Romance Kasam - Love is not Everything (Completed)

[Champ_AK_81]

प्रेम के कथानक को उसके राते मे आयी कठिनाइयों और बाधाओं से ऊपर उठाकर प्रेमियों की दृढ़ इच्छाशक्ति और विश्वास के सहारे आपने एक पारिवारिक ताने-बाने से जोड़े रखा वो अतुलनीय है
में अब ख्वाहिशें भी पढ्ना शुरू करूंगा..... क्योंकि 2-3 अपडेट के बाद रोक दिया था...........अब शुरू से पढ़ूँगा

एक भूल मुझे इससे भी बेहतर लगी......... क्योंकि में जब खुद को नायक के स्थान पर रखकर देखता हूँ तो
-----------अतुल की तरह भावुक नहीं..............समीर की तरह व्यावहारिक हूँ में.............


एक भूल 2 में भी अभी तक सुमित को अपने ज्यादा नजदीक पाया है मेंने
आगे देखते हैं क्या होता है

Thanks Kamdev bhai for your support and reviews throughout the story...Aapne story mein suruwaat se lekar ant tak saath diya hai kabhi taarif karke to kabhi kuch kamiyan ki aur ishaara kar ke.

Ek Bhool ke baad ek emotional story likhna chaahta tha jo kisi hadd tak safal bhi raha...Jo aap sabhi ke comments se pata chala...Ummeed hai Khwahishein bhi aapko pasand aayega.

Aise hi saath bane rahiye bhai.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Bhai aapki lekhani ke baare mai ham kya kahe.......
Ek umda writer ki behtreen peskash thi.....
Laga hi nahi ye story hai, ek jiti-jagti jindgi dikha di aapne.....
Aapka tahe dil se shukriya.....

Ab mai Ek Bhool-2 read karunga, aur mujhe umeed hai..... Wo waha sab milega, romance, comedy, drama, suspens, tragedy, thriller, emotions, friendship etc

Thanks Killar bhai for your support and appreciation...Bahut accha laga ye jaan kar ki aapko story itna pasand aaya...Story ka suruwat se ant tak saath bane rehne ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya bhai.

Ek Bhool 2 mein bhi aapka besabri se intejaar rahega bhai.

a lot bhai.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Thread Title Changed On Ts's Request.

Regards
Siraj Patel

Siraj bhai.

 

[Think]

Suparb story bhai

 

[Naina]

तू कहीं भी हो तेरे फूल से आरिज़ की क़सम

तेरी पलकें मेरी आंखों पे झुकी रहती हैं






फिर उसी राह पे निकल पड़े हैं,

कल जहाँ ना जाने की कसम खा बैठे थे।



कौन है जिसने मय नही चक्खी

कौन झूठी क़सम उठाता है,

मयकदे से जो बच निकलता है

तेरी आँखों में डूब जाता है !!



ज़हर मिलता ही नहीं मुझको सितमगर वर्ना

क्या क़सम है तेरे मिलने की कि खा भी न सकूँ



सुना था कसम झूठी हो तो लोग मर जाते हैं,

नाजाने कौन सी कसम निभा रहा है वो के अब तक ज़िंदा हूँ मैं।
Ju ki atul & nisha ke liye

 

[Damha]

pehle to congratulations for completing story Champ_AK_81 bhai sach me bohat achi story thi Har emotion ko ap ne bohat ache se dikhaya hai Hum story me happy ending chahte the jo hume Mili Hai bohat emotional bhi huwe Atul ko Tarapte Daikh ker kayi baar pura update ek saath parha bhi nahi gaya jis wajha se update ko parts me parhna para beech me Reviews diye lekin zada nahi de paya kiu ke main apni story me bohat zada busy ho gya tha lekin aj waqt nikal ker puri parh li sach me dil me utarne wali story thi aur mera best part Writer note kya he baat hai us ki aala

 

[Fighter]

Super & Very nice story bro

last m dono ko mila k achha kiya

 

[Angel96]

 

[Mathur]

Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread

Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Xforum Staff..

 

[Champ_AK_81]

story se jyada writers note acha laga

jokes apart you are a damn ossum writer bro

ye story shuruwat se leke end tak pura pada time to time lekin afsos jyada comment nahi kar kar har update p jo ki writer ko protsahit keliye bahut jaroori h uske liye , dil se sorry for not commenting on every update

ye tumhari story personally mere dil k bahut karib h after tune meri jana kabhi nahi jana

is story every character is detailed

har character ka apna ehmiyat h aur tumhari character detailing bahut dhasu h

romance section writers m top position m ho bro

keep up the good work bro & all the best for the future projects

Thanks Sam for your support and reviews throughout the story...Jab pehli baar tumhe thread mein dekha to hairaani bhi hua aur jab dhire dhire reviews aane laga to ek motivation bhi mila...Tumhara review uss vakt se aa raha hai jab story mein jyada readers nahi thhe aur uss vakt xp ki updates ko hi post kar raha tha...Ending tak tumhara comment aaya jo har writwr ke liye jaruri hota hai.

Aur rahi baat Aashiq sir ki Tune Mere Jaana Kabhi nahi Jaana...That was a masterpiece ...Mera bhi favourite stories mein se ek hai.

Iss story mein saath bane rehne ke liye shukriya Sam...Kabhi vakt mile to Ek Bhool 2 bhi padhna .