Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

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Chapter 1 - The Early Life

Update 2

Mega Update​

Word Count: 3112
Estimated Reading Time: 00:15:00


Subah ke 7 baje hue the, Aksh besudh sa, ulta soya hua tha or Sakshi uske upar apne haath per dale soyi thi. Radha apna kaam adhura chhod kar dono ko jagane ke liye ajati he. Lekin wo dono to uthne ka naam hi nahi le rahe the. Radha ne akhir kar dono ko nind se jaga diya Aksh to uth kar beth gaya lekin Sakshi bethe bethe hi apni aakhe band kare soyi thi.


Radha: Deva.... kitni badi aalsi ladki he dekho ye? Bethe bethe bhi sone lagi? Sakshi..... Jaldi uthja.....
Wo Sakshi ko hila kar uski nind todte hue kehti he.
Sakshi: ahhh.. mujhe nahi jana School.....
Wo roti hui shakal bana kar kehti he or itna kehkar wo apne upar firse chadar odh kar so jati he.
Radha: hmm..... To fir Gola Akele Aksh ko hi milega tujhe nahi.....
Wo Aksh ke sar pe haath fer kar kehti he. Or uski baat ka asar Sakshi par ho jata he or wo jhat se uthkar beth jati he.
Sakshi: nahi... nahi... Mujhe bhi chahiye..... Mujhe bhi chahiye.....
Wo bed par khadi ho kar gusse me uchalte hue kehti he.
Radha: hmm to ab utho jaldi....
Fir dono fresh ho jate he, Aksh ne kapde pehen liye the or Radha Sakshi ki choti bana rahi thi, Aksh Sakshi ke samne use dekhte hue khada ho jata he, Sakshi apna muh banate hue use chidha rahi thi.

Aksh: Aai..... Ye chipkali Choti me kitni acchi dikhti he na?
Usne kafi pyaar se ye baat kahi jis se Radha or Sakshi ke chehre par muskurahat ajati he.
Radha: accha? To fir chipkali kyu bulata he ise humesha?
Aksh: kyu ke wo chipkali he... Lekin kabhi kabhi acchi dikhti he.
Sakshi: accha? To me bhi tujhe Bandar or kutta isliye hi bolti hu ke tu to har waqt waisa hi dikhta he.
Radha: bas bas.... Ab subah subah shuru mat ho jao tum dono.... Chalo ho gaya ab nashta karo or School jao... Or yaad hena late hue to...
Wo dono ko ungli dikhate hue warn karti he. Fir dono breakfast kar ke Santosh ke saath School ke liye nikal jate he. Santosh dono ko school ke gate tak chhod deta he or dono ko kuch paise de kar chala jata he. Dono bhai behen bhi khushi khushi apni class me chale jate he, kuch period ke baad ab inka khelne ka waqt agaya tha, sare bacche School ground me chale aye. Aksh, Sakshi, Neha or Soham ek taraf pakdam pakdayi khelne lage the. Sakshi baki tino ko pakad rahi thi, or ye tino us se bach kar bhaag rahe the, tabhi waha khel raha ek ladka bhagti hui Sakshi ke samne ajata he, Sakshi us se takra kar gir jati he or uske ghutne par kafi chott ajati he. Sakshi ab rone lagi Aksh ye dekh kar ruk gaya or Sakshi ke paas bhagte hue ajata he, jis ladke ki wajah se Sakshi giri thi wo un sab se 2-3 saal bada tha. Aksh jaldi se akar Sakshi ke ghutne se khun saaf karne lagta he.


Ladka: aye.... pagal ladki Tu dekh kar nahi bhaag sakti, agar mujhe lag jata to bahot pita hota tujhe mene..

Wo unchi awaaz me Sakshi ko dekh kar kehta he, lekin uski baat se Aksh ka gussa satve asman par chala jata he or wo uth kar us ladke ki collar pakad leta he or uske muh par ek do ghuse maar deta he lekin Aksh is ladke se 2-3 saal Chota tha, to us ladke ne Aksh ko ek dhakke me niche gira diya or uske upar ake Aksh ko marne laga, ab ye sab dekh kar Sakshi uth jati he or piche se us ladke ke baal pakad kar piche khinch kar gira deti he, tabtak Aksh uth kar use marne lagta he ab Sakshi or Aksh milkar us ladke ki tagdi dhulayi karne lage the. Tabhi ek teacher waha ajati he or wo unka jhagda rok deti he.


Is waqt Aksh or Sakshi ke kapdo ki halat kharab ho chuki thi. Wo log apna muh niche kar ke teacher ke samne khade the.


Teacher: kya chal raha he ye sab? Ha? Tum dono milkar use kyu maar rahe ho?
Wo gusse se Aksh or Sakshi ko puchti he.
Aksh: ma'am isne Sakshi ko dhakka diya tha or us se ulti baat bhi ki....
Teacher: to fir tum dono koi gunde ho kya jo is tarah kisi ko marne pitne lag jao.
Sakshi: lekin isne Aksh ko mara tha to....
Teacher: kyu jhut bol rahi ho? Mene dekha yaha tum dono use buri tarah se maar rahe the.
Aksh: ma'am....
Teacher: basss.... Tum is hi waqt ghar jaoge.... Or ha... Kal apne parents ko le kar hi ana school... Jao ab...
Wo bahot hi gusse me kehti he fir Aksh or Sakshi ghar jane ke liye nikal jate he. Raste me dono dare hue the kyu ke ab ghar pe Radha dono ki buri halat karne wali thi. Aise hi chalte hue wo dono us Gole wale ke yaha se guzarte he, use dekh Sakshi achanak se wahi ruk jati he.

Aksh: kyu ruk gayi?
Wo piche mud kar Sakshi se puchta he.
Sakshi: Gola kha kar jate he na....
Usne kafi masumiyat se kaha lekin Uski baat se Aksh use ek tak dekhne lagta he.
Aksh: ghar jane ke baad Aai kitna dantegi hume, me wo soch raha hu, or tujhe gola khana he?
Sakshi: ha to.... Ab Aai to hume ghar pe gola dene nahi wali yahi kha kar jate he na...
Wo roti hui shakal bana kar Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: tu pagal....
Wo is se aage kuch kehta ke Sakshi uska haath pakad leti he or use khinch kar Gola khane le jati he. Sakshi ke haath me Gola ate hi uske chehre par wo khushi, wo pyari hasi wapis ajati he, lekin Aksh to Radha ki dant se darr raha tha, tabhi Aksh ki nazar Sakshi par padti he jo bina kisi darr, khushi khushi Gola khane me lagi thi, use dekh kar Pata nahi kyu lekin Aksh ke chehre par bhi ek muskurahat ajati he, or wo bhi Gole ki chuskiya lene lagta he, Gola khatam hote hi dono firse apne raste chal padte he.


Ghar pe Radha ke sab kaam ho chuke the, or wo aram se TV dekhte hue bethi thi. Tabhi darwaze se Aksh or Sakshi dare, sehme se andar apni gardan niche kiye ajate he. Dono ko itni jaldi ghar ate or unki halat dekh kar Radha thodi heran thi.


Radha: tum dono itni jaldi.... Or ye... Ye kya halat bana li he?
Lekin Aksh or Sakshi uski baat ka koi jawaab nahi dete.
Radha: Bolo..... Or ye kya Sakshi.... Tumhare ghutne par chot kese lagi?
Wo Sakshi ke ghutno ki chot dekh kar chintit lehze me puchti he.
Aksh: Aai, wo.... Ma'am ne Kal tumhe... Bulaya he...
Wo ladkhadate hue kehta he.
Radha: zarur kuch karname kar ke aye ho tum dono.... Jaldi se batao warna....
Wo dono ko ungli dikha kar gusse me kehti he.
Sakshi: Aai, humari galati nahi he.... Wo ladka hi mujhse takraya tha or sorry bolne ki jagah mujhpar gussa kiya usne, to Aksh ne or mene milkar use pitt diya.. ..
Wo apna muh fula kar kafi gusse se kehti he.
Radha: wahhh... Matlab To ab gunda gardi karne lage tum dono... Teacher ko nahi bata sakti thi?
Aksh/Sakshi: Sorry Aai....
Wo dono apna muh niche karte hue kehte he.
Radha: Sorry? Din ba din shaitaniya badh rahi he tum dono ki, ab jao andar or kapde badal kar khana khane aajao....
Wo dono ko andar room me janeka ishara karte hue gusse me kehti he. Dono jaldi se andar ajate he.

Aksh: ohh... Bach gaye aaj to.....
Wo andar bed par beth kar chain ki saas lete hue kehta he. Lekin Sakshi to abtak udas lag rahi thi.
Aksh: kya hua chipkali?
Uski baat par Sakshi bas use gusse se dekhti he.
Aksh: kya hua bata na....
Sakshi: ab Aai se Gola kese mange? Wo nahi dene wali hume Gola....
Wo apni school bag niche dalte hue udasi se kehti he.
Aksh: oye pagal ladki..... Abhi to khaya na humne, or ab firse chahiye tujhe?
Sakshi: ha wo to bahar khaya tha, mujhe ghar pe bhi khana he...
Wo roti hui shakal bana kar Aksh ke bagal me beth jati he, tabhi Aksh ki nazar uski chot par chali jati he.
Aksh: Sakshi tujhe dard nahi ho raha na?
Sakshi: kya nahi ho raha? Kitni jalan ho rahi he mujhe...
Wo bahot hi masumiyat se kehti he, tabb Aksh uske samne niche zameen pe apne ghutno par beth jata he or Sakshi ki chot par fook lagane lagta he.

Aksh: ab thik he?
Wo fook marte hue Sakshi se puchta he.
Sakshi: ha thoda thik lag raha he....
Tabhi Radha Sakshi ke chot par lagane ke liye Dawai le kar andar ajati he.
Radha: Aksh tum kapde badal lo jaldi....
Fir Aksh uthkar washroom chala jata he, or Radha Sakshi ki chot par dawai lagane lagti he.

Kuch der baad Tino milkar khana shuru kar dete he, bich bich me Sakshi Aksh ko ishara kar rahi thi ke Aai se Gola maang, lekin Aksh use mana kar raha tha.

Radha: kya ishare bazi chal rahi he tum dono ki?
Wo dono ko ishare se baat karta dekh kar puchti he. Radha ki baat sunkar dono thoda hadbada jate he.
Aksh: n...... nahi Aai... Kuch nahi....
Sakshi: Aai.... Wo Aksh na mujhe Tumse Gola mang ne ko keh raha tha...
Wo apna ilzaam Aksh par dalte hue kehti he, lekin uski baat se Aksh ka muh khula ka khula reh jata he.
Aksh: kitna jhut bolti he chipkali...... Khud kabse mujhe keh rahi he ke Aai se Gola maang... or ab....
Wo gusse me Sakshi ko kehta he.
Radha: koi Gola nahi milne wala dono ko, pehle to School me gunda gardi kar ke aye ho or chahte ho ke tumhe gola du? Bilkul bhi nahi milega.... Khana khao chup chap...

Wo sakht lehze me dono se kehti he. Dono hi chup chap khana khane lagte he, khane ke baad Aksh or Sakshi Cartoon dekh rahe the lekin dono hi udas the, Radha dono ko dekh leti he or fridge me se Barf nikal kar use crush kar ke uspe kal Santosh ne laye syrups daal kar gola bana deti or use le kar dono ke paas ajati he.


Radha: ye lo.....
Wo dono ke samne gola dete hue kehti he. Aksh or Sakshi ki to jese lottery lag gayi. Dono khushi khushi Radha ke haath se Gola le kar khane lagte he. Radha bhi unke bagal me beth jati he.
Radha: dekho aaj maaf kar diya mene dono ko, lekin agli baar aisi harkat nahi honi chahiye... Thik he?
Aksh/Sakshi: thik he Aai....
Or wo dono apna Gola khane me busy ho gaye, kuch der baad Santosh ghar agaya tha uski aaj jald hi chutti ho chuki thi.

Sham ke kareeb 6 baje hue the, puri Joshi family saath bethe baate kar rahi thi.
Radha: kal aap dono ke teacher se mil lena me to nahi jane wali, mujhe pata he ye dono fir se kuch na kuch gadbad karenge school me.
Santosh: tum chinta mat karo me jaunga kal, bacche he shaitani to karte hi rahenge na....
Wo Aksh or Sakshi ki side lete hue kehta he. Tabhi Sakshi akar uske gale laga leti he.
Sakshi: Baba, Thank You aapne humari problem door kar di....
Wo Santosh ke gale lag kar uchalte hue kehti he.
Santosh: konsi problem?
Wo Sakshi ko apne se alag kar ke herani se puchta he
Sakshi: are... ab roz roz bahar Gola nahi khayege, ghar pe akar dher sara gola khate rahenge wo bhi free....
Wo bahot khushi se kehti he.
Santosh: accha? To fir me kal se tum dono ko paise nahi dunga....
Sakshi: kyu nahi doge paise?
Wo kafi chintit lehze me puchti he.
Santosh: are bhai jab tum dono ka kaam ghar me hi ho jata he, to fir paise ki kya zarurat he?
Sakshi: nahi... nahi.... Hume paise bhi chahiye.... Agar kabhi Aai ne hume Gola dene se mana kiya to?
Santosh: Aai kyu mana karegi Gola dene se?
Sakshi: mujhe kuch nahi pata, roz paise bhi dene padenge matlab dene padenge....
Wo gusse me apne per patakte hue kehti he.
Santosh: are.... Thik he, thik he... dunga paise bhi..... bas?
Sakshi: thank you baba....
Wo Santosh ko kas ke gale lagate hue Kehti he.
Santosh: accha chalo park me khelne jana he?
Aksh/Sakshi: ha.... Jana he....
Fir wo charo milkar paas hi ke park me chale jate he. Waha ja kar Santosh or Radha ek bench par beth gaye, Sakshi or Aksh dono waha khelne lage. Kuch der ke baad waha par Aksh ki hi umar ka ek ladka aya jiske paas ek choti cycle thi. Wo ladka us cycle ko kafi khushi ke saath chala raha tha, ab Aksh ko bahot iccha hui ke uske paas bhi waisi cycle honi chahiye thi. Wo bas ek jagah khada ho kar us cycle ko dekh raha tha. lekin Sakshi aage baag chuki thi, jab wo piche mudkar dekhti he to pati he ke Aksh waha khada he.

Sakshi: kya hua Aksh?
Wo Aksh ke paas akar puchti he, Lekin Aksh uski baat ka jawab diye bina apne parents ki taraf bhaag jata he, Sakshi bhi uske piche chali ati he.
Aksh: Baba.... Baba...
Wo chillate hue bhaag kar Santosh ke paas akar kehta he.
Santosh: Kya hua beta?
Aksh: Baba, mujhe bhi waisi cycle chahiye....
Wo us ladke ki cycle ki taraf ungli karte hue kehta he.
Santosh: waisi cycle? Lekin Tumhe kaha ati he cycle beta?
Aksh: Baba me kuch nahi janta, mujhe bhi waisi cycle chahiye....
Wo gusse me apne per patakte hue kehta he.
Radha: beta meri baat....
Aksh: mujhe chahiye wo cycle bas.....
Wo Radha ki baat kaat te hue kehta he.
Santosh: accha... Thik he dila dunga.....
Aksh: sach Baba?
Wo kafi khush hokar kehta he.
Santosh: ha lekin tumhe uske liye agle mahine tak intezar karna hoga.
Aksh: nahi.... Mujhe kal hi wo cycle chahiye....
Santosh: beta kal ke kal cycle nahi mil sakti, mene kaha na me agle mahine tumhare liye waisi cycle le aunga....
Aksh: Baba......
Radha: Aksh..... Bas ho gaya.....
Wo kafi gusse me akar unchi awaaz me kehti he.
Radha: ek baar kaha samajh nahi ata? Or koi cycle nahi milegi....
Wo bahot hi gusse me kehti he jis se Aksh ke akho me asu ajate he.
Santosh: Radha, gussa kyu kar rahi ho? Beta me me tumhe jald se jald waisi cycle la kar de dunga... Thik he?
Wo Aksh ke asu saaf karte hue kehta he. Lekin Aksh apne kadam tez chalate hue waha se nikal jata he. Fir tino bhi uske piche piche hi ghar ajate he. Ghar ane ke baad Aksh sidha andar ke kamre me ja kar bed par let kar rone lagta he. Santosh or Radha apne kamre me chale jate he, Sakshi jese hi andar ati to usne dekha ke Aksh bed par lete hue Ro raha he. Wo Aksh ke paas ja kar beth jati he.

Sakshi: Dada kya hua?
Aksh: kuch nahi hua... Ja yaha se....
Wo kafi gusse me Sakshi se kehta he.
Sakshi: Baba ne kaha na ke wo Cycle le kar denge, to fir ab kyu ro rahe ho?
Aksh: mujhe tujhse baat nahi karni.... ja yaha se...
Sakshi: dekhna fir kabhi baat nahi karungi me....
Aksh: ha to mat kar.....
Sakshi: Sachme nahi karungi....
Lekin Aksh koi jawab nahi deta tab Sakshi uski pith ke upar chad ke uski kamar me gudgudi karne lagti he. Sakshi ke aisa karne se kuch hi seconds me Rota hua Aksh hasne lagta he.

Aksh: Chipkali.....
Jab Sakshi us se alag ho kar side me beth jati he to Aksh us se kehta he.
Sakshi: Bandar......

Or fir wo dono aise hi bethe hue baate karte he, thodi der baad dinner ka time ho gaya tha, Charo saath milkar khana kha rahe the, Aksh ab bhi thoda udas tha khane ke baad wo apne kamre me chala jata he Sakshi bhi kuch der TV dekhne ke baad kamre me ja kar so jati he.


Radha apna sara kaam khatam kar ke Santosh ke saath hall me beth jati he.

Radha: dekha na Aksh ko? Kitna ziddi ho gaya he?
Santosh: Radha wo baccha he, zidd to karega hi na?
Radha: or aap kya mana nahi kar sakte use? Hum log koi Ambani ke pariwar se nahi he jo uski sari farmayishe puri kar sake...
Santosh: Radha use ye baat kese samjhegi? Wo thodi na janta he ke aaj ke samay me ye paisa akhir kitni badi chiz he. Jab wo Bada hoga tab samajh jayega... Or tum chinta mat karo, me bank me jo saving he usme se kuch paise nikal kar uske liye cycle la dunga....
Radha: jesa aap thik samjhe....
Fir wo dono bhi apne kamre me chale jate he, lekin un dono ki baate Aksh ne sun li thi, darasal jab wo washroom jane ke liye waha aya to dono ki baate usne sun li.

Aksh(man me): Aai Baba to bahot pareshan lagg rahe the, matlab paise bahot mushkil se ate he? To fir me Baba ko bol dunga ke mujhe cycle nahi chahiye... Ha.. ye thik he... lekin ye Ambani kon he? Or Aai ne kyu aisa kaha ke hum Ambani ke pariwar se nahi he?

Wo apne mann me kayi sare swal le kar washroom chala jata he or fir bed par akar so jata he


Or is tarah aaj ka din nikal jata he, jaha baccho ki zidd ke samne ek baap har wo chiz karne ke liye tayar he jis se uske bacche ke chehre par khushi aye.


To doato ye tha is story ka pehla mega Update jaha se hum ye ke sakte he ki ab Aksh ki zindagi me change ane ki Shuruwat ho chuki he, kyu ke is masum se bacche ke dil me ek bahot bada sawal paida ho chuka tha ke Akhir life me paise ki importance itni zyada kyu he. Ab bas is sawal ka jawab Aksh ko kis tarah milta he ye dekhna interesting hoga.

Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

 

[Qaatil]

For staring new story thread...

Congratulations for new story..bhai

Congratulations bro waiting for update
For new story

Congratulations for new story Qaatil bro

Jabardast introduction.bhai❤

For Starting New Story Thread

...for new story ...

Nice intro waiting for update

Bhai comments bharpoor milega...tum agla update post karo

Welcome back Qaatil bhai.........

Introduction padke hi aisa lagta hai story bahut hi faadu hone wali hai......

Update ka intezar mein.....

Fantasy me story dali h

Koi magic vagic aisi h kya story bhai

Congratulations for new thread

Fir thik h
Kyuki magic wali story apne matlab ki nhi

Nice introduction..

Sabse pehle new story ke liye apko bdhai aur apka shukriya hume ek aur khani dene ke liye



Gajab intro to bdiya rha
Is bar matlab story me teen character h lead role, triangle
Aksh, sakshi, mansi


Dar ke rehti h, aise kya badlaav aa gye aksh me interesting

Waiting for first update

Qaatil bta to dety laga di hy shuru atory

nice update

Kya hi baat bhai isme love triangle dikh raha he, or love triangle me to dard milna hi he dekhte he ab ye dard kise milta he, waiting for 1st Update.

nice intro

Bahut khub Qaatil Bhai, the intro ekdum dhasu he, mumbai se Surat ye kya soch rahe ho bhai? Eagerly waiting for updates

for the new story. I am sure this will much better than earlier story.

Congratulations for new thread Bhai & waiting for first update.

Congratulations bro for new story

Intro is fantastic

Keep writing we always with you

Ek nayi kahani shuru karne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad bhai aapka.
Ye kahani apne anjaam tak pahunche iske liye anant shubhkamnaye....

Baat introduction ki....
Aapne hero ka naam sabse hatkar rakha h अक्ष waah or jo do main character h unke nam bhi lajawab h साक्षी और मानसी .
Anoothe naam.
Behtareen raha introduction.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Congratulations bro

Congratulations Qaatil bro for new story, ab ayega maza bhai ki new story Updates ka besabri se intzar rahega.

This time I liked your writing better than before. This story is about brother and sister. I liked the way you introduced us to the characters in the story. Now I eagerly await the first update of the story.
Thank You...

Bohot achha update bhai Waiting for next update ♥

lovely update

first update shandaar hai lekin aapne update ke suruaat me hi sad ending ki jalak dikhai hai ab kya kahun samjh na aa raha

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Update ki shuruaat badi hi khatarnaak tarike se hui.
or fir bachpan se.
Aksh or sakshi ki badmashiyon ko aapne bahut hi sundar tarike se dikhaya h .
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah

"
Ghayal Kar Ke Mujhe Usne Poochha,
Karoge Kya Phir Mohabbat Mujhse,
Lahoo-Lahoo Tha Dil Mera Magar
Honthon Ne Kaha Beintha-Beintha....
"​

Lazavab Shurvath....Congratulation for the story

Bang on nice start, Characters Introduction well narrated, roles wisely chosen, jo kami (Narration ki) apke pehle story me thi, wo apne is story bahuth bakubi cover up kiya hai umeed hai aage bhi aise hi updates ayenge. Aur story ke pehle update se hi apna hero lime light me aachuka hai is ki waja uska character hai. Dekthe yeh story kya rang dikhati hai.....
Aur ek baath, ek chota sa suggestion personally i hate tragedy stories, movies etc., aur agar aap is story ko tragedic bannane ka soch rahe ho tho please meri request hai ki is story ko tragedy mat bannana.
Jab bhi mein kio stories ya fir koi movies dekhtha hun tho mein us story ke character ko apne aap se jod detha hun pata nahi yeh meri buri addat hai ya fir kuch aur but mein aise karne se apne aap ko rokh nahi saktha aur is ka natiza yeh hota hai ki jab koi tragedy scene ya fir story ko dektha ya fir padtha hun tho mujhe bahuth zada dard hota hai isliye mein aap se sirf request kar saktha hun kyun ki aapne is story pe bahuth mehanat kar ke likha hai aur changes shayad is story ki destiny badal sakthi jo shayad is story ke liye accha na ho so.
aur keep it up.....
Wating for the update

are Qaatil Bhai aapne to qatl kar diya
mind-blowing Start, yaar apne na middle class family ki ek baat bahut hi acche dhang se dikhayi he, ke ek middle class parents apne baccho ke liye koi taj mehel to nahi banwa sakte lekin unki choti si icchao ko pure dil se pura karte he jese yaha par Santosh ne apne baccho keliye jo gola banane ke liye Syrups laye.... Ye dikhata he the beauty of a Middle class Parents ❤
aise hi likhte rehna bhai, waiting for next Update ​

Nice update bro...

Just superb

Awesome update

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Chapter 1 - The Early Life

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Subah ke 7 baje hue the, Aksh besudh sa, ulta soya hua tha or Sakshi uske upar apne haath per dale soyi thi. Radha apna kaam adhura chhod kar dono ko jagane ke liye ajati he. Lekin wo dono to uthne ka naam hi nahi le rahe the. Radha ne akhir kar dono ko nind se jaga diya Aksh to uth kar beth gaya lekin Sakshi bethe bethe hi apni aakhe band kare soyi thi.


Radha: Deva.... kitni badi aalsi ladki he dekho ye? Bethe bethe bhi sone lagi? Sakshi..... Jaldi uthja.....
Wo Sakshi ko hila kar uski nind todte hue kehti he.
Sakshi: ahhh.. mujhe nahi jana School.....
Wo roti hui shakal bana kar kehti he or itna kehkar wo apne upar firse chadar odh kar so jati he.
Radha: hmm..... To fir Gola Akele Aksh ko hi milega tujhe nahi.....
Wo Aksh ke sar pe haath fer kar kehti he. Or uski baat ka asar Sakshi par ho jata he or wo jhat se uthkar beth jati he.
Sakshi: nahi... nahi... Mujhe bhi chahiye..... Mujhe bhi chahiye.....
Wo bed par khadi ho kar gusse me uchalte hue kehti he.
Radha: hmm to ab utho jaldi....
Fir dono fresh ho jate he, Aksh ne kapde pehen liye the or Radha Sakshi ki choti bana rahi thi, Aksh Sakshi ke samne use dekhte hue khada ho jata he, Sakshi apna muh banate hue use chidha rahi thi.

Aksh: Aai..... Ye chipkali Choti me kitni acchi dikhti he na?
Usne kafi pyaar se ye baat kahi jis se Radha or Sakshi ke chehre par muskurahat ajati he.
Radha: accha? To fir chipkali kyu bulata he ise humesha?
Aksh: kyu ke wo chipkali he... Lekin kabhi kabhi acchi dikhti he.
Sakshi: accha? To me bhi tujhe Bandar or kutta isliye hi bolti hu ke tu to har waqt waisa hi dikhta he.
Radha: bas bas.... Ab subah subah shuru mat ho jao tum dono.... Chalo ho gaya ab nashta karo or School jao... Or yaad hena late hue to...
Wo dono ko ungli dikhate hue warn karti he. Fir dono breakfast kar ke Santosh ke saath School ke liye nikal jate he. Santosh dono ko school ke gate tak chhod deta he or dono ko kuch paise de kar chala jata he. Dono bhai behen bhi khushi khushi apni class me chale jate he, kuch period ke baad ab inka khelne ka waqt agaya tha, sare bacche School ground me chale aye. Aksh, Sakshi, Neha or Soham ek taraf pakdam pakdayi khelne lage the. Sakshi baki tino ko pakad rahi thi, or ye tino us se bach kar bhaag rahe the, tabhi waha khel raha ek ladka bhagti hui Sakshi ke samne ajata he, Sakshi us se takra kar gir jati he or uske ghutne par kafi chott ajati he. Sakshi ab rone lagi Aksh ye dekh kar ruk gaya or Sakshi ke paas bhagte hue ajata he, jis ladke ki wajah se Sakshi giri thi wo un sab se 2-3 saal bada tha. Aksh jaldi se akar Sakshi ke ghutne se khun saaf karne lagta he.


Ladka: aye.... pagal ladki Tu dekh kar nahi bhaag sakti, agar mujhe lag jata to bahot pita hota tujhe mene..

Wo unchi awaaz me Sakshi ko dekh kar kehta he, lekin uski baat se Aksh ka gussa satve asman par chala jata he or wo uth kar us ladke ki collar pakad leta he or uske muh par ek do ghuse maar deta he lekin Aksh is ladke se 2-3 saal Chota tha, to us ladke ne Aksh ko ek dhakke me niche gira diya or uske upar ake Aksh ko marne laga, ab ye sab dekh kar Sakshi uth jati he or piche se us ladke ke baal pakad kar piche khinch kar gira deti he, tabtak Aksh uth kar use marne lagta he ab Sakshi or Aksh milkar us ladke ki tagdi dhulayi karne lage the. Tabhi ek teacher waha ajati he or wo unka jhagda rok deti he.


Is waqt Aksh or Sakshi ke kapdo ki halat kharab ho chuki thi. Wo log apna muh niche kar ke teacher ke samne khade the.


Teacher: kya chal raha he ye sab? Ha? Tum dono milkar use kyu maar rahe ho?
Wo gusse se Aksh or Sakshi ko puchti he.
Aksh: ma'am isne Sakshi ko dhakka diya tha or us se ulti baat bhi ki....
Teacher: to fir tum dono koi gunde ho kya jo is tarah kisi ko marne pitne lag jao.
Sakshi: lekin isne Aksh ko mara tha to....
Teacher: kyu jhut bol rahi ho? Mene dekha yaha tum dono use buri tarah se maar rahe the.
Aksh: ma'am....
Teacher: basss.... Tum is hi waqt ghar jaoge.... Or ha... Kal apne parents ko le kar hi ana school... Jao ab...
Wo bahot hi gusse me kehti he fir Aksh or Sakshi ghar jane ke liye nikal jate he. Raste me dono dare hue the kyu ke ab ghar pe Radha dono ki buri halat karne wali thi. Aise hi chalte hue wo dono us Gole wale ke yaha se guzarte he, use dekh Sakshi achanak se wahi ruk jati he.

Aksh: kyu ruk gayi?
Wo piche mud kar Sakshi se puchta he.
Sakshi: Gola kha kar jate he na....
Usne kafi masumiyat se kaha lekin Uski baat se Aksh use ek tak dekhne lagta he.
Aksh: ghar jane ke baad Aai kitna dantegi hume, me wo soch raha hu, or tujhe gola khana he?
Sakshi: ha to.... Ab Aai to hume ghar pe gola dene nahi wali yahi kha kar jate he na...
Wo roti hui shakal bana kar Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: tu pagal....
Wo is se aage kuch kehta ke Sakshi uska haath pakad leti he or use khinch kar Gola khane le jati he. Sakshi ke haath me Gola ate hi uske chehre par wo khushi, wo pyari hasi wapis ajati he, lekin Aksh to Radha ki dant se darr raha tha, tabhi Aksh ki nazar Sakshi par padti he jo bina kisi darr, khushi khushi Gola khane me lagi thi, use dekh kar Pata nahi kyu lekin Aksh ke chehre par bhi ek muskurahat ajati he, or wo bhi Gole ki chuskiya lene lagta he, Gola khatam hote hi dono firse apne raste chal padte he.


Ghar pe Radha ke sab kaam ho chuke the, or wo aram se TV dekhte hue bethi thi. Tabhi darwaze se Aksh or Sakshi dare, sehme se andar apni gardan niche kiye ajate he. Dono ko itni jaldi ghar ate or unki halat dekh kar Radha thodi heran thi.


Radha: tum dono itni jaldi.... Or ye... Ye kya halat bana li he?
Lekin Aksh or Sakshi uski baat ka koi jawaab nahi dete.
Radha: Bolo..... Or ye kya Sakshi.... Tumhare ghutne par chot kese lagi?
Wo Sakshi ke ghutno ki chot dekh kar chintit lehze me puchti he.
Aksh: Aai, wo.... Ma'am ne Kal tumhe... Bulaya he...
Wo ladkhadate hue kehta he.
Radha: zarur kuch karname kar ke aye ho tum dono.... Jaldi se batao warna....
Wo dono ko ungli dikha kar gusse me kehti he.
Sakshi: Aai, humari galati nahi he.... Wo ladka hi mujhse takraya tha or sorry bolne ki jagah mujhpar gussa kiya usne, to Aksh ne or mene milkar use pitt diya.. ..
Wo apna muh fula kar kafi gusse se kehti he.
Radha: wahhh... Matlab To ab gunda gardi karne lage tum dono... Teacher ko nahi bata sakti thi?
Aksh/Sakshi: Sorry Aai....
Wo dono apna muh niche karte hue kehte he.
Radha: Sorry? Din ba din shaitaniya badh rahi he tum dono ki, ab jao andar or kapde badal kar khana khane aajao....
Wo dono ko andar room me janeka ishara karte hue gusse me kehti he. Dono jaldi se andar ajate he.

Aksh: ohh... Bach gaye aaj to.....
Wo andar bed par beth kar chain ki saas lete hue kehta he. Lekin Sakshi to abtak udas lag rahi thi.
Aksh: kya hua chipkali?
Uski baat par Sakshi bas use gusse se dekhti he.
Aksh: kya hua bata na....
Sakshi: ab Aai se Gola kese mange? Wo nahi dene wali hume Gola....
Wo apni school bag niche dalte hue udasi se kehti he.
Aksh: oye pagal ladki..... Abhi to khaya na humne, or ab firse chahiye tujhe?
Sakshi: ha wo to bahar khaya tha, mujhe ghar pe bhi khana he...
Wo roti hui shakal bana kar Aksh ke bagal me beth jati he, tabhi Aksh ki nazar uski chot par chali jati he.
Aksh: Sakshi tujhe dard nahi ho raha na?
Sakshi: kya nahi ho raha? Kitni jalan ho rahi he mujhe...
Wo bahot hi masumiyat se kehti he, tabb Aksh uske samne niche zameen pe apne ghutno par beth jata he or Sakshi ki chot par fook lagane lagta he.

Aksh: ab thik he?
Wo fook marte hue Sakshi se puchta he.
Sakshi: ha thoda thik lag raha he....
Tabhi Radha Sakshi ke chot par lagane ke liye Dawai le kar andar ajati he.
Radha: Aksh tum kapde badal lo jaldi....
Fir Aksh uthkar washroom chala jata he, or Radha Sakshi ki chot par dawai lagane lagti he.

Kuch der baad Tino milkar khana shuru kar dete he, bich bich me Sakshi Aksh ko ishara kar rahi thi ke Aai se Gola maang, lekin Aksh use mana kar raha tha.

Radha: kya ishare bazi chal rahi he tum dono ki?
Wo dono ko ishare se baat karta dekh kar puchti he. Radha ki baat sunkar dono thoda hadbada jate he.
Aksh: n...... nahi Aai... Kuch nahi....
Sakshi: Aai.... Wo Aksh na mujhe Tumse Gola mang ne ko keh raha tha...
Wo apna ilzaam Aksh par dalte hue kehti he, lekin uski baat se Aksh ka muh khula ka khula reh jata he.
Aksh: kitna jhut bolti he chipkali...... Khud kabse mujhe keh rahi he ke Aai se Gola maang... or ab....
Wo gusse me Sakshi ko kehta he.
Radha: koi Gola nahi milne wala dono ko, pehle to School me gunda gardi kar ke aye ho or chahte ho ke tumhe gola du? Bilkul bhi nahi milega.... Khana khao chup chap...

Wo sakht lehze me dono se kehti he. Dono hi chup chap khana khane lagte he, khane ke baad Aksh or Sakshi Cartoon dekh rahe the lekin dono hi udas the, Radha dono ko dekh leti he or fridge me se Barf nikal kar use crush kar ke uspe kal Santosh ne laye syrups daal kar gola bana deti or use le kar dono ke paas ajati he.


Radha: ye lo.....
Wo dono ke samne gola dete hue kehti he. Aksh or Sakshi ki to jese lottery lag gayi. Dono khushi khushi Radha ke haath se Gola le kar khane lagte he. Radha bhi unke bagal me beth jati he.
Radha: dekho aaj maaf kar diya mene dono ko, lekin agli baar aisi harkat nahi honi chahiye... Thik he?
Aksh/Sakshi: thik he Aai....
Or wo dono apna Gola khane me busy ho gaye, kuch der baad Santosh ghar agaya tha uski aaj jald hi chutti ho chuki thi.

Sham ke kareeb 6 baje hue the, puri Joshi family saath bethe baate kar rahi thi.
Radha: kal aap dono ke teacher se mil lena me to nahi jane wali, mujhe pata he ye dono fir se kuch na kuch gadbad karenge school me.
Santosh: tum chinta mat karo me jaunga kal, bacche he shaitani to karte hi rahenge na....
Wo Aksh or Sakshi ki side lete hue kehta he. Tabhi Sakshi akar uske gale laga leti he.
Sakshi: Baba, Thank You aapne humari problem door kar di....
Wo Santosh ke gale lag kar uchalte hue kehti he.
Santosh: konsi problem?
Wo Sakshi ko apne se alag kar ke herani se puchta he
Sakshi: are... ab roz roz bahar Gola nahi khayege, ghar pe akar dher sara gola khate rahenge wo bhi free....
Wo bahot khushi se kehti he.
Santosh: accha? To fir me kal se tum dono ko paise nahi dunga....
Sakshi: kyu nahi doge paise?
Wo kafi chintit lehze me puchti he.
Santosh: are bhai jab tum dono ka kaam ghar me hi ho jata he, to fir paise ki kya zarurat he?
Sakshi: nahi... nahi.... Hume paise bhi chahiye.... Agar kabhi Aai ne hume Gola dene se mana kiya to?
Santosh: Aai kyu mana karegi Gola dene se?
Sakshi: mujhe kuch nahi pata, roz paise bhi dene padenge matlab dene padenge....
Wo gusse me apne per patakte hue kehti he.
Santosh: are.... Thik he, thik he... dunga paise bhi..... bas?
Sakshi: thank you baba....
Wo Santosh ko kas ke gale lagate hue Kehti he.
Santosh: accha chalo park me khelne jana he?
Aksh/Sakshi: ha.... Jana he....
Fir wo charo milkar paas hi ke park me chale jate he. Waha ja kar Santosh or Radha ek bench par beth gaye, Sakshi or Aksh dono waha khelne lage. Kuch der ke baad waha par Aksh ki hi umar ka ek ladka aya jiske paas ek choti cycle thi. Wo ladka us cycle ko kafi khushi ke saath chala raha tha, ab Aksh ko bahot iccha hui ke uske paas bhi waisi cycle honi chahiye thi. Wo bas ek jagah khada ho kar us cycle ko dekh raha tha. lekin Sakshi aage baag chuki thi, jab wo piche mudkar dekhti he to pati he ke Aksh waha khada he.

Sakshi: kya hua Aksh?
Wo Aksh ke paas akar puchti he, Lekin Aksh uski baat ka jawab diye bina apne parents ki taraf bhaag jata he, Sakshi bhi uske piche chali ati he.
Aksh: Baba.... Baba...
Wo chillate hue bhaag kar Santosh ke paas akar kehta he.
Santosh: Kya hua beta?
Aksh: Baba, mujhe bhi waisi cycle chahiye....
Wo us ladke ki cycle ki taraf ungli karte hue kehta he.
Santosh: waisi cycle? Lekin Tumhe kaha ati he cycle beta?
Aksh: Baba me kuch nahi janta, mujhe bhi waisi cycle chahiye....
Wo gusse me apne per patakte hue kehta he.
Radha: beta meri baat....
Aksh: mujhe chahiye wo cycle bas.....
Wo Radha ki baat kaat te hue kehta he.
Santosh: accha... Thik he dila dunga.....
Aksh: sach Baba?
Wo kafi khush hokar kehta he.
Santosh: ha lekin tumhe uske liye agle mahine tak intezar karna hoga.
Aksh: nahi.... Mujhe kal hi wo cycle chahiye....
Santosh: beta kal ke kal cycle nahi mil sakti, mene kaha na me agle mahine tumhare liye waisi cycle le aunga....
Aksh: Baba......
Radha: Aksh..... Bas ho gaya.....
Wo kafi gusse me akar unchi awaaz me kehti he.
Radha: ek baar kaha samajh nahi ata? Or koi cycle nahi milegi....
Wo bahot hi gusse me kehti he jis se Aksh ke akho me asu ajate he.
Santosh: Radha, gussa kyu kar rahi ho? Beta me me tumhe jald se jald waisi cycle la kar de dunga... Thik he?
Wo Aksh ke asu saaf karte hue kehta he. Lekin Aksh apne kadam tez chalate hue waha se nikal jata he. Fir tino bhi uske piche piche hi ghar ajate he. Ghar ane ke baad Aksh sidha andar ke kamre me ja kar bed par let kar rone lagta he. Santosh or Radha apne kamre me chale jate he, Sakshi jese hi andar ati to usne dekha ke Aksh bed par lete hue Ro raha he. Wo Aksh ke paas ja kar beth jati he.

Sakshi: Dada kya hua?
Aksh: kuch nahi hua... Ja yaha se....
Wo kafi gusse me Sakshi se kehta he.
Sakshi: Baba ne kaha na ke wo Cycle le kar denge, to fir ab kyu ro rahe ho?
Aksh: mujhe tujhse baat nahi karni.... ja yaha se...
Sakshi: dekhna fir kabhi baat nahi karungi me....
Aksh: ha to mat kar.....
Sakshi: Sachme nahi karungi....
Lekin Aksh koi jawab nahi deta tab Sakshi uski pith ke upar chad ke uski kamar me gudgudi karne lagti he. Sakshi ke aisa karne se kuch hi seconds me Rota hua Aksh hasne lagta he.

Aksh: Chipkali.....
Jab Sakshi us se alag ho kar side me beth jati he to Aksh us se kehta he.
Sakshi: Bandar......

Or fir wo dono aise hi bethe hue baate karte he, thodi der baad dinner ka time ho gaya tha, Charo saath milkar khana kha rahe the, Aksh ab bhi thoda udas tha khane ke baad wo apne kamre me chala jata he Sakshi bhi kuch der TV dekhne ke baad kamre me ja kar so jati he.


Radha apna sara kaam khatam kar ke Santosh ke saath hall me beth jati he.

Radha: dekha na Aksh ko? Kitna ziddi ho gaya he?
Santosh: Radha wo baccha he, zidd to karega hi na?
Radha: or aap kya mana nahi kar sakte use? Hum log koi Ambani ke pariwar se nahi he jo uski sari farmayishe puri kar sake...
Santosh: Radha use ye baat kese samjhegi? Wo thodi na janta he ke aaj ke samay me ye paisa akhir kitni badi chiz he. Jab wo Bada hoga tab samajh jayega... Or tum chinta mat karo, me bank me jo saving he usme se kuch paise nikal kar uske liye cycle la dunga....
Radha: jesa aap thik samjhe....
Fir wo dono bhi apne kamre me chale jate he, lekin un dono ki baate Aksh ne sun li thi, darasal jab wo washroom jane ke liye waha aya to dono ki baate usne sun li.

Aksh(man me): Aai Baba to bahot pareshan lagg rahe the, matlab paise bahot mushkil se ate he? To fir me Baba ko bol dunga ke mujhe cycle nahi chahiye... Ha.. ye thik he... lekin ye Ambani kon he? Or Aai ne kyu aisa kaha ke hum Ambani ke pariwar se nahi he?

Wo apne mann me kayi sare swal le kar washroom chala jata he or fir bed par akar so jata he


Or is tarah aaj ka din nikal jata he, jaha baccho ki zidd ke samne ek baap har wo chiz karne ke liye tayar he jis se uske bacche ke chehre par khushi aye.


To doato ye tha is story ka pehla mega Update jaha se hum ye ke sakte he ki ab Aksh ki zindagi me change ane ki Shuruwat ho chuki he, kyu ke is masum se bacche ke dil me ek bahot bada sawal paida ho chuka tha ke Akhir life me paise ki importance itni zyada kyu he. Ab bas is sawal ka jawab Aksh ko kis tarah milta he ye dekhna interesting hoga.

Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

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Middle class family ki life,pareshani,tangi bdiya tarike se describe ki h apne

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Aksh:nahi.... Mujhe kal hi wo cycle chahiye....

Bache kya jane ab is bare me , agle mahine bol diya lekin aksh ko aaj hi chaiye

Lekin isiliye to unhe bache kehte h

Aai ne kyu aisa kaha ke hum Ambani ke pariwar se nahi he?

Yha se hi aksh business man banne ka sochega

Sakshi: Dada kya hua?
Aksh: kuch nahi hua... Ja yaha se..

Jo ye conversation h na aksh aur sakshi ki, bas kya khu mujhe bhut jyada pyari lagti h
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