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Romance Khwahishein (Completed)

Champ_AK_81

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Very nice update champ..

Ye dosti bhi ajeeb hoti hai... har wo kaamkra deti hai jo bande ke bas me bhi nhi hota aur har wo kaam jo usne kabhi socha bhi nhi hota...
Shayad dhruva ko kuch mil jaye Dr Vijay se...
Keep rocking...
Update bahut acha tha...agar kisi ko paaand nhi aata to wo comment na karte...
Waiting for the next update...
Thanks Sahil bhai for your support and such a nice review...Dosti ke baare me aapne bilkul sach kaha...Aur ye story bhi friendship aur love par hi based hai...Ummeed hai aapko aage bhi pasand aayega story...Aise hi saath bane rahiye bhai.
 

Champ_AK_81

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UPDATE 18

After 1 year (Flashback)

Kajal:- Aaj bhi late?

Aaj bhi Kajal ussi jheel me Ajith ka intejaar kar rahi thi.

Ajith:- Wo kya hai na...Aaj traffic me fas gaya tha.

Ajith ne daant dikhaate hue kaha.

Kajal:- Abhi bhi dhang se jhuth nahi bol paa rahe ho...Agli baar fir koshish karna.

Ajith:- Lagta hai Madam ji aap bahut naraaj hai.

Ajith ne manane ki tone me kaha.

Kajal:- Mai kyu houngi naraaj...Mere paas aisi faaltu cheej ke liye time nahi hai.

Ajith:- (Muskuraate hue) Wo to tumhaari aankhein aur aawaj saaf bata raha hai.

Kajal:- Accha...Bahut acche se padh lete ho meri aankhein aur aawaj ko.

Ajith:- (With smile and in very low voice) Wo to kaam hi hai mera.

Kajal:- Kya?

Ajith:- Kuch nahi.

Kajal:- Abb please tum aur mood kharab mat karo...Mai pehle se hi bahut upset hu.

Ajith:- (Seriously) Kyu? Kya hua?

Kajal:- Tum nahi jaante?

Ajith:- Nahi? Kya hua?

Kajal:- College me afwaah fail raha hai ki ham dono ek dusre se pyar karte hai...Ham dono couples hai.

Stupids...Dosti ko bhi pyar ke naam de dete hai...Aur inhe dusro ke baare me baatein karne se hi maja aate hai...Khud ke life kitna bhi ghatiya aur bure haalaath se kyu na gujar raha ho fir bhi unhe entertainment ke liye dusro ke baare me bakwaas gossip karna band nahi karenge.

Kajal ne bahut gusse me kaha.

Ajith kuch nahi bola...Abb uske chehre me dar ke kuch bhaaw dikh rahe the.

Kajal:- Mai itne gusse me hu aur tum chup ho.

Itna keh kar Kajal Ajith ki taraf dekhne lagi.

Kajal ki baat se Ajith ki dar aur badh gaya...1 saal me usse bhi lagne laga tha ki Kajal bhi usse pasand karti hai...Aur yahi baat khud se kleh kar wo khus ho jaata ki Kajal bhi usse pasand karne lagi hai.

Pyar ka izahaar kiye bina hi dono pyar ki panchhi jaise hi jee rahe thhe...Ek dusre ke saath ghumna, baatein aur hansi majaak karna, ek dusre ke liye fikar karna, ek dusre ka khayal rakhna, ek dusre ke liye ladna...Kabhi kabhi raat bhar ek dusre se baatein karna.

Bhale hi dono ke bich pyar ka izahaar nahi hua tha abhi tak...Lekin dono ko dekh kar koi bhi keh sakta tha ki dono dost se jyada hai...Aisa rishta ban gaya tha dono ke bich.


Abb achanak se Kajal ki pyar ki baare me aisi naarajgi aur gussa Ajith ko daraane ke liye kaafi tha.

Fir wohi puraana dar...Kya Kajal uska pyar ko apnaayegi? Abb yahi dar Ajith ke chehre me dikhne laga tha.

Kajal:- Aise chup kyu ho?

Ajith fir bhi kuch nahi bola.

Kajal:- Atleast unko kuch jawaab to de sakte ho...Mai kitna deti rahungi?

Lekin Ajith fir bhi chup raha.

Abb Kajal ko hairaani hone laga...Kuch kuch shak bhi hone laga.

Kajal:- Matlab tum...

Kajal isse aage nahi boli...Aur Ajith ko dekhne lagi.

Ajith:- Haa.

Isse aage Ajith bhi kuch nahi bola.

Dono ke bich abb khaamoshi chaa gayi...Kajal Ajith ko hi dekhti rahi...Shaayad Ajith ka kuch kehne ki intejaar me thhi.

Ajith kabhi kabhi Kajal ko dekhta lekin agle hi pal najar hata leta tha...Wo Kajal se aankhein mila bhi nahi paa raha tha aur dil me ek ajeeb sa dar sata raha tha.

Wo hi dar jo agar sach ho jaata to shaayad usse uski jindagi chheen sakta tha.

Abb fir usne bhagwaan ko yaad kiya...Aur dua me yahi maanga...Kaash uska jindagi ka sabse khubsurat taufa usse mil jaaye jiske saath wo saari jindagi jee sake.


Ek baar usne fir Kajal ki aankho me dekha...Abb usne tay kar liya.

Ajith:- (In his mind) Isse accha mauka nahi milega...Aaj mujhe apne dil ki haal bataana hi hoga...Dar dar kar hi to 1 saal gawa diya...Aur agar aaj bhi dar gaya to fir kabhi himmat nahi kar paaunga...Aakhir kab tak darta rahunga?

Waise bhi maine saccha pyar hi kiya hai...Koi gunaah nahi kiya...Agar mere pyar me sacchaai hai aur mai Kajal ki pyar ke laayak hu to wo mere pyar ko jarur apnaayegi.

Koshish jarur karunga apne pyar ki izahaar ki...Baaki mera kismat.


Ye sochne ke baad Ajith ne kuch der ke liye aankhein band kiya...Fir aankh khol kar Kajal ki aankho me dekha aur sacche dil se apne dil ki baatein bol hi diya.

Ajith:- Yes...I Love You.
 

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Thanks Samurai :dost: for your support and such a nice review...Glad to see you back in story and very happy to know you are liking story this much...Keep supporting like this.

Wapas wo ata hai jo kahi jata hai mai to hamesha romantic story ke aas paas hoti hoon bas mai thodi short tempered hoon aur apne jazbaaton par kabu nahi rakh pati hoon aur thodi time ke liye sabse door ho jati hoon isliye khud ko space de deti hoon and i must say champ you are a wonderful writer :rose:
 

Samurai

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Update 18

Kya kahun is update ke baare me , ye yo sab ke sath hota hai ,
Logo kj baaton se kajal pareshan hai , use logon ki bakwas baatein apne aur ajith ki dosti ke baare me nakabile bardaasht hai .aisa hk hota hai log doosron ke pachdo me bahot sir marte hain . Ajith ka thukraye jane wala darr wapas samne aa gaya .lekin sari baaton ka fsyeda ye hua ki Ajith ne saal bhar ke dar par jeet hasil kar li aur apne dkl ki baat kah di.

Ab kajal kya karegi:eek: superb update :rose:
 
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