Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

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Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

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Update:-98 ​

Nischal:- Tu kya inke wave ki line par apna bijli chalane ki soch rahi thi kya???... Jo isse controlled wave nikalna sikha rahi...


Nandni:- Tu to mind read nahi karta fir tujhe kaise pata...


Nischal:- O' mental wahan board par kya apne sasural jane ka diagram bana rakhi hai... Wo dragon ka jo bada sa muh banayi hai … uske aage ek muh se lazer wave, dusre se aag, teesre se barf... Aur inke muh se har nikalne wali chij ke aage, jo tune kadakti bijli ka diagram bana rakha hai, tere ander ki bhavna ko bata raha hai...


HuYu:- Waise iss par experiment kiya ja sakta hai... Agar aag ke baeandar me bijli ka bawandar mile… yadi laser wave me bijli ka wave mile... Kamal ka concept hai...


Nischal:- No way... Nandu mere sath Aizem jayegi.…


Nandni:- Haan to thik hai na... Main gloves de deti hun, experiment ke liye..


Nischal:- Tumhe kuchh dene ki jaroorat na hai... Jijaji kafi hoshiyar hai... Sath me Sonu, Monu aur Golu, Kisan ki company to hai hi... Kyon jijaji...


HuYu:- Haan sab samajh raha hun, kis baat ke liye mujhe team di ja rahi hai... Wo wave wali complete suit aur bhi banana hai aur usse technically humla karne ke liye aur bhi advance banana hai wahi na...


Nischal:- Samjhdar jijaji, meri baat suno... Nandu inhe tum wo gloves de hi do... Jijaji jo karna ho karo... 500 dragon suit fully loded aur 10 lakh human suit fully loaded... Viman me dhatu hai apne pass...


HuYu:- Thik hai jao... Main 2 unit team bulata hun kaam pura karne… free body size dunga auto adjustable aur sath me users guidline lekin badle me...


Nischal:- Haan thik hai le lena lambi chutti aur Serin ke sath ghum aana jahan ghumna ho... Suno yahan 10 baccho ko tum kaam samjha do to wo 6 unit ke barabar akela kaam karenge... Sab taiyar rakhna…


HuYu:- Haan samjh raha hun bhavna ko... Main banata hun suit...


Nischal:- To ab hum chalen…


Sabhi dragon babies ek sath.… "Baba aap jao, yahan hum fufa se poora kaam nikalva lenge"…


Nischal jane se pahle HuYu ke sath me 6 pendent ka set diya. Ye wahi pendent tha jo Roffa space station par Jivisha ko kahin to dekha hua lag raha tha. Nischal uss pendent ko dete huye HuYu se kahne laga.…


"Jijaji, Jivisha ko isme kuchh to khas dikha tha. Aur meri dilchaspi isme hai ki Roffa space station par bahut se traveller apni anmol chijen chhod gaye.… Shayad unhe laga ho yadi Hurriyent ka rasta paar na ho saka to uski wo chijen salamt to rahegi"…


HuYu, khush hote... "Aisi baat hai kya Sahjade, fir to un antiques par thoda samay main bhi bitana chahunga"…


Nischal:- Kyon nahi... Ab main chalta hun...


Poori baat samjha'kar Nischal, Ansh aur Nandni ke sath ravana ho gaya. Aizem ke Madhya rastr ki rajdhani me jaise hi uska viman land kiya... Gussaye bacchon ne viman ka darvaja hi gher liya...


Ye sabhi wahi anath bacche the jinki dekh-bhal Nischal aur Serin kar rahi thi. Nandni un gussaye bacchon ko dekh'kar… "Ab yahan kya jhol kar diya... Sabhi bacche tujhe kha jane wali najron se kyon ghur rahe"…


"Idhar humse puchho udhar kya khusur fusur kar rahi ho Nandni didi"…. Ek bacche ne kaha


Nandni, thodi hairani se... "Ye kya hai Nischal, inke kaan itne tej hain ki khusur fusur bhi sun sakte hain kya"…


"Hum lip read kar sakte hain... Ladki ke pichhe kyon chhipe ho Sahjade, bahar aao"… kisi dusre bachhe ne kaha...


Nischal:- Ye kya badtamiji hai... Nandni sath aayi hai aur tum sab ho ki...


"Haan to sath wale bhi jaan le na ki kitna wada khilafi hui hai humare sath"… kisi bacche ne kaha...


Nischal:- Areeee lekin ho kya gaya hai wo to batao... .


"Hume pichhle kayi mahino se tumhari bahan jungle me chhod aayi thi batao... Rajdhani ki shakl na dekhne dee jalim.… 5 din se dharne par baithe hain, tab Maha prabandhak sir hume raajdhani le'kar aaye"…


Nischal apna matha pit'te... "Matlab tum logon ne nature developement ki traning se inkar kar diya... Hato ab main kisi se baat nahi karne wala"…


"Areee... Tum bhi Ruth rahe... Humne nature developement se nahi resine kiya hai sach me"…


Nischal:- Ab ye makkhan lagane se koi fayda nahi hai... Jo mann me aaye wo karo...


"Pagal ho gaya hai Sahjada... Sacchi hume aisa kuchh bhi nahi kiya maay-baap. Tum Ruth gaye to dana pani uth jayega... Hum to bus yun hi chhed rahe the"…


Jaise hi uss bacche ne sach ugal diya, lage uske sathi gariyane... Sab koste huye kahne lage... "Nischal humse thode na Ruth sakta hai... Tumhare chakkar me Viggo viman par jane ka mauka chala gaya"..


Nandni inki nautanki dekhkar hansti hui... "In logon ko kiski hawa lagi hai"…


Nischal:- Jyadatar bacche Aarsi aur Chirag ke sath 2 sal tak khele huye hain... Ab samjh sakti ho inke nautanki kaa raaj...


Nandni hansti hui Nischal ke sath viman se niche utri... Bacchon ne unhe kahin bhi jane nahi diya... Nischal poora ek din ka samay diya. Fir wo bacche khud badhaeyan dete huye, sab ko mahal tak chhod aaya. Poore Madhya rastra me jalsa sa mahol tha. Kisi bhi waqt delivary ho sakti thi…


Ansh jakar doctors se milne laga, lekin aise najuk waqt par ladki ke pariwar wale bhi wahan maujood the. Kisi ne bhi high blood ko, kisi aise ko chhune to kya, dekhne se bhi mana kar diya, jinhe wo jante nahi.


Ansh to chup chap sun'kar baat apne tak hi rakhta, lekin sath me Nandni bhi thi, jo khadi sab sun rahi thi. Apne pati ki bejjati wo bardast nahi kar payi. Sidha wahan se Ansh ko le'kar uddan bhadne ki taiyari karne lagi...


Nandni gussa kar nikli ye khabar Nayla tak pahunchi. Turant hi dono ko samjha'kar wo wapas mahal me le'kar aayi. Iss baar Nayla khud sath gayi aur un sabhi abhibhavak ke pass pahunch'kar apni aawaj buland karti wo puchhne lagi.… "Kisne high blood ke naam par inhe ander jaane se mana kiya hai"…


Mahavinshi, uttri sima ka raja samne aa'kar…. "Koi samasya hai kya, maine kaha tha"…


Nayla:- Inse jyada high blood nahi hoga yahan kisi ka... Kyonki Viggo ke jodi ki tarah hi inke smuday ki jodi hoti hai... Tum me kaun compare karega inki blood ko... Mujhe abhi bataye... Kisme himmat hai yahan apne orignal blood ko confirm karne ka.… Nandni, doctor sahab, aap dono ander jaeye... Yahan aap se jyada high blood kisi ka nahi hai"..


Nayla jaise tamacha jadi ho Mahavinshi ko. Dono ke ander jate hi wo Nayla ka hath pakad'kar… "Tum hume ajnabiyon ke samne nicha dikha rahi thi"…


Nayla:- Uttri seema ke shashak ji, aap ne bhi to unhe bejjat kiya tha... Bhuliye mat jodi ban'ne ke baad aapki betoyin ke surakhsa ki jimmedari bhi humari hai... Nischal ke hath na kaanp jaye, jab wo apne bacchon ki delivary karwa raha ho, isliye prithvi ke sabse khas doctor ko le'kar aaya hai...


Mahavinshi:- To kya ye doctor delivary bhi karwate hain... Maine to suna tha ki dimag ka bahut bada doctor hai...


Nayla:- Aapne kab sun liya…


Mahavinshi:- Hum dushman ki jyada khabar rakhte hain… mujhe bus meri beti ki chinta hai uss Viggo ka bij mar bhi jaye to gum nahi…


"Ek navjaat ne kya bigad diya hai Mahavinshi. Nafrat mujhse hai to mujhe maar lo"…. Nischal wahan sirkat karte huye kahne laga...


Mahavinshi:- Ohhh to tumne sab sun liya...


Nischal:- Kamal ki nafrat hai tumhari Mahavinashi, jo apne hi beti ke hone wale bacche ke liye dikh raha….


Mahavinshi:- Beti ke liye kabhi galat soch ho sakti hai kya, lekin uss ek naam se nafrat kabhi khatm nahi ho sakti hai, jiska naam Viggo hai...


Nischal:- Hmmmm !!!! Fir ussi Viggo ke sath apni betiyon ki jodi kyon banayi...


Mahavinshi:- Taki jodi todne par tu jodi ke viyog me mar jaye... ..


Nischal:- Maan lo main mar gaya aur tumhari beti apne bacchon ko palna chah rahi ho...


Sabhi shashak jinki betiyan garv se thi.… "Tumhare marne ke agle ghadi hi hum unhe maar denge"…


Nischal:- Hmmmm ! Ek maa ke gode se uska navjat bacche ko maarne ki baat kar rahe. Kamal ki ye nafrat hai aur uski takat bhi... Shayad main tumhari nafrat ki vajah jaan raha hun, isliye apne hone wale bacchon ke liye aisa sun raha hun... Galti se uski maa ke samne mat kah dena... Tumhara gala kaat degi. Vishwas na ho to kisi ek kamjor se kamjor stri, jo purn maatritav ko mehsus karti ho uske samne kah'kar dikha dena….


Nayla:- Kyon hansi khushi ke mahol ko barbaad karna… Nischal tumhe ander jaana chahiye...


Nischal unhe ghurte ander jaa pahuncha. Mahavinashi ek baar fir apne ahankaar me hanste huye...


"Iske beton ka prem dekh'kar abhi se lag raha hai ki iska sab kuchh khone wala hai aur uske liye mujhe 8 sal ka intzar bhi karna nahi padega. Achha Nayla jaisa ki Mafees mujhe bata raha tha, Nischal ke kahne par iss yudhh ki taiyari chal rahi. Yadi wo nakara sabit hua to usse cahurahe par faansi ki saja milegi ya nanga kar'ke goli maarne ki saja denge organization wale"…


Nayla, samajh to sab rahi thi lekin wo nasamajh banti... "Organization of middle universe ka deputy director Mafees ki baat kar rahe"


Mahavinshi:- "Haan main ussi ki baat kar raha hun... Usne mujhe bataya ki Astak ki fauj ke mukable majah chand vimano ke sath Luna ne usse aakash me haraya aur jamin par jo hairatangej karname Nilbhut samuday ne sabke samne rakha, uske bavjood Nischal ne iss poore yudhh ko lead karne ka parstav rakha".

"Organisation ke purv sena nayak ki baat par sabne haan to kar diya, lekin yadi iss waqt wo kamjor par jaye aur poori fauj ko bich mazdhar me chhod jaye, tab wo organization ka doshi hoga"...


Nayla:- Haan lekin Mafees aisa kyon chahega... Usse kya shak hai Nischal par…


Mahavinshi:- Shak to hoga hi na... Jab unhe ye pata ho ki yahan uska baccha hua aur wahan jodi tooti...


Nayla:- Haan Maine hi yah ek Viggo ko maarne ka prastav diya tha, lekin kya nafrat, organisation aur logon se badh'kar hai, jo chal rahe mahol ka bhi khyal nahi raha… Astak se yudhh me hum chuke to kitna nukshan hoga pata bhi hai????...


Mahavinshi:- Lekin chukenge kyon... Luna organization ki sena nayika hai aur ab bhi kaman me hai. Usne 4 lakh uttri seema ke pilot ko chuna hai, jo yudhh me sabse aage rahenge… iska matlab samjh rahi ho... Wo ek shasakt sena nayika hai jise uttri seema ke fauj par poora bharosa hai.... Mera to poora support uske sath hai..


Nayla:- Tumhari manokamna purn ho Mahavinshi. Main jakar apna kaam dekhti hun... Tum sab bhi aaram kar lo... Beti ko surakshit jo le jana hai...


Mahavinshi:- Bacche ke janm ke baad 3 jodi todne ki sahamti patr main advance de chuka hun. Miya ki haalat thik nahi warna chautha bhi mil hi jata...


Nayla:- Haan main samjh gayi.. Prastav paper Lobhu ke pass hai... Ab bacche ko to janm le lene do... Fir na jodi todne ka vyog doge aur uske baad na Nischal organization ka doshi hoga, ya fir jodi viyog me mare, uski kismat...


Ek bada sa hall tha jahan 30-40 sewikayen thi. 15-20 doctors the aur Nischal ki charo patniyon ke liye bade-bade alishan bed, hall ke bilkul Madhya me laga hua tha... Ansh doctors ke bich sari reports check kar raha tha. Wahin Nandni unn charon ke pass baith'kar unse baten kar rahi thi...


Nischal jaise hi wahan pahuncha, charo hi tek laga'kar baith'ti hui, Nischal ko aate dekh rahi thi... Nischal aaya aur charon ke sar par bari-bari se haath ferte huye... "Jyada taklif to nahi ho rahi"…


Tiya:- Hello doctor (Ansh) jara yahan aayenge...


Ansh, karib pahunchte… "ji kahiye"..


Nischal ki teen jodiyan, Dhuri, Apurvi aur Tiya ek sath.… "Humne suna hai aap dono (Nandni aur Ansh) sabse khas hain Sahjade ke liye, hum chahten hain ki aap humari baaten sune"…


Dhuri, fir Nischal ko ghurti.… "Sirf itna hi nahi balki aap bich me bol bhi sakte hain aur wo bhi apne dost ke paksh se... Mujhe koi gila nahi hai... Sab ye bhi to jaan le ki Viggo samuday ko badhane ke liye in logon ne kis had tak sajis ki hai..."

 

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Update:-99 ​

Dhuri, fir Nischal ko ghurti.… "Sirf itna hi nahi balki aap bich me bol bhi sakte hain aur wo bhi apne dost ke paksh se... Mujhe koi gila nahi hai... Sab ye bhi to jaan le ki Viggo samuday ko badhane ke liye in logon ne kis had tak sajis ki hai..."


Tiya:- Ek Viggo jo apni jodi ke viyog me mar jata hai, ya mar sakta hai... Wo ek ke alava 3 aur jodiyan kaise bana sakta hai??? Are main aap dono (Ansh aur Nandni) se hi puchh rahi ???


Nandni:- Haan tum bolo, maine yah sawal note kar liya hai... Mujhe lagta hai bahut se sawal aane wale hain... Ek sath jawab dun to jyada clearity milegi…


Dhuri:- Thik hai fir mera sawal bhi likh lijiye... Koi sajis ke tahat kisi stri ko garv'vati kare, aur uss se bacche paida karwane ke baad bacche ko le jane ki yojna banaye, aise insan ko kya kahenge???


Apurvi:- Kisi ki nafrat ka fayda utha'kar ek stri se bacche paida karwane ke liye raaji karwa lena... Aise sajis karta ko kya kahenge...


Tiya:- Khud kabhi dekhne nahi aaya, lekin technology ke jariye pal-pal humare garv me pal rahe bacche par najar banaye rakhna…. Yah kis tarah ki jimmedari ek purush jodi apni mahila jodi ke sath nibha raha hai...


Dhuri:- Pahle ek stri se bacche paida karwane ki sajis aur baad me ek maa se uske bacchon ko dur karne ki sajis... Kahan tak jayaj hai...


Nischal, sawalon ko sun'kar atmglani me doob gaya ho jaise. Kisi apradhi ki tarah ander se usse mehsus ho raha tha... Jo bhi hua usme bhale hi Nischal ka koi haath nahi tha, lekin iss shadi aur bacche ki sajis to ussi ke logon ne ki thi... Nischal kuchh bolna chah raha tha, tabhi Nandni usse haath dikhati...


"Tum charon ke sabhi sawal ho gaye, ya aur koi sawal hai"…


Miya:- Mujhe kuchh hosh hi nahi isliye mera koi sawal hi nahi hai..


Baki teeno ek sath.… "Abhi to itne hi hai, baad me koi sawal yaad aaya to wo hum aapke jawab sun'kar denge"…


Nandni:- "Bahut achhi baat hai. Ab main aaram se javab deti hun. Jiski sahmati ho to haan kahna, ya jo mere javab se sehmat nahi, wo naa kah degi... Fir hum pahle ussi baat par discuss karenge, fir aage badhenge"...

Baki sabhi sun'ne walon ke liye... Khas'kar tum dono (Nischal aur Jivisha) se kah rahi hun.... Na to bich me tum dono ke ek shabd mujhe sunai dene chahiye, aur naa hi kisi tarah ke gusse ka izhar...


Dhuri:- Ye tum kise kah rahi ho...


Nandni:- Hawa me sandesh bheji hun, jise samajhna tha wo samajh gaye. Ab jarra main tum sab se baat kar lun. Haan to sabse pahli baat, tum charo jab yahan aayi...


Miya:- Teeno kahiye, main bus sabko sun rahi hun.…


Nandni:- Haan sun liya maine Miya. Lekin jo bhi baat hui wo charon ke sath hui na.. To tum sab jab yahan aayi aur kisi se tumhe Viggo ke uss kahani ka pata chala jisme Viggo apne purn jivan kaal me kewal ek sacchi jodi banata hai. Aur jab se tumhe iss baat ka pata chala, tab se tumhe aisa lagne laga ki tum charon ke sath sajis hui hai. Kyonki tumhe apni bewakoofi ka andaza hi chuka tha aur tumhe samjh me aa gaya ki Nischal ko ghanta fark nahi padega yadi ye jodi toote... Kyon...


Nandni ki baat sun'kar Kuchh der tak ek dusre ka muh dekhte rahe... Fir Nandni tej chillayi... "Haan ya na"…


Charo dhime se... "Haan"..


Nandni:- Pahle mere ek sawal ka jawab do garv dharan ke kitne mahine baad tum sab ko laga ki sajis ke tahat tum charo fansi ho...


Tiya:- Yahi koi 6 mahine baad...


Nandni:- Kaise pata chala jarra wo bhi batana…


Tiya:- Wo hum nahi bata sakte...


Nandni:- Batana to padega… aise kaise nahi batogi... Ya majboori me mujhe tumhare ander kisi ko bhejna hoga aur wo sare raaj pata kar lega...



Dhuri:- Viggo jodi viyog me kitna tadap sakta hai, ye baat jan'ne ke liye humne ek purane jasoos Ruki aur Suko se sampark kiya tha jail jaa'kar. Tab usne humari bewakoofi par se parda uthaya...


Nandni:- Fir tumne ye baat apne pitaji ko kyon nahi batayi...


Apurvi:- Bus hum nahi batana chahte the... Sabhi rasyron ke bich ka shantipurn mahol hume achha lag raha tha…


Nandni:- Hahaha kitna cute jhooth bolti ho. Chalo iss raaj se parda main hi hata dun. Un dono kamino ne tumse kaha hoga, jodi mat todo... Sahjade ki sacchi jodi pahle se hai... Usse bus koste raho ki usne dhoka kiya hai...


Teeno ek baar fir se aapas me apna muh dekhne lagi… fir Apurvi boli... "Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai... Usne bus Viggo ke sacche jodi ki hi baat batayi thi… Uss waqt guards bhi khade the"…


Nandni:- Kuchh kahi aur kuchh ankahi baten hoti hain... Itna bada bewakoof to wo dono bhi nahi ki apni saja ko aur Dard bhara bana le... Khair... Ab mujhe ye batao ki kis-kis ne garv me pal rahe apne 6 mahine ke bacche ko zahar diya ya fir ye jo doctors hain, unse iss baat ke liye samapark ki ho, ki kaise garv paat karwayi jaye.


Apurvi, gusse me apni aakhen laal karti... "Maa hai hum apne bacchon ki, tumne ye socha bhi kaise???"


Nandni:- "Kyonki maine anginat baar Jivisha ki gardan ko nila hote dekha hai... Main kya bol rahi hun wo tumhe samjh me nahi aayega lekin jab mujhe samjh me aaya hai, to sala ye aanshu hai ki ruk hi nahi rahe"...

"Main isliye aisa soch sakti hun, kyonki kisi ko bahut bada dhoke ka ehsas karwana tha. Kisi ko ye ehsaas karwana tha ki dekho mujhe jo tumne apne vansh badhane aur samuday badhane ke liye istamal kiya, uss dhoke ko hum bardast nahi kar paye aur humne apne bacche ko maar dala".

"Khud ko maa mat kaho, poorn stri samaj apmanit sa lagta hai. Nafrat ki aag me apne chahne walon tak ko sath mila'kar, aakhri Viggo ke maarne ke itihas rachne ke chakkar me tum sab ne to haden hi paar kar gayi. Tumhe to Astak ke dal me samil hone ka application form daal dena chahiye"..


Tiya:- Haan ye sach hai... Aise gande bij ko hum apne garv me paal rahe. Mujhe to soch'kar hi ghrina ho rahi hai...


Nandni:- "Achha hua dono (Jivisha aur Nischal) ko bandh diya maine... Khair ab baten bahut ho gayi. Itni sari baton ke anth me fir bhi main dosh Jivisha ko hi deti hun... Jo bhi usne kiya wo galat tha"...

"Ab usne galat kiya iss baat se mere dono dost galat nahi ho jate. Pyar me andhe hokar aisi galtiyan to ho hi jati hai... Tumhare dil ko burnol lage waisa parstav main tumhe deti hun ek warning ke sath...


Sabhi ek sath.… "Kya????"


Nandni:- "Dobara in bacchon ko ganda bij boli to juban khinch lungi… aur prastav yah hai ki aaj ke baad Nischal Aizem me kewal mehman ki tarah aayega... Apne jungle me bahut muskil se 2 din rukega, apne logon se milega aur fir mahino laut'kar nahi aayega. Ab to wo Aizem me pahle ki tarah tabhi rehga, jab tak ki tum na chaho. Ek aur baat jab kabhi bhi musibat me raho, Nischal ko yaad kar lena, wo tumhari madad karne jaroor aa jayega"...

"Janti ho kyon wo tumhari musibat me madad karne aayega... Kyonki tumne anjaane me hi sahi... Nafrat me hi sahi... Lekin jo kiya hai uska aabhari to hona hi padega… 2 din saal me kabhi ek baar Aizem apne logon se milne aayega. Ya fir tumhari musibat me madad karne aayega aur kaam kar'ke chala jana... Poora to nahi lekin jaisa sochi thi waisa ho hi gaya.… Jis kaam ke liye tumne itni mehnat ki uska fal tumhe mil gaya na. Nischal Aizem se dur ho gaya...


Tiya:- Aakhri Viggo ko maarna tha aur ulta uska samuday ko badhte dekhenge... Kahan se humari ikchha poori hui…


Nandni:- Pagal ladki... Hurriyent karke ek planet hai... Areee meri computer ji (Jivisha ko sunati) jarra wo action video play to karna.… Abhi 2 minute intzar karo... Sab dikhega…


2 minute baad naa sirf un charo ne nahi, balki Jivisha ke kahne par HuYu ne poore Aizem ko hi connect kar diya. Bade-bade screen par chal raha tha…. Kya hua jab Hurriyent planet par, Nischal apne ahankari samuday se pahli baar mila tha…


Jaise hi wo video khatm hua, Nandni.… "Yaar ye mahol kitna boaring hai. Meri Jiviya isliye best hai... Wo yahan ke mahol me bhi mazak ghol deti... Khair iss video ko dekhne ke baad tum charo ko..

Jaise hi Nandni ne charo bola ek baar fir se Miya usse dekhne lagi... Nandni...

"Tumhara kya scene hai boss jarra ek minute do pahle. Haan tum teeno jis baba aur boyfriend ko khush karne ke liye jodi banane se le'kar bacche ko janm dene ka faisla kee aur Viggo se nafrat me usse Aizem se hathane ka sadyantr rachi usme kamyabi mil gayi… Chalo smile karo"...

"Baki sahi galat ka aakalan kar'ke apne bewakoofi par pachtava karna ki jise umr bhar sanjo kar rakh sakti thi, usse dushmani ki bhent chadha gayi. Ab teeno jarra shant raho… Miya ko hum sab sunege... Dushmani ka kaun sa teer apne tarkash me rakha hai"…


Miya:- Mujhe apne bacche se pyar hai. Mujhe sahjade par garv hai aur meri roj didi (Jivisha) se baat bhi hoti hai... Isliye in sab ke bich mujhe mat ghasito..


Nandni:- Itna bada jhol… iska pata to udhar se hi chalega… lekin inki tarah tumhe shak nahi hua ki Nischal kisi technogy se tumhare garv me dekh raha...


Miya:- "In logon jitni samjhdari nahi hai mujhme... Baba ne nafrat ke bij boye to main bhi andhi ho gayi... Yahan aa'kar ek Viggo ke liye humare apne Dakshat samuday ke dil me jo pyar dikha, uss se main Sahjade se impress ho gayi"...

"Garv dharan ke chauthe mahine ke kisi din mujhe ehsas hua ki koi to mere pass hai... Uske paas hone se main khud me achha mehsus karti thi... Garv me kuch achha hai aisa mehsus hota, jiska explain nahi kiya ja sakta. Haan lekin ye koi technology nahi thi"...

"Fir ek din mujhe samjhte der na lagi ki ye bhi koi maa hai, jo mere bacche se prem kar rahi... Fir humari baten shuru hui… jaisa Nandni didi kah rahi thi, didi abhi yahan hoti to itna tension ka mahol hi nahi hota... Sab hans rahe hote'...


Nischal, Ansh aur Nandni teeno ek dusre ka chehra dekhne lage…. Nandni, thodi hairani se Miya ko dekhti.… "Teri didi ne kya bol kar rakha hai tujhse"…


Miya:- Kuchh baaten hum dono ke bich ki hai... Naa hi jano aap sab.. aur kisi me himmat nahi ki mere ander ghus'kar hum dono ka raaj pata kar le... Aap chaho to kosis karwa lo Sahjade se...


Nandni:- Masters stroke. Khair sidhe mudde par aate hain, tumhara kya faisla hai fir...


Miya:- Main apne bacche ko to apne pass hi rakhna chahti hun, lekin shayad ye sambhav nahi, kyonki har koi Vish-Jivisha nahi hoti...


Nandni:- Tum chaho to bich ka rasta waise nikal sakta hai.... Tum in dono (Niachal aur Juvisha) ke sath ho sakti ho... (Nandni man tatolne ki kosis kee)


Ansh:- Wah re kismat... Iss se khubsurat saja kya hogi...


Nandni:- Joke karne ki kosis kar rahe ho kya Ansh... Nahi bata do abhi... Fir kya option 2 patni ke hi ho sakte hain... 2 pati ke option nahi ho sakte hain kya...


Ansh:- Main to bus yahan ke mahol ko thoda halka kar raha tha…


Miya:- Nandni didi.. Aap ki satak gayi hai


Nandni:- Kya ????


Itne tends mahol me pahli baar hansi gunji thi… Miya ki baat sun'kar Nischal aur Ansh hans pade, wahin Nandni "kya, kya" karne lagi…


Miya:- Haan sach kah rahi hun… Aapki satak gayi hai... Mera pahle se koi chahne wala hai aur main ussi ke sath jodi banaungi...


Ansh:- Kamal hai to uss se pyar hone ke baad tumne Nischal ke sath shadi kyon ki??

Miya:- Batayi to thi bachpan se nafrat ka bij boya gaya tha aur nafrat me sab andhe ho gaye the, akele main thode hi hun, ye teeno bhi to hain... Iss poori ghatna me didi apni galti maanti hai aur unko saja bhi mil chuki hai...


Nischal:- Kya ???


Miya:- "Ye bhi hum dono ka secret hai... Aur haan Nandni didi aap bahut pyari hai... Aapke jawab dene ka tarika bahut shandar tha... Unhe ab bhi pata nahi ki nafrat me wo kya se kya ban gayi hai"...

"Khair meri chinta mat kijiye... Ek gadha hai meri khushiyon ka khyal rakhne ke liye... Haan lekin uska dil itna majboot nahi ki wo kisi aur ke bacche ko mere sath dekh sake. Baki iss poore mamle me mera ye fayda hua ki main apne didi ki bahut karibi hun... Mujhe bus itna hi kahna tha"…


Kah to Miya bilkul samany roop se, muskurati hui hi, lekin na jane kyon sab ke ander kuchh khone jaisa.. kuchh chubhne jaisa mehsus sa ho raha tha... Fir wo Nischal ho, Nandni ho, ya Ansh, ya fir kahin dur Wishper planet se Jivisha…


Kabhi-kabhi hum len-den ke khel ki poori planning kar lete hain, jisme sabko apne-apne fayde mil jaye, lekin fayde-nuksan ke iss khel me, kahin na kahin Nischal, Nandni aur Ansh ko unki ore se baimani aur chhal kiya gaya saaf najar aa raha tha...

 

[nain11ster]

Bhaya 11 sal yhi sb to kiya hai room me rh kr trained Ho gya hu

Hahaha ... Bechare patiyon ke sandh ke aap coordinator ke post par niyukt kiye jate hain ... Naye patiyon ke margdarshan karna aur sukhi dampatya jivan ke sare gun aapko hi sikhane honge

 

[nain11ster]

nice update ...wishper planet pe sab dragon aur jivisha ko chhodkar nischal zoren aa gaya par bitti aur gopal aur unke 50 dragon saathi bhi uske saath aa gaye ladhai me saath dene ..

bitti aur gopal ki baate aur saamnewale ko emotional blackmail karna majedar hota hai har baar ki tarah ..

ab ye sonu ,monu bhi aa gaye jo laser chhod sakte hai ...

Hahaha ... Bitti aur Gopal abhi aur bhi kaarname hai... Aur pakke chele hain Apni maa aur massi ke...

Baharhaal Zoren se jald hi Aizem ki bhi uddan bhadi jayegi... Najar banaye rakhen Leon bhai..

Thankooo so much for your beautiful words

 

[Xabhi]

Yha pr miya ne apni Samajhdaari ka parichay diya hai

Superb update with awesome writing skills Nainu bhai

Ab is pol khol samaroh me abhi Bahut kuchh Khulna baki hai

miya ne kaha jivisha ko sja mil chuki hai???

Nandu ne kafi Achha sujhav diya hai Sabhi ko

Bhaiya mujhse na hota yah review dene ka kaam fat ke haath me aa jati hai itna to Bibi ke uthne se drr nhi lagta aasha hai Bechare pati samjhenge mere mnobhavo ko

 

[Xabhi]

Sorry Vo uthne se drr nhi ruthne se drr tha

 

[Dgadkari]

Awesome updates bro...kya likhte ho maja aa gaya...aaj bhot din bad forum pa vapas aya hu and literally maine continue 24 updates(76-99) padhe h and all the 24 were ??? Matlab ki kya hi tarif karu Jitni bhi tarif karu kam hi hogi isiliye chodo nhi krta tarif

nain11ster bhai according to me aap Xforum k top 3 writers me se ek ho but aapme jo sabse acchi quality h jo baki writers se aapko alag krti h vo hai consistency jo aap regularly updates dete ho keep it up bro aise hi regularly updates dekar hm readers khush krte rho

Vaise bhai apne Apasyu bhai aur Satwik ashram wale kya kr rahe h aajkal?
Aapne bhanwar me Apasyu ka kirdar itna jabardast dikhaya toh is story me bhi bich bich me unke(Apasyu,Amy,Aarav ke) kuch action scenes dekhne ko milte toh maja hi aa jata

Btw thank you bhai aaj k extra bonus update k liye aisehi roj 2 updates doge toh badi meharbani hogi aapki

 

[Nevil singh]

Update:-98 ​

Nischal:- Tu kya inke wave ki line par apna bijli chalane ki soch rahi thi kya???... Jo isse controlled wave nikalna sikha rahi...


Nandni:- Tu to mind read nahi karta fir tujhe kaise pata...


Nischal:- O' mental wahan board par kya apne sasural jane ka diagram bana rakhi hai... Wo dragon ka jo bada sa muh banayi hai … uske aage ek muh se lazer wave, dusre se aag, teesre se barf... Aur inke muh se har nikalne wali chij ke aage, jo tune kadakti bijli ka diagram bana rakha hai, tere ander ki bhavna ko bata raha hai...


HuYu:- Waise iss par experiment kiya ja sakta hai... Agar aag ke baeandar me bijli ka bawandar mile… yadi laser wave me bijli ka wave mile... Kamal ka concept hai...


Nischal:- No way... Nandu mere sath Aizem jayegi.…


Nandni:- Haan to thik hai na... Main gloves de deti hun, experiment ke liye..


Nischal:- Tumhe kuchh dene ki jaroorat na hai... Jijaji kafi hoshiyar hai... Sath me Sonu, Monu aur Golu, Kisan ki company to hai hi... Kyon jijaji...


HuYu:- Haan sab samajh raha hun, kis baat ke liye mujhe team di ja rahi hai... Wo wave wali complete suit aur bhi banana hai aur usse technically humla karne ke liye aur bhi advance banana hai wahi na...


Nischal:- Samjhdar jijaji, meri baat suno... Nandu inhe tum wo gloves de hi do... Jijaji jo karna ho karo... 500 dragon suit fully loded aur 10 lakh human suit fully loaded... Viman me dhatu hai apne pass...


HuYu:- Thik hai jao... Main 2 unit team bulata hun kaam pura karne… free body size dunga auto adjustable aur sath me users guidline lekin badle me...


Nischal:- Haan thik hai le lena lambi chutti aur Serin ke sath ghum aana jahan ghumna ho... Suno yahan 10 baccho ko tum kaam samjha do to wo 6 unit ke barabar akela kaam karenge... Sab taiyar rakhna…


HuYu:- Haan samjh raha hun bhavna ko... Main banata hun suit...


Nischal:- To ab hum chalen…


Sabhi dragon babies ek sath.… "Baba aap jao, yahan hum fufa se poora kaam nikalva lenge"…


Nischal jane se pahle HuYu ke sath me 6 pendent ka set diya. Ye wahi pendent tha jo Roffa space station par Jivisha ko kahin to dekha hua lag raha tha. Nischal uss pendent ko dete huye HuYu se kahne laga.…


"Jijaji, Jivisha ko isme kuchh to khas dikha tha. Aur meri dilchaspi isme hai ki Roffa space station par bahut se traveller apni anmol chijen chhod gaye.… Shayad unhe laga ho yadi Hurriyent ka rasta paar na ho saka to uski wo chijen salamt to rahegi"…


HuYu, khush hote... "Aisi baat hai kya Sahjade, fir to un antiques par thoda samay main bhi bitana chahunga"…


Nischal:- Kyon nahi... Ab main chalta hun...


Poori baat samjha'kar Nischal, Ansh aur Nandni ke sath ravana ho gaya. Aizem ke Madhya rastr ki rajdhani me jaise hi uska viman land kiya... Gussaye bacchon ne viman ka darvaja hi gher liya...


Ye sabhi wahi anath bacche the jinki dekh-bhal Nischal aur Serin kar rahi thi. Nandni un gussaye bacchon ko dekh'kar… "Ab yahan kya jhol kar diya... Sabhi bacche tujhe kha jane wali najron se kyon ghur rahe"…


"Idhar humse puchho udhar kya khusur fusur kar rahi ho Nandni didi"…. Ek bacche ne kaha


Nandni, thodi hairani se... "Ye kya hai Nischal, inke kaan itne tej hain ki khusur fusur bhi sun sakte hain kya"…


"Hum lip read kar sakte hain... Ladki ke pichhe kyon chhipe ho Sahjade, bahar aao"… kisi dusre bachhe ne kaha...


Nischal:- Ye kya badtamiji hai... Nandni sath aayi hai aur tum sab ho ki...


"Haan to sath wale bhi jaan le na ki kitna wada khilafi hui hai humare sath"… kisi bacche ne kaha...


Nischal:- Areeee lekin ho kya gaya hai wo to batao... .


"Hume pichhle kayi mahino se tumhari bahan jungle me chhod aayi thi batao... Rajdhani ki shakl na dekhne dee jalim.… 5 din se dharne par baithe hain, tab Maha prabandhak sir hume raajdhani le'kar aaye"…


Nischal apna matha pit'te... "Matlab tum logon ne nature developement ki traning se inkar kar diya... Hato ab main kisi se baat nahi karne wala"…


"Areee... Tum bhi Ruth rahe... Humne nature developement se nahi resine kiya hai sach me"…


Nischal:- Ab ye makkhan lagane se koi fayda nahi hai... Jo mann me aaye wo karo...


"Pagal ho gaya hai Sahjada... Sacchi hume aisa kuchh bhi nahi kiya maay-baap. Tum Ruth gaye to dana pani uth jayega... Hum to bus yun hi chhed rahe the"…


Jaise hi uss bacche ne sach ugal diya, lage uske sathi gariyane... Sab koste huye kahne lage... "Nischal humse thode na Ruth sakta hai... Tumhare chakkar me Viggo viman par jane ka mauka chala gaya"..


Nandni inki nautanki dekhkar hansti hui... "In logon ko kiski hawa lagi hai"…


Nischal:- Jyadatar bacche Aarsi aur Chirag ke sath 2 sal tak khele huye hain... Ab samjh sakti ho inke nautanki kaa raaj...


Nandni hansti hui Nischal ke sath viman se niche utri... Bacchon ne unhe kahin bhi jane nahi diya... Nischal poora ek din ka samay diya. Fir wo bacche khud badhaeyan dete huye, sab ko mahal tak chhod aaya. Poore Madhya rastra me jalsa sa mahol tha. Kisi bhi waqt delivary ho sakti thi…


Ansh jakar doctors se milne laga, lekin aise najuk waqt par ladki ke pariwar wale bhi wahan maujood the. Kisi ne bhi high blood ko, kisi aise ko chhune to kya, dekhne se bhi mana kar diya, jinhe wo jante nahi.


Ansh to chup chap sun'kar baat apne tak hi rakhta, lekin sath me Nandni bhi thi, jo khadi sab sun rahi thi. Apne pati ki bejjati wo bardast nahi kar payi. Sidha wahan se Ansh ko le'kar uddan bhadne ki taiyari karne lagi...


Nandni gussa kar nikli ye khabar Nayla tak pahunchi. Turant hi dono ko samjha'kar wo wapas mahal me le'kar aayi. Iss baar Nayla khud sath gayi aur un sabhi abhibhavak ke pass pahunch'kar apni aawaj buland karti wo puchhne lagi.… "Kisne high blood ke naam par inhe ander jaane se mana kiya hai"…


Mahavinshi, uttri sima ka raja samne aa'kar…. "Koi samasya hai kya, maine kaha tha"…


Nayla:- Inse jyada high blood nahi hoga yahan kisi ka... Kyonki Viggo ke jodi ki tarah hi inke smuday ki jodi hoti hai... Tum me kaun compare karega inki blood ko... Mujhe abhi bataye... Kisme himmat hai yahan apne orignal blood ko confirm karne ka.… Nandni, doctor sahab, aap dono ander jaeye... Yahan aap se jyada high blood kisi ka nahi hai"..


Nayla jaise tamacha jadi ho Mahavinshi ko. Dono ke ander jate hi wo Nayla ka hath pakad'kar… "Tum hume ajnabiyon ke samne nicha dikha rahi thi"…


Nayla:- Uttri seema ke shashak ji, aap ne bhi to unhe bejjat kiya tha... Bhuliye mat jodi ban'ne ke baad aapki betoyin ke surakhsa ki jimmedari bhi humari hai... Nischal ke hath na kaanp jaye, jab wo apne bacchon ki delivary karwa raha ho, isliye prithvi ke sabse khas doctor ko le'kar aaya hai...


Mahavinshi:- To kya ye doctor delivary bhi karwate hain... Maine to suna tha ki dimag ka bahut bada doctor hai...


Nayla:- Aapne kab sun liya…


Mahavinshi:- Hum dushman ki jyada khabar rakhte hain… mujhe bus meri beti ki chinta hai uss Viggo ka bij mar bhi jaye to gum nahi…


"Ek navjaat ne kya bigad diya hai Mahavinshi. Nafrat mujhse hai to mujhe maar lo"…. Nischal wahan sirkat karte huye kahne laga...


Mahavinshi:- Ohhh to tumne sab sun liya...


Nischal:- Kamal ki nafrat hai tumhari Mahavinashi, jo apne hi beti ke hone wale bacche ke liye dikh raha….


Mahavinshi:- Beti ke liye kabhi galat soch ho sakti hai kya, lekin uss ek naam se nafrat kabhi khatm nahi ho sakti hai, jiska naam Viggo hai...


Nischal:- Hmmmm !!!! Fir ussi Viggo ke sath apni betiyon ki jodi kyon banayi...


Mahavinshi:- Taki jodi todne par tu jodi ke viyog me mar jaye... ..


Nischal:- Maan lo main mar gaya aur tumhari beti apne bacchon ko palna chah rahi ho...


Sabhi shashak jinki betiyan garv se thi.… "Tumhare marne ke agle ghadi hi hum unhe maar denge"…


Nischal:- Hmmmm ! Ek maa ke gode se uska navjat bacche ko maarne ki baat kar rahe. Kamal ki ye nafrat hai aur uski takat bhi... Shayad main tumhari nafrat ki vajah jaan raha hun, isliye apne hone wale bacchon ke liye aisa sun raha hun... Galti se uski maa ke samne mat kah dena... Tumhara gala kaat degi. Vishwas na ho to kisi ek kamjor se kamjor stri, jo purn maatritav ko mehsus karti ho uske samne kah'kar dikha dena….


Nayla:- Kyon hansi khushi ke mahol ko barbaad karna… Nischal tumhe ander jaana chahiye...


Nischal unhe ghurte ander jaa pahuncha. Mahavinashi ek baar fir apne ahankaar me hanste huye...


"Iske beton ka prem dekh'kar abhi se lag raha hai ki iska sab kuchh khone wala hai aur uske liye mujhe 8 sal ka intzar bhi karna nahi padega. Achha Nayla jaisa ki Mafees mujhe bata raha tha, Nischal ke kahne par iss yudhh ki taiyari chal rahi. Yadi wo nakara sabit hua to usse cahurahe par faansi ki saja milegi ya nanga kar'ke goli maarne ki saja denge organization wale"…


Nayla, samajh to sab rahi thi lekin wo nasamajh banti... "Organization of middle universe ka deputy director Mafees ki baat kar rahe"


Mahavinshi:- "Haan main ussi ki baat kar raha hun... Usne mujhe bataya ki Astak ki fauj ke mukable majah chand vimano ke sath Luna ne usse aakash me haraya aur jamin par jo hairatangej karname Nilbhut samuday ne sabke samne rakha, uske bavjood Nischal ne iss poore yudhh ko lead karne ka parstav rakha".

"Organisation ke purv sena nayak ki baat par sabne haan to kar diya, lekin yadi iss waqt wo kamjor par jaye aur poori fauj ko bich mazdhar me chhod jaye, tab wo organization ka doshi hoga"...


Nayla:- Haan lekin Mafees aisa kyon chahega... Usse kya shak hai Nischal par…


Mahavinshi:- Shak to hoga hi na... Jab unhe ye pata ho ki yahan uska baccha hua aur wahan jodi tooti...


Nayla:- Haan Maine hi yah ek Viggo ko maarne ka prastav diya tha, lekin kya nafrat, organisation aur logon se badh'kar hai, jo chal rahe mahol ka bhi khyal nahi raha… Astak se yudhh me hum chuke to kitna nukshan hoga pata bhi hai????...


Mahavinshi:- Lekin chukenge kyon... Luna organization ki sena nayika hai aur ab bhi kaman me hai. Usne 4 lakh uttri seema ke pilot ko chuna hai, jo yudhh me sabse aage rahenge… iska matlab samjh rahi ho... Wo ek shasakt sena nayika hai jise uttri seema ke fauj par poora bharosa hai.... Mera to poora support uske sath hai..


Nayla:- Tumhari manokamna purn ho Mahavinshi. Main jakar apna kaam dekhti hun... Tum sab bhi aaram kar lo... Beti ko surakshit jo le jana hai...


Mahavinshi:- Bacche ke janm ke baad 3 jodi todne ki sahamti patr main advance de chuka hun. Miya ki haalat thik nahi warna chautha bhi mil hi jata...


Nayla:- Haan main samjh gayi.. Prastav paper Lobhu ke pass hai... Ab bacche ko to janm le lene do... Fir na jodi todne ka vyog doge aur uske baad na Nischal organization ka doshi hoga, ya fir jodi viyog me mare, uski kismat...


Ek bada sa hall tha jahan 30-40 sewikayen thi. 15-20 doctors the aur Nischal ki charo patniyon ke liye bade-bade alishan bed, hall ke bilkul Madhya me laga hua tha... Ansh doctors ke bich sari reports check kar raha tha. Wahin Nandni unn charon ke pass baith'kar unse baten kar rahi thi...


Nischal jaise hi wahan pahuncha, charo hi tek laga'kar baith'ti hui, Nischal ko aate dekh rahi thi... Nischal aaya aur charon ke sar par bari-bari se haath ferte huye... "Jyada taklif to nahi ho rahi"…


Tiya:- Hello doctor (Ansh) jara yahan aayenge...


Ansh, karib pahunchte… "ji kahiye"..


Nischal ki teen jodiyan, Dhuri, Apurvi aur Tiya ek sath.… "Humne suna hai aap dono (Nandni aur Ansh) sabse khas hain Sahjade ke liye, hum chahten hain ki aap humari baaten sune"…


Dhuri, fir Nischal ko ghurti.… "Sirf itna hi nahi balki aap bich me bol bhi sakte hain aur wo bhi apne dost ke paksh se... Mujhe koi gila nahi hai... Sab ye bhi to jaan le ki Viggo samuday ko badhane ke liye in logon ne kis had tak sajis ki hai..."

Daag naa lag jaaye mahabali
Yeh toh sabki sab balan chimta fukni tava mogri le aayi
Ab toh ram hi jaan bachaye beda paar lagaye
Khubsurat update mitr

 

[Anky@123]

Wah wah lajawab update bhai

 

[Ayush2017]

Awesome update