Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

[Qaatil]

Chapter 1 - The Early Life

Update 6​

Word Count: 2365
Estimated Reading Time: 00:11:00


Ek or chehekti subah, adha ugta hua suraj is duniya me laali faila raha tha, ek bahot Khubsurat nazara pesh kar raha tha, or is Khubsurat nazare ko Aksh apne ghar ki chatt par khada dekh raha tha. Uske dimag me is waqt kafi baate chal rahi thi, ab wo kya soch raha tha ye to Aksh khud jane.

Wahi Sakshi subah subah naha kar tayar ho chuki thi. Din chuttiyo ke ho ya fir normal days, Sakshi humesha se jaldi uthkar tayar ho jati, or sabse pehla uska jo kaam hota wo Bhagwaan ke samne haath jodkar prarthana karna.

Sakshi(mann me): Deva... Aapki Krupa drushti aise hi hum sab par banaye rakhna... Or Aksh ko thodi sadbuddhi dena... Humesha bewajah sabse behes karta rehta he... Please use samjhana Deva....

Wo apni aakhe band kare apne pure dil se Bhagwaan ke samne haath jode khadi thi, uski har roz ki prarthana me Aksh ka naam zarur hota tha, kuch der baad Sakshi bhi upar chatt par jane ka sochti he, wo jese hi upar pahochi to usne dekha ke Aksh badi gehri soch me waha suraj ki taraf dekh raha tha. Sakshi aage akar Aksh ke kandhe par haath rakh deti he.

Aksh: kuch nahi.... Bas accha lagg raha he yaha par to ruk gaya me....
Jese hi use apne kandhe par Sakshi ka haath mehsus hua usne bol diya.
Sakshi: hmm... lekin mene to kuch pucha hi nahi...
Wo Aksh ke bagal me khade ho kar Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: kyu? Yahi to puchne wali thi na tu?
Wo Sakshi ki akho me dekhte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Bavlat(Pagal).....
Wo muskurate hue Aksh ke sar me marte hue kehti he.

Kuch der tak dono bas Suraj ki ugti kirano ko nihar rahe the, thodi der baad Sakshi ko Aksh se baat karne ka ye sahi waqt laga to wo Aksh se baat karne ka sochti he.

Sakshi: Aksh meri ek baat manega tu?
Wo bina Aksh ko dekhe hi puchti he.
Aksh: konsi baat?
Fir Sakshi Aksh ki taraf dekhne lagti he.
Sakshi: dekh Aksh me janti hu ke tujhe ye padhai wadhai me bilkul intereste nahi he lekin.....
Aksh: yaar Sakshi please ab tu subah subah shuru mat ho jana....
Wo Sakshi ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Dada meri baat to sunn na pehle... Mujhe ek baat bata, tujhe padhai nahi karni to tu kya karega tabtak?
Aksh: pata nahi... lekin kabhi na kabhi kuch zarur karunga...
Sakshi: to fir tabtak padhai kar le na.... Abhi teri koi umar bhi nahi he jo tu kuch kar sake... Ek baar tu 18 ka ho gaya to jo tera dil kare waisa hi karna... Me humesha tera saath dungi.... Or agar tab bhi Aai Baba tere faisle ke khilaf honge to me fir bhi tera hi saath dungi... Lekin please tabtak padhai kar lena....
Wo Aksh ke samne khade ho kar uske haath thamkar kehti he, ab Aksh bhi sochne par majbur ho gaya ke akhir wo padhai chhod kar kya karega...
Sakshi: bolna Dada meri itni si baat manega na?
Ab Aksh kafi gehri soch me tha. Or shayad usko apne sawal ka jawab bhi mil gaya.
Aksh: thik he....
Uske jawab se Sakshi bahot hi khush ho jati he, or kas kar Aksh ko gale laga leti he.
Sakshi: thank you Aksh meri baat maan ne ke liye...
Aksh: ha... is baar teri baat maan li mene, Lekin ye mat samajh lena ke har baar teri mann mani chalegi...
Wo Sakshi ko apne se alag kar ke use ungli dikhate hue kehta he.
Sakshi: thik he..... Matt maan na meri baat, lekin ab se acche se padhai karna, thik he?
Uski baat ka jawab Aksh bas apni gardan ha me hila kar deta he.
Fir wo dono kuch der tak upar chatt par hi bate karte hue beth jate he.

Santosh apne kaam par janeke liye tayar ho chuka tha.
Santosh: Radha... Aksh ko bulao... Mujhe us se baat karni he.
Radha: dekhiye subah subah shuru mat ho jana ab aap, kya baat karni he?
Santosh: us se akhri baar puchunga ke padhai karni he ya nahi... Warna...
Sakshi: Baba aap chinta mat kijiye.... Aksh to bas aise hi bol raha tha ke use padhai nahi karni...
Santosh: chalo thik he.... Me chalta hu...
Or wo apne kaam par chala jata he. Tabhi Aksh apne kamre se bahar ajata he or sidha ghar ke bahar jane lagta he.
Radha: Aksh kaha ja raha he t subah subah?
Wo Aksh ko darwaze par hi rokte hue puchti he.
Aksh: Karim chacha ke yaha ja raha hu or me sham ko 4 baje aunga ghar pe...
Or ye kehkar wo bahar chala jata he
Radha: 4 baje? Lekin... Aksh... Aksh... Sunn to...
Wo piche se Aksh ko pukarti he lekin tabtak to wo nikal gaya tha.
Radha: pata nahi kab sudhrega ye ladka?
Sakshi: kya Aai tum bhi... Aksh kaha bigda hua he jo sudharne ki baat kar rahi ho...
Wo aage akar Radha ke gale me bahe dalte hue kehti he.
Radha: ha... Tu to bas humesha uski hi tarafdari karti reh..... Dada chi ladki (Bhai ki ladli)
Wo narazgi se Sakshi se alag hote hue kehti he.
Sakshi: isme tarafdari ki kya baat agayi Aai? Uski soch thodi alag si he, or mujhe usme koi galat baat nahi lagti or me uski kisi bhi galat baat me saath nahi deti....
Radha: Rahude Rahude (Rehne do).... Bahot bolne lagi he ab tu bhi...
Wo Sakshi ke sar pe halke se thapki marte hue kehti he.
Aise hi dono masti mazak me ghar ke kaam nipta dete he, waha Aksh Garage par pahoch gaya tha. Karim use chote mote kaam sikha raha tha or Aksh bhi mann laga kar kaam sikh raha tha, lekin jab Karim apne customers se baat karta to Aksh kafi bariki se unki baate sunta tha, kyu ke Karim ke sare customer us se bahot hi friendly tarike se baat karte the, Karim ne apne customers ko shikayat ka mauka kabhi bhi nahi diya tha or isi wajah se har koi Karim se kafi acche se baat karte, or is area me Karim ka hi ek lauta garage tha kisi me itni himmat nahi thi ke wo yaha par ek Garage open kare, kyu ke log humesha Karim se hi apni gadiyo ki marammat karwate the. Aise hi waqt nikalta gaya, dopehar ko khane ka samay ho gaya tha, Karim Aksh ko apne saath ghar le gaya jaha wo log khana kha kar firse garage agaye.

Karim: Aksh bahot der ho gayi he, ab chala ja tu ghar pe.
Aksh: nahi chacha me shaam ko chala jaunga....
Karim: are Aksh tu thak gaya he, ghar ja aram kar le....
Aksh: chacha me nahi thaka hu, chaliye kaam par lagg jate he.
Or wo aage badh kar apna adhura kaam pura karne me lagg jata he.
Karim(mann me): ise samajh pana namunkin he... Yaa Khuda... Iski humesha madat karte rehna, ye ladka kuch alag hi he... Lekin dil ka kafi saaf he....

Or fir Karim bhi apne kaam me lagg jata he. Shaam ke 4 baje hue the Karim Aksh ko ghar jane ko kehta he, Aksh ka dil ghar jane ke liye nahi kar raha tha, lekin Karim ki zidd par wo ghar chala jata he, Raste me jate hue Aksh ko usi Showroom me ek Supercar dikhit he, jaha bachpan me do admiyo ne uska mazak udaya tha, us car ko dekh kar Aksh ke chehre par hasi ajati he.

Aksh(mann me): bahot jald tu mere paas bhi hogi... Thoda sabr kar.. huhhh

Or wo apne mann me apne ane wale future ko plan karte hue ghar ke raste chala gaya. Ghar akar wo fresh ho jata he, kuch der baad ghar pe Soham or Neha bhi aye hue the, charo milkar upar apni chatt par bethe dhalte suraj ka Khubsurat nazara dekh rahe the.

Neha: yaar me to College jane ke liye bahot hi exited hu, kitna maza ayega....
Wo bahot hi khushi se kehti he lekin Soham usi khilli udane ki sochta he.
Soham: accha? Me janta hu tu kyu exited he... Dekh itna exite hone ki koi zarurat nahi he... Kyu ke teri shakal Bandariya jesi he, or Bandariya ko koi ladka ghaas bhi nahi dalta... Samji...
Uski baat se Sakshi zor zor se hasne lagti he lekin Neha bahot gusse me ajati he or sidha Soham ka collar pakad leti he.
Neha: kutte.. kya kaha tune.... Me Bandariya.... khud to joker lagta he, or mujhe Bandariya bol raha he..
Wo zor zor se Soham ka collar pakad kar use age piche karte hue bol rahi thi, Sakshi in dono ki masti par hass rahi thi lekin Aksh to bas dhalte suraj ko ek takk dekhe ja raha tha. Or Sakshi use is tarah se dekh leti he.
Soham: kya soch raha he Aksh tu?
Aksh: kuch nahi..... Bas dekh raha hu ke jese ye suraj dhal raha he, waise hi meri life bhi dhalte ja rahi he...
Uski baat se wah ka sara mahol hi badal jata he, lekin Sakshi ko is baat par kafi gussa ajata he lekin wo bina gussa dikhaye Aksh ke bagal me beth jati he.

Sakshi: to tu apne aap ko is suraj ki jagah dekh raha he na?
Wo samne dhalte Suraj ko dekhte hue Aksh se puchti he, Aksh uske sawal par sirf Sakshi ko dekh raha tha.
Sakshi: jawab de na Aksh
Aksh: ha.....
Sakshi: to fir tujhe ye sacchayi kyu nahi dikhayi deti ke Yahi Suraj dhalte hue bhi is puri duniya ko kitna Khubsurat bana deta he, khud jal kar dusro ki zindagi me sawera lata he... Aksh tu kyu humesha aisi ulti sidhi bate karta rehta he? Me... Me....
Or wo apni baat puri kiye bina hi waha se niche chali jati he, Soham or Neha use samjhane ke liye uske piche hi chale ate he, Lekin Aksh Sakshi ko naraz kar ke kafi bura mehsus kar raha tha, Aksh kuch der wahi betha rehta he.

Kuch der baad Soham or Neha bhi apne ghat chale gaye the, Aksh ko Sakshi se baat karni thi lekin Sakshi us se Naraz lagg rahi thi or wo bas ghar ke kaam karne me lagg jati he, Aksh ko us se baat karne ka mauka nahi milta.

Raat ko sab log milkar khana kha lete he, khane ke baad Sakshi Radha ka kaam me haath batane lagti he, Aksh tabtak bahar walk ke liye chala jata he, jab wo ghar aya to Radha or Santosh TV dekh rahe the, Sakshi ko waha na dekh kar Aksh us se baat karne uske kamre me chala jata he. Jaha Sakshi bed par badi hi gehri soch me leti hui thi, Uske kamre ka darwaza khula hua tha Sakshi ko pata nahi chalta ke Aksh waha aya he tab Aksh darwaze ko knock karta he jis se Sakshi hosh me ajati he or Darwaze par Aksh ko khada dekh uthkar beth jati he. Aksh andar akar pehle darwaza lock kar deta he or ja kar Sakshi ke samne niche apne ghutno par beth kar uske haath thaam leta he.

Aksh: sorry Sakshi..... Me janta hu tu meri kahi baat se naraz he, or tera naraz hona sahi bhi he, lekin.... lekin me kya karu, me nahi janta ke kyu me aisi baate karta hu... Samajh hi nahi araha ke me kyu aisa banta ja raha hu, kabhi kabhi me apne aap se nafrat karne lagta hu... Kya karu Sakshi me tu hi bata....
Sakshi: You find peace not by rearranging the circumstances of your life, but by realizing who you are at the deepest level, Eckhart Tolle...... Jin Authors ki kitabe padhta he tu, unki hi bate he ye...
Wo halki si num akhi se kehti he, jis se Aksh ke chehre par ek hasi ajati he.
Aksh: sahi kaha... Lekin kayi baar Practicality in sari baato par kese na kese haawi ho hi jati he... Or us waqt bahot dard hota he... Sabse zyada to tab, jab humare pyaar karne wale log humse naraz ho jaye...
Sakshi: me koi naraz nahi hu tujh par....
Wo Aksh se nazre ferte hue kehti he.
Aksh: to fir aise nazre kyu fer rahi he..... Ab maaf bhi kar de.... Aage se kabhi aisi baate nahi karunga..
Wo Sakshi ke haath kaste hue kehta he lekin wo koi response nahi deti.
Aksh: ab maan bhi jana... Oye chipkali....
Bas Aksh ke muh se ye nikla ke Sakshi ka gussa satve asman par chala jata he, or wo Aksh se apne haath chhuda kar uska collar pakad leti he.
Sakshi: tujhe kitni baar kaha he ue mat bola kar mujhe.... Samajh nahi ata tere....
Wo bahot hi gusse me usko dhakke dete hue kehti he. Uska gussa dekh Aksh has padta he or fir Sakshi bhi uska collar chhod deti he.
Sakshi: please Aksh age se aisi utpatang baate mat kiya kar...
Aksh: ha nahi karunga.... Ab so ja.. mujhe bhi bahot nind arahi he.
Sakshi: okay...
Or fir Aksh waha se apne kamre me chala ata he, aaj pura din kaam karne se wo kafi thak chuka tha isliye bed par let te hi uski aakh lagg jati he.

Or is tarah inka ye din nikal jata he, jaha humne dekha ke wo Aksh jo kisi ki nahi manta use Sakshi ne bas kuch palo me apni baat manva li, or wo Apni padhai continue karne ke liye razi ho gaya, jaha Aksh mann laga kar Karim se kaam sikh raha tha, lekin jab bhi Karin apne customers se baat karta to Aksh unko kafi note karta tha. Wahi Sakshi ki apne bhai se narazgi, jo jayaz thi, use Aksh ne dur kar hi diya. Ab inki life ne aage kya mod ate he ye dekhna interesting hoga.

Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

 

[Qaatil]

For staring new story thread...

Congratulations for new story..bhai

Congratulations bro waiting for update
For new story

Congratulations for new story Qaatil bro

Jabardast introduction.bhai❤

For Starting New Story Thread

...for new story ...

Nice intro waiting for update

Bhai comments bharpoor milega...tum agla update post karo

Welcome back Qaatil bhai.........

Introduction padke hi aisa lagta hai story bahut hi faadu hone wali hai......

Update ka intezar mein.....

Fantasy me story dali h

Koi magic vagic aisi h kya story bhai

Congratulations for new thread

Fir thik h
Kyuki magic wali story apne matlab ki nhi

Nice introduction..

Sabse pehle new story ke liye apko bdhai aur apka shukriya hume ek aur khani dene ke liye



Gajab intro to bdiya rha
Is bar matlab story me teen character h lead role, triangle
Aksh, sakshi, mansi


Dar ke rehti h, aise kya badlaav aa gye aksh me interesting

Waiting for first update

Qaatil bta to dety laga di hy shuru atory

nice update

Kya hi baat bhai isme love triangle dikh raha he, or love triangle me to dard milna hi he dekhte he ab ye dard kise milta he, waiting for 1st Update.

nice intro

Bahut khub Qaatil Bhai, the intro ekdum dhasu he, mumbai se Surat ye kya soch rahe ho bhai? Eagerly waiting for updates

for the new story. I am sure this will much better than earlier story.

Congratulations for new thread Bhai & waiting for first update.

Congratulations bro for new story

Intro is fantastic

Keep writing we always with you

Ek nayi kahani shuru karne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad bhai aapka.
Ye kahani apne anjaam tak pahunche iske liye anant shubhkamnaye....

Baat introduction ki....
Aapne hero ka naam sabse hatkar rakha h अक्ष waah or jo do main character h unke nam bhi lajawab h साक्षी और मानसी .
Anoothe naam.
Behtareen raha introduction.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Congratulations bro

Congratulations Qaatil bro for new story, ab ayega maza bhai ki new story Updates ka besabri se intzar rahega.

This time I liked your writing better than before. This story is about brother and sister. I liked the way you introduced us to the characters in the story. Now I eagerly await the first update of the story.
Thank You...

Bohot achha update bhai Waiting for next update ♥

lovely update

first update shandaar hai lekin aapne update ke suruaat me hi sad ending ki jalak dikhai hai ab kya kahun samjh na aa raha

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Update ki shuruaat badi hi khatarnaak tarike se hui.
or fir bachpan se.
Aksh or sakshi ki badmashiyon ko aapne bahut hi sundar tarike se dikhaya h .
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah

"
Ghayal Kar Ke Mujhe Usne Poochha,
Karoge Kya Phir Mohabbat Mujhse,
Lahoo-Lahoo Tha Dil Mera Magar
Honthon Ne Kaha Beintha-Beintha....
"
Lazavab Shurvath....Congratulation for the story

Bang on nice start, Characters Introduction well narrated, roles wisely chosen, jo kami (Narration ki) apke pehle story me thi, wo apne is story bahuth bakubi cover up kiya hai umeed hai aage bhi aise hi updates ayenge. Aur story ke pehle update se hi apna hero lime light me aachuka hai is ki waja uska character hai. Dekthe yeh story kya rang dikhati hai.....
Aur ek baath, ek chota sa suggestion personally i hate tragedy stories, movies etc., aur agar aap is story ko tragedic bannane ka soch rahe ho tho please meri request hai ki is story ko tragedy mat bannana.
Jab bhi mein kio stories ya fir koi movies dekhtha hun tho mein us story ke character ko apne aap se jod detha hun pata nahi yeh meri buri addat hai ya fir kuch aur but mein aise karne se apne aap ko rokh nahi saktha aur is ka natiza yeh hota hai ki jab koi tragedy scene ya fir story ko dektha ya fir padtha hun tho mujhe bahuth zada dard hota hai isliye mein aap se sirf request kar saktha hun kyun ki aapne is story pe bahuth mehanat kar ke likha hai aur changes shayad is story ki destiny badal sakthi jo shayad is story ke liye accha na ho so.
aur keep it up.....
Wating for the update

are Qaatil Bhai aapne to qatl kar diya
mind-blowing Start, yaar apne na middle class family ki ek baat bahut hi acche dhang se dikhayi he, ke ek middle class parents apne baccho ke liye koi taj mehel to nahi banwa sakte lekin unki choti si icchao ko pure dil se pura karte he jese yaha par Santosh ne apne baccho keliye jo gola banane ke liye Syrups laye.... Ye dikhata he the beauty of a Middle class Parents ❤
aise hi likhte rehna bhai, waiting for next Update

Nice update bro...

Just superb

Awesome update

Aise Update dete rehna bro Story bich me mat chhod dena bas

Aaj start Kiya h read Kar ke review deta hu

Gajab update bhai ji, pyara update tha
aksh ke rone ne to emotional kar diya

Middle class family ki life,pareshani,tangi bdiya tarike se describe ki h apne

Update jaldi khtm ho gya


Bache kya jane ab is bare me , agle mahine bol diya lekin aksh ko aaj hi chaiye

Lekin isiliye to unhe bache kehte h


Yha se hi aksh business man banne ka sochega


Jo ye conversation h na aksh aur sakshi ki, bas kya khu mujhe bhut jyada pyari lagti h
Meri story padne ki ye khas vjah h
Aise updates padkar jo sakoon milta h, pucho mat

Eagerly waiting for next update

Bhut shandar update biradar. Story track par aa rhi ha

Fabulous start
Keep posting

Childhood is very good and sweet, I miss my childhood while reading the story, we have no worries, playing and having fun all day long. From now on, Aksh and Sakshi are supporting each other, will have more fun later. I have also eaten a lot of ice balls during my school time and still eat occasionally. I liked the thinking of Aksh and some things are understood at the right time.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

Yaar Qaatil bhai kya hi likh rahe ho aap
Aapki writing pehle se zyada imrove hui he, keep it up bhai

Or aaj ke Update ki baat kare to kamal update tha, dono ka kisi ladke ko milkar marna
Sakshi ka itni buri halat me bhi gole ke liye pyaar ❤
Or wahi Aksh ke saaf dil par is pesa jesi khichad ki bunde lagg jana, ye bahut galat hua, dekhte he ab age kya hoga, eagerly waiting bhai.

Pyaara Update maza aya padhkar, or jo dono ne milkar us ladke ko mara bahut sahi kiya sare moments bahut hi pyare the, or ab aksh ke andar ye sawal agaya he, pata nahi kya hota he aagey waiting for next Update

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aksh or sakshi ka milkar apne se bade ladke ko pitna or ghar me ma ki dant sunkar bachpan ke din yaad aa gye.
Aap itna kamal ka update likhte ho ki main khud se jod leta hoon use.
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Lovely update ek bahuth hi masumiyat see bara update or ek bahuth gheri baat bi pata chalti hai is update se ki maa baap ka pyaar tyag, samarpan, ki tulna kisi bhi cheez se nahi ho sakthi.. Aur kya is mamsum see ladke k man mein umad rahe swalon ka jawab melega ya nahi dekthe hai aage kya hot hai
Good waiting for next

Nice update bro

waiting for next update

Bahut hi pyara or masumiyat bhara Update

Awesome update

aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update

Achcha update hai koi baat hoti hai jo life me sab badal deti hai yahan paise ki baat aa gayi matlab bachpan gaya inka dekhte kya hota

Very good starting and nice script
Full paisa wasool performance.
Waiting for the next update.

Nice update waiting for next

Behad hi shandar Update

N
Nice start bro

I think base of the story ends here.

Now it will be interesting to see what happens next....

Good one Qaatil bhai......

Super se bhi uper update

Awesome update

Beautiful Update bhai ❤ pyar se bhara hua Update tha, ab us admi ne kahi baat ka bhi asar hoga Aksh par, dekhte he kya hoga age, eagerly waiting for next update.

nice aur lovely update ..
sakshi ko doll set maangne se mana karta hai aksh aur uske paise se raksha bandhan ke din uske liye wo doll set kharidta hai ..tohfa dene ke liye aksh ne apne cycle ke paise kharch kar diye aur jab ye baat sakshi ko pata chali to wo naraj ho gayi aur aksh ko thappad bhi maara ...

par isse dono ke bich kitna pyar hai ye dikhta hai .

ab car ko dekhkar usko kharidne ki sochna aur un do aadmi ki baate yaa taana aksh ke dimaag me fit ho gayi hai ..
par paise kamane ke liye padhai jaruri hai ye usko koi batayega ? uski problem to kisiko pata hi nahi ..

Suoerb just supers

Nice and superb update..

shandar update

There is a lot of fun in the circus, I have also gone, Aksh refuses Sakshi to take toys, meas he has taken the money thing seriously but it is very important to study because that is why he will move forward, here Aksh is making a mistake. You are trying to explain the importance of money in the story. Well according to me Aksh should concentrate on studies from now on and after being successful everything is his own. get angry and persuade, This will always go on.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

Lovely update..bhai❤

Bdiya update bhai ji



Last me to update kya likha tha yaar bas shabd nhi h

Nice update...

Abtak ka sabse beautiful Update bhai, kya likha he. Aksh ka apne bachaye peso se sakshi ke liye gift lena, sakahi ka sacchayi pata chalne par rona.. ye sab dil ko chu gaya bhai. Ab inki bachpan ki bate miss karenge.. but koi ni, story ko ab track par lana he very exited to see what will be the results do.... Eagerly Waiting bhai.

Waiting

Ek dam shandar or jandar update
Sorry for the late coments Qaatil bro

Bohot sahi update bhai lahe rho

Waiting.....

Pyara update bhai ji, shayad ab story thodi intense hoti jayegi future Updates ka besabri se intezar he... ❤

Superb Starting bro keep it up

Bhai ap ki nai story besabri se intjar tha jo ab poora hua.
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Chapter 1 - The Early Life

Update 6​

Word Count: 2365
Estimated Reading Time: 00:11:00


Ek or chehekti subah, adha ugta hua suraj is duniya me laali faila raha tha, ek bahot Khubsurat nazara pesh kar raha tha, or is Khubsurat nazare ko Aksh apne ghar ki chatt par khada dekh raha tha. Uske dimag me is waqt kafi baate chal rahi thi, ab wo kya soch raha tha ye to Aksh khud jane.

Wahi Sakshi subah subah naha kar tayar ho chuki thi. Din chuttiyo ke ho ya fir normal days, Sakshi humesha se jaldi uthkar tayar ho jati, or sabse pehla uska jo kaam hota wo Bhagwaan ke samne haath jodkar prarthana karna.

Sakshi(mann me): Deva... Aapki Krupa drushti aise hi hum sab par banaye rakhna... Or Aksh ko thodi sadbuddhi dena... Humesha bewajah sabse behes karta rehta he... Please use samjhana Deva....

Wo apni aakhe band kare apne pure dil se Bhagwaan ke samne haath jode khadi thi, uski har roz ki prarthana me Aksh ka naam zarur hota tha, kuch der baad Sakshi bhi upar chatt par jane ka sochti he, wo jese hi upar pahochi to usne dekha ke Aksh badi gehri soch me waha suraj ki taraf dekh raha tha. Sakshi aage akar Aksh ke kandhe par haath rakh deti he.

Aksh: kuch nahi.... Bas accha lagg raha he yaha par to ruk gaya me....
Jese hi use apne kandhe par Sakshi ka haath mehsus hua usne bol diya.
Sakshi: hmm... lekin mene to kuch pucha hi nahi...
Wo Aksh ke bagal me khade ho kar Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: kyu? Yahi to puchne wali thi na tu?
Wo Sakshi ki akho me dekhte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Bavlat(Pagal).....
Wo muskurate hue Aksh ke sar me marte hue kehti he.

Kuch der tak dono bas Suraj ki ugti kirano ko nihar rahe the, thodi der baad Sakshi ko Aksh se baat karne ka ye sahi waqt laga to wo Aksh se baat karne ka sochti he.

Sakshi: Aksh meri ek baat manega tu?
Wo bina Aksh ko dekhe hi puchti he.
Aksh: konsi baat?
Fir Sakshi Aksh ki taraf dekhne lagti he.
Sakshi: dekh Aksh me janti hu ke tujhe ye padhai wadhai me bilkul intereste nahi he lekin.....
Aksh: yaar Sakshi please ab tu subah subah shuru mat ho jana....
Wo Sakshi ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Dada meri baat to sunn na pehle... Mujhe ek baat bata, tujhe padhai nahi karni to tu kya karega tabtak?
Aksh: pata nahi... lekin kabhi na kabhi kuch zarur karunga...
Sakshi: to fir tabtak padhai kar le na.... Abhi teri koi umar bhi nahi he jo tu kuch kar sake... Ek baar tu 18 ka ho gaya to jo tera dil kare waisa hi karna... Me humesha tera saath dungi.... Or agar tab bhi Aai Baba tere faisle ke khilaf honge to me fir bhi tera hi saath dungi... Lekin please tabtak padhai kar lena....
Wo Aksh ke samne khade ho kar uske haath thamkar kehti he, ab Aksh bhi sochne par majbur ho gaya ke akhir wo padhai chhod kar kya karega...
Sakshi: bolna Dada meri itni si baat manega na?
Ab Aksh kafi gehri soch me tha. Or shayad usko apne sawal ka jawab bhi mil gaya.
Aksh: thik he....
Uske jawab se Sakshi bahot hi khush ho jati he, or kas kar Aksh ko gale laga leti he.
Sakshi: thank you Aksh meri baat maan ne ke liye...
Aksh: ha... is baar teri baat maan li mene, Lekin ye mat samajh lena ke har baar teri mann mani chalegi...
Wo Sakshi ko apne se alag kar ke use ungli dikhate hue kehta he.
Sakshi: thik he..... Matt maan na meri baat, lekin ab se acche se padhai karna, thik he?
Uski baat ka jawab Aksh bas apni gardan ha me hila kar deta he.
Fir wo dono kuch der tak upar chatt par hi bate karte hue beth jate he.

Santosh apne kaam par janeke liye tayar ho chuka tha.
Santosh: Radha... Aksh ko bulao... Mujhe us se baat karni he.
Radha: dekhiye subah subah shuru mat ho jana ab aap, kya baat karni he?
Santosh: us se akhri baar puchunga ke padhai karni he ya nahi... Warna...
Sakshi: Baba aap chinta mat kijiye.... Aksh to bas aise hi bol raha tha ke use padhai nahi karni...
Santosh: chalo thik he.... Me chalta hu...
Or wo apne kaam par chala jata he. Tabhi Aksh apne kamre se bahar ajata he or sidha ghar ke bahar jane lagta he.
Radha: Aksh kaha ja raha he t subah subah?
Wo Aksh ko darwaze par hi rokte hue puchti he.
Aksh: Karim chacha ke yaha ja raha hu or me sham ko 4 baje aunga ghar pe...
Or ye kehkar wo bahar chala jata he
Radha: 4 baje? Lekin... Aksh... Aksh... Sunn to...
Wo piche se Aksh ko pukarti he lekin tabtak to wo nikal gaya tha.
Radha: pata nahi kab sudhrega ye ladka?
Sakshi: kya Aai tum bhi... Aksh kaha bigda hua he jo sudharne ki baat kar rahi ho...
Wo aage akar Radha ke gale me bahe dalte hue kehti he.
Radha: ha... Tu to bas humesha uski hi tarafdari karti reh..... Dada chi ladki (Bhai ki ladli)
Wo narazgi se Sakshi se alag hote hue kehti he.
Sakshi: isme tarafdari ki kya baat agayi Aai? Uski soch thodi alag si he, or mujhe usme koi galat baat nahi lagti or me uski kisi bhi galat baat me saath nahi deti....
Radha: Rahude Rahude (Rehne do).... Bahot bolne lagi he ab tu bhi...
Wo Sakshi ke sar pe halke se thapki marte hue kehti he.
Aise hi dono masti mazak me ghar ke kaam nipta dete he, waha Aksh Garage par pahoch gaya tha. Karim use chote mote kaam sikha raha tha or Aksh bhi mann laga kar kaam sikh raha tha, lekin jab Karim apne customers se baat karta to Aksh kafi bariki se unki baate sunta tha, kyu ke Karim ke sare customer us se bahot hi friendly tarike se baat karte the, Karim ne apne customers ko shikayat ka mauka kabhi bhi nahi diya tha or isi wajah se har koi Karim se kafi acche se baat karte, or is area me Karim ka hi ek lauta garage tha kisi me itni himmat nahi thi ke wo yaha par ek Garage open kare, kyu ke log humesha Karim se hi apni gadiyo ki marammat karwate the. Aise hi waqt nikalta gaya, dopehar ko khane ka samay ho gaya tha, Karim Aksh ko apne saath ghar le gaya jaha wo log khana kha kar firse garage agaye.

Karim: Aksh bahot der ho gayi he, ab chala ja tu ghar pe.
Aksh: nahi chacha me shaam ko chala jaunga....
Karim: are Aksh tu thak gaya he, ghar ja aram kar le....
Aksh: chacha me nahi thaka hu, chaliye kaam par lagg jate he.
Or wo aage badh kar apna adhura kaam pura karne me lagg jata he.
Karim(mann me): ise samajh pana namunkin he... Yaa Khuda... Iski humesha madat karte rehna, ye ladka kuch alag hi he... Lekin dil ka kafi saaf he....

Or fir Karim bhi apne kaam me lagg jata he. Shaam ke 4 baje hue the Karim Aksh ko ghar jane ko kehta he, Aksh ka dil ghar jane ke liye nahi kar raha tha, lekin Karim ki zidd par wo ghar chala jata he, Raste me jate hue Aksh ko usi Showroom me ek Supercar dikhit he, jaha bachpan me do admiyo ne uska mazak udaya tha, us car ko dekh kar Aksh ke chehre par hasi ajati he.

Aksh(mann me): bahot jald tu mere paas bhi hogi... Thoda sabr kar.. huhhh

Or wo apne mann me apne ane wale future ko plan karte hue ghar ke raste chala gaya. Ghar akar wo fresh ho jata he, kuch der baad ghar pe Soham or Neha bhi aye hue the, charo milkar upar apni chatt par bethe dhalte suraj ka Khubsurat nazara dekh rahe the.

Neha: yaar me to College jane ke liye bahot hi exited hu, kitna maza ayega....
Wo bahot hi khushi se kehti he lekin Soham usi khilli udane ki sochta he.
Soham: accha? Me janta hu tu kyu exited he... Dekh itna exite hone ki koi zarurat nahi he... Kyu ke teri shakal Bandariya jesi he, or Bandariya ko koi ladka ghaas bhi nahi dalta... Samji...
Uski baat se Sakshi zor zor se hasne lagti he lekin Neha bahot gusse me ajati he or sidha Soham ka collar pakad leti he.
Neha: kutte.. kya kaha tune.... Me Bandariya.... khud to joker lagta he, or mujhe Bandariya bol raha he..
Wo zor zor se Soham ka collar pakad kar use age piche karte hue bol rahi thi, Sakshi in dono ki masti par hass rahi thi lekin Aksh to bas dhalte suraj ko ek takk dekhe ja raha tha. Or Sakshi use is tarah se dekh leti he.
Soham: kya soch raha he Aksh tu?
Aksh: kuch nahi..... Bas dekh raha hu ke jese ye suraj dhal raha he, waise hi meri life bhi dhalte ja rahi he...
Uski baat se wah ka sara mahol hi badal jata he, lekin Sakshi ko is baat par kafi gussa ajata he lekin wo bina gussa dikhaye Aksh ke bagal me beth jati he.

Sakshi: to tu apne aap ko is suraj ki jagah dekh raha he na?
Wo samne dhalte Suraj ko dekhte hue Aksh se puchti he, Aksh uske sawal par sirf Sakshi ko dekh raha tha.
Sakshi: jawab de na Aksh
Aksh: ha.....
Sakshi: to fir tujhe ye sacchayi kyu nahi dikhayi deti ke Yahi Suraj dhalte hue bhi is puri duniya ko kitna Khubsurat bana deta he, khud jal kar dusro ki zindagi me sawera lata he... Aksh tu kyu humesha aisi ulti sidhi bate karta rehta he? Me... Me....
Or wo apni baat puri kiye bina hi waha se niche chali jati he, Soham or Neha use samjhane ke liye uske piche hi chale ate he, Lekin Aksh Sakshi ko naraz kar ke kafi bura mehsus kar raha tha, Aksh kuch der wahi betha rehta he.

Kuch der baad Soham or Neha bhi apne ghat chale gaye the, Aksh ko Sakshi se baat karni thi lekin Sakshi us se Naraz lagg rahi thi or wo bas ghar ke kaam karne me lagg jati he, Aksh ko us se baat karne ka mauka nahi milta.

Raat ko sab log milkar khana kha lete he, khane ke baad Sakshi Radha ka kaam me haath batane lagti he, Aksh tabtak bahar walk ke liye chala jata he, jab wo ghar aya to Radha or Santosh TV dekh rahe the, Sakshi ko waha na dekh kar Aksh us se baat karne uske kamre me chala jata he. Jaha Sakshi bed par badi hi gehri soch me leti hui thi, Uske kamre ka darwaza khula hua tha Sakshi ko pata nahi chalta ke Aksh waha aya he tab Aksh darwaze ko knock karta he jis se Sakshi hosh me ajati he or Darwaze par Aksh ko khada dekh uthkar beth jati he. Aksh andar akar pehle darwaza lock kar deta he or ja kar Sakshi ke samne niche apne ghutno par beth kar uske haath thaam leta he.

Aksh: sorry Sakshi..... Me janta hu tu meri kahi baat se naraz he, or tera naraz hona sahi bhi he, lekin.... lekin me kya karu, me nahi janta ke kyu me aisi baate karta hu... Samajh hi nahi araha ke me kyu aisa banta ja raha hu, kabhi kabhi me apne aap se nafrat karne lagta hu... Kya karu Sakshi me tu hi bata....
Sakshi: You find peace not by rearranging the circumstances of your life, but by realizing who you are at the deepest level, Eckhart Tolle...... Jin Authors ki kitabe padhta he tu, unki hi bate he ye...
Wo halki si num akhi se kehti he, jis se Aksh ke chehre par ek hasi ajati he.
Aksh: sahi kaha... Lekin kayi baar Practicality in sari baato par kese na kese haawi ho hi jati he... Or us waqt bahot dard hota he... Sabse zyada to tab, jab humare pyaar karne wale log humse naraz ho jaye...
Sakshi: me koi naraz nahi hu tujh par....
Wo Aksh se nazre ferte hue kehti he.
Aksh: to fir aise nazre kyu fer rahi he..... Ab maaf bhi kar de.... Aage se kabhi aisi baate nahi karunga..
Wo Sakshi ke haath kaste hue kehta he lekin wo koi response nahi deti.
Aksh: ab maan bhi jana... Oye chipkali....
Bas Aksh ke muh se ye nikla ke Sakshi ka gussa satve asman par chala jata he, or wo Aksh se apne haath chhuda kar uska collar pakad leti he.
Sakshi: tujhe kitni baar kaha he ue mat bola kar mujhe.... Samajh nahi ata tere....
Wo bahot hi gusse me usko dhakke dete hue kehti he. Uska gussa dekh Aksh has padta he or fir Sakshi bhi uska collar chhod deti he.
Sakshi: please Aksh age se aisi utpatang baate mat kiya kar...
Aksh: ha nahi karunga.... Ab so ja.. mujhe bhi bahot nind arahi he.
Sakshi: okay...
Or fir Aksh waha se apne kamre me chala ata he, aaj pura din kaam karne se wo kafi thak chuka tha isliye bed par let te hi uski aakh lagg jati he.

Or is tarah inka ye din nikal jata he, jaha humne dekha ke wo Aksh jo kisi ki nahi manta use Sakshi ne bas kuch palo me apni baat manva li, or wo Apni padhai continue karne ke liye razi ho gaya, jaha Aksh mann laga kar Karim se kaam sikh raha tha, lekin jab bhi Karin apne customers se baat karta to Aksh unko kafi note karta tha. Wahi Sakshi ki apne bhai se narazgi, jo jayaz thi, use Aksh ne dur kar hi diya. Ab inki life ne aage kya mod ate he ye dekhna interesting hoga.

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Chapter 1 - The Early Life

Update 6​

Word Count: 2365
Estimated Reading Time: 00:11:00


Ek or chehekti subah, adha ugta hua suraj is duniya me laali faila raha tha, ek bahot Khubsurat nazara pesh kar raha tha, or is Khubsurat nazare ko Aksh apne ghar ki chatt par khada dekh raha tha. Uske dimag me is waqt kafi baate chal rahi thi, ab wo kya soch raha tha ye to Aksh khud jane.

Wahi Sakshi subah subah naha kar tayar ho chuki thi. Din chuttiyo ke ho ya fir normal days, Sakshi humesha se jaldi uthkar tayar ho jati, or sabse pehla uska jo kaam hota wo Bhagwaan ke samne haath jodkar prarthana karna.

Sakshi(mann me): Deva... Aapki Krupa drushti aise hi hum sab par banaye rakhna... Or Aksh ko thodi sadbuddhi dena... Humesha bewajah sabse behes karta rehta he... Please use samjhana Deva....

Wo apni aakhe band kare apne pure dil se Bhagwaan ke samne haath jode khadi thi, uski har roz ki prarthana me Aksh ka naam zarur hota tha, kuch der baad Sakshi bhi upar chatt par jane ka sochti he, wo jese hi upar pahochi to usne dekha ke Aksh badi gehri soch me waha suraj ki taraf dekh raha tha. Sakshi aage akar Aksh ke kandhe par haath rakh deti he.

Aksh: kuch nahi.... Bas accha lagg raha he yaha par to ruk gaya me....
Jese hi use apne kandhe par Sakshi ka haath mehsus hua usne bol diya.
Sakshi: hmm... lekin mene to kuch pucha hi nahi...
Wo Aksh ke bagal me khade ho kar Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: kyu? Yahi to puchne wali thi na tu?
Wo Sakshi ki akho me dekhte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Bavlat(Pagal).....
Wo muskurate hue Aksh ke sar me marte hue kehti he.

Kuch der tak dono bas Suraj ki ugti kirano ko nihar rahe the, thodi der baad Sakshi ko Aksh se baat karne ka ye sahi waqt laga to wo Aksh se baat karne ka sochti he.

Sakshi: Aksh meri ek baat manega tu?
Wo bina Aksh ko dekhe hi puchti he.
Aksh: konsi baat?
Fir Sakshi Aksh ki taraf dekhne lagti he.
Sakshi: dekh Aksh me janti hu ke tujhe ye padhai wadhai me bilkul intereste nahi he lekin.....
Aksh: yaar Sakshi please ab tu subah subah shuru mat ho jana....
Wo Sakshi ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Dada meri baat to sunn na pehle... Mujhe ek baat bata, tujhe padhai nahi karni to tu kya karega tabtak?
Aksh: pata nahi... lekin kabhi na kabhi kuch zarur karunga...
Sakshi: to fir tabtak padhai kar le na.... Abhi teri koi umar bhi nahi he jo tu kuch kar sake... Ek baar tu 18 ka ho gaya to jo tera dil kare waisa hi karna... Me humesha tera saath dungi.... Or agar tab bhi Aai Baba tere faisle ke khilaf honge to me fir bhi tera hi saath dungi... Lekin please tabtak padhai kar lena....
Wo Aksh ke samne khade ho kar uske haath thamkar kehti he, ab Aksh bhi sochne par majbur ho gaya ke akhir wo padhai chhod kar kya karega...
Sakshi: bolna Dada meri itni si baat manega na?
Ab Aksh kafi gehri soch me tha. Or shayad usko apne sawal ka jawab bhi mil gaya.
Aksh: thik he....
Uske jawab se Sakshi bahot hi khush ho jati he, or kas kar Aksh ko gale laga leti he.
Sakshi: thank you Aksh meri baat maan ne ke liye...
Aksh: ha... is baar teri baat maan li mene, Lekin ye mat samajh lena ke har baar teri mann mani chalegi...
Wo Sakshi ko apne se alag kar ke use ungli dikhate hue kehta he.
Sakshi: thik he..... Matt maan na meri baat, lekin ab se acche se padhai karna, thik he?
Uski baat ka jawab Aksh bas apni gardan ha me hila kar deta he.
Fir wo dono kuch der tak upar chatt par hi bate karte hue beth jate he.

Santosh apne kaam par janeke liye tayar ho chuka tha.
Santosh: Radha... Aksh ko bulao... Mujhe us se baat karni he.
Radha: dekhiye subah subah shuru mat ho jana ab aap, kya baat karni he?
Santosh: us se akhri baar puchunga ke padhai karni he ya nahi... Warna...
Sakshi: Baba aap chinta mat kijiye.... Aksh to bas aise hi bol raha tha ke use padhai nahi karni...
Santosh: chalo thik he.... Me chalta hu...
Or wo apne kaam par chala jata he. Tabhi Aksh apne kamre se bahar ajata he or sidha ghar ke bahar jane lagta he.
Radha: Aksh kaha ja raha he t subah subah?
Wo Aksh ko darwaze par hi rokte hue puchti he.
Aksh: Karim chacha ke yaha ja raha hu or me sham ko 4 baje aunga ghar pe...
Or ye kehkar wo bahar chala jata he
Radha: 4 baje? Lekin... Aksh... Aksh... Sunn to...
Wo piche se Aksh ko pukarti he lekin tabtak to wo nikal gaya tha.
Radha: pata nahi kab sudhrega ye ladka?
Sakshi: kya Aai tum bhi... Aksh kaha bigda hua he jo sudharne ki baat kar rahi ho...
Wo aage akar Radha ke gale me bahe dalte hue kehti he.
Radha: ha... Tu to bas humesha uski hi tarafdari karti reh..... Dada chi ladki (Bhai ki ladli)
Wo narazgi se Sakshi se alag hote hue kehti he.
Sakshi: isme tarafdari ki kya baat agayi Aai? Uski soch thodi alag si he, or mujhe usme koi galat baat nahi lagti or me uski kisi bhi galat baat me saath nahi deti....
Radha: Rahude Rahude (Rehne do).... Bahot bolne lagi he ab tu bhi...
Wo Sakshi ke sar pe halke se thapki marte hue kehti he.
Aise hi dono masti mazak me ghar ke kaam nipta dete he, waha Aksh Garage par pahoch gaya tha. Karim use chote mote kaam sikha raha tha or Aksh bhi mann laga kar kaam sikh raha tha, lekin jab Karim apne customers se baat karta to Aksh kafi bariki se unki baate sunta tha, kyu ke Karim ke sare customer us se bahot hi friendly tarike se baat karte the, Karim ne apne customers ko shikayat ka mauka kabhi bhi nahi diya tha or isi wajah se har koi Karim se kafi acche se baat karte, or is area me Karim ka hi ek lauta garage tha kisi me itni himmat nahi thi ke wo yaha par ek Garage open kare, kyu ke log humesha Karim se hi apni gadiyo ki marammat karwate the. Aise hi waqt nikalta gaya, dopehar ko khane ka samay ho gaya tha, Karim Aksh ko apne saath ghar le gaya jaha wo log khana kha kar firse garage agaye.

Karim: Aksh bahot der ho gayi he, ab chala ja tu ghar pe.
Aksh: nahi chacha me shaam ko chala jaunga....
Karim: are Aksh tu thak gaya he, ghar ja aram kar le....
Aksh: chacha me nahi thaka hu, chaliye kaam par lagg jate he.
Or wo aage badh kar apna adhura kaam pura karne me lagg jata he.
Karim(mann me): ise samajh pana namunkin he... Yaa Khuda... Iski humesha madat karte rehna, ye ladka kuch alag hi he... Lekin dil ka kafi saaf he....

Or fir Karim bhi apne kaam me lagg jata he. Shaam ke 4 baje hue the Karim Aksh ko ghar jane ko kehta he, Aksh ka dil ghar jane ke liye nahi kar raha tha, lekin Karim ki zidd par wo ghar chala jata he, Raste me jate hue Aksh ko usi Showroom me ek Supercar dikhit he, jaha bachpan me do admiyo ne uska mazak udaya tha, us car ko dekh kar Aksh ke chehre par hasi ajati he.

Aksh(mann me): bahot jald tu mere paas bhi hogi... Thoda sabr kar.. huhhh

Or wo apne mann me apne ane wale future ko plan karte hue ghar ke raste chala gaya. Ghar akar wo fresh ho jata he, kuch der baad ghar pe Soham or Neha bhi aye hue the, charo milkar upar apni chatt par bethe dhalte suraj ka Khubsurat nazara dekh rahe the.

Neha: yaar me to College jane ke liye bahot hi exited hu, kitna maza ayega....
Wo bahot hi khushi se kehti he lekin Soham usi khilli udane ki sochta he.
Soham: accha? Me janta hu tu kyu exited he... Dekh itna exite hone ki koi zarurat nahi he... Kyu ke teri shakal Bandariya jesi he, or Bandariya ko koi ladka ghaas bhi nahi dalta... Samji...
Uski baat se Sakshi zor zor se hasne lagti he lekin Neha bahot gusse me ajati he or sidha Soham ka collar pakad leti he.
Neha: kutte.. kya kaha tune.... Me Bandariya.... khud to joker lagta he, or mujhe Bandariya bol raha he..
Wo zor zor se Soham ka collar pakad kar use age piche karte hue bol rahi thi, Sakshi in dono ki masti par hass rahi thi lekin Aksh to bas dhalte suraj ko ek takk dekhe ja raha tha. Or Sakshi use is tarah se dekh leti he.
Soham: kya soch raha he Aksh tu?
Aksh: kuch nahi..... Bas dekh raha hu ke jese ye suraj dhal raha he, waise hi meri life bhi dhalte ja rahi he...
Uski baat se wah ka sara mahol hi badal jata he, lekin Sakshi ko is baat par kafi gussa ajata he lekin wo bina gussa dikhaye Aksh ke bagal me beth jati he.

Sakshi: to tu apne aap ko is suraj ki jagah dekh raha he na?
Wo samne dhalte Suraj ko dekhte hue Aksh se puchti he, Aksh uske sawal par sirf Sakshi ko dekh raha tha.
Sakshi: jawab de na Aksh
Aksh: ha.....
Sakshi: to fir tujhe ye sacchayi kyu nahi dikhayi deti ke Yahi Suraj dhalte hue bhi is puri duniya ko kitna Khubsurat bana deta he, khud jal kar dusro ki zindagi me sawera lata he... Aksh tu kyu humesha aisi ulti sidhi bate karta rehta he? Me... Me....
Or wo apni baat puri kiye bina hi waha se niche chali jati he, Soham or Neha use samjhane ke liye uske piche hi chale ate he, Lekin Aksh Sakshi ko naraz kar ke kafi bura mehsus kar raha tha, Aksh kuch der wahi betha rehta he.

Kuch der baad Soham or Neha bhi apne ghat chale gaye the, Aksh ko Sakshi se baat karni thi lekin Sakshi us se Naraz lagg rahi thi or wo bas ghar ke kaam karne me lagg jati he, Aksh ko us se baat karne ka mauka nahi milta.

Raat ko sab log milkar khana kha lete he, khane ke baad Sakshi Radha ka kaam me haath batane lagti he, Aksh tabtak bahar walk ke liye chala jata he, jab wo ghar aya to Radha or Santosh TV dekh rahe the, Sakshi ko waha na dekh kar Aksh us se baat karne uske kamre me chala jata he. Jaha Sakshi bed par badi hi gehri soch me leti hui thi, Uske kamre ka darwaza khula hua tha Sakshi ko pata nahi chalta ke Aksh waha aya he tab Aksh darwaze ko knock karta he jis se Sakshi hosh me ajati he or Darwaze par Aksh ko khada dekh uthkar beth jati he. Aksh andar akar pehle darwaza lock kar deta he or ja kar Sakshi ke samne niche apne ghutno par beth kar uske haath thaam leta he.

Aksh: sorry Sakshi..... Me janta hu tu meri kahi baat se naraz he, or tera naraz hona sahi bhi he, lekin.... lekin me kya karu, me nahi janta ke kyu me aisi baate karta hu... Samajh hi nahi araha ke me kyu aisa banta ja raha hu, kabhi kabhi me apne aap se nafrat karne lagta hu... Kya karu Sakshi me tu hi bata....
Sakshi: You find peace not by rearranging the circumstances of your life, but by realizing who you are at the deepest level, Eckhart Tolle...... Jin Authors ki kitabe padhta he tu, unki hi bate he ye...
Wo halki si num akhi se kehti he, jis se Aksh ke chehre par ek hasi ajati he.
Aksh: sahi kaha... Lekin kayi baar Practicality in sari baato par kese na kese haawi ho hi jati he... Or us waqt bahot dard hota he... Sabse zyada to tab, jab humare pyaar karne wale log humse naraz ho jaye...
Sakshi: me koi naraz nahi hu tujh par....
Wo Aksh se nazre ferte hue kehti he.
Aksh: to fir aise nazre kyu fer rahi he..... Ab maaf bhi kar de.... Aage se kabhi aisi baate nahi karunga..
Wo Sakshi ke haath kaste hue kehta he lekin wo koi response nahi deti.
Aksh: ab maan bhi jana... Oye chipkali....
Bas Aksh ke muh se ye nikla ke Sakshi ka gussa satve asman par chala jata he, or wo Aksh se apne haath chhuda kar uska collar pakad leti he.
Sakshi: tujhe kitni baar kaha he ue mat bola kar mujhe.... Samajh nahi ata tere....
Wo bahot hi gusse me usko dhakke dete hue kehti he. Uska gussa dekh Aksh has padta he or fir Sakshi bhi uska collar chhod deti he.
Sakshi: please Aksh age se aisi utpatang baate mat kiya kar...
Aksh: ha nahi karunga.... Ab so ja.. mujhe bhi bahot nind arahi he.
Sakshi: okay...
Or fir Aksh waha se apne kamre me chala ata he, aaj pura din kaam karne se wo kafi thak chuka tha isliye bed par let te hi uski aakh lagg jati he.

Or is tarah inka ye din nikal jata he, jaha humne dekha ke wo Aksh jo kisi ki nahi manta use Sakshi ne bas kuch palo me apni baat manva li, or wo Apni padhai continue karne ke liye razi ho gaya, jaha Aksh mann laga kar Karim se kaam sikh raha tha, lekin jab bhi Karin apne customers se baat karta to Aksh unko kafi note karta tha. Wahi Sakshi ki apne bhai se narazgi, jo jayaz thi, use Aksh ne dur kar hi diya. Ab inki life ne aage kya mod ate he ye dekhna interesting hoga.

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[Naughtyrishabh]

Chapter 1 - The Early Life

Update 5

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Aaj ka din har students ke liye bahot hi bhari din hota he, kyu ke aaj 10th ke results ane the, Sakshi or Aksh ke bhi aaj haal bura tha, Ek Taraf Sakshi soch rahi thi ke use kitne percentage milenge, wahi Aksh to soch raha tha ke wo pass bhi hoga ya nahi....

Sakshi or Aksh is waqt Aksh ke kamre me the.
Sakshi: mujhe bahot hi darr lag raha he Aksh.... Kitne percentage milenge mujhe?
Wo kamre me yaha se waha chakkar lagate hue Aksh se puchti he.
Aksh: ye sahi he..... tujhe percentage ki chinta ho rahi he, yaha pe mere pass hone ke Chance nahi he....
Sakshi: pura saal to kehti rahi na me tujhse padh le padh le... Lekin nahi... Baat kaha manega tu?
Wo Aksh ke samne gusse me apne kamar pe dono haath rakh kar kehti he.
Aksh: ab chhod bhi ye baat.... Or waise bhi mene soch liya he ke me ab aage padhai nahi karne wala...
Or wo uthkar samne ki table ki taraf chala jata he or table par rakhi bahot si books me se ek book nikal kar use padhne lagta he. Ab yaha Aksh ko padhai me bilkul mann nahi lagta tha, lekin use Self Development, Inspirational, Spiritual Books padhna pasand tha.

Uski baat sunkar Sakshi heran si reh jati he.

Sakshi: mere samne bol diya tune wo thik he, galati se Aai Baba ke samne mat bol dena.. bewajah pitt jayega nahi to tu...
Aksh: to usme konsi badi baat he.... Zindagi to waise bhi pitt hi rahi he, Aai Baba bhi haath saaf kar lenge....
Wo ek Sarcastic hasi ke saath kehta he.
Sakshi: Aksh tu kyu aisi baate karta rehta he?
Wo aage badhkar Aksh ke kandhe par haath rakh kar kehti he.
Aksh: yaar mera bilkul mann nahi karta padhai karne ka.... Ghutan si hoti he mujhe school ki kitabe padhne se....
Wo apne haath me jo book thi use table par rakh kar badi hi frustration me akar kehta he.
Sakshi: accha? To ye kitabe to kitni shok se padhta he tu....
Aksh: in dono kitabo me zameen asmaan ka fark he Sakshi.... Teri wali kitabe sirf or sirf padhai tak hi simit he, lekin ye... Ye wali kitabe zindagi ke daav pej sikhati he....
Sakshi: Deva.... Tu or teri baate....
Wo apne mathe par haath marte hue kehti he.
Sakshi: ab ye sab chhod or college me to acche se padhai kar lena...
Aksh: dekhte he....

Or aise hi kuch der tak dono wahi bethe rahe, kuch der baad Results ka time ho gaya tha, sab log bahar hall me jama the, Sakshi apni sari details daal kar page load hone ka intezar apne haath jodkar kar rahi thi, jese hi page load hua, to sabke chehre par khushi ajati he, wajah sirf ye nahi thi ke wo pass ho gati, balki use 94% mile the. Aksh bhi uske liye bahot khush tha lekin ab baari Aksh ki hi thi, jese hi Page load hota he to sabke chehre par jo khushi thi wo ek pal me hawa ho jati he or sab kafi nirash se khade the. Darasal Aksh pass to ho gaya tha lekin use sirf 38% mile hue the.

Santosh: Are.... Tum sab udaas kyu ho gaye? Bhai sahab ne passing mark se pure 3% zyada number laye he...
Wo Aksh ko taana marte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Baba....
Santosh: Bolu De Mala (Mujhe bolne Do)
Wo Sakshi ko haath dikhate hue kehta he. Jis se Sakshi bhi chup ho jati he. Aksh to bas apna sar jhukaye khada tha, or Santosh uske paas ajata he.

Santosh: Pata nahi konsi konsi kitabe padhta rehta he din bhar.... Beta agar thodi si padhai kar li hoti to kam se kam muh dikhane layak number to ajate tere.....
Aksh: Baba ye School wali kitabe to bas insaan ko khacchar bann na sikhati he, bas ye sikhati he ke ek accha khacchar kese bane... Me jo kitabe padhta hu na wo ye samjhati he ke in khaccharo ki race se alag kese ho...
Wo Santosh ki akho me akhe dale bina dare apni baat samne rakhta he.
Santosh: jin logo ki kitabe padhta he na tu... Wo bass kahaniya he, asli Zindagi nahi....
Aksh: sahi kaha aapne... Or wahi log ye bhi batate he ke apni khud ki kahani kese likhe....
Santosh: beta is kahani ko chalaye rakhne ke liye society ke saath chalna hota he.... Warna use log Pagal ghoshit kar dete he.
Aksh: huhhh... Society.... Baba jab me is society par nazar dalta hu na, to mujhe apne charo taraf jhut dikhta he, sab nakli he, sablog acting karte he, ek natak chal raha he, ek script he jo kayi saal pehle koi likh kar chala gaya, wo darr ki script, wo maze marne ki script, sirf paise ke piche bhagne ki script... Or jab me unki script ke hisab se nahi chalta to ye log mujhe Pagal kehte he, me inki script ke hisab ss nahi chalunga, meri kahani, meri script me khud likhunga....
Santosh: huhh.... Pagal ho gaya he tu....
Wo apni gardan ko hilate hue kehta he.
Aksh: haha.... Ek junoon he, ek sukoon he, ek Ishq he, ek Muhabbat he... Jise aap sab pagalpan keh rahe ho, or sirf aap hi nahi agar ye puri duniya ke 700crore log akar bhi mujhe kahenge na ke tu pagal ho gaya he, me fir bhi apne Pagal pan ko khatam nahi hone dunga...
Is baar Santosh ko bahot gussa ajata he, lekin Aksh us se ek or aisi baat karne wala tha jis se Shayad Santosh apna aapa kho bethe...
Aksh: or waise bhi mene soch liya he ke mujhe ab padhai nahi karni.....
Uski baat sunte hi Santosh use kas kar thappad laga deta he, aaj pehli baar ye din agaya tha jab Santosh ko apne baccho par haath uthana pada.

Uske thappad marte hi Radha aage akar Santosh ko rok deti he or use thoda piche karti he, Aksh apna sar jhukaye khada tha Sakshi uske paas akar Aksh ka haath tham leti he.

Santosh: Suna..... Suna kya keh raha he ye? Padhai nahi karni? To kya karna he tujhe? Bata?
Wo bahot hi gusse me unchi awaz me Aksh se puchta he.
Radha: aap shant ho jayiye....
Santosh: are kese shant ho jau? Kese? Aye din ye ladka bigadne laga he....
Radha: aap chup ho jayiye me samjhati hu use.... Aap chaliye andar...
Fir Wo Santosh ko andar kamre me le jati he.

Sakshi: Aksh tujhe kaha tha na mene Aai Baba ke samne ye baat mat kar fir kyu tune meri baat nahi suni?
Aksh: jane bhi de na Sakshi.... Thappad hi to khaya he..
Wo ek Sarcastic hasi ke saath kehta he.
Sakshi: Aksh meri.....
Radha: Sakshi zara Pani le kar ana.....
Wo andar se hi Sakshi ko awaaz lagati he.
Sakshi: tu ja andar kamre me... Me bas abhi ayi....
Or wo kitchen se pani ka glass le kar Apne parents ke kamre me chali jati he. Lekin tabhi Aksh ghar ke bahar chala jata he.


Sakshi or Radha ne Santosh ko shant kar diya tha, fir Sakshi Aksh se baat karne ka sochti he, or kamre se bahar ajati he, lekin Aksh waha nahi tha to Sakshi uske kamre me dekhti he to Aksh waha bhi nahi tha. Ab Sakshi ke paas uska wait karne ke siwaye koi rasta nahi tha.

Yaha Aksh apne ghar se nikal kar Soham ke ghar chala jata he, waha Soham ki mummy ne door open kiya.

S. Mummy: are Aksh.... Aao andar ajao....
Wo Aksh ko ghar me bulate hue kehti he.
S. Mummy: to kitne percentage mile tumhe?
Aksh: kya Aunty aap bhi.... Ye puchna chahiye ke paas bhi hua ya fail... Aap to percentage par agayi....
Wo andar sofe par beth te hue kehta he.
S. Mummy: are aise kese.... Mera beta bahot hoshiyar he...
Wo Aksh ke sar se haath ferte hue kehti he, tabhi Soham apne kamre se bahar ajata he.
Soham: or bata bhai.... Fail ho gaya?
Wo piche se akar Aksh ke khande par thapki marte hue puchta he.
Aksh: dekha Aunty... Ye hota he tarika puchne ka....
S. Mummy: bakwas mat kar... Kitne percentage mile wo bata...
Aksh: pure 38%
S. Mummy: ohhh... Koi baat nahi ab College me Dil laga kar padhai karna, thik he?
Aksh: dekhte he....
S. Mummy: tum betho me dono ke liye sharbat le kar ati hu.....
Or wo Kitchen me dono ke liye sharbat banane chali jati he.
Soham: yaar chal tension na le.... Games khelte he...
Aksh: me kyu tension lunga... Chal...
Or wo dono beth kar Games khelne lagte he.

Ghar pe sab log khana khane ke liye Aksh ka intezar kar rahe the. Lekin uska koi ata pata hi nahi tha.

Radha: Pata nahi kaha chala gaya ab ye ladka?
Sakshi: Aai, wo zarur Soham ke ghar gaya hoga... Tum call kar ke pucho na...
Radha: Sahi kaha.... Kabhi bata kar to jata nahi he ladka...
Wo kafi pareshani se kehti he, or Soham ke ghar pe call kar deti he.

Is waqt Soham ki Mummy kitchen me khana banane me lagi thi or Soham, Aksh hall me games khel rahe the, tabhi Soham dekhta he ke Radha ka call aya he.

Soham: Oye... Teri Aai ka call aya he.....
Aksh: are yaar..... Tu bolde ki me ghar ane ke liye nikal gaya hu...
Soham: me jhut kyu bolu bhai?
Aksh: accha?
Or itna kehkar Aksh ghar se bahar chala jata he.
Aksh: ab bata dena sach....
Soham: Are Aksh.... Abe sunn to....
Wo darwaze par ja kar Aksh ko awaaz lagate hue bolta he, lekin tabtak to Aksh dur nikal gaya tha. Soham call pick kar ke Radha ko bata deta he ke Aksh ghar chala gaya.

Yaha Aksh ghar jane ki bajaye dusre raste chal padta he, kuch der me hi wo ek Garage par pahoch jata he, jaha Ek aadmi car ki marammat kar raha tha.

Aksh: Salam Karim chcha.....
Karim: are Aksh.... Salam.. Salam.... Aja andar....
Wo piche Aksh ki taraf mudkar kehta he.
Karim: are aaj to tere Results the na? Kya hua?
Aksh: kya hona tha, pass ho gaya or Gift ke rup me Baba ka Thappad bhi mil gaya....
Wo andar akar ek car ke bonnet par beth the hue kehta he.
Karim: Thappad? Or wo kis liye?
Aksh: wo mene pure 38% marks laye is liye....
Karim: hmm... To tu Santosh se naraz ho kar ghar se chala aya?
Wo Aksh me paas akar uske kandhe par haath rakhte hue kehta he.
Aksh: n... Nahi... To... Me kyu naraz hounga....
Wo Karim ke sawal ka hadbadate hue jawab deta he.
Karim: wahh... Dekh Aksh bhale hi humara koi khun ka rishta nahi he, lekin tereko bachpan se janta hu me...... Dekh Aksh... Santosh ki isme koi galati nahi he, are me janta hu na yaar usne kitni mehnat ki he bachpan se... Are wo to chahta he ke tu or Sakshi ek sukoon bhari zindagi jiyo.... Is liye wo kabhi kabhi Sakth ho jata he....
Aksh: Chacha me Baba se naraz nahi hu, me to apne aap se naraz hu, samajh hi nahi ata kya hoga aage... Apne sapno par kaam karu, lekin dusri taraf dekhta hu to ye duniya to kisi alag hi disha me dod rahi he....
Uski baat par Karim use halke se sar pe marta he.
Karim: abe tu itna bhi bada nahi hua he jo duniya or iski baate kare...
Aksh: kya chacha aap bhi... Kuch saal or nahi karunga is duniya ki baate, lekin parents to bachpan me hi apne baccho ko is chuho ki daud me daal dete he na.... Yahi se to Shuruwat hoti he in sab ki....
Wo Karim ki Akho me akhe daal kar kehta he.
Karim: yaar tu itni badi badi baate kar kese leta he be?
Wo Aksh ke paas se uthkar thoda aage ki taraf khade hote hue puchta he. Jis par Aksh halka sa muskura deta he.

Karim: dekh beta.... Padhai likhayi par dhyan de, or ek accha insaan bann...
Aksh: kyu chacha... Jo log padhe likhe nahi hote kya wo acche insaan nahi he.... Aap hi dekh lo.... Aapne kaha padhai ki he, lekin aap to kitne acche insaan ho....
Karim: are bhai tu rehne de.... Tere saath kabhi behes nahi kar sakta me mere baap....
Wo piche mudkar Aksh ke samne haath jodte hue kehta he. Or firse apne kaam me lagg jata he.
Aksh: waise ek baat puchu chacha?
Kuch der baad Aksh ke dimag koi baat ajati he jise wo Karim se puchna tha.
Karim: ha puch na....
Wo apna kaam jaari rakhte hue kehta he.
Aksh: kya aap mujhe apne paas kaam par rakhoge?
Uska sawal sun kar Karim apna kaam rok deta he or Aksh ki taraf dekhne lagta he.
Karim: ab ye kya naya natak he tera?
Aksh: natak? Nahi.. nahi... Me to sach me ye kaam sikhna chahta hu....
Karim: are tereko to business karna he na to ye kya he?
Aksh: Aap please bataye na.... Kya mujhe aap yaha kaam par rakhoge?
Karim: are Aksh... Ye tera hi garage he or apne hi garage me koi nokri karta he kya?
Aksh: thik he... To aap nokri par mat rakhna... Lekin please aap mujhe ye kaam to sikha hi sakte ho na...
Karim: beta....
Aksh: please chacha.....
Karim: chal thik he.... Sikha dunga tujhe ye kaam...
Uska jawab sunkar Aksh bahot hi zyada khush ho jata he.
Karim: waise tune khana khaya ya nahi?
Aksh: ahhh... Ha... Ha mene kha liya...
Wo haklate hue Jawab deta he.
Karim: huhh... Jhut bhi bolne laga tu to? Chal ab... Ghar ja kar khana kha lete he... Teri chachi ne Biryani banayi he aaj.... Pasand he na tujhe?
Wo Aksh ke nazdeek akar uske sar pe haath ferte hue kehta he. Fir wo dono Karim ke ghar jane ke liye nikal jate he, Karim ne Santosh ko call kar ke bata diya tha ke Aksh uske saath hi he, or wo khana kha kar ayega.

Suraj ab dhire dhire dhalne laga tha, Aksh Karim ke saath khana kha kar Garage par kaam sikh raha tha, Dusri taraf ghar pe Sakshi or uski dost Neha apne ghar ki chatt par bethi hui thi.


Neha: yaar Sakshi.... College me ja kar kitna maza ayega na?
Wo bahot hi utsukta ke saath Sakshi se kehti he.
Sakshi: hmmm... Sahi kaha.. waha ab school se alag hi mahol hoga...
Neha: wahi to.... School me to kitne strict rules hote he... Lekin ab College me aisa kuch nahi hoga... Na kisi ki rok tok... Ab jab chahe class bunk karenge or....
Sakshi: kya kaha? Class bunk... Huhh.. wo tu akeli hi karna... Me nahi karne wali koi class bunk wunk...
Wo Neha ki baat ko bich me kaat te hue kehti he.
Neha: yaar kya Sakshi tu bhi... Kitni boaring he tu...
Wo apna muh fulakar Sakshi ko dhakka dete hue kehti he.
Sakshi: are... Isme boaring ki kya baat he? College me padhai karne jate he, na ke class bunk karne...
Wo Halke se Neha ke sar me thapki marte hue kehti he.
Neha: yaar Sakshi masti karne ke yahi to lamhe hote he.... Ek baar bade ho gaye to sab matang me badal jata he...
Sakshi: accha? Or wo kese?
Neha: are baba.... Bade ho jane ke baad fir job karo.... Uske baad shadi... Or....
Sakshi: ek.. ek... Minute... Tu itni dur shadi tak kaha chali gayi.... Wapis aa... Pagal...
Neha: kya dur.... Dekhna jese hi padhai khatam hogi na to gharwale shadi ke piche pad jayenge.... Huhhh...
Wo apna muh fulate hue kehti he.
Neha: Waise Sakshi tujhe kesa husband chahiye?
Uske sawal par Sakshi bahot sharma jati he.
Sakshi: ye...ye kya baate le kar beth gayi tu... Chup kar...
Wo Gusse se Neha ko aakhe dikhate hue kehti he.
Neha: bata bhi de na yaar Sakshi....
Wo Sakshi ko kohni marte hue kehti he. Ispar Sakshi apne chehre par bikhre balo ko apni ungliyo se kaan ke piche le jati he. Or wo kafi sharma gayi thi.
Sakshi: m...mujhe nahi pata....
Neha: hayee... Dekho to kese sharma rahi he...
Wo Sakshi ko dhakka marte hue kehti he jis par Sakshi ke chehre par hasi ajati he.
Neha: waise mujhe na.... Mujhe na..... Aksh husband ke roop me chahiye.....
Wo khudko hi apni baho me bharte hue kehti he. Lekin is se Sakshi Gussa ho jati he.
Sakshi: chup.... Ye kya keh rahi he tu?
Wo gusse me Neha se puchti he.
Neha: tu gussa kyu ho rahi he?
Sakshi: kuch nahi... Bas chup kar tu....
Wo narazgi se kehti he.
Neha: accha sorry baba.... Kyu gussa hoti he... Has bhi de jaldi se....
Or wo Sakshi ki kamar me gudgudi karne lagti he, jis se Naraz bethi Sakshi khil khila kar hasne lagti he.

Neha: waise Sakshi... Kya me itni buri hu jo Aksh ki wife nahi ban sakti?
Kuch der baad wo Sakshi se puchti he.
Sakshi: are pagal.... tu buri nahi he... Wo ladka hi alag he.. use samajh pana har kisi ke bass ki nahi he... Pata nahi kab kya kar de...
Neha: aisa nahi he.. Aksh bahot accha ladka he...
Sakshi: to mene kab kaha ke wo bura he... In fact us se accha insan to mene apni zindagi me nahi dekha... Bas tu use kabhi samajh nahi payegi...
Neha: accha? To Aksh ko samajhne wali kabhi milegi bhi?
Sakshi: zarur milegi... Zarur milegi......
Wo bahot hi gehri soch me akar kehti he. Kuch der dono chup si wahi bethi rehti he. Tabhi Radha un dono ko niche bula leti he, niche kuch nashta karne ke baad Neha apne ghar chali jati he.

Is waqt raat ke khane ka waqt ho raha tha, waha Karim pure din Karim ki zidd karte hue bhi Aksh ghar nahi gaya, ab Karim Garage band hone ka waqt tha, Karim use apne saath khane ke liye kehta he lekin Aksh mana kar deta he or apne ghar ke raste chal padta he. Or yaha Ghar pe sab uska intezar kar rahe the, Santosh ab uspe thoda gussa ho gaya tha, Sakshi darwaze par ruk kar Aksh ki raah dekh rahi thi, wo janti thi ke Santosh Aksh par gussa karne wala he to wo mahol ko sambhalne ke liye tayar thi, tabhi use Raste se Aksh ata dikhayi deta he. Aksh baramde me agaya tha Sakshi use gusse se dekh rahi thi.

Aksh: aise kyu dekh rahi he?
Wo ghar ke darwaze ke bahar hi baramde me ruk kar puchta he.
Sakshi: ye kya waqt he Aksh ghar ane ka? Firse Baba ko gussa dila diya na?
Wo bahot hi dhimi awaaz me Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: Baba ka mujhpar gussa karna koi nayi baat thode na he.... Ab hatt samne se....
Wo Sakshi ko Darwaze se hatate hue kehta he or ghar ke andar ajata he.

Santosh: bahot jaldi agaye laat sahab aap to?
Lekin Aksh bas uski baat khatam hone tak waha rukta he or sidha apne kamre me chala jata he.
Santosh: dekha.... He koi sharm... Jawab diye bina hi chala gaya....
Wo gusse me Radha se kehta he.
Radha: aap jane dijiye na.... Wo pehle se pareshan he or aap he ki...
Wo Santosh ko shant karate hue kehti he.
Radha: Sakshi ja use khane ke liye bula la....
Sakshi: ha abhi bulati hu....
Or ye kehkar wo Aksh ke kamre me chali jati he jaha Aksh bed par leta hua tha.

Sakshi: oh hero... Kaha ghum raha tha din bhar tu?
Wo andar akar Aksh ke bagal me beth te hue Aksh se puchti he.
Aksh: Karim chacha ke yaha tha pata nahi kya tujhe?
Sakshi: accha? Pura din kya kar raha tha waha?
Aksh: kuch nahi... Bas aise hi time pass kar raha tha...
Sakshi: tu itna thaka hua kyu lag raha he?
Aksh: thodi thakan to lagg rahi he....
Sakshi: chal pehle khana kha le... Badme me tere haath per daba dungi....
Aksh; are nahi mujhe bhuk nahi he tum log kha lo....
Ispar Sakshi Aksh ka haath pakad leti he or use sidha bitha deti he.
Sakshi: Aksh.... Kabtak Baba se naraz rahega tu? Wo tera bura thodi na chahte he...
Aksh: are yaar tu na.... Mujhe sachme bhuk nahi lagi he... Mene Karim chacha ke ghar pe hi Biryani kha li thi... Ye ghas pus tu kha.... or tujhe pata he na mujhe non veg khane se firse bhuk nahi lagti...
Sakshi: sach keh raha he na?
Aksh: to jhut kyu bolunga... Puchle chacha ko call kar ke...
Sakshi: chal ab tu keh raha he to maan leti hu.
Or fir Sakshi bahar akar Radha or Santosh ko ye baat bata deti he fir tino milkar khana kha lete he, khane ke baad Sakshi Radha ke kaam me haath bata rahi thi, kaam khatam hone ke baad wo Aksh ke kamre me us se kuch baat karne ajati he lekin dekhti he ke Aksh to kafi gehri nind me tha. To Sakshi apne kamre me ja kar so jati he.

Or is tarah inka ye din nikal jata he, jaha Aksh or Santosh ke bich kafi gehma gehmi ho gayi thi, aaj humne dekh ke Aksh kis tarah se apni baate bina dare samne rakhta he, lekin ab uski ye adat bakiyo ke liye kesi hogi ye to ane wala kal hi batayega.


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Chapter 1 - The Early Life

Update 6​

Word Count: 2365
Estimated Reading Time: 00:11:00


Ek or chehekti subah, adha ugta hua suraj is duniya me laali faila raha tha, ek bahot Khubsurat nazara pesh kar raha tha, or is Khubsurat nazare ko Aksh apne ghar ki chatt par khada dekh raha tha. Uske dimag me is waqt kafi baate chal rahi thi, ab wo kya soch raha tha ye to Aksh khud jane.

Wahi Sakshi subah subah naha kar tayar ho chuki thi. Din chuttiyo ke ho ya fir normal days, Sakshi humesha se jaldi uthkar tayar ho jati, or sabse pehla uska jo kaam hota wo Bhagwaan ke samne haath jodkar prarthana karna.

Sakshi(mann me): Deva... Aapki Krupa drushti aise hi hum sab par banaye rakhna... Or Aksh ko thodi sadbuddhi dena... Humesha bewajah sabse behes karta rehta he... Please use samjhana Deva....

Wo apni aakhe band kare apne pure dil se Bhagwaan ke samne haath jode khadi thi, uski har roz ki prarthana me Aksh ka naam zarur hota tha, kuch der baad Sakshi bhi upar chatt par jane ka sochti he, wo jese hi upar pahochi to usne dekha ke Aksh badi gehri soch me waha suraj ki taraf dekh raha tha. Sakshi aage akar Aksh ke kandhe par haath rakh deti he.

Aksh: kuch nahi.... Bas accha lagg raha he yaha par to ruk gaya me....
Jese hi use apne kandhe par Sakshi ka haath mehsus hua usne bol diya.
Sakshi: hmm... lekin mene to kuch pucha hi nahi...
Wo Aksh ke bagal me khade ho kar Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: kyu? Yahi to puchne wali thi na tu?
Wo Sakshi ki akho me dekhte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Bavlat(Pagal).....
Wo muskurate hue Aksh ke sar me marte hue kehti he.

Kuch der tak dono bas Suraj ki ugti kirano ko nihar rahe the, thodi der baad Sakshi ko Aksh se baat karne ka ye sahi waqt laga to wo Aksh se baat karne ka sochti he.

Sakshi: Aksh meri ek baat manega tu?
Wo bina Aksh ko dekhe hi puchti he.
Aksh: konsi baat?
Fir Sakshi Aksh ki taraf dekhne lagti he.
Sakshi: dekh Aksh me janti hu ke tujhe ye padhai wadhai me bilkul intereste nahi he lekin.....
Aksh: yaar Sakshi please ab tu subah subah shuru mat ho jana....
Wo Sakshi ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Dada meri baat to sunn na pehle... Mujhe ek baat bata, tujhe padhai nahi karni to tu kya karega tabtak?
Aksh: pata nahi... lekin kabhi na kabhi kuch zarur karunga...
Sakshi: to fir tabtak padhai kar le na.... Abhi teri koi umar bhi nahi he jo tu kuch kar sake... Ek baar tu 18 ka ho gaya to jo tera dil kare waisa hi karna... Me humesha tera saath dungi.... Or agar tab bhi Aai Baba tere faisle ke khilaf honge to me fir bhi tera hi saath dungi... Lekin please tabtak padhai kar lena....
Wo Aksh ke samne khade ho kar uske haath thamkar kehti he, ab Aksh bhi sochne par majbur ho gaya ke akhir wo padhai chhod kar kya karega...
Sakshi: bolna Dada meri itni si baat manega na?
Ab Aksh kafi gehri soch me tha. Or shayad usko apne sawal ka jawab bhi mil gaya.
Aksh: thik he....
Uske jawab se Sakshi bahot hi khush ho jati he, or kas kar Aksh ko gale laga leti he.
Sakshi: thank you Aksh meri baat maan ne ke liye...
Aksh: ha... is baar teri baat maan li mene, Lekin ye mat samajh lena ke har baar teri mann mani chalegi...
Wo Sakshi ko apne se alag kar ke use ungli dikhate hue kehta he.
Sakshi: thik he..... Matt maan na meri baat, lekin ab se acche se padhai karna, thik he?
Uski baat ka jawab Aksh bas apni gardan ha me hila kar deta he.
Fir wo dono kuch der tak upar chatt par hi bate karte hue beth jate he.

Santosh apne kaam par janeke liye tayar ho chuka tha.
Santosh: Radha... Aksh ko bulao... Mujhe us se baat karni he.
Radha: dekhiye subah subah shuru mat ho jana ab aap, kya baat karni he?
Santosh: us se akhri baar puchunga ke padhai karni he ya nahi... Warna...
Sakshi: Baba aap chinta mat kijiye.... Aksh to bas aise hi bol raha tha ke use padhai nahi karni...
Santosh: chalo thik he.... Me chalta hu...
Or wo apne kaam par chala jata he. Tabhi Aksh apne kamre se bahar ajata he or sidha ghar ke bahar jane lagta he.
Radha: Aksh kaha ja raha he t subah subah?
Wo Aksh ko darwaze par hi rokte hue puchti he.
Aksh: Karim chacha ke yaha ja raha hu or me sham ko 4 baje aunga ghar pe...
Or ye kehkar wo bahar chala jata he
Radha: 4 baje? Lekin... Aksh... Aksh... Sunn to...
Wo piche se Aksh ko pukarti he lekin tabtak to wo nikal gaya tha.
Radha: pata nahi kab sudhrega ye ladka?
Sakshi: kya Aai tum bhi... Aksh kaha bigda hua he jo sudharne ki baat kar rahi ho...
Wo aage akar Radha ke gale me bahe dalte hue kehti he.
Radha: ha... Tu to bas humesha uski hi tarafdari karti reh..... Dada chi ladki (Bhai ki ladli)
Wo narazgi se Sakshi se alag hote hue kehti he.
Sakshi: isme tarafdari ki kya baat agayi Aai? Uski soch thodi alag si he, or mujhe usme koi galat baat nahi lagti or me uski kisi bhi galat baat me saath nahi deti....
Radha: Rahude Rahude (Rehne do).... Bahot bolne lagi he ab tu bhi...
Wo Sakshi ke sar pe halke se thapki marte hue kehti he.
Aise hi dono masti mazak me ghar ke kaam nipta dete he, waha Aksh Garage par pahoch gaya tha. Karim use chote mote kaam sikha raha tha or Aksh bhi mann laga kar kaam sikh raha tha, lekin jab Karim apne customers se baat karta to Aksh kafi bariki se unki baate sunta tha, kyu ke Karim ke sare customer us se bahot hi friendly tarike se baat karte the, Karim ne apne customers ko shikayat ka mauka kabhi bhi nahi diya tha or isi wajah se har koi Karim se kafi acche se baat karte, or is area me Karim ka hi ek lauta garage tha kisi me itni himmat nahi thi ke wo yaha par ek Garage open kare, kyu ke log humesha Karim se hi apni gadiyo ki marammat karwate the. Aise hi waqt nikalta gaya, dopehar ko khane ka samay ho gaya tha, Karim Aksh ko apne saath ghar le gaya jaha wo log khana kha kar firse garage agaye.

Karim: Aksh bahot der ho gayi he, ab chala ja tu ghar pe.
Aksh: nahi chacha me shaam ko chala jaunga....
Karim: are Aksh tu thak gaya he, ghar ja aram kar le....
Aksh: chacha me nahi thaka hu, chaliye kaam par lagg jate he.
Or wo aage badh kar apna adhura kaam pura karne me lagg jata he.
Karim(mann me): ise samajh pana namunkin he... Yaa Khuda... Iski humesha madat karte rehna, ye ladka kuch alag hi he... Lekin dil ka kafi saaf he....

Or fir Karim bhi apne kaam me lagg jata he. Shaam ke 4 baje hue the Karim Aksh ko ghar jane ko kehta he, Aksh ka dil ghar jane ke liye nahi kar raha tha, lekin Karim ki zidd par wo ghar chala jata he, Raste me jate hue Aksh ko usi Showroom me ek Supercar dikhit he, jaha bachpan me do admiyo ne uska mazak udaya tha, us car ko dekh kar Aksh ke chehre par hasi ajati he.

Aksh(mann me): bahot jald tu mere paas bhi hogi... Thoda sabr kar.. huhhh

Or wo apne mann me apne ane wale future ko plan karte hue ghar ke raste chala gaya. Ghar akar wo fresh ho jata he, kuch der baad ghar pe Soham or Neha bhi aye hue the, charo milkar upar apni chatt par bethe dhalte suraj ka Khubsurat nazara dekh rahe the.

Neha: yaar me to College jane ke liye bahot hi exited hu, kitna maza ayega....
Wo bahot hi khushi se kehti he lekin Soham usi khilli udane ki sochta he.
Soham: accha? Me janta hu tu kyu exited he... Dekh itna exite hone ki koi zarurat nahi he... Kyu ke teri shakal Bandariya jesi he, or Bandariya ko koi ladka ghaas bhi nahi dalta... Samji...
Uski baat se Sakshi zor zor se hasne lagti he lekin Neha bahot gusse me ajati he or sidha Soham ka collar pakad leti he.
Neha: kutte.. kya kaha tune.... Me Bandariya.... khud to joker lagta he, or mujhe Bandariya bol raha he..
Wo zor zor se Soham ka collar pakad kar use age piche karte hue bol rahi thi, Sakshi in dono ki masti par hass rahi thi lekin Aksh to bas dhalte suraj ko ek takk dekhe ja raha tha. Or Sakshi use is tarah se dekh leti he.
Soham: kya soch raha he Aksh tu?
Aksh: kuch nahi..... Bas dekh raha hu ke jese ye suraj dhal raha he, waise hi meri life bhi dhalte ja rahi he...
Uski baat se wah ka sara mahol hi badal jata he, lekin Sakshi ko is baat par kafi gussa ajata he lekin wo bina gussa dikhaye Aksh ke bagal me beth jati he.

Sakshi: to tu apne aap ko is suraj ki jagah dekh raha he na?
Wo samne dhalte Suraj ko dekhte hue Aksh se puchti he, Aksh uske sawal par sirf Sakshi ko dekh raha tha.
Sakshi: jawab de na Aksh
Aksh: ha.....
Sakshi: to fir tujhe ye sacchayi kyu nahi dikhayi deti ke Yahi Suraj dhalte hue bhi is puri duniya ko kitna Khubsurat bana deta he, khud jal kar dusro ki zindagi me sawera lata he... Aksh tu kyu humesha aisi ulti sidhi bate karta rehta he? Me... Me....
Or wo apni baat puri kiye bina hi waha se niche chali jati he, Soham or Neha use samjhane ke liye uske piche hi chale ate he, Lekin Aksh Sakshi ko naraz kar ke kafi bura mehsus kar raha tha, Aksh kuch der wahi betha rehta he.

Kuch der baad Soham or Neha bhi apne ghat chale gaye the, Aksh ko Sakshi se baat karni thi lekin Sakshi us se Naraz lagg rahi thi or wo bas ghar ke kaam karne me lagg jati he, Aksh ko us se baat karne ka mauka nahi milta.

Raat ko sab log milkar khana kha lete he, khane ke baad Sakshi Radha ka kaam me haath batane lagti he, Aksh tabtak bahar walk ke liye chala jata he, jab wo ghar aya to Radha or Santosh TV dekh rahe the, Sakshi ko waha na dekh kar Aksh us se baat karne uske kamre me chala jata he. Jaha Sakshi bed par badi hi gehri soch me leti hui thi, Uske kamre ka darwaza khula hua tha Sakshi ko pata nahi chalta ke Aksh waha aya he tab Aksh darwaze ko knock karta he jis se Sakshi hosh me ajati he or Darwaze par Aksh ko khada dekh uthkar beth jati he. Aksh andar akar pehle darwaza lock kar deta he or ja kar Sakshi ke samne niche apne ghutno par beth kar uske haath thaam leta he.

Aksh: sorry Sakshi..... Me janta hu tu meri kahi baat se naraz he, or tera naraz hona sahi bhi he, lekin.... lekin me kya karu, me nahi janta ke kyu me aisi baate karta hu... Samajh hi nahi araha ke me kyu aisa banta ja raha hu, kabhi kabhi me apne aap se nafrat karne lagta hu... Kya karu Sakshi me tu hi bata....
Sakshi: You find peace not by rearranging the circumstances of your life, but by realizing who you are at the deepest level, Eckhart Tolle...... Jin Authors ki kitabe padhta he tu, unki hi bate he ye...
Wo halki si num akhi se kehti he, jis se Aksh ke chehre par ek hasi ajati he.
Aksh: sahi kaha... Lekin kayi baar Practicality in sari baato par kese na kese haawi ho hi jati he... Or us waqt bahot dard hota he... Sabse zyada to tab, jab humare pyaar karne wale log humse naraz ho jaye...
Sakshi: me koi naraz nahi hu tujh par....
Wo Aksh se nazre ferte hue kehti he.
Aksh: to fir aise nazre kyu fer rahi he..... Ab maaf bhi kar de.... Aage se kabhi aisi baate nahi karunga..
Wo Sakshi ke haath kaste hue kehta he lekin wo koi response nahi deti.
Aksh: ab maan bhi jana... Oye chipkali....
Bas Aksh ke muh se ye nikla ke Sakshi ka gussa satve asman par chala jata he, or wo Aksh se apne haath chhuda kar uska collar pakad leti he.
Sakshi: tujhe kitni baar kaha he ue mat bola kar mujhe.... Samajh nahi ata tere....
Wo bahot hi gusse me usko dhakke dete hue kehti he. Uska gussa dekh Aksh has padta he or fir Sakshi bhi uska collar chhod deti he.
Sakshi: please Aksh age se aisi utpatang baate mat kiya kar...
Aksh: ha nahi karunga.... Ab so ja.. mujhe bhi bahot nind arahi he.
Sakshi: okay...
Or fir Aksh waha se apne kamre me chala ata he, aaj pura din kaam karne se wo kafi thak chuka tha isliye bed par let te hi uski aakh lagg jati he.

Or is tarah inka ye din nikal jata he, jaha humne dekha ke wo Aksh jo kisi ki nahi manta use Sakshi ne bas kuch palo me apni baat manva li, or wo Apni padhai continue karne ke liye razi ho gaya, jaha Aksh mann laga kar Karim se kaam sikh raha tha, lekin jab bhi Karin apne customers se baat karta to Aksh unko kafi note karta tha. Wahi Sakshi ki apne bhai se narazgi, jo jayaz thi, use Aksh ne dur kar hi diya. Ab inki life ne aage kya mod ate he ye dekhna interesting hoga.

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Chapter 1 - The Early Life

Update 6​

Word Count: 2365
Estimated Reading Time: 00:11:00


Ek or chehekti subah, adha ugta hua suraj is duniya me laali faila raha tha, ek bahot Khubsurat nazara pesh kar raha tha, or is Khubsurat nazare ko Aksh apne ghar ki chatt par khada dekh raha tha. Uske dimag me is waqt kafi baate chal rahi thi, ab wo kya soch raha tha ye to Aksh khud jane.

Wahi Sakshi subah subah naha kar tayar ho chuki thi. Din chuttiyo ke ho ya fir normal days, Sakshi humesha se jaldi uthkar tayar ho jati, or sabse pehla uska jo kaam hota wo Bhagwaan ke samne haath jodkar prarthana karna.

Sakshi(mann me): Deva... Aapki Krupa drushti aise hi hum sab par banaye rakhna... Or Aksh ko thodi sadbuddhi dena... Humesha bewajah sabse behes karta rehta he... Please use samjhana Deva....

Wo apni aakhe band kare apne pure dil se Bhagwaan ke samne haath jode khadi thi, uski har roz ki prarthana me Aksh ka naam zarur hota tha, kuch der baad Sakshi bhi upar chatt par jane ka sochti he, wo jese hi upar pahochi to usne dekha ke Aksh badi gehri soch me waha suraj ki taraf dekh raha tha. Sakshi aage akar Aksh ke kandhe par haath rakh deti he.

Aksh: kuch nahi.... Bas accha lagg raha he yaha par to ruk gaya me....
Jese hi use apne kandhe par Sakshi ka haath mehsus hua usne bol diya.
Sakshi: hmm... lekin mene to kuch pucha hi nahi...
Wo Aksh ke bagal me khade ho kar Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: kyu? Yahi to puchne wali thi na tu?
Wo Sakshi ki akho me dekhte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Bavlat(Pagal).....
Wo muskurate hue Aksh ke sar me marte hue kehti he.

Kuch der tak dono bas Suraj ki ugti kirano ko nihar rahe the, thodi der baad Sakshi ko Aksh se baat karne ka ye sahi waqt laga to wo Aksh se baat karne ka sochti he.

Sakshi: Aksh meri ek baat manega tu?
Wo bina Aksh ko dekhe hi puchti he.
Aksh: konsi baat?
Fir Sakshi Aksh ki taraf dekhne lagti he.
Sakshi: dekh Aksh me janti hu ke tujhe ye padhai wadhai me bilkul intereste nahi he lekin.....
Aksh: yaar Sakshi please ab tu subah subah shuru mat ho jana....
Wo Sakshi ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Dada meri baat to sunn na pehle... Mujhe ek baat bata, tujhe padhai nahi karni to tu kya karega tabtak?
Aksh: pata nahi... lekin kabhi na kabhi kuch zarur karunga...
Sakshi: to fir tabtak padhai kar le na.... Abhi teri koi umar bhi nahi he jo tu kuch kar sake... Ek baar tu 18 ka ho gaya to jo tera dil kare waisa hi karna... Me humesha tera saath dungi.... Or agar tab bhi Aai Baba tere faisle ke khilaf honge to me fir bhi tera hi saath dungi... Lekin please tabtak padhai kar lena....
Wo Aksh ke samne khade ho kar uske haath thamkar kehti he, ab Aksh bhi sochne par majbur ho gaya ke akhir wo padhai chhod kar kya karega...
Sakshi: bolna Dada meri itni si baat manega na?
Ab Aksh kafi gehri soch me tha. Or shayad usko apne sawal ka jawab bhi mil gaya.
Aksh: thik he....
Uske jawab se Sakshi bahot hi khush ho jati he, or kas kar Aksh ko gale laga leti he.
Sakshi: thank you Aksh meri baat maan ne ke liye...
Aksh: ha... is baar teri baat maan li mene, Lekin ye mat samajh lena ke har baar teri mann mani chalegi...
Wo Sakshi ko apne se alag kar ke use ungli dikhate hue kehta he.
Sakshi: thik he..... Matt maan na meri baat, lekin ab se acche se padhai karna, thik he?
Uski baat ka jawab Aksh bas apni gardan ha me hila kar deta he.
Fir wo dono kuch der tak upar chatt par hi bate karte hue beth jate he.

Santosh apne kaam par janeke liye tayar ho chuka tha.
Santosh: Radha... Aksh ko bulao... Mujhe us se baat karni he.
Radha: dekhiye subah subah shuru mat ho jana ab aap, kya baat karni he?
Santosh: us se akhri baar puchunga ke padhai karni he ya nahi... Warna...
Sakshi: Baba aap chinta mat kijiye.... Aksh to bas aise hi bol raha tha ke use padhai nahi karni...
Santosh: chalo thik he.... Me chalta hu...
Or wo apne kaam par chala jata he. Tabhi Aksh apne kamre se bahar ajata he or sidha ghar ke bahar jane lagta he.
Radha: Aksh kaha ja raha he t subah subah?
Wo Aksh ko darwaze par hi rokte hue puchti he.
Aksh: Karim chacha ke yaha ja raha hu or me sham ko 4 baje aunga ghar pe...
Or ye kehkar wo bahar chala jata he
Radha: 4 baje? Lekin... Aksh... Aksh... Sunn to...
Wo piche se Aksh ko pukarti he lekin tabtak to wo nikal gaya tha.
Radha: pata nahi kab sudhrega ye ladka?
Sakshi: kya Aai tum bhi... Aksh kaha bigda hua he jo sudharne ki baat kar rahi ho...
Wo aage akar Radha ke gale me bahe dalte hue kehti he.
Radha: ha... Tu to bas humesha uski hi tarafdari karti reh..... Dada chi ladki (Bhai ki ladli)
Wo narazgi se Sakshi se alag hote hue kehti he.
Sakshi: isme tarafdari ki kya baat agayi Aai? Uski soch thodi alag si he, or mujhe usme koi galat baat nahi lagti or me uski kisi bhi galat baat me saath nahi deti....
Radha: Rahude Rahude (Rehne do).... Bahot bolne lagi he ab tu bhi...
Wo Sakshi ke sar pe halke se thapki marte hue kehti he.
Aise hi dono masti mazak me ghar ke kaam nipta dete he, waha Aksh Garage par pahoch gaya tha. Karim use chote mote kaam sikha raha tha or Aksh bhi mann laga kar kaam sikh raha tha, lekin jab Karim apne customers se baat karta to Aksh kafi bariki se unki baate sunta tha, kyu ke Karim ke sare customer us se bahot hi friendly tarike se baat karte the, Karim ne apne customers ko shikayat ka mauka kabhi bhi nahi diya tha or isi wajah se har koi Karim se kafi acche se baat karte, or is area me Karim ka hi ek lauta garage tha kisi me itni himmat nahi thi ke wo yaha par ek Garage open kare, kyu ke log humesha Karim se hi apni gadiyo ki marammat karwate the. Aise hi waqt nikalta gaya, dopehar ko khane ka samay ho gaya tha, Karim Aksh ko apne saath ghar le gaya jaha wo log khana kha kar firse garage agaye.

Karim: Aksh bahot der ho gayi he, ab chala ja tu ghar pe.
Aksh: nahi chacha me shaam ko chala jaunga....
Karim: are Aksh tu thak gaya he, ghar ja aram kar le....
Aksh: chacha me nahi thaka hu, chaliye kaam par lagg jate he.
Or wo aage badh kar apna adhura kaam pura karne me lagg jata he.
Karim(mann me): ise samajh pana namunkin he... Yaa Khuda... Iski humesha madat karte rehna, ye ladka kuch alag hi he... Lekin dil ka kafi saaf he....

Or fir Karim bhi apne kaam me lagg jata he. Shaam ke 4 baje hue the Karim Aksh ko ghar jane ko kehta he, Aksh ka dil ghar jane ke liye nahi kar raha tha, lekin Karim ki zidd par wo ghar chala jata he, Raste me jate hue Aksh ko usi Showroom me ek Supercar dikhit he, jaha bachpan me do admiyo ne uska mazak udaya tha, us car ko dekh kar Aksh ke chehre par hasi ajati he.

Aksh(mann me): bahot jald tu mere paas bhi hogi... Thoda sabr kar.. huhhh

Or wo apne mann me apne ane wale future ko plan karte hue ghar ke raste chala gaya. Ghar akar wo fresh ho jata he, kuch der baad ghar pe Soham or Neha bhi aye hue the, charo milkar upar apni chatt par bethe dhalte suraj ka Khubsurat nazara dekh rahe the.

Neha: yaar me to College jane ke liye bahot hi exited hu, kitna maza ayega....
Wo bahot hi khushi se kehti he lekin Soham usi khilli udane ki sochta he.
Soham: accha? Me janta hu tu kyu exited he... Dekh itna exite hone ki koi zarurat nahi he... Kyu ke teri shakal Bandariya jesi he, or Bandariya ko koi ladka ghaas bhi nahi dalta... Samji...
Uski baat se Sakshi zor zor se hasne lagti he lekin Neha bahot gusse me ajati he or sidha Soham ka collar pakad leti he.
Neha: kutte.. kya kaha tune.... Me Bandariya.... khud to joker lagta he, or mujhe Bandariya bol raha he..
Wo zor zor se Soham ka collar pakad kar use age piche karte hue bol rahi thi, Sakshi in dono ki masti par hass rahi thi lekin Aksh to bas dhalte suraj ko ek takk dekhe ja raha tha. Or Sakshi use is tarah se dekh leti he.
Soham: kya soch raha he Aksh tu?
Aksh: kuch nahi..... Bas dekh raha hu ke jese ye suraj dhal raha he, waise hi meri life bhi dhalte ja rahi he...
Uski baat se wah ka sara mahol hi badal jata he, lekin Sakshi ko is baat par kafi gussa ajata he lekin wo bina gussa dikhaye Aksh ke bagal me beth jati he.

Sakshi: to tu apne aap ko is suraj ki jagah dekh raha he na?
Wo samne dhalte Suraj ko dekhte hue Aksh se puchti he, Aksh uske sawal par sirf Sakshi ko dekh raha tha.
Sakshi: jawab de na Aksh
Aksh: ha.....
Sakshi: to fir tujhe ye sacchayi kyu nahi dikhayi deti ke Yahi Suraj dhalte hue bhi is puri duniya ko kitna Khubsurat bana deta he, khud jal kar dusro ki zindagi me sawera lata he... Aksh tu kyu humesha aisi ulti sidhi bate karta rehta he? Me... Me....
Or wo apni baat puri kiye bina hi waha se niche chali jati he, Soham or Neha use samjhane ke liye uske piche hi chale ate he, Lekin Aksh Sakshi ko naraz kar ke kafi bura mehsus kar raha tha, Aksh kuch der wahi betha rehta he.

Kuch der baad Soham or Neha bhi apne ghat chale gaye the, Aksh ko Sakshi se baat karni thi lekin Sakshi us se Naraz lagg rahi thi or wo bas ghar ke kaam karne me lagg jati he, Aksh ko us se baat karne ka mauka nahi milta.

Raat ko sab log milkar khana kha lete he, khane ke baad Sakshi Radha ka kaam me haath batane lagti he, Aksh tabtak bahar walk ke liye chala jata he, jab wo ghar aya to Radha or Santosh TV dekh rahe the, Sakshi ko waha na dekh kar Aksh us se baat karne uske kamre me chala jata he. Jaha Sakshi bed par badi hi gehri soch me leti hui thi, Uske kamre ka darwaza khula hua tha Sakshi ko pata nahi chalta ke Aksh waha aya he tab Aksh darwaze ko knock karta he jis se Sakshi hosh me ajati he or Darwaze par Aksh ko khada dekh uthkar beth jati he. Aksh andar akar pehle darwaza lock kar deta he or ja kar Sakshi ke samne niche apne ghutno par beth kar uske haath thaam leta he.

Aksh: sorry Sakshi..... Me janta hu tu meri kahi baat se naraz he, or tera naraz hona sahi bhi he, lekin.... lekin me kya karu, me nahi janta ke kyu me aisi baate karta hu... Samajh hi nahi araha ke me kyu aisa banta ja raha hu, kabhi kabhi me apne aap se nafrat karne lagta hu... Kya karu Sakshi me tu hi bata....
Sakshi: You find peace not by rearranging the circumstances of your life, but by realizing who you are at the deepest level, Eckhart Tolle...... Jin Authors ki kitabe padhta he tu, unki hi bate he ye...
Wo halki si num akhi se kehti he, jis se Aksh ke chehre par ek hasi ajati he.
Aksh: sahi kaha... Lekin kayi baar Practicality in sari baato par kese na kese haawi ho hi jati he... Or us waqt bahot dard hota he... Sabse zyada to tab, jab humare pyaar karne wale log humse naraz ho jaye...
Sakshi: me koi naraz nahi hu tujh par....
Wo Aksh se nazre ferte hue kehti he.
Aksh: to fir aise nazre kyu fer rahi he..... Ab maaf bhi kar de.... Aage se kabhi aisi baate nahi karunga..
Wo Sakshi ke haath kaste hue kehta he lekin wo koi response nahi deti.
Aksh: ab maan bhi jana... Oye chipkali....
Bas Aksh ke muh se ye nikla ke Sakshi ka gussa satve asman par chala jata he, or wo Aksh se apne haath chhuda kar uska collar pakad leti he.
Sakshi: tujhe kitni baar kaha he ue mat bola kar mujhe.... Samajh nahi ata tere....
Wo bahot hi gusse me usko dhakke dete hue kehti he. Uska gussa dekh Aksh has padta he or fir Sakshi bhi uska collar chhod deti he.
Sakshi: please Aksh age se aisi utpatang baate mat kiya kar...
Aksh: ha nahi karunga.... Ab so ja.. mujhe bhi bahot nind arahi he.
Sakshi: okay...
Or fir Aksh waha se apne kamre me chala ata he, aaj pura din kaam karne se wo kafi thak chuka tha isliye bed par let te hi uski aakh lagg jati he.

Or is tarah inka ye din nikal jata he, jaha humne dekha ke wo Aksh jo kisi ki nahi manta use Sakshi ne bas kuch palo me apni baat manva li, or wo Apni padhai continue karne ke liye razi ho gaya, jaha Aksh mann laga kar Karim se kaam sikh raha tha, lekin jab bhi Karin apne customers se baat karta to Aksh unko kafi note karta tha. Wahi Sakshi ki apne bhai se narazgi, jo jayaz thi, use Aksh ne dur kar hi diya. Ab inki life ne aage kya mod ate he ye dekhna interesting hoga.

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Interesting updatekahani jaise jaise aage badthi zarahi hai waise waise aksh ki sooch, behavior mein progress aaraha hai Jo pata nahi aacha hai ya bura...???yeh tho annewale updates mein pata chal jayega aur han aksh bahuth lucky hai kyu ki sakshi Na sirf aksh ko samaj thi hai but usko motivate bhi karti hai ...
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Nice update Bhai.......


Qaatil bhai story ko thodi raftaar do, Kahani bahut slow chal rahi hai........