Incest Kasoor

[Ayush2017]

Index

Update 1	Update 2	Update 3	Update 4	Update 5	Update 6	Update 7	Update 8	Update 9	Update 10
Update 11	Update 12	Update 13	update 14	update 15	update 16	update 17	update 18	update 19	update 20
Update 21	Update 22	Update 23	Update 24	Update 25	Update 26	Update 27	Update 28	Update 29	Update 30
Update 31	update 32	update 33	update 34	Update 35	update 36	update 37	update 38	update 39	update 40
Update 41	Update 42	Update 43	Update 44	Update 45	Update 46	Update 47	Update 48	Update 49	Update 50
Update 51	update 52	update 53	update 54	update 55	update 56	update 57	update 58	update 59	update 60
Update 61	Update 62	Update 63	Update 64	Update 65	Update 66	Update 67	Update 68	Update 69	Update 70
Update 71	Update 72	Update 73	Update 74	Update 75	Update 76	Update 77	Update 78	Update 79	Update 80
Update 81	Update 82	Update 83	Update 84	Update 85	Update 86	Update 87	Update 88	Update 89	Update 90
Update 91	Update 92	Update 93	Update 94	Update 95	Update 96	Update 97	Update 98	Update 99	Update 100

Index 2

Update 101	update 102	update 102 conti	update 103	update 104	update 105	update 106	update 107	update 108	Update 109 110
Update 111	update 112 A	update 113	update 114	update 115	update 116	update 117	Update 118	Update 119	update 120
Update 121	Update 122	Update 123	Update 124	Update 125	Update 126	Update 127	Update 128	Update 129	Update 130
Update 131	Update 132	Update 133	Update 134	Update 135	Update 136	Update 137	Update 138	Update 139	Update 140
Update 141	Update 142	Update 143	Update 144	Update 145	Update 146	Update 147	Update 148	Update 149	Update 150
Update 151	Update 152	Update 153	Update 154	Update 155	Update 156	Update 157	Update 158	Update 159	Update 160
Update 161	Update 162	Update 163	Update 164	Update 165	Update 166	Update 167	Update 168	Update 169	Update 170
Update 171	Update 172	Update 173

 

[Kingfisher]

Yeh paden Update 124 main manju ke pati ne kya kaha guse main phir update 146 main manju ke pati ne kya kaha...aapko pata chal jayega yeh badi mistake hay ya choti....hum sabhi kahani ko badi dhayan se padte isi liyea hame sab yaad rahta hay or yehi karan hay hame galtiya milne ka ab kash ham bhe aaplogon ki tarha bas masti ke liyea pard ke bhool jaye, par kya karen yeh hamare DNA main hay jab hum koi kahani parte hay toh hum khud ba khud usko mehsoos karne se rook nahi pate hay or isi liyea kahani hame kisi jayse ki koi movie dhek rahe or jab koi galti ati hay toh halat waise hi hoyi hay jayse koi DVD phas gayi ho chalte hoe...kya aap 2 nav par ek saath savari kar sakte hay? aap hamara matlab samaj gaye hoge yeh uska javab hay jo aapne kaha hay writer sahab ke liyea.

Sadhu baba ji apke khe anusar humne fir se Update pde par yar muje galti nhi dikhi
Vaise apka DNA hai badiya vaise achi bat hai ki aap story ko dyan se padte hai
Or padna bhi chahiye me bhi apki trah ab dhan se padunga

 

[Sadhu baba]

Bhai main ne dono update pade aur mujhe sirf ek hi baat samjh aayi ki jahan 124 mein Tarun awesh mein aa kar sachai ko Kabul kar liya wahi ye baat jaan kar manju ko dukh hua ki jisko wo pyar karti thi wo sirf paiso ki ke liye use pyar karta tha.

Wahi 148 mein Tarun ne phir se Nakul ke khilaf baat kahi par shant ho kar. Taki wah Nakul wahan se hata sake.

Ek patni apne pati ko hamesha maaf kar deti hai, chahe wo kitna hi galat kyo na ho. Manju bhi unhin mein se hai. Tarun manju ko sirf paiso ke liye pyar kiya. Par aaj tak usne manju ko koi taklif nahi di. Jahan tak usase pyar hi kiya hai.

Haan to sadhu Baba ji aap mujhe batayege ki mari yahan par kya galti hai.


Aapse anurodh hai ki aapne jo galti dekha hai use likhe jarur bataye. Taki main thik kar saku. Ek writer kabhi apni galti ehsaas nahi hota jab tak aap use sahi ne aa bataye

Agar aap use hi padhne ke liye kahege to use kabhi bhi pata nahi chalega. Koi usne wo baat likhi writer ke taur par thik hi likha hoga

Is liye aap use vistrit taur par likhege

First am thankful to you that you spend your precious time to look my concern and doubts.

Hmmm well pahli baat har insan ki apni alag soch hoti hay....aapne apni soch bata di, ab hum apni soch batate hay or phir dono update main kya antar hay phir woh batayege.

Yeh sirf kise kahani nahi balke asal duniya par bhi lagu hota hay....So hamare soch ke hisab se kaunse kitab main likha hay ki pati kitna bhi bura ho yaha tak ki kisi ka jeevan cheen le or patni us katil pati ko maaf karde matlab toh yeh hua ki agar woh pati apni patni ke maa baap ko maar de tab bhi patni use maaf kar degi isliyeh kyunki woh sirf uska pati hay, matlab pati ki toh mauj hay bhai chahe woh kisi ko bhi mare patni toh use maaf karhe degi....or hamare hisab se kisi ka jeeva lena is dharti ka sabse bada paap kay, aysa kyun? Kabhi socha hay hum insan kisi ka jeevan toh badi asani se chutki baja ke cheen lete hay par kabhi kisi mare hue shareer main jeeva kyun nahi daal sakte? Jeeva ka koi mol nahi koi isko kisi bhe mulya main kahreed nahi sakta or nahi koi bechega apna jeevan Jara kisi se sauda karke dekiyea, kahiyega use ki aap usko ye sari duniya de denge bas woh apni jindagi khatam karle....

Ab ate hay dono update par toh pahle update 124 main manju ka pati guse main sabko bata deta hay ki nakul mar cuhka hay jo uski bahen ka beta matlab uska bhe beta hua or usne khud mara hay or uske baad jo expression or bartav jo haav bhav hona chahiye woh yaha bilkul sahi hay ....phir woh jo doosra update hay 146 waha jo expression hay manju ka woh bilkul ulat hay woh kya hay? Pahli baat manju ka pati allready swikar kar chuka tha pahle us update main or is update main woh usko sire se nakar raha, jayse ki usne pahle wali baat kabhi kahi he nahi or manju ko nahi pata ki usne nakul ko mara diya hay...balke yaha toh aysa lag raha ki woh yeh baat aaj pahli baar manju ko bata rha usse pahle aysi koi baat he nahi hue.....dosri baat bhe same he hay ki manju ka expression uska haav bhav ki jayse use kuch pata he nahi tha woh jo ab sun rahi hay woh pahli baar matlab kisi ne manju ki yadast mita diya jaha Tarun yeh kahta hay ki usne nakul ko mara diya hay.....matlab manju ke liyea ab jo Tarun kah raha woh pahli baar kah raha or jo pahle Tarun na kaha woh sab kabhi hua he nahi a uske yaddast main tha he nahi...

 

[Sadhu baba]

Hahaha thank you

Sadhu baba ji apke khe anusar humne fir se Update pde par yar muje galti nhi dikhi
Vaise apka DNA hai badiya vaise achi bat hai ki aap story ko dyan se padte hai
Or padna bhi chahiye me bhi apki trah ab dhan se padunga

Hahaha thankyou, well humne aapka reply writer ji ke reply main dediya hay toh kripa usko dheklen

 

[Ayush2017]

Hahaha thank you

Hahaha thankyou, well humne aapka reply writer ji ke reply main dediya hay toh kripa usko dheklen

First am thankful to you that you spend your precious time to look my concern and doubts.

Hmmm well pahli baat har insan ki apni alag soch hoti hay....aapne apni soch bata di, ab hum apni soch batate hay or phir dono update main kya antar hay phir woh batayege.

Yeh sirf kise kahani nahi balke asal duniya par bhi lagu hota hay....So hamare soch ke hisab se kaunse kitab main likha hay ki pati kitna bhi bura ho yaha tak ki kisi ka jeevan cheen le or patni us katil pati ko maaf karde matlab toh yeh hua ki agar woh pati apni patni ke maa baap ko maar de tab bhi patni use maaf kar degi isliyeh kyunki woh sirf uska pati hay, matlab pati ki toh mauj hay bhai chahe woh kisi ko bhi mare patni toh use maaf karhe degi....or hamare hisab se kisi ka jeeva lena is dharti ka sabse bada paap kay, aysa kyun? Kabhi socha hay hum insan kisi ka jeevan toh badi asani se chutki baja ke cheen lete hay par kabhi kisi mare hue shareer main jeeva kyun nahi daal sakte? Jeeva ka koi mol nahi koi isko kisi bhe mulya main kahreed nahi sakta or nahi koi bechega apna jeevan Jara kisi se sauda karke dekiyea, kahiyega use ki aap usko ye sari duniya de denge bas woh apni jindagi khatam karle....

Ab ate hay dono update par toh pahle update 124 main manju ka pati guse main sabko bata deta hay ki nakul mar cuhka hay jo uski bahen ka beta matlab uska bhe beta hua or usne khud mara hay or uske baad jo expression or bartav jo haav bhav hona chahiye woh yaha bilkul sahi hay ....phir woh jo doosra update hay 146 waha jo expression hay manju ka woh bilkul ulat hay woh kya hay? Pahli baat manju ka pati allready swikar kar chuka tha pahle us update main or is update main woh usko sire se nakar raha, jayse ki usne pahle wali baat kabhi kahi he nahi or manju ko nahi pata ki usne nakul ko mara diya hay...balke yaha toh aysa lag raha ki woh yeh baat aaj pahli baar manju ko bata rha usse pahle aysi koi baat he nahi hue.....dosri baat bhe same he hay ki manju ka expression uska haav bhav ki jayse use kuch pata he nahi tha woh jo ab sun rahi hay woh pahli baar matlab kisi ne manju ki yadast mita diya jaha Tarun yeh kahta hay ki usne nakul ko mara diya hay.....matlab manju ke liyea ab jo Tarun kah raha woh pahli baar kah raha or jo pahle Tarun na kaha woh sab kabhi hua he nahi a uske yaddast main tha he nahi...

Aap bilkul sahi ho bhai. Main itni badi galti kaise kar sakta hu.

Shayad ye galti is liye ho gayi hogi kyoki ek sath teen story update likhne laga tha.

Thanks bro

Aise hi meri baki ke story ko clean kijiye taki mujhe aage aaj kar koi dikkat na ho. Aise ab kasoor ke sath aa raha hai.

 

[Sadhu baba]

Aap bilkul sahi ho bhai. Main itni badi galti kaise kar sakta hu.

Shayad ye galti is liye ho gayi hogi kyoki ek sath teen story update likhne laga tha.

Thanks bro

Aise hi meri baki ke story ko clean kijiye taki mujhe aage aaj kar koi dikkat na ho. Aise ab kasoor ke sath aa raha hai.

Hmmmm well hame nahi pata ki aap doosri bhi kahani likh rahe hay....waise agar aapko sahi lage toh koshish karen ki kisi ek kahani par pahle focus karen... iska reason hay, bhai aapke pass dimag toh ek he hay na jisko aap alag alag disha main divided kar rakha hay, matlab aap kisi bhi kahani ko apna 100% nahi de pa rahe or yehi karan hay jo galtiyan ho rahi kahani main....hum Dave ke saath kah sakte hay ki agar aapse kasoor kahani ka koi beech ka scene pooch le toh aapko shayed he yaad hoga, ismain aapki galti nahi yeh hona swabhavik hay jab dimag kai directions main bata ho....ab hum sab computer toh hay nahi ki ek saath kai kaam karen balke computer bhe ek waqt ata hay ki atakne lagta hay jisko hum hang hona kahte hay jab uspar load pardne lagta hay....lakin sari galti sirf writer ki hay yeh kahna sara set galat hoga, sabse jayda galti jo hay woh hay readers ki, kyun?bhai writer khud apna dimag kharch kar itni mehnat karta hay sochne main plot banane main har scene ko ek dosre se jodne main toh lajmi hay ki galti ho....yeh toh bade bade film director tak se hota hay tabhi toh kai ghanto laga ke movie release hone se pahle chek karte hay uske baad bhi galtiyan rah he Jatin hay .....wo sari galtiya darshak nikalte hay, YouTube par aapko video mil jayengi....readers ek dost ek sahayek ek teacher ki tarha hay writers ke liyea jo apne sujhav or writers ki galtion ko batata hay taki writer ek achi kahani lik sake....writer ko idea apne surrounding or logon or doston se he milta hay koi asman se idea nahi ate,par yaha humne bahut note kiya ki readers jayda serious hoke kahani nahi padte, uska bhe karan hay.... Actually free ki cheejon ki log kadr nahi karte, wohi yaha hay free ki kanahi mil rahi hay toh kyun apna dimag lagayen(masti kane aye hay karke chale jayenge) kyun batayen writer ko bhai aapne yaha galti ki ya phir yaha ayse se aysa hona chahiye, yeh theek hay ki writer ki apni khud ki bhe soch hoti hay usko pata hota hay ki usko kahani main age kya mod or kaise karna hay,agar paise dene pare toh dhekna har choti baat par kahne lagenge kyun? Kyunki tab unke paise lage hote unko apne paise ki keemat ka ahsas hota.....jab writer itni mehnat kar raha toh readers ko bhi toh tora mehnat or writer ki madad karni chahiye.

 

[Kingfisher]

Hmmmm well hame nahi pata ki aap doosri bhi kahani likh rahe hay....waise agar aapko sahi lage toh koshish karen ki kisi ek kahani par pahle focus karen... iska reason hay, bhai aapke pass dimag toh ek he hay na jisko aap alag alag disha main divided kar rakha hay, matlab aap kisi bhi kahani ko apna 100% nahi de pa rahe or yehi karan hay jo galtiyan ho rahi kahani main....hum Dave ke saath kah sakte hay ki agar aapse kasoor kahani ka koi beech ka scene pooch le toh aapko shayed he yaad hoga, ismain aapki galti nahi yeh hona swabhavik hay jab dimag kai directions main bata ho....ab hum sab computer toh hay nahi ki ek saath kai kaam karen balke computer bhe ek waqt ata hay ki atakne lagta hay jisko hum hang hona kahte hay jab uspar load pardne lagta hay....lakin sari galti sirf writer ki hay yeh kahna sara set galat hoga, sabse jayda galti jo hay woh hay readers ki, kyun?bhai writer khud apna dimag kharch kar itni mehnat karta hay sochne main plot banane main har scene ko ek dosre se jodne main toh lajmi hay ki galti ho....yeh toh bade bade film director tak se hota hay tabhi toh kai ghanto laga ke movie release hone se pahle chek karte hay uske baad bhi galtiyan rah he Jatin hay .....wo sari galtiya darshak nikalte hay, YouTube par aapko video mil jayengi....readers ek dost ek sahayek ek teacher ki tarha hay writers ke liyea jo apne sujhav or writers ki galtion ko batata hay taki writer ek achi kahani lik sake....writer ko idea apne surrounding or logon or doston se he milta hay koi asman se idea nahi ate,par yaha humne bahut note kiya ki readers jayda serious hoke kahani nahi padte, uska bhe karan hay.... Actually free ki cheejon ki log kadr nahi karte, wohi yaha hay free ki kanahi mil rahi hay toh kyun apna dimag lagayen(masti kane aye hay karke chale jayenge) kyun batayen writer ko bhai aapne yaha galti ki ya phir yaha ayse se aysa hona chahiye, yeh theek hay ki writer ki apni khud ki bhe soch hoti hay usko pata hota hay ki usko kahani main age kya mod or kaise karna hay,agar paise dene pare toh dhekna har choti baat par kahne lagenge kyun? Kyunki tab unke paise lage hote unko apne paise ki keemat ka ahsas hota.....jab writer itni mehnat kar raha toh readers ko bhi toh tora mehnat or writer ki madad karni chahiye.

Tussi cha gye baba ji

 

[Naik]

Agle update ka intizar h bhai

 

[Ayush2017]

Dosto abhi is story ko modify karne mein time lagega. Main socha hai ki apni story barshat ki raat aur the master (begging of life) update dena suru kar du.

Kal raat
The master (begging of life) ka update de dunga.

 

[Luffy]

Update 12
Ab tak

Aap ne dekha ki Nakul kanika se baate karte hue cbse baord aa gaya tha. Uske baad wo kanika ko le kar andar chala gaya wahi jeetu bahar unka intezar karne lag gaya..

Ab aage

Kanika nakul ke sath andar gayi to dekh ki charo taraf log the aur andar se aa rahe the aur andar ja rahe the. Jahan ek taraf bada se maidan hari hari ghaso se sampan tha, wahi uske charo taraf jhadiya aur chhote paudhe lage hue the jo bahut hi sundar nazar de rahe the. Kuch bache apne parents ke sath us ghaas mein baithe hue khuch likh rahe the to kuch baith kar aram kar rahe the. To kuch chips, kurkure aur cold drinks kha aur pee rahe the.

Wahi Kanika ne Nakul ke taraf dekha to ek puri kyari gulab aur genda ke phool se bahar hua tha. Use ke baar ghaas se bhara hua maidaan tha jahan par kuch bache aur unke parents baithe hue the. Wahi Kanika Nakul ka hath pakade hue aage chal rahi thi par uska dhyan charo taraf tha.

"Nakul hame kis taraf chalna hai." Kanika ne Nakul se kaha. Aur phir se charo taraf ka drishy dekhne lag gayi.

"Ye to mujhe bhi nahi malum ki hame kis taraf chalna hai. Par main kisi se puch lunga." Nakul ne Kanika le taraf dekh kar kaha aur phir samne ki building ki taraf dekhne lag gaya.

"Kya tumhe sach mein nahi pata hi hame kis taraf jana hai. To khade kis liye ho. Pucho kisi se." Kanika ne Nakul ka jawab sunane ke baad uski taraf mud kar kaha. Usne apne dono hath kamar par rakh liye the. Nakul kanika ke baat aur uske is taraf khade hone ke andaz se hans diya aur uske upar bahut pyar aay usko.

"Thik hai main kisi se puchta hu." Nakul ne Kanika se kaha aur idhar udhar dekhne laga. Koi aisa vyakti mil jaye jise DMC (marksheet) ka area puch sake. Nakul ko tabhi ke vyakti aate hue dikha jiske gale mein ek card tanga hua tha, jo uske employee hone ko darshta hai. Us vyakti ki aayu 40 45 ke aapas ki hogi. Jab wo vyakti Nakul ke pas pahucha gaya to Nakul ne uske pas ja kar kaha, "Excuse me sir. Kya aap mujhe batayege ki DMC kaha se nikalwa sakte hai."

"Beta beta is building ke 3rd floor ke left side mein hai. 38 room hai. Tum waha ja kar pata kar lo." Us vyakti ne Nakul se kaha.
"Thank you sir." Nakul us vyakti ko dhyanwad dene ke baad waha se Kanika ko apne sath le kar nikal gaya.

Nice update

 

[Kaal]

Bhai intazar hai update ka