hu....
Aksh: okay...
Fir Aksh or Sakshi Abhinav ke Cabin me ajate he, jaha Abhinav isi project par kaam kar raha tha. Aksh ko waha dekh kar Abhinav apna kaam rok kar khada ho jata he.
Abhinav: Good Morning Aksh.... Ajao....
Aksh/Sakshi: Good morning...
Fir wo dono samne Sofe par beth jate he, Abhinav bhi un dono ke saath beth gaya.
Abhinav: to ye tumhari behen he?
Wo Sakshi ko dekhte hue kehta he.
Aksh: yes sir...
Abhinav: to kya is project ke bare me.....
Aksh: yes sir.... Sakshi ko sab kuch pata he, lekin aap chinta matt kijiye.... Ye baat kabhi bahar nahi jayegi...
Abhinav: okay Great.... So ye lo tumhara 110 crores ka Cheque....
Wo Aksh ke haath me cheque dete hue kehta he.
Aksh: thanks sir....
Abhinav: it's Okay Aksh.... Waise mene ek Builder ko select kiya he, jo tumhari facility build karega.... Darasal ye kaam secretly hona he, to isme har ek insan ki involvement mujhe pehle insure karni hogi, tum us Builder se baat kar lena....
Aksh: Okay sir me kar lunga....
Fir Aksh or Abhinav ke bich kayi bate hone lagti he, Sakshi Abhinav se thoda darr rahi thi, isliye wo chup chap bass unki baate sunn rahi thi.
Abhinav: btw Sakshi, tum thik to ho na?
Wo Sakshi ko uncomfortable dekh kar puch leta he.
Sakshi: ha.... Ha... Me... Me thik hu....
Fir Abhinav kuch der takk Sakshi se uski padhai ko le kar bate karne lagta he.
Abhinav: okay then.... Aksh, ab aap apne kaam par lagg jana, or koi bhi baat ho to mujhe call kar dena...
Aksh: okay sir... Ab hum chalte he...
Dono apni jagah se khade ho kar kehte he.
Abhinav: ek minute ruko.....
Or ye kehkar wo drawer ki taraf ja kar usme se ek car ki chabi or ek Gun nikal leta he, or use Aksh ke haath me de deta he.
Abhinav: here.... Ye Gun or car ki keys he, abse tum usi car me kahi aya jaya karoge....
Aksh: sir, ye kis liye?
Abhinav: See Aksh, me mahol gambhir nahi karna chahta, lekin ye sab tumhari safety ko dhyan me rakhte hue de raha hu, hope tum meri baat samajh rahe ho?
Abhinav Sakshi ke samne khul kar baat nahi karna chahta tha, kyu ke Sakshi ki body language se Abhinav samajh chuka tha ke Sakshi in sab se ghabra jayegi.
Aksh: yes sir... Me samajh gaya, thanks.....
Wo chabi ko Abhinav se lete hue kehta he. Fir Abhinav khud Aksh or Sakshi ko parking me us gadi ke paas le jata he. Darasal wo ek black color ki fully armed BMW thi, jisme bullet proof Glasses lage hue the. Or Ye sab Aksh ki safety ke liye tha. Sakshi ko itni security or sab dekh kar Ghabrahat hone lagi thi, wo Aksh ko ek takk dekhe ja rahi thi, or uska chehra dekh Aksh samajh gaya ke Sakshi uske liye chintit he.
Abhinav: waise tum abhi Surat ja rahe ho?
Aksh: ji sir.... Aaj ghar final karna he, 2 din baad rehne ajaunga....
Abhinav: to ek kaam karo, car se Surat jane me to kafi waqt lagg jayega, tum flight se hi chale jao. Or jo ghar tum final kar rahe ho, mujhe uski details bhej dena, me ye car waha pahocha dunga....
Aksh ko bhi Abhinav ki baat sahi lagti he. Fir Abhinav driver ko bula kar Aksh or Sakshi ko Airport ravana kar deta he, pure raste Sakshi pareshan si lagg rahi thi, Aksh uski wajah janta tha, Airport par pahoch ne ke baad Aksh Sakshi se baat karne lagta he.
Aksh: Sakshi..... yaar Chinta matt kar....
Wo Sakshi ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Aksh lekin ye sab.....
Aksh: yaar tu darr kyu rahi he?
Sakshi: Aksh ye sab dekh kar koi bhi darr jayega....
Aksh: tu na bewajah pareshan ho rahi he Sakshi.... Ab chal chup chap....
Wo Sakshi ki bahe pakad kar kehta he. Sakshi bhi fir chup ho jati he, flight ko abhi kuch time tha, to Aksh Sakshi ko le kar Restaurant me chala jata he, dono khana kha hi rahe the ke tabhi Sakshi ko kisi ka call ajata he, usne dekha ke call karne wali Mansi he. Sakshi turant uska call pick kar leti he.

Sakshi: Hello....
Mansi: Hi Sakshi..... kesi ho tum?
Sakshi: me bilkul thik hu, tum batao?
Mansi: Gujarati always Maja Ma....
Sakshi: hahaha... To kese call kiya tumne?
Mansi: kafi dino se baate hi nahi hui humari... to mene socha call kar ke puch lu, collage start hone wale he, kab aaogi tum?
Sakshi: are me to abhi Gujarat me hi hu....
Mansi: kya sachme?
Sakshi: ha, me abhi Gandhinagar me hu, thodi der baad Surat ane wali hu ghar dekhne ke liye...
Mansi: ohh... That's Good, then mujhe inform karna Surat me akar.... Me tumhe mera Khubsurat sheher ghumane le jaungi.....
Sakshi: okay Done.... Me waha akar tumhe call karungi....
Mansi: okay....
Fir Sakshi call kaat deti he.
Aksh: kon tha Sakshi?
Sakshi: are us din hum college me gaye the na admission karane, tabb meri ek ladki se dosti ho gayi, Mansi.... usi ka call tha....
Aksh: accha.....
Sakshi: Aksh... Hume Mumbai jane me koi jaldi to nahi he na?
Aksh: Matlab?
Sakshi: darasal Mansi ne kaha ke Surat akar us se mile....
Aksh: okay, tu kahe to yahi reh lenge.....
Wo Sakshi ko aakh marte hue kehta he. Sakshi teda meda muh bana kar use chidati he.

Kareeb 2 ghante baad Aksh or Sakshi Surat pahoch chuke the, Aksh Sakshi ko 3 jagah le jata he, jo Aksh ne ghar choose kiye the, tino ghar hi behadd lajawab the, Sakshi ko dusra wala ghar kafi pasand aya tha, to Aksh use final kar leta he.

Sakshi ko wo ghar behadd pasand aya tha, uske chehre par khushi dekh kar Aksh ko kafi sukoon mil raha tha. Aksh sari formalities puri kar leta he, or usne ye ghat Sakshi ke naam par kar diya tha.



Aksh ne Abhinav ko apne ghar ka Address de diya tha, Abhinav turant kisi ko Gadi le kar waha bhej deta he. Sakshi or Aksh is waqt ek Cafe me bethe hue the. Sakshi ne Mansi ko call kar ke yaha par bula liya tha.

Aksh: Sakshi, tu apni dost se mil lena.... Me thodi der me tum logo ko join kar lunga....
Sakshi: yaar ye kya baat hui? Tu Bhi saath hi rahega mere....
Aksh: samajhne ki koshish kar Sakshi... Mujhe bass us Builder se milna he, or use kaam shuru karne ke liye kehna he, me bass ek ghante me ajaunga....
Wo Sakshi ke haath thamkar kehta he. Ab Sakshi bhi use apne kaam se rok nahi sakti thi.
Sakshi: thik he.... Lekin jaldi ana....
Aksh: me bass kuch der me ajaunga.... Teri dost ane de, fir me nikal jaunga....
Sakshi: oye... Me koi bacchi hu, jo tu mujhe akela nahi chhod raha he....
Aksh: aisa nahi he lekin....
Sakshi: Aksh chinta matt kar, Mansi arahi he na, tu chala ja.... Or jaldi ana...
Aksh: ab tu keh rahi he to.... Thik he... Me bass kuch der me ajaunga....
Wo Sakshi ke gaal khinch te hue kehta he, Or waha se chala jata he.

Uske jane ke kuch der baad hi waha par Mansi agayi thi.

Mansi: Hey Sakshi.....
Or wo akar Sakshi ko Hug kar leti he.
Sakshi: Hi.... Kesi ho tum?
Mansi: me to bilkul thik hu....
Fir wo dono beth jati he.
Mansi: waise Tum akeli ayi ho?
Sakshi: nahi nahi... Me to Aksh ke saath ayi hu...
Mansi: Aksh.... Boyfriend?
Uski baat sunkar Sakshi sharm ke mare laal ho gayi thi.
Sakshi: n.... Nahi.... A.... Aksh... Mera Bhai....
Mansi: ohh... I'm Sorry.... Waise kaha he wo?
Sakshi: darasal wo kuch kaam se gaya he, thodi de baad ayega....
Mansi: okay... Or batao, ghar dekh liya?
Sakshi: ha wo to ho gaya Final.... Bass 2 din baad hi hum yaha ajayenge....
Mansi: Hum.... Matlab?
Sakshi: actually Aksh or me yahi rehne wale he...
Mansi: ohh... To kya tumhara bhai bhi yahi padhai karne wala he?
Sakshi: nahi nahi.... Wo to apne business ke silsile me yaha rehne wala he...
Mansi: what..... Tumhara Bhai business karta he?
Wo Business ka naam sunkar khush hote hue kehti he.
Sakshi: ha... Usne Mumbai me bhi ek business shuru kiya tha, ab Gujarat me bhi shuru kiya he...
Mansi: wow.... That's Good.... Fir to please mujhe apne bhai se zarur milana... Jab do business karne wale apas me milenge to baate bhi us hi level ki hogi na...
Sakshi: ye bhi Kehne ki baat he, wo bass apna kaam pura kar ke hume join karega...
Mansi: then chalo me tumhe apna sheher ghumati hu...
Sakshi: okay....
Fir wo dono Mansi ki car me Sheher ghumne lagti he, Mansi ek khule mijaz ki ladki thi, jo bhi us se milta uske saath Mansi ki bahot hi acchi jamti thi. Wahi Sakshi ka bhi mijaz jesa tha, us se Mansi bhi impress ho gayi thi. Dono me kafi sari bate ho rahi thi.

Aise hi kuch der takk Mansi Sakshi ko jagah jagah par ghumane lagti he. Thodi der baad Sakshi ko Aksh ka call agaya tha, Sakshi ne Mansi ko Aksh jaha ruka he waha ka pata bata diya, wo jagah bass 15 minutes ki duri par thi.

Aksh waha khada tha, jese hi ek car me se Sakshi utri to Aksh ki nazre uspar chali gayi, lekin jese hi us car me se Mansi utri, to Aksh ki nazre Mansi par tikk si gayi thi, or use turant yaad agaya ke jabb Aksh Karim ke saath Gujarat aya tha, to unhone Mansi ki help ki thi. Aksh bass Mansi ko dekhe ja raha tha. Mansi ki nazre abtak Aksh ko nahi dekh payi thi, jab Sakshi or wo Aksh ke nazdeek ati he to Mansi ko bhi Aksh ka chehra jana pehchana sa lagg raha tha.

Sakshi: Mansi.... Ye Aksh he....
Mansi: wait.... Mene tumhe pehle bhi kahi dekha he...
Wo apne dimag par zor dalte hue kehti he. Lekin Aksh ke muh se to koi shabd nahi araha tha, wo bass Mansi ko dekhne me mashruf tha.
Sakshi: Aksh.... Tu Mansi se pehle mila he?
Aksh: ahh... Ha.... Ha... Wo me ek baar Karim chacha ke saath aya tha tabb Raat ke waqt hum mile the... Inki car ka tyre kharab hua tha tabb...
Wo hosh me akar apne aap ko sambhalte hue kehta he. Uski baat sunkar Mansi ko bhi wo pal yaad ajata he.
Mansi: ohh yeah.... Ab yaad aya.... Wow... What a Coincidence... Again thanks for that Help...
Wo apna haath Aksh ke haath se milane ke liye, aage badhate hue kehti he. Aksh bhi apne kanpte haath aage badha kar Mansi se mila leta he.
Aksh: it's... It's... Okay...
Mansi: to mujhe Sakshi ne bataya tum Business karte ho....
Aksh: ha... Sahi kaha...
Mansi: wow.... Fir to hum dono ki acchi banegi, kyu ke me bhi aage ja kar business hi karne wali hu....
Aksh: that's.... That's Good...
Fir wo tino pura Surat sheher ghumne lagte he, Aksh Mansi se baat karte waqt baar baar haqla raha tha.

Sham dhal chuki thi, or inka Surat ghumna bhi ho chuka tha.

Sakshi: Okay Mansi, aaj tumhari wajah se hume bahot maza aya, or ha... Surat waqayi me Khubsurat sheher he...
Mansi: ohh it's okay Sakshi, ab tum yahi rehne wali ho, i promise, me tumhe pura Gujarat ghumaungi.....
Sakshi: that will be fun.... Lekin a hume chalna chahiye, kafi waqt ho chuka he....
Mansi: what..... Are abtak to me tumhe apne ghar bhi nahi le gayi, or aise kese jaogi tum?
Sakshi: are ab me kuch dino me yaha ane wali hu na, tabb ghar aungi.... Lekin ab please hume jane do, ghar pe Aai Baba intezar kar rahe honge....
Mansi: yaar ye kya baat hui? Aksh tum to kuch kaho....
Wo Aksh ki bahe pakad kar uski Aakho me dekhte hue kehti he. Uske is andaz se Aksh Mansi me kho sa jata he.
Aksh: ha... Ha... Nahi... Wo... Kafi late ho gaya... He... Abhi hume jana chahiye....
Mansi: okay.... Tum kehte ho to.... Sach baat kahu.... Me na kayi sare dosto ke saath rehti hu, unme se Zyadatar business man family se hi belong karte he, lekin unme, or tum dono me zameen asman ka farak he...You Guys are very very humble.....
Aksh: nahi... Aisi koi baat nahi he, agar to log sabko apno ke nazarye se dekhe to ye 'unme or hum me" wali line hi mit jaye.......
Wo Mansi ki aakho me jhak kar, muskurate hue kehta he.
Mansi: hmm.... Bate to bahot acchi karte ho....
Mansi: you know what Sakshi, Tumhara na naseeb hi kharab he....
Sakshi: aisa kyu keh raho ho?
Mansi: kyu ke Aksh tumhe bhai ke roop me jo mila...
Wo Sakshi ko aakh marte hue shararati lehze me kehti he, uski baat dono samajh gaye the, lekin Sakshi ye sunkar puri tarah se sharma gayi thi.
Fir Mansi dono ko Airport par chhod deti he, jab Mansi jate waqt Sakshi or Aksh ko hug karti he to Aksh ki dhadkane hi tez chalne lagti he. Ab Aksh ko kya ho raha tha, ye to bhagwaan jane...

Khair, dono apni flight le lete he, or rawana ho jate he Mumbai ke liye. Aksh jabse Mansi se mila tha, uske dil me Mansi ke liye soft corner paida ho gaya tha, wo is waqt Plane ki window se bahar jhak kar kuch soche ja raha tha, Sakshi ne Aksh ko itni gehri soch me dekh liya tha.
Sakshi: kya ho gaya Aksh? Kya soch raha he?
Aksh: ha.... Nahi... Kuch nahi.... Wo to bass.. bass.. thodi thakan si lagg rahi thi...
Wo apne aap ko sambhalte hue kehta he. Sakshi Aksh ka haath apne haath me kas leti he, or uska sar apne kandhe par rakh deti he, jis se Aksh ke dimag me se Mansi, apna Business, ye duniya... In sabke khayal turant gum ho jate he, or wo bass Sukoon se apni aakhe band kar leta he.

To dosto ye tha aaj ka Update, pata he ke baki Updates se chota he, lekin aage ke scene ko acche se chalane he na, to..... Ab dekhte he Surat me dono kya ek dusre ke nazdeek ate he ya nahi. Aksh to shayad Mansi par fida hone laga tha, lekin bechari Sakshi in sabse be khabar Aksh ko hasil karne ke suhane sapne saja rahi thi. Ab inka ye safar kesa hoga? Dekhte he aage.


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