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Shiva apne paas pade hue bag me se sharab ki botal nikalta aur apni jagah se uth kar jungle ki taraf jane lagta hai use jate sabhi log aise dekh rahe the kaise koi ajooba dekh rahe ho bhadra kahta

Bhadra – ye sala pagal hai kya achank uth jata achanak behosh ho jata hai akhir chakkar kya

Uski baat sun ke amba kahti hai

Amba – kuch to chakkar hai aur wo chakkar bahut bada hai Humari soch se bhi bada

Mandar – matlab

Amba – agar koi cheez shiva jaise ko pareshan kar skti hai toh beshak badi hi hogi

Mahaguru jo ab tak un logon ki bate sun rahe the bolte hai.

Mahaguru – theek kaha magar ek baat jan tum logon me se koi bhi shiva is bare mat poochhna kyuki wo kuch nahi batayega balki shyad gussa bhi ho pade.

Wahi dusri taraf veenu badhawasi si charu se lipti hui bas yahi bole ja rahi thi ki mujhe shiva ke paas jana hai uski jan ko khatra uski ye dekh kar deva aage badhta jai aur use charu se alag kar ke dono kandho se pakad kar hilata hai aur kaha


Deva – veenu hosh me aao kya ho gya hai tumhe

Deva ke hilane se veenu hosh me aa jati hai aur us se lipat kar rone lagti hai deva bhi uske balon ko sahlane lagta hai use tasalli dene lagta hai kuch der baad veenu apne aap par kaboo pa leti hai aur deva se alag ho jati hai uske alag hote hi surya joki sabke saath khada hua tha been se poochhta hai

Surya – veenu kya hua tum itni ghabrai hui kyu thi

Surya ne chinta jatate hue kaha

Veenu ne ek nazar sabhi ki taraf dekha aur unhe apne sapne ke bare me bata diya jise sun kar ek taraf toh sab log hairan the aur dusri taraf pareshan bhi the kyuki veenu ko aisa sapna aane ka kya matlb hai tabhi aslam ko yaad ata hai ki shiva ne usse aur deva se jane se pahle kaha tha ki uske andar kuch aisa hai jo agar bahar aa gya to poori duniya tabah ho jayegj.

Agle din kabeele me subah 5 baje sabhi log uth gye the magar shiva ka koi pata nahi tha mandar mahaguru se puchhta hai

Mandar – mahaguru ye shiva kaha hai dikhai nahi de raha

Mahaguru uski baat la jawab dete usse pahle bhadra bol padta hai

Bhadra – yaad nahi kal wo sharab ki botal lekar jungle ki taraf gya tha wahi dhutt ho kar pada hoga

Amba – tab toh hume turant shiva ko dhundne jana chahiye kahi dushman uske nashe ko halat ka fayda utha kar koi nuksaan na pahucha de

Mahaguru – theek kaha tum sab log abhi jungle ki taraf jao.

Sabhi log mahaguru ka adesh man kar seedha jungle ki taraf daud padte hai kuch door chalne ke baad bhadra Khisiyate hue

Bhadra – are yar pata nahi kitna aur chalna hoga jane kahan hai ye

Amba – dhoondna toh padega hi

Wo log kareeb ek kilometer aage nikal jate hai magar shiva ka koi pata nahi chalta phir achank saloni mandar ko ek taraf dekhne ka ishara krti hai jab mandar us taraf dekhta hai toh hairan rah jata hai wo bhadra aur amba ko bhi us taraf dekhne ko kahta hai un ki bhi wahi halat hoti hai jo mandar aur saloni ki hui thi aur aisa hona swabhawik tha kyuki ye nazara koi bhi dekhta toh hairan ho hi jata samne ka nazara ye tha ki shiva ek 1.5 feet chaude ped par lat aur ghoose barsa raha tha aur us ped ke tane ka 1/4 Part us ped se alag ho gya tha jiska matlab saaf hai ki shiva us ke 1/4 part ko apne laton aur ghoson se hi tod diya tha wo log chalte hue shiva ke paas jate hai shiva talleenta se us ped par taqat aazmaish karta rahta hai jab wo shiva ke bilkul kareeb aa jate hai toh shiva ruk jata aur bina unki taraf dekhe kahta hai

Shiva – tum log yaha kya kar rahe ho

Mandar – wo mahaguru ne hume tumhe dhoondne bheja hai

Shiva – kyu aisa kya ho gya

Amba – kal tum aise uth kar achank chale gye the na raat me usi wajah se hume laga ki shyad tumhe humari zaroorat hogi

Amba ke ek ek lafz me apniyata saaf dikhai de rahi thi

Shiva – mai theek hun mujhe kisi ki zaroorat nahi hai

Jitna amba ka swar narm tha utna hi shiva ka kathor

Itna kah kar shiva fir us ped par hath pair marne lagta hai toh bhadra kahta

Bhadra – bejan ped par toh koi bhi taqat aazma sakta hai kisi jan dar se bhido tab pata chale

Usne shiva par vyang karte hue kaha jiske jawab me shiva ne use ghoor kar dekha bhadra shiva ke is reaction se muskura raha tha uski muskurahat ne aag me ghee ka kam kiya shiva uske qareeb aya aur ek nazar use ghoor ke dekh kuch der aise hi dekhne ke baad wo wapas qabeele ki taraf chal pada.
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Shiva apne paas pade hue bag me se sharab ki botal nikalta aur apni jagah se uth kar jungle ki taraf jane lagta hai use jate sabhi log aise dekh rahe the kaise koi ajooba dekh rahe ho bhadra kahta



Bhadra – ye sala pagal hai kya achank uth jata achanak behosh ho jata hai akhir chakkar kya



Uski baat sun ke amba kahti hai



Amba – kuch to chakkar hai aur wo chakkar bahut bada hai Humari soch se bhi bada



Mandar – matlab



Amba – agar koi cheez shiva jaise ko pareshan kar skti hai toh beshak badi hi hogi



Mahaguru jo ab tak un logon ki bate sun rahe the bolte hai.



Mahaguru – theek kaha magar ek baat jan tum logon me se koi bhi shiva is bare mat poochhna kyuki wo kuch nahi batayega balki shyad gussa bhi ho pade.



Wahi dusri taraf veenu badhawasi si charu se lipti hui bas yahi bole ja rahi thi ki mujhe shiva ke paas jana hai uski jan ko khatra uski ye dekh kar deva aage badhta jai aur use charu se alag kar ke dono kandho se pakad kar hilata hai aur kaha





Deva – veenu hosh me aao kya ho gya hai tumhe



Deva ke hilane se veenu hosh me aa jati hai aur us se lipat kar rone lagti hai deva bhi uske balon ko sahlane lagta hai use tasalli dene lagta hai kuch der baad veenu apne par kaboo pa leti hai aur deva se alag ho jati hai uske alag hote hi surya joki sabke saath khada hua tha been se poochhta hai



Surya – veenu kya hua tum itni ghabrai hui kyu thi



Surya ne chinta jatate hue kaha



Veenu ne ek nazar sabhi ki taraf dekha aur unhe apne sapne ke bare me bata diya jise sun kar ek taraf toh sab log hairan the aur dusri taraf pareshan bhi the kyuki veenu ko aisa sapna aane ka kya matlb hai tabhi aslam ko yaad ata hai ki shiva ne usse aur deva se jane se pahle kaha tha ki uske andar kuch aisa hai jo agar bahar aa gya to poori duniya tabah ho jayegj.



Agle din kabeele me subah 5 baje sabhi log uth gye the magar shiva ka koi pata nahi tha mandar mahaguru se puchhta hai



Mandar – mahaguru ye shiva kaha hai dikhai nahi de raha



Mahaguru uski baat la jawab dete usse pahle bhadra bol padta hai



Bhadra – yaad nahi kal wo sharab ki botal lekar jungle ki taraf gya tha wahi dhutt ho kar pada hoga



Amba – tab toh hume turant shiva ko dhundne jana chahiye kahi dushman uske nashe ko halat ka fayda utha kar koi nuksaan na pahucha de



Mahaguru – theek kaha tum sab log abhi jungle ki taraf jao.



Sabhi log mahaguru ka adesh man kar seedha jungle ki taraf daud padte hai kuch door chalne ke baad bhadra Khisiyate hue



Bhadra – are yar pata nahi kitna aur chalna hoga jane kahan hai ye



Amba – dhoondna toh padega hi



Wo log kareeb ek kilometer aage nikal jate hai magar shiva ka koi pata nahi chalta phir achank saloni mandar ko ek taraf dekhne ka ishara krti hai jab mandar us taraf dekhta hai toh hairan rah jata hai wo bhadra aur amba ko bhi us taraf dekhne ko kahta hai un ki bhi wahi halat hoti hai jo mandar aur saloni ki hui thi aur aisa hona swabhawik tha kyuki ye nazara koi bhi dekhta toh hairan ho hi jata samne ka nazara ye tha ki shiva ek 1.5 feet chaude ped par lat aur ghoose barsa raha tha aur us ped ke tane ka 1/4 Part us ped se alag ho gya tha jiska matlab saaf hai ki shiva us ke 1/4 part ko apne laton aur ghoson se hi tod diya tha wo log chalte hue shiva ke paas jate hai shiva talleenta se us ped par taqat aazmaish karta rahta hai jab wo shiva ke bilkul kareeb aa jate hai toh shiva ruk jata aur bina unki taraf dekhe kahta hai



Shiva – tum log yaha kya kar rahe ho



Mandar – wo mahaguru ne hume tumhe dhoondne bheja hai



Shiva – kyu aisa kya ho gya



Amba – kal tum aise uth kar achank chale gye the na raat me usi wajah se hume laga ki shyad tumhe humari zaroorat hogi



Amba ke ek ek lafz me apniyata saaf dikhai de rahi thi



Shiva – mai theek hun mujhe kisi ki zaroorat nahi hai



Jitna amba ka swar narm tha utna hi shiva ka kathor



Itna kah kar shiva fir us ped par hath pair marne lagta hai toh bhadra kahta



Bhadra – bejan ped par toh koi bhi taqat aazma sakta hai kisi jan dar se bhido tab pata chale



Usne shiva par vyang karte hue kaha jiske jawab me shiva ne use ghoor kar dekha bhadra shiva ke is reaction se muskura raha tha uski muskurahat ne aag me ghee ka kam kiya shiva uske qareeb aya aur ek nazar use ghoor ke dekh kuch der aise hi dekhne ke baad wo wapas qabeele ki taraf chal pada.





Shiva jab qabeele me pahuchta hai toh mahaguru use dekh kar uske paas aate hai aur bade hi apne pan se poochte hai



Mahaguru – tum subah subah uth kar kahan chale gye the hum sab bahut pareshan ho gaye the



Shiva – nahi hona chahiye tha



Mahaguru ne chahiye hue kaha



Mahaguru – kyu nahi hona chahiye tum humari jimmedari ho



Shiva – mai kisi ki jimmedari nahi hun jan maine yaha pahla qadam rakha tha tabhi maine soch liya tha ki ya to mai zinda rahunga ya phir wo log toh meri fikr mat kijiye aur mujhe ye batiye ki yahan koi nadi hai mujhe tairne ka man hai



Shiva ne bade hi sapat laheje me kaha tab tak waha bhadra aur baki log bhi aa chuke the shiva ki baat sunke mandar bolta hai



Mandar – nadi toh hai magar tum naha nahi paoge



Shiva – kyu



Amba – uska bahaw bahut tez hai



Jaise hi shiva ne ye baat suni use ek jhatka sa laga usne socha ki itni badi baat isse kaise chhot gai



Shiva – mujhe dekhna hai wo nadi kaha par hai



Sabhi log shiva ko lekar us nadi ke paas jate hai majaburi bhi unke saath the jab wo pahuch jate hai toh mandar bolta hai



Mandar – ye rahi wo nadi



Shiva nadi ki taraf dekhta hai uska bahaw wakai bahut tez tha shiva us nadi ki disha me aage badhne lagt hai aage badhte badhte wo kareeb 300 meter tak chala jata hai shiva us madi ko badi gaur se dekh raha tha jaise kuch dhoondh raha ho aur jo wo dekhna chahta wo use dikh gya.



Idhar jaise hi Michael ko ye pata chalta hai ki shiva us nadi tak pahuch gya hai wo apne admiyo ko shiva ko rokne ke liye bhej deta hai aur unhe sakht hidayat deta hai ki shiva ko koi nahi marega bas use Michael ke paas lekar aya jayega apne admiyo ke jaye hi wo kisiko call karta hai uske chahre par pareshani saaf dikh rahi thi ye baat uske assistant ne bhi note ki aur wo hairan tha kyuki aaj tak usne kabhi Micheal ko pareshan nahi dekha tha

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Shiva apne paas pade hue bag me se sharab ki botal nikalta aur apni jagah se uth kar jungle ki taraf jane lagta hai use jate sabhi log aise dekh rahe the kaise koi ajooba dekh rahe ho bhadra kahta



Bhadra – ye sala pagal hai kya achank uth jata achanak behosh ho jata hai akhir chakkar kya



Uski baat sun ke amba kahti hai



Amba – kuch to chakkar hai aur wo chakkar bahut bada hai Humari soch se bhi bada



Mandar – matlab



Amba – agar koi cheez shiva jaise ko pareshan kar skti hai toh beshak badi hi hogi



Mahaguru jo ab tak un logon ki bate sun rahe the bolte hai.



Mahaguru – theek kaha magar ek baat jan tum logon me se koi bhi shiva is bare mat poochhna kyuki wo kuch nahi batayega balki shyad gussa bhi ho pade.



Wahi dusri taraf veenu badhawasi si charu se lipti hui bas yahi bole ja rahi thi ki mujhe shiva ke paas jana hai uski jan ko khatra uski ye dekh kar deva aage badhta jai aur use charu se alag kar ke dono kandho se pakad kar hilata hai aur kaha





Deva – veenu hosh me aao kya ho gya hai tumhe



Deva ke hilane se veenu hosh me aa jati hai aur us se lipat kar rone lagti hai deva bhi uske balon ko sahlane lagta hai use tasalli dene lagta hai kuch der baad veenu apne par kaboo pa leti hai aur deva se alag ho jati hai uske alag hote hi surya joki sabke saath khada hua tha been se poochhta hai



Surya – veenu kya hua tum itni ghabrai hui kyu thi



Surya ne chinta jatate hue kaha



Veenu ne ek nazar sabhi ki taraf dekha aur unhe apne sapne ke bare me bata diya jise sun kar ek taraf toh sab log hairan the aur dusri taraf pareshan bhi the kyuki veenu ko aisa sapna aane ka kya matlb hai tabhi aslam ko yaad ata hai ki shiva ne usse aur deva se jane se pahle kaha tha ki uske andar kuch aisa hai jo agar bahar aa gya to poori duniya tabah ho jayegj.



Agle din kabeele me subah 5 baje sabhi log uth gye the magar shiva ka koi pata nahi tha mandar mahaguru se puchhta hai



Mandar – mahaguru ye shiva kaha hai dikhai nahi de raha



Mahaguru uski baat la jawab dete usse pahle bhadra bol padta hai



Bhadra – yaad nahi kal wo sharab ki botal lekar jungle ki taraf gya tha wahi dhutt ho kar pada hoga



Amba – tab toh hume turant shiva ko dhundne jana chahiye kahi dushman uske nashe ko halat ka fayda utha kar koi nuksaan na pahucha de



Mahaguru – theek kaha tum sab log abhi jungle ki taraf jao.



Sabhi log mahaguru ka adesh man kar seedha jungle ki taraf daud padte hai kuch door chalne ke baad bhadra Khisiyate hue



Bhadra – are yar pata nahi kitna aur chalna hoga jane kahan hai ye



Amba – dhoondna toh padega hi



Wo log kareeb ek kilometer aage nikal jate hai magar shiva ka koi pata nahi chalta phir achank saloni mandar ko ek taraf dekhne ka ishara krti hai jab mandar us taraf dekhta hai toh hairan rah jata hai wo bhadra aur amba ko bhi us taraf dekhne ko kahta hai un ki bhi wahi halat hoti hai jo mandar aur saloni ki hui thi aur aisa hona swabhawik tha kyuki ye nazara koi bhi dekhta toh hairan ho hi jata samne ka nazara ye tha ki shiva ek 1.5 feet chaude ped par lat aur ghoose barsa raha tha aur us ped ke tane ka 1/4 Part us ped se alag ho gya tha jiska matlab saaf hai ki shiva us ke 1/4 part ko apne laton aur ghoson se hi tod diya tha wo log chalte hue shiva ke paas jate hai shiva talleenta se us ped par taqat aazmaish karta rahta hai jab wo shiva ke bilkul kareeb aa jate hai toh shiva ruk jata aur bina unki taraf dekhe kahta hai



Shiva – tum log yaha kya kar rahe ho



Mandar – wo mahaguru ne hume tumhe dhoondne bheja hai



Shiva – kyu aisa kya ho gya



Amba – kal tum aise uth kar achank chale gye the na raat me usi wajah se hume laga ki shyad tumhe humari zaroorat hogi



Amba ke ek ek lafz me apniyata saaf dikhai de rahi thi



Shiva – mai theek hun mujhe kisi ki zaroorat nahi hai



Jitna amba ka swar narm tha utna hi shiva ka kathor



Itna kah kar shiva fir us ped par hath pair marne lagta hai toh bhadra kahta



Bhadra – bejan ped par toh koi bhi taqat aazma sakta hai kisi jan dar se bhido tab pata chale



Usne shiva par vyang karte hue kaha jiske jawab me shiva ne use ghoor kar dekha bhadra shiva ke is reaction se muskura raha tha uski muskurahat ne aag me ghee ka kam kiya shiva uske qareeb aya aur ek nazar use ghoor ke dekh kuch der aise hi dekhne ke baad wo wapas qabeele ki taraf chal pada.





Shiva jab qabeele me pahuchta hai toh mahaguru use dekh kar uske paas aate hai aur bade hi apne pan se poochte hai



Mahaguru – tum subah subah uth kar kahan chale gye the hum sab bahut pareshan ho gaye the



Shiva – nahi hona chahiye tha



Mahaguru ne chahiye hue kaha



Mahaguru – kyu nahi hona chahiye tum humari jimmedari ho



Shiva – mai kisi ki jimmedari nahi hun jan maine yaha pahla qadam rakha tha tabhi maine soch liya tha ki ya to mai zinda rahunga ya phir wo log toh meri fikr mat kijiye aur mujhe ye batiye ki yahan koi nadi hai mujhe tairne ka man hai



Shiva ne bade hi sapat laheje me kaha tab tak waha bhadra aur baki log bhi aa chuke the shiva ki baat sunke mandar bolta hai



Mandar – nadi toh hai magar tum naha nahi paoge



Shiva – kyu



Amba – uska bahaw bahut tez hai



Jaise hi shiva ne ye baat suni use ek jhatka sa laga usne socha ki itni badi baat isse kaise chhot gai



Shiva – mujhe dekhna hai wo nadi kaha par hai



Sabhi log shiva ko lekar us nadi ke paas jate hai majaburi bhi unke saath the jab wo pahuch jate hai toh mandar bolta hai



Mandar – ye rahi wo nadi



Shiva nadi ki taraf dekhta hai uska bahaw wakai bahut tez tha shiva us nadi ki disha me aage badhne lagt hai aage badhte badhte wo kareeb 300 meter tak chala jata hai shiva us madi ko badi gaur se dekh raha tha jaise kuch dhoondh raha ho aur jo wo dekhna chahta wo use dikh gya.



Idhar jaise hi Michael ko ye pata chalta hai ki shiva us nadi tak pahuch gya hai wo apne admiyo ko shiva ko rokne ke liye bhej deta hai aur unhe sakht hidayat deta hai ki shiva ko koi nahi marega bas use Michael ke paas lekar aya jayega apne admiyo ke jaye hi wo kisiko call karta hai uske chahre par pareshani saaf dikh rahi thi ye baat uske assistant ne bhi note ki aur wo hairan tha kyuki aaj tak usne kabhi Micheal ko pareshan nahi dekha tha

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