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Sabhi log dheerendra pawar ko shiva ki giraft se azaad karwane me lag jaate magar shiva use chhodne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha phir bhi jaise taise dig sahab ne dono ko agal kiya alag hote hi dheerendra pawar bolta hai .

Dheerendra pawar – khuuk …. Khuuuk tu ….j anta nhi tune kis ke girebaan pe haath dala hai khukk tu toh gya .

Shiva aage badhta hai toh dig sahab use rok dete hai aur pawar ko bhaga dete hai uske jaane ke baad dig shiva se kahta hai .

Dig – shiva ye kya harqat thi tum jante ho iska anjaam kya hoga .

Shiva unki taraf dekhta hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – anjaam ki parwah karne wale logon mese nahi hun mai .

Kah kar shiva bahar nikal jata hai uske peeche peeche sab log bhi nikal jate hai thane se bahar aake david kahta hai .

David – shiva chalo ghar chalte hai .

Itna kah kar wo jeep me baith jata hai shiva aur baaki sab bhi jeep me baith jate hai aur chal padte hai ghar ki taraf abhi din ke 11 baje the sabhi log ghar pahuch kar apne apne kaam me lag jate hai magar shiva apni chatai pe baitha kisi gahri soch me dooba hua tha kuch ajeeb sa tha jo wo mahsoos kar raha tha kya ye wo khud bhi nahi janta na jane kitni der wo atm manthan karta raha magar use kuch hasil nahi hua wo abhi kuch der aur baithta magar achanak uske kandhe pe kisi ne haath rakh diya jisse wo apni chetana me wapas aya ye rudranshi thi wo shiva se kahti hai .

Rudranshi – shiva aao nashta kar lo .

Sabhi log dining table pe baithe hue the shiva bhi unko join karta hai shiva ko dekhne se saaf pata chalta hai ki wo kisi uljhan me phasa hua hai ek aise jaao me jiska sira use nahu mil pa raha use yun khoya khoya dekh kar david kahta hai.

David – kya baat hai shiva tum kuch pareshan lag rahe ho .

Shiva uski dekhta hai kagar kuch kahta nahi toh vinod bol padta hai .

Vinod – agar tuk us dheerendra pawar ki wajah se pareshan ho toh don’t worry kuch nahi kar payega wo .

Shiva – mai uske baare me sich bhi nahi raha tha .

Rudranshi – toh kis bare me soch rahe the.

Shiva ek gahri saans leta hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – mujhe academy jana hoga .

James – kyu .

ShivA – mere kuch sawaal hai jinka jawab mujhe wahi milega

Rudranshi – theek mai bhi chalti hun mujhe bhi uncle se kuch baat karni thi .

David – theek hai shiva ek kaam karo tum aur rudranshi meri jeep se nikal jaao.

Shiva – theek hai hum 30 min me nikalenge tum taiyar ho jao .

Rudranshi – magar tumhari halat aisi nahi hai ki tum gadi drive kar paao matlb zara dekho khud ko .

Rudranshi ne bilkul sahi kaha shiva ke poore jism pe laathi ne apne nishan chhode the agar koi aur hota toh shayad haaton nahi uthta magar shiva abhi bhi ek pahad ki tarah khada tha shiva rudranshi ki baat ka jawab dete hue kahta hai .

Shiva – meri halat ki fikr mat karo mai bilkul theek hun tum bas nikalne ke liye taiyaari karo .

Kah kar shiva apna bag leke david ke room me chala jata hai uske jaane ke baad vinod kahta hai.

Vinod – yar david archan ki academy me sab aise hi hote hai .

Vinod ne kuch vayangatmak tareeke kaha jispe david use ghoor ke dekhta hai aur kahta hai .

David – nahi ye kuch jayada hi ajeeb hai .

James – iski khamoshi ek kahani kahti hai bas sunne wale kaan chahiye .

Rudranshi – magar ye itna khamosh aur reserved kaise hai .

David – sawal sabhi ke paas hai magar jawab kisi ke paas nahi .

Sabhi log bate kar hi rahe the ki shiva room se bahar aata hai aur ghadi ki taraf dekhta hai abhi 30 min hone me 15 min baki the shiva rudranshi ki taraf dekhta hai jaise kah raha ho ki tum abhi tak taiyaar hone nahi rudranshi uski is an kahi baat kuch samjh jati hai aur apne kamre me ghus jaati hai 15 min baad wo taiyar hoke bahar aati hai aur sabhi ka muh khula ka khula rah jata hai wo dikh hi itni khoobsurat rahi thi jiski wajah tha uska pahnawa aaj usne pink color ka suit pahna hua tha aur apni kamar tak aane wali zulfon ko azaad chod diya tha chahre pe koi make up nahi bas halki di lipstick sabhi log use aise dekh rahe the jaise pahli baar dekh rahe ho magar shiva ko koi fark nahi padta hai wo jaise hi dekhta hai ki rudranshi taiyar ho kar bahar aa gai hai waise hi ghar se bahar nikal jata hai rudranshi ko ye baat bahut buri lagi aur lage bhi kyu na apni sundarata ki tareef toh har ladki ka haq hota phir chahe aap lafzon se kare ya nigahon se magar shiva ne na lafzon se ki na nigahon usne toh rudranshi ko theek se dekha bhi nahi khair rudranshi bhi ghar se bahar nikal kar shiva ke saath jeep me baith jati hai rudranshi ke baithate hi shiva jeep aage badha deta hai kuch der tak toh rudranshi kuch nahi bolti magar phir uske andar ka lava phat padta hai wo shiva se kahti hai .

Rudranshi – tum samjhte kya ho apne aap ko .

Rudranshi ke is tarah achanak kiye gye sawal pe shiva shiva uski taraf hairani bhari nazron se dekhta hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – matlb .

Rudranshi – matlb kya matlb han kya matlb tum toh yahi samjhte ho ki tum is duniya ke sabse taqatwar cool aur rashi mard ho tumhare siwa aur koi nahi jo kisi ladki ke kaabil ho han yahi samjhte ho na .

Rudranshi gusse me na kya kya anaap shanap bake ja rahi aur shiva uski samjh me toh kuch aa hi nahi raha tha ki ye wo ye sab bol kya rahi hai wo kahta hai .

Shiva – tumhara dimaag toh theek hai na ya koi nasha kar ke aai ho khamkha kuch bhi bake jaa rahi ho .

Shiva ki is baat rudranshi jhep jaati hai aur apna muh dosri taraf kar leti hai kuch der safar shanti se katta hai magar shanti jyada der kaha rukne waali thi is vaar bhi rudranshi ne hi shanta ka gala ghota aur kaha .

Rudranshi – shiva mujhe bhook lag rahi hai .

Shiva uski taraf dekhta hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – abhi nashta kiya hi tha .

Rudranshi – toh dubara nahi kha sakti kya .

Shiva kuch nahi kahta aur gadi ek dhabe ke paas rok deta hai dono log dhabe me dakhil hote hai aur ek table par baith jate hai dono baithe hi the ke ek ladka unka oder lene aa jata rudranshi apna oder deti hai wo ladka shiva ki taraf dekhta hai magar shiva use koi jawab nahi deta wo ladka waha se chala jata hai uske jaate hi rudranshi shiva ko pyar se dekhte hue kahti hai .

Rudranshi – tum itne bhi bure nahi ho .

Shiva – kya matlb .

Shiva ne chaukte hue jawab diya .

Rudranshi – matlb dikhne me smart ho handsome ho dil bhi saaf hai tum pe toh koi bhi fida ho sakti bas ek hi problem hai bataun kya .

Shiva – mai mana karunga toh kya man jaogi .

Rudranshi – nahi .

Shiva apna sar peet leta hai .

Rudranshi – tumhara ye mysterious behaviour bas yahi ek aisi cheez hai jo ladkiyon ko tum se door rakhti hai aur tumahara gussa kitna tez hai .

Shiva – han mai bhi issi baat se pareshan hun .

Rudranshi – toh kuch karte kyu nahi aur waise tumhe itna gussa aata kyu hai pahle toh nahi aata tha matlb jab se mai tumhe janti hun .

Shiva – pata nahi mujhe kya hua jab se mere saath jungle me hadsa hua hai tab se ye gusaa apne aap bekaabo ho jata hai .

Rudranshi – hmm mai ne bhi notice kiya waise aisa kya hua tha jungle me .

Shiva ek gahri sans leta hai aur rudranshi ko sab kuch bata deta hai apne sapne ke bate me bhi rudranshi poori baat bade gaur se sunti hai aur kahti hai .

Rudranshi – toh tumhara matlb hai ki us warrior aur tumahre beech koi connection hai .

Shiva – han shayad isiliye mai archan ke paas ja raha hun ek wahi hai jo in baaton ka hal nikal sakte hai .

Rudranshi – shiva mujhe ek lagta hai ye koi super natural power hai jo tum dono ko jode hue hai .

Shiva – isiliye toh archan ke paas ja raha hun .






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Shiva aur rudranshi dhabe se nikal kar phir se apna safar shuru karte hai rudranshi shiva ko lagatar dekhe ja rahi ya yun kaho kii nihare ja rahi thi aur is baat ka ehsaas shiva ko bhi tha shiva samne dekhte hue hi rudranshi se kahta hai .

Shiva – tum mujhe is tarah kyu dekh rahi ho .

Rudranshi – tumhe padhne ki koshish kar rahi hun .

Shiva – kya karogi padh kar mai wo khuli kitaab hun jise har padh nahi paya jisne padha wo samjh nahi paya aur jisne samjha wo pa nahi paya .

Rudranshi – mujhe aisi kitaab bahut pasand hai jo khud me ek challenge ho .

Shiva – dekho rudranshi tum mujhse kuch jyada hi Frank ho rahi ho aur mujhe ye bilkul pasand nahi .

Rudranshi – kyu kya ek dost ko dusre dost ke bare me janne ka haq nahi hai .

Shiva – hum dost nahi hai.

Rudranshi – toh dushman bhi toh nahi hai .

Shiva – dekho in sab baton se tumhe kuch hasil nahi hoga .

Rudranshi – har kaam kuch hasil karne ke liye nahi kiya jata aur kya pata kuch hasil ho bhi jaye .

Shiva – tum bahut ziddi ho .

Rudranshi – tumse kam .

Iske baad rudranshi ne kuch nahi bola shiva bhi khamosh hi raha magar kahte hai na ki jo cheez jaisi waisi hi acchi lagti waise shiva ko rudranshi ka chup rahana accha nahi lag raha tha .

Shiva – accha puchho kya puchna hai.

Shiva ki is baat se rudranshi ne use ghoor kar dekha jaise ye confirm kar rahi ho ki shiva ne baat boli bhi ki nahi rudranshi shiva se kahti .

Rudranshi – kahi mai sapna toh nahi dekh the great shiva khamoshi ka brand ambassador seriousness ka badshah mystery man aaj khud baat karne ki pahal kar raha hai aur wo bhi apne bare me batane ke liye hey bhagwan aaj tu ne meri sun li mai kitni khush hun ye bata nahi sakti .

Kah kar badi masoom si shakl banai jise dekh kar shiva hasne lagta hai toh rudranshi use phir ghoor ke dekhti hai aur kahti hai .

Rudranshi – tum haste bhi ho mujhe toh pata nahi .

Shiva haste haste chup ho jata hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – jane kitne saalon baad hasa hun yaad bhi nahi .

Shiva ne phir apne purane rang me ate hue kaha toh rudranshi ne uske kandhe pe haath rakha aur kaha .

Rudranshi – kya tum mujhe bata nahi sakte ki kya hua tha .

Shiva – nahi abhi nahi magar batunga zaroor .

Rudranshi – accha ye toh bata do ki pyar ka mamla hai .

Shiva – han .

Rudranshi – kaun thi wo jo tumhe chhod kar chali gai aur kyu .

Shiva – pata nahi maine kabhi usse ye poocha hi nahi halanki mauka toh mila tha .

Rudranshi – kyu nahi poocha .

Shiva – hongi majbooriyan uski bhi kuch , warna yun toh koi bewafa nahi hota .

Shiva ghamgeen hote hue kaha rudranshi bhi shiva ka dard samjh rahi thi wo shiva se kahti hai .

Rudranshi – shiva tum sach me shiva ho jo zahar pee kar karti batte ho itna dard samete ho khud ke andar aur kisi kuch bhi nahi kahte kaise kar lete ho tum ye .

Shiva ne bhi kuch ghamgeen hote hue kaha.

Shiva – chhodo ye bata ek baat batao kya tum mujhse dosti karoge .

Shiva ne muskurate hue apna haath aage badha diya

Rudranshi – ye wakai ek sapna hai .

Kah kar usne shiva se haath milaya fir dono me kafi baate hui magar shiva jayadtar chup hi raha matlb rudranshi hi bolti rahi bate karte karte ye dono academy pahuche academy pahuchte hi shiva ko subhash dikhai diya shiva ko dekhte hi wo uske paas ata hai aur kahta hai.

Subhash – are shiva kaisa hai aur tahan kaise .

Shiva – archan kaha hai .

Subhash – mai toh bhool hi gya tha archan apne kamre me hai .

Shiva seedhe archan ke kamre ki taraf chal padta subhash aur rudranshi apas me bate karne lagte hai shiva archan ke room me ata hai shiva ko dekh kar archan kuch hairan ho jate hai shiva unhe pranam karta hai aur kahta.

Shiva – archan mai pareshan hun .

Pahli baar shiva ki awaaz me pareshani jhalak rahi thi archan kahte hai .

Archan – kya hua baat kya hai .

Phir shiva unhe poori baat bata deta hai jise sun ne ke baad archan kahte hai.

Archan – shiva is sirf aur sirf ek hi matlb hai .

Shiva – ke us yoddha ki atma mereandar hai .

Archan – nahi uski parchai jo tumhare andar pal rahi hai.

Shiva – toh ab mujhe kya karna chahiye.

Archan – iske liye mujhe kuch logon se baat karni hogi .

Shiva – kis se .

Archan – mai baat karke batata hun philhaal tym araam karo .

Shiva archan ko pranaam karta hai aur nikal jata hai magar archan ke chahre pe ek ajeeb sa dar tha .



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