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Tabhi usi kamre mein ek doosra darwaza tha wo khulne laga aur tabhi jo kala daanav humein lekar aaya tha wo apane ghutno par baith gaya… waise to sala ghutno par baithkar bhi khada jaisa hi lag raha tha lamba hi itana tha,

Hum sabki nazar pahle daanav par gayi aur phir darwaze par aur phir dheere se darwaza khula…


UPDATE 123

Ye Sala kaun ho sakta hai jiske samne is kale Daanav ne bhi ghutne tek diye, matlab Jo aa raha hai wo isse bhi tagda hoga… acha fase Karma…

Itane suspense ke baad darwaza khula aur phir parde achanak se dono taraf phenke gaye aur usme se ek saya nikla Jab meri nazar us par gayi to main to bilkul chaunk gaya…

Sala socha pahaad nikli chuhiya… maine koi tagda admi socha tha par ye to Aurat nikali

Samne ek purane samay mein jaise kapde pahne Jate the waise kapde pahane huye ek Aurat thi jiski umar meri maa jitni hi lag rahi hogi.. par jis andaz se wo chalkar aai bilkul raniyon jaise.



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Hum sab log sawaal bhari nazaron se use dekh rahe the wo samne aakar jaise hi ruki mujhe kuch soojha aur maine use jhukkar pranam kia, aur mujhe dekhkar Baki sabne bhi use pranaam kia..

Wo Aise hi seedhi khadi rahkar hum sabke chehre par dekhti rahi aur phir kuch pal baad muskurai aur phir humare pranam ko sweekar kia aur phir ek pal ke maun ke baad boli- Ohhh mehmaan aaye hain… Putra Kaaljung koi takleef to nahi hui humare mehmano ko…

Usne Us kaale Daanav ko dekhte huye kaha jo apane ek ghutne ko jhukaye baitha hua tha.. bilkul daas ki tarah…

Main chaunk gaya ki ye ise putra kyun bol rahi hai kahin se kahin tak ye iska beta nahi lag raha.. sala kya scene hai samajh nahi aa raha. Aur is saale ka naam Kaaljung hai, lagta bhi sala kaal hi hai.

Kala Daanav urf Kaaljung waise hi sir jhukaye huye neeche dekhte huye hi bola- nahi Badi Mata.. koi takleef nahi hone di.

Aurat- bahut badhiya ab tum jao aur humare mehmano ke liye khane peene ka prabandh karo… Tab tak hum apane mehmano se ache se parichit ho jate hain.

Us aurat ne hum sabki taraf dekhte huye kaha.

Kaaljung uth kar chala gaya.

Aurat ne ek kadam humari taraf badhaya aur boli- to ab bataayein kaun hain aap log aur kis karanvash mujhe aapki uposthiti ka saubhagya prapt hua.




Maine man mein soch hi raha tha ye to kitni sabhyata aur prem se baat kar rahi hai hum bekar hi dar rahe the.maine gale ko saaf karte huye sabse parichay karaya aur sath hi apane aane ki wajah bhi batai Baba ke milne se lekar yahan tak sab kuch.

Wo meri baat sunkar thoda muskurai. Aur phir khush hote huye boli- bahut acha.. aur mujhe to bahut khushi hogi ki main kisi bhi tarah se aap logo ke kaam aa sakun…

Aur iske sath hi wo badh kar meri taraf aai aur phir mere sir par hath phiraya jaise Ashirvad de rahi ho, phir mere baad Jaggu aur Anuj ke sath bhi aisahi kia, uske baad Mausi ke paas gayi aur unhe to apane gale se laga lia aur boli- aapse milkar bahut khushi bahan.

Aur uske baad usne mausi ko chhod dia

Hum sab unki taraf hi dekh rahe the mausi ke chehre par thode se pareshani bhare bhaw the usse gale milne ke baad.

Uske baad usne Tai ko gale se lagaya jab unhe chhoda to Tai thoda jhijhak si rahi thi.. aur ant mein maa ke sath bhi waisa hi kia jab maa ko chhoda to maa bhi thodi soch mein dikhi…

Mujhe bhi kuch samajh nahi aaya ki aisa kyun hai… jab sabse mil li to boli.

Aurat- are main bhi kitni bhulakkad hun aap sab se to mil li par apana parichay to diya hi nahi..

Main Brandmati hun, KALAK gaon ki mukhiya aur. Yahan sab log mujhe prem se badi maa kahkar pukarte hain….

Hum sab uski itani aadar satkar bhari Baatein sunkar thoda sa chain mein aa gsye the aur man mein jo dar tha kam ho gaya… humne socha hum befizool mein hi dar rahe the ye to itani achi hain…

Aurat- are aap sab baithiye na khade kyun hain…

Hum sab unhi mujre wale gaddon par baith gaye sath hi wo bhi ek oonche se gadde par baith gayi… bilkul raniyon jaisa andaaz tha uska…

Khair baithne ke baad samajh nahi aa raha tha kya baat karein to mere man mein prashn aaya maine socha ye hi pooch lete hain.




Me- badi maa kya main kuch pooch sakta hun agar aapki aagya ho to?

Brandmati( Badi Maa)- bilkul putra nisankoch Poocho..

Me- badi maa is gaon ka naam thoda alag nahi hai Kalak, iska kya matlab hai ya iske peeche koi kahani hai…

Badi maa ne meri taraf ek baar dekha aur phir upar dekhkar kuch yaad karne lagi.

Badi maa- acha prashn hai putra. Iske peeche ek lambi kahani hai.

Me- agar apki agya ho to kya hum jaan sakte hain.

Badi maa- abhi se kareeb 400 varsh pahle, yahan se 20 meel door ek chota sa rajya hua karta tha, Kushalpur, jisme kareeb 60-70 gaon aate the aas paas ke, chhota magar behad sukhi aur shramsadhya rajya tha, logo ke paas kisi cheez ki kami nahi thi.

Kushal Pur ke raja the Kushal Singh jinhone is rajya ki sthapana ki thi. Sab bahut khushi khushi rahte the Raja praja ka poora khayal rakhte the..

Parantu Raja Kushal Singh ke jeewan mein bhi ek pareshani thi ek khali pan tha aur wo thi Santaan ki kami, unhone aur unki patni ne bahut se prayatn kiye par santan prapti na ho saki…

Unki patni Rani Lokmati khud ko is kami ke liye kosti rahti, akele mein kudti rahti halanki Raja Kushal Singh ne unse aisa kabhi kuch nahi kaha…

Unhi dino mein Rani Lokmati ko apani daasiyon se kuch tantrikon ke bare mein pata chala jo ki unki madad kar sakte the.

Rani Lokmati ne unse milne ki ichha jatai aur daasi se un tantrik ko bulane ke liye kaha..

Rani ki agya pakar dasi ne tantrikon ko bulawa bhej diya aur teen din baad hi teen tantrikon Unke mahal mein aaye Raja ko is bare mein abhi tak kuch nahi pata tha.

Khair teeno tantrik Rani se mile Rani ne unhe apani vyatha sunai jise sunkar Teeno tantrikon ne kuch aapas mein baat karke Rani ko ek upay bataya jisme unhe kuch kali shaktiyon ko prasann Ki hoga uske baad unki ichha poori ho jayegi parantu ye karya itana asaan nahi hoga iske liye bahut si sharton ko manna padega..

Rani jo santan sukh ke liye pyasi thi wo bina kuch sune hi maan gayi.

Tantrikon ne bataya ki Rani ko paas hi ke jungle mein akele rahkar 13 mahine tak unki batai vidhi anusar.. kali shaktiyon ko prasann karna hoga uske baad hi unki ichja prapti hogi..

Rani ne ye baat Raja Kushal Singh ko batai par kushal Singh ko rani ki chinta thi to unhone rani se mana kar dia. Rani zidd karne lagi to raja ne kaha ki jungle meim akele unhe kaise rahne de sakte hain. Lalh khatre hote hain wahan kahin kuch ho gaya to.

Par Rani to Santan sukh mein andhi ho chuki thi wo zidd par ad gayi.

Par Raja ne bhi saaf mana kar diya ye kahte huye ki wo ye jokhim nahi utha sakta santan chah mein wo patni Ko nahi khona chahte the aur ye baat unhone Rani se bhi saaf saaf kahdi..




Par Santan chah mein andhi ho chuki Rani ko santan ke alawa aur kuch nahi dikh Raha tha, raja ke mana karne ke baad bhi Rani ne zidd nahi chhodi aur Gussa hokar baith gayi… par Raja phir bhi nahi mane to Rani ne zidd karte huye Annn Jal Tyag Diya…

Aur bhookhi rahne lagi Kushal Singh ne kafi manane ki koshish ki baki ke parivar walon ne bhi bahut agrah kia par Rani Lokmati nahi maani.. ant mein jakar Raja ko haarkar Lokmati ko anumati deni padi…

Aur Rani phir Tantrik ke bataye anusar jungle mein kali shaktiyon ki pooja karne ke liye chali gayi… Wo bhi aise gupt sthan par jiska pata na Raja ko tha aur na hi kisi aur ko.

Khair Rani Lokmati Jungle mein chali gayi aur Raja unke intezar mein rahne lage.. 13 mahine baad Rani lauti Raja ne badi utsukta aur dhoom dhaam se unka swagat kia…par Kushal Singh ne jab Rani ko 13 mahine baad dekha to bilkul hairan se rah gaye wo Bilkul hi badal gayi thi… Raja ko laga tha jungl ki zindagi mein wo kamzor aur badsurat lagne lagi hongi par yahan to uske ulat tha Lokmati pahle se bhi zyada sundar lagme lagi thi. Bahut badli badli si Nazar aa rahi thi rani Lokmati, Chehra khila hua shareer bhara hua aankhon mein ek alag si chamak.aisa lag raha tha Lokmati ki to kaya hi palat ho gayi hai…

Poore rajya mein bhayva swagat samaroh huye.

Rani bapis apane mahal aur Kushal Singh ke paas lauti, kuch din baad dincharya sadharan hui, aur 9 mahine baad mahal mein kilkari goonji jisse poore rajya mein khushi ki lahar daud gayi.

Kushal Singh ke yahan chand si sundar putri ne janm lia… jiske mukh ko dekhkar hi Raja apane sare dukh bhool gaye itani sundar kanya shayad hi kisi ne dekhi thi.

Raja ne Bade bade vidwan panditon ko bulaya par sab kuch dekhne ke baad bhi koi bhi pandit vidwan kanya ke bare mein kuch nahi bata paya. Sath hi dekhkar bapis bhi laut gaye. Ye kahkar ki ye kaali shakti ki upaj hai hum iska kuch nahi kar sakte.

Khair raja rani thode udaas to huye par Rani aur aaspas ke parijanon ke samjhane par Kanya ka naam rakha gaya Kanya Leela Kunwari khair isi ke sath khushi khushi Raja Rani kanya ki dekhbhal karne lage aur Kanya Leela Kunwari badi hone lagi..

Par jab Leela Kunwari 13 varsh ki hui to Achanak se Rani Lokmati mahal se gayab ho gayi. Raja ne khoob dhoondhne ki koshish ki par Rani ka koi ata pata nahi chala… Leela Kunwari aur Raja bahut dukhi huye par ek doosre ka sahara bankar wo samay vyatit karne lage.

Leela ke 18 varsh ke hone par Raja ne bhent ke roop mein Leela ke liye ek gaon ka nirman karwaya jiska naam kanya Leela pur rakha gaya… jise dekhkar leela ko bahut khushi hui kyunki wo 18 varsh ki ho chuki thi to Leela ke liye bahut se rishte aane lage… aas paas ke Raja aur zameendaron ke beton ki to jaise pankti lag gayi… aur inme se hi kisi ek ko Leela ne pasand kia aur uske sath vivah karke chali gayi.

Raja Kushal Singh bhi apani zimmedari nibhakar behad khush huye aur apana sab kuch Leela ke naam kar diya… aur sant ban gaye.

Wohin Leela apane sasural jakar aur apane pati ka pyar pakar khush thi par dheere dheere din beette gaye Leela ke pati ka pyar kam hota gaya.

Leela ne apane pati ko khush karne ke liye apane pita ki or se mili sari sampatti apane pati ke naam kar di.. jisse uska pati kuch din to khush raha par phir se wo uske sath berukhi se pesh aane laga. Isi dauran Leela ne ek sundar putra ko janm diya.. Pati ki berukhi ko bhulakar Leela ne apana dhyan apane putra ki dekhbhal mein laga lia aur usi ko apana jeewan samajh kar vyateet karne lagi.




Par jab uska Putra 3 varsh ka hua to uske sath ek badi asahaniya ghatna ghatit hui, uske pita saman sasur ne uske sath jabardasti sambhandh banane ki koshish ki, Leela ne kisi tarah se khud ko bachakar ye baat apane pati ko batai to apane pita ko rokne ki wajaye uske pati ne Pita ka sath dia aur jab Leela ne iska virodh kia to unhone uske putra ko marne ki dhamki di aur majboor hokar Leela ko unki shart ko manna pada aur apani deh apane sasur ko saunpani padi.

Use ek kaksh mein band karke rakha jata jahan jab kabhi uske sasur ka ya pati ka man karta uske sath sambhandh banate, uske shareer ko nochte masalte… aur had to tab ho gayi jab wo log apane sath sath anya logo ke samne bhi Leela ko parosne lage.

Leela ek din mauka dekh kar kisi tarah se apane putra ke sath wahan se bhag nikali par bhagne mein wo buri tarah se ghayal ho gayi… par kisi tarah se jaan bachakar wo apane bachhe ko seene se chipkaye hue wahan se door nikal gayi aur ek jagah par jakar thak kar gir gayi… uska bachha wahan pada pada ro raha tha par uski aankhein kamzori se band hoti ja rahi thi..

Akhiri mein uski band hoti aankhon mein ek dhundhla sa saya dikha aur phir wo behosh ho gayi..

Jab Leela ko hosh aaya to wo apane bachhe ko pukarte huye cheekhkar uthi.. usne uth kar aas paas dekha to wo ek kutiya mein thi. Jahan thodi der baad hi ek aurat aai jise dekhkar Leela ko ek aur jhatka laga. Wo aurat aur koi nahi balki uski achank gayab hui maa Lokmati thi. Apani maa ko dekhkar Leela kai bhawon mein doob gayi aur subak subak kar apani maa ke gale se lage huye rone lagi. Phir Leela ne apani maa ko apani aap beeti banai jise sunkar uski maa aag babula ho gayi. Aur Leela ke pati aur sasur se badla lene ki sochne lagi. Par leela ne samjhaya ki wo log bahut takat war hain hum unka kuch nahi bigad sakte.

Is baat par Lokmati muskurai aur apani bachhi ko gale lagate huye boli ki putri ab unhe hum apani taakat dikhayenge… aur iske baad Lokmati ne kuch tantriko ke sath milkar Leela ko kaali shaktiyon ke bare mein sikhaya, aur kuch Hi samay mein Leela apani maa se bhi achi tarah shaktiyon ka istemal seekh gayi…




Phir dono maa beti ne milkar Leela ke pati aur sasur se pratishodh lia apani shaktiyon ke prayog se, dheere dheere unka parivar barbad hone laga ek ke baad ek maut hone lagi aur ant mein poore parivar ka naamo nishan mit gaya.

Tab jakar Leela ke man ko shanti mili phir leela ne apani maa ki madad se usi Gaon mein jo uske pita ne uske liye banaya tha usme ek mahal banaya aur sath hi kuch shaktiyon se usko gher diya jisse koi bahri khatra uske andar na aa sake. Aur leela apane putra aur apani maa ke sath jeewan vyateet karne lagi par sath mein hi wo aisi auraton ko bhi dhoondh kar late rahe jinke sath kuch anyay hua ho aur use gaon mein jagah de dete par gaon mein rahne ki ek shart thi ki gaon mein kisi bhi shadishuda mard ya yu kahien ki Pita ka jana Nished tha. Sirf auratein putra aur putri hi rah sakte the yadi koi putra bada hokar shadi karna chahta to use humesha ke liye hi gaon chhodkar jana padta.. to unhi Leela ke naam par ye gaon hai Kalak yani Kanya Leela Kunwari, aur main unhi ki vansaj hun…. Aur unke dwara banaye huye is gaon ko aage badha rahi hun. Leela Kunwari Kali shaktiyon ki us samay ki sabse gyani tantriko mein se ek bani aur unhone kai asadharan vastuon ka nirman kia jinme alaukik shaktiyan hoti hain. Aur hum sab unhi ki chalai hui pratha ko aage badha rahe hain.

Badi maa- to ye hai is gaon ka poora itihaas.

Hum sab log unki kahani ko sunkar hatprabh the aur ek doosre ko dekh rahe the…

Me- badi maa agar yahan koi byah hi nahi karta aur jo karta hai use gaon chhodna padta hai to ek ke baad doosri peedi kaise aai.?

Badi maa meri baat sunkar muskurai.

Badi maa- chanchal man, adheer man sab jaanne ko utsuk man, bada hi chanchal man hai re tera… acha hai par thoda thaher, saans le, samay ke paas har sawal ka jawab hai, har tale ki kunji hai… jo main na bataun wo samay batadega.

Mujhe kuch baat samajh aa gayi wohin maa ne bhi mujhe aankhein dikhakar chup rahne ka ishara diya..

Hum baithe hi the ki tabhi parde ek baar aur hate aur ek aur saya andar aaya jab uspar nazar gayi to aankhein khuli ki khuli hi rah gayi…aur gala sookh gaya…

Samne ek ladki khadi thi, aur ladki thi ya pari samajh nahi aa raha tha itani khoobsurat, haaye shayad khoobsurat shabd bhi uske liye bahut chhota pad jayegA, aisa khoobsurat sundar chehra maine pahle nahi dekha tha aisa roop. Jise dekhkar swarg ki apsarayein sharma jayein…


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Doodh sa gora rang, kaanch jaisa badan… uski veshbhusha se koi rajkumari hi lag rahi thi..…

Sirf main hi nahi baki sab log bhi uski sundarta ko dekhkar hairan the sath hi usko ajeeb nazaron se ghoore ja raha tha.






Iske aage kya hua agali Update mein please comments karke zaroor bataayein kaisi lagi Update.
 

TharkiPo

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Suspence me daal diya bhai apne aage kya - kya hoga......
Next update jaldi dena brother......

Awesome update

Zabardast update diya bhai....maza aagaya.....ab aage kya ho ga is ka intzar he....

Whattaa ! turnaround 🤩
eagerly waiting for next one...


Nice post👌👌👌

Jabardast update diya hai aapne.Kalak pahuch gaya teeno jodi. Ab to pura thrilling part ayega lagta hai

very nice update, please continue

Extraordinary update

Bhai, update kaa intezaar hain..hope woh jaldi hi aayega...
Aur haan..."hum sab saath bane hain" aapke saath... isiliye sab updates ke baare mein request karte hain :D :D

Update please.....
Lauda bekarar h.....



update please

On a lighter note, kahin "VicKat' ki shaadi mein to nahi gaye naa? ;) :D

Nice update. Aapne ek update me kisi dusre parivar ki v story dikhaye the. Uska kya hua. Waiting for next update

Bhai RIMJHIM kiya hua kuch pata nahi hai...

Superb update

Update sir g

Bhai chiite maar do hum pyase logon pe update deke....


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Bhaiya ye update acha tha par thoda disappointing Raha itne dino baad update aur sukha sukha rakh diya aur phir suspense pe chod diya please agle kuch updates thode jaldi Dene ki koshish kare. Please 🙏
 
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