Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

 

[nain11ster]

Janny ham Aayengee jarur aayenge lekin wo wakt hamara hoga aur marji bhi hamari hogi....

God ko leke kahani
matlab Religious story line
aur yahan ke mods ko pata bhi nahi...

Btw DARK WOLFKING ab report nahi Karoge kya
hamesha kahte rahte ho report kar doge, report kar doge... kyun ab kya hua

ilaz ~ nain11ster saheb aap jald se jald hella aur nischal ki shaadi kara dijiye.. taaki sab kuch okay okay ho jaye

Are na wo God par besed nhi hai ...wo ek Chinese story ka hinglish dubb likh rhe hai...Jo ki ek larke ke cultivation par based hai woh larka demons ko marakar apne realm ko bachana chahata hai...aur uss story par abhi nhi Jana ju know wo Chinese story hai to waha Jane se bhi Corona phail sakta hai iss forum par ...

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Kash ye sach na hota par ye sach hai

Ke dono pagal ho gaye... Bus kro re jarra idhar aa jao ... Ishq risk par... "End is near" ... "Winter is coming" GoT part 2 running

 

[nain11ster]

aisa kya... to pehle bolna chahiye tha na kham kha yunhi ek review waste ho gaya

Koi na....
ab to hum readers dur khade rahke yehi gaa sakte ki...
ki Hella..apsyu sang Mubarak ho tumko tumhari ye shaadi
sada rahe yahi dua hamari

Review ke baad ju 7 days quarantine rhi ho ya nhi...

matlab imli aur orja ki sautan hella banegi
are yaar is pounge guru apsyu kitni lakdiya chahiye yaar... lagta hai Indian mein population badhake hi chhodega ye namurad, naspita apsyu

Chalo issi bahane uss imli ka patta to cut ho jayega...

Main bhala kyun quarantine mein jaane lagi

Na sautan banke rahegi imli ke sine mein baith ke mug dalegi hella

Hay ye kaha se khabar aa gayi ki wo tuchh imli hella ki sautan banane ke kayak hai never.....

Ju ne abhi bola ki China ghoom ke aayi ho chahe anjane me hi toh quarantine to hona parega na re baba....

lekin yahin ek matra satya hai... Btw ye teen teen shadi karne wala nibba apsyu ki angle se guru lage... guru logis to moh maya se dur rahte hai

Agli jo bhi thread hogi usme dono ke liye main 101 rule ki list banakar mention karne wala hun ghabrao mat dono ... ...

Pakadte hain kisi chij ko to mano fevicol me namak ki tarah chipka diya ho...

 

[ragish7357]

Yeppp .. absolutely right... Main thoda padhne ke mood se hun... Waise kahani ke kuchh part hai bache huye... End ka kaam ab bhi jari hai... Likhne baitho to lagta hai ki pahle lagta hai ek update me simat jayega par wo ho jata hai 5 update.... ...

HAAN PAR aaj raat se kal subah tak final kar dunga...

hum bhi chahte h ki 1 ka 5 ho jisse safar thoda lamba chle
baki intzar to dusre safar ka bhi h
to confusiya jate h ki iss pr hi chle ya dusre ka intzar kre
ab aap jb antim padav ko khtm krne wale h
to phir dusra hi better rahega

 

[Dgadkari]

Bahut din baad wapas aaye 24 update lagatar padhe ji ye samajh gaya... Leki pahle ke update kab padhe wo kaun batayega ...

Areeeee ... Tarif karna chhodne se pahle 8-10 line ki tarif karne ke baad hi chhod dete... Ek chhutka wo giant jaisa jitna chhotka kosis to karte ...

Baharhaal thanks for your beautiful words sunkar kafi achha laga... Ye feeling hi kuchh aur hai...

BTW sorry for extra update... Abhi kuchh majboori hai isliye 1 update se hi kaam chalaye... Aur aaram se badhne se kahani ko...

Apasyu ke liye to sangram hua tha..... Ek ore readers dusre ore main... Din raat 1000 negative comment fir bhi data raha...

Main ek sal se beyond the imagination plan kar raha tha... Lekin ye negative negative and negative ne mere imagination ke sath thrill ko bhi le dooba aur logon ko pahunchne na diya...

But I am happy... Because the love shown by few people regarding his best chatecters... I always feel delightful... Aur isliye to next journey bhi aanounce ho chuks hai "The Glaxian"... Badhte part kr sath unhe bhi samjhna hoga ki samay ke sath har kirdar ke relation mr badlav hota hai like hum jinhe school ke dino me dekhte hain wo college me nahi jo sakte aur jo college me hote hain wo aage ki life me...

Jabki hote hain sada hi jivan me lekin har achhi chij hamesa sath rahe yah sambhav nahi... Main writer hun mujhe ye dard lens padta hai... Readers hain unhe wo dard nahi lena... So iss baar koi action nahi Apasyu ka... Wo bhanvar 2 me milega.... And the Glaxian ki journey me

Aur bataye raha kijiye kab kya padhkar nikal gaye pata na chalta hai

Hahaha sorry bhai but as I said I didn't had words isiliye tarif nhi ki btw mujhe bhot accha lga ki mera review dena aapko accha lga but I must say aap bhot accha likhte ho aur ye jo aapki down to earth wali khasiyet h na iske liye hats off mtlb itne acche writer ho aur daily update deke bhi sb readers k reviews ko reply krte ho...ye quality aapke alawa aur koi writer me toh nhi h....
Vaise apasyu ke bare me negative comments krne wle vo hi ho skte h jinhone Bhanwar nahi padhi ho nhi jinhone padhi h vo toh aisa nhi kr skte uapr se aapne Nischal aur Apasyu ka jo takrav show kiya tha shayad isiliye bhi un readers ko Apasyu pasand nhi aya ho shayad
Btw Bhanwar 2 kb start kr rhe ho bhai? Ho ske toh is story ke sath sath bhanwar 2 bhi likhna start kr do

 

[nain11ster]

Well I never thought that people on this thread are living under the stone. Ahh I expected that much. So this story is quite interesting up until now. Characters are written in good way. Plot is obvious so not comment on that. Beside plot the comedy and emotional, drama part also good. Action is modest I say (well it's for me because of Jay Sutar bhai. His action sequences are whole another level.) nain11ster you are good writer to be honest. But I never expected that the people on your thread like this. They judge the book by it's cover. Wish they read tha Jay bhai's story to the recent updates.

Boss people on this thread never living under the stone... Aap se jyada kahaniyan padhte hain aur kahaniyon par mahol banane ka apna hi alag tarika hota hai specially Naina SANJU ( V. R. ) .... Inke comment jo writer dekh lete hain fir ek baar sochte hain ki ye bhi meri story kyon nahi padhte....

Ye 11 ster fan abhi cnp cnp karke naina ji se prashikshan le raha hai lekin ladka ye bhi kamjor nahi... 20 comment karke aur ek thread par chipke rahkar please kisi ke bare me aise rai nahi dete... Galat hai...

Thanks for your beautiful words... Story ke alag alag emotions ko sarahne ka shukriya rahi baat action ki to maine second update me chhote se action ke baad milo Lambo koi action likha hi nahi tha bro... Why u r so curious about comparison... Pahle 60 update kewal thrill aur fantasy hai... Uske baad ke 39 update adventure aur journey hai... Ek action scene last ka aata hai jo pure action acne hai... Mindless action kidhar ghused dun re baba...

Aur waise bhi har kisi kahani ke 4-5 update padh'kar god's and demons ke action khojne lagoge tab to sabhi ko god and demon hi likhna chahiye... Aur poora forum wahi likhta najar aayega...

Who is living under the stone bro... Har story aur writer ka apna maza hai... Fir ju ne harshit1890 ko nahi padhe... Bhai to sbadon se khauff paida karwa de ... Action to dikhane ki jaroorat hi na pare...

Thanks for your presence here... Jis kahani par jaye uss kahani ko padhe... Kyonki har koi apni imagination likhta hai... Fir chahe accha ho ya bura... Wo likhne wali ki apni imagination hoti hai aur aapko pura haq hai kahne ka ki "mujhe ye pasand nahi aa raha"..

Hope u understand... Thanks a lot

 

[krish1152]

Nainu unkil ab update bhi chipka do chup chaap

 

[nain11ster]

Hahaha sorry bhai but as I said I didn't had words isiliye tarif nhi ki btw mujhe bhot accha lga ki mera review dena aapko accha lga but I must say aap bhot accha likhte ho aur ye jo aapki down to earth wali khasiyet h na iske liye hats off mtlb itne acche writer ho aur daily update deke bhi sb readers k reviews ko reply krte ho...ye quality aapke alawa aur koi writer me toh nhi h....
Vaise apasyu ke bare me negative comments krne wle vo hi ho skte h jinhone Bhanwar nahi padhi ho nhi jinhone padhi h vo toh aisa nhi kr skte uapr se aapne Nischal aur Apasyu ka jo takrav show kiya tha shayad isiliye bhi un readers ko Apasyu pasand nhi aya ho shayad
Btw Bhanwar 2 kb start kr rhe ho bhai? Ho ske toh is story ke sath sath bhanwar 2 bhi likhna start kr do

Aree aapka ye achha lagna to hum tab se feel karwa sakte the jab se aap pahla update padhe... Ussi waqt revoo dena tha na...

Baki rahi baat kuchh writers jawab nahi de pate... To ek baat sahi hai ki har readers ko comment reply ka intzar rahta hai... Lekin update likhne me waqt lagta hai... Ab main hi aaram se waqt hai to 2 ghante se reply kar raha hun ... Lekin logon ki jivika bhi hai bhai... Aur unhe apne unhi time me aapko update bhi dena padta hai...

Isliye dono baten hoti hai... Pahli logon ke roj update nahi aa pate... Aur wo sabhi comment reply nahi kar pate... So my humble request is.. support each story jinhe aap padhte hain... Kyonki bhale cnt reply na kar paye lekin comment jaroor padhte hain...

Rahi baat bhanvar ke chatecters ke negative comments ki to unhone poora padha hai aur bakayda ek ek update padhte hain... Lekin ho gaya unhe kuchh kirdaron se pyar tha aur maine kafi dil jalaya ... Fir usme to koi kasar hi nahi tha... So jo negative de rahe wo postive log hi hain don't worry... Aur aise hi pyare pyare comment karte rahen

 

[nain11ster]

Nainu unkil ab update bhi chipka do chup chaap

Hahaha ... 15 minute aur Krish bhai..

 

[nain11ster]

alle alle.... ju ko gussa taya
ju gussa na kalo


Kabhi hansh bhi liya karo JD saheb

Btw I blame imli
usine hum readers ko aisa bana di hai to hum sab ka kya kasoor...
Kyun 11 ster fan ..ju kya kahte ho

rumors hai ki Hella bhanvar 2 pe ishq ladane jaa rahi hai.. kya ye baat sach hai

Are Bhai bhadak kyo rhe ho.. we are just kidding bro ..maine first update se lekar current update Tak pad hai regularly ....waha par review dene ke baad writer Saab reply hi nhi karte to lagata hai ki review bekar Chala gaya ....baki Maine Puri story Google par English me hi pad dali hai....aur maje ki baat ye hai ki wo writer bhi story chhod ke bhag Chuka hai ....aur jay sutar bro abhi kahani me thoda sa change lakar story jaldi end Karne me lage hai aisa lag rha hai...agar bas wo uss story ko pahale jaise follow karte to story aur bhi amezing hoti ......

Mere do anmol ratan... Mere 2 anmol ratan ... Ek hai raam to duja Lakhan .. ramm lakhan ... Ram lakhan ... Aankhen bhar aati hai dono ko dekh kar kabhi kabhi ...

 

[nain11ster]

nice update ..nischal ke bachcho ne achcha drama kiya tha par ek ne saari poll khol di ..

uski baate majedar thi .. maay baap dana pani uth jayega ..

charo jodiya maa bannewali hai aur mahavinashi jodi todke nischal ko maarna chahta hai .par usko pata nahi ki nischal ki asli jodi uske paas hai ..

dhuri ki baato se aisa lagta hai usko kuch na kuch pata hai ..
mahvinashi kitna harami hai ki luna par vishwas kar raha hai aur apne logo ki fikr hi nahi ,,agar nischal maara jaata hai to yakeenan haar tay hai ..

Hahaha ....kabhi kabhi hansi ke patakhe aise hi chhine padte hain maay baap... Warna reader tension me.uodate padhkar nikal jate hain ...

Dhuri ki baton se kuchh nahi balki bahut kuchh pata hone jaisa hai Khair... Aage aapko bhi pata hi jayega