Thriller Kya fark padta hai

[Alex123]

Pahle to Mai ye Bata dun ki Mai wo Alex Bhai nahi hun Jo family love forever wali story likh rahe the kyunki Mai kisi aur ke nam par wahwahi nahi chahta hun. Khair kahani par aate hai Mai koi writer nahi hun nahi banna chata hun ye bus Meri dimag ki upaj hai is kahani me Jo bhi hota ya ghatta hai wo bus imagination hai .bohot paka liya aage bhadte Hain .han kuch chisen hai Jo Mai batana chahta hun update Meri Marzi ke mutabik aayenge magar ye story complete zarur hogi.
First update do din bad aayenge .

 

[Jitu kumar]

bhai for new story,

 

[Siraj Patel]

For starting new story thread
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[FRIDAY]

Thanks for writing a thriller story. Xf me jaha dekho sirf fantasy story hi dikhta hai.


Waiting for first update.

GOOD LUCK!

 

[Alex123]

UPDATE 1
Delhi sahar ke nami bar me ek aadmi ek khubsurat kursi pe baith ke sarab ki bottle pi raha hai. use ye bhi hose nahi hai ki usne ab Tak kitni pi hai aas pas k log Kam karne wale waiters even bartender bhi hairan hai ki ye aadmi hi hai na ya kuch aur .
aaiye samajte hai majra Kya hai . Sam ke 6:30 par kale Cote pahne ek aadmi bar me ghusta hai aur sarab ki sabse mahgin bottle order karta hai aur abhi Tak Yani ki 11:55 Tak wahi aadmi lagatar us sarab ko bina pani ke piye hi ja Raha hai magar Jo haran karne wali bat hai wo ye hai ki ab Tak us aadmi ne takriban 55 bottle Khali Kar di hai magar us par nase ki sikan Tak Nazar nahi aayi hai .us aadmi ne hath ke isare se ek bottle bartender se aur mangi to bartender ne manager ki taraf ek bar dekha jaise kuch puch Raha ho Kya de dun sir to manager ne aakhon ke isare se na kaha to bartender ne kaha sorry sir we don't have any more.Is par us kale Cote wale aadmi ne ek serious look dete hue kaha don't worry mai marunga nahi aur ek aur bottle counter ke niche se lete hue khada hua koi aur normal insan hota to sayad ab Tak behose ho Chuka hota par pata nahi wo Kya tufan tha. bottle lene ke bad usne payment ki aur bahar nikla hi Tha tha ek aalishan gadi uske samne aa kar ruki uske hath lagane se pahle hi uske driver ne piche ka darwaza khola wo kale Cote wale aadmi bina kuch kahe hi baith Gaya aur gadi hawaon see bate karne lagi.


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[Alex123]

Update ek din bad dena tha par Kya karun control nahi hua khair update enjoy Karen aur review den ek aur bat update mere man ke mutabik aayenge

 

[Alex123]

Pichle update me AAP ne padha ki kaise us kale Cote wale ne sarab ki bottle pi aur fir gadi me baith Kar nikal pada
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UPDATE 2
Gadi apni raftar se aage badh rahi thi aur Rasta sunsan tha road ke dono tarf bayi taraf ghana jungle tha aur dahine taraf lambe aur khubsurat paid (tree).piche baita aadmi badi hi gaur se un pedon ko dekh Raha tha mahaul me ghor sannata tha bus us kale Cote wale aadmi ke sarab pine ki aawaze car ke aandar us sannate to kabhi kabhi today rahi thi .ki aachank driver ne back mirror me dekhte hue pache baithe us Saks se kaha .mafi chahta hun sahab par AAP itna kyun pite hai? .(Bhai log abhi identification me time hai tab Tak ke liye Mai (kale Cote) wale ko (KC)kahunga).driver ke sawal par ek bar KC ne apna chehra upar Kiya chehre par koi bhav nahi tha aage dekhte hue usne kaha Peter (Driver)waise to tumhe isse koi Matlab nahi hona chahiye magar mere na batanese tumhari curiosity katm nahi hogi Mai sarab taste ke liye pita hun itna kah Kar kc Chup ho Gaya .ye bat to Peter bhi samajh Gaya tha ki KC jhut bol Raha hai par Peter chup ho Gaya .car apni raftar se aage badh rahi thi aachanak Peter ne break mara ispar KC ne Peter se pucha Kya hua to usne kaha sayad Tyre puncher ho Gaya hai .ispar us KC ne kuch kaha nahi bus car se bahar aa Gaya aur apna manpasand Kam karne laga Yani sarab pine laga .pite hue usne Peter se pucha kitna waqt lagega to usne kaha ki yahi koi aadha ghanta .ispar us KC ne sar hila Kar thik hai kaha aur pine laga ki aachank use us jungle ke pas se kiss ke rone aur chillane ki aawaze aai to Peter ke kan khade ho Gaye magar us kc par to jaise koi fark hi nahi pada ho wo sayad kahin kyoya hua tha ki aachank us ko Peter ne hilaya to us ki tandra tuti usne pucha punchar bun Gaya Kya to ispar Peter ne kaha sahab us jungle se kisi ki chillane ki aawaz aai hai sayad koi musibat me hai aapko dekhna chahiye jabtak Mai punchar banata hun ispar wo KC ne ha me gardan hilai aur us disha me chal pada Jahan se aawaz aai thi kuch dur chal ne ke bad wo dekhta hai ki ek ladki jis ki umra kuch 25 sal hogi ko kuch 4 log pakde hue hai aur pachwa apni pant kholne me laga hai us ke bayin taraf do ladke ek chote ladke ko pakde hue hai Jo ki takriban 5-6 sal ka hoga dono buri tarah se ro rahe the .chota ladka sayad us ladki ka Bhai tha kyunki wo bar bar kah Raha tha Meri didi ko chod do aur wo ladki un gundon se raham ki bhik mang rahi thi .(in gundon ko Mai g1 g2 kah Kar sambodhit karunga )g5- chup ho ja ladki hum to bus Maza lene aur Dene aaye hai Sach kahta hun tujhe bada Maza aayega Teri choti si chut me 7 -7 land ghusenge to Teri aatma tript ho jayegi .ladki - dari Hui si aawaz me Maine tumhara Kya bigada hai mujhhe chod do please .g3- hath me aaye hue mal ko koi kaise chod sakta hai aur waise bhi collage me hamare drugs ka dhandha Teri wajah se chopat hua tha . us ladki ko ab samajh me aa Gaya tha ki ab use koi nahi bacha sakta hai wo asahai ho Kar bas roye ja rahi thi .aur uska chota sa Bhai lagatar un gundon se apni Didi ko chodne ki bat Kar Raha tha us ka gala bhi raundh Gaya tha .g5- ne us ladki ke pajame ko itni jor se kicha ki nada tutte hue uske hath me aa Gaya .KC wahin aandhere me ek choti chattan pe baith ke ye manzar dekh Raha tha us ke chehre par koi bhaw nahi the .g5-ne uski panti ke tarf hath badhaya hi tha ki aachanak sannate ko chirti Hui us aandhere se aawaz aai KC -ye to badi nainsafi hai Tum 7 aur wo akeli Chalo Mai kuch bhojh kam Kar deta hum ya sayad pura hi .ye aawaz sun kar us ladki ke man me ek ummid jag gai .ispar g3 -ne kaha ja re ja ke kat de sale ko is par ladke ko pakda hua g6-bada sa chaku le Kar KC ke tarf badha aur aur daudte hue chaku sidhe KC ki chati me de mara magar KC ne hatne ki kosish bhi nahi ki aur natija ckaku ka phal us ke qimti shirt se takraya aur tutta Chala Gaya .ye dekh Kar ki KC ko kharoch bhi nahi aai hai g6 - kabhi chaku ko dekhta to kabhi KC ko par tab Tak der ho chuki thi kc kc hath badi speed se ghuma speed itni thi ki waha par kisi ko kuch samajh nahi aaya natija g6- ka Dil uchalta hua g5- ke pair ke pas pada aakhri bar pump Kar Raha tha .aur g6 - ki body dham se kc ke aage giri kc ke hath se hun tapak Raha tha .is manzar ko dekh to ladki aur uska Bhai bhi saham Gaye .pran Jaye par akad na Jaye g5-ne sare gundon ko ek sath hamla karne ko kaha aur khud bhi maidan me kud pada .KC - whin par ab bhi kada tha use 6 gundon ne gher liya tha magar us ke chehre par ab Tak koi bhaw nahi the jaise ki use koi fark hi nahi padta ho KC -maine kaha tha Mai bojh Kam karne aaya hun .ispar g5 ne kaha marega tu sale aur ek sath us par war Kiya magar ye Kya Sara war Hawa me hi ruk Gaya .

 

[Avir]

Mast start bhai

 

[Alex123]

Mast start bhai

Thanks for supporting

 

[Alex123]

UPDATE 3
Ab Tak aapne dekha ki kaise KC ne un gundon ko apni taraf attract Kiya aur g6 ko Mar Diya ​

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Apna war Hawa me rukte hi wo sab chok Gaye unhen ye samajh nahi aa Raha tha ki wo ruk kaise Gaye kyunki unse hila bhi nahi ja Raha tha .to hua ye ki jaise hi unhone ek sath hamla Kiya KC ke Charo taraf ek adrish shield ban gayi jise wo dekh na sake is shield ki khasiyat ye thi agar koi KC pe hamla karne ki kosish kare to ye shild unhe Hawa me hi stachu ki position me Kar deti thi .aur kyunki in gundon ke hathyar us shild se takraye the is liye wo sab Hil bhi na sake .jab ye sab ho Raha tha to wo ladki aur uska chota Bhai bus aakhe phade bus ye sab dekh rahe the .tabhi aachank KC ne us ladki aur uske bhai ki taraf apna bayan hath ghumaya
jaise koi sise par dhul jama ho Jaye to log use safe karte waqt ghumate hai waise hi .iska asar ye hua ke (ladki aur uska chota Bhai)ke Charo taraf ek adrish diwar si ban gayi ab unhe us diwar ke par Yani KC ke tarf ka kuch bhi dikhayi ya sunayi nahi de Raha tha .ladki ke chote Bhai ne gabra ke aage badhne ki kosish ki par apni bahan se aage wo badh na saka. Idhar us diwar ke bante hi kc ne aankh band Kar ke DEATH kaha tabhi uske samne thodi rousni Hui aur samne ek portal khula aur us portal se ripper ke jaisa wepan liye hue ek bhayanak sakl Wala aadmi bahar nikla aur portal band hua .usne samne ki tarf dekha to KC khada tha . DEATH- kaho kaise yad Kiya dost AURTHER URF LORD COUNCIL.
(ab se KC ko AURTHER ki likhunga ).
Uske aisa kahne se gundon ki halat aisi ho gayi jaise Kato to khun nahi .g5 ne to toilet aur Susu to ek sath Kar Diya tha .
AURTHER ne kuch kaha nahi bus un gundon ki taraf isara Kar Diya .
DEATH- bhayanak hasi haste hue to ye hai wo namune .apne piche se blade nikal Kar un gundon ki tarf pheka aur ye kya blade un sabhi gundon ke bich se par ho Gaya aur un gundon ka sharir vanished ho Gaya .to hua ye ki jaise hi DEATH ne apna wepan pheka usne unki aatma ko unke sarir se alag Kar Diya aur kuch der pahle mare g6ki aatma ko bhi khichte hue ek sath bandh Diya . Ye sab itna jaldi hua ki kisi ko kuch samajh na aaya .ab wo gunde dark sole ka rup le chuke the .
Tabhi DEATH ne AURTHER se kaha aur kuch mere dost .
Is bar pahli bar AURTHER ke chehre par halki si muskan aai uske aise muskurane se death samajh Gaya aage Kya hone Wala hai .
AURTHER ne g5 ki sole ki taraf isara Kiya to uski sole samne aakar hawa me hi thahar gayi jabki Baki ki sole waise hi bandhi rahi .g5 to bus hairan paresha sa AURTHER ki taraf dekhe ja Raha tha tabhi AURTHER ne apne dahine hath ke pahli unli se g5 ke chest ko touch Kiya natija g5 kisi Bali hone wale bakre ke jaise chikh Raha tha aur uski dark sole ke bich se bohot tez roushni ho rahi thi aur fir sab khatm ek chota dhamaka hua aur ab waha par g5 ki sole nahi thi .
Ye hone ke bad AURTHER ne death ke liye portal khol Diya . death ne AURTHER ko dobara aane ka kah Kar un gundon ki sole ko le Kar us portal se gayab ho Gaya . AURTHER ne piche mud Kar dekha to us g6 ki body abhi bhi wahin padi Hui thi kyunki Baki gunde zinda the jab death ne apne blade pheka tha jabki g6 pahle hi mar Chuka tha Is liye Baki gundon ki body vanished ho gayi jabki g6ki na ho saki magar sab ki sole bandh gayi .to g6ki body wahin thi aur uska Dil thik us ladki aur uske bhai ke samne wo dono ab bhi dare hue the aur ab bhi bahar ka kuch dekh nahi pa rahe the ki aachanak wo Dil jalne laga aur rakh ho Gaya .piche mudte hi AURTHER ne chutki bajai aur ek sath do Kam hue g6ka sarir aur aur Dil pal bhar me jal Kar rakh me balal Gaye aur us ladki ke samne ki dewar bhi Hat gayi.
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