Ye Kanika hi to।pichle janam ki premika to nahi hai raaj kiUPDATE - 20
Sameer - toh abb aage kaya karna hai
Rizazi - abb hum kaya karenge joh karna thaa woh kar gaya
Dimgiha - abb waha toh puri zindagi rahega naa aayega hi na yaha tab usska esstemal karke jaayenge waha
Aman - phir hume uss saumya ke ghar pe nazar rakhate hai abb
Esske baad yeh log apni apni mehangi mehangi gaadiyo mai beth ke chale gaye
Udhar
Balveer - abb jakar sukoon mila hai mujhe khaas sumitra tum bhi hoti yaha pe apne bete ke liyee
Balveer abhi soch hi raha thaa ki deepti usske room mai aati hai
Deepti - dad
Balveer ussko uth ke gale laga ke - beti tuh thik toh hai naa
Deepti alag hokar - haa par dad yeh sab kaya hai
Balveer - beti yeh saba tumhari samajh sai bahr hai
Deepti - kyu dad
Balveer - kyuki beti tum keval insaan hi hoo yaha sab ke pass shaktiya par tumhare pass nahi kuch bhi ess liye yeh sab jana tumhare liye bhaut mushkil hai
Deepti - par kuch toh baatiye naa dad raj mujhe raj jaisa nahi lagata hai
Balveer ussko ek paper deta hai
Deepti - dad esske aage ka kaha gaya
Balveer - esske baad kaa likhane ke liye humare etihaskaar parlok sidhaae gaye the
Deepti - dad aap yaha akar kaisi baate kar rahe hai
Balveer - beti yehi humari asaliliyat hai khair tum caaho toh tumnai waise bhi baate kar sakate hai
Deepti - Yehi aacha hoga dad mujhe yeh purani jamnae ke baate samajh nahi aati
Balveer has ke thik hai thik hai
Deepti - dad raj jab sai woh jungle sai aaya hi tab sai woh azeeb saa badala hua lag raha hi
Balveer Chauk ke - kaya bola tumnai woh uss jungle mai gaya
Deepti - haa dad waha gaya thaa
Balveer mud ke ghum gaya - yeh aacha nahi hua beti
Deepti - kyu dad aisa kaya hai wha pe
Balveer - beti wahi pe toh raj nai apna dum thoda thaa yaha ke janam mai
Deepti - what kaya keh rahe ho dad
Balveer - haa beti woh pagal hume toh naa bacha paaya par apni shkati dekar ussnai Meera ko baacha liyaa
Deepti - aacha par uss jungle mai kuch aur bhi hai kaya keval yeh baat mujhe nahi lag rahi
Balveer - lagata tuh ussi ek din mai bhaut jaan chuki hai
Deepti - haa usska nature pal pal badalata rehata hai
Balveer - beti esske baare mai kuch abhi nahi janata par etna pata hai kuch adhura reh gaya thaa raj kaa phele
Deepti - aacha agar nahi pata toh abb mai usska pata laga lungi woh chiz aakhir hai kaya joh mere bhai ko pareshan kar rahi mai toh sahi sai uss sai bhen ki tarah mil nahi paayi aur ussko mere baare mai kuch yaad nahi hai
Balveer - aisa kuch nahi time do ussko sab yaad aa jaayega abb hume aur dhukh nahi denge humare aradhye mere karamo kaa fal sabako bhogana pad gaya
Deepti balveer ke aashu poch ke - aare dad aap bhi baacho jaise rote puri aapki hi thodi galati thi woh toh aapko bhramit kiya gaya jaha tak mujhe pata hai
Balveer - tujhe hamesha mers mai aachayi hi dhikhegi par mere kaam bhaut bure the woh sab
Deepti - chaliye chhodeyi yeh aur raj ko mom ke pads le jane kaa kuch kariyi mujhe lagata raj ko dekh ke mom thik ho jaayegi
Balveer kush hokar - haa haa sahi kaha tumnai abhi mai sabko bol ke usski tayari karawata hu
aur woh bahar chala jata hai aur deepti bhi waha sai chali jaati hai raj ko dhudhanai
Woh mehal mai jaa rahi hoti hai ki ussko waha kanika milati hai
Deepti usske pass jakar - kuch baat karani hai tumsai sunogi kaya kaya
Kanika - Haa boliye kaya hua didi
Deepti aur kanika room mai jaate hai
Kanika vapas - bolo naa didi kaya huaa
Kanika - tum raj ko janati ho kaya
Kanika - nahi aisa kuch nahi hai didi par mujhe pata nahi woh kuch jana pechana lagta hai
Deepti - kaise kuch bata Sakati ho
Kanika - yeh toh mujhe bhi naa pata didi
Deepti - par mujhe aisa kyu lag raha tum batana nahi caah rahi daro mat mai kuch nahi kehani waali tumhe
Kanika - nahi didi aisa kuch nahi agar kuch hota toh bata deti aapko
Deepti has - aacha chalo chhodo aur batao kaisa lag raha yaha pe
Kanika - mujhe toh yakeen nahi ho raha didi ki mai yaha hu sab kuch jadu jaisa lag raha thaa aur woh scene ekdum dar gayi mai jab raj upper hawa mai gaye aur meera ko nicche lekar aaye
Deepti - woh tumnai dekha thaa
Kanika - kaya matalab dekhaa thaa woh toh ekdum saaf saaf dhikh raha thaa didi
Fantasy KISMAT - EK KHEL
- Thread starterDev the lover
- Start date
- 128,737
- Status
- 33,267
- 21,959
- 259
As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section. Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits. And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC "Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world. Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time. And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.
To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread
To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread
To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread
To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread
| Position | Benifits |
|---|---|
| Winner | 1500 Rupees +  Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories) |
| 1st Runner-Up | 500 Rupees +  Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories) |
| 2nd Runner-UP | 5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership |
| Best Supporting Reader |  Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership |
| Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof | 200 Likes for each report |
Nishant_mumbai
New Member
- 83
- 86
- 19
Gif hai kahaayes you r right bro ...
i am sure its worth to read about the ramu family and their consiparacy
yes your question are right again but now no will have power beacuse time decided that fate that it they will have power then they forced for open the door of another worlds too so not only them but raj also and trikha they also don 't have any kind of power till now ..not sure for in future but now i have a question for you what you mean of that ocean of love ...
happy that in updates fun is on they way and now some attitude and another thing coming soon .....till now thanks
- 3,001
- 12,524
- 159
Hogi Par time lagega utna logo ko dark and non sex waali normal utana nahi pasand
Hame to pasand hai bahut hi jayada
- 3,001
- 12,524
- 159
Toh phir jaldi hi updates lataa ess par caahe chhote hi laaunga par laaunga abb agar koi padega toh update dunga hi bhai ....
- 3,001
- 12,524
- 159
- 134,021
- 110,593
- 354
Masoom logon ko Gumrah karna band karo.
- 3,001
- 12,524
- 159
Kaha gumrah kiya bhai maine Xforum sai gaya karni aur laane ki zimedaari tumhari aur woh masoom bhai puch raha toh maine bata diya maine toh daali thi gif sayad tumnai hi gayab kar di ...
- 134,021
- 110,593
- 354
Naah! Server waalon ne uda diya hoga ya ju add hi nahi kiye honge.Kaha gumrah kiya bhai maine Xforum sai gaya karni aur laane ki zimedaari tumhari aur woh masoom bhai puch raha toh maine bata diya maine toh daali thi gif sayad tumnai hi gayab kar di ...
- Status