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Ant mein teeno hi santusht hokar chupchap se andar gaye aur apani apani jagah par jakar so gaye…

Ab dekhte hai. Aane wali subah kya kya apane sath lane wali hai..

UPDATE 134

Subah sabse pahle maa ki aankh khuli to unhone dekha ki wo apani bahan ko baahon mein lapete so rahi hain aur dono ho bilkul nangi hain... Ye dekhkar maa ko raat hua sara najara yaad aa gaya, jise yaad karte hi maa ke chehre par ek muskan aa gayi... Unhone badi savadhani se aur bina zyada awaaj kiye mausi ko hilakar jagaya aur unke kaan mein kaha uth shalu aur jaldi se kapde pahan le.
Mausi ne aankhein kholi aur phir apana haal dekha to unhe bhi raat ki harkatein yaad aa gayi aur wo maa ko dekhkar ek baar sharma gayi to maa ne pyar se unki nangi peeth par hath phirate huye kaha: ab sharmana band kar aur kapde pahan le jaldi se..
Dono bahanon jaldi jaldi apane kapde pahanne lagi..kapde pahante huye mausi ki nazar ek jagah gayi aur wohin tik gayi...
Maa ne mausi ko yun ruka hua dekha to unki nazar ka peecha kia aur maa ke chehre par ek halki si muskaan aa gayi..
Darasal hua ye tha ki tai karma aur Anuj galiyare mein chudai karne ke baad aakar apane apane kapdon ko tatolkar pahan kar so gaye the par kyunki ladke sirf dhoti pahante the to abhi karma ki dhoti khuli hui thi aur uska lund bilkul seedha khada hokar salami de raha tha aur Mausi ki nazar usi par jami hui thi..

Maa ne jab apani bahan ko apane bete ke lund ko ghoorte dekha to unke badan mein thodi sansani fail gayi wohin mausi chahkar bhi nazarein nahi hata pa rahi thi... Anuj aur Jaggu chadar odhkar so rahe the to unke sath aisi koi samasya nahi thi...
Maa ne apani saree poori bandhane ke baad mausi ko dekha to mausi abhi BH waise hi khadi thi... Maa ne mausi ko thoda hilaya to mausi thoda hosh mein aai aur phir khud ko sambhalte huye saree lapetne lagi.. par ab bhi unki nazar rah rah kar karma ke khade lund par ja rahi thi...
Jise maa bhi baar baar mahsus kar rahi thi aur sach to ye bhi tha ki karma ke lund ko dekhkar maa ki choot mein thoda thoda geelapan aane laga tha ..
Mausi ne kisi tarah saree lapeti aur taiyar hui to maa unhe pakad kar bahar apane sath le gayi... Jate jate bhi mausi ne ek nazar karma ke lund par zaroor dali.. kareeb aadhe ghante baad hi Tai ki bhi neend tooti aur uth kar baith gayi...
Tai ne aas paas dekha to paya sabhya aur shalu nahi thi.. unhone socha wo shayad pahle uth kar bahar chali gayi hain... Tai bhi uth khadi hui aur unki nazar bhi karma ke tane huye lund par padi to unhen bhi raat ki santusht kar dene wali chudai yaad aa gayi... Abhi bhi meetha meetha sa dard tha badan mein, bilkul ghode paida kiye hain sabhya ne tai ye sochkar muskurane lagi.. halanki ek pal ko unka man Karma ke kadak lund ko dekhkar machla jaroor par kisi tarah unhone khud ko sambhala aur bahar chali gayi iske baad Sevikaon ke kai baar uthane par teeno ladke uthe aur subah ke teeno karya nipta kar sabke sath mile aur nashta hua...
Badi maa ne nashte par hi bataya ki thodi der baad hi doosri pratiyogita hogi KAUSHAL ki jise sunkar ek bar phir se sabke man chinta se bhar gaye...

Khair khana peena hua aur phir sab sath baith kar yojnayein banane lage ki kaise pratiyogita ko jeetna hai ab pareshani ye thi, ki ye bhi nahi pata tha ki kis kaushal ki pratiyogita hogi nahi to usi ke hisab se ummein se koi ek chunte kyunki koi na koi kisi na kisi kaushal mein acha tha...
Jaggu ko bunkari ka kafi sahi gyan tha, ghar par khat ho rassi ho chhappar banana ho wo bahut ache se banata tha, anuj kala premi tha, samne ke drishya ko kagaj par utarna use bahut pasand tha aur ache sw aata bhi tha, karma ko kheti ka gyan tha aur sangeet mein bhi kafi ruchi thi par samasya thi ki agar in teeno ke alawa kisi par pratiyogita hui to kya hoga.. kise chun kar bheja jaye kyunki pahle pratiyogi chuna jana tha uske baad pratiyogita ka pata chalna tha...
Humein kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha..
Kabhi kisi ke liye mat banta to kabhi kisi ke liye.. ant mein jab kisi ek ke naam par sab Raji nahi huye to anuj ne ek upay bataya aur bola ab kismat par chhod do..

Anuj- hum teeno ki parchi dalte hain jiska naam aayega wo pratiyogita ladega...
Khair parchi bani teeno ladkoka naam likha gaya aur uske baad ek parchi shalu Mausi ne apane hathon se kholi aur phir us par likha naam padh kar sabse pahle Karma ki or dekha to Karma samajh gaya ki is baat bhi use hi pratiyogita karni padegi.. karma ne bhi binq zyada soche maan lia aur phir thodi der baad hi Sevika bulane aa gayi to sab log pratiyogita ke liye pahunche ek khali baramde mein jahan sabke liye baithne ka prabandh tha aur beech mein khali jagah thi sab ke baithne ke baad Badi maa aur chitrawati aai aur apane unche se aasan par baith kar boli...
Badi maa: jaisa ki Ap sabhi jante hain ye pratiyogita kaushal ki hai.. pratiyogi ko ek kaushal mein apane pratidwandi ko harana hoga... Ek taraf se Kaaljung chunauti dega to aap logo ne kisko chuna hai?
Karma- main mukabla karunga.

Badi maa thoda muskurai : kafi bahadur ho jo ek baar haar kar bhi dobara bhidne ko taiyar ho.
(As Karma)
Maine socha ab inhe kya bolu inhe kya pata parchi nikal kar ye faisla kia hai to maine bas sir hiladiya aur sath hi badi maa ke bagal mein baithi chitrawati ko dekha humari nazarein mili to hum dono ke chehre par hi ek muskan fail gayi haay kitni pyari muskurahat thi uski aur wo sundar gahri aankhein...khair abhi nigahein milane ka samay nahi tha to maine khud ko kisi tarah se uske sundar chehre se alag kia...

Badi maa- kaushal ka chunav patra chayan se hoga..
Me- matlab??
Badi maa- abhi samajh aa jayega...
Badi maa ne ek ishara kia to ek sevika patli gardan wali ek surahi numa matke ko lekar aai..
Badi maa- is matke mein patte hain aur har ek patte par ek kaushal likha hua hai jaise chitrakala, sangeet etyadi to Rajkumari chitrawati ek patta nikalegi aur us patte par jo kaushal likha hoga usi ki pratiyogita hogi ..

Ye sunkar meri fat gayi... Ki bhencho ab aise to kaunsa patta nikal jaye kahin kuch aisa nikal gaya jo mujhe nahi aata hoga to kya hoga soch soch kar gand phatne lagi... Mere sath sabhi logo ka yahi haal tha... Maa mausi tai sab chinta mein the. Anuj aur Jaggu apana sir khuja rahe the..


Chitrawati- khadi hui aur usne us matke ki gardan mein hath ghusaya to mujhe laga ye hath gardan mein nahi meri gand mein ghus raha hai jo ki ab fatne wali hai...
Chitrawati ne kuch der hath andar rakha aur phir dheere se bahar nikala hath ke sath sath ek patta bhi nikala, wo patta dekh kar mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise ye meri maut ka farmaan hai..
Chitrawati ne patte ko khola aur phir use padha.. mujhe to har pal aisa lag raha tha ki ab kya hoga ab kya hoga... Dil dhak dhak kar seene se bahar aa raha tha..
Chitrawati ne patte ko padha aur phir sabse pahle nazar uthakar meri taraf dekha...

Main bilkul dar sa gaya ki na jane kya likha hai patte mein..
Chitrawati ne patte ko padhne ke baad Badi maa ki or kar diya jise badhi maa ne padha aur thoda hairan ho gayi...
Mujhse intezar nahi hua to maine khud hi pooch lia- patte mein kya likha hai badi maa..

Badi maa ne ek lambi saans li aur phir meri or dekh kar boli: Kavita...
Ye sunkar aur ye samajhkar ki iska matlab kya hai main to khushi se uchhal pada aur apane sath ke logo ki or khushi se dekhne laga sath hi mete sath ke sab logo ko bhi thodi khushi hui kyunki main humesha se hi kavita premi raha hun...uchhalte huye hi achanak mere man mein ek khayal aaya aur maine turant mud kar ek chehre ko dekha aur use dekhte hi main sab samajh gaya..
Wo chehra aur kisi ka nahi balki Chitrawati ka tha nazaron hi nazaron mein jaise hum ek doosre ke man ki baat samajh gaye.. usne halka sa palkein jhapkakar mere sawaal ka jawab dia...
Matke mein se kavita wale patte ka nikalna koi kismat nahi tha balki ye Chitrawati ne kiya tha...
Jahan hum khush the Kaaljung muh latkaye khada hua tha..use khud bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ye kaise ho gaya.. khair pratiyogita to honi hi thi to nadi maa ne hum dono ko beech mein aane ka ishara kia aur hum dono beech mein aakar khad ho gaye... Dono ko badi maa ne ek nasr dekha aur boli
Badi maa- muqabla shuru kiya jaye..

Me-
Pichle muqable tune meri chatni banai,
Par is baar hai barahari ki ladai,
Naam badal dena, jo chahe rakh dena..
Jo is baar tujhe jhool na chhatai.


Meri kavita sunte hi anuj aur baki sab chillakar tali bajane lage...
Kaaljung: ne meri or dekha aur phir kuch der shant raha aur phir uske muh se nikla... Pichla muqabala...


Main aur baki sab ye sunkar hairan rah gaye ki ye sala bolta bhi hai jabse hum yahan aaye the Aj pahli baar maine isko bolte juye dekhs tha...
Iske baad Kaaljung thodi xer chup raha aur phir na jane achanak kya hua wo mud kar chala gaya...
Hum sab behad khush ho gaye...
Badi maa thodi soch mein uthi pat phir muskura kar kaha ki ye pratiyogita Karma ne jeet li hai aur ab muqabla barabari par aa gaya hai agali pratiyogita akhiri hogj aur jo wo jeetega wo jeet jayega.
Dhanywaad
Iske baad badi maa chali gayi aur sath bhi chitrawati bhi par wo palat palat kar mujhe dekh rahi thi aur main use... Iske baad ghar wale daudkar aaye aur mujhe gale laga lia hum log khushi khushi andar chale gaye...


Bahut bahut dhanyawad kripya sath banaye rakhein
 

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