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thanks dearVery nice update
Waiting for more to come
thanks dearVery nice update
Waiting for more to come
thanks a lot aakash bhaiFirst of all, thanks a lot for the mega update.
The fire that was burning within Karuna finally came out. Ravi might not understand what Karuna wanted to say or whether Ravi was pretending. At first I felt from Ravi's behavior that he does not like to do all this, but our Ravi Bhaiya is interested in the back door. Now everyone understood that the whole plan was by Richa.
I had already said that this night will be very long, now the fierce sex game will begin. The threesome scene was tremendous. Enjoyed while reading the update. Ravi satisfies both Richa and Karuna. Our Ravi is so sweet that everyone loves Ravi.
Today's entire update was very sensual and good. You have shown every scene in detail and very beautifully. You made my heart happy. Even if I try, no one can find your fault. Your writing deserves praise. zopion bro, I want to thank you again.
Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...
Waiting bhai
wonderfull update zopi bhai
Nice update
kya shi hot update tha mja aa gya
nice bhai well mujhe toh pehle yehi lgta tha ki aapko sex scene likhne mai dikkat aati hai shyad issliye aap unhe dhang se nhi likh pate yan vahan kuch gadbad hoti hai aqpki writing mai but ab aisa na hai kaqfi jyada hi hit update tha BC yeh
joh saaf batata hai ki aapne kaafi shi scene likha hai mja aaya mujhe toh BC
well hopefully RICHA ko shayad RQVI se ek beta ho jaye but kisse kya pta kya ho aur KARUNA ka koi intro na tha like uske bache vagarh agar hoga toh maine miss kiya well itna bhi important na hai yeh point but jo bhi BHABHI ka description bahut shi tha aur iss sex scene mai bhi kaafi mja aaya
RAVI karega ab apni shadi ki tyaari yahan se aayega mja BC matlab dekhte hain SHADI hote hote kitno ko pelta hai vo well jo bhi ho bande ka nature aapne kaafi shi rkha hai jo mujhe RAVI ke character ka best point lga
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Intjaar
Intazaar
Very hot update
Fantastic excellent update brother
Keep posting
Waiting your next update
Jabardasttt updates bhai
Awesome and superb update ...
Ye karuna to pahle se hi ravi ke liye plan bana kar baithi thi, aur usne hi raat ko apni saheli ko ravi ke paas bheja tha,
Richa ne bhi pahle se hi ravi ko apne tarike thanks bolne ki taiyari kar li thi,
teeno ne saath mein bahot hi achchha time spend kiya ha....
Zopin dada waiting
Update no. 108 ke baad bahot din ho gaye bhai Waiting for next
Update please
Awesome update
socha ek ka tha Ravi ne dono ki le li
Richa bhi shayad pregnant Ho jaaye Janhvi baaki rah gayi sirf udhar.
Waiting for next update
Superb hot update
Aaj kal antral badhta hi ja raha h aapka.
Intjaar
Waiting for 2maro....
Zopin bhai int jar he
Mast update hai bro maza aa gaya
Waiting for the next update
Waiting for the next update...
इंतजार है भाई अपडेट का
zopion bhai kitne baje tak de rahe ho ?
marvelous , too good ...
salute to your thought process...
keep rocking.
update coming soonwaiting