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Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

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Behad hi shanadar or pyaara update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

SSach me , ye ek kamal ka update tha jisme behtreen dialogues the.
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah.
Fabulous update bro 👌💥
Super update
Feeling se anjaan ek dushre ka sath Dene wale
Keep posting
Good story
Eagerly waiting for next update :injail:
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Thank You So Much Dosto aap sab ke Comments ke liye or dil se maafi chahta hu ke Update late arahe he, lekin bass kuch dino tak hi.... Apni job change hone wali he, waha time management accha he, tabb Update Late nahi honge.... or ha Update aaj raat ko post kar dunga, Bass aise hi Support karte rehna again Sorry For The Delay
 

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Chapter 2 - The Journey

Update 4

Mega Update


Word Count: 4615
Estimated Reading Time: 00:21:00



Jesa ke Javed Akhtar sahab ne kaha he "Samay Ka Pahiya Chalta He, Din Dhalta He" bas aise hi Aksh or Sakshi ke zindagi ka pahiya bina ruke chalta ja raha tha. Ek taraf Aksh ko apne kaam par lage kareeb 1 mahine se zyada ho chala tha, use apna pehla payment bhi mil gaya tha. Lekin is ek mahine me Aksh ki halat kafi kharab ho gayi thi. Thakan ke mare Aksh ki tabiyat kharab si rehti thi, Restaurant me saaf safayi ke kaam se Aksh ke haath or talvo me chaale padd gaye the, darasal jab Restaurant close hota to use sab kuch saaf karna hota tha or saaf karte waqt uske Shoes me pani chala jata tha, safayi karne ke liye kuch chemical bhi use hote the jis se Aksh ke haath me bhi chaale padd gaye the. lekin wo ye baat ghar pe kisi ko nahi batata tha, uska pura pura din bass kaam karne me hi nikal jata. Subah se dopehar tak wo Garage me, or fir waha se raat tak Restaurant me. Aksh apne haath ke chale chupane ke liye full shirt pehen raha tha, jis se ke uske Haath kisi ko nazar na aye. Or baki waqt to uske pero ke chale chupane ke liye Shoes the, Aksh subah Sakshi or Santosh ke jane ke baad apne kaam par nikal jata tha. Use ab chalne me bhi kafi dikkat si arahi thi. Lekin usne Radha ya kisi ke samne ye zahir nahi hone diya.

Wahi ab Sakshi ke exams ho chuke the, ab uski bhi chuttiya shuru ho gayi thi.

Har roz ki tarah Sakshi jaldi uthkar ghar ka kaam kar rahi thi, Radha or Santosh ko urgently Radha ke Bhai ke paas 2 din ke liye jana tha, Aksh to dono ke saath nahi ja sakta tha, to dono ne Sakshi ko bhi ghar rehne ka hi thik samjha. Aaj Aksh ki chutti thi, Garage par bhi or Apne kaam par bhi, to wo aram se soya hua tha.

Radha: Sakshi..... Ja kar Aksh ko jaga de, kafi time ho gaya he. Hum nikal rahe he, parso dopehar tak ghar ajayenge.... apna Dhyan rakhna dono....
Wo jate waqt time dekhte hue Sakshi se kehti he.
Sakshi: thik he Aai.....
Fir Radha or Santosh apne bhai ke ghar jane ke liye nikal jate he, wahi Sakshi apna kaam rakh kar Aksh ke kamre ki taraf chali jati he, Sakshi jese hi Darwaza knock karne jati he to pati he ke Darwaza khula hi he, Sakshi Darwaza khol kar andar ajati he, Sakshi pehle lights on karti he or jese hi uski nazar Aksh ke per par jati he to wo heran si reh jati he. Kyu ke Sakshi ko Aksh ke talvo par chaale nazar ajate he. Sakshi jaldi se uske per ke paas akar beth jati he or Aksh ke per pe haath lagati he. Aksh ko Sakshi ke chune se thoda dard sa mehsus ho jata he or uske muh se ek karah si nikal jati he.

Sakshi: Aksh..... Aksh....
Wo Aksh ko pukar kar jagane lagti he. Aksh ki nind foran tut chuki thi. Or wo Sakshi ko dekh kar uth kar beth jata he.
Sakshi: Aksh... Ye tere pero ko kya ho gaya?
Wo chintit swar me puchti he. Uske sidhe sawal se Aksh hadbada jata he.
Aksh: wo... Wo.... to.... Amm... Kuch nahi ye to bass...
Aksh ko hadbadata dekh Sakshi samajh jati he ke wo kuch chupa raha he.
Sakshi: Aksh sach sach bata... Ye tere pero me chale kese? Or tune ye baat bhi nahi batayi?
Aksh: are Sakshi... Kuch nahi he... Wo to bas infection ho gaya hoga, mene doctor ko dikhaya tha or unhone dawai bhi de di he.
Wo apne per razayi ke andar lete hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Aksh tu mujhse jhut bol raha he, Sach sach bata baat kya he? Tujhe meri kasam Aksh....
Sakshi ne kasam de kar Aksh ko charo khane chitt kar diya tha. Ab Aksh majbur tha Sakshi ko sari baate batane me, Aksh ne Sakshi ko sari sacchayi bata di. Uska kaam, ye Chaalo ki sacchayi.... Sari sacchayi samne ane ke baad Sakshi ki akho me asu ajate he. Wo bahot hi gusse me Aksh ko thappad laga deti he. Aksh Sharminda sa apne gaal par haath rakh ke apna sar niche kar leta he.

Sakshi: Aksh tu kyu aise behave karta rehta he? Kya zarurat pad gayi tujhe ye sab karne ki? Kyu tu itne waqt se jhut bolte aya? Kyu mujhse ye baat chupayi tune?
Wo gusse me chillate hue Bed se uth khadi hokar Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: Sakshi meri baat......
Sakshi: kuch nahi sunna mujhe, mujhse baat mat karna tu.....
Wo rote hue kafi gusse me Aksh ko ungli dikha kar kehti he or waha se apne kamre me chali jati he. Aksh jaldi se uth kar uske piche jane lagta he, lekin use chalne me thodi si dikkat ho rahi thi. Sakshi apne kamre me akar darwaza andar se band kar deti he or wahi beth kar rone lagti he. Aksh uske darwaze tak pahoch gaya or wo darwaza khat khatata he lekin Sakshi koi response nahi deti.

Aksh: Sakshi, please meri baat ek baar sunn le.... Agar tu aise mujhse naraz ho jayegi to... To... Ye to aisi baat ho gayi na ke ek chor ko chori ki saza fasi se mil rahi ho.... Sakshi... Please darwaza to khol... Sakshi.....
Wo bahar se lagadar darwaza khat khata raha tha, lekin Sakshi to andar bethe roye ja rahi thi. Kafi der tak Sakshi ko awaz lagate hue Aksh ab thak gaya tha, usne socha ke wo Sakshi se uska gussa thanda hone ke baad aram se baat kar lega. Tabb Aksh apne kamre me ajata he kr washroom me jakar fresh ho jata he.

Wahi Sakshi apne aap ko thoda sambhal leti he or sabse pehle Aksh ke kamre me ajati he, jah Aksh apne talvo par marham laga raha tha. Sakshi andar ajati he or Aksh ke bagal me beth kar uske haatho se marham le kar, khud Aksh ke pero par lagane lagti he.

Aksh: Sakshi I'm Sorry.... Please mujhe maaf kar de....
Wo apne kaan pakad kar Sakshi se kehta he, lekin Sakshi bina Aksh ki taraf dekhe use marham lagati he.

Sakshi Aksh ko marham laga kar bahar jane lagti he ke tabhi Aksh uska haath pakad leta he. Sakshi ko Aksh ka sparsh kuch alag sa lagta he, wo piche mudkar Aksh ki taraf dekhne lagti he or Aksh ka ek haath pakad kar use palat deti he. Ab Aksh ke haatho me bhi chale dekh kar uska dil challi challi ho raha tha. Wo bina der kiya Aksh ko kaskar gale laga leti he.

Sakshi: kyu aisa kiya tune Aksh? Kyu?
Wo sisak kar rote hue Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: Sakshi please mujhe maaf kar de na......
Sakshi: nahi karungi.... Tu itne waqt se mujhse jhut bolta aya he....
Aksh: Sakshi me kya karta? Aage ja kar Startup karne ke liye paise to lagte hi he na? To bas isi wajah se mene....
Sakshi: tujhe ye sab nahi karna chahiye tha Aksh... Nahi karna chahiye tha....

Sakshi Aksh ko kaskar rote hue hi kehti he, wo to Aksh se alag hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi. Kuch der baad Aksh use shant kara deta he.
Sakshi Aksh ke akho me akhe dalkar uske haath apne hatho me tham leti he.

Sakshi: Aksh... Kya ho, agar me tujhse ye kahu ke paisa jawab nahi he? Is society ne sab par ek belief thop di he, ke khushi or sukh ka sirf ek hi jawab, Paisa. Par aisa nahi he Aksh, zara khudko yaad kar, jab tu ek baccha tha, wo bacche ki duniya... Tab thi to bas kuch ajib si icchaye... Kaam to tabb bhi tu karta tha na, par kisi ke darr ya kataar me first ane ke liye nahi. Lekin jese hi tum thode se bade hue, kuch mahan, kuch bahot bada karne ke shuru ho gaye tamashey. Fir agaya tu bhi is chuho ki daud me, sabse ameer, sabse powerful..... sabse zyada successful bann ne ke...... Jab ab tu khud apni khushi apne bank me pade aakdo se ginta he bachpan se bilkul alag. Ab mujhe impractical mat kehna, me aisa bilkul bhi nahi keh rahi hu ke paise important nahi he, paise bahot zaruri he, par sirf pet bharne ke liye, survival ke liye.... Ab wo fuddu sa Quote nahi "sadak pe rone se accha to Lamborghini me rona he" Aksh dukh to dukh hota he, kahi par bhi Rovo.... ha, paise se hum sari temporary pleasures kharid sakte he, lekin uska khushi se koi lena dena nahi he, wo to sab andhruni kaam he na? Paiso ka extreme desire aapke saath yahi karta he, wo aapko bandh deta he... Tumhara hi lalach tumhare gale me 9-5 ka patta band deta he. "Us millioar ko dekh, kya class he uski, mujhe abhi se kamana shuru kar dena chahiye" tere dimag ne kaha, Or is sare circus ke bich tu sabse zaruri awaz sunna to bhul gaya, us bacche ki awaz, apne dil ki awaz.....

Sakshi bina ruke Aksh ki akho me akhe dalkar sabkuch kehti he, Sakshi ki har baat Aksh ke dil me pahoch rahi thi, kyu ke aaj tak usne bhi ye sare sawal apne aap se nahi puche the.

Aksh: S.... Sakshi..... Me.... Mene kabhi ye sab socha hi nahi, me to bas jese ek katputli ki tarah tha jise mera dimag handle kar raha tha.... Me....
Sakshi: Aksh meri ek baat jaan le, me tujhe aisa nahi keh rahi hu ke Business na kar.... Zarur kar, lekin apne dimag ko dil par hawi mat hone dena, dimag se hazar guna zyada takat Dil me he, Dimag bolega mat kar dard hoga, dil bolega jitna dard hoga me sehne ke liye tayar hu.

Aksh ab puri tarah se sadme me ja chuka tha, use samajh nahi araha tha ke itne salo ki uljhan Sakshi ne ek pal me hal kardi.

Sakshi: ab tu zyada soch mat.... Yahi beth me abhi ayi....
Wo Aksh ke sar se haath ferte hue kehti he or kitchen me Aksh ke liye breakfast lene chali jati he. Yaha Aksh ka haal bura tha, or ho bhi kyu na, janab ye emotions he, or Emotions ko badalne me bas friction of seconds lagte he. Jo Aksh abhi mehsus kar raha tha.

Sakshi uske liye breakfast le kar ajati he lekin Aksh ab bhi apne khayalo me gum tha, Sakshi akar uske bagal me beth jati he or ek niwala bana kar Aksh ko khilane lagti he lekin Aksh uska haath bich me hi rok deta he.

Aksh: Sakshi.... T.... Thanks.... Thank You So Much, agar to tu.... Tu... Meri Zindagi me nahi hoti to.....
Wo apni num akho se apni adhuri baat kehta he.
Sakshi: me nahi hoti to koi or hota.... Ab muh khol...
Wo Aksh ki taraf niwala badhate hue kehti he, Aksh bhi uske haatho se niwala kha leta he. Aise hi Sakshi Aksh ko apne haatho se khilane lagti he, dono bass ek dusre ko dekh rahe the, Sakshi Aksh ko breakfast kara kar Plate le kar kamre se bahar ja rahi hoti he ke tabhi Aksh use awaz laga kar rok leta he.

Aksh: Sakshi.....
Uski awaz se Sakshi kamre ke darwaze par hi ruk jati he or piche mudkar Aksh ki taraf dekhne lagti he.
Sakshi: kya hua?
Aksh: kya?
Sakshi: to fir tune mujhe pukara kyu?
Aksh: mene kaha pukara.... Wo to mere dil ne pukara....
Wo muskurate hue Sakshi ko dekh kar kehta he. Jis se Sakshi ke chehre par bahot hi pyari si hasi ajati he.
Sakshi: Bavlat......
Wo haste hue Aksh se kehti he or kamre se bahar chali jati he.

Sakshi(mann me): Bavlat kahi ka..... Kya kaha Dil ne pukara? Huhhh..... Dil to mera bhi tujhe har waqt pukarta rehta he Aksh.... Lekin mujhe samajh nahi araha ke mere saath kya ho raha he, bahot ajib si feeling arahi he mujhe. Dil karta he ke humesha bass tere saath hi rahu....

Wo kitchen me bartan saaf karte hue apne hi dhun me thi, wahi Aksh ka bhi kuch aisa hi haal tha.

Aksh(mann me): yaar Sakshi ne to mujhe hakka bakka kar diya, uski baat to bilkul sahi he, lekin ab aage kya? Mene to kabhi is tarah se socha hi nahi, or ab jab mujhe sacchayi samajh ayi to me confuse ho raha hu, Bappa(Ganesh Bhagwaan) ab mujhe is raste se bhatakne mat dena.... Please.....

Wo sofe par bethe soch raha tha, Sakshi ki nazar Aksh par pad jati he or wo apna kaam jaldi jaldi nipta kar Aksh ke paas akar beth jati he.

Sakshi: Kya Soch raha he Aksh?
Wo Aksh ke kandho par haath rakhte hue puchti he.
Aksh: n.... Nahi.... Bass soch raha tha ke ab aage ka rasta kesa hoga....
Sakshi: jesa bhi rasta ho, saath milkar use paar karenge....
Wo Aksh ke kandhe par apna sar rakhte hue kehti he. Kuch der dono aise hi bethe rehte he, lekin tabhi Aksh ke dimag me koi baat ajati he.
Aksh: Sakshi..... Jaldi se tayar ho ja....
Wo apni jagah se fatak se uth te hue kehta he.
Sakshi: kyu?
Aksh: are chal aaj bahar ghum kar ate he, pure mahine se bass kaam hi kaam chal raha tha, dimag band sa ho gaya he mera....
Aaj Aksh kafi khule mijaz se baat kar raha tha, jis se Sakshi ko bahot zyada khushi hoti he. Kyu ke uska yahi mijaz salo pehle kahi kho sa gaya tha.
Sakshi: thik he.... Are lekin tere per....
Aksh: kuch nahi hua he, chal sakta hu me... Tu tayar ho ja jaldi....
Wo Sakshi ki baat ko kaat te hue kehta he.
Sakshi: thik he, me abhi ready ho kar ati hu....
Or wo apne kamre me chali jati he. Aksh bhi change kar ke tayar ho gaya or hall me Sakshi ka intezar karne laga. Lekin jese hi Sakshi tayar ho kar bahar ati he to Aksh ki nazar bhi bass uspar tik si jati he.

Aakho me gehra kala kajal, honto par halki halki lagi hui lipstick, safed rang ka Salwar Kameez or khuli hui zulfe, ye tha Sakshi ka Keher. Jab Sakshi ki nazar Aksh par jati he jo ek tak use hi nihar raha tha, jis se Sakshi ko sharm arahi thi.
Sakshi: K..... Kya Hua? A... Aise... Kyu dekh raha he?
Wo haklate hue Aksh ke samne khade ho kar puchti he. Aksh bhi uski awaz sunkar hosh me ajata he.
Aksh: n... Nahi.... K.. kuch nahi... Ab chal nikalte he....
Wo apne aap ko sambhalte hue kehta he, fir dono Aksh ki bike par beth kar nikal jate he.

Sakshi apne kanpte hue haath Aksh ke kandho par rakh deti he, wo baar baar Aksh ko dekh rahi thi or uski ye harkat Aksh mirror se dekh leta he.

Is waqt dopeher ke kareeb 12:30 ho rahe the.

Aksh: yaar Sakshi me kya kehta hu, pehle khana hi kha lete he, aise bhi waqt to ho hi chuka he na?
Wo bike chalate hue Sakshi se kehta he lekin use ye nahi pata tha ke Sakshi to kahi or khoyi hui thi.
Aksh: Sakshi..... Sakshi..... Kaha kho gayi tu?
Jab use apne sawal ka jawab nahi milta to wo piche mudkar Sakshi ko dekh kar puchta he. Ab ja kar Sakshi hosh me ajati he.
Sakshi: ha..... Ha.... Kya... Kya kaha?
Aksh: mene kaha pehle khana kha lete he, time dekh..
Sakshi: ha... Ha thik he....

Fir wo dono paas hi ke restaurant me chale jate he. Aksh ne har ek chiz Sakshi ki pasand ki order kar di thi. Waha se khana kha kar dono pura din yaha se waha ghumte rahe the, Aaj Aksh jitna khush tha utna shayad hi in kuch salo me wo khush dikha tha. Or baat kare Sakshi ki to uski khushi jese sirf or sirf Aksh se judi hui thi. Aksh ko khush hota dekh Sakshi ko kafi sukoon sa mil raha tha.
Dono Pura din thak haar kar ghar ajate he or bas bed par girte hi dono ko hi gehri nind ajati he.









Shaam ke kareeb 6 baje hue the, Sakshi ghar ka kaam nipta rahi thi or Aksh Garage par ek zaruri kaam me fasa hua tha. Aaj Radha or Santosh ghar ane wale the, Sakshi dono ka hi intezar kar rahi thi. Kuch der baad ghar ki doorbell bajti he Sakshi jaldi se ja kar darwaza khol deti he, Darwaze par Radha or Santosh the lekin Santosh ko dekh kar Sakshi ke chehre ka rang hi udd jata he. Kyu ke Santosh ke haath par ek patti bandhi hui thi.

Sakshi: Baba..... Ye... Ye kya... Ye patti kese?
Wo ghabra kar Santosh ka haath pakadte hue kehti he.
Santosh: beta kuch nahi he, chal andar.....
Fir wo tino andar akar Sofe par beth jate he.
Radha: Sakshi... Baba ke liye pani le kar aa....
Sakshi: ha abhi layi....
Wo jaldi se kitchen me jakar pani le ati he or Santosh ko de deti he.
Sakshi: lekin ye chot kese lagi Baba?
Radha: darasal jab hum arahe the to inka per fisal gaya or ye apne haath par hi gir gaye, jis se ye chot lagi....
Sakshi: or kahi chot to nahi na lagi?
Santosh: are chinta matt kar, bass haath par thodi si chot lagi he....
Sakshi: ise choti si chot kehte ho aap?
Santosh: beta zyada nahi lagi...
Wo Sakshi ko samjhate hue kehta he, or tabhi Darwaze se Aksh ghar ke andar ajata he. Radha or Santosh ko ghar aya dekh use accha lagta he, lekin tabhi uski nazar Santosh ke haath par lagi patti par padti he, ye dekh kar Aksh ke dil me bhi ek chubhan si hoti he, lekin pata nahi kyu use aage ja kar Santosh ka samna karne ki himmat hi nahi thi. Wo kuch seconds aise hi Santosh ko dekh raha tha, or jab us se Santosh ka haal puchna nahi hota to uske akho me Asu ajate he or wo jaldi se apne kamre me chala jata he, lekin ye sab Sakshi ne dekh liya tha.

Santosh: Aksh itni jaldi agaya kaam se?
Sakshi: Baba.... Wo.... usne 2 din kaam se chutti li thi...
Radha: baat to kar sakta tha na, bina kuch kahe chala gaya kamre me....
Wo kafi narazgi se kehti he.
Sakshi: nahi Aai... Wo subah se Garage par tha, kuch zaruri kaam se, to bass thak gaya hoga....
Radha: thik he.... Accha aap pehle apni dawai le lijiye....
Wo Santosh ko bag se dawai nikal kar de rahi thi, Sakshi jaldi se uthkar Aksh ke kamre me chali jati he, jaha Aksh diwar par apna haath zor zor se maarte hue roye ja raha tha. Uske haatho par pehle se hi chaale pade hue the, or usme diwar par itni zor se marne se Aksh ke haath me thoda khun sa nikal raha tha. Sakshi ye nazara dekh kar dangg si reh jati he.

Sakshi: Aksh.... Aksh..... Ye.... Kya kar raha he tu?
Wo bhagte hue andar akar Aksh ko rokte hue kehti he. Lekin Aksh ko to jese koi hosh hi nahi tha, wo bass roye ja raha tha..
Sakshi: Aksh.... Aksh.... Chup kar... Or mujhe bata kya hua?
Wo Aksh ka chehra apne hatho me thamkar puchti he.
Aksh: lanat he mujhpar..... Lanat he....
Wo Sakshi ko kas kar gale lagate hue kehta he or fut fut kar rone lagta he. Aksh ko aise rota dekh Sakshi kese shant reh sakti thi, ab Sakshi bhi rone lagti he.
Sakshi: Aksh... Please chup ho ja.... Or mujhe bata na kya ho gaya tujhe?
Wo Aksh ke sar me haath ferte hue Aksh se puchti he. Lekin Aksh to kuch bolne ko tayar nahi tha, tabb Sakshi use apne se alag karti he or bed par bitha kar uske Aansu saaf kar ke use shant kara deti he.
Sakshi: kya baat he Aksh? Tu suddenly aise kyu behave karne laga?
Wo Aksh ke haath apne hatho me thamkar puchti he.
Aksh: lanat he mujhpar Sakshi..... Dekha nahi? Baba ko chot lagi he ye dekhte hue bhi me.... Me unse kuch keh nahi paya..... Meri himmat nahi hui unke paas jakar... Unka haal puchne ki.....
Wo rote hue Sakshi se kehta he.
Sakshi: aisi baat nahi he Aksh.... Tujhme ab bhi wahi purani baate reh gayi he, is wajah se..... Lekin tu wo sab bhul jana Aksh.... Puri duniya ghum lo, lekin Maa se mehfuz jagah kabhi nahi mil sakti, Baap se bhale hi har roz ladd lo, lekin unke jitna Saccha or tumhara accha chahne wala or koi insan duniya me kabhi milega nahi.... Aksh ab tere samne ye chunoti he ke apni purani adate bhul ja, or ek nayi zindagi ki Shuruwat kar... Or sabse behtar Shuruwat to Aai Baba ke Ashirwad se hi ho sakti he na?
Wo Aksh ka chehre apne haatho me thamkar uske asu saaf karte hue kehti he.
Aksh: lekin.....
Sakshi: Aksh jaa.... Bahar Baba se baat kar, Aai se baat kar...
Wo Aksh ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehti he. Ab Aksh ke bhi samajh me achuka tha, wo Sakshi ko ek jhalak dekhta he to Sakshi use bahar jane ka ishara karti he. Aksh uthkar bahar chala jata he, jaha Santosh or Radha bethe hue the, Aksh firse wahi ruk jata he or piche mudkar Sakshi ko dekhta he. Sakshi use aage jane ka ishara karti he. Aksh badi himmat kar ke Santosh ke samne ajata he, or uske samne apne ghutno par beth kar Santosh ke haath tham leta he. Santosh Aksh ka aisa behavior dekh kar kuch samajh nahi pata, lekin jese hi use Aksh ke haath kuch alag se mehsus hote he to wo Aksh ke haath palat kar dekhta he, jispar chaale or thoda sa khun tha.

Santosh: Aksh.... Ye kya? Ha? Ye tere haatho ko kya ho gaya? Bata na?
Wo Chintit lehze me Aksh ke haatho se khun saaf karte hue puchta he. Santosh ki apne liye chinta dekh kar Aksh ki aakhe num ho jati he.
Radha: Aksh... Bol na beta, ye sab kya he? Or tu ro kyu raha he?
Wo Aksh ki akho me aye Asu dekh kar puchti he.
Aksh: Aai, Baba...... Me janta hu ke... Ke mene aapko bahot dukh pahochaya he. Mere sapno ke samne mene kabhi aapki baat nahi mani, lekin... Lekin Baba, Talvar to usi yoddha ke haatho me shobti he na, jise na to maut ka dar hota he, jise jitne se nahi balki ladne se ishq ho.... is duniya ka bahadur yoddha wahi kehlata he na, Jiska dhyan sirf sangharsh me rahe, or is jung me ladte ladte hi uska dum nikal jaye.... Agar law of Attraction ki baat sach he to me is puri duniya se, jannat nahi, jahannum ki aag mangta hu, jalne do mera har ek khwab, bas nakamyabiya do, rulao mujhe har ek raat, jiske paas pane ya khone ke liye kuch bache hi na, banu me wo nidar yoddha...... Jo kisi raja ka gulaam nahi, jo jung jitne ke liye nahi lekin apne aap ko behtar banane ke liye lade. Jsiki talvar kisi ke kehne pe nahi, balki apne marzi se chalti ho. Jiski Jeet dushman ki haar me nahi par khudko behtar banane me ho, jo manzilo ka nahi, safar ka Aashiq ho..... Mujhe Bass ishq ki Talvar utha kar khudki har hadd langni he, zindagi ki is jung me, mujhe ladte hue marna he....

Wo Santosh ki akho me akhe dalkar sari baate kehta he, apne bete ka zindagi ko dekhne ka nazarya jaan kar Radha or Santosh heran se reh gaye the. Dono ke hi aakhe Aksh ki baat sunkar Num ho gayi thi.

Santosh: tujhe kya lagta he? Me jab tujhe dant ta, tujhpar chillata, gussa karta... Wo khushi khushi karta hu? Tera bhala hi chahta hu na? Ha, mera nazarya or tera nazarya bilkul alag he, me to humesha yahi chahta hu ke tu ek acchi zindagi jiye.... Lekin, ab tu jo bhi karna chahta he, me tujhe karne se nahi rokunga... Aaj se mere bete ke sapne mere sapne... Or wo sapne pure karne ke liye me humesha tera saath dunga....
Wo Aksh ke akho me aye Asu saaf karte hue kehta he, uski baat sunkar Aksh kas kar Santosh ko gale laga leta he. Piche se Thodi khadi Sakshi bhi ye sab dekh kar khush thi.
Radha: Ab bass kar.... Aise hi rota rahega kya? Me to aaj kuch accha sa khane ke liye banaungi....
Wo bahot hi utsukta ke saath kehti he.
Radha: ab aap jayiye or kuch der aram kar lijiye.... Me khane ke liye bana deti hu....
Fir Santosh apne kamre me chala jata he or Radha kitchen me apne kaam karne chali jati he. Aksh uthkar dur khadi Sakshi ko dekh muskuraye ja raha tha. Sakshi bahot bhavuk ho gayi thi wo jaldi se apne kamre me jati he or waha ja kar Rone lagti he. Aksh Sakshi ke kamre me ajata he, or akar Sakshi ke bagal me beth kar Sakshi ke sar pe haath ferne lagta he, Sakshi bina der kiya Aksh ko ekdum kas kar gale se laga leti he.

Aksh: or kitne ehsan karegi Sakshi tu mujhpar? Har din mujh me ek badlav la rahi he tu.... Kese chukau ye ehsan?
Wo Sakshi ko apni baho me kaste hue kehta he.
Sakshi: ehsan chukana chahta he na tu mera? To mujhse wada kar... Ke tu kabhi mujhe akele nahi chhodega....
Wo Aksh se alag hokar kisi bacche ki tarah Aksh se kehti he, jise dekh Aksh ki hasi chutt jati he.
Aksh: thik he Chipkali.... Promise.....
Uski baat sunkar Sakshi ka para chadd jata he or wo Gusse bhari nazro se Aksh ko dekhti he.
Sakshi: Aksh.... Tu pitega mujhse.... Hazar baar kaha he ye chipkali matt bola kar mujhe.....
Wo bahot hi gusse me Aksh ko ungli dikhate hue kehti he.
Aksh: ab Chipkali ko Chipkali hi bolunga na me.... Chipkali....
Or ye kehkar wo tezi se kamre ke bahar jane lagta he, Sakshi bhi gusse me uske piche chal padti he. Aksh apne kamre me ajata he Sakshi bhi andar akar uspar jhapat padti he. Kuch der baad Sakshi Radha ki madat karne ke liye ja rahi hoti he ke Aksh use awaz lag kar rok leta he.

Aksh: Sakshi........
Uski awaz sunkar Sakshi Darwaze par hi ruk jati he or palat kar Aksh ki taraf dekhti he.
Sakshi: kya?
Aksh: kya?
Sakhsi: awaz kyu lagayi?
Aksh: mene kaha?..... Awaz to mere dil ne lagayi.....
Wo muskurate hue Sakshi se kehta he.
Sakshi: Bavlat.....
Wo sharmate hue Aksh se Kehti he or Radha ke kaam me haath batane lagti he.


Or is tarah aaj ka din nikal jata he, jaha humne Aksh me aye kuch positive changes dekhe, jaha par ek pariwar ke khuch bikhre se rishte puri tarah se mazbut hote dikhayi diye. Ab ek baat bata du, ke Aksh ki life me ek or Achievement ane wali he, or wo Achievement apne saath kya kya le kar ayegi ye jaan ne ke liye bane rahiye.

Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling 😊 😊
Emotional Update:cry2::cry2:two back to back emotional scenes👌. Mujhe asie lag raha hai ke story ne pura u turn le liye ho. Jis tarah se aksh ki story abhi tak dikhaiye gayi us se aise kabhi nahi lag raha tha k aksh ke parents kabhi aksh ko support karenge. khair mein abhi bhi jannene ke liye ustahith hun ke jo story ke start mein bataya gaya tha wo kya hai?Aur us scene tak yeh story kise pahunchathi hai....
Dekthe anne wale updates mein kya chuppa hai....
Waiting......
Aur han sakshi:heart::heart::heart: man, alag hi level hai is character ka, i am seriously in love with her. Usually,har story mein male lead ko zada importance milti hai, jisse puri story ka center of attraction ban jata hai. Par is story mein aise bilkhul bhi nahi laga, i searously appreciate the kind of work you have put in you have actually made proper justice to each and every character, especially to sakshi character a big ❤ and 👍.
Ek suggestions dene chahunga dono emotional scene mein mujhe jo judav lagna chaiye tha wo nahi laga. Pata nahi aise kyu hun, shayad jo examples or dailogues use kiye, wo bahuth zada heavy the jo scenes ko imbalance kar rahe the ya phir wo thode realistic nahi lag rahe the wo ek dusre se aur situations se connect nahi kar rahe the. Rest idea brilliant, exceution average, so please take care of it in future....
 

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Thank You So Much Dosto aap sab ke Comments ke liye or dil se maafi chahta hu ke Update late arahe he, lekin bass kuch dino tak hi.... Apni job change hone wali he, waha time management accha he, tabb Update Late nahi honge.... or ha Update aaj raat ko post kar dunga, Bass aise hi Support karte rehna again Sorry For The Delay
Waiting bhai ji
 

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Emotional Update:cry2::cry2:two back to back emotional scenes👌. Mujhe asie lag raha hai ke story ne pura u turn le liye ho. Jis tarah se aksh ki story abhi tak dikhaiye gayi us se aise kabhi nahi lag raha tha k aksh ke parents kabhi aksh ko support karenge. khair mein abhi bhi jannene ke liye ustahith hun ke jo story ke start mein bataya gaya tha wo kya hai?Aur us scene tak yeh story kise pahunchathi hai....
Dekthe anne wale updates mein kya chuppa hai....
Waiting......
Aur han sakshi:heart::heart::heart: man, alag hi level hai is character ka, i am seriously in love with her. Usually,har story mein male lead ko zada importance milti hai, jisse puri story ka center of attraction ban jata hai. Par is story mein aise bilkhul bhi nahi laga, i searously appreciate the kind of work you have put in you have actually made proper justice to each and every character, especially to sakshi character a big ❤ and 👍.
Ek suggestions dene chahunga dono emotional scene mein mujhe jo judav lagna chaiye tha wo nahi laga. Pata nahi aise kyu hun, shayad jo examples or dailogues use kiye, wo bahuth zada heavy the jo scenes ko imbalance kar rahe the ya phir wo thode realistic nahi lag rahe the wo ek dusre se aur situations se connect nahi kar rahe the. Rest idea brilliant, exceution average, so please take care of it in future....
Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Beautiful Comment ❤️❤️
Bhai jesa ke mene kaha tha ke har character ek ehem role play karega, or aage jakar aap samajh jaoge ki Sakshi ka character kitna important he is kahani me....

Ek suggestions dene chahunga dono emotional scene mein mujhe jo judav lagna chaiye tha wo nahi laga. Pata nahi aise kyu hun, shayad jo examples or dailogues use kiye, wo bahuth zada heavy the jo scenes ko imbalance kar rahe the ya phir wo thode realistic nahi lag rahe the wo ek dusre se aur situations se connect nahi kar rahe the. Rest idea brilliant, exceution average, so please take care of it in future....

Bhai darasal mene ye baate is liye dali thi kyu ke unka connection Aksh ki life me tha, for example Sakshi wali sari baate is par based thi ke Aksh ne jo paise ko hi apna sab kuch maan liya tha, or apna bachpan bilkul bhul sa gaya tha, use yaad dilane ke liye Sakshi ki baate thi, baki Aksh or Santosh ke bich duriya sirf Aksh ke character ko le kar hi bani thi, or waha Aksh ne Santosh ke samne apne aap ko clear kiya apna life ko dekhne ka nazarya bata kar.... Baki ho sakta he mujhse use elaborate karne ka tarika kam reh gaya ho, again really sorry for that, and Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Precious Feedback ❤️❤️
 

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Chapter 2 - The Journey

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Subah subah Radha or Sakshi ghar ke kamo me busy thi ek taraf Radha ne kitchen sambhala hua tha, or dusri taraf Sakshi upar chatt par kapde sukhane ke liye gayi thi. Wahi Aksh bhi jaag chuka tha, or usne apna track suit pehna or apne kamre se bahar ane laga, wo jese hi kamre se bahar nikal wahi se Sakshi chatt se niche arahi thi, or jaldi jaldi me Sakshi ja kar Aksh se takra jati he, Aksh use dekh kar jaldi se Sakshi ko kamar se pakad kar sambhal leta he. Dono hi apas me chipke hue the, Sakshi apni nazre upar kar ke Aksh ke chehre ko dekhti he to uski dhadkane hi tez ho jati he. Wo ek takk Aksh ko dekh rahi thi.

Aksh: dekh kar chala kar Sakshi.....
Wo Sakshi ko ko apne se alag karte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: ha.... Ha... Wo.. sorry....
Wo hosh me ate hue kehti he.
Sakshi: waise.... Tu... Tu itni jaldi kyu jaag gaya?
Wo Aksh ko tayar hokar ata dekh puchti he.
Aksh: ha.... Wo mene socha kyu na abse roz subah jaldi uth kar morning walk ke liye jaya jaye.....
Sakshi Aksh ka aisa behavior dekh kar bahot khush lagg rahi thi.
Sakshi: accha? Ye to bahot acchi baat he.....
Aksh: mental health ke saath saath physical health bhi to zaruri he na.... Accha tu bhi chal saath....
Sakshi: me...... Ahh.... accha thik he... Tu bas 2 minute rukja, me bhi ati hu tere saath....
Aksh: thik he....
Fir wo bahar akar apne shoes pehen leta he or Sakshi ka wait karte ruk jata he. Kuch der baad Sakshi bhi bahar ajati he, fir dono apni walk par nikal jate he, mosam kafi suhana sa lagg raha tha, or usme Sakshi or Aksh ko ek dusre kaa saath tha, dono ke chehre par bhi khushi thi.

Aksh: accha Sakshi.... Tere results kab he?
Sakshi: may be kuch month baad hoga....
Aksh: pass to ho jayegi na?
Sakshi: hahaha..... To kya fail houngi me?
Wo haste hue Aksh se puchti he.
Aksh: hahaha.... Wo bhi he.... Mene sawal hi galat puch liya, mujhe ye puchna chahiye ke number kitne ayenge....
Uski baat par Sakshi bhi has deti he. Kuch der dono aise hi chalte rehte he.
Aksh: waise Sakshi ek baat batayegi?
Sakshi: konsi baat?
Aksh: sach sach batana lekin......
Wo Sakshi ki akho me dekhte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: are kya baat he ye to bata?
Aksh: tera koi Boyfriend he?
Uske sidhe sawal se Sakshi chup si ho jati he.
Aksh: kya hua? bata na.... Kisi se pyaar nahi karti kya tu?
Sakshi: aisa kuch bhi nahi he.....
Wo sharmate hue apna sar jhuka kar kehti he.
Aksh: tu kyu itna sharmane lagi?
Wo Sakshi par nazar dalte hue puchta he.
Sakshi: tu.... tu..... Kya baate le kar beth gaya Aksh....
Wo apne chehre par ayi baalo ki lutt ko piche karte hue kehti he. Aksh Sakshi ka Sharmana dekh mann hi mann bahot has raha tha. Kuch der baad Sakshi normal ho jati he.
Sakshi: waise..... Ummm.... Tu.. tu nahi karta kisi se pyaar?
Wo bina Aksh ko dekhe hi puchti he.
Aksh: huhhh.... Khudki duniya se bahar kadam rakhne ka kabhi moka hi nahi mila mujhe.... To kese kisi se pyaar kar leta?
Sakshi: accha? To fir ab agaya na tu apni duniya se bahar.... Agar ab koi waisi mil gayi jesi tu chahta he to?
Aksh: hmmm..... jesi me chahta hu? Ummm... Me to chahta hu mujhe koi teri jesi ladki hi mile.....
Wo Sakshi ki taraf dekhte hue kehta he. Uski baat par Sakshi fir se sharma jati he or uske chehre par ek muskurahat bhi ajati he. Fir dono apni walk continue karte he, or kuch der baad ghar pahoch jate he.

Kareeb 10 baje Radha Sakshi or Aksh ke liye nashta bana rahi thi, Sakshi bhi uske saath hi kitchen me thi, or Aksh fresh ho kar bahar hall me TV dekhte hue betha hua tha, Aksh kabhi bhi aise relax bethkar TV nahi dekhta tha, Radha to uska ye roop dekh kar heran si reh gayi thi.

Radha: Sakshi..... Ye Aksh thik to he na?
Sakshi: Matlab? Aisa kyu puch rahi ho Aai?
Radha: are uspar ek baar nazar dalkar to dekh.... Kabhi dekha he use itne aram se betha hua?
Uski baat par Sakshi bass has padti he.
Radha: kahi ise pyaar vyaar to nahi na ho gaya?
Sakshi: kya Aai.... Kaha ki baat kaha le ja rahi ho tum....
Radha: are pyaar me padne se hi insan aise alag alag sa rehne lagta he.....
Wo Sakshi ko aakh marte hue kehti he.
Sakshi: asa kahi nahiye Aai (aisa kuch nahi he) bass itna samajh lo ki tumhe tumhara purana Aksh wapis mil gaya he....
Wo Radha ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kehti he.
Radha: bass mujhe or kya chahiye..... Deva, mere bete ko ab firse pareshani me matt dalna.....
Fir Sakshi, Radha or Aksh milkar nashta kar lete he. Tabhi Aksh ko Karim ka call ajata he, wo jaldi se call pick kar leta he.

Aksh: ha Chacha kahiye na.....
Karim: are Aksh kaha he tu?
Aksh: me to ghar pe hi hu.... Kahiye na kuch kaam tha?
Karim: are kuch nahi yaar ek accha dealer mila he, to bass us se milne jana tha...
Aksh: thik he kab or kaha jana he?
Karim: lekin tera per to ab thik he na?
Aksh: ha chacha aap chinta mat kijiye, me bilkul thik hu....
Karim: thik he.... Hume thodi der baad 2 din Gujrat jane ke liye nikalna he, agar ye Deal ho jaye to bahot accha fayda hoga....
Aksh: sab ho jayega chacha.... Me ek kaam karta hu, bass thodi der me Garage par ajata hu....
Karim: chal thik he....
Fir wo call cut kar deta he

Aksh: Aai.... Me Karim chacha ke saath 2 din ke liye Gujrat ja raha hu....
Radha: Gujrat? Aise achanak se... Kyu?
Wo chintit lehze me Aksh se puchti he.
Aksh: tum chinta matt karo.... Wo bass ek Deal ke liye jana he, parso wapis ajaunga.....
Radha: accha.... Thik he... Kab nikal raha he?
Aksh: bass abhi hi nikalna he....
Radha: thik he... Dhyaan rakhna apna....
Aksh: Ho Aai.... Tu kalji karu nako (Ha, tum fikar na karo)
Fir wo apna nashta khatam kar ke apne kamre me chala jata he. Uske jane ki baat se Sakshi thodi udas si ho jati he, lekin wo Aksh ko apne kaam se rok nahi sakti thi.

Waha Aksh ne apne saath kuch kapde le liye the, or wo bass nikalne ke liye tayar tha ke tabhi piche se Sakshi uske kamre me ek katori le kar ajati he.

Sakshi: Aksh.... Ho gaye tere kapde pack?
Aksh: ha.... Ho gaye ab me nikalta hum...
Wo apni bag haath me lete hue kehta he.
Sakshi: pehle ye Dahi Shakkar kha le....
Wo chammach ko Aksh ki taraf badhate hue kehti he. Aksh apne dayne haath me Dahi lekar use kha leta he, or wo haath apne sar ke upar se fer leta he.
Aksh: Thanks Sakshi....
Or wo Sakshi ko kas kar Hug kar leta he. Achanak hue is hamle se Sakshi murti si bann jati he.
Aksh: chal me nikal raha hu, or apne khayal rakhna....
Wo Sakshi se alag hokar uske sar pe haath ferte hue kehta he or Radha se milkar darwaze ke bahar ajata he. Sakshi bhi uske piche piche hi ajati he kr darwaze par Aksh ko ek takk dekhte hue ruk jati he, Aksh bike par beth kar bike start kar raha tha ke uski nazar Sakshi par padi.
Aksh: kya hua? Aise kyu dekh rahi he tu?
Sakshi: me kaha? Wo to mera Dil kar raha tha to....
Wo muskurate hue Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: ohh... Mera dialogue mujhpar hi.... Hahaha.... Chal me nikalta hu, dhyan rakhna apna....
Wo haste hue Sakshi se kehta he.
Sakshi: tu bhi dhyan rakhna, or call karna bhul matt jana....
Aksh: thik he.... chal Yeto mi (ata hu me)
Fir Aksh bike le kar Garage nikal jata he. Or Sakshi bhi ghar ke andar ajati he. Uske paas karne ko koi kaam nahi tha, to wo ja kar apne kamre me let jati he. Aksh ko gaye kuch hi der hui thi, lekin Sakshi ko uski kami mehsus hone lagti he.

Sakshi(mann me): ye mujhe ho kya raha he? Aksh ko dekhte hi mujhe ajib sa lagne lagta he, Dil karta he ke bass.... Ke bass use hi dekhti rahu, thodi der ke liye bhi wo.mujhse dur hota he to bass bechaini si hone lagti he..... ahhh.... Aksh ye kya kar diya tune? Me pagal ho jaungi.....


Yaha Sakshi apni feeling ko samajhne ki koshish kar rahi thi, waha Aksh Garage pahoch gaya tha.

Aksh: Salam chacha....
Karim: are Aksh... Salam.. Salam....
Aksh: accha hum ja kese rahe he?
Karim: car se jayenge.... Kareeb 4 ghante lagg jayenge.... Lekin bass wo Deal ho jani chahiye....
Aksh: aap chinta kyu karte he chacha? Deal zarur hogi....
Karim: dekhte he ab upar wala jesa chahe wahi hoga....
Fir Karim Aksh ko Deal ke bare me sari bate bata deta he, darasal wo jin ke saath deal karne wale the wo ek Manufacturer Company thi, jaha se unko gadiyo ke parts, or aise hi kuch deal saste me padne wali thi. Fir dono car le kar Gujrat jane ke liye nikal jate he.










Gujrat ke sheher Surat me ek khali ilaka tha, jaha par ek Aadmi bandhi halat me tha, uske haath piche bandhe hue the, or wo apne ghutno par betha hua tha, us aadmi ke piche kareeb 30-40 log Guns liye khade the, tabhi samne se ek gaadi ajati he, gadi bandhi bane us aadmi ke samne kuch duri par ruk jati he or gaadi ka darwaza khulte hi ek aadmi apne haath me chota sa khanjar liye bahar ajata he. Jiska chehra bada hi khaufnaak tha, or upar se aakho me gehra Kala Surma use or bhi zyada khaufnaak bana raha tha, or is aadmi ka naam tha Abdul.

Abdul samne bandhi bane aadmi ko dekhte hue aage badh raha tha. Use dekh kar bandhi bana aadmi rone lagta he.

Aadmi: A...... Abdul bhai..... Abdul bhai..... Ma.... Maaf kardo mujhe..... Please.... Please.....
Wo Abdul ko apne kareeb ata dekh gid gidata he. Abdul uske ekdum samne akar khada ho jata he. Abdul us aadmi ki baat sunkar hasne lagta he.

Abdul: Hahaha...... Maaf? Boss ke khilaf kaam karne wale ko Maaf nahi kiya jata, use Jahannum ka safar karwaya jata he....
Wo ek shaitani hasi ke saath kehta he. Or apne khanjar se us aadmi ke maathe se lekar honto tak ek sidha ghaav maar deta he. Abdul ke humle se wo aadmi dard ke mare tadap uth ta he, or niche gir ke chillane lagta he. Us Aadmi ke naak ke do hisse ho gaye the, or dono ek ek taraf latak rahe the, or uske honto ka bhi kuch aisa hi haal tha, Abdul ne uske 2 honto ko 4 tukdo me badal diya tha.

Abdul niche jhuk kar us aadmi ka gala pakad leta ge or ek hi haath se use hawa me utha leta he, us aadmi ka chehra khun se sana hua tha, or us khun ki chinte Abdul ke chehre par udd rahi thi. Abdul use firse zameen par patak deta he, or apni gaadi ki taraf badh jata he, jese hi Abdul gaadi ka darwaza kholta he to usme se ek sher bahar ajata he. Ye tha inka paltu sher Abdul sher ko us aadmi ke paas le kar ata he, us aadmi ki to jaan sher ko dekh kar nikal hi chuki thi, tabhi Abdul sher ko belt se azaad kar deta he, sher azad hote hi us aadmi par jhapat padta he. Is khule ilake me bass us admi ki dardnak chinke sunayi de rahi thi. Abdul ko ye nazara dekh kar bahot hi khushi hi rahi thi, Bass kuch hi palo me sher us aadmi ko safa chat kar leta he, Abdul aage akar belt ko sher ke gale me laga deta he or use lekar apni gaadi me beth jata kar waha se nikal jata he. Uske piche piche hi waha ruke sare log bhi rawana ho jate he.

To dosto ye tha Abdul..... Rana ke sabse khas admiyo me se ek, Rana ko Abdul is liye pasand tha kyu ke wo behadd hi nirdayi tha. Rehem naam ki koi chiz Abdul ke paas nahi thi. Or yahi wajah thi ke Rana Abdul ko kafi pasand karta tha.



Place: CBI Headquarter, Gandhinagar, Gujrat.

Abhinav or ek officer uske Cabin me bethe hue the.

Officer: Sir.... Itne salo se to hum koshish kar hi rahe he na Rana ko pakadne ki... Lekin kuch hasil nahi ho raha, ulta humare kabil Officers ki jaan ja rahi he....
Abhinav: sahi kaha Anant.... Lekin hum apne kaam se piche bhi to nahi na hatt sakte...
Anant: nahi sir.... Hum apne kaam se piche to katayi nahi hatne wale, lekin shayad waqt Rana ka saath de raha he....
Abhinav: sach keh rahe ho tum.... Lekin ye waqt kab palat jaye kuch kaha nahu ja sakta....
Anant: humari sabse badi problem yahi he ke hum uske thikane ka pata nahi laga pa rahe he.
Abhinav: Rana ke Direct contact me jo bhi aadmi he wo apna muh kabhi nahi kholta, puchli baar bhi jis aadmi ko humne pakda tha, usne apni jaan de di, lekin Rana ke bare me ek lafz tak nahi bataya....
Anant: sir ye Rana bahot hoshiyar he.... Jo uske kareeb aadmi he un sabke muh band rahne ke liye wo unke pariwar ko nishana banata he. Agar kisi ne Rana ke bare me kuch bataya to waha Rana uske pariwar ko hi khatam kar dega....
Uski baat par Abhinav apni chair se uth jata he, Anant bhi uske piche hi khada hone lagta he ke Abhinav use bethe rehne ka ishara karta he.
Abhinav: thik kaha... Or isi majburi ki wajah se koi Rana ke bare me kuch bata nahi pata.... Lekin kabhi na kabhi ye khel khatam hoga.... Zarur hoga...
Wo apne cabin me lagi khidki ke paas ja kar kehta he.











Sham ke kareeb 6 baje Karim or Aksh Surat me agaye the, unhe kal Ahmadabad apni Deal ke liye jana tha, Karim gadi ko ek ghar ke samne ruka deta he or gad se utar kar dono ghar ke andar ajate he.

Aksh:ye ghar kiska he chacha?
Karim: are ye to meri choti behen or uske shohar ka ghar tha....
Aksh: ohh.... Thik he....
Darasal ye ghar Karim ki choti behen ka tha, jo apne pati ke saath yaha rehti thi, lekin uske pati ki Dubai me job hone se wo dono Dubai me hi settle ho gaye, wo bass kabhi kabar ate, lekin yaha nahi sirf Karim se milkar wapis chale jate. To is ghar ki chabiya Karim ke paas thi. Dono fresh ho kar kuch der aram karte he, Aksh sabse pehle apne ghar pe call kar deta he, usne Radha ko call kiya tha, or is waqt Radha, Santosh or Sakshi apne ghar ke baramde me bethe chay pi rahe the. Aksh kuch der tak Radha or Santosh se baat kar ke call cut kar deta he, jab Aksh bina Sakshi se baat kiye hi call cut karta he to Sakshi kafi udas si ho jati he. Thodi der tak Sakshi wahi udas si bethi rehti he or kuch der baad wo uthkar apne kamre me ajati he, jese hi usne apna mobile dekha jo charge par laga tha, uspar Aksh ke kayi sare Missed Calls the. Sakshi jaldi se mobile charge se hata kar Aksh ko call back karti he, Aksh uska call dekh kar call pick kar leta he.

Aksh: kya yaar Sakshi.... Kabse call kar rah hu me, jawab kyu nahi diya?
Sakshi: are wo... Wo mera Mobil kamre me tha, abhi dekhe tere missed calls....
Wo bed par beth te hue Aksh se kehti he
Sakshi: waise tune Aai ko call kiya tha to mujhse baat kyu nahi ki?
Wo apni narazgi Aksh se jatate hue puchti he.
Aksh: are yaar Aai ke samne kitni der tak baat kar pata? Isliye mene socha tujhse akele me baat ki jaye...
Sakshi: akele me? Apni behen se to tu kahi bhi kabhi bhi baat kar sakta he na?
Aksh: lekin tu behen se badhkar he mere liye....
Sakshi: m.... Matlab.... Kya?
Wo Aksh ki baat sunkar hadbada jati he.
Aksh: are matlab tu meri Best friend bhi to he na....
Sakshi: h.... Ha.... Me.... Waise tune khana to kha liya na?
Wo bed par let te hue Aksh se puchti he.
Aksh: ha khana to kab ka kha liya.... Bass abhi yaha pahoch gaye the to socha tujhe call kar lu.....

Dono ek dusre ke saath kafi der tak baate karne lagte he, Sakshi to jese sab kuch bhulkar Aksh me hi khoyi hui thi, kareeb aadhe gante tak baat karne ke baad wo phone kaat dete he.

Sakahi(mann me): best friend....... accha hua Girlfriend nahi kaha Bavlat......
Wo sharmate hue apne mann me soch rahi thi lekin jese hi use samajh aya ke usne kya keh diya to Sakshi ke chehre ke haav bhaav hi badal jate he.
Sakshi(mann me): Ahhh.... Chi chi.... Ye me bhi kya sochne lagi.... Sakshi.... Aisa sab sochna band kar... Lekin.... Lekin baat to ye bhi sach he ke me kafi waqt se Aksh ke liye over possessive ho gayi hu..... To usme galat kya he? Me Aksh se pyaar karti hu, lekin mujhe darr he kahi ye pyaar apni hadd se aage badh gaya to?


Aksh(mann me): yaar Sakshi...... Akhir kese tune kuch palo me hi meri duniya badal di? Me sachme bahot khush naseeb hu, jo mujhe teri jesi behen mili....

Dono hi ek dusre ke bare me sochte hue bethe the, Aksh thaka hone ki wajah se jaldi hi so jata he, or subah unhe Ahmadabad bhi jana tha apni Deal karne ke liye.

Subah subah Karim or Aksh Ahmadabad jane ke liye nikal chuke the. Unki meeting ka waqt 11 baje tha, kareeb 10 baje Karim or Aksh waha pahoch gaye the, fir waha unki meeting shuru hi jati he, Karim ka Experience or baat karne ki kala se Manufacturer turant ye Deal ke liye razi ho jata he. Lekin ye meeting kafi lambi nikal jati he, jisme Karim or Manufacturer ki business ki baate chal rahi thi. Or isi bahane Aksh ko bhi kafi kuch jaan ne ko mil raha tha. Unki meeting shaam tak chalti he. Or akhir kaar sabkuch jesa Karim or Aksh ne socha tha waisa hi hua. Dono bahar akar kafi khush lagg rahe the.

Aksh: chacha.... Humari deal ho hi gayi.... Congratulations.....
Wo Karim ko gale se lagate hue kehta he.
Karim: khuda ka shukar he.... Me to sachme bahot khush hu....
Aksh: chaliye ab nikalte he...
Karim: ha... Pehle ek humari party to banti he na.... Fir waha se Surat chale jayenge.... Or kal subah Mumbai and....
Aksh: thik he....
Fir wo dono khushi khushi apni party ke liye chale jate he.










Raat ke kareeb 12 bajne ko aye the, Mansi or uski kuch saheliya unki ek friend ki uske ghar me party enjoy kar rahe the. Waha kafi sare ladke ladkiya thi, sab log naach gana karne me busy the.

Mansi: yaar Kavita me chalti hu, kafi der ho gayi he, Mom Dad mera wait kar rahe honge.....
Wo apni saheli ke haath thamkar kehti he.
Kavita: oh c'mon Mansi.... Ab to na koi college ka tension he na kuch... Ruk jao na....
Wo Mansi ko rokte hue kehti he.
Mansi: please try to understand.... Mom bahot pareshan ho jati he... Please me jati hu na ab....
Kavita: ab aunty ka naam le rahi ho is liye jane de rahi hu, warna....
Wo Mansi ko ungli dikhate hue kehti he.
Mansi: really sorry.... Me kal milti hu tum se....
Kavita: okay Bye....
Wo Mansi ko hug karte hue kehti he, fir Mansi jaldi se ghar ane ke liye nikal jati he. Car drive karte waqt use Kiran ka Call ajata he.

Mansi(mann me): oh no..... Mom.... Ab ye meri koi baat nahi sunengi.... Kya karu....

Mansi: Mom me bass kuch der me ghar ajaungi, aap chinta mat karo, or me drive kar rahi hu to please don't call me again.... Bye....
Wo jaldi se call pick karke bina Kiran ko bolne ka moka diye hi bole jati he or call cut kar deti he.
Mansi(mann me): ahhh.... Thank God bach gayi.... Ab ghar ja kar Dad ko bol dungi Mom ko room se bahar na ane de mujhe apne room me jane tak....

Wahi dusri taraf ghar pe Kiran heran si phone ko dekhe ja rahi thi.

Aman: are kya ho gaya? Aise kya dekh rahi ho?
Kiran: ye ladki na.... Bina meri baat sune call cut kar diya....
Wo kafi gusse me kehti he.
Aman: kyu gussa karti ho Kiran.... Badi ho gayi he wo, enjoy karne do apne Friends ke saath....
Kiran: me use enjoy karne se nahi rok rahi hu, but look at the time..... Itni raat ho gayi he....
Wo chintit lehze me Aman se kehti he.
Aman: Relax Kiran.....
Wo Kiran ko shant karate hue kehta he.


Duniya me har kisam ke log mojud he, ek to wo jo kisi ki safalta ko dekh kar apne aap ko sudharne me laga hua hota he. Or dusre wo jo kisi ki safalta ko dekh andar hi andar kafi jalan sa mehsus karta he.

Yaha rasta pura khali pada tha, do ladke drink kiye bike se kahi ja rahe the, or tabhi unki nazar Mansi ki car par jati he.

Ladka1: are bhai.... Wo dekh, badi mahengi gaadi lagg rahi he, zarur koi paise wala Aadmi andar hoga....
Ladka2: abe thik se dekh bhosdiwale.... Aadmi nahi balki Aurat he andar....
Ladka1: to chal... Kaam karte he apna...
Ladka2: zarur bhai.....
Or wo bike ko tez chala kar Car ke aage le ata he or uske paas ek aisa Auzar tha jis se car ke tyres kharab ho jate, usne jaldi se wo Auzar tyre ke samne daal diya or bike ki speed slow kar di. Kuch hi seconds me car unbalanced ho jati he tabb Mansi car ko side me rok leti he.

Mansi: ahhh.... Pehle hi late ho gaya he, or usme gadi ko kya ho gaya?
Wo gusse me apne haath steering wheel par marte hue kehti he, or apna purse le kar car se utar jati he. Jese Mansi car se utri, wo 2 ladke bhi aha agaye.

Ladka1: oye chamak challo...... Chal apne purse de de yaha.....
Piche wala ladka bike se utar kar ek Khanjar Mansi ke samne karte hue kehta he.
Mansi: accha to tumhe purse ke andar ki chize hi chahiye na? To ye lo......
Wo apne Purse me haath dalkar usme se Gun nikalte hue us ladke par point kar ke kehti he. Gun dekh kar us ladke ki buri tarah se fat jati he.
Mansi: kya hua.... Chahiye na Purse?
Wo Ladke ki taraf badhkar kehti he, lekin wo ladka piche dum daba kar bhaag jata he or bike par beth kar dono 9 2 11 ho jate he.
Mansi: Sala Kutro...... Akkal no authmir...... Huhhh....
Fir Mansi car ko dekhne lagti he tabb use pata chalta he ke uska tyre hi kharab ho chuka he.
Mansi: ab kya karu? Dad ko hi call kar ke batana hoga....
Fir wo car ke andar se apna mobile le leti he, or Aman ko call karne hi ja rahi hoti he ke samne se ek car guzar rahi thi, jisme Aksh or Karim bethe hue the, Aksh ne dur se hi ek Ladki ko akela dekh liya tha.

Aksh: chacha..... Wo dekhiye wo ladki akeli khadi he, shayad uski gadi band ho gayi he....
Karim: ha thik kaha tune.... Chal dekhte he...
Fir wo gadi ko Mansi ke paas ruka deta he. Mansi Mobile me dekh rahi thi to uska dhyan Aksh or Karim par nahi jata. Aksh or Karim gadi se utar jate he.

Aksh: Excuse me....
Wo Mansi ke piche se kehta he, Aksh ki awaz sunkar Mansi piche mudti he, lekin jese hi Mansi piche mudi to use dekh kar Aksh gehri soch me chala gaya.
Aksh(mann me): ek minute..... Ise mene pehle bhi kahi dekha he, lekin mujhe yaad nahi araha.....
Wo Mansi ko ek takk dekhte hue soch raha tha, Mansi use apne aap ko aisa dekhta pa kar awkward si feel karne lagti he.
Karim: beta kya hua? Itni raat ko tum aise.....
Mansi: actually uncle meri car ka Tyre kharab ho gaya he....
Uski awaz se Aksh hosh me ajata he.
Karim: ohh..... Ye to puri tarah se bigad gaya he....
Wo tyre ke paas akar dekhte hue kehta he.
Karim: car me spear wheel to hoga hi na...
Mansi: ha usme he....
Karim: thik he...
Fir wo Mansi ko boot open karne ke liye kehta he, is sare waqiye ko Aksh wahi khade ho kar dekh raha tha, darasal wo yaad karne ki koshish kar raha tha ke ye kon he. Tabhi Karim Tyre le kar car ke aage ajata he, use dekh kar Aksh aage badh kar Karim se tyre le leta he, or use badalne lagta he. Aksh ka kaam bahot hi tez tha. Jo dekh kar Mansi kafi impress ho jati he. Bass kuch hi der me Aksh tyre badal deta he.

Mansi: thanks uncle.... Thank You So Much.....
Wo apna haath aage badhate hue kehti he.
Karim: koi baat nahi.... sambhal kar jana, raat kafi ho chuki he....
Wo Mansi se haath milata he, uske sar pe haath fer kar kehta he.
Mansi: Thanks.....
Wo Aksh ki taraf haath badhate hue badi muskurahat ke saath kehti he.
Aksh: ah.... Uhmm.... It's... It's okay.....
Wo apne kanpte hue haath aage badha kar Mansi se haath mila leta he. Fir Mansi waha se nikal jati he lekin Aksh ab bhi yaad kar raha tha ke usne Mansi ko kaha dekha tha.

Karim: kya ho gaya bhai tujhe?
Wo Aksh ko kandhe se hilate hue puchta he.
Aksh: ahh.... Ha.... Nahi... Nahu kuch nahi...
Karim: chal ab jaldi se...
Fir wo log car me beth kar nikal jate he.

Aksh(mann me): yaar mene ise zarur kahi dekha he, lekin mujhe yaad kyu nahi araha.... Chhodo yaar, kya hoga yaad akar bhi? Huhhh....
Fir wo bhi Mansi ke bare me sochna band kar deta he, lekin tabhi uske dimag me kuch ajata he jis se uski khushi ka thikana nahi rehta.

Aksh: yes..... Yes..... Mil gaya.....
Wo khushi me zor zor se chillate hue kehta he.
Karim: oye... Kya ho gaya tujhe?
Aksh: chacha.... Mil gaya... Idea mil gaya.....
Karim: idea? Kesa idea?
Aksh: mere business start-up ke liye idea mil gaya.....
Wo bahot hi khushi se kehta he.
Karim: matlab? Kya idea he?
Aksh: are.... Mujhe ek baat bataye, jab bhi kisi ku gaadi kahi Garage se kafi dur kharab ho jaye to uske paas kya Option reh jata he?
Karim: to wo kisi bhi aise garage walo ko call karega jo car tow kar sake....
Aksh: bilkul thik..... Lekin jab koi aise jagah fas gaya jaha ka exact adress na ho, to use kafi dikkat asakti he right?
Karim: bilkul......
Aksh: me soch raha hu ke hum ek Application banaye, jaha par aap bass apna location on karke apni exact jagah par hume bula sakte ho, hum aise kuch options bhi provide karenge like agar unhe problem ke bare me pata ho to wo ye check kar sakte he ke unki gadi ko waqt kitna lagega, kharch kitna ayega.... or kisi ko apni gadi ka modifications karna ho to unke liye bhi hum kafi option daal denge ke wo apni gadi kis tarah modify karna chahenge..... Matlab kisi ko directly call karke ye sab puchne ki zarurat hi nahi hogi.... Or bass yahi nahi hum bahot kuch kar sakte he....
Uski sari baate sunkar Karim ko bhi ispar khushi ho rahi thi.
Karim: baat teri sahi he Aksh..... Mujhe to ye online ka zyada kuch samajh nahi he, lekin tu keh raha he to bindas kar.... Or iske liye jitna kharch ayega, mujhe bata dena...
Aksh: thik he, Mumbai ja kar me sabse pehle ispar hi kaam shuru kar dunga....
Karim: thik he.... Lekin bahot accha socha he tune... Good...
Aksh: Thank You....
Fir wo dono aise hi baate karte hue chale jate he, Aksh bahot hi zyada khush tha apne Idea par. Use ab bass Mumbai ja kar in sab par implement karna tha.


Lekin ab dekhna interesting hoga ke Aksh ka ye idea, ye Start Up aage kya rang dikhata he. Ab jo bhi hoga aapko pata chal jayega.

or dosto me bata du ke Story abhi apni track par nahi ayi he, chapter 2 thoda lamba hoga, kyu ke yahi se to puri kahani ki rachna honi he. Or agle kuch Updates sirf or sirf Sakshi, Aksh or Mansi par honge, or tabb aap samajh jaoge ki akhir story kis track par jane wali he.



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