Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

[mashish]

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[Qaatil]

nice update

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Nayi kahani shuru karne k liye aapko badhayi.... Or intro bahut hi safayi se likha gaya he.

Bahut hi pyara or masumiyat bhara Update

Awesome update

Thank You So Much Dosto, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

Intjaar

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Guys, Update 3 Will Be Out Tomorrow At 9 P.M. Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Rahega

Intjaar

Thank You So Much Dosto, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤


Guys, Update 3 Will Be Out Tomorrow At 9 P.M. Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤

 

[Qaatil]

Dosto Maafi chahunga humesha ke time par Update nahi diya.... Lekin raat ko 8:30-9:00 baje Update 3 Post kar dunga.
Till Then Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤
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[manikmittalme07]

aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update

 

[Qaatil]

aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update

Thank You So Much manikmittalme07 Bhai tarif ke liye... Baki to jabtak aap jese Readers ka saath he, tabtak Sirf Updates nahi.... Dher sari kahaniya bhi ati rahengi.... Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

[manikmittalme07]

Thank You So Much manikmittalme07 Bhai tarif ke liye... Baki to jabtak aap jese Readers ka saath he, tabtak Sirf Updates nahi.... Dher sari kahaniya bhi ati rahengi.... Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤

sure @Qatil99 bhai aapki story hi itni interesting hai ke banda khud ba khud juda rehta hai...keep writing bro...we readers will definitely support you.

 

[Qaatil]

sure @Qatil99 bhai aapki story hi itni interesting hai ke banda khud ba khud juda rehta hai...keep writing bro...we readers will definitely support you.

Thank You So Much Bhai, Baki Update 9 baje post ho jayega Stay Tuned

 

[Qaatil]

Chapter 1 - The Early Life


Update 3​

Word Count: 2501
Estimated Reading Time: 00:12:00

Ek chehekti subah me is matlabi duniya se bekhabar Aksh Or Sakshi besud se apni sapno ki duniya me gum the, lekin unki nind todne ke liye waha Radha ajati he. Kafi mashakkat karne ke baad akhir kaar Radha dono ko nind se jaga hi deti he. Dono jaldi se ready ho jate he, aaj Santosh ko dono ke teacher se milna tha, to wo tino ghar se nikal jate he.


School pahoch kar Santosh teacher se milta he, Staff Room me is waqt Teacher, Santosh, Aksh or Sakshi the.

Teacher: dekhiye mujhe in dono se padhai ke mamle me koi pareshani nahi he, kyu ke dono padhai me acche he, lekin ye mar pitai acchi baat nahi he, baki dono bahot hi samjhdar he.
Santosh: ji me firse aapse maafi chahta hu, bacche he galtiya to karte hi he.
Teacher: hmm.... Aksh Sakshi..... Is baar maaf kar rahi hu, agli baar aisa kuch nahi hona chahiye, Okay?
Wo dono ko warn karte hue kehti he.
Aksh/Sakshi: okay ma'am....

Fir tino staff room se bahar ajate he. Aksh to kal se bas kahi gum sa tha.

Santosh: chalo me chalta hu, shaam ko milenge
Wo dono ke sar pe haath ferte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Aise kese jaoge? Paise kon dega?
Santosh: are haa... Ye lo.... Tumhare paise...
Wo dono ko kuch paise de deta he or waha se apne kaam par jane ke liye nikla hi tha ke piche se Aksh use rok deta he.

Santosh: kya baat he Aksh?
Aksh: Wo....wo Baba mujhe cycle nahi chahiye.....
Santosh: kya? Lekin kyu?
Aksh: bas... Mujhe nahi chahiye.... Aap mere liye cycle mat lana.
Santosh: beta mene kaha na me tumhare liye cycle jald se jald le aunga....
Wo niche jhuk kar Aksh ka chehra apne hatho me thamkar kehta he.
Aksh: nahi Baba... Mujhe sachme cycle nahi chahiye...
Santosh: lekin.....
Aksh: please Baba..... Jab mujhe chahiye hogi tab me aapse maang lunga.....
Santosh: accha thik he.... To ab me jau?
Aksh ha me sar hila deta he, fir Santosh waha se apne kaam par chala jata he. Aksh or Sakshi bhi apni class attend karne ke liye chal padte he.

Sakshi: Aksh Tune kyu mana kar diya cycle lene se?
Aksh: bas mujhe nahi chahiye thi cycle....
Sakshi: jhute kahi ke... Sach kyu nahi bata rahe ho?
Aksh: or kya sach batau? Mujhe nahi chahiye cycle bas.. Or ab tu chup chap chal class me..
Or fir dono apni class Tak pahoch jate he. Aksh aaj pure waqt bas kuch khayalo me duba hua tha. Kuch period khatam ho gaye the, lekin Aksh ab bhi Radha or Santosh ki kal raat ki baate yaad kar raha tha, or Teacher ne Aksh ko dekh liya.

Teacher: Aksh.... Aksh.....
Wo thodi unchi awaaz me kehta he tab ja kar Aksh apni khayalo ki duniya se bahar ajata he or uth kar khada ho jata he.
Teacher: chalo batao mene abhi kya padhaya?
Uske sawal par Aksh hadbada jata he or koi jawab nahi de pata.
Teacher: kaha dhyan tha tumhara? Ha?
Aksh: S.. sorry sir....
Wo apna sar niche jhuka kar kehta he.
Teacher: koi sorry nahi... Chalo class ke bahar jao or murga ban kar khade ho jao...
Wo kafi sakht lehze me kehta he. Jis se Aksh turant bahar ajata he lekin wo murga nahi bana tha bas aise hi apni sapno ki duniya me duba khada tha. Kuch der baad teacher sabko kuch likhne ko kehta he or ek baar Aksh ko dekhne ke liye bahar ajata he to waha Aksh khade khade kuch soch raha tha.

Teacher: are..... Tumhe murga ban ne ke liye kaha tha na mene?
Wo Aksh ke samne ate hue kehta he.
Aksh: Sorry Sir...
Wo apni soch se bahar akar Ghabrate hue kehta he.
Teacher: aaj kya ho gaya he Aksh tumhe?
Aksh: sir wo...... wo Ambani kon he?
Uska sawal sunkar teacher kuch samajh nahi pata.
Teacher: kyu? tumhe kyu jaan na he?
Aksh: nahi sir mene to bas aise hi pucha..
Teacher: hmmm.... to Ambani India ke sabse paise wale insaan he...
Aksh: kya? Sabse paise wale? To itne paise unke paas kese kya aye?
Wo kafi heran sa rehkar teacher se puchta he.
Teacher: kyu ke wo ek kabil business man he, unka bahot hi bada karobaar he.
Aksh: kya? To fir me bhi Ambani jese hi banunga.... or ek kabil business man banunga...
Wo teacher ka jawab sunkar kafi khush ho jata he.
Teacher: thik he bann jana, lekin abhi murga bano, thik he.....
Wo Aksh ke sar se haath ferte hue kehta he. Fir Aksh murga bann jata he, or Teacher firse class ke andar chala jata he, kuch der me Class khatam hone ke baad Teacher bahar Aksh ke paas ajata he.


Teacher: Aksh ab bas, jao andar class me..
Aksh: okay sir...
Wo sidha khada hote hue kehta he. Or class me jane lagta he lekin tabhi Teacher use rok deta he, Aksh uski taraf mudkar ruk jata he.
Teacher: waise Aksh ek baat yaad rakhna, Ambani bann na katayi asaan nahi hota, uske liye tumhe bahot mehnat karni hogi.. paisa kamane ke liye kafi mehnat lagti he or sirf mehnat hi nahi tumhe bahot hoshiyaari se kaam bhi lena padega, tab kahi jaa kar tum Ambani ki tarah ban paoge...
Wo thoda niche jhuk kar Aksh ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kehta he.
Aksh: ha sir me bahot mehnat karunga... Or ek din Ambani ki tarah ban kar dikhaunga....
Wo kafi josh ke saath jawab deta he, Teacher uski baat par muskurate hue waha se chala jata he.

Recess ke waqt sablog milkar khana kha rahe the. Lekin Aksh to ab bhi apne sapne ki duniya me khoya tha.

Sakshi: Aye bandar.... subah se Kya soch raha he?
Wo Aksh ko ek gehri soch me duba dekh kar puchti he.
Aksh: chup chap khana kha.... Chipkali....
Wo gusse me Sakshi se kehta he, lekin is se Sakshi ka chehra hi utar jata he.
Sakshi: to itna kyu gussa kar rahe ho? Bas aise hi puch liya na mene...
Wo muh fula kar apna sar jhuka ke Aksh se kehti he. Aksh ko kafi hurt hota he ke uski wajah se Sakshi udas ho gayi.
Aksh: Sorry.... Sorry.... Sakshi...
Wo apne kaan pakad kar Sakshi ke gaal par kiss karte hue kehta he, jis se Sakshi ke Chehre par ek pyari si muskurahat wapis ajati he.
Sakshi: to bata, kya soch rahe the?
Aksh: thik he, lekin pehle mujhe promise kar ke tu meri ye baat kisi ko nahi batayegi, Aai Baba ko bhi nahi...
Sakshi: are promise kisi ko nahi bataungi...
Aksh: to sunn... Me na bada ho kar Ambani ki tarah banunga or....
Sakshi: Ambani.... Ye kon he?
Wo Aksh ki baat adhe me hi kaat te hue puchti he.
Aksh: are Ambani humari country ke sabse paise wale insaan he, me bhi unki tarah banunga or fir humare paas bhi bahot sara paisa hoga jis se hum jo chahe wo kharid sakte he na....
Sakshi: sacchi? Hum Jo chahe wo kharid sakte he?
Wo kafi utsukta ke saath puchti he.
Aksh: ha.... Lekin ye baat kisi se mat kehna thik he?
Sakshi: nahi Dada..... Me kisi ko bhi nahi bataungi...
Aksh: hmm, to ab khana kha...
Or fir dono hi khushi khushi khana kha lete he.

Dopehar ko School ki chutti hote hi Aksh or Sakshi apne raste jane lagte he. Ghar akar Aksh sabse pehle apne kamre me rakha ek gullak nikal leta he jispar kafi dhul padi thi, kyu ke Aksh humesha apni jeb me hi kuch paise bacha kar rakhta tha. lekin pata nahi kyu aaj se usne apne sare paise gullak me jama karne ka faisla liya. Jab wo gullak me paise daal raha tha to Sakshi ne use dekh liya.

Sakshi: kya hua Aksh? Tu apne paise gullak me kyu daal raha he?
Piche se Sakshi ki awaz sunn kar Aksh hadbada jata he.
Aksh: ha... ha wo... me wo... ab se me apne sare paise is gullak me jama karunga... or ek din in paiso se hi apne liye cycle kharid lunga....
Uski baat Sakshi bilkul nahi samajh pati, Aksh to gullak rakh kar washroom chala jata he, lekin Sakshi wahi khade ho kar us gullak ko dekh rahi thi, or aise hi dekhte hue wo aage badhti he or apne paise nikal kar us gullak me daal deti he or aisa karne se Sakshi ke chehre par ek pyaari si muskurahat ajati he. Fir wo bhi fresh ho jate he or Radha ke saath milkar lunch kar lete he, uske baad Tino saath milkar gola kha lete he, Aksh or Sakshi kuch der TV dekh rahe the. Kuch der TV dekhne ke baad wo dono apna homework Complete karne me lag jate he. Homework Complete karne ke baad Sakshi turant So jati he, lekin Aksh ki aakho se nind koso dur thi, wo to bas Sakshi ke bagal me leta tha, achanak Uski nazar soti hui Sakshi par padti he, uska masum sa chehra or uspar bikhre baal use Kisi pari jesi Khubsurati de rahe the, use dekh kar Aksh ke chehre par bhi ek muskurahat ajati he, or wo apne haatho se Sakshi ke Chehre se baalo ko hata deta he.

Aksh(man me): chipkali..... Jab jagi hoti he to kitna satati he mujhe.... Or ab itni bholi lag rahi he......

Wo Sakshi ko dekhte hue apne man me soche ja raha tha or aise hi sochte hue uski bhi aakh lag gayi. Shaam ke waqt Radha ne dono ko badi hi mushkil se jagaya, Santosh kuch der baad ghar agaya tha, Sakshi or Aksh baramde me khel rahe the, Santosh or Radha Andar hall me bethe hue the.

Santosh: waise Radha tum keh rahi thi na Aksh kafi ziddi he, aaj usne School me mujhse kaha ke use cycle nahi chahiye...
Radha: kya? Aisa kyu kaha usne?
Wo badi herani se puchti he.
Santosh: pata nahi.... lekin me fir bhi use Cycle le kar dunga...
Radha: dekhiye me use cycle le kar dene se mana nahi kar rahi hu, lekin ab wo cycle nahi lene ke liye bhi maan gaya he to aap thode thode paise bacha kar uske liye cycle le ayiye... Apne saving se kyu paise nikal rahe ho? Ye sab saving to hum un dono ke ane wale kal ke liye hi bacha rahe he na?
Wo Santosh ke haath pe apna haath rakhte hue kehti he.
Santosh: thik kaha tumne... Hum to zyada padh nahi paye... Bas me chahta hu ke ye dono acche se padh likh kar samaj me apna naam kamaye.....
Radha: sahi kaha aapne.... Me Bas chahti hu ke jo mushkilo se hum guzre he, waisi mushkile in dono ki zindagi me kabhi na aye..
Is baat ko kehte hue Radha ki aakhe num ho jati he, Santosh Mahol ko bhari hota dekh uska dhyan bhatkane ki sochta he or uthkar Radha ka haath pakad kar use Room me le jane lagta he.

Radha: kya hua? Aise andar kyu le jane lage?
Santosh: are chalo bhi, bacche bahar khel rahe he, hum apna kaam kar lete he na...
Wo Radha ke ekdum nazdeek akar aakh marte hue kehta he.
Radha: besharam... Hato.... Na waqt na kuch.... kahi bhi kuch bhi bolte rehte ho...
Wo apna haath Santosh se chuddate hue kehti he.
Santosh: yaar kisne kaha ke pyaar karne ka waqt hota he? Chalo bhi ab...
Wo Radha ki kamar ko pakad kar kehta he.
Radha: hato..... Mujhe bahot se kaam pade he...
Wo Santosh ke changul se azad ho kar kitchen ki taraf jate hue kehti he.
Santosh: ek kaam karta hu na, Sadhu hi ban jata hu me....
Radha: jo bann na he bano, mujhe kaam karne do chup chaap....
Aise hi hasi mazak karte hue raat ho jati he, Sab milkar khana kha lete he or TV dekhne lagte he.

Raat ke kareeb 9 baje hue the, Kal Sunday tha isliye Aksh or Sakshi ko School me chutti thi.

Radha: Baccho ab jao sone.. kafi der ho gayi he...
Sakshi: Aai dekhne do na TV thodi der, kal to chutti he na hume....
Wo roti hui shakal bana kar kehti he.
Radha: chutti he to kya puri raat TV dekhte rahoge? Chalo jao jaldi....

Or wo uthkar TV band kar deti he, ab Sakshi or Aksh majburan apne kamre me ajate he. Dono apne bed par lete hue the lekin dono ko nind nahi arahi thi.

Sakshi: waise Aksh, Baba to tujhe cycle le kar de rahe the na... To tune mana kyu kar diya?
Wo Aksh ku taraf mudkar puchti he.
Aksh: are Paise kamane ke liye bahot mehnat karni padti he or mene kal raat Aai Baba ko is bare me baat karte hue bhi suna tha, to mene aaj isi liye baba se cycle lane se mana kar diya.... Or jo paise Baba mujhe roz dete he me usi se cycle kharidunga, Baba ko meri cycle lane ke liye zyada mehnat nahi karni padegi
Sakshi: accha.... Ye baat he...
Aksh: ha... Or ab tu bhi meri baat sun.... Ab se tu bhi Baba ke paas koi bhi chiz lene ki zidd nahi karegi siwaye baba jo hume school jate hue paise dete he uske.. samjhi?
Sakshi: are ye kya baat hui? To Fir mujhe khilone or baki sab kon laa kar dega?
Wo apna muh fula kar Aksh se puchti he.
Aksh: are pagal me bada hokar bahot sare paise kamaunga.... Fir tujhe jo chahiye me tujhe la kar dunga... Lekin baba ko pareshan nahi karna....
Sakshi: sachme jo me kahungi wo laa kar doge na mujhe?
Wo Aksh ko ungli dikhate hue puchti he.
Aksh: are ha tu jo kahegi wo la kar dunga me tujhe....
Sakshi: to thik he... Abse me Kisi bhi chiz ke liye Baba se zidd nahi karungi....
Aksh: ye hui na baat...

Or aise hi dono kuch der tak baate karne lagte he or fir gehri nind ke agosh me chale jate he.

Is tarah inka ye din nikal jata he, humne dekha ke Aksh ko apne sawal ka jawab to mil gaya, or ab usne mann hi mann than liya tha ke use aage jakar kuch bahot bada karna he, wahi humne Sakshi ka ek bahot hi Kindness se bhara Act dekha jab usne apne paise bhi Aksh ke Gullak me daal diye the, jis se pata nahi kyu lekin use kafi khushi hui, jaha Aksh ke dil or dimag me ye Paisa naam ki chiz enter kar chuki thi, Ab ye aage ja kar Aksh or baki logo ki zindagi me kya baldav lane wali thi ye to waqt ane par pata chal hi jayega.

Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

 

[Qaatil]

For staring new story thread...

Congratulations for new story..bhai

Congratulations bro waiting for update
For new story

Congratulations for new story Qaatil bro

Jabardast introduction.bhai❤

For Starting New Story Thread

...for new story ...

Nice intro waiting for update

Bhai comments bharpoor milega...tum agla update post karo

Welcome back Qaatil bhai.........

Introduction padke hi aisa lagta hai story bahut hi faadu hone wali hai......

Update ka intezar mein.....

Fantasy me story dali h

Koi magic vagic aisi h kya story bhai

Congratulations for new thread

Fir thik h
Kyuki magic wali story apne matlab ki nhi

Nice introduction..

Sabse pehle new story ke liye apko bdhai aur apka shukriya hume ek aur khani dene ke liye



Gajab intro to bdiya rha
Is bar matlab story me teen character h lead role, triangle
Aksh, sakshi, mansi


Dar ke rehti h, aise kya badlaav aa gye aksh me interesting

Waiting for first update

Qaatil bta to dety laga di hy shuru atory

nice update

Kya hi baat bhai isme love triangle dikh raha he, or love triangle me to dard milna hi he dekhte he ab ye dard kise milta he, waiting for 1st Update.

nice intro

Bahut khub Qaatil Bhai, the intro ekdum dhasu he, mumbai se Surat ye kya soch rahe ho bhai? Eagerly waiting for updates

for the new story. I am sure this will much better than earlier story.

Congratulations for new thread Bhai & waiting for first update.

Congratulations bro for new story

Intro is fantastic

Keep writing we always with you

Ek nayi kahani shuru karne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad bhai aapka.
Ye kahani apne anjaam tak pahunche iske liye anant shubhkamnaye....

Baat introduction ki....
Aapne hero ka naam sabse hatkar rakha h अक्ष waah or jo do main character h unke nam bhi lajawab h साक्षी और मानसी .
Anoothe naam.
Behtareen raha introduction.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Congratulations bro

Congratulations Qaatil bro for new story, ab ayega maza bhai ki new story Updates ka besabri se intzar rahega.

This time I liked your writing better than before. This story is about brother and sister. I liked the way you introduced us to the characters in the story. Now I eagerly await the first update of the story.
Thank You...

Bohot achha update bhai Waiting for next update ♥

lovely update

first update shandaar hai lekin aapne update ke suruaat me hi sad ending ki jalak dikhai hai ab kya kahun samjh na aa raha

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Update ki shuruaat badi hi khatarnaak tarike se hui.
or fir bachpan se.
Aksh or sakshi ki badmashiyon ko aapne bahut hi sundar tarike se dikhaya h .
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah

"
Ghayal Kar Ke Mujhe Usne Poochha,
Karoge Kya Phir Mohabbat Mujhse,
Lahoo-Lahoo Tha Dil Mera Magar
Honthon Ne Kaha Beintha-Beintha....
"
Lazavab Shurvath....Congratulation for the story

Bang on nice start, Characters Introduction well narrated, roles wisely chosen, jo kami (Narration ki) apke pehle story me thi, wo apne is story bahuth bakubi cover up kiya hai umeed hai aage bhi aise hi updates ayenge. Aur story ke pehle update se hi apna hero lime light me aachuka hai is ki waja uska character hai. Dekthe yeh story kya rang dikhati hai.....
Aur ek baath, ek chota sa suggestion personally i hate tragedy stories, movies etc., aur agar aap is story ko tragedic bannane ka soch rahe ho tho please meri request hai ki is story ko tragedy mat bannana.
Jab bhi mein kio stories ya fir koi movies dekhtha hun tho mein us story ke character ko apne aap se jod detha hun pata nahi yeh meri buri addat hai ya fir kuch aur but mein aise karne se apne aap ko rokh nahi saktha aur is ka natiza yeh hota hai ki jab koi tragedy scene ya fir story ko dektha ya fir padtha hun tho mujhe bahuth zada dard hota hai isliye mein aap se sirf request kar saktha hun kyun ki aapne is story pe bahuth mehanat kar ke likha hai aur changes shayad is story ki destiny badal sakthi jo shayad is story ke liye accha na ho so.
aur keep it up.....
Wating for the update

are Qaatil Bhai aapne to qatl kar diya
mind-blowing Start, yaar apne na middle class family ki ek baat bahut hi acche dhang se dikhayi he, ke ek middle class parents apne baccho ke liye koi taj mehel to nahi banwa sakte lekin unki choti si icchao ko pure dil se pura karte he jese yaha par Santosh ne apne baccho keliye jo gola banane ke liye Syrups laye.... Ye dikhata he the beauty of a Middle class Parents ❤
aise hi likhte rehna bhai, waiting for next Update

Nice update bro...

Just superb

Awesome update

Aise Update dete rehna bro Story bich me mat chhod dena bas

Aaj start Kiya h read Kar ke review deta hu

Gajab update bhai ji, pyara update tha
aksh ke rone ne to emotional kar diya

Middle class family ki life,pareshani,tangi bdiya tarike se describe ki h apne

Update jaldi khtm ho gya


Bache kya jane ab is bare me , agle mahine bol diya lekin aksh ko aaj hi chaiye

Lekin isiliye to unhe bache kehte h


Yha se hi aksh business man banne ka sochega


Jo ye conversation h na aksh aur sakshi ki, bas kya khu mujhe bhut jyada pyari lagti h
Meri story padne ki ye khas vjah h
Aise updates padkar jo sakoon milta h, pucho mat

Eagerly waiting for next update

Bhut shandar update biradar. Story track par aa rhi ha

Fabulous start
Keep posting

Childhood is very good and sweet, I miss my childhood while reading the story, we have no worries, playing and having fun all day long. From now on, Aksh and Sakshi are supporting each other, will have more fun later. I have also eaten a lot of ice balls during my school time and still eat occasionally. I liked the thinking of Aksh and some things are understood at the right time.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
​

Yaar Qaatil bhai kya hi likh rahe ho aap
Aapki writing pehle se zyada imrove hui he, keep it up bhai

Or aaj ke Update ki baat kare to kamal update tha, dono ka kisi ladke ko milkar marna
Sakshi ka itni buri halat me bhi gole ke liye pyaar ❤
Or wahi Aksh ke saaf dil par is pesa jesi khichad ki bunde lagg jana, ye bahut galat hua, dekhte he ab age kya hoga, eagerly waiting bhai. ​

Pyaara Update maza aya padhkar, or jo dono ne milkar us ladke ko mara bahut sahi kiya sare moments bahut hi pyare the, or ab aksh ke andar ye sawal agaya he, pata nahi kya hota he aagey waiting for next Update

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aksh or sakshi ka milkar apne se bade ladke ko pitna or ghar me ma ki dant sunkar bachpan ke din yaad aa gye.
Aap itna kamal ka update likhte ho ki main khud se jod leta hoon use.
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Lovely update ek bahuth hi masumiyat see bara update or ek bahuth gheri baat bi pata chalti hai is update se ki maa baap ka pyaar tyag, samarpan, ki tulna kisi bhi cheez se nahi ho sakthi.. Aur kya is mamsum see ladke k man mein umad rahe swalon ka jawab melega ya nahi dekthe hai aage kya hot hai
Good waiting for next

Nice update bro

waiting for next update

Bahut hi pyara or masumiyat bhara Update

Awesome update

aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update

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